Sup /gd/! What's wrong with my design? *I'm making

>>249620
First thing i noticed was the pixel "blood", it shouldn't be clusterfucking with the other letters. That's one man's opinion though.

>>249621
Thank you Sir for the comment.

>>249620
Change the text's main color to something like #e5e5e5. I think the design itself looks cool as shit, we just need some legibility on the text.

>>249620

get rid of "pixel blood" around text

pick brighter blue or darker red

>>249645
I think the pixel blood is damn cool. But the text is hard on the eyes in that dark teal next to it. If the text were white (or preferably, slightly more gray than white), it would look awesome.

>>249620
looks breddy gud man

malaysia boleh btw, you live in kl?

>>249646
Definitely agree.

What if you made the pixel blood larger and more "splattery", but had it in a darker shade of red as to not interfere with the red drop shadow thing you're doing with the text. I'd also say increase the saturation of the blue text.