/EFG/ Erotic fiction general

Yeah, this'll work. Just remember the title next time.

And (re)posting this on SV's behalf:

Attraction on the Range: A rancher and his horse take care of a problem cow.
>Tags: Animal to human tf, bisexual, threesome, gratuitous Texan dialogue

https://sv-los.tumblr.com/post/160207454455/attraction-on-the-range

Reposting request.


Story follows a recently captured slave girl in a Greek/Roman-inspired fantasy setting. She's young, about 16-17. She gets purchased at an auction along with a few others by a minor noble. Said noble is throwing a party and has invited much more powerful families. The slave girl is intended to be a party favor/part of the entertainment.
The sex stuff should focus on how she gets passed around. Guy A has her blow him while he's talking to a friend. Guy B later fucks her in the ass next to the water fountain. Two guys have an arm wrestling match and the winner takes her into a bedroom. One of the noble women gets creampied and has the slave girl clean her out. The owner chooses her and one of the male slaves to fuck as entertainment during dinner. A noble has her partnered with his virgin younger brother to "make him a man," all the while watching and offering advice and instruction.
That sort of thing.

The main points should be an auction scene, a scene with her getting cleaned and dressed for the party, none-to-subtle carrot & stick motivation to behave, and then the party.
The slave girl herself should be reasonably pretty and have some previous experience with sex, though she'd certainly out of her comfort zone. It would be cool to have her be foreign to the slavers' culture, but she knows enough of the language to get by (though specific orders can be unclear and confusing at times).
There shouldn't be any falling in love or even making a real connection with people. Alienation is the name of the game. That being said, her eventually deciding to roll with it and enjoy the experience since she has to go through with it anyway might work.

>>7397612

What a sweetheart~. Thanks!

Also this requested thing because I had fun writing it and it made people laugh which fed my FRAGILE EGO.

A Dalek is a phone sex operator.
>Tags: monotone yelling, David Tennant
https://sv-los.tumblr.com/post/160216495520/a-4chan-request

>>7397635
I'll pick this up. It's got a fair few of my own kinks worked into it and is actually close to something I got started working on just a few days ago, but I'll gladly drop that and focus on this instead.

The request is detailed which'll make it fairly easy to write but it's also kind of complex so I can't so how long it'll end up being. I'll need at the very least a week to work on it.

Do you want the sex acts to occur in the order you listed them in, or is it enough to include them all?

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>>7378916

Anchoring for part 2 of Bel Chandra spanking story

Part 1:

https://pastebin.com/XtGin19A

If you need an outline:

Guy fights monsters with sword or gunfire
Belchandra does little help if at all during fight, preferring to laze around and chastise him for sloppy fight techniques n shit.
He comes up with a plan to separate her from her joy and pride: arms.
He does so, and outs the struggling lady onto his lap to spank her juicy blue jiggling ass red (or purple, whichever one works)
She swears and rants throughout the spanking while he simply enjoys the feeling of dominance and her blue ass.
He gets friskier as it goes on, fingering her asshole to her shock.
She bargains mercy, but he rejects and fucks her ass as punishment.
Throughout ass fuck he gropes and spanks her blue booty until he cums inside.

This is what I have in mind, but feel free to modify outline to your preference. Thank you so much for your hard work anon!

>>7397662
Fucken' awesome!

The sex scenes listed are just ideas of things that could happen during the party; you needn't include all of them, nor should you feel feel confined to them. He having to go through several "scenes" during the party, maybe with brief cleanup interludes to make her look presentable between them, is the idea.
The only scenes I would deem really important would be 1) the auction, 2) the preparation, 3) the sex stuff, and 4) a brief aftermath (even a paragraph or two about how she feels after everyone has left would be amazing). And truth be told, if any of those just don't work out while you're writing I won't be too disappointed. I understand that sort of thing happens while writing.

Thank you very much for giving it a shot!
>I'll need at the very least a week to work on it.
Take all the time you need. I'm patient and am just happy someone is giving it a go.

>>7397640
Really? No " MAS-TUR-BATE! MAS-TUR-BAAAATE!" line? For shame.

But seriously, this is hilarious. It's just long enough to get a good setup and punchline, but doesn't get annoying with too much written Dalek-talk. I can just picture and hear everything and it is wonderful.

Well done, SV.

>>7397693
I'll be using at least a few of the scenes listed but having my hands free for the rest is of course helpful. The structure you suggested is pretty much the one I had in mind so it won't be an issue. If you want an update of how it's progressing just ask for Genghis on the discord.

