Personal Logos

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Was thinking about using this a couple of weeks ago, but grew a brain and realised that it is just so fucking plebtier.

trying to come up with something better, but have too much other work coming in so I don't really have time to focus on it...

First name starts with M.

>>264075
>grew a brain and realised that it is just so fucking plebtier.

yup
is it always you who kept posting variations of this?

just grab a blank sheet of paper and do something completely different - from scratch

do at least three
put them aside for a day or two, and break out your same rote format

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>>264073
I love this. Something's off about it though. Might be that the logo is to thick. Not sure. Love where you're going with it though.

>>264075
Have you tried making it look more like an M? I get that you're going for the implied shape, but maybe just a bit less implication would make it more unique.

Here's mine that I've been playing with. I only just decided to start doing some freelance work. Looking for a harsh critique

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little rip off but meh

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I've been using this, but I really think I should just drop the logo entirely. I don't do much freelance anyway.

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>>264156
Thanks. Thought about what you said, and made some changes. I'm not sure which one i like more

>>264171
I dont like looking at this any larger than coin-sized. Small it looks fine, but any larger and its rough on my eyes.

>>264172
This is great. I bet this looks awesome on a business card

>>264176
I feel the same...

>>264075
It's very "Autodesk" looking

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>>264156
It may just be me, but I see a pair of testicles.

>>264171
What's going on with picture related?

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>>264073

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>>264122
>is it always you who kept posting variations of this?
I posted my old logo a couple of weeks ago
>>256317
If that's what you mean, have not posted any variations of this logo before though.

But I know how to design a logo, I usually sketch 15-20 variations of a logo before going forward, I just don't have time at the moment.

Was going to take time off, at the time I posted the first image, to rebrand myself completely from scratch, but I got too much work lined up. Will probably do that at the end of summer when it dies down. The above image was part of my first spur of ideas that came out of trying to incorporate the 3D side of my business with the graphic design side.

Appriciate the critique though, good to know I made the right choice in scrapping the idea. Will probably be back with the new concept showing it off to get some feedback once I get time off in the summer.

>>264156
Thanks for the feedback, and will take that into account once I restart the project.
And right back at you I don't really like the font. I would play around with it and maybe even go for a serif-font.

The mark shows real problems in the way you've used the pentool. Pic related.

Makes me think of a heart or brain, possibly both.

>>264171
I'm emailing TSM right now so they can sue you. Have fun.

>>264075
>>264171
>>264172
>>264184
consider suicide

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not personal but r8 this one i just made for a guy from wsr.

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This is mostly a placeholder for a logo of the ideology I want to represent... Fascism

>>264403
>reverse search tumblr blog
>it's half polandball comics and half Steven Universe fanart

lmao, just your average /pol/poster

>>264350
Don't cut yourself on that edge

>>264386
It's alright. Shadows are fucked though. Look at where your light are coming from.

>>264275
you are not even close

>>264182
>What's going on with picture related?

Can you be more specific? Its horrible quality I know. I dont use it enywhere yet it was made just for fun...

>>264551
The part I circled in red, why is it there?

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This is the logo I've been using for the past three years. I'm thinking it might be time for something else. Opinions?

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Please rate.

I think I could really need some help on this.

>>264640
Thicken the white divider lines and find a better font

>>264640
I like the first and final ones, and like >>264644 said, thicken the divider lines. I like the font tho.

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>>264640
you're welcome

>>264564
generic-hipster/10 but it works fine since no one cares about that.

>>264669
Simple and classy (probably due to the color purple). I like it!

>>264671
Yeah, I know. I was pretty young back then and it's done the job, most people like the logo but I feel like I need a new one. Just have no idea what. It's for a digital magazine.

>>264669
Logo is better imo, but that font is god awful

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i know it's just a font but i'm not so creative

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I'm using this mostly on crowdsourcing places and for small time freelance stuff where I live, it's on my business card and so on

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This is my personal logo. I went with orange-yellow because I like that it represents the month that I was born (October) and black to create a contrast. The glasses is because I need to wear glasses and the scarf is because I like scarves even thought I don't really have a scarf to wear. I just think it's "cool".

>>264640
looks like a the sims plumbob

>>264669
This is... really nice.

Do you mind if I actually use it?

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From my freelance days like 6 or 7 years ago. No longer in use, and wasnt ideal because some sculptor/artist was/is using the name.

Not posting my current agency logo because 4chan. Fuck I've come a long way since this, though.

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personal logo, initials M.L.

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I think the bold yet simplistic design beautifully illustrates what it is that my company does

>>264718
You sell shit designs for a living?

>>264403
>if cancer had a logo

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>>264073
<<<My new logo for 2016

>>264722
Crap. The KH is super gross.

>>264699
it's the best logo in the whole entire world. it should be earth's official logo. and the virgin mary's.

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not really a logo, just some dumb bullshit I made for my tumblr

>>264753
wtf is it supposed to to say Devastation?
becasue you speieled it wong you cunt

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>>264754

Devastatin' u cocksucker

Never seen something that had the g dropped off of it before?

and I didn't put a ' because the font didn't have one and I didn't care

>>264757
well alrighty
but it was an O that was dropped?
anyway its very 80s disco so im not even sure what its meant to be but g/j i guess

>>264762
Devastating -> Devastatin'

>>264745
You sound sarcastic.

