Alice Madness Returns SFM
>>10215648
How do you make these? What mods?
>>10217931
>How do you make these?
SFM. Just like he said.
just made this today any pointers?
>>10220555
You've really been making the rounds, nice animation.
>>10220555
Yes, stop posting your work everywhere.
Also, control your collar bones. Look at the Francis model - there's these things called twist bones, use them. Reduce camera motion and make it come back to the loop start point. Add a little bit of finger motion. Rotate the pelvis upwards on impact and adjust the rest of the spine accordingly. Translate the lower spine bone towards the pelvis slightly on impact to make the spine look a bit more bendy. Delay upper body motion to simulate resistance to impact forces. Animate the penis so that it stays in the vagina.
WHY DONT YOU TRY TO GIVE HER FACIAL EXPRESSIONS? you know like zone does
>>10220555
holy cow that ribcage doe. Yes the lower ribcage is anatomically close to the surface but even on skinny dudes you dont see em that detailed especially in a bent in stance. Id invest the time or the 20 bucks to make a not super ugly model.
>>10223492
Er...
>>10225241
>That waist
Holy shit
>>10225991
>Cock as wide as her nose
Wat.
>>10226013
Are you saying her nose is big or the cock is small?
>>10226025
The proportions just seem way off. I'm not sure if she's some kind of giantess in this or if this guy is scrawny as fuck.
>>10226026
It's straight shota so it's a little boy dick.
>>10226034
Damn that little boy has pretty decent abdominal and pectoral definition for his age.
>>10226045
I don't actually see any tone personally, just a flat kid torso.
>>10225241
Is there one without the horrible music?
>>10226983
You could just mute it.
>>10220555
Why did you have to break her left arm?
>>10220555
The guy's arms are absolutely retarded and the hands are there just to be there, they're not holding anything. The same issues apply to Samus' arms, and the one in the foreground jumps in and out of the elbow socket. Work on this because otherwise it's not bad.
Other minor mistakes: you overdid the guy's abdomen muscles, that's what it would look like on a very low fat % *female* bodybuilder. Also try to do something with the penis, it's too rigid while changing its position too much, making it look like Samus is really loose.
Good luck and have fun, this is the most important thing.