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>>7397704

>>7397612
>>7397640
From the summery, I figured the horse was gonna be a guy too and I'm very slightly disappointed, but the story was well written.
Also, it might be a decent idea to put together some kinda list as to what you are or aren't into writing, since there's probably going to be requests coming your way soon and it'd save everyone time

>>7397743

Heh, sorry to disappoint~. The guy who commissioned gave me a prompt, and he wanted the horse to be a gal, so that's what happened.

I don't want to be too specific on what I am into, since I want to write anything that anyone wants. My commission info ( https://sv-los.tumblr.com/commission%20info ) says I have the most experience with sci-fi, f/f pairings, and transformation, which is true. I used to RP a TON, and they almost always involved such things.

But I can write pretty much anything, if anyone asks me to. Or if they pay me! The only things I don't want to write are scat and gore.

...And I'm okay with piss, but don't tell anyone! It's a secret, shh.

>>7397697

Also thank you!

>>7397771
>The guy who commissioned gave me a prompt, and he wanted the horse to be a gal, so that's what happened.
Ah, didn't know it was a comission.

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2000 word update, new content at "He dragged his tongue up and down"

Or Die Alone
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
tags so far:
>large breasts, long tongue, kissing, handjob, size difference, biting, scratching, consensual, blowjob, deepthroat, creampie, oral
new tags:
>face-sitting, tailjob

>>7397640
>monotone yelling, David Tennant
kek

New 3k word commission~.

Whisper: A crime boss meets a wolf in the woods while trying to escape the problems of the city.
>tags: animal to human transformation, straight sex, some violence
https://sv-los.tumblr.com/post/160246981700/whisper

>>7397823
Nice update, looking forward to the conclusion of the cliffhanger there.

Are you going to do do another segment of travel after this or is it straight on to the last sex scene and then finishing the fic?
I feel like it might add some depth to have a day of them being openly into each other, a noted switch to more kindhearted back and forth teasing before they slide into the sleeping bag together for some slow and hard sex. Pace things out and give some more room for the tail-end of their character development.
All up to Shiny in the end I know, but I'm suggesting as much to him.

>>7397869
I was planning for this to be their last night on the moon, I usually split my sex scenes into several 2000 word sub-scenes, nearly done with the female oral and the upcoming section will be the actual sex.

I've passed 50k words so I want to start wrapping it up fairly soon, but there's at least 10k words left on this one, maybe more. They still have to reach the oxygen farm and then escape.

It's up to Shiny though, if he wants another sex scene I can still get one in there, perhaps a celebratory bonking in the shuttle on the way home.

What I really want from the end of this is Boyd and moralez A Better Tomorrow II-ing syndicate headquarters
That'd be rad

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The latest chapter of Grande Futapest Hotel is ready for your reading eyes.

The Grande Futapest Hotel
http://pastebin.com/SjeEbP1Y
>tags: futanari, futa-on-female, futa-on-futa, huge dicks, balls, ballsucking, blowjobs, anal, vaginal, deepthroat, vibrator, hands-free, cumswapping, kissing, porn, condoms, real world, I wish the real world would just stop hasslin' me

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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hello it's me prote

mostly posting to say i haven't forgotten druid+wolfboy or gentle monsterboy/village girl. i've just been busy, and unable to draw.

work was also delayed on my serf/space marine fic due to discovering new canon for 40k and wanting to put it in because it's perfect.

but! hopefully i will resume work on all of these things and at least put out some content for all three soon. thank you for your continued patience! please accept these doodles i have done in an attempt to warm back up.

Out of curiosity, how long can a story stay on the "Recent Entries" list before it's scrubbed? There are stories there from September.

Hey Nier guy. I finally found a translation of that companion story that was released with the game. Enjoy! How goes the game? Have you finished it?

https://mintychu.dreamwidth.org/340.html

>>7397869


I did have it in the commission details for them to spend some time openly into each other during their travels and seeing how things were different from before.

Snek, you've got the clear for an extra day of traveling while theyre in phase 5 mode, feel free to use it to world build and character develop as you see fit. I'm neutral on an additional sex scene though, only put it in if you're feeling it would be naturally led into after the day's activities.

>>7398225
I was gonna do that anyway, since it will take them another day of walking to reach the oxygen farm (if that was what you meant), but sure, I'll put in another sex scene if it feels appropriate.

>>7398248

Ah, I misread your post thinking they were already on the last night and there wouldn't be anymore

>>7398250
Last night, they won't be sharing a sleeping bag again when I'm done with this sex scene (unless you want them to) but I figured I'd have them pal around on their walk to the oxygen farm.

>>7398263


Well that explains it, thanks

>>7398263
Sure they don't *have* to share a sleeping bag, but on the other hand you could have Lorza curling up in her bag on the ship and Boyd poking at her to let him in.
It'd be a cute gesture.