>>264699

bruh, when making a design, you MUST understand that you are what others think about you.

What concept do you want to transmit?
What idea you want to transmit?

From that logo, the ideas you transmit (to me) are:

>teenager learning how to use Flash
>wants to make silly animations to post on newgrounds
>you like funny things

and that's it, you don't look like a professional i would hire to make designs to my organization.

study more, pratice more, true advices.

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Pls rate harshly, I need to improve

>>264722
Nice, clean af, but it's not easy to read which makes it uninteresting

>>264718
this does not represent anything

>>264825
I'm not teenager and no I don't want to make silly animation. I used to have a different logo but I changed it to update it. I want to work more in illustrations more than in anything.

>>264887
Then you definitely need to work on that logo. A logo shouldn't be "a combination of things I like" but more "what my company represents" I don't think your company represents glasses and 'cool' scarves

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>>264893
well it's true that I lack professionalism, I mean for 6 years I've been trying to finish my college desktop publishing course (which is normally a 3 years course) I just kept failing and failing course but now I'm nearly done. I must work on my personal Web portfolio. I much prefer my old logo. What it represents is my interest into illustration, why a sheep? Because it's like the black sheep, the shy lonely type, but I've never been good at explaining why I choose a specific colour. I lack confidence when I start a project and I find it hard to get past the "blank page" syndrome.

>>264899
That logo is much better than the emoticon one.

Just keep going with it, all it is is practice.

>>264901
the thing is that I've been using my newest logo in pretty much all my recent projects, I'd have to change and reprint my projects using my old logo. The thing that bothers me is that I lack income to pay to print anew the projects.

>>264722
Looks good. Doesn't need the crown though

>>264859>>264859
It's kind of boring, doesn't really express anything :/

>>264699
is this clip art?

>>264718
you sell triangles?

>>264859
the line in the back serves no purpose and is ugly. the stroke is shit. and the whole concept of just overlapping 2 letters is shit. rethink the whole thing

>>264945
no, I worked on it in illustrator. I had started with sketches and then traced it in illustrator CC. The "JS" initials are hand-made and not an actual font.

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no bully, I'm amateur
tired of using anime faces

criticism please, be brtual

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>>264953
The result of that funky square.

also
>Beats

>>264948
The line in the back represents a car's silhouette, what can I do to make it clearer ?

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I made a logo for my skate company I've been starting. It's a sunset but I can't shake that it reminds me of the Nike check which bothers the hell out of me. I'm amateur af so harsh rating.

>>264964
make it solid...?

>>264953
that's quite literally the Beats by Dre logo with a square instead of a circle.

>>264073

Grats on using a premade font and unimaginative double-a.

>>264965
Doesn't look like a sunset.

Looks like a hat and hair sans a head.

Work more on making it look like a sunset.

Then well worry about the other problems

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>>264859
Huh, another AM name logo.
I used to go with a simple:
A
M
You know, like it was a pencil, but the last time I tinkered with a logo I settled on this.

>>264980
Woah, unimaginative? I didn't think so, but I'd love to know how you'd change it.

>>264906

if you use a better logo, you'll have more income.

>>264989
noyce but there's something that bothers me
>i don't know what

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My own self brand. The letters are my initials. Be honest, see if you can work out all of the individual letters as well. Also does it sell well for a designer who works strongly with type? It's basic, I've had some people love it and others say it's too simple and more like something a blogger would do, but they weren't designers or clients. Also the mugshot is not me, just a google image to show an application example.

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>>265107
The idea is nice, but i-D have been doing it for 36 years...

>>265108

Yea, I have to admit I was wondering if it was too similar, I saw them as a kind of primary influence for this one. I suppose it's an issue if it's so obviously associated.

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>>265107
< reminds me of this (very well know designer)

>>265109
In fairness I was just looking at some i-D stuff so it was fresh in my mind. I think the yellow on the guy's face is just too close, the logo itself could probably work with a bit of tweaking. Some constructive criticism: it looks a bit off because the different elements are different thicknesses, if you change that it would be an improvement

>>265091
I'd say it is the border, it is a different hue than the logo.

>>264989

Make sure to check your colours. The AM is a different shade of red from the border.

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>>265107
>>265113

Ended up settling on two. I'm debating on whether the terminals of the C should be made to the same thickness of the J, but I like the way edges line up. I sort of feel like there is too much potential to scrap the idea because it is too similar to i-D.

>>265055
well I haven't finished my technique yet. I still have two french course to finish in autumn because I failed one of the course last december.

>>265130
I love your stucture and thought, but I'm not thrilled by it. I feel like it could be because the left eye is the one blinking, but that could just be a personal bias.

I do think you should blur your face out more on the image overlay. I'm drown more to your eye than the logo. If your skills are good, it could be cool to turn your face feature-less and overlay the logo on that. Could help you hook by hitting that uncanny.

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>>264073
I don't have the .png in my phone and I'm too lazy to go get my laptop, so here is a pic. Don't mind the "aus Rikkert" I just added that to give some sort of label to my binder, but the "r" square is the logo.

