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Reversed Gender Roles Collection

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Hey everyone, sorry it took so long, but I'm finally back, and I can start translating again. Title is "Teisou Gyakuten Goudou", or "Reversed Gender Roles Collection"
There are five stories by different artists (including Amahara), all with the same basic premise, although only the first one by Rebis is more than 10 pages.
The raws start with a couple title pages, a single blank white page, and the first four pages of WoRGR to introduce the setting. I'm going to skip all that and start with the preface from Rebis.
Please note that there's a lot of text this time, so it's probably going to go pretty slow

If you haven't seen the last thread, please be aware that this is a rough translation at best. There are plenty of things I don't understand, even if I understand it I can't always translate it cleanly, so I'll sometimes be writing things like alternate translations and context as well.
Also nobody said anything last time so I figure it's fine, but if you'd like me to change my formatting or anything like that, please let me know.

Link to raws:
https://hitomi.la/galleries/942215.html

Previous thread (World of Reversed Gender Roles):
>>4392822
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Also, before I start, if the anons who were helping out last time could drop a comment or something, that would be great.

>>4462597
Feel free to take as long as you'd like, but it would be nice to know if you're still working or if something has come up and you've dropped it.

>>4465839
If you don't want to wait for the translation checking and want to move ahead, let me know if there's anything I can do to help. I'm sure we can figure something out.
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First paragraph:
"Thank you for picking up 'Reversed Gender Roles Collection'. Writers who enjoyed Amahara Empire's doujin comic 'World of Reversed Gender Roles' have gathered to make this tribute magazine. Even Amahara-san himself has contributed a brand new short story!"

Second paragraph:
"It's a world where boys and girls switched sex drive and gender roles, and girls are going crazy over wanting to have sex... That's the kind of concept we tried to follow. You can see different takes on the 'Reversed Gender Roles' world. Please enjoy it!"

"Circle 'Arsenothelus' - Rebis"

"Table of Contents:"
"Rebis"
"Takatsu Keita"
"Sasaki Maru"
"Isaki"
"Amahara"
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First panel box: "I don't know when it happened, but somehow, I seem to have been transported into a parallel world."

Second panel first box: "In this world, the sex drive and gender roles of boys and girls have been switched."
Second panel second box: "It's almost like an H-doujin I bought... but it's a little different." (The book says "World of Reversed Gender Roles", and it's obviously supposed to be the cover page for the first chapter. That lampshading... xD)

Third panel box: "For instance, right now, these high school students talking on the train..." (High is blocked out. It confused me for a long time, but I THINK he doesn't want to indicate that they're under 18 years old.)
Third panel bubbly bubble: "Aah, I want to have sex! I want to be touched by a guy!"

Fourth panel top right bubble: "But a meaty girl like me will never be popular, and I can't even go to a whorehouse... all I can do is be slutty on the train" (Not sure about that last part... I guess she's saying she wants to be groped on the train, although in the original WoRGR Amahara just made the train gropers female going after the males)
Fourth panel top middle bubble: "You'll be arrested!"
Fourth panel top left bubble: "That's definitely not allowed!"
Fourth panel middle right text: "The girls in the world are almost all unusually well-developed" (As in, their boobs. But of course you can see that)
Fourth panel bottom right text: "Haah... I wish there were a molester like in an H-manga..." (A horny molester oji-san)
Fourth panel bottom middle text: "In real life, there's no way there would be a perverted guy who would want to touch a girl's body!"
Fourth panel left middle text: "...and it seems like those voluptuous bodies aren't considered sexually attractive."

Bottom left text: "Ok... here I go..."
Bottom left yellow SFX: the sound of getting up (out of his seat)
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First panel 8 speech bubbles, going top to bottom then right to left: "Eh!?", "Hya <3", "Ah <3", "Ah..!?", "!?", "Mmh... <3", "Ah... <3", "Ah <3"
First panel SFX: Top purple is the sound of shivering/jolting, the others are the sound of squishy groping

Second panel left two bubbles: "Eh" and "Ah <3"
Second panel middle speech bubble: "Hey... What...? Eh?" (She addresses him as "onii-san". If you weren't aware, it's a normal way to address an older male who's too young to be called "oji-san")
Second panel bottom red bubble: "Nyah <3"
Second panel blue SFX: groping
Second panel big left bubbles: "Be-... be quiet you two. You're really sexy and cute. I want to have sex with young girls like you."

Third panel right thought text: "A molester!? He's a man slut! Is this reality!?"
Third panel left thought text: "An older guy... sexier than a classmate... He smells good... <3"

Last panel top right text: "Giant boobs... are the best" (huge like a cow)
Last panel top middle/left text: "Are-... are you a chubby-chaser? This is like... a dream... <3 Ah <3 Ahh <3 It... feels good... <3" ("chubby-chaser"/"fat fetishist"/etc. She also refers to him as "onii-san")
Last panel top/middle left text: "I love your faces too. You're so cute!" (Maybe expressions instead of faces)
Last panel bottom right 3 red bubbles: I'm not sure but I think it's supposed to show they're getting wet.
Last panel bottom left tiny bubble: "Uwa..."
Last panel bottom left regular sized bubble: "I'm so flattered... <3" (More literally, even if it's flattery she's still happy)
Last panel SFX: The red one on the left is the sound of fat/being fat. The others are groping.
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First panel bottom right bubble: "Even though you're still in high school, such plump ass...!! Such child bearing hips... " (High is blocked out again. He says their butts are perfect for making babies)
Second part of the same bubble: "You want to do it so badly even after being on your period" (Not sure about this. It sounds a little weird)
First panel bottom middle bubble: "Hyaah... Oh yes, I want to do it! I want to have sex everyday!"
First panel, first top left bubble (the rightmost of the three): "By the way, do you always wear T-back thongs?"
Second top left bubble (the middleish one): "I don't want to seem like a virgin during sex... I heard on the internet..." (If she doesn't wear it she will be embarassed)
Tiny last bubble: "I see..."
First panel SFX: the pink one all the way in the bottom left is the sound of fatness, the others are all groping/squishing

Second panel first bubble: "Even if you masturbate a lot, your virgin pussy is still so tight..." (Stick your finger in during masturbation. The virgin pussy of a high school girl, high is blocked out again.)
Second panel second bubble: "Uwah <3 Ah <3 A man's strong finger is awesome!" ("Awesome" is slurred a little bit, like "aweshum" or something)

Third panel first thought text: "He's touching my pussy... I wonder if he thinks it's dirty..."
Third panel second thought text: "It's so erotic... He's such a pervert... How wonderful <3"
The two bubbles are "It feels good" but broken in half, like "It feels... <3" "good <3"
Third panel SFX: shuddering/trembling