Is it weird that vivid descriptions of my fetish get me going more than sex scenes?

>>7398116
Good question. I haven't actually been able to scrub it recently, so I'll try and do that whenever I get to my computer.

And post what I have of what I'm working on, at that matter. I'd have done it sooner if RL hadn't chosen this exact time to be the biggest bitch it's ever been.

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>>7397904
>>7398277
I didn't consider that some people might be left unsatisfied by the lack of a resolution with the Syndicate, I was just going to end it with them escaping the moon, I figured people would be interested mostly in the personal relationship between Boyd and Lorza and the resolution of their stranded plotline.

Is that something you guys would want to see, and would you be cool with that if there's a demand for it, Shiny?
I could have the UNN stage a full blown invasion of Hades to remove the criminal organizations.

I'd be down for that if it's what people want to see and it doesn't clash with your vision for the story. I'd be a little worried about it feeling disconnected from the main characters, but I did the same thing with Outpost and that was very well received. (I'd do it for free too if it goes too far beyond your outline.)

>>7398406


You better believe I'd be cool with it

>>7398308
not at all man, I'm 100% the same way.

>>7397764
Yeah, that can be rough. I don't think rewriting them entirely is the way to go, especially if they're almost done already. I've gotten into that cycle before and it never ends. I'd suggest either posting 'em as-is or just doing a few edits. You can always use your new ideas in your next story. In fact, use that as inspiration. If you got to the point where you considered them ready, them you're probably right. But challenge yourself to make the next one even better.

>>7398406
If justice isn't brought in this story at least mention justice coming to the backwaters in a future story.

Or don't have hades fall just yet, a story with a rape cat enforcer or space pirate rape cat could work.

Or maybe ex-enforcer cat wants to get a new job after Hades bites it but no one's willing to hire her except for a odd butcher who's fascinated by how much she eats.

Anyone have any info about that 2nd part to the Animal Crossing feminization story?

>>7398532
How about a male space pirate rape cat who has to deal with being subordinate to a human woman, but is smart enough not to try and maul her as he knows working for her is the best he could hope for. Then learning to cope with her ordering him around, and finding his thoughts turning from pinning her down and having his way with her, to the opposite, with her dominating him despite her diminutive stature.
Cue some bonding, followed by her surprising him by joining him in the showers when he's trying to relieve some stress - less so revealing that she has a thing for him, than simply confirming his suspicions. Maybe a follow up where people wonder how she's got a 'wild' Borealan at her beck and call.

>>7398406
I'm all for this. My main suggestion would be for one of the syndicate big bosses to have a borlean chief goon who moralez and Boyd have to confront after machinegunning dozens of lesser goons. We need another human-borlean fight scene

>>7397932
>due to discovering new canon for 40k and wanting to put it in because it's perfect
Do tell Prote.
Love your pics as always.

>>7398544
That would suggest there was ever a first part.

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>>7398215
Thanks! I'll check it out.

I've not only finished the game, but now I'm on my second playtrough. It's just more fun to me this way than selecting chapters.

Here's the story, by the way, in case you've missed it in the previous thread. It's ended up pretty vanilla and quite long at some parts, so I plan to work on these aspects next time:
https://pastebin.com/gKDPQbJw

Some anon gave me good feedback in the Nier general on /vg/, and they've also suggested to post this on AO3, so I hope you don't mind if I do so.

In the mean time, like I've implied, I've started to work on a second story, in which, as you've originally requested, 9S will man up. Hope you'll be still around when I finish that.

>>7398453

Problem is, although my kinks are very much stuff I'd find on /d/, it's rare. A few stories in the pastebin DO have what I'm looking for, though.

>>7399238
Then stop beating around the bush and say what the fetish is. You won't get more of it if you never ask.

>>7399263
Handholding.

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>>7399278

>>7399278
You're in luck, it's in practically every fic labeled "vanilla". We're suckers for it over here.

>>7399263

melting

not gorey shitty b-movie melting, like girls made of liquid melting. It's good stuff but I don't want to annoy any of the authors by begging for stories. I have had very shitty luck with artists and writers and the like.

>>7399293
So something like slime girls losing cohesion from excitement? Or is it more a normal girl suddenly taking on the consistency of pudding and slowly running (harmlessly) into a puddle of flesh-colored goo?

>>7399293
Uh... when the slime girl in my slime girl story fucked people, she started to lose cohesion.

Does this interest you?

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Just wanted to ask the writer of that Bel-Chandra story if there's been any updates on the second part. Again, understand if IRL shits getting in the way tho (not the OR btw). Hopefully i'm not being annoying, just curious to know since it's been a week since your last post.

