What do you think?
ask /fa/ but for me im on the fence about it- i feel like it may work better on a white tee and some nit picky things but i cant pin point what exactly
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This is really tight anon, good stuff.
Couple of small things:
- The skin marks on the knees being mirrored irks me.
- Experiment with the typeface used for the copy below 'House' it doesn't look right to me repeating, but take it or leave it.
- The kerning on 'Little' at the top is super tight to the point where it touches, 'House' doesn't.
- The woman isn't centred to the T and kind of throws the design off for me, especially with the bottom of the bull skull looking like it should sit directly centred to the foot of the T.
Also I'm personally not a fan of 'Doing Text With Every First Letter Capitalised' but each to their own.
Hope some of this helps, and good job.
Looks really fucking good, but maybe rethink the font. Just my two cents.