starting out

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2nd one

Try like, not using lined paper my guy

>>496027
>>496028
I love the style you are rocking, I kind of wish you posted a face on the 1st one but whatever. I do like how you shad clothing and the line art on both look good. I'd have to say if there was anything wrong with these 2 I would have to say the blood looks a little weird in number 2 and the right arm looks really buff in number 1.
but I honestly think your stuff is good and if you where to post a deviant art account I would love to follow you :)

Lined paper was the only thing i had and i will be sure to keep on trying as these were actually my first 2 attemps. Thanks for your advise tho

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those are pretty nice looking. i suggest you buy a sketchbook so you dont have to draw on lined paper.