Enjoy this lewd Tenryuu as my offering.

>>7399360

If they're made of any amorphous substance and make use of that makeup in any way, I'll read it. It's just that slime seems to be the most common substance. I've scoured literotica, the asstr archives, and even the BEArchives. I can't get enough.

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>>7398408
>>7398532
>>7398866
Roger, I will resolve the Hades situation in this story then.
This also makes me consider that a lot of the requests I get from you guys involve Borealans being in places or positions that the current status quo doesn't allow them to be in.
I will need to correct that and find ways to spread them around the galaxy a bit more, maybe have them start actually using those ships they keep buying.

I've been mulling over doing a story about Borealan pirates inspired by some of the pitches and requests I've gotten, that might be a good way to accomplish it. Full on eyepatch-wearing, leather jacket-clad pirate queen taking a freighter pilot captive and having her sordid way with him.
Alas time is my sworn enemy.

>>7399824
If I could somehow liquefy and inject Mikoyan pictures into my veins, I would do it.

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2000 word update, new content at "She grumbled something in what might have been Russian"

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
new tags:
>female ejaculation, vaginal

>>7399891
sauce on image?

>>7399891
I would be as if not more interested in a story about a human/borlean couple from naval intelligence sent to hunt down said crazy borlean pirate
And just another thought, why not make the pirate queen a polar? It'd be a nice change-up

>>7399891
Splashdown 2: Electric boogaloo of daily life with a submissive amazon tiger waifu when?

Seriously this one guy got one up from a Boralean with his dick and no one goes beyond "huh, wierd. oh well."

>>7398225
I'd love another sex scene. Up to you two though.

>>7399024
>>7398544
https://pastebin.com/awz0kY7T
This should be the first part

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>>7400145
One of Mikoyan's comics, wish I had it.

>>7400146
I don't think Polars have much motivation to be pirates, besides I want to get some really sadistic femdom in, it's been like 5 months since I did anything like that with Equatorials. Not that I'll have time to do it any time soon of course. I keep promising myself I'll write shorter stories so I can get more done, yet here we are...

>>7400215
Could fit something like that in short story month maybe? Kind of a 'where are they now' with a lot more fucking. If I really bust my balls I can get six or seven 10k word stories in.

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>>7399891
>>7400313
Today's reminded me of a certain artist.

>>7400313
>Could fit something like that in short story month maybe?
Like long-ish epilogue with smut?
Sure, even assuming other boraleans came up with something it doesnt feel like that long of a story.

>>7400145
>sauce on image?
>One of Mikoyan's comics
gladiator, by Mikoyan
Only found a couple of pages in here
https://nhentai.net/g/96948/
looks like a preview more than anything

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>>7400340
What if we put Zhari in a Borealan-sized maid outfit and made her McGregor's housecat?

>>7400360
Nice find, his comics are absurdly hard to dig up.
Fuck that's why I can't access Nhentai lately, my retarded nanny state has blocked it. Thank god for VPNs.

>>7400321

>>7400384
Where do you live?

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https://pastebin.com/zbkXT5uC

>>7400313
Thanks for the "Hostage". That was a good one.

>>7400384
Speaking of, Splashdown reminded me of exactly what I feel is missing from Or Die Alone.
It might be in my head but there doesn't seem to be enough if any of the willful desire to find and push the cat's buttons.
The difference being Boyd doing it just to the point of matching and keeping pace with Lorza instead of trying to beat and break her; I know the last two sections were supposed to be a back and forth so hopefully the last part of this scene has some of that mutual forwardness.

Is anyone currently taking requests for straight or bisexual Monster stuff?

>>7400704
Potentially. What's the request?

>>7400721
>Avatars of perfect human sexuality exist on Earth.
>They take the form of whatever it's slightly taboo to fuck at the time, and seduce people.
>They used to show up as members of other tribes, commoners, and foreigners, but our time is more accepting.
>Now they appear as weirdly sexy monsters. Most of them are slightly animalistic, because beastiality is taboo.
>A sexually frustrated girl is sought out by one.
>They have crazy sex. This is in the background and not elaborated on.
>She finds out that sex with him will always be perfect, no matter what position they're in or who they're doing it with.
>Not through mind control, but through circumstances and the sexual avatar looking that attractive.
>You can have anal sex and it'll only feel good. He's huge, but never stretches you painfully. Giving him a blowjob
>She invites a few of her friends over to see.

Sexual experimentation through fucking a giant wolf-monster. Always wanted to try anal? Go for it! Not sure if you're gay or straight? If you're even slightly into men, you'll be all over this guy.

