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So I came up with this idea while being in the Draw T/hread for a while, I think this can be useful for us writers and also great to share with everyone.

You ask an ero story starring the girl/girls you would like to appear with some pics to help the writer think about it, the main fetishes starring in your story, and finally an optional pseudonym if you want to star in your own story.

PLEASE READ THE RULES:
1. Requests must satisfy general /h/ rules.
2. As you can guess, this thread can require a lot of patience, please make sure you are one of those people that society calls patients.
3. Word number set to be around 700-2000 words or so, not that few, not that much.
4. Don't ask for sequels if your writer doesn't want to do it.
5. Please request once till your request is done. This will help the natural order in the thread.
6. Be grateful and thank your writingfriend for writing and take your story, this is a task not everyone can fulfill.
7. Mention full name, personality traits and series of your girl/s to help your writingfriend.
8. Ignore shitposters that complain about not getting their requests or complaining about anything that doesn't suit this thread.
9. Lastly, this is not a fanfiction page so don't crossover series that don't look alike in anything.
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>>4455319
I'll take a request for you guys, if I like your idea I'll write something. Go wild.
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>>4455319
/d/ has a similar thread: >>>/d/7131268
It's not limited to /d/ fetishes, but I'm sure many would appreciate a thread without them, at least without the more extreme ones.

You could use it for reference (the story list and request list are quite useful), and maybe invite writers from there.

My request is anything about any human girl getting naked and somehow turning into a horny catgirl, wolfgirl, foxgirl, etc.
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I'd like to request a story starring Daidouji from Senran Kagura. Something about her being mind broken into a total slut. Anal, Oral (including her being enticed by rubbing a hard cock all over her face) and maybe the corrupter enjoying an abjob from her.
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>>4455415
Didn't know that thread existed but yeah, I think I'll just let people there know that this thread exist and if they want to migrate from time to time.

Btw, don't you want any more things in your story? It's pretty simple
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>>4455319
Does /h/ even have writefags? I thought they all left ages ago.
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>>4455509
Going by OP pic, let's say a princess or noblewoman has her alchemist make her a "catgirl in heat" potion and then sneaks around naked at night to rape townsfolk and/or peasants.

It was supposed to be a love potion to make her more attractive to her husband or whatever man she's into, but she's impatient and takes it before it's ready.
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>>4455319
I'd be willing to write some stuff as well, so if you have any requests you want written, I'll see if it lights up my muse.
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>>4455562
Ok, I'll take it.
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>>4456127
Looking forward to it, thanks.
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>>4455319
Seems interesting, I would love to help, but my english is not that good.
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>>4455319
>please make sure you are one of those people that society calls patients.

>Implying society doesn't see every single one of us on here as bat shit insane.

OP do you have any resources on learning to write smut? I've got no idea where to start learning this shit.
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>>4458880
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit
Has Guides and Tips.
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As I am a regular requester on the draw threads, I've always felt like I should pay it forward. My drawing sucks more than some of the girls on this section of the forums. While I know I'm somewhat decent with creative writing, and ERP'd before, perhaps I can do something along the lines of writing smut. I'll just need things to be specific and easier for someone to get their foot in the water.
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>>4458889
>>4458880

My #1 tip is to not be scurred. The only way to get better is to practice, and people can jack it to anything, even animals and spiders.
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>>4458891
You have a point. The only thing I'm afraid of is just bad writing in my part. (Also, is it dumb that I use a name? I think it would be easier to tell who does and delivers a request.)
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>>4458904
>The only thing I'm afraid of is just bad writing in my part.

Don't worry about it. Write something, ask for feedback and see what you can improve from there. You'll see you are often your own harshest critic.
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Would like a femdom story starring Syaro from Gochiusa with anal, butt focus and leg/feet work in this outfit with me.

She's usually embarassed in this topic, but I'd like her to get more confident about herself and be more like that femdom thought you want to write.

First half of this doujin would be a good reference: https://nhentai.net/g/164104/
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>>4459010
more references, thank you if you are taking my request.
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>>4455562
I could have a go at this. Do you insist on the sex being femdom? I cant write femdom for shit, which is why I'm asking.
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>>4458888
The discord invite is expired. Could I get a new one?
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>>4459024
Not really, I'm also fine with aggressively begging to be fucked, and maybe her scent and mating call could be powerful enough to have hypnotic properties too.

>>4459101
Ask them if they still have one.
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>>4459424
Hey, I'm the one who first picked your story. Well, I was gonna start tomorrow (I had some issues here) so I'll let this writefag do this I suppose ^^
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>>4459436
No, multiple takes on the same idea are welcome, especially while we're so short on requests. (Unless you're not feeling it so much anymore which I would completely understand)
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>>4459424
Ok, I'll give it a go. I've got a thing for fluffy tails so this request is a real treat. I'll get it done by the end of the week.
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>>4459101
Sorry I misread, the current discord is always in the /d/ thread: >>>/d/7131268
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>>4455319
Requesting a story with Olga from Asura's Wrath.
Personality: she's a bitch (ruthless, determined, and overzealous) to her underlings and enemies, but total submissive to guys she loves.
The story should be about her dominating a servant (the MC, Pseudonym: Zuzu) in order to increase her power (yes, she get's her power from her own Lust), but as the story goes own she slowly submits to the servant and wants to be his servant at the end. It can be as long as you want. titjobs, handjobs and blowjobs are all diamond tier, ass slapping (on the girl) and playing with tits are also pretty good. Just avoid the assholes and body fluids like urin (something like sweat is okay). I'll thank any anon, who wants to do this, already
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>>4459455
Yeah, I noticed our... lack of requests... I don't quite think I can take on some of them. If sometime come along a simpler one, I can be all over that. I just don't want to go head-first into some complicated setup.
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>>4459997
I'm sure the requests will pick up once some of them actually get done. If you're up for getting started with something really simple, I could offer.
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>>4459455
Okay, I'm taking it too then!
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>>4458888
thanks
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>>4460056
Apparently my internet ate my post. You can feel free to request! It will give me something to do...
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In case this is of interest to any writers here, we're doing a writing contest over at the Fakku forums for the month of December.

If anyone would like to participate, you can win digital/physical books and/or subscriptions for placing 1st/2nd in judging or public polling, or equal value at other retailers if you don't like Fakku.

The theme is sci-fi/fantasy, 5000 word limit, poetry and prose welcome, erotic or non, and the contest will end on New Years day.

Sorry if this is too strong a plug, but we're really just trying to spark creative writing from people, and we'd love to see some quality entries.

You can find out more here: https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-writing-contest-2016
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>>4460664
Maybe you could give it a look at my request?

>>4455470
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>>4460882
I mean... I know I've asked for people to request something. But I kinda don't want to do that. I've never been a huge fan of mind breaking... At all. If it comes down to it and that's the only one, I guess I'll have to do it.

Sorry if I sound like a total jerk it's not supposed to come off that way, it's more like, it's not my taste, but I'll do it...
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>>4460958
You vanillafags are so delicate. If you don't want to do it then don't do it, honestly.
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>>4460964
Delicate you say? Whatever dude. I'm assuming you're the one with the request, I might as well do it. It hopefully will attract people to the thread anyway.
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>>4460958
OR here, ah, don't worry about it. Is fine if you don't want to add mind break, I'd be happy with anything you'd like to write with Dai.

[spoiler]Hopefully with lots of anal tho[/spoiler]
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>>4461267
Now then, do you want the slow breaking of her mind and have her turn into a slut over time? or just already have her be a complete slut and write about that?
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>>4461450
The former please.
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>>4455319
Looking for those delicious Wicke Fics that were in a pastebin a while back.
Had fics like Wicke and the Boys, and a lesbian train one as well.
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Does anyone write with the idea of having a doujin/comic adaption?
I know an artist lookin for shit to do.
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>>4455706
H-hand holding please?
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If anyone wants to post a picture they got a thing for, I'll spend five minutes or so doing my business on it. Did it in the /d/ thread last night and it was kinda fun, so why not.

Restrictions: what's in the picture is in the picture. If it isn't in frame, it doesn't exist.
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>>4465476
How about this one?
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>>4465476
Should I give you name & series for helping you writing her personality or you don't care?
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>>4465488
Alright, Tuesday morning, let's start it off with some smut. Believe it or not the thing about this one that's cheesing me off the most is the clothing, since I'm not entirely sure how to place it.


My heart skipped a beat as her blouse split, spilling her breasts into full view of those around her. Even now defiance gleamed in her eyes.The heir to the Schweirz family name, probably one of the most powerful women in the country, and beyond that, simply a beautiful women-

"Alright. Begin." Without hesitatio, the man to her right reached out, grabbing a fistful of her hair and pulling her face against his stiffening cock. "Hope you're hungry, bitch." "Hey now! Is that any way to speak to your employer?" A short ring of laughter as her face was ground against the man's crotch, his cock eventually finding it's way inside her mouth. "Sorry, ma'am. Please, suck this lowly servant's cock until I blow my load down your throat!" Another ring of laughter as he pulls her face closer, forcing a slight grimace as she began to gag on the sudden intrusion to her throat.

My mind raced. This couldn't last forever, right? Would there be repurcussions? Was this even real? Schweirz coughed as she managed to pull herself off of the man, a trail of spit and slime still connecting her to him. "You!" She barked, making eye contact with me. My heart froze for a moment. "What's with that look on your face? I'm ordering you to fuck my face - hesitation is unacceptable for a retainer of the Schweirz family!" Another ring of laughter as someone gave me a firm thump on the back. "You heard the lady. Get in there and show her your loyalty!"

I stepped forward as commanded and set a hand on either side of her head. Her mouth opened automatically as I pulled her towards my own erect cock. I placed her over my head, holding in a slight gasp as her tongue began to twist around me. There was something in her eyes, something lusty.

I pulled her down, hard.
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>>4465722
I mean, you could try. But I don't know your OC, I've never seen the series, I don't get the reference, and generally don't know my ass from a hole in the ground, so it may not help.

"C'mon, just relax already! I wanted to come to the beach to have fun, not to glower at everyone around us for hours." Her voice was bright and cheery, as always. It would be easy to forget her heritage, if it wasn't for the horns. There were a few stares from onlookers - mostly for sake of the shapeliness of her body. Demons had become unfortunately common of late. "I'm your diplomatic escort, not your boyfriend. I'm here to keep you out of trouble."

