PORN THREAD

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tomers wip

does it look like her?

her hair is hard as fuck to get right

>>2391166
Next time post the link to the new thread (this one) in the old thread, you dumb idiot.

>>2391236
Fix the vagina.

>>2391236
highlight the skin
that isnt doing anything for my dick

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alright, tiny update, just procrastinating...

>>2391345
she looks a bit under the weather.

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Wreck my shit.

>>2391345
Gross

>>2391490
What the fuck is up with that vulva bro

>>2391490
The feet look goofy as shit.

>>2391552

ur gross

>>2391490
You've never seen an actual vagina by the look of things

>>2391490
The torso is really fucked up, there should be about a hands length between the belly button and the pelvic bone/ top of the vulva.
Also the way you're drawing the rib cage pooched out doesn't make any sense with the size of her breasts, a lot if not all of the rib cage would be underneath the breasts with the very bottom peeking out if she's doing a pose like arching her back. Look at a petite woman with large breasts and measure how much of the rib cage you see.

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>>2391490
I'm just a beginner so maybe my suggestions are shit, but I think the shape and size of the breasts suggest that they are firm. As it is, it looks like they're being pressed against her in a very weird way. I don't think those creases should exist.

Another thing is her rib cage. It looks to me as if her rib cage ends at B, which doesn't seem right. The line under the breasts shouldn't exist, I don't think.

Also, I think the feet look way too big.

I tried to remove the creases on the breasts in the right there, and I know it's not very good, but that's what her form suggests to me. With breasts like those I just found it really hard to find any real creases or plane changes, especially from that angle. I would actually like to hear someone else's opinion on this since I see these kinds of creases so often.

Well, back to drawing my boxes now.

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>>2391166
oh shit wasn't expecting my picture to be up

>>2391236
>>2391345
could you please just...not?

i wanted to make my own porny stuff not fanart and im just staring at blank canvas and i have no fucking idea what to draw. wat do.

>>2391921
eat a dick dude, tell me whats wrong with it

>>2392050
tomoko

>>2391892

blog?

>>2391345

Is she supposed to look horny with that anime cute/embarassed thing going on? Because she looks like she's having a high fever and just puked her guts out more than anthing else.

guys can someone help me figure out which equestria girl is called 'han' ? i can't find anything via google.

>>2392073
the eyes? that's just in character, and the tongue I suppose is a bad attempt at ahegao face. not the artist btw

>>2392070
sorry no blog

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are the male and female figures aligning in perspective properly?

>>2392199
Is that a dog?

>>2392218
nope, a wolf.
I'll need some ref for animals later, shit's pretty hard

>>2391892
some people have a, how should i put this, "different" taste.

>>2392050
i think there's something generally wrong with your brain...and penis

>>2391490
You have a line going through the navel and another going through the chest. These should be the same line.

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>>2392465

no denying that

does she still look like she has a flu?

>>2392514
remove the fukcing hair in the pussy please, thanks.

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>>2392525

tomoko wouldn't shave

>>2392555
Alright, we get it man, you drew this piece of crap. Can you please stop spamming now.

>>2392566

I removed the hair, not spamming

>>2392584
Dude, stop fucking fiddling with a 20 minutes doodle and move the fuck on.
How autistic do you have be for not being able to understand this on your own?
This illustration is garbage. Stop showing us garbage.

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Im in the beginning stages of this sequence and I love to hear some feed back on how it's looks so far.

>>2392654
this looks great dude, who's it gonna be?

>>2392635

why are you getting so mad, im looking for critique, and other than "it looks like shit lmao" i'm not really getting any

I know ahegao isn't really everyone's thing but aside from that i don't know whats really wrong with it

also go fuck yourself you faggot

>>2392688
Thank you. It's one of my original characters; her name is Lucy.

>>2392719
excited to see it finished man, keep up the good work

>>2392689
"It's shit."
"WOW OMG STOP THAT I JUST WANT SOME CRITIQUE YOU FAGGOT GO FUCK YOURSELF!!!!!"
/ic/ in a nutshell

If no one's giving specific advice/crit its because all of it is unappealing and has beginners mistakes all over the place.
It looks like all you know about art is from how-to-draw-manga books, learn your fuckin anatomy and expressions, learn your fuckin mass, learn your fucking lighting basics, learn your fucking base basics and fucking learn how to stop being an ass before you post again

>>2392689
Nobody is going to give you feedback since it wouldn't help you if you want to receive feedback show us a study of a figure instead of "modifications" that you hope to improve on something that has its foundations missing.

>>2392746
please let's make this a sticky, ty

>>2392728
Cool. Just look me up. I go by Oda-Lee.

>>2391345
I can't stop laughing.

