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why isnt there a full translation of Nudist Beach ni Shuugakuryokou

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why isnt there a full translation of Nudist Beach ni Shuugakuryokou de ?
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Lurk more.
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well i cant complain cause the last chapter was released 5 weeks ago
seems like the translator is busy
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>>4021151
lurk THE FUCK more
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>>4021125
YOU CUNT
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if someone cant post link to translated chapters 7 - 9 i would be very thankful
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>>4021237
As would I [different poster].

Also does any-one have a address for any archives w CBR or CBZ files?
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Here's 1 -7 http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP#0

and here's 8 and 9 http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/all
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>>4023285
You can download these as .zip files and then just rename the file extension to .cbr
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>>4025553

translation of 8 and 9 just uploaded 1 day ago? nice we are first to read the end
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>>3995886 is almost at bump limit so we can move here instead of making yet another thread.
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>>4029633
...Yeah. Archive for last thread >>3995886: https://archive.moe/h/thread/3995886/ or http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/

IRL workload for the past few weeks is done (sigh) so I'm back to cleaning and filling in the missing sfx/moans for the last 3 parts of >>4025553.

Nogard said he might try decensoring the tank scans and he's already redone a bit of redrawing for them.

Sands, the new ending text for each chapter needs translating, but I suspect it's only "chapter ___ end", etc.
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>>4032438
>Sands, the new ending text for each chapter needs translating, but I suspect it's only "chapter ___ end", etc
Correct. The first 8 chapters just say "End of chapter X".

The eighth chapter actually has two ending notes, the first one is "End of chapter 8" at page 220 in tank numbering, and then "The end [conclusion]" at page 224. The final page says "School trip to the yarimoku beach!! / The end".

The extra pages by the guest artists also need translating. I have done most of it. Need help with three things:

I can't make out some of the kanji in the top of the attached image.

秋穂ちゃんはもっと
いい??になれる。。。
??のJKは
みんなちゃんと
「女」でステキッス!

Guessing:
Akiho-chan is better this way, I think...
Nah, just kidding.
All your girls are beautiful!

I'm not sure about the translation of the second sentence in the bottom image.

シャイ娘の頃からお世話になってました!

Guessing:
I owe you for the the time with the shy girl.

I also don't know pronunciation of the two artists names. Several possible. Anyone know?
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>>4021125
I'm kinda new in these threads, so i hope no one will mind if I ask, is anyone re-editing text into glorious tank scans?
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>>4032705
Yes we still are, we've been working on it already. Either we release it on sadpanda as the entire thing or in parts again, but we might post the tank edits here first.

But we'll still release the magazine version of the last few parts on sadpanda. The delay for that is all my fault.

Right now, only the color part hasn't had its magazine raw released yet, hopefully I finish the last two black-and-white parts before that happens.

Mixing magazine and tankoubon versions is not allowed so we have to. But in the meantime you can read the magazine one here >>4025553.

>>4032504
Seems no one is scanning all of the extras properly, bummer. I'll edit what you and Nogard have translated of them, but most aren't high-quality enough to be included in the tank gallery.

Maybe I'll just post those here and put up a zip or imgur or separate torrent. Not to mention all the twitter sketches/previews.
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>>4032871
No problem,i was worried that no one will touch tank scans, now I'm glad I was wrong
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>>4032871
Just to make it clear, I don't know much about this project since I have no interest in the book, but a lot of people apparently do.

>Mixing magazine and tankoubon versions is not allowed so we have to.
I'm pretty sure you are allowed to mix sources. I have galleries that mix magazine and tank translations, and I've never had any trouble with that. The only thing that could happen is that once someone reedits the magazine chapters, they could replace your gallery, but since you're going to reedit them yourself, that shouldn't be an issue.

Working on the magazine version when the tank is out seems like a huge waste of everyone's time. If you're halfway done with a magazine chapter, I can understand if you want to finish and release that one, but I would urge against starting any new magazine chapter if the tank is available.

If you insist on not mixing the two, you should just drop whatever magazine chapter remains and make a new gallery for the tank version: one for chapter 1-8 (Magazine), one for chapter 9-10 (tankoubon). Then once you start reediting old chapters, you can either replace everything in the first gallery and delete the second one, or add them to the second one and keep the first around.


Again, I don't care about this title, and maybe I've misunderstood something since I've just read a few posts, but I wanted to point out that you shouldn't feel forced to worked with shitty magazine scans. I think everyone would be happier if you didn't.
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>>4033277
I agree with this.
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>>4033277
The magazine chapters still not on exhentai are all halfway done since they got the last two raw chapters early.
The imgur links have all of them translated and the last three ones are only missing the sex sounds, labels for sound effects and a bit of redrawing.
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>>4032438
>>4032871
Man, this decensoring is harder than I thought. I mean, I can do it, but only if you want the thing next year, ha, ha.

I can do some stuff for really crucial pages, but even copying the old clean jobs in is tough work.

Just let me know if there are any particular pages that really, really need work and I'll work on them.
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>>4033681
Well, just leave it to the veteran decensorers then. It's out of my league too. We better just work on our pages.

Maybe I could save up for a commission but not for quite some time, we can just get the tank out first.

We can at least have the tank assessed for decensoring costs through email, like what belldandy100 on blogspot offers (can't post a link because of spam filter). I'll try to get in touch.
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>>4033681
>>4034958
Bump, you all right guys?

It's okay, let the veterans handle the decensoring if it comes to that.
We did get this lovely uncensored pussy from the rusemaster himself at the start.