>>7400313
What do you mean by sadistic? I guess I'm more in the minority but I like equitorials. I mean they like to be in charge but they can be good lovers.

>>7398116
>Recent
Huh. Nothing I've written is on the 'recent' list, even though I started GFH in February. Is that only for completed stuff?

ALso, what's up the the ASL in the header of the master list?

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Wow, was December really the last time I wrote an entry in PWA?

The Player Witch Augment 7: The Lie With, The Twitch and the Wardrobe Malfunction
https://pastebin.com/qzp8C1mg
>tags: big cocks, cock growth, futa, futa-on-female, humiliation, public sex, spontaneous orgasm, contorted body, magic

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>>7400845
I cleaned out some of the "Recent Entries" after it was pointed out that several of them weren't recent at all; I've always been a little slow to update it though so feel free to add stuff if it seems to be missing.

As for the master list...well, a lot of people really like trying to vandalize it for no reason. At least this time it wasn't replaced entirely with "RIP U WEEB FAGS".

And on that note, here's what I've gotten thus far of my Electric Sleep rewrite. While it's not as much as I'd like, I've been through a lot of RL shit with no end to it in sight. Still, I hope it's good enough as an intro.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/131utHRqZ-BW8vhsHiR-YOySV4sSScEjRUtncaO1XD5Y/edit

>>7400911
Whoops, nearly forgot to make the link viewable. My mistake.

Shitty first time paste over here.
I was bored and needed to distract myself from real life, so here's a thousand and some hundred words of a 2nd person PoV oneshot where you're a lamia that unbirths a girl.
https://pastebin.com/yRFJ5gMv
In case it's not clear, it's got monstergirl, vore, unbirth, F/F and a light description of digestion.
This is my first paste and one of the first things I've posted online, so go ahead and call me a faggot for writing terribly.

>>7401052
This is one of the fetishes which I've never understood, so I gave it a read in case I grasp the appeal of it.

I'm not a fan of the 2nd person, especially since I think the monstergirl could be a fun character worthy of exploring. I guess I can not make it proper justice, since I'm not the target audience, but I had fun regardless. The descriptions are good to read.

Some typos I've noticed:
https://pastebin.com/Z86QfgGZ

>>7400911

As introductions go, it's decent enough. I would recommend two things, however. First expand the part with the two engineers a bit (who/where are they and what the fuck are they doing) and add a short part foreshadowing what the story is about.

The intro is meant to draw people in, but it feels a bit like an infodump right now.

>>7401307
Are you talking about the first segment with Chares and Epimethus? If so, it might make more sense when I add the next section of the story (what was the intro in the original); I want to try to make this different enough from the original to ensure it's not just a matter of copypasting everything and then changing the wording. Still, a little more detail to it won't hurt.

As for the second recommendation, I felt that the original lacked in worldbuilding aspects so I tried to inject those elements into what I posted. It seems like I've still got a lot to learn about it, though. Did I just try to share too much information at once, or was it a matter of delivering it wrong?

My attempts at foreshadowing in the past have had all the subtlety and grace of a kick in the balls, but I'll see what I can do. Any tips you can give in that respect would help, of course.

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>>7400313
I'm sorry to do this to you Snek. But you sparked my imagination today. Got damn equatorials on the brain I guess. So I came up for a pitch for a story if you ever have the time.

I'd thought it'd be interesting to use Cola again. Though this time have the story take place before and after fine print.

Have Cola and the MC meet as room mates. She at first is very quiet and reserved. Hardly ever talking to the protagonist. Untill one day he learns her real name. (Something that sounds rather silly to humans). He gives her a nickname and tries to break the ice between them that way. This harmless, nature of good will is not reciprocated in the way he had hoped. She goes full agro snu snu >rape on him.

He learns that he really really loves being dommed by her. He falls in love with her. Starts to use her nickname as a way to sleep with her.

They continue on till she is moved off station. He's heart broken. She didn't really view their relation ship more than what boreleans normally view their relationships as.

>time skip with her realizing that she really has a thing for him.
Stanley giving her a dumb nickname was enough to flip her switch. She realizes she loves him.

She shows back up at Pinwheel and goes on the hunt to find him. Finds him and fucks him hard to show how sorry she is.

They live happily ever after or something, sex.

Also MC could be fun being, a bit of a lazy recruit who had no where else to turn than the marines. Just goes with the flow mostly.

>>7397823
Also if you ever want to switch it up with sex positions and ect. This might help.

https://e-hentai.org/g/1042603/0bbed62dd3/

Have plump girl.

What are equatorials again

>>7401722
The /fit/ cats who act like assholes all the time.