Just No

>>2392746
>>2392748

k

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>>2392764
Here's my something more substantial than my laughing.

But really, just try to draw what you think is good. There's always a group of people who will give it a 4/5

>>2392784

well I appreciate it, but even I realize there are more fundamental problems than that, there's just a point where i get to where i can't understand whats wrong with a picture and move onto something else

>>2392806
I don't art.

I used to music, and music very well, but when you start getting into a situation where you're comparing yourself to everyone and thinking of your art as crap it slowly eats away at your soul and you can't progress. I've seen the same happen in others.

I point out those two things cause that's just sloppiness any 14 year old would catch. If you want to draw better, only way to do that is draw more.

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Where can I find resources on how to draw cocks, balls, tits, and cunts?

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>>2392954
for some reason i thought i would be better at this

>>2392966
>>2392954
honestly just look at porn, doesn't have to be 3D porn, drawn porn will do as well, don't be afraid to use a reference.

>>2392954
bro when your watching porn just pause at the dicks and study them, gay af but its a good way m8

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>>2392910
Smooth line work. I like her expression.

Initially it should be a 1 page comic but I kinda mess up.

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How's this? Is the left shoulder/arm bit off? Also how do I armpit?

>>2393189
>How do I armpit?
It was either porn or animeternative thread, but there was someone else asking a similar question a while ago. Anyone have those anatomy for sculptors images and other infographs?

>>2393244
Pls do more monster gals :^)

Looks similar to Miia from monster musume? If you care to look up the other main girls, it'd be awesome to see your interpretations. Practice right?

>>2393189
CONTRAPOSTO

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>>2393189
Someone explain this meme outfit

>>2393505
I don't know where the cat head boob window came from but I like it.

>>2393505
>>2393513
i actually saw that outfit on aliexpress once, but i have no idea what was there first

>>2393505
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/cat-keyhole-bra

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>>2393505
>meme outfit
Just think about it. Hard. Why people like sexy lingerie, Sherlock?

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What if female videogame charactrs were dressed like male characters dressed like female characters?

>>2393744
resize that my man

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Don't like how the full body turned out.

>>2394297
I assume your intention wasn't to make her look like a balloon animal, but with those limbs and that shading, it does.

also the arms are too short and heavy things weigh your shoulders down, not up

>>2394318
Oh, should I keep the closeup or scrap both?

>>2394340

the close up has the same shading problems as the full body and her nipples are pointing in wildly different directions but it's cute. up to you whether it's worth keeping or not.

>>2394297
post all cows pls

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>>2394359
I'll fix her left nipple and tone down the shading.
>>2394362
here are the other two.

>>2393244
is her face supposed to look like a sea creature?

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>>2394386
i think you should try incorporating reflective lighting and a more defined light souce

>>2394428
Noted, I usually just kind of add highlights wherever I can fit them.

>>2394386
The shading makes the skin look washed out, also how are you colouring under your pencil lines? It looks weird

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I drew this thing and really liked it
So it's time to come and have it torn apart properly. Thanks in advance (bonus points for redlines or links to tutorials/helpful resources)
Feel free to be vicious, I can take it.
Also, sorry it's furry shit.

>>2394297
>>2394318
agreed, those arms are the biggest issue, I understand you ran out of space for your buckets in the style your using, but the arms should not be anywhere near that short. as the fingers should be more than halfway down the thigh. :]

>>2394464
fix her upper lip you didnt even color inside the lines

other than that and the guys hair. its pretty good i guess

>>2394464
Its not so fur, doesnt have those fucking animal faces, that's so fucking disgusting, this is really acceptable

>>2394464
Well, btw her face is kinda strange, her cheek is really concave

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>>2394473
Her hair is swinging around to cover a part of her face, but if it looks weird then I'll take note to focus on avoiding that in the future. Thanks for the crit!

>>2394456
I pencil, then ink, then I flood fill flat colors onto everything then I select each color individually and add a shadow and highlight.

>>2394483
On one layer?

>>2394464
Looks like he has a huge forehead

>>2394494
All on one layer.

>>2394500
Thats why it looks weird, if you want to make your colouring look less amateurish, set the lineart to a multiply layer and colour on a layer under it

Also don't just make the shading a less saturated version of the base colour, makes it look like deviantart circa 2007

>>2394512
Never tried that before It's been a long time since I used layers but I'll give it a go next time I draw the body.

>>2394482
Ohhh i see it better know, its looks like the face line is following the hair line that makes it looks that the face is concave

>>2393244
This hips/tail are strange, try using more Miia normal design.

>>2393523
Right but it's irregular for such a specific set of lingerie to become popular

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what do you guys think?

>>2394833
I like it!