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The orange looks dull but I have no idea what to do to make it look better and I'm not sure whether I should name it just "ORANGECAT" instead of "ORANGECAT DESIGN"

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I did this one for myself. I would really love some critics

>>265426
Change the typo for another more rounded and thick. Also erase that black line in the ear

>>265428
Ah fuck, cant believe I didnt notice that
Thanks

>>265427
grand theft auto font

Question for you guys, working on a logo for Planet [flower]. What's space themed that I could use for the stem and leaves leading up to the flower-looking planet?

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>>265449
Rocks and particles being drawn down into a black hole.

>>265463
Shit that's a good one, was stuck on this for a while and all I had was an asteroid being pulled into orbit idea that had a doomed execution from the start.

Thank you, much appreciated.

>>265436
Well, it's not the exact font, but i guess you are right... Gotta say it's accidental since i never noticed GTA's logo (i stopped playing that saga on the 2nd)

Anyway, thanks.

>>264553
I agree this part really rubs me the wrong way and messes the whole flow a continuous line thats being bent into your design. Is jz what your spelling?

>>265427
I like this a lot. Nice job anon

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Don't have a digital copy on my phone so here's a cropped pic of a resume. The pics grainy but obviously it's vector so it printed pretty nice. I'm looking for architecture and environmental graphic related work so that's what inspired the isometric idea. Obviously my initials are SA

What do you think?

>>265426
I hate that "design" text overlapping the other. Move it down.

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>>264551
Are you kidding me??

>>265574
honestly get rid of the white lines.

>>265580
Fucking hate the TSM logo, because the T is in the middle...it doesn't say TSM it says STM, which doesn't make any sense.

Also it is similar but it isn't lawsuit worthy, doubt TSM would win that case.

>>265561
Thank you! If anyone can tell me something to improve it, i'll be really glad.

>>264669
Change your font.

>>265625

I personally don't like how this is angled. Maybe a less extreme angle would look better

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these aren't even my initials

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>>265656

>>265657
oop you got me

>>265658

Without the circle it'd been less obvious.

>>264184
If you think you can get away with ripping Bierut's media lab logo set, you can't.

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Been changing this one for awhile any thoughts?

>>265696
I like this, but I'm not a fan of the colors.

Yeah, I didnt really think about the color all too much, just a fan of black and red. What do you think would fit better for this design?

>>265696
Tesla?

Hmm, never noticed the slight resemblance. I guess.

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Home page for a personal website selling edgy housewares.

>>265717
At a glance I noticed it but when looking closer it doesn't make me think tesla.

Curious what it would look like in white/black

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This is a shitty version since its in paint. How does that look?

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I don't have a pretty version of it so here's a shitty one. I'm pretty proud of it, pls no steal.

>>265718
Center the name. It makes me cringe.

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>>265732
It's all mine now! Mwahahahaha.

>>265732
>spells Ted Cruz (t and a cross)
>looks like those zodiac killers doodles
Uh, that's it, Ted you played yourself in a Taiwanese shadow puppets forum

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>>265740
meh it looks more like those old pc games logos

>>264722
>Two issues:
1. The KH (?) is hard to read. Maybe it's Khl?
2. The crown on top looks like a kissy-face Two happy, up-turned cartoon eyes and a kissing pair of lips in the middle.

Fix at least the first issue, the second if you feel like it, and it's actually really good, anon. Good work.

I'd like some advice, please. I'd like to create a personal logo based off of just my initials, but I'm not happy with any of the idea's I've put to paper.

My initials are BB, but anything I've tried turns out pretty meme tier. Either two mirrored Bs, trying to merge them somehow, or pretty much anything hasn't really worked out.

Creative advice would be much appreciated!

>>265751
>creative advice
>give me your ideas pls i can't even make my own logo

>>265753
>If you're asking for help then that means you're not worth helping
You were the popular one in school, weren't you?

>>265756
There is a difference between asking for help and "gimmie logo!" the people on /gd/ don't like giving away ideas, but they will gladly suggest changes or opinions on something you created already.

>>265722
It looks aggressive, something you'd see in a sci-fi video game, almost skull-like. If that's what you're going for then good, but if it's for a baby clothes company then probably not the best.

>>265757
Fair enough. I'll create something and return for critiques.

>>265737
Glad you like it

>>265744
You're pretty close, it was originally made for a clan. I wanted something that would look good on a banner.

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>>264075
>Android Marshmellow

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>>265757
>>265761
Here's my best version, arguably. To me it's hard to read, almost looking like a "g."

Give me your harshest criticisms, please.

>>265828
yikes... 3/10

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>>264073
Combination between the Arabic M and the Western M.

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Here's one that I made in about 10 minutes. Made two sizes to see how they would look. Does it look okay?

>>265850
Almost unreadable,

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Changed it up a bit

>>264754
Holy shit you're retarded, cunty

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>>264403
hi

>>264403
>>265893
Well done anon, you took a shitty tv company logo and made it into a better looking shiting people logo

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i need opinions, which one of these do you think is best?

>>265900
i like the one on the right the most but i was just browsing random boards

>>265900
The one of the right is best, but I don't see how it has anything to do with Levant.

