Critique my shitty start up /fa/ www.lunardot.com

>>11798091
it is definitely one shitty startup, i like the website tho

Sold out hoodies = shit

>>11798104
implying you had more than 5 of them

>>11798108

We only had two. I told you that it's a shitty start up.

>>11798091
yeah it's pretty shit lmao

>>11798113
forgot to add: it's p cool that you are doing your own thing. It's just that it is bland asf rn.

>>11798117

What do you look for in clothes?

>>11798122
Something that isn't a basic print text with a cool motive. That's the standard template and anybody can do it. Normie tier

>>11798091
let me show you how a good startup clothing company should look like

https://aarionclothing.com/

>>11798148
>aryan clothing
>no black models

at least you fit the narritave

if only you made good clothes

>>11798157
the female model tho?
>>11798148
yeah at least this looks like it has effort and thought put into it, rather than "hey i'm gonna screenprint the moon on shit and try to sell it over the internet"

>>11798162
idk i think thats just lighting

also this does clearly have more effort like you said, but its still all really basic nothing new clothing

>>11798091
>screenprints on tees and hoodies
wow man why didn't I come up with this

0/10 you will not be successful, anyone can print a shitty moon picture from google images and write a text and have it printed on a 5$ hoodie

>>11798195
oh yeah, wasn't saying it's like groundbreaking or anything, but at least it's worthy of being called a fashion brand.