Fourth panel bubble: "The train is empty... You wanna fuck right here?"
SFX: hard throbbing penis
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Comment too long, so here's the first half:

First panel first bubble: "A man's real penis... It's even more erotic than an uncensored video... <3"
First panel second bubble: "Co-... could it be longer than sixteen centimeters?"
First panel first bottom bubbles: "I heard that men in Africa have sixteen centimeters on average. Black men are really something <3"
First panel last bubble: "You know some weird details..." (She knows details about weird things)
SFX: The four pseudo-bubbles are panting, "Haa"

Mini-panel first bubble: "F-... fuck me!"
Mini-panel thought bubble: "I'll never get a chance like this again... I have to take it!"
Mini-panel last bubble: "Ah! Miyuki!" (She's surprised and impressed at the same time)

Middle panel top middle thought bubble: "I've imagined it so many times while masturbating... I can finally have sex for real <3"
Middle panel topmost right bubble: "My pussy... it's not weird is it? I make sure to take care of it properly..." (Roughly. I dropped at least one phrase)
Bottom right bubble: "She's worried about strange things. I should compliment her."
To the left of that: "No, you have a wonderful pussy. It's really arousing" (Roughly. I dropped another phrase)
Tiny bubble right above that, with the heart: "I'm glad... <3"
Middle panel top left bubble: "Are-... are you going to wear a condom?" (Alternatively: "What about a condom?")
Middle panel middle left bubble: "A high school girl's pussy, it's a waste not to do it raw, don't you think?"
Middle panel bottom left bubble: "Hawaa... Such slutty words..." (Such a slutty statement, such a slut-like statement, etc.)
Middle panel SFX: The three at the top are "doki", the big red one at the bottom is the sound of her spreading her vagina (apparently there's a sound just for that), the pink one is oozing/wetness, and the orange one is plumpness
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>>4468116
And here's the second half:

Last panel far right red text: "AAAAAhhh! It's in! <3"
Last panel the rest of the first bubble: "It's so big... It feels good!... I did it... I'm not a virgin any more!... Having raw sex with a molester on the train... It's like a dream!" (Not a virgin/graduated from virginity. Molester/pervert)
Last panel, first of the two left bubbles" "Ooh... It's so tight... It's amazing..."
Last panel last bubble: "Miyuki-chan... It's so good! Even though you have such a young pussy, my dick fits perfectly...!!" (Roughly. I'm pretty sure he's talking about how well it fits his dick)
Last panel thought text:
"Is every girl in this world like this!? Even though she's only a high school girl... her pussy is so perfect!" (Like the previous line)
Last panel SFX: Sound of insertion and sex
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Also too long. First half:

First panel first bubble: "Having sex with young virgins like us..."
First panel second bubble: "You're such a lolicon <3" (Lolicon is also half blocked out, lmao.)
First panel second half of the second bubble: "Lolicon... eheheh <3... It's like an ero manga <3"
First panel SFX: There's a little bubble by her face that says "Ah!", the rest are fondling/thrusting/etc

Second panel normal bubble: "It's not that I'm a lolicon... Of course I would want to fuck such a sexy body!" (Lolicon half blocked out. Fuck/do criminal things to)
Second panel yellow text bubble: "Here! I'm gonna reach your womb!" ("Here"/"come on"/"let's go"/etc)
Top left red text bubbles: "Nhguu!?" and the first half of "aweshum" like before. Not sure how to write that without being confusing.
Bottom left red text bubble: "I'm cumming!!!"
Second panel SFX: The blue ones at the top are jolting/flinching, the ones at the bottom are thrusting

For the bottom half of the page, you're supposed to read the right half and then the left half.
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>>4468133
Second half:

Top right red text bubbles: "Aah <3" and "Onii-hyan <3" (As in, "onii-chan" but without closing her mouth)
Top middle bubble: "It's too erotic for words... It's really like an erotic fantasy! <3"
Top SFX: The little red bubbles in the middle are "nhya <3" and then "ahh <3" and "aaahh <3" and the others are the sound of fatness/plumpness
Bottom right bubble: "Aah... wow... so this is... raw sex..." (She's looking at raw sex)
Bottom middle bubble: "A giant dick is going in and out of my pussy!" (It's going in completely/entirely/cleanly/snugly. She also compares it to a black man again)
Top left thought bubble: "Real balls... I wanted to try sucking his dick... It's erotic and cute~ <3" (She wanted to try fellatio)
Middle left bubble: "Uwoh!? Even licking my balls...!! You really are perverts... Oh... Oooh..."
Bottom left black text bubble: "Uh... I-... I'm cumming..."
Bottom left pink text bubble: "Hyah! It's getting... even bigger inside me!?"
Bottom left SFX: twitching/throbbing
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First panel first bubble: "Are you going to cum inside!?"
Second half of same bubble: "It's not my fault if you make me pregnant!" (She's not responsible if they make a baby and she gives birth)
First panel last bubble: "It's fine! Even if we're not married... Bear my child!" (Maybe "even though" they're not married? He tells her to bear his child without taking responsibility, but it sounds weird to write the whole thing out. He's agreeing with her)
First panel SFX: sound of thrusting

Second panel first thought text: "Let it all out!" (Cum inside without taking responsibility)
Second panel second thought text: "He really is straight out of an ero manga!"
Second panel SFX: The little speech-bubble-SFX is licking/slurping, the pink ones are the sounds of kissing, and the ones at the bottom are thrusting

Third panel first two pink text bubbles: "Ah <3" and the first half of "aweshum" like before.
Third panel big pink text bubble: "Cumming! My first time..." (First sexual experience)
Third panel SFX: The blue ones on the left are shuddering, the others are cumming

Fourth panel right thought text: "We did it... <3 I wonder if I got pregnant... If I give birth, the whole class will be so jealous~ <3" (If she's the only one (in the class) to give birth)
Fourth panel left text: "And even with an ero onii-san... Yeah... But I want to have more sex...! I wonder what I should say..."
Fourth panel SFX: giggling ("ehehehe... <3")
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First panel first bubble: "I want to have sex too!!"
First panel second bubble: "I want to... do it again..." (wants to do it more)

All black panel first bubble: "Well, should we go to a hotel then?"
All black panel last bubble: "Right now!? Y-... Yes!"

Middle right panel first bubble: "If you look it up on your phone, it says we should use this mat here..." (Or maybe "here is the mat to use" or something. I'm not really sure)
Middle right panel top left bubble: "Oh! We can pretend like it's a soap!" (Soap: short for soapland: prostitute bathhouse thing. It's where Kuroki went at the start of her chapter)
Middle right panel bottom left bubble: "Soapland!?"