>>2394833
top half good. bottom half freaking me out a bit.

>>2394833
i woulda done the mouth different and asscheeks are weird but its well done nonethelesss

>>2394841
>>2394839
>>2394844
thanks, I think you guys are right, the lines on her asscheeks are too heavy

what about the pubes? is this pussy lickable?

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祈り

>>2394857
lovin the concept, fix thos hands and refine the paint more.

>>2394856
Looks better with the pubes than without, and I have no preference for that so not a bias

>>2394856
the pubes are not serviceable in my humble opinion. it's like her clit is trying to crawl out of the void. maybe put some breathing space between?

>>2394857
face lines and eye allignment are a bit wonky

>>2394856
but why does she have 4 asscheeks tho?

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>>2394882
how about now?

>>2394890
much betta

>>2394890
i understand shes like an animal but her hands are huge af

make that pose in the mirror and look at your male hands, they arent even that big

>>2394909
I tried making her hands smaller but I dont know
maybe because of the perspective it didnt look dinamic.
her hand is supposed to be right above her vayjayjay

>>2394913
still kinda big, hands should be a little over half the size of her face in that perspective. making her head a little bugger would make it perfect

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Having trouble making a penis look like it is flopping back onto the character's stomach as they are leaning back.

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>>2394960
Maybe its just not an aesthetic position.

>>2394916
at least still good right? I am too lazy to redraw that hand

>>2394916
Do you have tiny hands? Hand should be about the same size as the face for males, 15% smaller for females.

>>2394386
Y'know, once you unfuck your shit I think this stuff would have a degree of charm, without being distracted by your fuckups.

Nothing in this thread is arousing. Step up your game /ic/

>>2395366
I'd say a few of the earlier posts in the thread are worth at least a decent chub.

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Long time lurker here. Bully away

>>2395406
>>2395407
>>2395410
BAWK BAWKBAWKBAWK
BAWKBAWK bawk

>>2395402
>>2395405
>>2395406
>>2395407
>>2395410
Stop tracing and learn to draw.

>>2395413
Anatomy is your enemy. Learn how muscles work and how muscle fibers and tendons cover each other.

>>2395429
It looks more like he needs to go back to foundational anatomy and figure out the bones. That pelvis is borked among other things for reasons beyond just not knowing all the muscle groups.

>>2395431
That too, but I'm just sick and tired of repeating the same shit to everyone that posts here, except 2 or 3 people.

>>2395429
>>2395431
>>2395433
Thanks for the suggestions.

I'll post something a bit earlier in the process next time so I can act on them more easily.

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im really tired but i still wanted to draw

>>2394802
That's just how people work. They copy whatever seems "new and cool" by some popular artist and it just spreads afterwards. Already seen this spread to my DeviantArt inbox, like 8 total times now.

>>2392688
Your mom

>>2395533
wow what the fuck she looks like a shortstack m8, you pretty much just cut out a portion of her spine

>>2391301
He can't. How would he draw something he's never seen?

>>2395590
seems okay foreshortened to me.

>>2395533
I like the folds of her anus but where is her boob going? Like, is it melting off?

>>2395428
Only 1 is traced m8

>>2395612
they all look traced to me
obviously you are / he is doing something very wrong.

>>2395602
Not him but could you explain what is wrong with her left boob, I mean it just looks like gravity to me but I'm a beginner

>>2395693
i guess he's just a bigger beginner than you are. the boob is falling to the side because of gravity as you said, yeah.
however I can see why he's confused, since depth isn't shown too well.

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I tried.

>>2395792
Nice, lush colors and it has a good "meatyness" too it, but her waist is comically narrow. Or perhaps you narrowed it too early at her hip... it just looks a bit broken. Also, she looks slightly retarded, try raising her nose and lips up a tiny notch.

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>>2395822
Cheers man! I tried a quick fix. Retardeness may be also from the fuckup expression of mouth, I'm not very good at this shit.

>>2395792
Fausty?

>>2395792
Nice polishing, but it's a shame your base picture has such a boring pov and composition.
The least you could do is give the body a more dynamic s curve and an accentuated contrapposto.

>>2395904
That's true. I have trouble inventing these things especially with porn.

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>>2393189
finished

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> "When a hornet approaches the hive to release pheromones, the bee workers will retreat back to the hive, leaving an opening to allow the hornet scout to enter. At a given point, the bees emerge from their hiding places in an angry cloud formation containing some 500 individuals.[2] They form a tight ball around the hornet that acts like a convection oven: the bees vibrate their wings, generating heat via muscular exertion, and then direct the air warmed around them into the inside of the ball. This causes the interior temperature of the ball to rise to 47 °C (117 °F)".
-wikipedia

>>2391490
There's nothing to wreck, that's some quality anatomy porn.