She sighed and stuck her tongue out. "Same thing! Whatever. Where does the Vatican find you guys, anyway?" She sighed and pulled a bottle of sunscreen from her travel bag, putting a few small squirts of it on her arms and rubbing it in. It struck me, sometimes, how human they seemed. Almost like ordinary people, although the Fathers were quick to remind me that people contained the same capacity for evil within them as well. Even so, 'Evil' isn't the word I would use, exactly. Selfish, stubborn, proud, probably - but it wasn't as if I didn't have family that matched her for any one of those traits. If you didn't know better-

"Is there a reason you're staring at me?" Her words broke my train of thought, as I realized I'd been watching her for a bit too long. I looked away as crimson crawled into my cheeks, pointedly ignoring her question. This was a job, and I wasn't about to let her goad me into enjoying it. "Hey."

I ignored her and scanned the beachgoers. "Hey. Give me a hand with this." I looked back down at her, and choked on my words for a moment. She had undone her top and leaned against her beach towel. "Get my back, would you?"

I openly grumbled as I sat down next to her, picking up the sunscreen she'd left to one side. Her skin was soft. Warm. Smooth.
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>>4465815
I almost have an urge to continue this one. Huh. I guess that's what I'm doing this for.
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>>4465819
OR, you're already doing a great job hope you finish it lewdly! If it's not that late it's okay to ask for some ass&back focus since I got a back fetish recently?

And if it's helpful, here you have: Her name is Kiyohime and she's only this lovely with the one she loves. She's somewhat elegant, nice, a bit possesive and can be very lewd for that person.
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>>4465860
Nah, I'm done. I find it fun to try and pull details from the image to build a story around, but not so much to try and push stuff into the picture. The paralysis of choice, I suppose. If everything's an option, I don't know where to go with it.

Also, the "her name is Kiyohime" stuff is exactly the reason I said 'post a picture and I'll verb all over it'. It's too specific. People in real life are big, complex things with lots of irregularities that seldom make sense if you take too long to think about it. Sorta like how I complain about getting penned in too much right after saying I like having my choices limited.

'course, if you want to post another image, go ahead.
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>>4466300
I'll take your word then.
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Oh boy am I ever in. I used to write in the joi threads, so I've got some experience. Request whatever, you can send it to my Tumblr too if you prefer. Tumblr is palmcaptionplanet.
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>>4467185

>>4455562
A couple writers were interested but it doesn't seem to have worked out. If it helps, here's a simple version that could fit in a picture. (There's none existing unfortunately.)

A horny naked princess or noble girl, fucking her alchemist over his lab table, chugs one of his potions which turns her into a catgirl.
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>>4455319
How do you git gud at writing this stuff?
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>>4467412
/d/ here, the answer is "hard work and determination".
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>>4467412
1) Don't write Ikea manuals. Sex isn't about tab A and slot B; it's about the texture, the heat, the weight.
2) Write a lot of bad smut. Look at what you wrote, try to figure out what made it bad, and stop doing that in the future.
3) Read. Get to know what gets other people going, even, and especially, if it's not something you find naturally arousing.Learn about people and you'll learn how to write them.

I'll get to >>4466824 tomorrow, it's midnight and I'm tired right now.
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>>4467185
How about the request I did for the thread? >>4455470
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>>4455319
Requesting a short story about Tsuyu Asui from My Hero Academia going on a cozy date with an OC of your making.
The OC can have whatever personality or appearance you want him to have, but they MUST have the power that you get from the link below and it must be used in the story at some point.
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Random
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>>4466824
I held back a groan. I could feel her feet sliding across my member, the occasional squelching sound followed by a giggle. I didn't even have a thing for feet, and she still had me rock hard.

I glanced up at the microphone, the source of my forced silence. Asuka was one of the top VAs in the Eroge industry, but was slightly... eccentric. I winced slightly as I felt her toes squeeze around the base of my shaft. She continued cooing, sweet words with someone else's name inside them. I bit down on another grunt as I felt myself rising to infinity. I began reaching up to try and pull her off, signal her that I was almost ready to cum- and then pulled my arms back, covering my face. No touching. She had been very specific, and I knew if I fucked this up I'd have to find another job. Again.

I bit down on a finger as I felt myself come, spraying who-knows-what in the sound studio. Her voice didn't miss a beat, but her feet paused for only a moment before starting up again. I hoped she would call a for a break, even if her reputation told me she wouldn't; we were only a third of the way into her script read for the day.
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>>4465804
OR here, that was a wonderful piece! thanks!
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>>4467792
So freaking nice! Thank you so much for taking it srsly! :D
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>>4467289
If you don't mind getting it a week late, I can still post it once I get the proofreading done. It's based on that earlier idea of a noble taking a potion, turning into a catgirl and then running off on a quest for cock.
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>>4468799
Not at all, still love to see it. Thanks.
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>>4468714
>>4468024
Tanks

If anyone else wants a picture narrated, post it up. I'll only give you ~200 some words instead of the usual thousand, but it's a shitty economy right now.
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>>4469055
Please.
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>>4468844
http://pastebin.com/MiY0gBQY
Here. It's a bit overlength but I'm a sucker for buildup. Hope you like it. I didn't name the characters, but it's essentially the girl in the OP pic.
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I intend to take some requests coming up, but for now I am going to post one of my own.

Something involving Nagato from Haruhi, who is basically emotionless through most of the show, enjoying sex 'in her own way.' I will leave the details to the author's discretion.

For those who may not be familiar with the show, she rarely speaks and when she does it tends to either be very direct or a long-winded scientific spiel.
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>>4469389
I do. Well worth the wait, and the length (especially necessary in fantasy stories for setting up the fantasy world). In fact I slightly wished for some conclusion afterwards, but don't worry about it.
A few minor errors, but still perfectly understandable.
Thanks again.
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Requesting storytime for this image. I don't know any more about the characters in it than you do (they're from a JP-only game) so let your imagination run wild. Emphasis on female POV is a plus but not a requirement.
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>>4472289
It's been a while since I wrote smut, but I enjoyed the gif and threw something together for you. Feel free to leave comments here or on the doc to point out mistakes that I made, I suspect there's still a few given that English isn't my first language.

With that said, I hope you'll enjoy it! :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2o1vmmydrzzkvmu/After%20Class%20Special%20v1.0.pdf?dl=0
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If anyone wants to request something involving an OC I'm up for it. A pic to go with the request helps, if at all possible.
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>>4472620
This is alright. It's a little weird that you signed your real name on it. It's somehow not quite my thing but I'm sure someone will like it.

Anyone else want to have a go?
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>>4474691
I'm sad to hear it's not your thing, and I hope that someone else will manage your request! And it's not my real name, just a random alias :)
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>>4467412
Back when I used to write a lot, I'd just think of the hottest things to say. Thought I only posted on /b/ so it might be trash writing.
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>>4469481
I'll try it
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>>4476031
Thank you, anon! I will look forward to it.

If anyone is looking for some smut, I have plenty of freetime tomorrow. I could whip something up for you.
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>>4469366
The Ranger and the Knight (post #1)

Sarah Vladamir stood before the many dark knights which she had lain to rest, not a drop having landed upon her flawless shimmering armor. To say that she did not appear like the other knights which were a part of her regimen would be an understatement, flawless pale white skin and long flowing blonde hair appearing as though it had been groomed from the very lap of luxury. Yet, there she stood upon the battlefield, a gorgeous Goddess of Death to any that would dare cross her path.

Though a few of the bodies that laid around her on this day were not put down by her alone. Some were stuck with arrows from a man hiding away in the bushes. The Ranger had come upon the scene, and though he rarely took sides in conflicts he knew nothing about, swore to protect the radiant beauty before him no matter what the cost.

Now she stood, breathing very evenly for a woman who had stared death in the face but a few moments before. She turned to her rescuer, whose plain face and features poked out from under the brush. Sarah merely smiled, laying her sword to rest upon the grassy ground below her.

“Typically, when a stranger crosses my path and is kind of enough to lend me a hand, I give some gold in return,” she said matter of factly, her voice laced with a youthful quality rarely found in a warrior. “Sadly, I have no other means of showing my gratitude… but to…”

She sighed contently, her smile growing wider as her hands came to her large breastplate. It only took her a few moments for her hands to smoothly and gently removed it from her person, allowing it to drop to the ground below. Before the Ranger were a pair of two large pillowy breasts, which had mere moments before been rubbing and smashing against the cold metal which Sarah had worn.
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>>4476767
The Ranger and the Knight (post #2)

Weary that he may be falling prey to some sort of diabolical trap, the Ranger’s lust well outweighed his common sense. She was, without a doubt, the most gorgeous woman he had ever laid eyes on. His cock hardened from within his brown torn pants as he approached, his eyes struggling to keep locked with hers instead of the two lovely bare breasts she had revealed.

When he stood before her, Sarah slowly brought her face close to his. Their lips were mere inches apart when she spoke under her breath. It was a wispy eager statement, one that brought a lustful spark to her eyes which the Ranger had never thought possible of one who mere moments before appeared so pure.

“I will relieve you of your burden,” she spoke. “It is the least I can do for someone who had helped me live to see another sunset.”

Her lips, smooth and sweet, pressed against his. At first, it was not unlike the kiss of two shy lovers as they feel around the possibilities of a first date. But Sarah was not a pure girl, as mere seconds after their first kiss was about to part, she lunged her tongue inside of the Ranger’s mouth. She moaned, a metal glove keeping his hand in place as her tongue ravished the inside of his mouth, all of Sarah’s pent up stress boiling over into one hungry kiss.

When their lips finally parted, she gave a satisfied peck upon his cheek. “Now…” Her lips came to his neck, giving it another flirty peck. “…let us see what we can do…” She trailed small kisses all the way down his body, from his chest to his belly all the way down to his-
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>>4476769
The Ranger and the Knight (post #3)

“Oh ho, you are so hard~” She gave the head of his cock a fleeting lick through the fabric of his pants. Rubbing her cheek against the organ she was soon to claim, Sarah’s large emerald eyes came up to that of the Ranger. “You must think me quite the lewd woman, for wanting to worship a cock like this…” She gave one long lick to the bulge, leaving a wet streak on the front of the Ranger’s pants. “… it has just been so long. And never with one so prominent.”