Middle left panel first bubble: "Thank you for selecting me today"
Middle left panel left thought bubble: "What am I doing..." ("What is this situation...")
Middle left panel SFX: Miyuki is going "Waaaah~ <3" and the other girl is going "Kyaa~ <3<3"

Last panel top right bubble: "Uhihi... A man's chest... It's the real thing... It's so hard and sexy <3"
Last panel top middle bubble: "Wow... you're already erect!? I thought men could only get aroused once every several days?" (After cumming, they lose their sex drive/libido for several days)
Last panel top right bubble: "I can get an erection if I just rest for a little bit"
Last panel top left thought text: "That must be because the men in this world have no sex drive..." (Sex drive is weak/thin)
Last panel bottom left bubble: "Amazing... You really are like a man out of some h manga... <3" (she says he is peerless/unequaled, and that he is really like a 2D guy)
SFX: There's a lot. The blue ones around his dick are the sound of fapping/jacking him off, the ones on his chest are the sounds of licking, and the orange ones to each side are the sounds of their boobs being squished. The others are all probably squishing and slimy wetness
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First half:

First panel first bubble: "Doing a double blowjob on a penis covered in lotion... Amazing... It's straight out of an adult video..." (Is there an english term for two girls doing a blowjob at the same time?)
First panel second bubble: ...I have no idea. Maybe something like she's saying the tip is plump?
First panel text box first paragraph: "From what I've seen in porn videos, in the soaps in this world, the female customers like to lie on the mat and lick the guy's dick."
First panel text box second paragraph: "They don't really mind being with other girls either. It seems sometimes two female customers go together." (They call it "two wheels" or something. She mentions that in the first bubble too but I left it out)
SFX: the purple ones are licking and sucking, the pink ones are them fondling his balls

Second panel first bubble: I don't know. She's telling him to do something... Judging by what happens next maybe she's telling him to open his butthole? She's also telling him not to be embarassed while doing it.
Second panel bottom right bubble: "Woah!"
Second panel top left bubble: "Waah~ <3 I can see your asshole!"
SFX: The green one is him falling over, the purple one is the lotion

Third panel bottom right bubble: "Ehehe... anal cunnilingus with so much lotion~ <3"
Third panel top left bubble: "A man's clean asshole... it's delicious... <3"
Third panel thought text: "Uwoh... Having beautiful high school girls licking my asshole like I've always dreamed... It's too erotic...!!"
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>>4468224
Second half:

Fourth panel first bubble: "Aahaa... do it even harder! An erect man is so erotic... I want to have my first sexual experience... But... I don't want to get off the mat... <3"
Fourth panel two bubbles in the bottom right: "Uu" and "The mat... is so slippery... It's amazing..." (slippery/slimey, and amazing/incredible)
Fourth panel top left bubble: "I want to have sex too! Don't hog him for yourself, Chinatsu!" (don't be so full of yourself)
SFX: The two bubble ones at the top are buttjob-y sounds I guess, the two purplish ones near the middle are the sound of slimey/slippery-ness, the blue ones near the bottom are squishy, I think, and the pink ones in the bubble at the bottom is the sound of licking

Last panel top bubble: "Nnhuu... Well then I'll have my first dick... Mmm... <3 It's... in!!"
Last panel bottom right bubble: "Oooh"
Last panel bottom left bubble: "It's so... tight...!!" (High school girl's pussy)
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Thanks Fyrst, You're truly a godsend.
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... just another "all girls are suddenly sluts and just want to fuck around" story. And as always with sub-par writers/drawers, the girls have all big breasts ...

Funny thing is, the previous story was NOT just that. In those chapters the very ROLES were reversed - males would be prostitutes, and females would be gropers. Males would be cautious about who to sleep with, females would feel way less restricted.

In fact, it felt like evolutionary adaptation of our culture: we do not try to have as many kids as possible, but as much fun as possible. And males have a disadvantage here because of the refractory thing, so they would be more cautious than women, who do not have this limit.

But this? This is an insult! The faggot behind the story should be ashamed of himself. There is no fucking though process whatsoever for me - the very THING why I read the original story. It's missing here.

Fuck you. No, not the translator, but the writer. Fuck you with your shit story and remove yourself from the gene pool.
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Great work OP. Would anyone know if rebis would have this translated on his patreon?
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>>4468348
I agree but I love Rebis too much to accept your insults for him. He should stick to futa worlds though.

Translator is based
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>>4468369
>Translator is based

>>4468133
>lmao

Nope. He's not based. Quite the contrary.
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>>4468348
tl;dr
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>>4468372
Wait, am I not supposed to use "lmao"? I've seen people be roasted on 4chan for using things like ^_^ but I've never heard of anyone complaining about "lmao" before.
Well, I'd like to think I'm a reasonable person, if it bothers you I can try to avoid it in the future.

>>4468348
Yeah, after Amahara's original work, the plot for this one was kind of a disappointment. It felt like the premise was just a cheap way to slide straight into the "super horny girls with mind-bogglingly huge tits" sex scenes. Which are hot, of course, but it feels a little uncreative.
Don't worry though, the fourth story looks like it really takes the gender-reversal to an interesting level, and the last one is by Amahara, which should be good.
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First half:

First panel top right bubble: "It's... inside!! This is... real sex... It feels so much better than masturbating!"
First panel middle right bubble: "Guoh! Amazing, it's sucking me in!"
First panel bottom right bubble: "Chinatsu-chan, are you in the swimming club? Kuuu... An athletic high school girl's pussy... It's the best...!"
First panel bottom middle bubble: "Yes, <3 but, you're so much sexier than the boys in my club! Aahhh... My clit... is vibrating... I-... I'm cumming!" (Roughly. I'm not sure about the sexy part, and I'm not sure about the vibrating part either.)
First panel top left text: "A threesome... I'm even kissing Miyuki too... but I don't really mind... in fact it only makes me more aroused <3" (I think she's using a nickname for Miyuki. Like "Miyu" or something, but I've never seen something like this spelled like that before)
First panel middle left text: "This is real sex... It's rapidly hitting my womb... My mind is... going blank..."
First panel SFX: The right pink bubble by Miyuki's face is the sound of kissing, the left pink bubble by Chinatsu's face is the sound of their tongues going around each other, the blue ones in the middle are groping her fat squishy boobs, the three rightmost red ones on the bottom are like squelching noises (probably) and the left red ones are thrusting/etc.
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>>4468899
Second half:

Second panel top right bubble: "I'm squeezing... It's coming out in my perverted womb! A soap's real service... impregnation!!" (She's saying she's being made to squeeze, like it feels so good that her pussy is tightening up. Or something. Soap referring to the prostitution setting they were talking about before)
Second panel bottom left bubble: "Ah! I'm cumming! Amazing... My insides are contracting... It's amazing!" (It's written so that you can tell she can't enunciate properly because she's so overcome. Or something like that)
SFX: The little pink text bubble is stroking/fondling (he's fingering Miyuki), and the giant multicolored ones are the sound of gushing liquid
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First panel right bubble: "Haa... haa... I've always dreamed... Of losing my virginity with a raw cock letting it out inside me... I'm so happy... I wonder if I got pregnant...?"
First panel big left bubble: "Don't worry Chinatsu-chan, even if you become pregnant I'll have sex with you as much as you want."
First panel smaller left bubble: "Hawaa... Even though you're a man, you're so perverted..." (perverted/lustful)
SFX: The blue ones are his penis twitching, the gray one is the sound of oozing

Second panel top right bubble: "W-... wow... even though this is the third time today, you can still get hard! You're so amazing... <3" (peerless again)
Second panel top left bubble: "Ah... The lotion is so slippery... my chest feels so good... even though we're both girls, I feel weird..." (weird in a good way)
Second panel bottom left bubble: "I like having a threesome with girls who are good friends" (probably. Maybe he just says "being with" instead of threesome. Not sure)
SFX: slimy, slippery, and jiggly

Third panel rightmost bubble: "Hmmm, are you into that kind of thing?" (And it says "fufufu" which is giggling at the bottom. She asks if he's a "fudanshi" which is obviously supposed to be the opposite of "fujoshi" for this world)
Second half of same bubble: "Ah... amazing... It's so hard... You're stirring up our boobs..."
Third panel leftmost bubble: "Ehehe, well then shall Miyuki and I give you fellatio by kissing the tip?" (Same nickname thing again, but I'm not confident enough to write it instead of her name)
Third panel SFX: Mostly the same as the last panel. The red/purple ones at the bottom are his dick going in and out of their boobs, and the left one in particular is the sound of fatness

Last panel big bubble: "It's become rigid again <3"
Last panel tiny bubble: "Wa <3" (or maybe like "Mwah", etc.)
SFX: The top one is kissing sound, I have no idea what the bottom two are. Maybe twitching?
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First panel two tiny bubbles in the top right: "Ah <3" and "Haa <3"
First panel upper right bubble: "I want to have more sex... please become our boyfriend!"
First panel lower right bubble: "Eh... but I want to have sex with lots of different girls if I can..."
First panel upper left bubble: "Hieeh... So slutty!" (such a slut)
First panel lower left bubble: "Ah!? My ass!? But that's... Uwah!! <3 Aahn!! <3"
SFX: thrusting/insertion, squelching/fondling

Second panel far right bubble: "Even just sex friends is ok... Contact me on LINE if you ever want to do it again..." (sex friends/friends with benefits/etc. LINE is an instant messaging app. It's also partially blocked out. (It looks like LIOE))
Second panel second bubble: "I just like high school girls' pussy and asshole... I'm not promising anything" (Not sure about this.)
Tiny bubble by Miyuki's head: "Hyah <3"
Red text bubble by Chinatsu's head: "Nnhaah! Anal... it's amazing... My anal virginity!!" (First time having anal so she's graduating from anal virginity)
Second panel far left bubble: "Uwooh, incredible... A high school girl's asshole is really eating me up!"
SFX: Same as before, I guess. The ones on the left are thrusting and the ones on the right are squelching
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First panel right bubbles: "Well then, you'll be our sex friend, no, our baby injector!"
First panel small colorful upper right bubbles: "Hii!?" and "My ass!?"
First panel top left bubble: "Alternating... it's incredible..."
First panel bottom left bubble: "Fill me up with your sperm!" (She mentions irresponsibility and giving birth again.)
SFX: The ones are the bottom are banging/pounding. The two above are slimy thrusting

Second panel giant right bubble: "Aaaaah!! Sperm!! Squeeze it out... Become a father! Fill me with babies! <3"
Second panel rightside blue text: "Uooh... horny high school girls are so good!!" (The pussy of high school girls who want to mate/breed is so good)
Second panel purple text bubble: "I'm cumming!!"
Second/third panels in between bubble: "Inside creampie is the best!!!"
Second/third panels in between blue text: "I can keep going after cumming... We can have continuous sex!" (He doesn't get limp/lose his erection after ejaculating.)

Third panel top right bubble: "Please do me too!"
Third panel top left bubble: "Definitely, definitely fertilize me!"
Third panel small purple middle left bubble: "Nnh <3"
Third panel bottom left bubble: Incoherent orgasming
Blue SFX: Gushing
Last cutout purple SFX: also gushing
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First panel top right thought bubble: "Even in the bath he keeps touching my ass and boobs... <3"
First panel bottom right thought bubble: "It's amazing... perverted guys are the best... It's like a dream..."
First panel top left thought bubble: "We did it... my first sexual experience, and we even became sex friends... We can have even more sex now..."
SFX: He's groping them under the water

Small panel in the middle text box: "After that we did it again on the bed and I came inside... We kept going right until the end" (Not sure about that)
SFX: I think the purple is oozing and the green is twitching

Large bottom panel top right text: "Hey... you said you wanted to have sex with lots of different girls... Maybe, is a gangbang OK too?"
Large bottom panel right text: "Gangbangs... Like my own harem... Since coming to this world, things just keep getting more and more exciting" (Roughly)
Large bottom panel right side small bubble: "Sure"
Large bottom panel middle bubble: "Hyaah... You're so erotic... I love it..."
Large bottom panel last bubble: "I'll tell everyone not to use contraceptives... Alright... This is the last one for today..."

Last panel bubble: "Mmmmh"
SFX: cumming
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First panel text box: "After that..." (or "later...")

Second panel first bubble: "Ehehe... Both of my parents are going on a trip for a while"
Second panel second bubble: "I called over all my unpopular friends in the class..." (Not sure why they have to be unpopular... maybe related to the 'giant boobs unpopularity' thing he mentioned in the very beginning)

Big middle panel top right bubble: "I can't believe Miyuki actually knows slutty guy who would let us gangbang him... Amazing!"
Big middle panel top middle bubble: "Ah... I'm so happy... Even an otaku like me... can lose her virginity..."
Big middle panel top left bubble: "Nnnh... Hurry... Do me too..."
Left green text: "This is this world's unpopular high school girls... They're all beautiful, horny girls that put gravure idols and AV actresses to shame!"
Right under that: "Alright! I'm going to make you all pregnant!"
To Miyuki's right: "Wonderful..."
To Miyuki's left: "Have sex with all of us..."
SFX: Top right is doki doki, the ones around the middle are fondling/thrusting, bottom left licking, bottom right groping.