>>2396293
What is she looking at?

>>2395533
Her taint is huge.

>>2396533
away, because shy of showing body in cat lingerie

should've done that red cheeks and pointed nipples to look more sexy I guess

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homotit link

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I would like some critique with this. Tell me how bad it is.

>>2396659
Stop symbol drawing.

>>2396661
Is it just the animu face? Cause that's intentional, I want to ask how bad is the body structure.

>>2396659
Perfect tits, everything else looks pretty wonky like you guessed the anatomy.
Work on your form definitions and you know, use real life references

>>2396659
Lats need to come from behind

>>2396696
Went to sleep for a bit, sorry for the delay but yeah I do see what you mean about the wonkiness. I'll fix that up, thanks.
>>2396700
Yeah, gonna fix that up, thanks.

Everyone here is garbage except for BBC >>2395792 has a chance if they stop rushing


ya'll never gonna make it, drop your pen/pencil/stylus now this shit is an insult.

>>2395445
the man looks like a statue and the woman looks like she's trying to make a post for a picture

When drawing two human figures interacting, is a continuous gesture or LOA for both of them viable?

>>2397358
Post your work :^)

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stacked shorties

>>2396330
neat.

>>2396661
Bad crit

>>2397456
It could just be that bitter shitposter from the drawthread who got told he was symbol drawing and flipped a tit.

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I now had some extra time to fix up the problems, hope I listened to the advice well enough.

>>2397503
I like the changes you've made, looks better than the previous version.

>>2397503
Looks better anatomy wise, but the shoulders area still has no real structure. Other than that, you lack perspective understanding and because of that this pose looks uninteresting and stiff.
I'll do a redline to show you what I mean.

>>2397509
Thanks for the comment. Appreciated.

>>2397522
That would be great, glad I'm at least getting somewhere. Thank you for the advice, I'll be here to see what I can improve on this.

>>2397503
flat and pissbreath as fuck

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>>2397503
>>2397522
Here you go.

>>2397503
Didnt fix lats ffffffffffffffffffffffffff
They still look like fins

>>2397629
Better

>>2397629
Ah, okay, I see how it should work now. Thanks, I'll try to work this out later on.

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need help with this shit, how does a lifted arm works? and what should I do with the other one? also is it alright?

>>2397758
Her head looks like an upside down egg with features painted on it, try to picture in your minds eye what her skull would look like.

Have you even looked at a reference of someone waving? If she's holding her arm as high as that, her shoulder is going to be pulled up along with it.

I can understand that you're new and that you want some input on what you can do better, but my first advice is to study better. If things look wrong, like in this one, google fu "waving" or whatever specifics you need.

All in all, if you want to be good I suggest you take a step back and refocus on your fundamentals. Sure, draw fun stuff as much as you want, but dedicate some time to the basics.

>>2397629
Fuck that anatomy looks nice, can you recommend any books on muscles and overall anatomy?

I usually see small tutorial pictures but want to learn anatomy for good and something simplified would help so much.

>>2397786
thank you very much for the attention!

>>2397860
I never read anatomy books, just found various anatomy pics online.
For anatomy lessons I suggest you take a look at Prokopenko's lessons on youtube.
https://www.youtube.com/user/ProkoTV

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>>2397629
Thank you for the redline. I was feeling ill yesterday to get it done sooner but I hope this is a better attempt this time. And just to point out, I did do her without the shorts, but I didn't want it to lose focus of the original image I went with. I hope you don't mind.

Anyone have some good Vag tutorials?

there's tons upon tons of Dick ones out there but i feel finding a nice pussy tutorial or at least ones that show variety is hard to come by. even in some of the previous Tutorial threads i've never really seen them posted.

even ones that go into deeper detail for gaping/spreading would be awesome.

i've got a folder of close up pics that i've been adding to slowly but i'd also like to have artist tutorials for some drawing process.

>>2399504
Draw a box.

>>2399504
the only good vag "tut" is doxy tut wchih is mostly just reference on cuple angles. Nobody knows how this shit works. you just need to get shitton of vag pictures done by good artists.

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>>2399430
Only moved stuff, so I hope you can see. The major problem was the flatness of the lower stomach into the pelvis and near the pit of the neck.
After moving the pelvis back forward to give it some depth, I think it might obstruct the gesture so you might want to play around with it some.

>>2399523
>wchih is mostly just reference on cuple angles
you can say that only if you are reading impaired or something.

>>2394464
I'm interested, do you have tumblr or something else?

>>2399815
>>2394464
nvm, found it

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wip

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>>2400309
not a big fan of that tongue, it looks like a slice of fruit. It's much too long and too far back. Remember that the tongue is anchored in the center of the mouth.