>>4032504
Seconding this
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Jesus God stop posting these threads, my dick can't take it
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>>4025553
Thanks lots
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I don't really care if shiwasunookina is male or female. He or she uploaded this photo, while making a Taiwan trip. Are those male or female fingers? Keep in mind, that those fingers created your favorite hentai manga including Nudist Beach ni Shuugakuryokou de.

https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/636128717190774784
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>>4043406
it's all fake anyways...

remember that pretty chinese girl singing so well at the beijing olympics?
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>>4043406
Who says they're his fingers?
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anyone know what the next work will be?
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>>4047131
Orgy on a spaceship, lol
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>>4047264
I'm okay with this! as long as it includes some version of the big titted teacher from the beach i'll be happy!
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>>4047264
This would be new and interesting for okina, I think all his works, especially all his tankoubons have been about highschool, or middle school.
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>>4047264
> Space, the final Fucktier. These are the voyages of the Starship Enterpussy. It's five year mission, to explore strange new positions, to seek out new partners and cultures, to boldly go where no orgasm has gone before!
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>>4021125

Over here bracing myself for the eventual disappointment of queen bee getting the anime license.
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>>4050924
Referring to Pisu Hame
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>>4050929
I feel you bro! Still bitter about them skipping over the cheerleader chapter!
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>>4050940
And not about them not animating shit but just showing moving stills? O.O
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>>4049063
His older works weren't. And that's not really true about his works on idols.
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>>4050915
>>4050942
If this ever gets animated the translators should get in touch with the subbers, or else do it themselves

Get a move on, guys
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>>4021125
T-theres at least a small chance this will get an animation, right? I need to see sensei getting it.
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>>4053181
You honestly believe Queen Bee is gonna do original animation?
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>>4025553
Thank you anon!
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>>4053181
It would be a novelty to hear voices
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>>4053181
Honest, just practice flash for 2 months and you are QueenBeer tier
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I'm just hoping someone eventually translates Okina's old stuff. I think I like his older style a bit more. http://exhentai.org/g/136181/e86d596c2c/ comes to mind.
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Will this thread just die? Should we continue with frequent shiwasu threads?
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>>4057016
still a lot of shiwasu works need a translation if people would do it
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>>4057016
Keep this alive until the translator anons quit slowpoking.
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>>4025553
just a head's up, the links to 8 and 9 don't work any more. main page opens, but clicking on any file 404's
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did someone say nudist beach?
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>>4057016
maybe if more one shots came out, but as it stands now discussion will always just loop back to nudist beach and peace hame.

>>4060180
we're really not going to get anything more than that Satsuki DTR image.
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One whole manga of vanilla sex. What a let down.
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This series had two moods:

-semi-realistic shyness with forbidden sex

-girls being total sluts as the you hit your whole class

the former really formed with the build-up over the first chapter then. peaked with the nerd girls. It fell apart with the next pair, switching it to the next mood. That peaked with the volleyball girls and was kind of boring by the final "main" girl.

I still want to see the last virgin and the girl who got skipped get banged in the hotel though.
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>>4060228
>It fell apart with the next pair
but Machi and Dainose are top tier, anon

And I'm pretty sure the airhead is a virgin too, or was until that night...
Fucking okina; he really owe us that final threesome
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>>4060210
The real letdown was everyone boning the class rep in a tent instead of an orgy out on the sand.
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>>4060173
http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/#0

Normal view is working fine. Don't know what's up with /all.

>>4060269
Sure the guys got to have their fun on the sand, but it's still blue-balling how short it is.
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Wonder is Okina will use the teacher again for another project. Still such a shame she got so little time. At least she was the only one to get anal.
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>>4060332
>>4025553
imgur just updated and the new layout is worse, and you can't change it normally. But here's a way to get the old layout back (for now)

1 to 7: http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP/layout/horizontal/#0

8 to 9: http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/layout/horizontal/#0

It works with these albums, but not all of them.
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I hope SNO goes back to some wacky shounen antics like Shining Musume or Pisu Hame with their next book.
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>sensei barely gets 3 pages
Why? Fucking faggot author.
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>>4025554
I'm trying to download the first gallery, but it won't work. Maybe it has too many images to generate the zip. I check exhentai regularly so I'll probably find your upload when you finish it
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So was there any possibility of the group actually doing the translations working on the other okina works? There are quite a few missing translations still.
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>>4067195
which ones?
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>>4067199
http://exhentai.org/g/136181/e86d596c2c/
http://exhentai.org/g/5435/96506650cd/
http://exhentai.org/g/94652/bf2dfcf3f3/
http://exhentai.org/g/144225/7d885ea324/
http://exhentai.org/g/811009/8c1c505c89/ last 10 pages of ch6. There are quite a few missing.
Love has to be a personal favorite of mine just because it was one of the first ever hentai manga I read. God 1997 was a long time ago.
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>>4064679
It works for me.
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>>4032504
It's an old post, but the thread is still fresh, so...
> ??のJKは
先生のJKは
"all of sensei's (=your) high school girls are just great women"

JK in Japanese means "joshi kousei" = "high school girl"
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>>4067357
Guess there's little to no interest in Okina's old works, huh?
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>>4069397
too old
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Someone who speaks Japanese should ask him if he plans to add any extra chapters like he did for pisu. I click on this thread just for the possibility of seeing the last two girls get it
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>>4069390
Thanks! That clears it up quite a bit. Looking at it again I see I have read もっと instead of きっと, and the other unknown word is probably 奥さん. So the whole thing would be

秋穂ちゃんはきっと
いい奥さんになれる・・・
先生のJKは
みんなちゃんと
「女」でステキッス!

Akiho-chan will surely make a fine wife.
Your high school girls are all beautiful women.
(I wonder if he's alluding to the adult versions of them, since it's 「女」 and not just 女.)

Any input on the questionable sentence in the bottom picture?
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>>4069920
Hey. Sorry for the silence, going through some shit right now. But still alive.
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>>4069920
>>4070778
don't suppose either of you have any plans on working on any of these, do you? >>4067357
such great work deserves attention too!
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>>4070808
If he's game I'm game, but it'll have to wait until after the beach tank is done. Also I have less time to spare, so maybe less frills.
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Have you heard about Kasuga399 work? He's drawn something similar, with a story in a nude college. I'm looking forward for translation and decensoring for this :
http://nhentai.net/g/122148/
http://nhentai.net/g/122149/
There's a following for this on R18 where they do nude Olympics.
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>>4070828
If anyone wants to translate I can likely do the editing. Not likely to the standard of yours truly though, but I'd be very happy to help.
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How long until this is finished, because I can only see the temporary translation for chapters 8-9.

Or is the project dead
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>>4071957
But this frame is from chapter 7, so now I'm confused. Is that just a symbol pic to anounce something completely new? Is it a tease for a sequel? :o
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>>4072178
Don't have any patience?
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>>4073566
new whatever.

twitter has a different story samples
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>>4067357
>>4070808
I can't access sad panda since forever so I don't know which works these are. At the moment I'm swamped but I can check it out if you give names or nhentai links.

