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>>303225
No, thanks
It's creepy af

The first one is rough, I think mainly because you chose to limit your palette. In areas where a more subtle shade would have been appropriate, say for instance under the left guy's jawline, you sort of painted yourself into a corner and used a blobby strip of the warm black you chose. I understand the desire to limit your palette to a few colors and the hesitance to stray outside of it, but the first set could really benefit from a broader spectrum.

I think you found your strength with Emeritus. You took liberties with the details and opted for stylization over photorealism, and stylization usually translates better to vector work. You kept your lines crisp and smooth, and the style has an almost Archer-esque cleanliness about it. It doesn't suffer at all the depth of shading vs. restrictive palette issues of the first set. And that's not because you couldn't have gone ahead and used a ton of grays and slates and off-whites, it's because you deliberately chose not to. I think you rightfully recognized that less was more, and it really contributed to the polish and consistency of the final product.

>>303224
I rate it unsalable, or NeverGonnaMakeIt.

>>303241
you are ignorant
its papadopdopaoposlpoalous
from Ghost.

>>303224
my smolbean has a beard why

>>303224
Concept is trite, execution is mediocre, palette is unappealing, result is uninteresting.

>>303225
Every bit as bad as the first, except with an extra layer of edgelord.

Bonus: your logo is shit, and plastering it on your bland art for 4chan to see is embarrassing. Looks like you're overly proud of yourself.

Not even trying to troll you or be mean. You probably have potential, you just need to lurk moar and find something better to work on.

>>303224
Your designs aren't bad at all. I think the designs are interesting and they caught my eye while scrolling through the catalog. They're not perfect, but no one's work is.

If you want worthwhile feedback go somewhere less self fellating