Last panel right bubble: "Ah!! Can I write on your ass?"
Small text by her head: "To make it seem more like a real gangbang!"
Last panel middle bubble: "Eh!? Well, I guess..."
Far left text: "The end"
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That was the last page of Rebis's part, and also the last colored page. All the rest of the stories are in black and white

I'm not going to spend too much time on this page because it's not part of any of the stories, but more or less:
It's an afterword by Rebis. He's saying he was the organizer for this collaboration, and he says his manga is just a poor imitation of Amahara's original (being humble). He also says he filled it with things from his own style, like the fact that the values of boobs are reversed (the large boobed girls are unpopular) and the emphasis on cumming inside.
Below is a canceled draft page. He started drawing with the idea of reversing the value of clothing and drawing what gyaru clothing would be like, but there were too many attributes (maybe, too many things to consider?) and he decided to change his idea. In the end he's pleased with the way it turned out.
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>>4468898
It's simple: think about what you write. What is "lmao" supposed to SAY? Not asking what it MEANS, but what it SAYS? About you? That you are laughing your ass off? About such a stupid thing? Or that you just find it funny? Then a simple "lol", as an implied chuckle, would have sufficed.

I am that software guy from the previous thread, and the people that I am working with tend to be exact in their written language. It's an huge advantage to have time to think about what you want to write. Don't waste it, or you will out yourself as someone who does not know what they are doing.

>inb4 tl; dr: autism, the post
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>>4469005
>like the fact that the values of boobs are reversed (the large boobed girls are unpopular)

Oh god, he's just making it worse and worse. He's implying here that small boobed or flat-chested girls are not really popular, and that porn should cater the general idea that big breasts are awesome.

No, no, no, no, no. It's just a bad excuse to have another story about big-breast-sluts, so at least call it that and do not try to be humble and relativize what you have just done. Also: I don't know if this is due to Fyrst, but considering that you did a good job with the previous story I cannot help but noticing that the very dialog is as bland as the plot. And I mean this: the text does not say anything about the characters, it's just there to make the readers horny and consume space that the drawer does not have to fill then.

At least he is completely right about one thing: it is just a poor imitation of Amahara's original work. I have had acid trips that were more fulfilling than this.
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>>4469010
Haha, that's fair. I never thought about it like that.

>>4469024
>Oh god, he's just making it worse and worse. He's implying here that small boobed or flat-chested girls are not really popular, and that porn should cater the general idea that big breasts are awesome.
Ok, this part is most likely my fault. I feel like he probably wasn't trying to say something like that. Rebis might not be as good as Amahara, but maybe you're being a little too hard on him?
I agree that the dialogue is not great though.
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I had to resize this page because it was too large to post. I just halved the height and the width.
Full size:
https://la.hitomi.la/galleries/942215/25_gyakuten24.jpg

First text box: "One day, everybody except for me had their perception of gender swapped between boys and girls. Right from the start I began selling my body for sex." (I'm pretty sure that's what he's saying, and it makes the most sense in context anyway)
Second text box: "The P.E. teacher Gorizawa (nickname) found out and called me out" (Usually when someone has a nickname like that, the kids are comparing them to a gorilla (not a compliment))
Top right bubble: "I'm surprised a boring student like you would do something like this..."
Second bubble: "Being so uninhibited at school, you can be expelled for this, you know?"
SFX around her face: The one by the picture is the sound of her flapping the picture, the others are all "doki doki"s

Top small panel bubble: "Well... what can I do to have you stay quiet about this?"
Top small panel SFX: scratching his cheek

Middle small panel top bubble: "Well, you just have to do what I say for a little bit... You understand, don't you?"
Middle small panel bottom bubble: "Eh... eehhh... That would be troublesome... (Bad acting)" (I think the part in parenthesis is supposed to mean he's only pretending)

Bottom right panel bubble: "Haoooooh!!"

Bottom left panel top right bubble: "Wha-... What's so troublesome..."
Bottom left panel bottom left bubble: "Nnhi... Even though you're hitting my waist so hard... Dirty noises are coming out..."
Bottom left panel SFX: The big ones on the top are the sound of sliding in and out, the small ones to each side are wobbling/trembling, and the ones in the middle are like, wet humping I think
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>>4469057
>maybe you're being a little too hard on him?

Well, the comic was advertised to be in the same gender-reversed style as the original story, and now it can't live up to it.

It's a bit like Chrono Trigger and Chrono Cross: The first game was awesome, the second one might have been OK as a game if they hadn't made the connection to CT. But since CC was quite unlike CT in the main line, the game's reputation suffered as that.

And it's the same with this story. If it would have been an entirely unrelated piece it would have been a so-so one. But since this correlation was made it has to be measured by the expectation.
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Top third (not really a panel) far right bubbles: "Ahh! I'm cumming! Let it out inside me!"
Top third top middle bubble: "Cumming inside is bad, sensei! (Bad acting)" (Maybe I'm translating that wrong. It seems weird)
Top third far left bubble: "Shut up! Just do what I say!"
Top third SFX: The four on the right half are wobbling/jiggling, the three on the left half are banging/pounding

Second third far right bubble: "Inside <3"
Second third middlish bubbles: "Aaah... So... hot... Your semen is so hot <3"
Second third left two bubbles: "Ohoh <3" and "Hooh <3"
Second third SFX: The three around her face are shaking/trembling, and the others are cumming/spurting

Bottom right panel right bubble: "That's... that's good... It's not over, right...?"
Bottom right panel left bubble+the part that goes over: "Starting tomorrow you have to come whenever I call for you... and have raw sex..." (Sex without a condom)
Bottom right panel SFX: panting by her face "Haa" and oozing by her vagina

Bottom left panel bottom bubbles: "But... you said you'd let me off the hoook after this... (Bad acting)" and then "Well for now, should we fuck one more time?"
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This one was only two pages long.
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Sign: "Infirmiry", "Nurse's office", "Health room", etc.
Top rightmost bubble: "St-... stop this!"
Top right bubble: "I can't!! This is all your fault, sensei!"
Top middle bubble: "Your, your sexy body! You sexy school nurse!!"
Top left bubble: "Stop these false accusations!!"
Top two panels SFX: The smallish one by her arm in the middle is the sound of her grabbing him, the others are all the sound of falling over

Bottom right panel top right bubble: "The truth is, you really want to have naughty things done to you, right..!?"
Bottom right panel bottom left bubble: "Don't confuse reality and fantasy!"