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>>265904
They all represent the letter L in different versions of final fantasy. The one you picked is the L from the Al Bhedian alphabet in FFX

>>265828
this is just two beats by dre logos stacked on top of one another. keep trying.

>>265906
so you didn't design any of them then?

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muh

>>265934
thats not a logo and you're about 1/100th as "rad" as you think you are when you hand this around to clients on business cards

>>265935

I'm not handing out business cards I slap it on my videos you tard.

>>265937
silly me, you see your logo doesn't convey what it is you do, though I should have known you had poor networking from the aesthetic and name alone.

>>265938

Of course you don't understand it only RC hobbyists would. You done acting like an elitist cunt now? What is your logo btw let us see it.

>>264859
Why the fuck is that fugly gradient on the lime

>>264699
This is why I love this board. Mostly everyone is serious and bait slips through effortlessly. Absolute gold.

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Hi, /gd/s. Not personal logo but the place where I work sometimes.

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I like the one on the right better, but I fear it may be illegible without prior knowledge of what it's supposed to be (the letter "B").
tbqh though, that may have an appeal, as in a sorta "a-ha!" moment when looking at it.

>>265963
sharpen the edges
thin the line
connect the bottom bowl, it might fix the legibility issue

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>>265963
>>265965
I've sharpened it up, thinned the line to the point of deletion, and I'm liking the look.

>connect the bottom bowl
What do you mean by this? What's a bowl?

Also, I noticed while doing this that, while the negative space creates a B, the actual shapes form the letters SPI. Might do something with that too.

>>264953
I'm not going to be brutal, I'm going to be entirely rational


You just did beats and Biomedic
It's literally babby's first logo attempt

>>265957
stroke/break between the offset "shadow" and the PUBLI Y LEO text is too thin, i'd make that a bit thicker. Might think about making the lining on the lion itself a bit thicker too. Also, was this made in paint? It kind of looks like it was on the crown with the uneven peaks and valleys. The bottom leg facing away should either be separated more or gotten rid of completely, it's too thin to be there. I'd flatten out the base myself, but I'd have to see how it looks before committing to the change.

Also-- The aliasing. Wtf. Smooth hat shit out, looks bad and unprofessional when it's choppy like that.

>>265963
>>265970
If your creative capacity for yourself- someone whos values you know better than anyone else, someone who you've known since conception. You won't have a more intimate relationship with another business or client than you do your own, and your best shot at self representation is a Lobster font "B" cut out of a blue circle? You have to do better than that.

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>>265970
I was going to suggest connecting the lower Bowl to the stem if you were afraid it'd read like an R.

>>265991
Ah, gotcha. Thanks for the advice.

>>265893
>>265895
I actually know nothing about Al-Mannar aside for it being arabic. And about my "logo" I know that it's eggy af and I actually got bored of it pretty fast. I did i when I was around 12-ish, explaining many things, I was trying to emulate a flower since the branch of my political ideology is very bio-centrist. Any recommendations on to what emulating so I can make a less cringy symbol? I am talking about articles, books and examples. Thanks in advance

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What do you guys think?

>>266039
2008 youtube tier

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gib criticisms bls

it's the hebrew letter ב

>>265943
>slap a fatshark on some shitty over stylized picture
>YOU WOULDN'T UNDERSTAND HOW GREAT I AM!

Ok.

>>266062
Too many colors, I mean hues. Orange is out of place here.

>>266065
Orange? There are a lot of hues, but orange isn't in there...

Also, a note about the colors: I'm trying (and to a large degree failing, perhaps) to represent Pirkei Avot 4:1, which can be found at
http://www.sefaria.org/Pirkei_Avot.4?lang=he-en&layout=heLeft&sidebarLang=all

The purple represents Honor, placed in a lofty part of the picture
The red represents Mightiness, supporting all else.
The yellow represents Riches (as in satisfaction with life), bridging these two things.
Blue represents Wisdom, the center of the image.
The grey is just for some sort of backdrop.


It seems like a helluva lot to cram into a logo, but this is MY logo, and it should speak to me every time I see it, really defining me, ideally.

Also,
>inb4 gtfo kike

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I'm thinking of scrapping this idea because I don't know how well it works for my initials (EH).

Also I can't shake how familiar it looks. Has anyone seen something like this before? I don't want to subconsciously steal something. I constantly worry about doing that.

>>266083
>It seems like a helluva lot to cram into a logo, but this is MY logo, and it should speak to me every time I see it, really defining me, ideally.

Wat

Logo should speak to others first. I wouldn't try to make a reference to something unless you're 100% certain people will get it.

Of course you do what you want, but if you want something more professional-looking, I wouldn't go with 4 colors in 1 logo. Think what you'll do if you need to print it in black and white. It can also clash with other colors if put on a picture which makes it very tricky to use.

> Orange? There are a lot of hues, but orange isn't in there...

Yep, my bad. The thumbnail has tons of JPEG artifacts which make it look orange. Also I had my screen set to lowest brightness and it had a bit of a yellowish tint this way.

