Rate my business card /gd/. just fuck me up like I know you can.

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I would reposition the "JC" and put way more down within that frame. Also maybe not in a bold font, that makes it a bit hard to read on first sight.
Keep in mind how the result will look like and not where the outline of the letter is while editing it.
Remove the black border around the brown part. Your info a tad smaller and more into the corner.
The banner thing also smaller, you need more empty space. And overall that grey border around it seems unnecessary.

Also is "Keep il Simple" intentional? You should do what your motto says honestly.
And since when is almost a square a good format for a business card?

By the way, the colors make it look like the business card of a chocolate store or something.

Its a front and back vertical card. Not a square. the grey border is because I just took a screen shot of my AI file for the purpose of this post.

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>>307748
front

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>>307748
back

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>>307748
actual

>>307750
Sorry, I'm on very little sleep. The unusual vertical direction was a bit too much for my brain right now.

Well then I would anyways make the arm of the "t" thicker. And the stuff about the logo still applies. Also I would put the info a little bit lower and well, change the font.

>>307754
All good. I'm sure this whole board is on very little sleep lol. Thanks for the feedback.

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>>307746
it's shit

>graphic designer
>can't even design his business card

>>307746
The fonts look like they have 0 intent. Try different thickness maybe on the lower type? Looks like it would be better with top being bold bottom being light. Also you should center the text since you have that line and the logo centered on the card. The colors have similar values as well light back and darker type usually look more profesional. Unless you are going high contrast like black and white or some other very light color for the type.

EY YO E YO DAWGS. KEEP ILL SIMPLE!! CAUSE IYEM DA ILLEST!

- 4 fonts? why four?

- business gift chocolate wrapper design

- logo could need a bottom background under the JC

- it is simple, try to tweak some stuff and you are doing alright, only the slogan kind of sucks.

ILL DESIGNA OUT!

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>>307746
try to do more with the logo because it's a pretty good one.
ditch 'keep it simple'. it's distracting and doesn't say much. if you truly want to keep it simple than you wouldn't have added it in the first place
pick a better font, don't do that small caps bullshit

here's something quick

>>307818
infinitely better

>>307818
This guy's take is nicer, and his points are spot-on. You don't need the hexagon around the circle-JC, either, I think, as evidenced by the backside this anon did.

>>307746
>These are already printed and being used by the way
You dense motherfucker. I hope you didn't spend too much on them.

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>>307818

>>307905
Yup

>>307746

>>308659
please use some lowercase

>>308659
I feel threatened by that card.

>>308659
stop yelling at me!!!!

>>307746
Which font did you use?

>>307746
at first all i could see was an r in that hexagaon

"Improved" versions are boring and monotonous. While OPs has a lot of room for improvement, particularly in the vague and awkward logo, the colors and layout are interesting and keep signal to noise in check.

Seriously, just position the elements a little better (like the comment about putting the info In the lower left) and make make the presence of the JC more apparent In the logo.

Overall, not too shabby.

>>309043
shut up idiot

you are supposed to be a graphic designer yet it looks like the kind of business card a morgue would give you.

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i want an explanation of why this graphic designer didn't design his own card

>>307905
this is the only good one here. why is this board full of useless kids who can't design sht