>>4070899
No thanks.

>>4072178
There is no planned release date, but it's not abandoned. Other guy gets done when he gets done.
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>>4074771
http://nhentai.net/g/33350/
http://nhentai.net/g/1935/
http://nhentai.net/g/24276/
some here http://nhentai.net/g/112919/ http://nhentai.net/g/133466/ and my personal favorite
http://nhentai.net/g/32799/ was some of my first faps ever.
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>>4072178
You can't see or download it? Made mirrors:

1-7: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/lCz8XOuv/file.html
8-9: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/gVEHWn0f/file.html
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This really deserves an OVA.
(Not by Queen Bee though because they're trash)
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>>4084052
Queen Bee already mutilated other manga by Shiwasu no Okina. The same thing will happen here, probably.
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>>4084098
>this will never be properly animated
>have to settle for that tweening bullshit
life is shit
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>>4084098
Dunno if I'd call it mutilated... Maybe I'd call it "Too close to the original: pointless"
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>>4084098
Queen Bee was a perfect adaptation. Probably the best of Hentai manga adaptation ever.
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>>4084385
>Queen Bee was a perfect adaptation.
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26 new pages of beach confirmed, 28/10

Who can read moon?
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>>4084944
It says Okina... but not beach...?
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>>4084944
I thought the story was already over. Isn't that the reason it got a tankobon release?
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>>4084946
No idea.

Begins with "beach vacation" but might as well say "from the author that brought you...*** now his new story...***"
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>>4084944
女子中〇生に迫る手は
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Nope doesn't look like a continuation.
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also looks like a loli is the main character so also fuck okina for only giving us 4 pages of sensei. That beach thing looks like a booklet he'll sell at winter comiket.
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>>4084944
It's a different series, but about a school trip again, this time it seems to be set at a ryokan, Japanese style hotel.

"On the evening of the school trip... someone is reaching for middle school girls... first pages in color, a 26 page prologue!"
Shiwasu no Okina
[Noone is going to wake up]

>>4085048
Girl's last name is 来栖, which could be 10 different pronunciations or so, but let's call her Kisai.
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>>4085313
is there a set release date? Shiwasu no Okina is literally the only artist I try to follow.
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>>4085313
Ever happen to decide if you were going to do another okina tank possibly?
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>>4084385
>>4085313
Hey. Went through a bad spell for a while, but situation's improved now so I'll try to speed up. Always laaate...

We're never going to get higher-quality scans of the tank extras, are we? They must be out there.

At least here's one page translated. Going by the previous threads this is from an 8-page booklet.
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>>4088088
And the only reason we have it is SnO himself posted it on Twitter

Labels are based on the translation by Sands in http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4020522

>Kotegawa Ayame, 154 cm tall
>Even though she seems obsessed with Suemori, she's actually desperate for a boyfriend.
>She thinks that a serious, gentle guy would fit her, but if she becomes attracted to a brash guy it would just be confusing.
>Actually she has the face of a main heroine.
>(up arrow) From here up, straight hair.
>(down arrow) From here down, perm.
>D cup
>Well-shaped breasts, both the areolas and the nipples are beautiful
>Thick straight pubic hair

Ueda Keika, 163 cm tall

>Part of Suemori's trio, her role is to keep Kotegawa from worrying too much about Suemori.
>She's a cool and philosophical character, but is surprisingly uninhibited when it comes to sex, and likes to sleep around.
>If you get along with her, you might have a shot.
>B cup
>Slender model type body
>Vertically growing pubic hair (?)
>Darkish mons (?)

Adjusted it to make it fit and not cover up the art too much or more than the original. The last two items also confused me but I left them as is.

Proper scans for everything when?
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>>4088108
Glad to see your back, and hope everything is ok.
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>>4084098
Meant to link to >>4084374 not >>4084385, sorry Nogard.

>>4088108
Here's the rest of what extras we have which don't have a proper scan. Some have translations by Sands but he said they're "pretty bad". The rest still don't, I think?

http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003078
>Sensei was in a western porno.
>The woman doing the irrumatio with her was very helpful.

- "In porn" or "in a porn film", just one? Oh English.
- Maybe "This woman doing irrumatio with her was very helpful. She showed her the ropes".
- To me the helping bit sounds vague, maybe they got into bi stuff back then? This woman was one of Sensei's old gang and one of them was fondling her boobs. Must investigate further.

Trying this out next. A better translation would be nice despite the quality.
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>>4088155
http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003078
>top: XX-kun, Suomi-sensei (verb in past tense).
>bottom: oh! oooh!

What could this be about? Did the girls find the other beach? There's a thought balloon at bottom. Are the boys reacting to the girls?
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>>4088161
These don't have translations yet. Posting them in order they were first posted in here.

Are they part of another booklet, since >>4088108 has character sketches?

This looks like an afterword but it's not in the tank scan on sadpanda: http://exhentai.org/g/838653/812ab0a7e5/.
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>>4088168
Now some stuff that takes place between chapters, or maybe just chapter 1.
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>>4088170
I for one would have liked more interaction outside the tent, like in the intro.
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>>4088173
And of course a proper full class orgy, but we got separate ones, with unequal space at that.
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>>4088168
>>4088155
so criminal sensei's scene was so short. I really hope he reuses her at some point. I was honestly waiting for her the entire time.
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>>4088088
>>4088108
Oh boy new content.

>>4088179
Seconded on all points but at least MC didn't fuck her like he did all the girls.
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anybody interested in seeing SnO do some yaoi? with the class trip and idol group manga over it seems like recent opportunities have passed.
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>>4088233
Why is mc not fucking her a good thing? She's likely the most kinky. At least she'd be likely to do anal with him, since she does double anal later.
>>4076258
Was there actually talk of someone working on these? more okina is always a good thing.
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Okina just posted a poll on twitter. any idea what they're about? machine translation isn't helping.
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/658080583592091648
this one seems like what to draw next.
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/658188441339822080 any chance one of those are sensei?
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>>4088339
So the options are translated by google magic to:
44% Katagiri Sanae
56% Kamiya Nao

Those sound kinda familiar. Who are they again?
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>>4088351
From Idolmaster.