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>>266087
>Logo should speak to others first. I wouldn't try to make a reference to something unless you're 100% certain people will get it
>It can also clash with other colors if put on a picture which makes it very tricky to use.
All good points. This one is much more neutral, but I feel like it's now le ebin shades of gray meme logo :/
Maybe I can have two, one for independent use and one for overlays.

>Yep, my bad. The thumbnail has tons of JPEG artifacts which make it look orange. Also I had my screen set to lowest brightness and it had a bit of a yellowish tint this way.
ayy we gud senpai, i gotchu

>>265841
>>265889
>>265890
>>265893
>>265900
>>266039
>>266062
>>266090
is this a joke?

>>266094
no u

>>266096
>>265850 (Me)
I don't call myself a graphic artist. I just make logos.
>not even posting their logo
>probably bait
>still gonna take it

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My original logo, please do not steal!

>>266096
no u r the one who is gay and bad at video games

>>266101
why is there so little ham?

>>266105
Because I am the graphic designer and I have all the power

>>266096
I use a iMac with Windows 7 on it (my father bought the computer in 2010). I have the Adode CS5 Suite on it and yes I have courses in Desktop Publishing that I still need to finish so I can't technically call myself a designer graphic since I haven't finished my technique (which was supposed to be a 3 years College technique and then it's University, but I kept failing courses). I'm brain dead retarded.

>>266112
:^^^^^^^^^^^)

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>>266112
this is extremely low effort even for a joke.

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Using this for my architecture portofolio.

Initials are BA. Also can be abbreviated as Building & Architecture.

Feedbacks are welcomed. Totally amateur in designing logos, second logo so far.

>>266096
don't be that salty, m8y

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>>266062

>>266128
Aesthetically I think it looks pretty nice, but I wouldn't have seen the BA if you hadn't pointed it out. A little abstract, but that's totally okay.

The font on the bottom looks really tacky, though. I'd probably change that to something less gimmicky.

>>266141
I can't tell if that's the logo for a cable sports channel aimed at kids in 1997 or a clothing brand that only sells fanny packs and elastic banded baseball caps.

>>266148
Holy shit how young are you? How new are you in the field if you don't know what NEXT was?

So many experts ITT I bet it's a honey pot for 14 year old trolle meisters who think they have some valid logos or opinions.

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pls dnt bully
initials B.Y

>>266155
its like a signature for my paintings, thinking of making a stamp. would love criticism. (actual criticism not just get gud)

>>266157
For illustrations I think you could use just a signature. If you're gonna use a logo like that, maybe put your url instead.

>>266158
>traditional art
>URL
what the fucking what? find a cliff.

>>266161
a QR code then.

>>266163
youre joking right?
PAINT BRUSHES CANVASES
>material design has taken over the world

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How is this? Initials are O.G.
tried to make it resemble an infinity icon.

>>266168
looks like a sideways pikmin. the g isnt apparant. start from scratch.

>>266168
>>266169
the g is very apparent. what are you talking about? give people some credit, you don't have to beat them over the head with it. that being said, the logo looks extremely generic. infinity is an extremely played out concept for logos and business in general. why the circle container?

>>266170
the g is not apparent. it look more like a power button. the main thing about a g is the horizontal line on the right. the line in the logo is neither horizontal not on the right. on top of the fact that its resting in the o making it seem even less like a g. i can see it but wouldnt have been able to had he not pointed it out.

>>266173
that's a you problem then, because the G is apparent. you don't need to make it more obvious. what you need to do is start from scratch with a new concept.

>>266170
Circle container was just to give it some background, it's not really a part of the logo.

Anyways, thanks!

>>265963
>>265970
lobster meme font/10
almost good

>>266131
Not bad, but I'd suggest brighter, sharper colors. These look a little washed out and dull.

>>266174
no problem, but a tip, don't "present" logos in circles like that or whatever, do up a nice background with a subtle pattern that matches your brand. i have a few repeating patterns that I use in presentations to keep everything looking uniform. as for this particular logo, i would have just made the logo itself the darker color for presentations sake.

It's not poorly done, it just seems poorly thought out. Hopefully you don't take that the wrong way.

>>266185
Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep it in mind. Don't worry about it, I appreciate the help.

>>264707
>posts to say he's not posting his logo

Thanks babe

>>265603
why? honestly, i think it's quite refreshing to see something like that.
>>265574
sweet idea! you might need to work on character width, since the A looks way to narrwo for the S. but otherwise: thumbs up!

>>265733
yep, give it some balance
and
>>265718
don't use a defaut font for branding. you want something unique for a brand; a preinstalled font is quite the opposite

>>266131
The idea is more or less interesting. But the execution is horrendous

First: How many colors does it have? Did you count? It's over 6 at least. They all clash with each other and look like assorted sheets of colored paper. If you think they make sense, try and tell from memory which side had which color.

Second: The pink-orange cube is lit from one side. The cyan cube is dark from this side for some reason. I barely realized if it was inset or outset.

Third: now look at those corners. Would be good if they aligned at least in any way. But instead they're just some random angles.

Fourth: what do these cubes have to do with you? Do they really reflect what you do well? They generally do say 'maybe it's graphic design', but what says that it belongs to you, not some other guy?

Finally: try to imagine it in black and white.

>>266090
> Maybe I can have two, one for independent use and one for overlays.