Taking both of her gloved hands, she pulled his pants down around his knees, revealing the already fully erect cock in all of its glory. She studied it for a moment with her eyes, then glanced down her bare breasts, then up to the cock. “I’ve never gotten to try this, but I’ve always wanted to. Have you, by chance, heard of paizuri?”

The knight brought her breasts up to the cock’s level, at first teasing it with her erect nipples as she spoke. “I read about it in one of my books. It is something which the women of the night offer as one of their services to troops returning home from war.”

Sarah’s breasts were large, nearly as big as her head. As she moved her hands around them, they jiggled ever so slightly with the touch. Once they wrapped around the Ranger’s cock, she could feel her heart hammering in her chest. The Ranger had never felt anything so soft… so smooth… so absolutely flawless rub up against him.

Having his cock properly sandwhiched between her boobs, Sarah continued to look up at her champion. She gave him one last playful wink, and then began bobbing her torso up and down. The way in which his cock slipped in and out of her chest was more gratification than any Ranger ever dreamed of receiving from a woman, let alone a knight of the Sisterhood.
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>>4476770
The Ranger and the Knight (End)

Sarah felt his cock between her breasts. Closing her eyes and imagining it deep inside of her, in the very places in which she had sworn an oath never to allow a man, Sarah could feel herself becoming overwhelmed with the sensation of the paizuri. She wanted nothing less than for her champion to cum all over her breasts. To shower her in all of the things that she had been told would lead her down the wrong path.

Tightening her hold upon the instruments of his pleasure, her breasts became a silky yet tight slide for the Ranger.

Her eyes opened, her lips parted ever so slightly as she gasped out to him.

“Please… it has been too long… you can feel it can’t you? You can feel how much I want this. How much I want you to cum all over my chest. For that forbidden seed to grace my skin, and for us to-“

The thrusts of her chest became needier. The motions of her body were quicker as she attempted to hold herself back from a lustful frenzy. Sarah wanted him to cum. Wanted him to cum so bad.

“-to fuck like wild animals free of conscience or rational thought. I am so tired… so tired of holding back… I want to feel it. I want to feel a cock inside of me for the first time in years. I want you~ I want you to cum all over me~ Cum inside of me!”

Biting her bottom lip, the bottom of her lids appeared to have a trace amount of moisture to them. Somehow, the euphoria of finally touching someone else had bordered on a spiritual experience.

“Cum! Cum for me, brave ranger~ Then fuck me like you have always wanted to fuck a woman. Leave no regrets~! Show me what I have been missing all these years… please… cuumm~”
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>>4476772

Hope this was satisfactory. I really quite enjoyed writing it, though it was a little more rushed than I would have liked.

If there is anything someone wants me to write, lemme know!
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>>4476767
>>4476769
>>4476770
>>4476772
>>4476773
Not the OR but that was wodnerful. thank you so much for writing it!

Any chance you could give it a look at my request? >>4455470
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>>4455470

Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 1)

It had taken much time to capture Hazno Academy and its many students, but I was most pleased with the spoils that had come my way. A young woman with thick black hair and abs that most of my troops would only dream of obtaining. Her demeanor seemed cool, as though she had been preparing for her capture.

She sat before me, on the floor of my chamber, one of the many rewards a conquering well done.

Unzipping my pants, I allowed my cock to slide out before her. The girl’s eyes grew wide, before she went to spit upon the ground in fake disgust. It only took a matter of time. I knew that I could, in a matter of mere minutes, break even the strongest of women to my will.

Stepping closer to her, allowing my cock to slap the side of her cheek, I groaned happily. “If you dare to bite down, I will end your life right here and right now.”

It seemed as though she had accepted her fate. The battle that had ensued before I had claimed which of the girls would be mine to train had waged for hours. Her defenses had already been worn to the ground.

I slap my cock against her cheek one last time, before making a more brutal request. “Open your mouth.”

Ahh, the sight was quite lovely. While the gesture was done with reluctance, I could see that she had built up quite a bit of saliva for my cock.

“I appreciate that you are listening to your captor. It will make this all the more rewarding.”

The head of my cock slipped inside of her mouth, and immediately I was overwhelmed with pleasure. The softness of her tongue, the warmth as her saliva began to coat all around my thick hard cock, it was all top-rate. But more importantly, seeing the strength and fire leave from her eyes was the most satisfying of all.
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>>4477589

Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 2)

Deciding not to take it slow on her, there was no need for manners, I thrust my entire length deep inside her mouth and throat. I could hear her choke, her face a mixture of sheer terror. Her throat tightened hard around my head… it was the best fucking feeling. The spoils of battle were mine.

“I am going to make you into my humble servant,” I taunted her.

I began to thrust in and out of her throat, the moans of her protest only managing to make my cock harder.

“There is no way in which you can protest. If you wish to keep your life, you will learn to like it.”

I kept thrusting inside of this tight throat for quite sometime. Or at least, I did until I saw that there was a shift in her eyes. They had gone from scared, to pained, to something else altogether. The face was not something I was unfamiliar with in my conquests. It was what happens when a woman accepts her fate and begins to enjoy the ride.

“Oooh, Daidouji-chan, or you starting to thirst for my cock already?”

I pulled my member from her lips, watching as she gasped for breath. Watching her like this, just on the edge of pleasure and pain, I began to stroke myself.

Though all of the points on her body were worthy of an ogle, there was something unique about her abs. I had to meet a girl who was built like that yet retained such curvaceous and feminine features.

Pushing the girl back onto the hard metal ground which made up my chamber, I placed my wet cock upon her mid-riff. To say that her abs were rock hard would have been to do them an injustice. She cringed as I moved my cock against them, feeling one of the many rewards which her body had received for many years of training.

“All of that work to obtain this… for what, Daidouji-chan? For a man with more power than you could ever fathom to possess it? To use your trained ninja body against your will?”
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>>4477590
Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 3)

As I continued to thrust, the contours of her mid-riff bringing a completely new sensation to my cock, my lips met with hers. She squealed, but as soon as my tongue rubbed against hers, she cooled down. If I didn’t know any better, I would say that she was growing to like me.
As my lips and tongue partook of her mouth, my hips made their way down to her crotch. Moving my hands down to the seat of her pants, I ripped open a hole from which my cock could enter her. Finally breaking our kiss, I rub my nose against hers teasingly.

“I think you are going to really like this… my precious little ninja slut…”

The entry was one of the most delicious I had ever encountered from my spoils of battle. If I didn’t know any better, I would assume that she was already a slut before I had begun to train her. Daidouji-chan’s pussy was already wet for me, and it welcomed my cock like it was that of a lover.

I never thought it would be so easy. That determined face and all of those years of training were melting away right before me. The walls were closing in upon my cock, and I was not going to cum until she had completely shifted to my side.

“When you see my face, Daidouji-chan, you will think only of fucking. As my prize, you will wait in these chambers for me. You will prepare your body with your fingers for my entry, and when you pleasure yourself to get your insides all slippery and wet, you will only think of me.”

My thrusts became violent. I knew she could take it. The most important part of breaking a girl is understanding that it is not about making them suffer. It is about pushing their boundaries so far that they come to discover pleasure that they have never known before.

And this one, ooohh yeeesss, I was toying with her mind now. Eyes glazed, lips parted as she panted for breath… she was coming to know what real pleasure felt like in a man’s arms.
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>>4477593
Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 4)

Then, without warning, I saw her body tremble. The sweet moment of release. The moment when I know for certain, no matter who the girl, that I had broken through their defenses. She had cum right upon my cock.

“But dearest Daidouji-chan, this isn’t tight enough to please me. Not nearly tight enough!”
Pulling my cock from her pussy, she moaned out in complete and total pleasure.

It was as though she didn’t want me to leave, though she muttered under her breath. “Yousickfuck…”

My cock, having had two varieties of Daidouji-chan’s juices from two different holes, was now lined up with her ass. Breaking my strong hands to rip yet another hole for my entry, I stared into her eyes.

“There is no use in denying who you are, sweet girl. I will fuck you every single day until you realize just how much you love me. How much you love this cock…”

My head slips inside of her most private hole.

This entry was proving to be more difficult. I noted to myself that this was likely the first time she had ever had anything, even so little as a finger, insert of her ass. She gasped, and I saw the most delightful of sights. Her hand came down to the clit of her pussy, and she began to rub it with her fingers.
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>>4477596
Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 5)

This was completely without my asking. The mere feeling of my cock slowly entering her asshole was driving her over the edge.

“…you like the way this feels, don’t you?” I slid a bit more in, about a third of my cock now squeezing inside the tightest of holes. “You like feeling out of control for once in your life. To have someone loom over you and bring you pleasure. To not be making decisions or worrying about the future…”

I thrust the rest inside, which was not an easy feat.

But the face, oh dear gods, her face was worth the extra effort. She opened her mouth and cried “YES!” for me the moment my cock had completely entered her. Those fingers, those strong skilled fingers of hers, were rubbing her clit as though it would be the last orgasm she ever had.

“If you want me to keep thrusting, you are going to have to kiss me. Seal your doom as my servant wi-“

I was not even able to completely my sentence before Daidouji’s lips came crashing up against mine. There was no point in teasing her anymore. I thrust long and I thrust hard inside of her asshole, knowing that she would come into yet another climax soon.

It usually took more time than this. Though many of my group had come to know me as The Man of the Gifted Cock for how quickly I could make a woman subservient, Daidouji was already slathering her tongue around inside my mouth as though it were the most delicious thing in her entire world.

And oooh, her kisses were sweet. I was just on the verge of cumming myself, her ass proving to be the most delectable I had ever fucked.

Breaking our kiss proved more challenging, as her lips came back onto me as I attempted to separate. But I had to tell her. I had to tell her how good she was.

“Daidouji-chan, you are going to make me cum right into that tight ass of yours.” I bring a hand up to her cheek, stroking her face.
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>>4477599
Conquering Hanzo Academy (Part 6)

“I want you to cum with me. Show me how much you love your new cock. Your new master. …come on.... tell me who your, Master is.”

She whimpered, she moaned, she cried out. “You are my master,” she gasped out. “Please master, your cock. Your cock is…doing things… to me…”

That was enough for me. I could already feel it surging. I was right on the edge.

“Cum for me, my pet. Cum for your master~!”

Her quivering was stronger than the last. It was just as violent as my thrusts, her whole body seeming to quake as though it were possessed.

“I-I’m cumming... M-M-Maaaaster~!”

I sprayed my load inside of her ass as we came together in unison. The sight of all the ninja-ways which had been ingrained in who she was had been swept away.

