Hey guys, thought I'd share what I have of this webcomic I work on once in a while.
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And that's all I've got so far, feel free to share thoughts and comment, hope you liked it!
fast food rick and morty?
I like it though, keep em coming.
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very good work!
This shit is fucking hilarious
This is pretty much the exact same stuff that happens at my workplace (burger joint), minus the toilet and handwashing with a power sprayer. Relatability makes it hilarious
I like it. Where do you plan to upload them, so I can keep up with this?
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https://tapastic.com/episode/260887
I have another comic that's more story driven, I may dump the first chapter here one of these days
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This looks really promising OP. I was sighing/facehanding through the first bit but then it picked up and I'm glad I continued. People might press 'next' on a webpage though. I'm just talking story here not art. You gotta jump right in, no redundant panels. The first five are telling us the same thing over and over, the dude is applying for a job in there, it doesn't need reiteration with the sign, the golly gee, walking inside, looking around, no one cares especially when it's not 'pretty' art. And the foregone conclusion of him asking for a job hasn't even happened by the end of it. Consolidate and get right to it instead of making the audience hold your hand and wander slowly down this path with you when they already know what's at the end.
After it picks up it's obvious you've worked in a restaurant before (me too) and it gives it that real touch where you are actually coming at this from an experience not everyone has had. These little plots are at the same time absurd, and so real.
Good luck op I really enjoyed these
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lmfao, kinda gives that vibe, huh?
Overall, really charming comic. Keep em coming! Maybe make a tumblr to archive them??
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This is some good stuff man, keep goin! The art really goes with the story too
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http://the-arthman.tumblr.com/
I post the other comic and artwork here too
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Good. Hope to see the full version some day.
Is there a reason why the bearded owner person is so angry. It's not a bad thing, I'm just curious.