>>4088334
I like the setting and the sex but not the harem aspect, so at least it's not a total sweep, but that's just me.
And yeah she could have stepped in and kept him busy, but she only got horny by the end.
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>>4088168
Top: How did you like the "Class trip to the nudist beach!!" special bonus pamphlet?
At 2015-08-08, I will have a signing session in Akihabara at MOGURA for the release party, so please come and see me!
Also, August 1st I will DJ at Anikura TMA, if you come and check it out I will be really happy!

I announce information like this, indecent pictures, ongoing work with the movie, etc, on Twitter, so please check it out at @siwasunookuna! Later!

Left: Even though the other side was free they decided to put both shafts in the same hole.
Sensei: Mmh, Mh
sfx: streeetch

Bottom:
(Nud)ist beach class trip!! Specially made pamphlet
(??)/Hit publications
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>>4088625
>crossing swords
Sasuga fucking retarded japanese.
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>>4088155
>- "In porn" or "in a porn film", just one? Oh English.
I don't know. The line is possibly cut off. It does specify that it was western (non-censored) porn.

>- Maybe "This woman doing irrumatio with her was very helpful. She showed her the ropes".
I think helpful is referring to how she helps push sensei down, not in general.

Since it's discussing the porn, and sensei doesn't have her cap from the beach, perhaps it should be "doing the irrumatio scene".
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>>4088161
>What could this be about?

This sort of answers your question:
>>4088170
thought: Whahoo!! Awesome!! Taniguchi's crotch! I see it!!
sfx: haa, haa, haaa

Thank you so much for subscribing to Class trip to the nudist beach!!
In this special bonus pamphlet, I extended the part from the first half of the story when the boys in the class are excitedly peeping on the girls.
Then, in the newly added part where Suomi-sensei has sex, the western porno was something I really wanted to draw (?), so I hope you all enjoy it. /Shiwasu no Okina
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>>4088648
Someone seems to have transcribed it last thread but it's the same. http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003145

スオミ先生の
洋ポルノあるある

イマラチオをー緒に
ファックしてる女が
めっちゃ手伝う

Need translations for the speech and SFX again though I guess the speech is just mmh, mmhah, etc.

But thrust doesn't feel quite right here since the man isn't moving, maybe shove or push?
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>>4088648
Yeah, they're talking about how she's pushing her. Without the context, the best I can get is:

Sensei was in a western porn!
The other woman she was fucking with was super helpful with the oral stuff!
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>>4088971
I would pay quite a bit for that vid. Someone who can speak japanese should ask him on twitter if there's any chance at more sensei. I loved her sluttyness, overall design, and especially the heart pubic hair, heh. The fact that she's a freak doesn't hurt.
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>>4088988
No, someone should ask to work with a English Hentai publisher like Fakku to release Nudist Beach uncensored.
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>>4088971
What's your take on あるある? I've only seen it as an expression of sympathy when stuff goes bad for someone, like "It happens, don't worry about it". What is the meaning in this context?
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>>4088173
thought: Wooooh!! Ueda's cute little butt!! Both her ass and pussy in plain view!! In plain view...

Ueda: Isn't it (????) !
sfx: tee hee! (or possibly: shriek, squeal)
Ayame: Noo! Stop it with your silly antics!

Hina: OOoohh!
thought: My classmates... they are looking at it... my naked dick... they are really staring!!
Machi: It's throbbing a little, must be us.
Maria: So that's what your dick looks like... not like I expected... (?)

>>4088175
thought: Ah! Uncovered at last, Nogi's and Shizuha's bodies are super erotic!!
Nogi sfx: slurp slurp
Shizuha sfx: Aaaah!
guy sfx: thump thump
thought: So awesome!!

>>4088664
>Need translations for the speech and SFX again
sensei: achk, cough, mmph
sfx: shove, push
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>>4088990
Aun is not Wani
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>>4088971
>The other woman she was fucking with

Does that mean they were in a bisexual threesome, or just a plain one?
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How many shit manga
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>>4089115
>Aru-aru

You know better than me but after some google-fu, I came up with:

http://www.tanoshiijapanese.com/dictionary/stroke_order_details.cfm?entry_id=109174
Oh yeah
Of course it is so
It happens
It's possible
Don't worry, it happens
Cheer up, that's average

Apparently it's used on niconico and Twitter in the sense of "oh yeah", "uh huh", "totally" ("no kidding" implied, like "totally happened")
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Is Shiwasu no Okina the GOAT?
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>>4088088

I have both of them but I need to get a chance to scan them. Maybe tomorrow!
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>>4090195
Please do, because otherwise no one will
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>>4090555

sorry, here are some quickie cam pics
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>>4091086
Who's the token blonde nigger?
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>>4091093
i think the word you're looking for is ganguro
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>>4089115
Well "aru" in general basically just means "it exists," so it's used in a bunch of different teenage girl slang. You pointed out the "shit happens" use, but there's also just the excited teenage girl version of "something exists."

>>4089312
I'd assume bisexual, since the other woman was already helping push her mouth further down on a dick lol
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>>4084944
http://book.dmm.co.jp/detail/b120ahit00622/

Is this it?
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>>4091438
give us moar!
and in better quality!
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sorry bro i don't have anything else i just found this picture on this web http://www.hitpub.com/aun/contents/?page_id=21
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>>4091482
>http://www.hitpub.com/aun/contents/?page_id=21


11198b8c2 28767cd7ef820fc5e7 b29dc/M-863679. rar.html#

this seems to be the DL-link, but it's Premium only.
Any kind anon with a premium rapidgator-account willing to check it out?
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>>4091512
needs rapidgator and then .net/file/, then the number.
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>>4090195
>>4091083
>>4091085
>>4091085
>>4091086
Thank you! Cam pics are great but proper scans would be even better, so they will be consistent with >>4088108.

I hope you can scan them all including covers, I don't mind doing that page again.
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>>4091083
>>4091085
>>4091086
Wow, thanks. I thought we would never see these. I will start translating them.

Like Other guy said, proper scans would be great, if you have a flatbed scanner. If not, perhaps you could take pictures of the pages we already had? Some of them are pretty low quality (cropped, smudgy, with flash).
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>>4091086
Huh. I expected sensei to be the tallest because she's white.

And no naked tanlines, boo.
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>>4088108
>>4091083
>>4091085
>>4091086
Hey, main girl is missing. I guess she's on the page before >>4088108?

