The okay art section

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>>495071

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>>495072

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>>495073

These are some of my better ones btw

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>>495074

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>>495075

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>>495076

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>>495077

>>495070
really not work, but this one's a bit funky>>495077

>>495079
oh fuck, i fucked up, need to proofread before i post.
i mean the girl flexing her left arm in the bottom looks weird.

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>>495078

>>495080

What about her looks weird?

>>495071
Needs a more consistent light source, multiple shades, and more detail on the hair.
>>495072
Again, multiple shades and more detail to the hair. The sweat is very good.
>>495074
The face is quite odd on this one. The expression has one eye slightly higher, and not aligned with the other. Combine that with the fact she is looking in two different directions, and she looks like she might have a disability. Shade the teeth, and definitely add more detail to the hair.
>>495075
The lines are too forceful. The shape of the teeth and hair should be suggested, not stated. Try using softer, open ended lines. The fire is lifeless, it needs more movement. Google some examples drawn by professional artists, (last airbender should be a goldmine) and compare it to yours.
>>495076
The anatomy on the body is good, but the face and hand are definitely off. The face needed to be planned more carefully, and the hand is anatomically incorrect. The hair is getting better, but still needs more detail. The steam is scribbles. Never. Scribble.
>>495077
The top right has incorrect arms. Forearms don't bend like that, and the left arm seems too small. The belly button looks like a wound. Bottom left has a problem where her body is bulging inward, making her bodybuilder body look like a holocaust survivor. Arms not correct proportion, define the jackets more.
>>495078
Shade the teeth, add more detail to the face and clothes, watch your anatomy and colour choices.
>>495082
The red is too intense, the look like they have a skin condition. Define your outlines more.

All in all, it's breddy gud. Practice anatomy (god knows how many times I heard that, but it's true) and realistic portrait drawing. Look at your favorite professional artists, compare your work to theirs carefully. Look how they do hair, teeth, and colour. Most importantly, keep drawing. You show a lot of potential, don't waste it.

>>495093 here, just want to say that >>495072 is probably the best, in my opinion.

>>495094
Thanks for all the feedback! Seems I never shade teeth lol. I'm still a novice when it comes to lighting so I never really know what to do unless I have the reference in front of me, so doing it from the brain is pretty tough for me. Colouring is a whole different problem as well for me since I feel I don't really understand how it works desu.

>>495083
her left arm's smaller than her right

>>495171
If you have trouble drawing without a reference, practicing and understanding the shading on basic shapes will really help. For example, teeth are similar to cylinders, and would be shaded in a similar way.

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I'm drunk as tits, here's some art I did on my phone. Take a guess on what it's based on.

>>495181
Ah yeah I see it now. Damn lol

>>495238
Damn dude you did that on a phone? Tight. I have no idea what the reference is though

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>>495070
i guess you got to move the eyes away from the center when doing a side view

>>495238
wtf is this aztrosist?

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>>495296
>>495294
Do you think I should be posting here or in beginner? Also I'd like criticism as well.

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>>495070
sig und tessa? needs more rule34