Bottom left panel top right bubble: "Shut up and show me your chest!!"
Bottom left panel small bubble at the top: "Ah!?"
SFX: *bam*
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First panel right bubble: "Hauu!"
First panel left bubble: "Are you alright!?" (More literally: he says something like "that's it!?")
First panel SFX: blood is shooting out of her face, and the small SFX above his head is him twitching in surprise

Gray panel bubble: "Ah, ah... Well first we have to stop the bleeding"
SFX: rummaging around (looking for tissue or whatever)

Top left panel top right bubble: "I'm sorry..." (But with her nose clogged. Like "I'b dorry..." or something)
Top left panel bottom right bubble: "We were all alone and I just couldn't help myself..."
Top left panel top middle bubble: "Uh, no it's alright..."
Top left panel top left bubble: "That's just how puberty is for girls!!" (small text in the same bubble: "Pr-... probably")
Top left panel bottom left bubble: "I'm surprised you're so interested in me..." (He's surprised that he's the target)
SFX: In the girl's speech bubble she's sniffling, like when you're crying, but I'm not sure how that's supposed to work with tissue in her nostrils. The SFX above her head is the sound of being downhearted/dejected.

Bottom right panel top right 3 bubbles: "You're so clueless, sensei. All the girls feel the same way. You're always so sexy."
Bottom right panel top left bubble: "Especially during swimming class"
Bottom right panel bottom left bubble: "Uh, really?"
Small text by his head on the right: "Hey, no fooling around!"
Small text by his head on the top left: "At least remember how to wrap a bandage. Are you spoiled?" (Not sure if he's saying he's spoiling/pampering them, or if he's asking if they're spoiled by other people maybe?)
Small text above the girls in the middle: Not sure, swallowing?
Small text between them in the bottom left: She's figdeting nervously, and he's going "Eh..."

Bottom left upper panel bubbles: "But I still shouldn't do it to sensei. Aah, I wonder if I'm a pervert" (Roughly)

Bottom left lower panel bubbles: "Well, assaulting me isn't allowed, but..."
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OK, this is the third story that is complete and utter trash.

I am giving up on this thread. Whoever did those stories is apparently a simpleton who thinks that breasts is everything their retarded porn has to offer. I am not going to waste anymore time on this garbage. Good day to you, sirs.
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>>4468348
>But this? This is an insult!

Holy shit but you guys are such whiners, nothing is ever good enough and you have to whine and bitch about every little fucking thing, and the kick is that you are getting this shit for free as well.

Faggots like you dont deserve to read hentai.
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Top right panel right bubbles: "To say I want to embrace a young girl... well, I don't have any bad intentions" (Roughly)
Top right panel left bubble: "EH!?"
SFX: On the right, him taking off his glasses. On the left, a doki

Top left two panels right bubbles: "I'm not very experienced, and I can't go all the way, but at least I can help you let off your sexual desire"
The three bubbles on the left, top to bottom: "Eh!", "That's..." and "Aah!"
SFX: squeezing something soft/squishy

Bottom right panel top left bubble: "Lust is part of human nature, tt's not something you can be blamed for."
Bottom right panel top middle bubble: "Ahh! Uu!"
Bottom right panel middle left bubble: "Yaaahnn!"
SFX: shuddering around her face, groping over her boob and also the one at the very bottom, which I think is for this panel

Bottom left panel top right bubble+the part that goes into the earlier panel: "But... something like this... Letting a man taking the lead... it's embarassing!!" (She doesn't finish saying "embarassing", she only says the first half)
Bottom left panel top left bubble: "Well, I'll have you take responsibility" ("Well", in a kind of like, placating way)
Bottom left panel bottom left bubble: "Aayah!"
SFX: the upper ones are shuddering/twitching, the lower ones are the sound of fondling/etc.
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Top right bubble: "Sensei, so erotic with your mouth...!!" (The text on the edges of the bubble are "Ahh" and "C-...Cumming!!")
Top left bubble: "NnhhaaAAAaaAAh <3"
SFX: In the top right cut out is like, wet slurping maybe, the white ones near the bottom are her cumming, and all the other black ones are trembling/shuddering

Bottom middle tiny panel bubble: "Th-... Thank you, sensei..."

Bottom left panel right bubble: "But I'm a little shocked you would do something like that"
Bottom left panel top left bubble: "Eh!?"
Bottom left panel bottom left thought bubble: "Puberty is quite complicated..." (Complicated/difficult)
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>>4469127
End of the third story. I'll upload the last two tomorrow
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>>4469109
>nothing is ever good enough

I just pointed to something that is outstandingly good, yet you completely ignore that.

>Faggots like you dont deserve to read hentai.

Faggots like you don't deserve to live. Ab in das Konzentrationslager mit dir, da wirst du dann so dermaßen mit Zyklon-B vollgepumpt, dass dich selbst das Schwein, welches du bisher "Mutter" genannt hast, nicht wiedererkennt, du dreckiges degeneriertes Judenschwein.
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>>4468348
>In those chapters the very ROLES were reversed - males would be prostitutes, and females would be gropers. Males would be cautious about who to sleep with, females would feel way less restricted.

Feels like this is something that never gets explored even though the potential is so good. Well, either it never gets explored or I can't find it. Or both.
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>>4469135
>I just pointed to something that is outstandingly good, yet you completely ignore that.

Yes it was good because the original author had much more pages to work the story and work on the world-building, amahara worked on the original story over multiples issues, but Rebis has no such freedom, he has limited pages to work someone else plot idea.

Do you really think Rebis is going to work in 14 pages the story amahara worked in more than 100 pages? Of course the story Rebis wrote is going to suffer.
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>>4469199
>Rebis has no such freedom, he has limited pages to work someone else plot idea

He just spent pages worth of THREE stories with utter crap, and now you are telling me that he does not have that freedom.

One question: are you retarded, or do you act like it on purpose? If he would have put in at least a LITTLE bit of effort he could easily outdo Amahara.

But he doesn't do that. He just tells us: "Oh, now the genders are reversed!", and now he tells us: "Oh, all girls have big breasts", and now: "Oh, they all want to be fucked by some random guy!" This is all so lazy that I cannot believe no one else called him out on that. Taking a fucking SHIT takes more effort than that!
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Ignore the haters

Thank you for your work Fyrst
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>>4468348
the other stories seem fine

it's just the Rebis story that's off
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>>4469208
>If he would have put in at least a LITTLE bit of effort he could easily outdo Amahara.

In 14 pages? Even Amahara first story on this setting had 26 pages, for Rebis to surpass him both in storytelling with better world building and in better sex scenes with more variation he would need more than just 14 pages.

Even 14 pages are barely enough to set up a good story and interaction between characters without eating too much pages and leaving almost no room for the sex scenes, which are you know, the point of a porn doujin.
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>>4469240
I count 22 pages, not 14.
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>>4469240
>>4469245
And don't forget, Amahara had TWO girls in his first story. Cut away the second girl, cut the two other retarded stories, and put a little effort in your world. It's not that hard.
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Top right panel bubble: "You-... you were in the bath!?"
Top right panel text: "Uwaah!!"

Top left panel bubble: "Kyaaaa! Tripping by chance!!" (Tripping/falling)

Bottom right panel bubble: "I'm the only girl in a school full of boys, isn't this a harem!?!?"