Hope you pull through with scans of this and the other one.
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>>4091083
TEGAWA TAEMI
172 cm tall

left face: Her face makes a boyish impression (?)
right shoulder: Muscular
left arm: Rounded breasts, pink in color
right arm: Roughly cut pubes
bottom: Before I draw Tegawa-san, I burn the image of Saorin (?) in my mind.
She is a high school girl, but more than that, she is unaware of the effect her sexual features has on members of the opposite sex, but her body is mature/ripe, and she is aware of her own attraction to boys and thinks that before long she ought to get some experience.


DAINOSE AI

This picture shows my first draft of Ai, when her eyes were still big.
165 cm tall

head: Her face and hairstyle parody the cool-type actress with the same first name. (TL note: This could be either Ai Hidaka or Ai Togo from Idolmaster.)
breasts: Low breasts. Somewhat darkish nipples and areolas.
pussy: Thick pubic hair. Doesn't care (about grooming).
bottom: Close friend of Taniguchi Akiho. They have different types/personalities but are always together.
Also frequently hangs out with Nagahima Hina, which has similar type/personality, but is completely different. (?)
Doesn't smile a lot and doesn't care for small talk.
She behaves this way since she considers her older brother, who is very loud and outgoing, to be someone to not look up to.
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>>4091083

NOGI KIINA

hair: Her hair is recklessly voluminous. The pigtail on the side is a reference to Shimamuu. (TL note: Uzuki Shimamura of Idolmaster)
breasts: Ample and chubby body type.
stomach: Tarepanda tits. (TL note: Tarepanda is a comic character, tare means droopy/saggy.)
leg: Shaves since she thinks her thin pubic hair is very unbecoming.

bottom: For masturbation, she uses Boys' Love (TL note: gay porn) as warm-up, and then pretty rough hardcore hentai manga to cum.
For example, being impregnated by older men.

153 cm tall.

Part of the female otaku duo. No experience with boys. Finds Naotatsu-kun agreeable. Can kind of talk with him.

In her friendship with Inui, she is the orekko. (TL note: less timid person)


INUI SHIZUHA

153 cm tall

Part of the female otaku duo. Cheerful, boisterous type who can't keep her distance. (?) Bokukko. Her manner of speaking is pretty intense, like a serious otaku. (?)

head: Shibafu-san style appearance. (? possibly the military illustrator Shibafu?)
pigtail: one layer (? is this line complete?)
shoulder: Does not cut her bangs in shokkaku style on purpose. (Because it would look too refined.)
breasts: Has nice tits. Even though she is an otaku girl, she has a nice body when she gets naked.
bottom: Thick pubic hair, which grows wild all the way back to her ass.
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Some of the kanji are really tough guesswork since they are so blurry. Anyone want to help out? Scanning Anon-san?

>>4088088
First, a fix for this: Darkish mons should be Darkish labia.

>>4091085
SUEMORI SANAKA

152 cm tall

hair: Long lower eyelashes
nipple: Oblong areolas. Small and round nipples.
pussy: Pubic hair is thin but grows sparsely towards her ass.
bottom: Has the position of class sweetheart. Everyone thinks she is is pure but she has a masochistic streak.
People idolize her and think she is unattainable, so she is being (??), but she thought losing her virginity whenever was no big deal.


NAGAHAMA HINA

156 cm tall

head: Sparkling smile.
ear: Thick eyebrows.
armpit: Lazily cut armpit hair.
stomach: Oblong tits. Pin-like nipples.
hip: Pubic hair grows wild.
bottom: The family name Nagahama is from Kyuushuu Banchou (???) Banchou. (Does anyone recognize this?)
Natural airhead, her underwear and bra are frequently visible, talks about her period in a loud voice. Gives superb handjobs.
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Nice. Still hoping for better, more complete scans of the two booklets.

>>4094547
>Her face makes a boyish impression (?)
Boyish face

>Rounded breasts, pink in color
Just the nipples?

>Roughly cut pubes
Roughly trimmed pubes

>I burn the image of Saorin (?) in my mind.
Beats me too. Maybe one of those Musume singers since he did a series on them?
All these references are going to be tricky for non-Japanese readers.

>Also frequently hangs out with Nagahima Hina, which has similar type/personality, but is completely different. (?)
Same... Huh? The three of them have pretty different personalities as it is.

>>4094548
>recklessly voluminous.
Wildly? But voluminous just means she has big or thick hair.

>Boys' Love
A fair few would know what that is so we didn't TL note that in ch2, but let's see if it fits.

>she is the orekko. (TL note: less timid person)
Much simpler compared to our old ch2 TL note on that and bokukko.

>shokkaku style
Uh?

>>4098017
>Darkish mons should be Darkish labia.
I figured as much.

>class sweetheart.
Better than class darling, which we used.

>Everyone thinks she is is pure but she has a masochistic streak.
But Nogi is the one with a masochistic streak.

>Lazily cut armpit hair.
Lazily trimmed armpit hair

>Gives superb handjobs.
Oh SnO you tease.
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>>4098050
>Just the nipples?
I guess. It just says "Rounded (beautiful) breasts. The color is also pink."

>Same... Huh? The three of them have pretty different personalities as it is.
Yeah, I have no idea what he's getting at here.

>Wildly? But voluminous just means she has big or thick hair.
Strike that. It should be "excessively voluminous".

>Much simpler compared to our old ch2 TL note on that and bokukko.
I think those notes were good, but perhaps they don't need to be repeated in full since people probably already read the previous chapters.

>shokkaku style
>Uh?
It's the name of the hair style. I don't know if it has a name in English. Search Google images for 触覚 if you want to see what it looks like.
The word means "tactile" usually, no idea why it is associated with this hairdo.