You can of course do that.

Still, speaking about your color scheme, it reminds me of coats of arms some families have which make sense only to them and their closest friends/relatives. Like a deer and a compass, wtf is it supposed to mean? It's like some kind of cryptic code. To an average person, colors don't mean anything special, and no one else understands would understand any hidden meanings.

Also, a word about the colors: you could at least have some gradients or other more interesting transitions. On a technical level, it looks like it could have been drawn in Corel Draw in 1997. It's ok but showing off your skills as a designer a little never hurts.

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>>266198
Played around a bit...Some look tacky to me ^^

In design, I appreciate simplicity to a fault, sometimes

>>266222
This isn't simplicity though, the overuse colors and gradients are the opposite of that. None of these are good. Start over with a new concept. It can still be the ב, but just take it and simply stylize it. Write it yourself 300 times on a sheet of paper, scan that in and use that as a bse if you need to, but none of these are doing it. The colors are bad, they proportions are bad, any of them that have a stroke on them are bad and far too thin, looks like an afterthought,the shape itself isn't working. the skewed 3d look you're trying to pull off is coming across in the worst way imaginable. Drop that.

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>>266222
I meant something like this

>>266239
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HL0RH3x7Zzo

>>266239
I'm really not trying to be mean here, but this is the worst one yet. Your sense of colors is horrible. Why the gradients? The perspective doesn't work. It looks like an early 90s 3D render which isn't a good thing. Drop it and start fresh.

>>266153
>How new are you in the field
you are on /gd/

>>266222
I guess I'm just not sure why you're married to this completely unappealing shape that doesn't appear to mean anything...

>>266264

See >>266083

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>>266245
It's not MY sense of color. I just tried to help the >>266083 guy. This was what I had in mind.

Another, stripped-down version. Hues adjusted slightly to make a color triad.

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>>266168
all I can think of when I see yours

>>266272
No please

>>266272
Original ב guy here.

I've been on this board for quite a bit, and you're by far the most helpful and honest person I've met here. Thank you.

Another anon suggested writing out the just the letter itself 300 times, on paper. I'm gonna take this guy's advice; this is my logo, so it should be as close to perfect as I can make it. I'll stick with the same symbolism, but maybe find a better, more true-to-me way to represent it.

Again, thanks for your help and advice.

>>264978
bump, someone help me with this already

>>266107
"I KNOW WHAT IS RIGHT"

>>266155
I definitely like the way the B is made but the Y should be adjusted some cuz it just feels like it's floating. The swirl leading into the letter works well to give a painterly look without being cheesy. Maybe try extending the Y to the edges of the letter. Just mess around with the interaction between the two letters a lot.

>>266194
I disagree with every single point made here. I think every part of that logo works together and would immediately not if even one of those pieces of advice were followed. You'd have a far less readable mess of polygons that you couldn't distinguish from each other as a pair of blocks. It would probably just look like a crooked plaid pattern.

It's easily one of the strongest logos in this thread as it is.

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>>266181
I think it might just be the way the blending is done. I might have fuck around with different color spaces.
>>266194
Really, It's just 3 cubes, one cyan, one magenta and one yellow. It's a still from an animation, where the cubes come together and make a gray one and split away to give way to a bunch of color. It's not really a personal logo, but it's distinct looking and the closest thing I'd have to one. Here's another still. I don't think it looks as dull, but the grey may not be appealing.

>>266298
easily one of the strongest logos in the thread?
lmao wut? there must be some shitty logos in this thread...

>>266085
I think it would work better as a poster design than a logo.

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So this is a work in process of my first personal logo. Making logos isn't really my forte so I would appreciate some feedback from you guys.

It's ALGO because my name is Alonso Gonzalez, plus "algo" means "something" or "some" in spanish so I can do stuff like "Algo de diseño" (some design) or "Algo de fotografia" (some photography).

I also used the fish (I hope it looks like a fish because some people say it doesn't) because I see myself as a fish outside of the water because I have a different style and stuff like that (hope that doesn't comes up as a too much of a special snowflake wannabe).

I'm going to add the colours and a little font that says "Alonso Gonzalez" bellow the logo later.

So anyway, whatcha guys think?

>>266464
If you're dead set on the fish, first one in the 2nd row is best.

Overall though, they look a bit too busy. Go back in and reanalyze the necessary elements of the logo to eliminate the unnecessary.

Define your type, then work around it.

>>266464
It's old school so to say, but I like it.

The "G" looks different from other letters though. You're using something like Avant Garde (see the pic), I'd suggest changing the G to look more this way.

>>264669
I hate that shade of purple. Otherwise it's pretty good.

>>265841
Smooth it out, and if you want to still make it look like a paint stroke then add some texture on the bottom edge of the lines.

>>264978
Dear god that's painful to look at.. If your insistent on that look try using larger circles so it doesn't look like tv static

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rate harshly pls

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"F.I."
I'm an illustrator, and I suppose I can use an actual logo for my portfolio site and cards.

Its barely in the sketch phase, but I appreciate some feedback.

>>266501
2007 youtube tier, the shouldn't be on top. the colors are feminine, the typography seems made by a 15 yrs old (not even a logo). the "3d" is very crappy an the name should be on one line.