Bottom left panel bubble: "Does that... really happen...?"
SFX: trembling/shaking

Title at the bottom: "Classic Ero Manga Developments In The World Of Reversed Gender Roles" (Literally "Template Ero Manga". Possibly "Development" should be singular instead of plural)
Right underneath that: "Isaki" (Author's name, in case you missed it at the beginning)
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First panel right bubble: "I want to have handsome men suddenly intrude on my life one day!! Even a robot butler would be fine!! An alien or a time traveler or anything!!" (She wants it to happen to her too, since it happens to all the MC's in her anime)
First panel left bubble: "If he's handsome, has short black hair, macho, kind, cooks, is a virgin, has a large dick, a little perverted, and watches anime with me, then nothing else matters!!!" (I think that's supposed to be a joke. Like, she phrases it like she's not asking for much but she's actually asking for a lot)
SFX: Top is yelling "AAAAAA" bottom is slamming her hands on the table

Second panel right bubble: Doorbell, ("Ding Dong")
Second panel left bubble: "Who could be interrupting my evening anime time..." (Evening drink+anime time)
SFX: "Hmph" like an annoyed grunt or something

Third panel right bubble: "Ah, maybe it's Amazon..." (I'm pretty sure that's what she's saying...)
Third panel left bubble: "Yes, coming..."

Fourth panel upper bubble: "Excuse me, I live next door..."
Fourth panel lower bubble: "I made too much stew..." ("Nikujaga," meat and potato stew. He wants to share some with her so that it doesn't go to waste.)
SFX: The sound of his muscles bulging in his tight shirt :)

Last panel upper text: "A young, handsome, short black haired guy with large pecs who cooks and seems like a virgin..."
Last panel lower text: "IT'S HAPPENING"
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First panel thought text: "I can't let him get away!!"
First panel bubbles: "Oh my, how kind! I'd like to thank you, please come in and wait just a moment <3" (Alternatively: "Oh my, thank you very much! I'd like to show my gratitude, please come in and wait just a moment <3")
SFX: The sound of smiling

Second panel bubble: "Well, alright then" ("I'll do as you say"/"I'll take advantage of your words")
Second panel thought text: "Yessssssss!!!"

Third panel top right bubble: "AH!"
Third panel right thought text: "Oh crap"
Third panel left thought text: "I left all my ero stuff all over!!!"

Fourth panel top right bubble: "I-... I'm sorry!!"
Fourhth panel bottom left thought text: "Augh, it's all over...!!"

Fifth panel top right bubble: "Oh no, w-... well, you are a woman after all"
Fifth panel top left bubble: "Of course you're interested in that p-... perverted stuff..."
Fifth panel bottom left bubble: "D-... don't worry about it..."
SFX: the sound of blushing
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First panel right thought text: "Is this an ero manga!?!?" (yes)
First panel middle bubble: "Here you go!"
First panel left thought text: "He came into my house, so sex is OK isn't it? It's OK right? Yeah, it's definitely OK!"

Second panel upper bubble: "Cooking must be your specialty <3"
Second panel lower bubble: "Uh, no, that is..."
Second panel upper thought text: "He's wearing such revealing, slutty clothes... No matter how you look at it, he's tempting me right?"
Second panel lower thought text: "Uwah, so defenseless... <3"
SFX: The big white ones are the sound of touching, the smaller black ones are the sound of stroking/running her hand along his leg

Third panel thought text: "His thighs are amazingly muscular <3" (Muscular/plump)
SFX: more touching

Fourth panel bubble: "Ah!"
SFX: the one on the left is touching, the small one on the left is him twitching in surprise

Fifth panel bubble: "I-... I don't..."
SFX: sparkle (her eyes lighting up)

Last panel left bubble: "This is what you really came for isn't it!?" (More literally: His last line was implying that he didn't come to have sex, and she's saying she doesn't believe him because he came into the house)
The bubble right underneath that: "Wah!"
SFX: knocking over
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First panel right thought bubbles: "All my past boyfriends didn't want to have sex so we broke up pretty quickly. Since then it's been about two years since my last boyfriend..."
First panel left thought bubble: "It's been so long since I've had sex..."
Two bubbles in the bottom left corner: "Ah" "Ah"
SFX: noisily slurping/sucking

Second panel bottom left bubble: "P-... please stop..."
SFX: The top and bottom ones are panting "Haa" and the two in the middle are shaking/trembling

Third panel right bubble: "Even if you're saying that, you were really expecting this, weren't you?"
Third panel middle bubble: "Look how hard your cock is already"
Third panel two left bubbles: "Uu..." and "No..."
Third panel left thought bubble: "Uwaah... I sound like I'm saying stuff straight out of an ero manga..."
SFX: The two by her face are panting "Haa" and the two by his dick are twitching

Fourth panel bubble: "And a condom..."

Last panel top right bubbles: "Alright, we're ready to have sex!"
Last panel bototm left bubbles: "Ah" and then "No, stop"
SFX: panting by her face, the black one at the bottom is the sound of his dick kissing her pussy
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First panel right bubble: "Ah, it's been so long since I had a dick..."
First panel left bubbles: "Rape <3... Is this rape? We're in missionary position so it's consentual right?" (Not sure about this. Sounds weird, and she's using a strange character, although I think it's just a pun on '姦')
SFX: the small bubbles on the left and right are "AAH!" and "Aah!?", the big one in the middle is wet sexing noise, and the ones at the top are shivering/twitching

Second panel bubble: "Aah... It feels so good... <3"
SFX: The top ones are banging/pounding, the small ones by her face are panting, and the small bubbles at the bottom are "Ah" "Ah"

Third panel three bubbles: "N-..." "No..." "Uuuu <3"
SFX: the one in the bottom left is shivering/twitching, and the others are panting

Last panel top right bubble: "How cute... Is this your first time having sex?"
Last panel top middle bubble: "Y-... yes..."
Last panel bottom left bubble: "Really feeling it on your first time, you're quite talented <3" (I think she means him really feeling it, but it's possible she means he's talented to make her really feel it on his first time)
SFX: the white one is squeezing, the two black ones are kissing
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First panel top right thought bubble: "So inexperienced..."
First panel left thought bubble: "How cute..."
SFX: She's licking his ear, he's panting. The ones above his head are shuddering/trembling

Second panel right bubbles: "Something... something is coming..."
Second panel left bubble: "Ah, are you going to cum?"
Second panel small text on the left: "On your first time, amazing"
SFX: More trembling

Third panel right bubble: "Go ahead and cum"
Third panel left bubble: "I'll have you keep going until I'm satisfied <3"
SFX: In the top left corner he's going "Aah!", the big ones in the middle are rubbing