I could see it in her eyes. I could see it in the way that her tongue lolled out from between her lips. I could feel it when those lips pressed against mine.

As I slipped my cock out from her, staring deeply and possessively into her eyes, I barked out my first command. “You will wait here. You will go to the closet as I decide what to do with the rest of your classmates, and you will choose which of master’s costumes you would wish to wear to bed tonight.”

I licked the side of her cheek like a hungry animal, tasting the sweat that had accumulated from our fuck. “Bring yourself to orgasm every half hour while I am away. Think only of me. Think of what I have done and what I will continue to do to you.”

I strode for the door, my back turned to her. I had left a sexy mess of a woman upon my floor, ready to be pillaged whenever my heart desired.

I stopped just before the door. “Oh… and your friends… I may have to break some of them in personally.” My bulge returned as I step outside my chamber. “It is good to be a Master.”
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>>4477404

Never played any of the games or know anything about the series, but I gave it a go. I don't usually write rapey plots, but this got a bit darker than I was expecting.

Hope you enjoy!

Are there any other takers?
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>>4477602
Maledom with an ojousama. Make it consensual and with cumming inside. Other than that, anything goes.
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>>4477602
OR here, that was absolutely wonderful. Much, much better than I expected. Thank you so much for this anon, you are the best.
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>>4476773
Shown up at my own game, ugh...

I didn't disappear though, I just came down with the fucking plague. Last night was the first time since my last post that I've actually slept through the night without waking up to a coughing fit or dry throat. I'll write some stuff tomorrow morning.
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>>4469366
The Rose-Gold Lady - as the unit had come to call her - seemed to shine under the sunlight. It was unusual to see a paladin dedicated to the goddess of love, but her devotion and martial prowess were unquestionable. More questionable was the squire that followed alongside her, never entering battle, rarely being taught either combat forms or liturgy from her. There was chat and rumor, of course- but it was well known that paladins lost some of their power if they were chasteless, so there was not much to say.

Which made getting away with it that much easier. I moaned involuntarily as her soft flesh wrapped itself around my cock, her warm breath a tickle against my head. A paladin she was, but one that understood the exact terms her strength came with. She began to slide back and forth as a thin line of drool dripped from her mouth. "Hurry." She intoned. "The next battle could be at any time; give me your seed, that I may regain the goddess's grace." It was a command I was more than happy to follow.
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>>4477602
Hey, I'll take tour word!

A story about Takimoto Hifumi from New Game! with me as her boyfriend. She would be 2 or 3 years older than me and we've been dating for a while.

She's extremely shy with people and usually can't talk clearly due to that but she's damn good at her work (Game creation company as a programmer) and when she loves someone she's absolutely a loving and a caring person (she's like this for example with her hedgehog pet, Soujiro) she would treat me when we're aloke like a cute pet/thing and she would sexually care lots for me & she would let me do her too.

Fetishes I would like starring at the story: vanilla, assertive, breast sucking or nursing handjob, blowjob, assjob, titfuck/paizuri, nakadashi, anal, cum on back, cum on ass/tits...

Also keep her mole on her right breast as it's so cute and sexy.
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>>4478854
Here you have more image references.
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>>4478856
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>>4477654
Hey, no problem! Glad it worked out okay.

>>4477935
No worries! Everyone has got their own stuff going on. Just figured I would try my hand at the whole smut writing thing here on the boards. It will help me improve my writing and think outside the box!

>>4478854
Coming right up! Tomorrow evening at the latest.
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Have an idea for a Ranma/Ryoga story-prompt.

While forced to sleep together to retain body heat for warmth, the pair's arguing about awkwardness in being physically close and barely clothed devolves into fighting which devolves into rough exploring bases 1-3.
After they both orgasm, they realize what they've done, and after awkward silence discuss their issues and insecuritie and Ranma resolving to allow Ryoga to practice/prepare on how to treat Akane on the condition he's gentle.

Vanilla ensues.
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>>4481903
Why does everyone ship Ranma and Ryoga? I'm not complaining, I'm just genuinely curious. I mean, you hardly ever seen, like, Ranma and Mousse shipping, or something like that. Or some rare pairings like Mousse and Ukyou or Ryoga and Kodachi
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Don't know who the hell wrote this , but if it's possible I would like a continuation or something in the same vein.
Main themes are feminization and anal, but I'd like to see some pussy play maybe even some impregnation.
Pic related is what I think main character looks like.
If I broke any rules of the thread I'm sorry this smut is just so damn good.
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>>4482172
Because being rivals somehow makes it hotter. If Goku or Vegeta were a women, you know how much porn we'd have of those two together?
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>>4478854

New Game Love! (Part 1)

I was told that pursuing a girl like Hifumi Takimoto would only end in misery for me. She barely talks save through emails and text messages, but when I saw her video game design work I fell in love almost instantly. She was the type of girl I could see myself spending the rest of my life with.

Coming home from a hardday of work, running a manga and figurine shop proves extra stressful around the holidays, I return to our apartment. Together we make barely enough to make ends meet, but we’re happy.

I enter our front door, her illustration and design work strewn all across the floor. As usual, she doesn’t say a word, but she drops her pencil and runs up to me, thin arms wrapping around my neck. The vision of her was intoxicating, long brown hair flowing down the back of her youthful and soft figure. I wasn’t able to stare long, however, before she began to plant kisses all over my neck and face.

To say that Takimoto was affectionate would be like saying the Niagra Falls was just a small watery dip. Everyday when I returned home, she would greet me like I was absolutely irresistible. Though she did not express it with words, her actions and the way she used her body sent one clear message: that I was the love of her life, and I always will be.

When her tongue came out from between her lips, I grinned wide. Clearly, I had left my poor girl all on her own for too long, and it was time for us to attend to each others needs.

Her lips gently pressed against my own, as my hands came up onto her ass cheeks and gave them a playful squeeze. As per usual, she squeeked with my light groping, being especially sensitive when we are just on the cusp of love-making. She rubbed her breasts, which looked as though they were about to burst from the white button-up shirt she was wearing, against my chest as our kiss deepened. When our tongues touched, we both knew that the other wanted more.
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>>4484448

New Game Love! (Part 2)

No words had to be exchanged. My Takimoto began to peck around my jaw, and spread her loving kisses all the way down to my clothed crotch. After giving what felt like a dozen teasing pecks on my already stiff cock, she wasted no time in unbuttoning my pants and letting my lust be bare before her.

Her wide blue eyes stared at my cock for but a moment before she wrapped one of her soft dainty hands around it. Takimoto’s palm was cool to the touch, but began to warm as she slid her cupped hand slowly from the bottom of my shaft all the way to the tippy-top of my head. Despite the red in her cheeks, her eyes glanced up to me for approval.

I nodded. Honestly, she had never done anything to ever upset me. When we make love, it is like we are one with each other. As her handjob began to pick up pace, cool hand now warm with friction, my breath hitched. The sight of her nursing my cock, giving everything she had to make sure I was satisfied, was already pushing me over the edge.

When her sweet pink tongue took a few licks of my head as she continued pumping me, I couldn’t hold it in. I came, a small fountain of cum bubbling up from my cock. Her expression was that of surprise as she watched me twitch, my cum spurting all over her hand and onto her sleeve.

Takimoto pulled her hand away, observing my now cum-drenched cock, and smiled sheepishly. Before I could apologize for having cum so early, she brought her hand to her mouth and began to lick her fingers clean. It was no small amount of cum I had left for her, but as soon as she had cleaned her hands her focus was entirely on my semi-erect cock.
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>>4484453

New Game Love! (Part 3)

That cute pink tongue of hers rubbed against me again, but this time it was rubbing my member clean. Every drop of cum that was left, Takimoto was determined to consume for herself. The heat of her breath and the warm swipes of her tongue caused me to go erect again. As soon as I was clean, and ever hornier than before, she brought her lips to the head of my cock. She kissed it, as though it were the most precious thing in her entire world.

And then she wrapped her mouth around my cock, and I could feel her warmth all around my cock. That sweet tongue laid out like a carpet, the suction she had become so good at after years of dating… I felt as though I were being spoiled.

And the eyes. Those darling soul-searching eyes. As she sucked, her eyes practically melded with mine. She knew what I wanted. A nice steady pace as she sucked me off for a good long time.

Then, when I was just about to cum, I brought my hand down to her hair and stroked it. She moaned happily, recognizing it as the signal to prepare herself. As I shot stream after stream of warm cum into her mouth, my cock twitching happily as I filled her up, her cheeks became redder.

Regardless of any slight embarrassment she may have had, she still swallowed it all. By the time my cock was outside of her, it was as clean as when it had come in. There was never much of a mess made between us. Takimoto knew just how to clean me dirty.

Her hands finally came up to the buttons of her shirt, as she began to undress herself right before me. She was wearing her pink bra, which were barely cupping her deliciously milky breasts. Taking off her skirt, a matching pair of pink panties was revealed… with one large wet spot right where her delectable pussy was waiting for me.
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>>4484460

New Game Love! (Part 4)

But before I could enter her, she had but one small request for me. She patted her right breast, her cute little mole taunting me as it always did. I knew for sure what she wanted. Unclamping her bra, letting her beautiful mounds take in the cool air of her apartment, I ran my tongue across one of her nipples. She stifled a cry, this being her absolute most sensitive area. I sucked upon her breasts, relishing in the way she squirmed about with my affections. After only a couple minutes, I observed as her entire body twitched and the wet spot between her legs only seemed to get wetter. With only a little love to her breasts, I had made my love cum.

Takimoto was not one to lose initiative, however. Changing positions, briefly rubbing her breasts in my face as she went, she placed two of her greatest assets on both sides of my cock. Then the most glorious sights and sounds were blessed upon me. Her titjob gave her as much pleasure as it did me, all of Takimoto’s happy whimpers and erotic sighs sounding like a girl who was getting royally screwed. But all she was doing was playing with my cock with her breasts, and it was surreal how quickly we both came from it.

Though I would have never thought that I could grow such endurance before meeting her, Takimoto brought up to a level of sexual longevity I never thought possible. As her ass cheeks were a mere inch from my nose, and I watched as my cock’s girth was slipped teasingly between them, I wondered how many guys would have ever guessed at her curiosities. How many passed at a chance to take this eager cutie who was now giving me the assjob of a lifetime.

