would Frutiger be proud of me?

if not, how could I step up the game?

Frutiger was a typeface designer so he probs wouldn't have given a shit desu senpai

The big letters look awesome. Great balance and positioning. The little alphabet and nametag look off though. They look like they're not aligned to anything in particular.

>>299142
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ya is good op

>>299132
Bretty gud, but could use more white balancing, OP.

The white space underneath the V is way too generous if you compare it to the rest of the poster. That with the fact that the small type cannot be parallel to both sides of the V makes me want to switch that letter for something more straight, but that might just be my OCD triggering.

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>>299196
I finally went with this, theres less movement because I removed all obliques but I think it blend a little bit better. It's 22x29 by the way.

>>299252
this is an improvement. the small type on the u isn't quite there yet.

>>299252
nice one dude!

>>299252

I enjoyed the obliques, OP. What is the purpose of the poster? Does it have to work as a type specimen? I wouldn't advise my students to strain the eye so much on the small type.

Also, the reduced white space now made the right-most letter stand out way too much, i'd look into that. Making progress though, keep it up.

>>299310

To add onto my own comment, i'd try using that dark blot as a space for the small type, it will give you a single area in which to introduce all the information you need, and will also help alleviate it's prominence.

So anon, what am I looking at here?