>But Nogi is the one with a masochistic streak.
I fucked up here, mixed up machismo with masochism. The word マッチョ (maccho) is also used to describe muscular body builders in Japanese. It should be "but she has a thing for buff guys."
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New work is a disgusting bald fat old man raping 16yo high-school students on booze.
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>>4021170
>autism
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What really got me into this was the presence of the male main char. You don't really see that in hentai, the dude is normally just out of the picture, but this one showed a lot of him. Any suggestions on hentai like this? It's pretty hard to find for me.
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>>4100010
most of Shiwasus work is like that. and there is a lot.
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>>4100619

Thanks for the scans anon
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Man, this manga is full of wasted potential. Sure the girls are hot but the sex is boring

>>4100010
Aibuka by the same author is great
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>>4100010

Almost everything by Yamatogawa.Power Play, Tayu Tayu etc.
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>>4100883
>the sex is boring
>sno

Really? IMO shiwasu no okina makes the least boring sex scenes.
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>>4100619
Thank you! The translations can just be revised or expanded as needed since the scan is nice and clear. I'll start working on them too.

Where is >>4100619 from? Is it a pre-order exclusive while >>4100632 is a store-exclusive, or are they both store-only?
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>>4100619
>>4100632
Are these two separate booklets? I'm trying to figure out how to organize this stuff.
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>>4101426

Yes, they are two separate booklets.

The first one, I'm not sure. I think it may have been a "first print" booklet? I got it from Manga-oh. But other people in other threads said they didn't get theirs in the first print. So I just named it "bonus booklet".

The other, with the sketches and commentary, is from Toranoana.
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>>4100619
You are a hero. I will rework the translations of the text I couldn't make out before and add all new pages as well.

>>4099823
Sort of. They are in chuugaku, so 15 at most. And they're not on booze, he uses the fact that they broke the rules to pressure them into not objecting.
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>>4101681
Gross.
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>>4100619
Thank you very much anon.
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>>4106869
>fat old men
Goddamnit. I'll read it because it's SnO, but I highly doubt I'll enjoy it
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>>4107001
It was OK when SnO did the kinda-fat onii-san.

Also, why are old fat men always so mean in eromanga? How come they are almost never nice?
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>>4107139
Hey. Done some work on the extras, waiting for Sands to give revisions and additions since he based their translation on the incomplete blurry pics.

Seems he's busy right now (too) so it would be great if you went over the parts without translations yet and checked the ones that do, using the clear scans.
I'll find a way to merge both of yours when he shows up since space is always an issue.

These don't have translations in this thread yet:
>>4100622 - left page
>>4100623 - everything except upper right
>>4100632 - whole page (can guess, but need an exact one for it and the copyright thing after SnO's name)
>>4100633 - right page
>>4100658 - right page
>>4100660 - whole page
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>>4106869
>bald fat old bastard raping literal childrens

When did Okina jumped to the shit side of the force?
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>>4101268
I believe he meant that the situations involving sex is the same: All girls are trying to "calm down" one guy. It brings down excitement, similar to how Petit Roid did with the whole "oh, gotta have sex with them else they will explode and destroy the whole city" scenario for 3 whole volumes.
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>>4106869
when are there going to be scans of it? I thought COMIC AUN released last month?
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>>4107217
Sorry for the wait. I still can't quite decipher Imari's bio, so I decided to post what I have as-is. Any help with that or other questionable lines appreciated. Here is all of the bonus content translated:

http://pastebin.com/2Yf4zaNJ
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>>4107602
Interested as well
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>>4107602
Yes, but sometimes it takes more than a month to the scan to appear.

There is that chinese website, where they scan all magazines very early, but you have to pay. I wanted to check if at least they already scanned the comic, but I can't remember the website...
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>>4107610
No. it's I who should apologize for the wait, to everyone.

Some puzzling parts there, will email you about my best guesses in a while. Especially:

>Our gracious fake foreigner character to which I added a fake foreigner component. (?)

Uhhh? Sensei's clearly a foreigner... Like you said, help with those lines would be nice, anyone?

Well, I'll double check the tank or any untranslated bits we missed, then it's all editing...
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>>4108043
It's Mikocon.

>>4107337
What I don't understand is why the other boys are left out for most of the story except for one little scene at the end.
Why make a nudist class trip when there's only one guy having sex while the others are standing around with their thumbs in their asses?

>>4107315
Ugh, the only thing missing to make it true shit would be a younger guy that gets NTRed.
Why can't we have nice chubby guys like the guy from Accel World in Hentai?
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/837525/939257b772/
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Yeah, it's NTR with a middle aged man. React.
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>>4109555
>>4109553
Oh fuck it. Full rape old bastard with a girl that looks 12 and her bf watching.

Okina ever went the deep end before? He's always been epitome of vanilla and happy sex afaik.
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>>4109553
>>4109555
Dropped before I started reading. Why do good authors have to jump the shitty NTR train? When will this trend finally stop?
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>>4109592
When people stop getting hard over it. I have no idea why, but there are a lot of people who enjoy NTR and are very vocal about that fact
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>>4109555
>>4109553
>>4106869
I smell Harem plot.
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>>4109725
only if the guy harems her boyfriend too
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Not sure if the girl will *fall* or resist the whole ordeal.

I think Okina will make her resist, just to make things interesting.
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>>4109589
> epitome of vanilla and happy sex

did you ever read Musume? shit like girls being whored around to "save" their friends, girls having orgy tentacle sex with a demon teddy bear.

Hell even their more recent material like "rape my fiance" and the golden shower scene in the idol one. Nudist Beach is pretty tame compared to most of their work.
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>>4108065
He comments on how she is from north Europe, but he calls her build American, and her mother tongue is not English (but she uses English in all her dialogue) - perhaps that's what he means is fake? Different parts of foreigner thrown together without making sense.

Awaiting your email.
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>>4110952
Sent some stuff.

We're still far from bump limit of 300 but in the future, someone could just make an Okina general for old and new stuff.
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ugh, if this is gonna be another old guy rape comic, they could at least make the guy look kinda cute like their k-on doujins
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This video was just posted: https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/669773919939727360

It seems the pages we've been seeing are from Comic Aun 2016 01...
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>>4109553
>>4113996
Is this vanilla?
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>>4114028
Are you trolling or just stupid?
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>>4114028
Looks like.