Once my cock was nice and erect once again, she turned her face to me… and winked. The flush on her cheeks never left when we fucked. As she moved her panties to the side, revealing the ass I was about to make the sweetest of love to, she had the biggest smile on her face.
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>>4484466

New Game Love! (Part 5)

I got up onto my knees, slipping my cock right up into her ass, and began to plunge deeply into her. She moaned and mewed, after all of the soft love we had created together, it was now time for me to ravish her. All of the teasing and all of the sweet gestures had lead to this moment. Me taking my Takimoto, my sweet sweet Takimoto, just the way she always wants it. The fact that we were doing it doggy-style was not lost on me, as she had always treated me much like a pet as well as a lover.

It was so tight. So warm. So completely lovely. As she came for the first time, I could feel her walls tighten even more. Though she had trained herself to endure it, she still somehow managed to be as tight as the day we first had sex. My thrusts were needy, wanting her to cum just one more time before I fill her with my warmth. This time, as she shook more violently than any of her prior climaxes, she cried out my name.

I couldn’t take it anymore. As she came, I came along with her. I came right into the sweetest girl I had ever had the pleasure to meet. I came into the girl that I loved.

As I pulled out of her, I was completely spent. We both laid down onto our bed afterwards, and she nuzzled her nose into my neck. Looking as though she were about to all asleep, her eyes bolted open. Quickly racing to the dresser, she began typing out a message. My phone buzzed a few moments later.
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>>4484468

New Game Love (Final!)

As she plopped right next to me, she smooched my cheek. Now it was time for me to blush, as I read her message.

‘Thank you for teaching me to fuck.
I love you sooooo much~!’
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Gonna try and do a story a day. Now that it isn't Christmas time and my relatives won't be hounding me, it should be much easier.

>>4478854

It ended up taking me much longer than expected. Dang holidays. But anyways, I hope you enjoy! Never read the series, but looked up some stuff about the character, so I hope it is at least somewhat accurate.

>>4477611
I will do this one next.

>>4481903
This will come after the one above. I do love me some Ranma!

>>4482182
This will be challenging for me, but I'll try and do something in a similar vein with pussy play. My limit is 2000 words though, so it won't be nearly as indepth as the story linked. Probably just one sexual encounter.
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I tried doing this once a long time ago, but mods made me move to /aco/. Change of heart? We can post greens on here now?
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>>4484453
I'm not that anon who requested this, but man, you do rock.
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>>4485487
That's funny, the mods on /aco/ made me move my attempt at writethreads back over to /d/
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May I have a story with Youmu Konpaku being blackmailed and broken, involving kinks like deepthroating and handjobs.
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>>4487805
Any ideas for what she's being blackmailed with or for the setting of the fic in general?
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>>4487826
She could be trying to regain back her two swords, or keep some dark secret from getting out, whatever it be.
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>>4488530
I'll get to it. Trying to get her swords back by sucking a bunch of cocks like in the picture sounds like a good idea. Anything else you'd like to see?
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>>4488533
I guess surprise me.
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>>4484492
Thank you based anon
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Okay. I've kind of retired from this, but I'll be happy to share two of my favorites that I wrote.

Camilla: http://pastebin.com/iJpiapGg

Palutena: http://pastebin.com/HkSx0jfY
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Requesting a story with Esdeath from Akame ga Kill. She's a leader type and hate weak people. I'd like for her be captured and raped into submission becoming exactly what she despises.
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Kind of a character-specific one, but maybe some writer anon's seen the anime...?

Requesting one for Kyouka Izumi from Bungou Stray Dogs getting raped by Dazai Osamu, but she ends up liking it by the end. Maybe for how it starts Dazai can say he needs her help on an assignment and ends up leading her to a secluded place like an alleyway?

If you haven't seen the anime but would like to write it (if I'm not being presumptuous), Kyouka's a somewhat stoic girl who was forced to kill as a member of the mafia, but was more or less rescued by the agency Dazai is a part of. She's sweet, but doesn't let that side show often.
Dazai comes across as goofy, but as an ex-mafia member, he has questionable morals to say the least.

Thanks!!
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Non-con. The female's POV. This is just a hentai character so for the personality how about an innocent virgin. Forced deepthroat and irrumatio from as many people as you wish to write for. Mix of facials and cumming down the throat/in the mouth.
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Writefag here, willing to take on a request. Just don't ask me to write a rape or cuck scene.
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>>4489708
Does this have a deadline?
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Most shit from the female's POV would be great. Hard or soft. Bonus points for badass oral scene.
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>>4487805
http://pastebin.com/xsTAbU6b
Here. Hope you like it.
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I reeeally like the idea of this thread, writing is such an underrated kind of porn, and if you combine that with a picture for reference It can be 10/10
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>>4493837
Wanna request something?
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>>4469481
I'm up for it.
Though I'm on mobile,I'll get to it when I have time.
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>>4493845
>>4491897
I have a request if anyone is willing. It's a bit trite though, but it's half fap material and half education resource (I'm trying to write as well).
A bold and cheerful elven adventurer was taken captive by orcs and is about to be gangbanged. But to their surprise, she manages to turn the tables midway, exhausting her assailants.

Focus on anal and oral would be fantastic. Female POV would be great as well, but it's optional if you're not feeling like it. Image can be used as a loose inspiration for the heroine.
Thank you for considering the request.
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>>4493876
I'm feeling a bit conflicted about this since I have a massive elf kink but have never enjoyed the usual orc rape stuff. What do you mean by it being an education resource?
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>>4493879
>What do you mean by it being an education resource?
I'm (half) joking. I'm struggling to write myself.

It doesn't have to be rape (I actually would prefer if it weren't all grim and scream), just rapey enough to set up turning the tables.
Unless you think it could work in a different way, in case go for it.

But to be honest, I would take anything loosely related to the above elven adventurer, so if orc fun is too banal, let me know.
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>>4493883
Usually I'd jump at the opportunity to write anything involving an elf, but orcs is general just don't do it for me. I'd like to use her for something though.
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>>4493885
It could be bandits, goblins, savages or anything relatively crude or stupid really. It's the switch that's important for me.

But if you're a fellow elfaboo, I would be just as glad with a sloppy, happy, drunken blowjob coupled with masturbation. Female pov would be greatly appreciated. Unless you want more details, everything else (male, setting etc.) can be anything.
Same elf as above - she's bold, experienced, a bit greedy and somewhat reckless. She's not a virgin by any means and enjoys sex.
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>>4493891
Hmm, I've got an idea: she enjoys getting 'caught' by humans and then reversing the situation. Would that be fine?
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>>4493896
Anon, to be honest I'll take what you'll give. You're doing it for fun after all.

If you could set it up in a way that she's in a pinch/not fully in control at the beginning, it would be great (not sure about getting caught on purpose, but hey, it can be good!). If not, go with what you think is best. You mentioned not being into rape, which fits well with my request, but rough sex is good if you know what I mean.
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>>4493900
Okay, I'll set it up so that she's not exactly in control at the start. This'll take from a few days to a week to write.
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>>4493902
Great then, thank you anon.
I'll be waiting eagerly.
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>>4491953
Not really I'm in no rush
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>>4493904
One more thing, do you have a name for her? Makes it easier to write.
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>>4493946
Feel free to give her an appropriate name.
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Taking requests if anyone has any.
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>>4494344
What about a story of a lesbian discovering the wonders of straight sex? Maybe with one of the Valkyrie Drive characters?
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>>4494348
Another set of possible characters, this time from the anime
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>>4494348
Sounds good, any specific details you'd like to see? Is she a straight up lesbian only willing to take it doggy style so she's not looking a man straight in the face? Perhaps she meets a convincing trap and decides to roll with it once they make it to the bedroom?
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>>4494352
She would be a straight up lesbian at first but as pleasure grows stronger, she begins to get more and more into it. The trap is an interesting idea what if he is also pretty dominant?
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>>4494356
A dominant but petite feminine trap seducing our lesbian protagonist into an evening of saucy straight sex? Sounds appealing, perhaps it even shakes up her sexuality a bit afterwards?
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>>4494367
Sounds good! Specially if she gets hooked and tries to show more of her friends the wonders of cock.
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>>4494382
I'll get on it then, word of warning I'm a little slow so delivery will take some time.
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>>4494387
Dont worry man, take your time
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>>4493833
It's great! Thanks alot :)
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>>4484492
OR forma New Game request! OMG THANKS YOU'RE SO AWESOME ;____;

Hope you had a good Christmas and a good year!
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Gonna make sure this doesn't 404 while requesting if any writers here does POV from the taker's perspective.
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>>4455319
Where do you guys post the smut you've written, besides pastebins and such I mean?

There are numerous sites for posting the stuff I've written, but all of them seem to either have too great constraints or limitations regarding content, or are not intended for erotic literature at all.

archiveofourown.org seems to be intended mainly for fanfics and not for original stories.

literotica.com has only one person reading the submissions, meaning it takes forever for your story to actually be published there, plus the site has a very low tolerance toward graphic/violent content and zero policy on sex involving under 18 year old characters.

hentai-foundry.com offers the change to post stories, but obviously with a heavy focus on explicit smut and not that much for longer, more drawn-out stories.

deviantart.com also is a place to post stories, but as far as I've understood erotic stories are not possible or if they are they have equally tough restrictions as with literotica.com.

What other sites besides those you know that would be good for posting your stories (involving realistic descriptions of violence and teenagers having sex for example)?
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>>4493946
Just so you know anon, I'm still eagerly waiting for that story. Not pressuring you, just letting you know that I'm lurking.
Even if you don't want to finish it, a wip is fint too.
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>>4502135
I'm at 2000 words now and I was planning on publishing it tomorrow. I don't want to go over 2000 words so I'll try to finish it today and then cut it down to size tomorrow.
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>>4502267
Love ya.
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>>4459010
just re-requesting this since it's been a bit forgoten and there's no rule of not re-requesting.

Thx!
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Requesting a story about Samus being a slut and getting gangbanged by a bunch of guys.

She should be confident and assertive.

Premise: Samus is home after a long mission and seeks to wind down by going to a seedy bar to fuck strangers. Because it's been a long time she's very hungry for cock and almost in a craze.
Though because she is known to fuck a lot she is hard to please and has the guys work hard to satisfy her.

