Not enough white space and the design is too cluttered. Too much

Some people like excess white space. Like me.

>>301661
Try a very slight gradient per panel? You do not. Need more items on the pages though

White space creates sections in your design. In the example you posted, there are "products" sections that I feel need more white space above and below.

>>301661
The design is cluttered.Use whitespace and lack of it to group items.
Include what is necessary, leave out what is not.
e.g. Last section has Navigate, Help Desk, Find the Nearest Store.
I'd use "Sitemap, Contact Us, Stores"
There is no "Desk". People only will look at "Stores" because they want to find one.
"Contact Details" or "Contact Address" would be under the Sitemap not "Find-Contact Us"

>>302010
...also as a further example, just from the bottom section again - the prominence given to the "Submit" and "Join" are the same as the section headings! Remove word redundancy as mentioned (also "Join our Newsletter" to "Get Newsletter" 1. You're not going to be sending them someone else's newsletter so "our" is redundant, and 2. No one "joins" a newsletter, they "receive" or "get" one)
Then I would increase the prominence of the headings relative to the "Submit" "Join"

>>301661
Mark overlaps with shadows, shadows add slight gradients, white becomes just enough

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Are you using a vertical grid? That might help you.

I tend to be fairly formulaic with how I space 'sections'. So usually somewhere between 50 - 100px top and bottom of a section of content. Keep it consistent either way because it will make it easier to develop - it should always be the same value.

I hope that makes sense?

>>301661
It's fine. The sections just need a little vertical breathing room.

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Kill these shits

>>301661
i think it looks like sex

>>302145
Yeah i was going to suggest this

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>>301661
My I ask how are u gonna code this, are you gonna use svg clippings?

Also, do you have the mobile version?

>>302679
this