>>7401729
Aren't those borealans

>>7401762
There's are two variants, equatorial borealans and polar borealans.
The fit ones are femdom monsters and the fat ones are /gfd/.

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>>7387471
Bit late to respond, but this goes to anyone whose read my story thus far.

I was thinking to potentially rework the second half of the prologue for Love Coils. As in, Adding maybe a few more cutesy childhood-love-is-blooming scenes and push back the moving away so it's more naturally brought up and possibly leave a more emotional impact on the reader

Also I sincerely apologize for the lack of updates recently but persona 5 has me totally hooked, but luckily it's not so much writers block, but a bit of laziness on my end

Could use a bit of worldbuilding help for something I want to write, lads
I've got an idea about an alien/fantasy nonhuman species that both mates for life and has heat cycles.
What kind of cultural quirks would develop around this, do you think? I want to keep them at least fairly relatable to humans since it's gonna be about a human and [currently unnamed species]

>>7401809
Snekguy already did that with his Krell species.
He had them go into heat, mate in a huge orgy, and then certain members of the orgy would pair off and mate for life when they found someone they liked.

>>7401809
>tasy nonhuman species that both mates for life and has heat cycles.
>What kind of cultural quirks would develop around this, do you think? I want to keep them at least fairly relatable to humans since it's gonna be about a human and [currently unnamed species]

Level of development? are they primitive/contemporary/scy.fy?

I can see heat hollidays being a thing if it hits them like porn heat.

How is 'for life'? 'wedding' for life or 'first time' for life?

What are the ayy lmaos? what kind of species would require full blown life-mating or similar long spans to defend each other/the offspring?

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>>7398988
Thanks! Mostly in the new book 'Dante', there's a lot of details about Blood Angels, specifically their initiation rites, becoming a proper Astartes, the Red Thirst and Black Rage, and their daily habits. It even goes into detail about Dante taking a post-battle bath that has 4 phases not counting removing his armor and the skintight suit he was wearing under it, and how serfs remove all that and wipe him down.

Life is pretty good, even if it means rewriting chunks of my story. Have some birdtits.

>>7401809
I could imagine a lot of cultural emphasis on raising children in maximum contact to try and encourage pairbonding before maturity.
It might be interesting if the species hits physical/emotional maturity in all other respects before reproductive age is reached, that could create a very different and interesting dynamic

>>7401809
So basically "my childhood friend can't possibly be this lewd!":The species?

>>7401809
They would definitely have a big thing about having perfectly even gender ratios in the number of children in X village/tribe/social unit
To avoid darker results, perhaps the pheromones given off by pregnant females influence the gender of children of other pregnant females, to keep things that way
Hrm, what if they almost always have male/female twins? That could do it
Same gender twins would be considered an extremely bad omen unless there's a matching set, which would be an extremely GOOD omen?

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2000 word update, my fingers are falling off edition. New content at "She went slow and heavy,"
Finished the first sex scene, it's 10,493 words in total.
If you want to read it from the top, it starts at “Come on, I'm getting cold again.”

>>7400559
Well I didn't want to make it too adversarial which is what I usually do, I hope I was able to convey a more mutual experience with some healthy rivalry.

>>7400779
I've been doing a lot of /gfd/ content recently, while I like it just fine, I want to get some harder content in too when I have the time. Draw some blood, if you will.

>>7401392
Noice. That's useful, I should try to diversify the sex acts a little.

>>7401374
I definitely like the nickname-triggers-violent-sex idea, that's hot. I'm flattered you even remember Cola and want to see her again, no promises because they're really stacking up now, but I'll see if I can fit something at least similar into the request month.

>>7401722
>>7401762
I have a PDF explaining the differences, and it has pictures!
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=7752394&i=773404

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>>7399108
WOOOOOO LAD.

That was really really good. REALLY GOOD. Didn't you say English wasn't your first language? If so than I can't tell because your writing skills are amazing. Do you have a patreon or something I can throw money at?

>>7401052
Not bad for a first try. Vaginal vore is fairly niche but I think it would be worth posting this in the same-size vore thread when they make a new one.

I will echo what the other anon said about 2nd person being a poor choice for this story. 2nd person isn't the greatest POV in general, but it can work if the viewpoint character is vague enough or easy for the audience to relate to. That's not the case here - for the story to work the POV character must be a female lamia, and that's not someone a (probably male) human reader can easily relate to. Don't take this to mean that writing vore from the pred perspective is a bad idea, though. It's just better done through 1st person or 3rd person writing than 2nd person.

When I write vore I'll usually switch off between the predator and prey perspectives because there's certain things that are best described from one perspective or another. This helps to avoid awkward sentences like:
>your prey must be completely covered in acid, including her insides, if she was not capable of keeping her mouth closed
Where you try to work information only one perspective has into the other perspective's writing.