Preferably not aliens though, guess they can be off-duty federation marines but it doesn't really matter.
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Requesting a story involving Misaka Mikoto from A Certain Magical Index being raped by a random passerby as she is too weak to fight back, due to being battered and beaten in an earlier fight.
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>>4502325
http://pastebin.com/UPTdnDgG
I have no idea if it's anything like what you asked for, since I got seriously carried away. It could also do with some editing but I suppose you prefer getting it right now instead of having to wait a week for me to get over myself.
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>>4503897
Why the hell would you want that? What's wrong with you?
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>>4503932
>”Is it a pestle? There's no mortar in her bag.”
That was great anon, sincerely thank you.
I've read, I've fapped. I liked the paladin and the little things most - "Elves don't count" and the mentioned pestle for example.
Elanil's character was great as well. Very akin to what I had in mind.

My only gripe would be the lack of anal - and no, the last part doesn't count lol. Even if it wraps up the story nicely with an added bonus of poetic justice.

All in all, thank you for taking the time to do this request for me. I appreciate it and hope you had some fun writing too.
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>>4504940
Dropping anal was just the thing I was worried about, but it didn't fit with the idea I had for the scene. I would've had to rewrite all of the sex to fit it in and I had too much fun doing it the way I did. Glad to hear you liked it.
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>>4503897
(1 of 4)
"Fuck," I say out loud. My head hangs low as I'm on my way home. I spot an empty soda can on the road, and kick it as hard as I can. I watch the can fly towards the street only to hit the nearest street light. It bounces and rolls back in front of me. "God fucking damn it!"

I just can't catch a break. First I work my ass off and my boss yells at me. Yeah, maybe I took some stuff of the load for myself, but so what? It's not like anyone even notices. Anyway, then my coworkers ask me to play some cards with them, and I lose my weeks paycheck. Those fuckers tricked me into it. And now even the soda can is mocking me. Fuck this whole damn city, and the schools, and the people and--

I notice someone walking towards me.

A school girl, huh? You don't usually see them in this part of the city. Not at this time anyway. It's well past midnight. And isn't she kinda limping her leg? Hey! I recognize her. That's one of those soulless clone girls. There’s like a million of them and they are all completely messed in the head. They probably wouldn't care if I--

She limps closer to me, and the street light reveals her broken uniform. It's torn in many places. One of her boobs hanging out of her uniform. That perfect, round, not too large breast out in the open. And the firm pretty nipple. I can imagine my hand massaging around it, as it bounces ever so lightly on her every step.

Wait a minute? She hasn't noticed me? Well it’s pretty dark, and her head is hanging low, kind of like mine was a moment ago.

She passes the street light, and when she is only five feet away, she notices me. She immediately covers her front with her arm and gives me a furious look. "What are you looking at?" She says, and continues to walk past me.
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She must have had a rough day, like me. I guess the city can be tough on all of us at times. And hey, at least I got a pretty good look at her. For a moment there, I was thinking of doing some bad things to her. But nah. Even I wouldn't go--

"Stupid perverts like this guy.," she says out loud to herself.

What's that you say? Stupid? Pervert? After I graciously let you pass me in that outfit, you insult me?

I take three running steps toward her and smack her in the back of the head as hard as I can. She falls on the street, unconscious. I take a quick look around. There's no one around. Satisfied, I lift her on my shoulders and carry her to a narrow side alley.

I put her down against a broken street light. She's completely out of it. I take a set of cable ties from the pocket of my work outfit and tie her hands behind the light. I stand up to look at her.

She looks so juicy as she lies there with one of her boobs out in the moonlight. She's definitely asking for it.

I crouch down on top of her. I start to take off the rest of her uniform, but then decide against it. Instead, I tear it apart and throw the hanging bra away. The soft moan she gives is enough to make me go insane. I grab her breasts with both of my hands and massage them like crazy. They feel just as soft as I imagined. Blood flows to my crotch.

This is what I deserve, I think to myself. For all the shit I've had to deal with.

I notice her starting to wake up. I lift her up from the ground so that her head is at level with my crotch. I remove my pants and take out my cock. I slap her cheeks multiple times with it, until she opens her eyes.

"W-what's.."

"Oh shut up, bitch, and take it," I shove my already hard cock inside her mouth. She groans as I push it straight in as far as it goes. The sucking motion of her mouth feels like heaven.
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I keep my cock pushed in. Her eyes start to roll backwards. I stop there to look at her and enjoy the moment. I pull half way back to let her breath, only to push it straight back in. Her mouth around my cock feels so good! My abs tighten every time I pull her head around my cock, and huge amounts of saliva drip from her mouth every time I pull out. She is too out of it to realize what's going on. She just looks at me with those dreamy eyes, as I keep shoving my cock in her mouth.

“Oh shit, I think I'm gonna cum already,” I say out loud and pull my cock out. Its rock hard and drenched in her saliva. She stares at my cock, still oblivious to what's happening. I raise her up to her feet, and stare into her eyes, as I put my hand in her skirt.

"Huh? What's this?" I say. She's wearing fucking bloomers under her skirt. They break easily as I rip them off.

She gives a light moan and her eyes close when I start to rub her pussy with my fingers. I put my middle finger inside and her pussy immediately sucks me in and tightens around my finger. It's so wet and warm, and so damn tight. For a moment, shivers run through my back, as I imagine how my cock would feel inside her. I run over her boobs with my other hand, and she starts to moan louder.

It's time. I lift her up from her ass, with her back pushing against the street light. Then I drop her at her full weight on my cock. Her pussy sucks my cock completely in, so tightly that it's almost painful. "Ah!" She lets out a loud moan and her eyes begin to roll back. I lift her up all the way so that the head of my cock is almost out of her pussy, and then drop it back all the way in. She yells loud moans again and her tongue sticks out of her mouth. I lift her up again, and ignore the blood that flows out of her pussy.

"P-please," she whispers, so softly that I barely hear her.

"Please what? You want more!?"
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I'm already dripping in sweat, but I start to get even rougher with her. I raise her up with all my strength, not caring how bad her back hits against the lamp. Then I pull her back down, so that her ass strikes against my thighs and balls. I feel her pussy vibrating and tightening around my cock more with every time I pull myself into her.

Fuck. I'm really gonna cum this time.

"Ah! Ah-" She is now moaning full time. In a small zap of electricity her hands suddenly break free from the cable tie. I almost panic and drop her, but she quickly reaches her hands around my back and pulls herself closer. She is now moaning softly right into my ear.

I keep thrusting into her and she grabs a tighter hold of my back every time. My abs tighten as I'm about to throw my load deep inside her. I pull too hard and fall on the street. She falls right on top of me as I explode inside her. She keeps moving her pussy up and down and sideways as I lie there, cumming.

Calming down, she lets her hips fall on top of me, my cock still inside her. I'm lying on the street on my back, and she lies on top of me, with her hands on my chest. I lie there, looking at her sleeping, smiling face. I let my breathing calm down.

It could have been a worse day. The city isn't all that bad when I think about it.
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>>4504989
Thanks!
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>>4505122
How was it? I've never written erotica, and I've only read very little, so I'd imagine not very good

I'm looking to improve, so if you or anyone feels like giving any tips its appreciated
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>>4505139
not the OR but I think it was pretty good for your first attempt to it. Although there's definitely some room for improvement, I'd suggest aiming for more detail when describing the sex acts and giving a read or two to your writing every now and then to make it flow better and identify possible sentences oddly worded and the like.
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>>4505150
Thank you. I'll try to do so.
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Guy who requested the Youmu one here, I have a question. According to rule 5, since my request is done, may I request again?

>>4491887

Kind of interested in writing this one, but I'm not too confident on writing erotic scenes.
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>>4505500
sure you may
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>>4505500
You have to get started somewhere. Why not now?
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>>4505500
I'm not the requester, but I would like to see that scene done. Sounds hot.
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>>4506051
Thirded. So hard to find good stories as a woman since they're all from the man's POV.
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>>4506081
Do you mean written from first person? Porn written with limited 3rd person focusing on the woman isn't that rare at all.
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More porn for the porn god!
Anyone willing to do a request?
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>>4459597
Saw nobody picked this up, so I will. Here is the Googledoc link, I'll be updating this as I can.

Full disclosure: I have no idea what Asura's Wrath is about, or what the character's voice is like. I read the wiki, but that's it. So I'm just winging this to see how well I can write smut on demand. Hit me with criticisms, and shower me with praise. It's the fuel I burn.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qxxk99ZoX8nTmTaGckZvDx8cq-xbZsEeqvjy0RtjwUM/edit?usp=sharing
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>>4507889
I think is incomplete, great start though!
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>>4503812
I'll do this. I've had a similar idea in the past so I might as well do this one. Should I write her as a huge amazon or just a normal woman?
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>>4508188
I think as a huge amazon would be hotter
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>>4508195
I'll got with her height as 1.9m then and off-duty marines. Anything else you want?
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>>4508199
Nope, go nuts with the story anon.
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>>4503932
By the way anon, do you mind if I add Elanil as a small cameo in my thing?
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>>4508224
Not in the slightest. What are you writing?
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>>4508225
An eroge. I only have weekends of free time now that I found a job, but it's been steadily progressing for the past few months so I'm positive. I do have an artist with me, so the second biggest obstacle is behind me.
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>>4508227
Sounds interesting. What's the synopsis for it?
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>>4508231
It's short and simple. An elven adventurer gets an exclusive quest from an important person, but she needs to hurry with finishing it. The events happening behind the scenes are actually more important, world-wise.
I'm basically setting the game as the prologue; and treat it as a learning experience.
Although I'm not really ready to shill it yet.
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>>4508235
>Elf
I'd buy it. And don't be afraid to shill it. It's never stupid to ask for money.
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>>4508237
Oh, I will shill it. I just don't want to be one of the never-ever patreon devs. Ideally, it would be nice to live of my creation, but I would prefer to have some dignity as well. So I'm going to shill when it's relatively ready and I'm confident in my product.
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>>4508240
Do you have a blog or anything where I could follow your progress?
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>>4508276
Like I said, it's too early for me to go public with it. I only mentioned, since you asked. I'm pretty sure you won't miss it when I roll out though. But thanks for the interest anyway!
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>>4508294
Honestly, it's smart to not go public too soon. I'll be sure to not miss it. If you want me to guest write anything for it I'd be happy to help. My elf kink isn't getting any better.
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>>4455706
something with corruption would be fun
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>>4507889
OR here. first of all: You're awesome. second, looks good to me. My only critisim is that you wrote the MC as a captured guy, not a servant of her. But on the other hand you hit her character rather good.
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Bumping so this anon >>4494387 >>4494367 is able to deliver the request
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>>4476425
It's been a month and I barely ended up halfway, guess I have no motivation. Don't wait for me.
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>>4503812
http://pastebin.com/F1PvUX91
Here you go.
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>>4514459
Oh man, that was a wonderful read. The attention to the detail and the characterization were fantastic. and well, it never gets old to see a strong amazon like Samus being reduced to sloppy mess.