No threats no blackmail no alcohol no bf no drugs. Only age difference.
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>>4114106
Apparently you can't read facial expressions. In none of the panels is she enjoying it.
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>>4114107
Japanese women are supposed to shout and cry on sex unless they are big whores.
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>>4114119
She looks like she wants to die. Women only look that way in Hentai when they are raped or blackmailed.
Also, look at this:
>>4109555
This is obviously NTR. You're just delusional or trolling.
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>>4114125
The boy looking under the sheets probably has a crush on her, but isn't the bf.
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>>4114125
Not even him but I can't read one word of protest coming from her mouth just saying.
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>>4114129
So? It's still NTR then. He doesn't have to be her BF for it to be NTR.
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netorare depends of the point of view.
if the old guy is the mc and all monologues come from him, the most it could be its netori
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>>4114133
Okina doesn't make bad guys the MC.
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>>4114125
>wants to die
That's because we only got the first pages before both reach orgasm. The real fun begins after that.
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>>4113996
I can't find this chapter, let alone the first one.
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You guys are forgetting that most of the times girls end up enjoying being raped in hentai
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>>4119531
>>4119532
>>4119533
>>4119534
>>4119535
Yeah, totally not Rape / NTR. I hope that guy will get tortured and killed by all of them at the end.
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Stop this
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>>4119544
>>4119545
>>4119549
Oh?! I'm really sorry.

Really thought this was allowed, don't report pretty please I have static ip.

*leave the room quietly*
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He's going to rape her and nothing will happen to him even with all that people awaked.

Hentai logic strikes again...
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>>4119533
the age of SnO doing nice vanilla stuff is over, pack it up.
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Fuck just 13 pages!
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>>4119554
I don't think you can call his work "nice vanilla". It's not crazy mindrape NTR but it's not vanilla too.
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took a long dump, lets continue
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>>4119545
It is definitely not NTR tho
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guys I Need COMMENTS !
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>>4119558
more recent materials like pisu hame have been relatively vanilla compared to earlier stuff like 'guy loses his penis in black magic ritual and gets clones", even pochako was consensual sleeping sex.
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>>4119567
he think's she's lovely
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Sensei won't dare, don't worry
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And this is it, unless you fucks want chapter 2.

Dubs decide, trips confirm.
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>>4119578
Weren't you warned by Mikocon just now?
That's disgusting shit and it makes zero sense to me why a dozen people don't stop one filthy rapist.
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>>4119584
1. who's that? a mod?
2. they are pretending to sleep
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>>4119587
It's the admin. You will probably get a ban from them very soon.

Your explanation still makes no sense. No person outside of Hentai logic pretends to sleep when someone's about to be raped next to him, especially if there's a dozen people in the room.
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>>4119590
1 So be it.
2 Makes all sense for them.

If i dont post chp2 tonight i wont be home until sunday. Want or not want?
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>>4119594
Hell yes
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>>4119598
>98
fuck it., close enough
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Regardless of what this looks like, you should know right now that he won't break her
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>>4119613
You can scratch the netorare tag confirmed.
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For those of you ignorant ni japanese, she just said "yes" so it's consensual from now on.

No rape tag either sorry anons.
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blaaggghh, more people incoming
I wanted all for the hard working sensei
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Can't wait for the Tankobon version. I'll be sure to scan it 8k! I feel this isn't your generic NTR manga, perhaps the guy will man up and grow a huge dick!
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good thing is the couples will form 1to1 the best kind of future-proof sex
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"Director-san likes to play with pretty boys instead of girls"

Spooky hair principal is gonna make the blonde guy an adult man
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No chapter next month
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>>4119622
center panel is truly sleeping btw
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>>4119614
>>4119616
Honestly the sensei did a fine job as a patient & gentle lover.
Cant blame her for giving the green light to nakadashi.
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>>4119651
too soon.

Okina never did dark stuff before, why now?
I hope he can deliver but more important he better don't cave to vanillafags shils.
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Anyone else feels like throwing up?
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>>4119661
Yes. Whoever said this "isn't Netorare" "it's consensual" etc. is a retarded NTR fag himself. If this wasn't Hentai, the bald guy would be dead by now.

>>4119651
Pic related
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Meh...

The new story looks like shit, i want more Sensei from Nudist Beach.
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>>4119678
It's mind-break but not rape AFAIK.
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>>4119682
With any luck, there will be a female Sensei to help the students get rid of the old men's libido
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>>4119683
It is rape. Did it look like she wanted to have sex with Mr. Fugly instead of her childhood friend?

Her saying to cum inside doesn't make it consensual in the slightest.
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>>4119688
>her saying to cum inside doesn't make it consensual
But it explicitly means that is consensual.
She wasn't threatened, wtf dude.

>childhood friend
The guy had a semi-crush, how does that matter?
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It's too soon to categorize the story.
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>>4119691
>But it explicitly means that is consensual.
No, it doesn't. There's countless rape or blackmail Hentai where they scream it and still hate it.

>The guy had a semi-crush, how does that matter?
Him being there matters because this confirms it to be NTR.
And what makes you think that she didn't like him too and is okay with Mr. Fugly and friends assaulting them?

Honestly, why did Shiwasu no Okina come up with the idea to write such disgusting crap? This is Tsukino Jyogi / Boku no Yayoi all over again with a good Vanilla author making disgusting Rape and NTR shit, leading to a huge backlash.
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>>4119701
The backlash you talk about is utter bullshit.

And the blonde guy has a extremely minor role you can count his panels with your fingers.

>It's too soon to categorize the story.
seconded

Which group handles Okina stuff regularly?
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>>4119701
Fuck off. Tsukino Jyogi isn't even a top tier artist (and Boku no Yayoi has bad art) either way. Besides Okina has done NTR before.
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>>4119707
Doesn't count if you steal lesbians
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>>4119700
It's not. This is a rape camp for pedophiles, that's it. Not much else to categorize.
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>>4119710
What if Suomi sensei and the group are across the hall?
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>>4119562
>>4119627
>>4119622
I can already predict redhead will be the best laid


>2 dudes under the same futon
>one of them is about to suck off the other
disgusting homosexuals confirmed
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>>4109555
ok, jesus fucking christ japan what the fuck kind of kiss is that.
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>>4119763
NG kiss
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Too much unrealistic. A little girl like that can't possibly take an adult penis inside.

Possibly not even on her period yet.

I would much rather have a HS tit monster, or a tomboy if you love flat.
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Can we get a summary of what's going on?
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>>4119700
>too soon
It's over, only 2 chapters long. The blonde kid is implied to like the girl, but he never actually says it (even in monologues). It's definitely NTR, but it's extremely light NTR.
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>>4119630
>>4119636
>"You two, go ascertain if the rest of girls are sleeping properly"
>"Kurumi and I will keep each other company until morning"
>"O-ho"
>"Tanemura-sensei, you can service yourself with this guy's tight asshole"
>"That's a perfect idea, Sensei"
>>
Bump limit and still not done, oh boy.