Try shortening it and get rid of the overhang over the lower lip, as that makes it look really fat.

>>2400331
Wasn't really going for reality with that tongue. Thanks for the comment anyway.

>>2400342
That's fine. I just think at a minimum, it looks a little off because despite the low angle on the face, we still get a strong overhang of the tongue over the lip.

>>2400349
*lower lip
I should say

>>2400342

>muh style

>>2400349
I understand what you mean. I first made her smiling with no tongue and I drew her mouth very wide. I added the tongue later and It fit alright into that configuration.

>>2400309
>...and then she farts!

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>>2397434
Your stuff looks familiar. Do you have a blog? Also, I like this demon girl a lot. Does she have a dong or is that a trick of the light
>>2400440
eeeeeeeeey I just saw this on tumblr.

>>2400440
Those boobs are very symmetrical so it's pretty boring. Consider shifting the shoulders more like you've done with the hips so that the breasts can rest differently. It'll be more interesting and there'll be a better sense of weight.

Also they're huge for Ciri but I guess that's personal taste.

>>2400440
She has no midsection. With the way you drew the hip line, it looks like the hips fuse immediately into the chest.

>>2400462
Great pointer about the breasts position. You are absolutely right.

>>2400575
I'm aware of the hips being a bit too high. I'll fix that during inking/cleaning.

>>2400628
>he fixes shit in the ink stage
dude why

>>2400639
you've really perfected your hand and feet hiding skills congratulations

>>2400644
its a long-honed technique of mine yes

>>2400635
Why not?

>>2400653
Just seems a bit weird to not go back to your sketch and refine it, but to instead turn a less thought-heavy task like inking and delineating basic shadows into something potentially painful because you have to solve an issue while considering line weight, etc. It seems like it'd open you up to more mistakes.

>>2400658
Well, of course I'm going to go back to the sketch before starting inking or cleaning it, but such a small correction really doesn't need any refinement at all. I can simply lasso tool select the bottom part and move it in the desired position.

>>2400676
Digital really is the tits, isn't it? Sorry for spouting off about workflow fambo.

>>2400639
fuck you asshole
seriously fuck you.

>>2400724
what is your problem?

>>2400639
Besides the obvious hand-foot hiding, and the lack of shading, pretty good. You sure devoted a lot of time to body hair.

>>2400682
Of course it is.

>>2400639
Disgusting

>>2400956
thanks, i like body hair

>>2400724
>>2401009
thank you so much for your constructive feedback, i'm sure it'll really help me improve my art

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>>2399588
Finished. Just gotten the time to do so. Hope this fixed the errors.

>>2399402

>>2396529
Incorrect

>>2401258
learn better panel placement/flow

>>2401258
Stop copying anime symbols and learn some proper anatomy.

>>2401393
Still better than 80% of /ic/

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>>2401509
>mfw I started the better than x% of /ic/ meme

It was mine and mine alone and now you ruined it.

>>2401374
Makes lot more sense when read from right to left. Maybe that's what he's going for?

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>>2401509
Which doesn't make my statement any less true imo.

Also, thanks for the crits guys. I fixed the stuff you mentioned and decided to turn her face a bit, because the frontal shot was too boring.

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>>2401511

No you didn't thats my meme. Stop stealing credit for MY memes k thanks.

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how do you guys study? I've been trying my hand at doodling some Kiyoshirou studies

anyway here's some 30min shitfuck

>>2401920
Nice stylization and negative spaces on stuff that is easy to draw.
Horrible hands and feet, which are harder to draw.

>>2401961
Thanks, I didn't really make anything clean since this was just a sketch to test stuff, if I ever invest time into porn I'll definitely spend some time on those.

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just a wip, finished lining last night. Any suggestions?

>>2402143
>Any suggestions?
learn to draw.

>>2402143
You are not good at line-art so practice it, but don't do it in pieces you want to post.

It would probably look better if you tighten up the sketch and add color. Try that.

>>2402158
Don't be mean on the internet

dang #cyberbullied

>>2402170
>It would probably look better if you tighten up the sketch and add color. Try that.
Yeah, let's see that turd being polished!

>>2402173
More like #cybertoldthetruth.
Sorry kid, there's no place for hugboxes here. Try tumblr for that.

>>2394297
Waist is too thin, arms are too short, I think the entire upper body needs to be redone.

>>2402172
no

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>>2400450
hey thanks. she's not supposed to have a dong, it was just a sloppy sketch. hope that doesn't ruin her for ya, lol.

i go by shyguy9 on tumblr.

>>2402540
Thanks for the tips, I'm redrawing it but I can't focus on it till I catch up with my homework.

>>2401920
blog?