Thank you so very much for writing this!
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>>4514547
Thanks. It's a relief that it worked out since Samus can be written in almost any manner. I worried quite a bit, but the gangbang was fun to write in any case.
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Whatever happened to SmutWriter?
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A guy tries a "Tomcat" sex-enhancing drink to help him arouse his girlfriend. It works and they have a wild night together, but cumming inside her causes her to grow cat ears and a tail. He is wracked with guilt and confusion, but she actually likes being a catgirl, and tries comforting him and playing as his pet cat. She turns back to normal in the morning, but from then on never stops bugging him to transform her again.
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>>4514738
I think you captured her personality pretty well and not gonna lie, the idea of an amazon utterly dominating a bunch of men into treating her like a cocksleeve is incredibly hot.
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>>4515641
It is. I worried because Samus' character can be written as almost anything from a complete subslut to hard femdom, but in the end I just did what I thought worked best. She's one of those characters that I could write a whole bunch of porn for.
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>>4515668
Yeah, that was a pretty good middle ground between those extremes. Not that I'd minded either of them though.

Say, would you interested on writing a similar story with Valkyrie Drive's Mirei Shikishima? She's also a similarly head strong woman but with the twist she's actually a lesbian.
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>>4515707
I really liked Valkyrie Drive, but I don't think I could write anything but /u/-related material of it, and that goes beyond the scope of this thread. Unfortunately, I'm not into that "fuck them until they stop being gay" trope or non-con in general.
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>>4515730
Well it doesn't necessarily has to to be non con but I understand your posture. Thanks anyways.
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>>4455319
Ok, write an story that could serve as background of this image. An story that begins showing what lead to this situation and continues to how this situation goes further and how it ends.

For context, lets say that the guy is a pragmatic experienced adventure. Not a total asshole, but that works mainly for personal interest.

I leave the rest to the potential writter. They trick him, he tricks them, love spells, gratitude for rescuing, whatever you see fit.
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Hi, I'm Oboro.
I write.
Hit me up if you want anything done, although this is my first shot at erotica.
Just ask whatever and I'll get it to you.
Somehow.
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>>4515801
I write and then upload to pastebin, if you want to know.
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>>4515801
If you haven't seen already >>4515208

(I take it you're looking to talk with someone rather than read through hundreds of posts.)
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>>4515821
thanks lol
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>>4482182
Re-requesting this because the wrotefag wh o said he would do it seems to have fucked off.
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>>4515208
>>4515801 here, I gotchu
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>>4515208
oh, and apologies, but A) it may not be great B) It'll take a bit of time
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I guess nobody feels like doing a female POV heavy oral scene?
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Bumping. Taking a request as long as it isn't non-con, so now's your chance.
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>>4522490
Black haired Daidouji being roughly but lovingly spit roasted on the beach? Maybe with a little of exhibitionism, reverse mating press and femdom involved?
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>>4522514
>reverse mating press
Do you mean the amazon position? Also, any preference for who's fucking her and why?
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>>4522517
Yup, that is what I meant, I'm thinking that training and fighting make her really horny and maybe she has a bunch of boystoys to let off some steam. In this ocassion she is particularly emoboldened and decides to put a little show for everyone at the beach to see.
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>>4522541
Sounds good. This'll take from a few days to a week to complete, depending on how long it ends up being.
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>>4522547
Take all the time you need man, I know it will be worth the wait. Can I abuse your generosity and also request for Daidouji to have a thick untamed bush and for her to go full ahegao during the scene?

Thanks in advance!
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>>4522550
No problem at all. Small details like that are easy to slip in. Besides, I've got a kink for trimmed pubes myself.
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>>4493833
Really good stuff, do you have other stories online or something? I crave moar.
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>>4522654
I've got another pseud for my non-lewd material but I'd like to keep it separate for now. I've thought of opening an account at hentaifoundry or somewhere else just to archive these, since they're starting to pile up.
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>>4522659
That would be great. Your stories are top notch and I'd love to have them compiled on a single place.
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>>4482182
This is seriously some of the hottest shit I've ever read.

Unfortunately I'm not a writefag, but I can draw somewhat decently, so if you or anybody else would like to see any scene from this (basically any sexual scene at all, it is that hot) illustrated, I'd be more than happy to try my hand at it (though do tell me if you have a specific reference look for any of the characters, please).
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>>4524924
What about this scene?

>"I-I'm a buttslut” you finally blurt in a high pitched voice after another slap. You don't even realize that he stopped moving when he started slapping your ass and that you're now rocking back and forth, impaling yourself over and over on his stiff cock. Its difficult to think of anything but your friend's amazing expert licking and the feel of him deep inside.

>"Good, that wasn't so hard. Took you long enough. Doesn't it feel good to finally admit you enjoy getting fucked here just as much as I enjoy doing it to you? Don't think I haven't noticed all those pleasurable faces you make when you think I can't see you,” he taunts you much to your shame.

>You can't help it. This female body of yours has grown addicted to his big penis and the way it feels moving in and out of your butt. It's not your fault he makes it feel so good.

>Two more pleasurable minutes pass as he films close up POV of his dick sliding in and out of your hot butt. Now you know what the mask is for, to obscure your tomboyish friend's identity as you're sure she can be seen underneath you licking your snatch while he so delightfully pounds you.

>"Fuck, I'm gonna cum. Go on slut, beg me for it.”

>A slap echoes in the room, followed by your cry as again you're too embarrassed to voice what everyone in the room already knows.

>"I know you love it. You always take me deep when you're riding me and I cum inside you, making sure to get it all inside you. Must feel really good since you don't even clean it out. You love being full of cum don't you? So go on, beg for it.”

>"P-please cum in my ass” you moan out, close to your own orgasm. Your face is flushed in complete embarrassment and shame. You're sure by the time he uploads this video tonight thousands of guys are going to know how much you enjoy it.

As for character references, how about these two for the buttslut and her athletic friend?
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>>4525096
I'm afraid Dai is too tall and busty to be the supposed slim, athletic and tanned friend. Perfect choice on the protagonist looking like Rin, though.

>mfw Rin as a total buttslut
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>>4525218
How about this chick then?
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>>4525251
Even better. She'd make a fine buttslut. I'll just do whatever for the athletic friend. Unlike the protag, she gets a full description.
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>>4502059
What about asstr? I don't know about it from the point of view of a writer, only a reader, but it explicitly supports unrestricted content.
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Anyone here want foot fetish content?
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>>4526967
I would be interested
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>>4494367
>>4494356

Man, was interested in this until I heard about the trap. Not my taste, but it's not my suggestion so I guess I can't complain.

As a heads up what >>4494352 said is pretty much the exact plot of a hentai manga already. A lesbian meets a convincing trap, finds out she is a boy, gets dominated by him:

https://exhentai.org/g/796911/ce8c7f351a/
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>>4528307
I'm usually all about traps getting railed by masculine men, but trapdom can sometimes be incredibly hot like it is here. Great doujin.
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>>4528307
Well I'm the OR and my first idea didn't included the trap but that kind anon that offered to pick up the request suggested it. Personally I would fine with a trap or manly guy teaching her the wonders of the cock.
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>>4522550
http://pastebin.com/CJGFZvUk
Here. Mixing all the elements turned out to be a bit difficult, but I think it came out ok.

If anyone else wants to request, I'm up for another one.
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>>4529298
OR here

Holy shit, holy shit. That was fucking incredible. Her characterization was spot on, the way you wrote her like having absolute control at first and the slowly succumbing to the pleasure was amazing. And what is more, you really surpassed my expectations with that lovely and detailed description of her untamed bush. Truly a fantastic, fantastic job that was well worth the wait. Thank you so much Genghis. You're the best.
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>>4529374
Thank you. It's always a relief to hear that the fic turned out fine.
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So is a shorter fic necessarily easier to write? I want to get into erotic writing (and writing in general) again after years of absence, but I'm the sort of person who loses interest in a work of progress easily. So I was thinking of writing short vignettes instead.
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>>4529612
Yeah, that is a good way to get back in the game.
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Requesting either a scenario where person is "installing" a program or a rape scenario where she is being impregnated with a virus.
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Requesting Tharja using hexes, magic and trickery to force a innocent Robin to impregnate her.
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>>4455319
I'm more aroused by that writing desk setup.
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>>4529623
I guess I'll go for it then.

It's late at night so I only ended up writing one paragraph thus far. I figure I may as well post it:

An ordinary math class. The afternoon sun shone through the windows, painting the classroom in that sleepy hue. The teacher went on about the equations marked on the board, stopping occasionally to remind us to take notes for the upcoming test. Altogether it would have been a fairly ordinary Tuesday, were it not for the girl he casually groped in front of the class.

How's this for a start?
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>>4529651
I could do this. Did you have any details in mind?
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>>4529776
Pretty good, although it reads a little mechanical. Maybe shifting to first person would work better?
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>>4530061
>although it reads a little mechanical.
That's always been a problem of mine, both in writing and in speaking. Have any specific tips on improving that?

>Maybe shifting to first person would work better?
It's supposed to be first person, the POV being someone in the class, as you can see from:
>stopping occasionally to remind us to...
Does it not read like first person should? I'm guessing this is related to it reading mechanically.
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>>4530417
I guess the thing it makes it read kind of mechanical is how impersonal it is. Using some pronouns and maybe a more casual language could help top that. Something like

>I yawned, another Tuesday, another ordinary math classs. The warm light coming from the window submerged the entire classroom on a very lazy mood. The fact the teach went on and on about equations and reminding us about taking notes didn't help to improve our mood. That is why you can imagine my surprise when he suddely began to grope one of the girls as it were the most natural thing in the world.

I took some liberties with your text but I think you'll get the idea.
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>>4530453
Ah, I see now, thanks.
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How do you weebs name your characters?

