I remade my logo. Did it get worse or better?

>>289203
Not terrible. Try taking the outline of the head off

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>>289204
Better?

>>289220
It should look good on black backgrounds. I like its decent

are you using the reflect tool? it looks uneven on the right side of the mouth compared to the left side but I'm viewing this on my phone so I might be misjudging it.

>>289229
>reflect tool
Not exactly. I am still learning so I just copied paths on one side, flipped it and stitch them together afterwards.

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>>289229
I agree, the top of the right side looks too tall

>>289232

ah okay, yeah you definitely should use the reflect tool then combine the reflection with the original using the shape builder tool or the pathfinder merge tool.

these features are really simple to get started using, I recommend youtubing them. They'll save you a lot of time and effort needed in precision of lining up paths.

>>289203
it got worse :c

>>289203
well how would it look in pure black and white?

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>>289203
Make it sharper. I would ditch the red lines behind the head.

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>>289799
updated

>>289811
place x on the eyes and make the mouth oulined not filled with black like the face

>>289799
>>289811


looks like a furry

>>289830
From the start of OP's image, I felt the theme was furry-ish with sonic overtones from the beginning.

I am simply amplifying what I think is already there.

>>289203
>I remade my logo. Did it get worse or better?

Try removing the outline and use the lightning from the old logo.

>>289203
Are you selling fursuits?

j/k, I like it.

>>289811
The x on his forehead evokes Charles Manson, nix that.

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>>289799
>>289811
That reminds me of some kind of metal bad, I still want to keep some friendly aesthetics and color.
>>289830
>>289885
The logo originated from my love of "Warrior Cats". When you take one of the books you can still see a slight resemblance.

>>289940
No.

I fixed it up a bit now i am happy with it.

>>289952
Glad I'm not the only Warriorsfag on /gd/.

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>>289952
I'd say the shape on these
>>289799
>>289811
look better

>I still want to keep some friendly aesthetics and color
Yeah but every logo needs to look good on black and white you dodo, you can keep the colours if you want but the more dynamic outline of that other anon's idea just looks better and more striking

Also I'm not sure about the colours anyway, they look too vague almost.
They don't go well together because they are both pretty light, so I tried making the outlight a bit darker

Also >jaggies because I can't be bothered opening Illustrator rn

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>>289952
Well, this brings my project to a close. Thanks for sharing your logo.

pic related.

>>289994
Not a fan of the eyes but the sharper teeth are looking like a good addition

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>>289995

I wanted to try using extended "Xs" that fall within the borders of the eye. This is just a plan "X"

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>>289997
Just messing around

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>>290079
HERETIC