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tfw you go ham on the perspective to begin with and then lose it in other places and ends up with a huge chicken drumstick leg

cest la vie

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this is porn

>>2402867
I like it

Is there a reason she's a fucchalberdier

>>2402866
give her teeny weeny little arms and make it a dino girl

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>>2402866
did you look at reference for the legs? I would size them down a little bit if I were you. Even given exaggeration, each one of those legs is bigger than her torso.

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>>2402896

>>2402896
Nah I was just winging it. I was going for a much lower down perspective initially which as I said I lost by being thoughtless with the upper body. I shoulda used ref for the leg on the right though as soon as I ran into trouble with it.

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Would like some critique.

>>2402913
i think the waist is fucked

>>2402916
I've been thinking it may have been too low myself, but is it more than that? Is the angle of it off?

>>2402827
mathiastblr.tumblr,com I don't post much nsfw though, mostly practice

>>2402913
LOOOOOMIS

also it looks like she smelled something really bad, uneven facial expressions show contempt and disgust not arousal

>>2402952
Right, I thought it looked off myself as well. I wanted to go with something else in the first place, just wasn't really sure if it was just me. Thanks for the comment.

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>>2402918
>>2402913
I think what mostly throws it off is that it's a little too low, and the lines for the torso behind the arm are odd/make no sense.

>>2402172
Why would she store so much fat in her thighs but be so lean in her stomach?

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Would appreciate some help with the perpective and proportions.

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>>2403087
that is a very unflattering angle and difficult to pul off well. I would show more of the torso

>>2403052
who is this girl and how can i marry her?

>>2399831
more!

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>>2403078
dont ask him he didnt make the character

>>2403087
hand/forearm should be bigger

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Why don't more people draw porn? This commissions cost $1700. Yes, $1700

>>2403140
A lot of people don't want to draw furry porn because they're not into it/disgusted by it.

Yeah there's money to make out of it, but it's not the only option. Not to mention shit like burn-out and what not.

>>2403148
not to mention that it can mess with your reputation, depending on what you want to do in art.

>>2403140
The 2-3 days it took that person to make that picture to earn $1700 I've already made double his earnings without having to lower my pride.

>>2403049
>>2403052
>>2403053
I see what you mean with the waist, thank you for the references. I'll attempt to improve the picture later on when I get more free time.

>>2403140
>tfw nobody even follows me properly
>tfw too shy to ask for commissions
I'd totally draw furry porn but I don't know what to draw but I need more furry followers or more followers in general for someone to commission me anyways ;_;

>>2403096
Fuck, I hate pictures like these but I need to draw one for someone. Euuughh.

>>2403294
What's wrong with this image, other than the beef curtains?

>>2403354
The vagoo. But I'm not saying that's what's wrong, it isn't wrong it just is what it is but I hate looking at what it is.

>>2402172
>leg_day.png

>>2403392
cover it?

>>2403392
Are you afraid of the Vagina, Anon? Just pretend it's some kind of deep sea monster.

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>>2403459
Why, it's easier to just not look.
>>2403464
Not afraid, just don't like it. It looks so gross to me. When it's a drawing it's easier to look at because it's idealized. Unfortunately if I'm going to draw this thing for this dude I have to look at some real ones at least a couple of times.
>mfw I look

>>2397629
underrated post.
i really like that red line.

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>>2402532
I think refined sketches are better than bad lineart. You are disagreeing but not saying your own opinion. This pic is refined without lineart

It sounds like you're regurgitating something that was said to you. You're probably a turd polisher.

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>>2403136
thank you

>>2403514
Gotta expose yourself bro, learn to love the pussy.

That said that isn't a very flattering picture.

>>2403574
Is there such a thing as a flattering picture of the clamshell? I've never seen one and I really don't want to search. Even the references he sent me were just like that one and I simply could not see the appeal.

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doodle, have to wake up early and im here, drawing porn, wtf im doing with my life.

>>2402170
alright hopefully the lines will look less like shit after some color, but is the anatomy there?

>>2403630
Not much, as long as you were trying to make a little girl

>>2403578
I fellow a lot of kinda artsy porn/photography blogs on tumblr n they can be pretty good at making them look nice.

>>2403539
Please don't compare this good lineart to that piece of shit. Never do that again lel.

>>2403630
Of course the anatomy isn't there. That's why I said you should learn to draw. You basically have no idea what you are doing. Your drawing looks like it was created by a 7 year old.

>>2403244
>but I don't know what to draw
ppl will ask you to draw what you are already, if you want ppl to ask for furry commissions then draw furry

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sweating

>>2403808
unless youre trolling, make sure to kill yourself.
>>2403140
i hate furries with a dying passion, but the human parts of your bodies are good enough that ill compliment you.

