so my visual graphics class is supposed to make something related to the pause symbol, and this is what i came up with. so please critique it and give me ideas on how to improve it
>>304897
>had to make something related to the pause symbol
>made a pause symbol
also y u gotta export previews at 6k?
>>304897
What are you trying to express?
When I'm asking this question as a prompt rather than out of sheer confusion, then it will be improved.
[spoiler]just make a language-neutral stop or yield sign[/spoiler]
>>304914
desu i really don't know what i want to express.
I just did it cause i liked the design, there really isnt anything behind it like some secret meaning
>>304920
It will be improved if you design with a reason in mind. You don't have to go full Banksy or anything, and even "I wanted to juxtapose (whatever) aesthetic with (whatever) subject" is a start; the important thing is understanding why you did what you did so that in the future you can understand what other people will consider good choices.
Can nobody see the pink mistake under the right rectangle?
>>304897
>had to make something related to the pause symbol
Worst assignement ever...
>>304929
nobody gives enough of a shit to zoom in mate.
>>304937
ikr. these people are running out of ideas
>>304929
o shit thanks mate, ill fix that
Nothing nee...Radio Television Luxemburg 2 Logo
>>305462
>using a pause buttom as logo
There's a critique thread you cunt. Fuck off.
>>305462
"Radio Television Luxemburg 2" lol
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RTL_II
maybe switch it up to some watery colours?
could be a nice juxtaposition
Water - flowing - in motion, paused in these wavey shapes