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>>266524
research calligraphy before attempting it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8_tOrJHIr8

>>266534
The fact that you think it's calligraphy means I've failed.

Back to the drawing board.

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I'm not very good at Illustrator, I just started learning it, so I mostly have no idea what i'm doing.

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full design here

http://cargocollective.com/travisark/Ark-Brand

what do u think

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>>266581
you don't even need illustrator but basic artistic/creative skills and curiosity for learning new things.

>>266583
i wouldn't hire anyone with that lazy ass logo

>>266586

this logo got me a huge award tho

>>266326
well yeah that too.

>>266587
Yeah, I'm sure you got Best Downloader from dafont.com. Pics or obviously it didn't happen.

>>266534
>>266576
For clarity: Its just supposed to be a pen stroke. Like what an inker does to add shading to some pencils.

The "letter" is supposed to be as incidental as a traingle is an "A" in someone else's logo.

one question guys, if i downloaded a font online for free, would I be able to use it on my personal logo on my personal portfolio website without infringing copyright?

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initials are F and L, sketch on paper

>>266635
You mean £?

>>266636
just noticed it, time to discard this idea..

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>>266635
samefag

another attempt, shit this is hard

thoughts?

>>266620
search for it's licence. avoid dafont and only get fonts from fontsquirrel and you'll be allright. unless you get famous they won't bother.

>>264947
Made kek all my fucking tea

>>266640
start over and make some drawings first avoid color until the end

>>266644
Speaks the truth

>>266640 this in black and white would just be EI, always start monochrome then add colours later if you need them, because having it coloured won't always be an option.

>>266652
yeah figured it out, trying to put something between them to make it clear that it's F and L, in monochrome

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Uhm basically holds my Initials A.I.P

>>266654
The I doesn't show at all and the P isn't that obvious, if you hadn't said anything I would have said A.D. maybe

>>266608
I don't see how this doesn't fall under Calligraphy.

>>265732
Reminds me of quake or the wolfenstein logos

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so far. i hate this design sorta so im playing with it to see if i can make it nicer.

>tfw don't like creating minimalist art and it's all the rage right now in graphic design

>>266168
looks cool. i feel like the open space at the top doesn't convey your idea very well tho.
maybe try rotating the G again and close the gap between the... head of it and the tail.

>>266655
can you show your logo ? Cause i dont take crit from random people on this board

>>266678

The guy is totally right. The I doesn't show at all and the P is somewhere between a D and a toucans beak.

Start over.

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>>266532
i just made that recently in a little while from scratch because i like fucking around in photoshop and listening to podcasts. literally was looking for something to do in photoshop and came across this thread, so i went for it.

the name above the M was just random. yeah i should have worked better to make the M more dynamic and 'pop' out.

here's one i made when i actually was about 14 or 15. purple too, and i usually like red for everything but purple/indigo seems a little more neutral.

how is the actual shape of the M bad? i was kinda proud of having made it so 'off' with the angles but so consistent at the same time

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Just did this one today. I think the hair needs to be improved upon but i have no idea how to improve it. What do you guys think?

>>266666
nice get Satan

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>>266595
here it is cunt. my 2 award certificates

the typography is called "Baron Nue", got it from behance, should be easy to find. dafont is shit

>>266666 checked by >>266694

>>266669
then dont use minimalistic styles. you're using your distain for the style as an excuse for a poor word mark.

>>266658
I dunno, maybe I'm misunderstanding the concept of calligraphy in that case.
Its less a letter and more just a stroke that incidentally looks like an F was my thought.

>>266710
that could pass ass calligraphy but i think the correct term would be monogram.

>>266595
>>266687
dang, get fucking thrown into the abyss.

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crit me

>>264717
M needs to look more like an M and L needs to look more like an L

>>264978
With photography being a hobby... EW NOISE KILL IT KILL IT

>>265696
Nice, looks like a logo for an automotive company

>>265696
Vaginal?

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Not mine, designed this pro bono. They wanted something generic lol

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I know I've seen this design before, but I can't remember what. Does anyone know?

>>266638
or tweak it

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my initials are HS
is this logo too obvious?

>>266756
Its actually really good, I think.
Shame is, its kind of generic as fuck. If you don't mind that, though, stick with it.

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>>266681
it just look very childish, proud of a letter M with a different angle in the center, really?. here's a few principles that could help having in mind while sketching/making a logo.

• Keep it simple. The simplest solution is often the most effective. Why? Because a simple logo helps meet most of the other requirements of iconic design.
• Make it relevant. Any logo you design must be appropriate
for the business it identifi es. For example, as much as you might want to use a fun design that makes everyone smile, this approach is not ideal for businesses like the local crematorium.
• Incorporate tradition. Trends come and go like the wind. With brand identity, the last thing you want is to invest a signifi cant amount of your time and your client’s money in a design direction that looks dated almost overnight.
• Aim for distinction. Begin by focusing on a design that is recognizable. So recognizable, in fact, that just its shape or outline gives it away
• Commit to memory. Quite often, one quick glance is all the time you get to make an impression. You want your viewers’
experience to be such that your logo is remembered the instant they see it the next time.
• Think small. Your design should ideally work at a minimum of around one inch in size without loss of detail so that it can
be put to use for many different applications.
• Focus on one thing. Incorporate just one feature to help your designs stand out. That’s it. Just one. Not two, three, or four.