>>7401914
You mind if I make one without pictures? 99 times out of a hundred I prefer NOT to know what the author uses to illustrate their characters because it's never going to look as good as whatever I have in my folders that are closest.

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I have a request.

Mad scientist fulfills petite wife's life-long fantasy of becoming an amazonian sized futa with thick curves and a gigantic cock.

>>7402057
>Mad scientist fulfills petite wife's life-long fantasy of becoming an amazonian sized futa with thick curves and a gigantic cock.

Hmmmm...

Tell me more.

>>7402068

Focus on the size difference before and after, meek wife exploring the role reversal and she struggles to act it out at first only to hit her stride as it goes on. She is still a softy at heart though.

Tell me what else you want to know.

>>7402085

How long? Both in word length and penis size? And height, I suppose.

I'm more likely to take a short request. And of course... you should know my general disinterest in futa-on-male, which might make me wrong for the material.

>>7402050
If you're worried about the quality of the pictures I didn't do them myself, I commissioned them, so the quality is very high.
Of course if you're talking about the style and design, then that's subjective.

You can go through and delete the pictures if you want, but please don't distribute it without them, because it's supposed to be like a pretend tourism guide for the planet and without the pictures and formatting it doesn't have the same punch.

>>7402096

lets go with the classical footlong that is wrist-thick, 7 to 9 feet tall. You can make it a lesbian marriage if that makes it easier for you, I'm ambivalent on that. I don't mind if it's a short story as long as the transformation is slow and detailed.

I'm not picky, whatever you can come up with, I'll take it happily.

>>7402097
>tourism guide
>use canadian forces font
You, uh, don't mind that?

I would never distribute something I haven't brought before the original author. But my autism dictates I won't modify what they present even though they'd never know it- even if I dislike it, I then don't save it. It only happens when authors commission art or put fanart up front.

There is lots of writing about how you can't beat the dick. Is there any about not being able to beat the pussy?

I really want to see some men get betrayed by their dicks.

>>7401914
>I didn't want to make it too adversarial
Alright. I finished reading through it and it's very nice. I do want to say though that the idea of referencing to Splashdown was specifically taking the energy and aggressive exploration while stripping the adversarial part of it.
Having them both driving each other higher, but FOR each other instead of AGAINST the other person.

Or to put it another way; like Splashdown, but neither party is trying to resist the pleasure the other is giving.
I think you got some of that in the last bit.

>>7401914
Thanks for the consideration. I realize your plate is very full.

>>7402159
Wait. What? So you want an orgasm denial story about a girl? Your first line suggests exactly that, but the second line mystifies me.

>>7402383
I want forced orgasm writing about a guy being fucked hard by a woman. There isn't a lot of femdom that focuses on vaginal sex feeling really good, rather than degradation or pegging.

>Nothing written about men who have trained for years not to cum having an orgasm.
>Destroying their entire worldview in a few seconds, abandoning celibacy.
>Convincing others to join them by making them cum.

drew more
dark elf lady x skaven http://i.imgur.com/Pd1nchb.png

not much else to say, other than drawing is still hard.

>>7402127
>>7402057
>Mad scientist fulfills petite wife's life-long fantasy of becoming an amazonian sized futa with thick curves and a gigantic cock.

Last question. Was the cock part of her original fantasy, or was it an unforeseen side effect of the transformation?

>>7402908

Part of the original fantasy.
So...will you take it?

>>7402957

I'll try. I can't guarantee anything, since growth isn't really my speed, but I wrote that catgirl thing a while back and that was pretty cool.

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Requesting a short thing.
Imagine some headphones. They're fancy headphones, got some inbuilt cat ear speakers, with a little program that simply plays an audio file to the one wearing it. The program's capable of testing the subject, ensuring vitals are safe.

The audio file it plays is a sort of hypnosis/induction file. I'm not experienced in writing scripts, especially not something like this. Better to go to the experts and hope for the best.

The subject of the hypnosis file is essentially to make the subject believe, whole-heartedly, that they are a kitten. One for serving their owner, ensuring that they are happy. I'd like it to be short, quick lines. At most, 300-ish total lines, but it's your choice if you want to go above that.
Write it as if the file is speaking directly to the subject. If you can somehow make it look 'muffled' in text, you can have some speech from the headphone's program, saying some stuff like "Subject has finished file. Restarting...", or perhaps some progress markers. "Subject has endured 45% of file." Again, creative choice.

Thanks in advance to any who take it on. Have a cat threesome.

