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Labels, packaging

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Hey,
need some critiques for my new design.
Those are labels for my homemade liquors.
What do you think?
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>>271486
All variations of labels:
Cherry, Plum, Lemon, Gooseberry, Orange
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Nice anon
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>>271488
i think it's a little boring (specially for young people) but it depends of your target market. also the font makes the text difficult to read and the logo could need some final details.
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>>271486

I don't think it's boring; it's static, but not boring. Great design imo, considering that you put the most important information on the front. I think that the fruit cut might not be visible, but you can put some kind of a white paper bar (maybe half of the height of the jar).

And btw, what font is it?
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>>271486
Super cute. Nice job.
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First, I would rethink the packaging choice. I can see why you chose jars, they communicate a homemade feel but I think they contradict the alcohol aspect of the product. It could be a little confusing to the consumer at first glance. I would do a little research on what similar products are using to package their alcoholic beverages.

Second, I would maybe bump up the weight of the font to increase the readability. You might want to consider combining two typeface; I like the original choice but it might be beneficial to change the font for the product description on the lid.

Third, I think if you keep the jars, a change in lid color coordinating with the flavor would be a nice touch.

These are all small critiques, overall this is a really clean and well thought out design. Nice job!
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>>271486
Pretty nice overall but have you considered/consulted the printing? There's quite abit of orphans in the designs..
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