tear my hard work apart

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also this variation

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>>268447
(assuming it's not bait)
don't use gradients and/or flares on text (unless you have experience)
don't use dark background with dark text and/or a pure white background
it's too boring to look at try adding some contrast (not literally for example changing the size of the word "the")
add space on the sides so it doesn't look cut out
and the font is pretty bad (13 yrl old youtube tier kinda bad)

your use of gradient on the text kicks my butt, the font is the one my friend chose and its on a plain white/dark background just as a base so they can use it on whatever they want! i like the rearranged text u did, idk what u meant by bait

>>268447
I like it but the glow in the light should be way more subtle.

Bait means a post to get attention and responds with something that's fake or bs. Your work is super flat and the text is too long if it's meant to be put on something. Keep it condensed and smaller like the other guy did.

Okay thanks! u guys are reallly helpful!