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My Intials FSC

>>266806
> 7677x7677
> a few lines
nigga why

No concrete prototype yet but I'm working on a sticker design (Hackneyed promotional material, I know. Resources are limited.) for our nonprofit organization as we launch a new program targeting youth ages 8-14. We're educating young classrooms/sports teams/cyclists/quadders etc. on the modern epidemic of concussions/brain injuries from those activities. The stickers are going to be given out at the end of our presentations.

The concept I've been toying with includes a sticker geared towards each gender with a focus on the males (they're at more risk). It's an edgy skull in the center with its topside sawed off to reveal a portion of its brain, and a helmet over top. Wording reads "Don't get rekt.".

I can't decide whether it's a solid idea to get them to actually put the stickers on their shit or just an absolutely autistic and terrible idea.

Thoughts anyone?

>>266802
colorful gradient + old english type? edgy/10

>>266829
I like it. Its got that summery feel literally every rock band these days go for.

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>>266824
>Wording reads "Don't get rekt.
i doubt most people will know what that means. maybe make some drawings after searching for images with the particular artstyle that you're looking for and maybe get some references of skulls, helmets, etc. aswell.

>>266818
Needed to print large scale, couldn't be bothered to scale it down

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Just brainstorming and dicking around with an idea for a personal logo, please rip me apart as necessary.

Meant to be the initials CK, with the color of the circle inside changing to match application/context. I'm all for changing the style as necessary, this is just more for the shape and geometry itself.

>>266849
All anyone will ever see is pacman

>>266683
What does emo hair have to do with syrup?

>>266678
Sounds like you don't take criticism well at all, you either want praise and as soon as you don't get it all you want to do is bag on other peoples designs.

>Cause i dont take crit from random people on this board

Then why post in this thread at all?

>>266718
I like it, simple, works at any scale and colour, readable, knew it was a T C right away.

>>266678
> i dont take crit from random people
> anonymous image board
haha fuck off

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Doodled out for fun

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Illustrator logos, thoughts?

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>>266906

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>>266906
Also did a mockup for a login screen on ios

>>266683
Very nice colours and the font is nice but I have to agree, what does the hair have to do with anything?

>>266906
Execution of the logo is good, but the idea is extremely unoriginal. The clutter around the logo doesn't help either. If you really wanna roll with the logo drop the brackets and the minus sign (?), they look absolutely horrible.

The logo would never let anyone know that it's about pet photography, more like some ad or healthcare agency at best. That's probably my biggest gripe with this logo.

The font is a bit boring too, but that's personal opinion. It is fitting for the photography business though, I guess.

>>266907
Same font, same story. Again, the execution is nice, but the idea is among the most uninspired I've ever seen.

>>266908
I feel like this style has been used a too much, but it's ok I guess.

>>266912
That was my take on an abstract camera lol but yeah I see where you're coming from.

I happen to like the fire logo - it was my first time playing around with gradients to create form.

How do you feel like it has been used too much? What is "this style" exactly?

>>266913
Right, I'm sorry for being so harsh on you.

The idea of a camera lens (while not very original maybe) isn't bad. It's not something you can easily see when looking at the logo, though. The body of the camera is also too different to feel connected to the lens. You might be able to make it work, but you'll have to make some changes!
Personally, I think the 4-colors thing has been used by all the big companies.. The colors work well together though.

I can see why you'd be proud of the flames, the form is nice and I like the gradient. I think having a flame as logo isn't very original though - it doesn't really stand out. Again, nice execution, though.

For the login mockup, I've seen it in a lot of apps. Logo at the top, blurred photo background, glassy buttons / text areas.. However, there's only so much you can do with a login screen. So, I think you did a good job.

>>266917
Thank you for a the feed back! I'll try and implement some of it into my work. You've been very helpful :)

>>265971
But I've already ordered the business cards and tee-shirts

>>266937
Of which one? The first or second draft?

In case you're not joking, why did you go ahead with an unchanged draft if you cared enough to ask for advice here?

>>266853
Would you have any suggestions as to how to avoid that? I've tried replacing the central circle with other shapes and changing the hierarchy of layers to further break up the circle, but everything I've tried makes it lose its original intent.

I feel like I'm headed in the right direction with this idea, I'd rather see if I can't still make it work before scrapping it entirely and going to the drawing board again.

>>265759
what if just rounded it and made it a butterfly?

>>265696
People might think you're a Satanic

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>>265274
Here is the same logo with a more clear view of the outline.

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Thoughts?

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Looking for advice
The concept is something like "on the thread of art", play on words in Italian, feedback on the logo I'm making would be nice

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>>266723
>>266498
Version 2. Moar feedback please.

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>>266653
You could look at stuff like De Stijl's logo

>>267034
The outer gradient works well; just use that for the inner characters as well. The current inner gradient doesn't do you any favors.

barump

>>266907
Too elongated

>>267127
I actually like it

huge improvement from the first
however, the flimsy streaks won't scale well