As a reader, I'm in a weird grey area where Japanese names bother me if the characters are more western than Japanese, but non-Japanese names bother me if the setting is more Japanese than western (especially if they're high schoolers). It's really petty, I know.
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>>4529929
Other than what's provided already, no.
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>>4530795
Ok. Guess I've got free hands for it then.
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I guess I can try writing smut.
I'm down for requests, but, nothing too foreign, 'cause that'll fuck me over from the start.
I guess giving me a picture or something, and I'll try and write around it could work.
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>>4531056
Oh, another thing.
I work fast.
I can have decent smut out in a few hours, as long as the idea ain't too difficult.
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>>4531067
I'll give it a go.
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>>4531067
Not the original OP, but decided to give this a go anyway.
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Lieutenant Coleen Thoma looked upon the fresh recruits atop of the ivory tower. She was focused on one, in particular, a young Brit with thick, brown hair and big, emerald eyes. He had caught her attention the first time she saw him, the way he seemed to curiously look at every little detail, the way he genuinely laughed no matter the occasion. There was a childish aura around him - the world was a wonder, a mystery to him. She wanted to corrupt him. To see him blush and stutter as she felt up his cock through his pantaloons, unsure if he should reject her or embrace to ultimately stand awkwardly as she had his way with him.... to feel his hard cock against her, to see how much he wanted her, and finally command him to have her...
Just the thought invigorated her, her erect nipples poking at her already stretched uniform. She smiled and drew in a slow, cooling breath. She shouldn't show so much excitement to the admiral. it was after all, a serious procedure, not her own sexual desires manifest... Or so the admiral said. Her voice came out even and monotone:
"Cadet Ian Stone."
The admiral briefly paused from his work, calling onto his secretary. Soon enough the lad was brought in, looking as clueless as she had hoped. She had to muster up all of her strength not to giggle and assault him then and there. Having composed herself a second time, she finally addressed him.
"Ian. We've been looking over all of our new recruits, and we are particularly interested in you. You show a lot of promise and I am personally dedicating myself to dragging it all out."
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>>4531696
She was now walking towards him, his sheepish eyes betraying he was still just as puzzled, despite how attentively he seemed to listen. Before he could retort anything, she picked up once more:
"We'd like to include you in an elite program, very few cadets have the privilige of even knowing about, let alone partake. You will listen carefully and follow my commands precisely, and we will all walk out all the happier after. Is that understood? Good."
She was now face to face with him. She could see a genuine expression in his eyes and a hint of laughter on his lips too incredulous to still muster anything. Perfect.
"Now, Ian, You will kiss me."
"Wha-" - Before he could mutter even the beginning of a protest she had already plunged her tongue in his mouth, battling with his for supremacy. He tried pulling away at first, but her hand on the back of his head kept him in place and soon he gave way to protest and just focused on the warm sensation of her tongue on his.
When she pulled away, a thin strand of saliva kept them briefly connected. Her eyes flared:
"Catch me" - she commanded as she jumped against him. Only his quick reflexes managed to catch her in time, his hands settling on her back, her arms around his neck. She enveloped their lips once more, but this time he answered her kiss. All thought seized and the feeling washed over him - in that moment there was just her petite body in his arms, her arms and legs around him and her soft tongue on his. He focused on that and nothing else, his tongue dancing in tandem with hers, replying to her calls, chasing when she fled, twirling when she came to him. It felt like an eternity.
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>>4531699
She broke off the kiss but kept their lips pressed together for a bit, gazing in his eyes as she did. She smiled deviously, raising herself and taking off her coat, then shirt, then bra. Her voluptuous breasts were now directly in his face. He wanted so much to touch them, to feel their softness fill his hand, to hear her gasp as he squeezed them, to suck on them, to nibble them, to kiss them. She made him do all of those things and more, looking down at him as he pleased her, her hand gently twirling with his hair as he did.
"I knew I was right about you" - she finally said - "Bring me to the desk. He dutifully obeyed, laying her gently on a conveniently open space. "Undress".
Only now did he realize just how much his cock ached. He followed suit and as he pulled down his briefs, his throbbing cock springing into action. She looked at it, than him, and motioned him to approach with her fingers. When he was close enough, she placed her index finger on his cock, and drew it across his length, to the top of his shaft where a small amount of cum had leaked out. She carefully gathered it with her fingers and brought it to her mouth, tasting it as she looked at him. And then her laughter rang in the large office.
Her hand came back, this time grasping his cock and pulling it closer. He felt as if he'd explode at just her touch. Her entrance felt even warmer than her mouth, her lower lips seeming oh so inviting and accommodating of his building pressure to cum. She, seeming to see his pain, toyed with him, grinding his manhood against her to the point where he almost begged to fuck her. He was ready to damn it all, to go against orders and commands, to sacrifice it all, to lose it all, just to have her in that moment, to take perfection and joy that had been tangled in front of his eyes for so excruciatingly long now. And the said the sweetest word he had ever heard:
"Fuck me"
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>>4531703
Like a chained beast finally released, he pushed against her until all of his manhood had entered her, her eyes starting at him, half in incredulous surprise, half in animalistic pleasure. Every thrust of his sent a shockwave through her body down to the end of her fingertips. She was a manic mess now, her hands flinging left and right, mindless of what she knocked over, her eyes blind and unseeing. She never noticed her admiral undressing, just felt another cock filling her and responded with unabashed lust as he took him too and fucked her own mouth on the new cock in front of her. In what felt like a few, far too short moments it all ended with one final thrust, as she felt his warm seed spilling inside her. She was panting, the admirals own cum leaking out of her mouth.
She smiled, mostly to herself, warmly expecting a very fortuitous future.
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>>4531696
>>4531699
>>4531703
>>4531705
I like it. The writing's good, but it needs to be formatted better. Dividing it into paragraphs would make it much easier to read.
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>>4532136
Thank you.
And I am not sure why it ended up like that. I thought I had formatted it properly, but it ended up filling the page anyway...
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>>4530795
http://pastebin.com/5YLx9v32
Here. Hope I didn't make it too fluffy, but I went for that yandere feel where you'll love her or else.
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>>4532374
Yay Genghis, could I ask a story from you?

It would be the one I asked a while ago >>4459010 but if you want to write something different I can adjust to your writing preferences and ask for something else. Thanks in advance!
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>>4532512
Syaro is pretty close to loli which worries me a bit, but other than that, I could do it. Of course, if you wouldn't mind another character, I would have an easier time writing.
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File: Quetzalcoatl.jpg (1B, 486x500px)
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>>4532519
she has plenty of fanarts where you can see she's not that much of a loli, she's 14 years old. It's just the art of the series makes her look a bit like a loli (also she's shorter than the rest) buuuuut okay, if you're more comfortable with another character you can choose Syaro or:

What about Quetzalcoatl (or Lucoa-san) from Kobayashi-san chi no Maid Dragon?

She's the kind type and cares about people. Basically a sweet onee-san.

Main fetishes here would be clearly paizuri, butt rippling, nakadashi, breast feeding, paizuri, lactation, femdom, maybe some feet/leg work like in here https://nhentai.net/g/164104/ (you can also inspire yourself with the second half now that it suits the character totally) and finally, paizuri.

Yeah, I would die to titfuck Lucoa-san lots.
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>>4532579
more references to see more of her body.
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>>4532589
oh, and also. She has heterochromia just like this, it should be quite useful for you while writing.
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>>4532579
>>4532589
>>4532596
Lucoa is right up my alley, so I'll do something with her. Lots of paizuri and titty fetishes. I love that shit. Dunno if I can fit the foot stuff in, but the rest should be simple enough. Got anything in mind for an excuse plot or setup?
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>>4532579
>>4532589
>>4532596
Is this a hentai or is she just thicc?
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>>4532599
1 month have passed since she came to this world as I invited her to stay as much time as she'd like.

Naturally, I'm aroused to her as she's totally my type and I masturbate a lot while thinking about her being fucked by me while she cares and kisses me deeply; hoping she would say things like ''you're so cute'' or ''cum as much times as you want''.

One day, she suddenly asks about that (she's quite perceptive) and she teases me sweetly and stuff like in my dreams happen.

PS: If you cannot fulfill the feet stuff, you can replace it with some ass focus as she's thick there too (I also asked about ass-rippling so ww). Thigh-suffocating or something like that could be great too.
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>>4532609
Nay, she just thicc af.
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>>4532626
Shame, while there's likely a lot of R34 of her I'd love to see official animation of her thicc body naked.
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>>4532625
So a setup that's fairly similar to the one in the show. There'll be some ass focus, no worries about that. I mentioned the foot stuff simply because it's not as easy to fit into a scene as the others are, at least not for me. Is 3rd person narration fine?
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>>4532636
Exactly, if you're watching the show it's quite easy to ask doesn't it? ^^

And yeah, go ahead with 3rd person ~
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>>4532649
Sure. I'll try to get it done for the weekend, but it's a pretty big order. End of the week at the latest.
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>>4532652
I'm not in a rush dw, take all the time you need to write it plus the more time, the hotter it will be I suppose <:
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I just wanna say that you gentlemen have excellent taste by picking Lucoa
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>>4532672
Actually my favourite character is Kobayashi followed by Elma & Fafnir. But in fetish matters my decision is quite clear.
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>>4532374
I wouldn't have minded if it was a bit fluffier, but I deeply enjoyed it as is.

Wouldn't have minded an alternate end where the spell wore off partway through it and Robin took charge. Virgin leglocking impregnation is maximum lewd.
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>>4532737
>Virgin leglocking impregnation is maximum lewd.
You got that right. I did consider doing what you suggested, but based on the prompt I kept Tharja in control throughout to focus on just how nuts she is.
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>>4469481
Alright,I'm willing to take it.Sounds super hot.Anything in particular?
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>>4525251
I'm the one who originally requested the story, your doing gods work.
Also found out the writefag for that story frequents the "Whatever happens in the next image happens to you and you're the GIRL" threads.
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>>4532657
http://pastebin.com/qGnyZ0aF

Here you go. Hope you like it. I'm gonna need a break from femdom after this one though.
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>>4540560
OR,awesome work man! I'm so grateful srsly! You nailed everything I could imagine and I think you did read the doujin I gave you as a reference. I could see it.

Again, thank you very much and be sure to rest a bit from femdom, yeah!
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should we open a new thread? we're near 300 msg and page 8.
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>>4543222
Make a new one once the thread is in autosage and around page 8 or 9. There's no need yet.
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>>4543223
I see, thx
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