>>2403815
fuck you nose tripfag

>>2403904
He doesnt have a trip

>>2403815
>i hate furries with a dying passion, but the human parts of your bodies are good enough that ill compliment you.

Look at the bottom right foot of the blue haired wolfslut NB and tell us what you think now.

>>2403140
6 fully rendered characters, 3 busts and a background from a dude with one of the most populist styles, 1.7k ain't bad

try using those 3d poser model programs to create a pose and fuck around with the camera lens distortion to get a feel for how certain angles and XXXtreme perspective effect the whole body

obviously you'll still need a really human for proper reference, but a program like that can help you wrap your head around perspective distortions in a more natural manner

>>2403912
he might as well because nobody would want to pose as him

>>2404011
except for that guy 2 days back.

what part of reference do you not get ... i say this to all morons out there that "finish" works without running them through some kind of reference and then if you still dont think you compair it well because of faulty perception !! fucking overlay it and before you do the corrections which you must you note the freagin mistakes with arrows pointing at them ... quality not quantity will get you results. If you dont get why your drawings come out like crooked crap then learn to spot all the basic principles in your drawings . aaah I dont know i was looking for that one final general crit to end this misery, i guess im not The art Jesus.
!!! You dont actually want to draw nice pics even though you think you do !!! you want what you cant get and you are sabotaging your shit for reasons you dont even want to comprehend ... (with all that info available out there youd all be good by now, no one applies it because they know it takes shattering your ego resistance to learn from others and learning the proper way) and the dude trying with the kitty porn should stop existing all together... just dont

What part of reference do you not get? ... I say this to all the morons out there that "finish" works without running them through some kind of reference. If you still don't think you can compare it well because of faulty perception, then overlay it. Before you do the corrections, you must note the mistakes with arrows pointing at them. Remember, quality, not quantity, will get you results. If you don't get why your drawings come out looking like cooked crap, then learn to spot all the basic principles in your drawings.
"Aaaah~~ I don't know I was looking for that one final general crit to help me this misery"
"Hey guys, back off, I'm not the art Jesus!"
You don't actually want to draw nice pics, even if you think you do. If you want what you don't act to get, you are sabotaging your shit for reasons completely in your control. With all the information available out there, you'd all be good by now, if you'd actually apply it, which you don't because it takes shattering your ego.
Also, furries are dumb.

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>>2403599

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i'm dogshit at perspective, can someone point me in the right direction? don't really want to spend a lot of time refining if there's glaring issues fundamentally

>>2403173
im pretty sure it took about a week.

>>2404493
dude I love this

>>2392199

why's that dude have a tacquito for a penis?

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yo yo yo lookin' for some feedback before I render anything. Thanks!

>>2404890
the thigh on our left is kind of ridiculously long, even if the other one is meant to be foreshortened
she also has a giraffe neck, and the ankle on our right looks broken (twisted unnaturally--compare the direction the knee is facing)

>>2404914
Thank you! I will fix the things you mentioned.

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>>2404890
Here's a redline for you.
The main issue you have is a very very inconsistent perspective throughout the whole artwork. I think you didn't determine a horizon line, which is your main source of information about what elements are seen from above or below.
Always set a horizon line, if you have a complex piece and you are not confident enough with your perspective.
I also fixed the proportions of the lower body, and the elongated neck.
Hope this helps.

>>2405052
How did you determine where the horizon should be?

>>2405165
I used a mix of the ground perspectives (even the ground has many perspectives) and the horizon line happened to land in a pretty good spot, so I kept it like that.
Btw, I am using manga studio's perspective guides which make your life much easier to determine that stuff.

Speaking more broadly, you determine the horizon line during the conceptualization phase. Since it defines the viewer's eye level, you should put it at a height that works like that. A lot of time your horizon line also helps you determining your composition, because it is cool to keep the main character's face somewhere near it (especially the eyes). But that can be basically anywhere, depending what kind of mood or dynamics you are looking for.

>>2405052
Wow thank you so much! This is amazingly helpful!

>>2405185
addendum
this part might be misinterpreted, since I write like a retard, sorry.
>(even the ground has many perspectives)
I was talking about the fact that in this artwork the ground plane is badly defined and it has many perspective planes, which is bad, since all the planes are perfectly flat and parallel to each other.

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>>2403771
The lineart isn't solid. It's sketchy. The gif related has solid clean lineart. Nowadumsaying.