Right, someone make a new thread? Okina general, something like that. Pressed for time right now.

In brief: I'm still occupied with Nudist Beach, and Sands said he might translate this new one if nobody else really wants to.
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>>4120119
Rape camp garbage confirmed.
This needs One Punch Man to obliterate every single one of these Pedos.

Why don't any of them resist this shit? Any explanations besides stupid Hentai logic?
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>>4120133
School expulsion.

All teachers wait this time of year because the students always fuck up in the annual trip.
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>>4119636
Chapter 2 japanese script

http://www.mediafire.com/download/7m72r2jy71gryxn/02.rar
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>>4120137
>School expulsion.

Yeah, Hentai logic. The only ones getting in trouble would be the teachers for sexually assaulting and raping their students.
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>>4120155
Absolutely wrong.
One teacher's word weights more than an entire class.
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>>4120161
You don't have a clue how reality works. Don't project from stupid Hentai logic to real life.
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>>4120164
Ignorant.
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>>4120164
If you think no teacher in the world has gotten away with molesting a child, you're the one with no clue about reality.
It's okay to just not like something, you don't have to try and discredit it as well.
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>>4120173
The thing is: There's a dozen people against one. Who do you think people would believe?
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>>4120201
Yes, in the perfect world where the kids would actually report it without fear of repercussion, sure.
I don't presume to know what's going on in the minds of someone's head in that situation, but I've been in highly emotionally-charged situations before, and I can tell you you generally don't have the wherewithal to think things through logically. Sitting behind a keyboard as you sip your hot cocoa while wrapped in a blanket, it's easy to say "Hah! Just call the cops!" but sitting in a closet watching someone get raped after your classmates just told a story about students getting expelled for getting caught in the girls' room at night is a different story.
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>>4120201
Girls don't count.
5 scared 15yo boys.
4 adults in position of authority.
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>>4120203
Was in a juvenile detention centre while someone get raped by a guard. No one lifted a finger to help.
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>>4120205
>Girls don't count.
Why? Because girls aren't humans?
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SnO's art is improving nicely.
A lot of hot shit can happen in the next chapters, hope it doesn't get as repetitive as nudist beach.
I don't mind the rape, even if the guys are pretty much ugly.
Thanks for uploading.
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>>4120210
Girls can't do nothing against the male teachers, even less if scared.

>>4120201
Shit happens.

- 100% sure the new teacher will take that boy's anal virginity. Hope he use a condom at least.
- The two guys under the blanket will be revealed as homos and have sex with each other.
- The bunch in the closet will get horny and have a foursome.

This covers chapters 3-4-5.
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>>4120218
- Forgot the 2 teachers vs blonde girl and redhead.

yup, all mapped to chapter 6
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Guys, it's 2 chapters long, that's it.
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>>4120224
I would be fine with it shitcanned and cancelled, honestly. New series get cancelled often after one or two chapters. Same thing happened with Tsukino Jyogi and his MILF apartment series after chapter one.
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>>4120226
It's not cancelled, it was planned to be 2 chapters long and that's it.
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>>4120227
Even better then.
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>>4120227
Where the hell did you get this? Okina said it's a series. Check his Twitter page.
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>>4120232
The chapters are labeled 前編 and 後編. 後編 means "last part."
Also, Okina is literally tweeting right now about the character design for his next series (he's worried that the heroine is too similar to Kashima from kancolle and is asking if he should leave it as is or change it)
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>>4120227
I knew Okina was gonna pussy out.

He could have left it ambivalent. As of chapter 2 ends, the whole group is screwed without hope.

Still, I hate middle grounds. Okina severely went down a bunch of steps as an author.
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>>4120241
He knew that it would just piss people off to see more of this crap, so he stopped. I hope he learned to not jump on the NTR band waggon again
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>>4120246
dude you are never gonna convince anyone not even yourself
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>>4120248
With what? That Shiwasu no Okina stopped because of negative feedback?

What else reason should there be?
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>>4120246
Go translate the color pages of Yayoi.

chop chop
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>>4120250
Why should I?
Fakku will do it. See:
>>4118928
>>What about Boku no Yayoi then?
>I'd love to release that book, I'll suggest it to the team and see if we can make it happen (the next few titles are lined up already). Since that one has an anime going it'll be interesting to see how it impacts sales.

Also, how did you recognize me as the guy who did chapter 8?
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>>4120234
That is for C89. That Japanese characters only mean first and second chapters. It is very common a lot of artists will take a break to prepare for Comiket.
>>4120250
Fuck off. That will probably be licensed by Fakku anyway.
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>>4120257
>>4120258
Your pussy level is showing that's why.
Be it /a/ or /h/ anyone can spot you after a single line.
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>he thinks over 5000 browse the board
>in fact its 20 samefags
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Tachibana had a nice harem ending anyone who thinks otherwise is a fag.
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>>4120129
thank you for doing this
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>>4120264
Tachibana is overrated. The aspects that made it good is not even done by the author like shadowing.
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>>4120258
>That Japanese characters only mean first and second chapters.
No they don't. 前編 and 後編 are only used for 2 or 3 part series (if 3 parts, there will be a 中編 in the middle). 後編 always means the end.
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>>4120260
I'm rarely posting on /a/, so you just took a wild guess and were right for once.
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>>4120276
>>4120257
He's using a script.
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>>4120278
What script?
That wouldn't really work since I'm using a different device than I usually do right now for posting.
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>>4120234
>The chapters are labeled 前編 and 後編. 後編 means "last part."
Yes. However, the page which had this label is missing in this upload. It should be before 02 (01). Blurry screen grab from Twitter attached.

>>4119658
>Okina never did dark stuff before, why now?
>>4119701
>a good Vanilla author making disgusting Rape
SnO's most famous work Shining Musume is basically 1500 pages of rape. It's not exactly a new thing.
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>All this vanillafags scum screaming rape and pedo
Get the fuck out.
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>>4120671
RAPE and PEDO!
Without a bear, yes, but I guess that janitor-teacher passes as one on a passing glance.
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