Fourth panel top bubble: "I'll use medicine or drugs, or even a cock ring!"
Fourth panel bottom bubble: "We won't stop fucking!"
SFX: panting

Last panel top bubble: "I-... I'll break...!"
Last panel middle bubbles: "That's fine by me! Go on and cum! Cum! Cum like crazy!!" (Go crazy cumming)
SFX: Around her face is panting, small bubbles in the bottom right "Aah Aaah", and the big white ones are vigorous humping
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Top right panel SFX: shooting out

Top left panel small top right bubble: "Mmm"
Top left panel top left bubble: "You're trembling... I can tell the condom is filling up. Congratulations on your first ejaculation!" (The condom is expanding with semen)
Second part of same bubble: "Don't worry, the condom is still there, though <3"
SFX: The bubbles on the bottom left and right are more "AAh" "Aaaaaaah". The giant SFX in the middle is gushing liquid, and the others are all various types of trembling/shuddering

Third panel top right bubble: "What I'm saying is, people who say they want to associate with gay couples should go die." (Not sure. She says "bara" (as in, yaoi) but I don't know if that's supposed to mean something different in this world.)
Third panel top left bubble: "Eh...? Aren't girls so much better than boys? Pussy is the best, you know. Don't you want to try it?"
Third panel bottom left bubble: "I'm going to fucking kill you"

Fourth panel top right bubble: "I've always wanted to try raping boys who act like girls to check their gender and going 'Oh, you really were a boy,' though" (Not sure about this either)
Fourth panel left bubble: "Hey, don't be silent this whole time, whose side are you on?"
SFX: pissed off

Last panel top right bubble: "Well, everybody's different, right? Or more like, it doesn't matter to me"
Last panel top left bubles: "Hey, do you have a boyfriend!? So obvious!"
Bubble near the bottom on the right: "He's in college"
Bubble near the bottom on the left: "UWaa"
SFX: She's smirking
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Title: "Reversed Gender Roles Masturbation"
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First panel right bubble: "No, st-... stop..."
First panel middle bubble: "Aaah... I... don't want this"
First panel top left bubble: "Saying that with such a rigid cock, you really want to be abused don't you, you perverted boy" (Abused/naughty things done to)
First panel bottom left bubble: "No.. Ah..."
SFX: sound of fapping around his dick, sound of struggling/resisting around his head

Second panel top bubble: "I'm inserting it now"
Second panel bottom bubble: "St-... stop! Anything but that..."
SFX: Panting around Kawashima's head, sound of her masturbating around where she's masturbating

Third panel top bubble: "It's going in raw, doesn't it feel good?"
Third panel middle bubble: "No!"
Third panel bottom bubble: "Aaah!"
SFX: sound of insertion

Last panel right bubble: "Hey, you gotta be kidding me!"
Last panel left bubble: "That's gross! All I can see is a woman's body and ass! The composition sucks!"
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The first panel, going top to bottom, then right to left:
Big one: "Come on, you're so rigid, fufufu. So hard, so young..."
Small one: "Uu..."
Small one: "Aah..."
Big one: "Ah, so hot... it's reaching all the way inside to my womb..."
Medium one: "Aaahn, Ahn Ahn"
Medium one: "Ahaaa... mm..."
Small one: "Aaaaaaahn"
Kawashima's giant bubble: "This shitty actress is so annoying and talks too much! The lines are unnatural and gross and monotonic! And she's breathing too loudly! Just shut up already!"
Last one: "Aaaahn"
SFX: Panting around Kawashima's face, "Aaaahn Aaaahn" coming out of the TV, "Beep beep" button pressing from the remote, the smaller two on the bottom left are the bed creaking, and the bigger three around her legs are schlicking noises of her masturbating

Second panel bubble: "Packing tape-fixed-Puccho!!!!" (Puccho was mentioned in WoRGR ch 1. It's a candy that comes in a container that looks a lot like a dildo)
Second panel text: "The girls of this world are so resourceful!!" (resourceful/knowledgeable)

Third panel right thought bubble: "Ah... but I think I'm going to cum soon..."
Third panel left thought bubble: "Climax... I need to skip to the climax scene..." (Climax/finish)
SFX: Like before, panting and beeping
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First panel top right bubble: "Ah... No... I'm about to cum!"
First panel top middle bubble: "Please stop... I can't cum inside..." (He doesn't want to cum inside)
First panel top left bubbles: "Fufufu, no way, let it all flow into my womb"
First panel left middle bubbles: "Ah... I'm cumming... I'm.... cuming... cum-..."
SFX: Lots of panting, bottom right is her masturbating some more

Second panel top right bubble: "Haahn"
Second panel top left bubble: "Uuu!"
Second panel middle bubble: "Ugeh!"
SFX: Both of them are trembling/shuddering, although for different reasons obviously

Third panel SFX: More trembling

Last panel right bubble: "YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING MEEEE!!!!"
Last panel left bubbles: "Why would they show a close-up of the girl's face at the climax!!! Aaah, give me a break! I can't cum if I'm looking at gross stuff!"
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First panel right bubble: "Ah... I give up..." (Doesn't want to keep going anymore)
First panel left bubble: "What a crappy video..." (Porn video was a failure)
First panel SFX: Falling over

Last panel bubble: "I'll masturbate to a different video to get my mind off of it!" (Cleanse her palate)
Last panel upper text box: "She doesn't have a limit so she can recover faster than boys"
Last panel bottom left text box: "End"
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Afterword by Amahara:
"I'm grateful for having been invited to do this 'World of Reversed Gender Roles' joint anthology magazine project.
I never thought a joint magazine would come out based off of one of my own books.

The way 'World of Reversed Gender Roles' started was that, around november 2013, there was a topic on Futaba about drawing ero situations and I drew a one page picture with the general idea.
In 2015, one of my friends was getting married in Tokyo, and I needed to come out with something quick to pay for the trip...
I thought the situation I drew so long ago would be fine, and it ended up strangely popular.
...It was planned to be a oneshot but somehow it became my defining work.
How did things turn out like this... there are still many things in this world I still don't understand."
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After this is an advertisement, the back cover, and then Rebis's story again in black and white

Thanks for reading, everybody.
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Thanks Fyrst. Though I gotta admit that I only read the Amahara part.
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Neat.
Thanks. I'm looking forward the release.
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>>4469759
>...It was planned to be a oneshot but somehow it became my defining work.
Really? I always thought of him as the time stop rape guy. I was surprised when this one came out.
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Anyway, How's the scanlation progress of Reversed Gender Roles?

If anybody share the textless, cleaned up version I'd be greatly appreciated.
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Awesome work man
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Honestly, only the two last ones were any good. The three first ones are all basically just girls being really horny and that's it. Nothing reversed about it at all.

The guy leglocking in the 4th one was brilliant.

Appreciate the translations though.
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