suggestions ?

>>314111
looks like a g but i kinda like it maybe make some variations with pen and paper first

I definitely wouldn't have read it as an S if you didn't point it out. Try making the top "tail" thinner, it's weighted far too heavily compared to the rest.

>>314111
Just rotate it

>>314111
Not to be crude and discouraging, but it sort of looks like a stylized vulva.

>>314111
>drew a curve with a weight profile

It's a logo! everything's a logo!

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>>314111

There is a popular salty liquorice treat in Finland called Sisu. The logo looks like it spells out "Gifu" which is what many people jokingly call it as well. Pic very related.

>>314135
That is literally the same S. What?

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>>314111
Rap group from Mexico

>>314135
OP, I'd say go back to the drawing board.

>>314119
Yeah, OP, go back to the drawing board.

>>314111
You made a vagina that is turned 90*

>>314136
It's literally just a Fraktur S.

>>314156
i think what >>314135 was implying is that even though every single finn knows it's called "Sisu", people are just can't see fraktur intuitively.
We know it's an S but always perceive it as a G

looks like piece of shit, or a ree shit throwing pepe