Comments and feedback appreciated

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>>8916950
i look forward to seeing more of your novel OP.
if anything it needs more tinier font obscuring more of the image.

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>>8916950
Way to fucking small OP...

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how the fuck are you supposed to read this shit
buy a better screen op

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And finally 11/11 hope you enjoyed!

Op here, Im doing it on some shirty video creator on my phone so I know quality is shit, if they are well received I'll find another way of converting the gifs for better quality, thanks though

>>8916950
What the fuck are you doing you idiot?

You can't even read the wall of fucking text the font is tiny.
I can't even see whats behind it either.

works fine for me.. I can see it fine, maybe it's not uploaded right.. cunt

how the fuck are you meant to read any of this dude

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hola all rafi from india here i came four point five times while reading this thread
you have inspired me to create a video image of my own

hope u all like it
rafi

this is the best thread i've ever seen on this board

OP I can read it fine, a larger format would be nice though. Sexy caps too in my opinion, more please.

>>8917488
Came to fap. Not strain my eyes on this book.

B^U

Cant read shit

>>8917488
kek

>>8917488

i came, rafi 4 prez

>>8916999
*hole

>>8917488
Checked and keked

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HOLY SHIT! you need to make sure to add "ANTS ONLY" in the original post OP. Fucking shit dude.
make your gifs a HELL OF A LOT bigger and make your txt bigger. im not gana put in the mild effort to read your ant novel.

What's the scene on OP?

>>8916950
your stuff isnt bad, but its way too long. try for some concision

just one faggots opinion

>>8916950
First of all, fuck these guys. At the very least, you're trying and making new content, which is better than most can say.

Second, I agree, though, that text is hard to read. Maybe try adding a solid colored box below the image and put the text there, a little bigger?

Third, the obvious views of the tits and vagina don't fit with the story. Try to find gifs that obscure the lady bits with angles and stuff.

>>8926065
No, gay porn is gay

>>8916950
What the fuck is wrong with you?
Tiny fucking gifs with tiny fucking text you can't even read.
Probably grade school level writing too but I guess we'll never know.

>>8916950
First of all, christy mack is fucking disgusting and ugly and anyone who likes her has shit taste

Second, that text is too small

Make these into webms with twice the resolution and you are golden

>>8916950
please change the font to something more easy to read there is either too much text or too small letters

despite that nice writing

and please upload the whole thing together as a webm or something. The font is making my eyes popout