>>2405222
oh, god, please stop being such a dumb idiot. if you have no idea about art (probably you are a beginner or something), stop commenting on it.
the difference between the two pieces of art isn't just in the fact that one is rougher and the other cleaner. the fundamentals of both guys are fucking years of training apart. the beginner you are defeinding has no fundamental understanding of perspective and anatomy and his lineart is the same. it is not confident and he doesn't understand what line quality and weight are.

seriously dude.

stop

fucking

posting

>>2405248
Seems like you can't tell what anatomy looks likes. And you're using over-used words like idiot and fundamentals.

You are the worse troll

>>2405260
not the same anon, but I'm pretty sure good anatomy doesn't LOOKS LIKES this >>2402143

he's totally right. guys like you are idiots.

>>2405260
just kill yourself

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>>2391166

i did a quick study of something

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>>2405291
>>2405298
I see trolls.

Even if you draw it right while sketching the lineart can subtract from that. Now since you're not being specific it's obvious you don't what's wrong, sure there are problems but not as serious as the line-art.

I can guaranty the sketch version looked better. If only the artist would post it.

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>>2405307

quick study of a more detailed orc titty/nipple

>>2405312
I see a dumb person that can't for the love of god tell apart shit art from good one.

>>2405307
>>2405326
You don't have a clue what studies are, so please, until you realize what a study is, stop doing them. And b4 you or any other SJWs start crying about my statement being to vague, no, I'm not going to spoon feed you information you should be able to find by yourself, if you are not a complete retard.

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>>2404493
maybe it was too rough to work with? how about now? anything horribly wrong?

>>2405577
>anything horribly wrong?
Basically everything. Perspective, anatomy, gesture, lineart. Everything is beginner tier and unappealing as fuck.

>>2405599
ok, can you specifically tell me what is wrong about those, though?

>>2405600
Basically that your skills aren't honed enough, to be able to convey depth (with good perspective and anatomy), convey sexual appeal (with good expressions and anatomy), convey good aesthetics (with all of the above, plus with confident lineart that takes into account perspective).
In every of these department you are below what could be defined as acceptable.
tl;dr you don't have a clue what you are doing and you should learn some proper fundamentals if you want to draw appealing porn (or appealing art in general).

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someone is turning my drawings into yugiho cards on amazon. not sure how I should feel about this. who buys these things?

>>2405619
sue the piece of shit

>>2405619
There's probably some means by which you can get their amazon junk taken down or snag revenue from it, keep us posted if you do anything anon, this is kinda interesting.

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>>2405630
so should I call a lawyer and tell them someone is stealing my big tiddy anime tentacle girl drawings?
>>2405663
were should I start? email the seller?

>>2405673
>so should I call a lawyer and tell them someone is stealing my big tiddy anime tentacle girl drawings?
Why not?
No, but seriously, you are probably making a living off your stuff. Don't tell me you are ashamed of what you are doing. We're in the 21st century, dude. Porn is a lucrative business, not fucking witchcraft.

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Just finished this. You guys see any huge glaring issues with it?

>>2405687
I'll just keep an eye on him for now. Don't really want to hassle with it atm.

>>2405708
the fingers are kind of fucked (they look more like sausages than realistic fingers--try using a reference next time)
from the way you stylized the cloth folds it's kind of evident you don't rly understand how cloth draps around the form that well, but that's kind of minor
and the penis looks odd since the balls are huge compared to the dick length/girth

>>2405673
Was just thinking the Amazon copyright infringement report form, I don't into law but I imagine you could hit a lawyer up just to verify that your art is indeed protected by copyright and the cards don't fall under fair use, just to be safe. This is probably your livelihood, if I'm not mistaken.

>>2405577
i like the nightmare dude, hope you dont scrap that

>>2405719
I am not kyle, but was intrigued by the fact that he just steals stuff from other artists (he used X-tea2's art as well), so I wrote him asking if he was making the cards or he was just a reseller. He answered "I design these all myself why do you ask?"
Priceless hahaha. What are you gonna do, Kyle?

>>2405619
it will fade into obscurity. Dont worry about it

or you can start an internet flame war

>>2405708
She has something between her legs.

>>2395868
Her face looks just frozen in disappointment, have a look at faces in popular porn art. Personally I prefer enjoyment, but even for a 'oh no' face it's too static.
Really juicy though.

>>2403599
Needs more definition to the shoulder since it just fades in. Her neck is off-centre.

>>2405307
>>2405326
Stop colouring stuff, start on line sketches for a while. Don't even shade them until you've looked up how to avoid pillow shading.

>>2405719
You could also use it to your advantage if you have followers on tumblr. Tumblr ove hearing about their favorite artists being stolen from, make a post.

>>2406184

>she

no, stop, its a boy dressed as a girl

>>2405673
Make a tumblr post about it

no seriously. seeing how that guy also steals from other artist it's probably a good thing more people know about it.

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thots? i do free requests btw

>>2406385
its not finished btw

>her hands