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>>7401852
>It even goes into detail about Dante taking a post-battle bath that has 4 phases not counting removing his armor and the skintight suit he was wearing under it, and how serfs remove all that and wipe him down
wew

Thanks for the birdtits!

>>7402779
You're definitely improving skavanon! Always good to see your unique brand of ratfucking.

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>>7401938
Your comment means a lot to me, anon, I'm glad you liked it! Are you OR, by the way? Yes, English is not my native, but I'm happy you couldn't notice. Well, since it's only like the third story I wrote in English, I haven't really considered setting up and maintain a Patreon page, but I guess a ko-fi.com link won't hurt, so if you really insist, here it is: ko-fi.com/anonkfic

I hope I'll be still worthy of your words in the future.

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>>7400541
>someone liked Hostage
You're very welcome!

>>7402235
Cool, I'm glad you liked it, and I see what you mean.
Maybe I can get some more of that into the next scene.

Taking a day off today to give my fingers a rest, I'll be back with another update tomorrow.

>>7402779
Stop giving me a rat person fetish. Stop it.

Put what I've finished of the latest futa story from fp on here so you guys can view it more easily if you're at all interested. Cheers.

https://pastebin.com/K5QfFAtf

>>7403501
Fp? Are we supposed to know what that is? Also, tags please.

>>7403329
Why are you surprised that "someone liked" it?

>>7403569
It's one of my lower scoring stories, only 4.6/5 on Lit, and it didn't generate a lot of discussion or comments.

>>7403595
I need to get a Literotica account. I keep putting that off.

I might be a drunk-ass minority, but I would really like another soft equatorial borlean story, maybe even a sequel to Worlds Apart, because I like my femdom softcore and loving but the traditional '/gfd.' approach that polars do has just too much weird maternal stuff makes me want to blind myself going on, I dunno.

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>>7403235
Yes, I am the OR. I'm getting my paycheck on Sunday so when I do I'll throw money at you. Keep up the great work and keep me updated!

>>7402779
It looks good! I caught the WIP in your secondary gallery and was hoping to see it finished. The pose works wonderfully, the expressions look natural, the structure is great (not too much or too little background, that sort of thing) and there's a lot of nice little details like the drip and the way her hair is falling. I'd say it's easily one of the best pictures you've done. If you still like the idea of the Dark Elves as sisters, it might be fun to see a kind of mirror image picture of the other pair in a similar against-the-wall pose, as if both Druchii are being taken from either side of the same pillar. But yeah, definitely a cool piece.

>>7403329
You're a great writer but I find monsters monstrous. Do any of your stories not feature things with fur/scales/feathers?

>>7403734
>Do any of your stories not feature things with fur/scales/feathers?
Nope. He needs the crutch of alien-ness for them not to appear hopelessly sociopathic

>>7403687
>because I like my femdom softcore and loving but the traditional '/gfd.' approach ... has just too much weird maternal stuff
Thank God, I was worried I was the only one who felt like that

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>>7403681
It's a great way to gauge general reception just through the sheer quantity of traffic you get.

>>7403734
Technically Equatorials don't have fur on their body, they're just anime catgirls.
But nah, not really, I love sci-fi and I try to make my aliens at least somewhat passable as aliens. I'm not too interested in writing about humans, just because it seems mundane to me when you're presented with so many possibilities.

I do have one story about lesbian ghosts, and one about fantasy Orcs if that interests you. Besides that it's all aliens.

>>7403738
Just wait until I have time for the Borealan Pirate fic, you're gonna love that one.

>>7403777
Yo snek, you keep mentioning short story month, but what do you actually have lined up for it? Specifics would be great

>>7403801
I'm gonna set aside a month fairly soon to tackle some of the requests I've gotten and try to limit them to 10k words so I can get through them in a timely manner. So far I have:
>Raz visits Stanley's farm
>Zhari is McGregor's housecat
>A UNN pilot gets snowed in at the Outpost and fucks Zagza
>Schaffer and Runt do some as of yet undetermined gay shit
>Scarface has a threeway with Schaffer and Runt
>Drunk Borealan molests a human (possibly the barfly from Fineprint)

>>7403812
>Scarface has a threeway with Schaffer and Runt
>>Drunk Borealan molests a human
Wasn't there a
>Scarface is actually a really cuddly drunk
Request? You could probably merge those two

>>7403852
Yeah I got a couple of different pitches for that, I decided to go with the "Schaffer and Runt try to double-team Scarface and get schooled" one over the "cuddly drunk" one.
I feel that Polars are cuddly enough as it and the juxtaposition of a cuddly drunk Equatorial is more entertaining.

>>7403777
Well, you've convinced me, my scaly compatriot.

I submitted The Player Witch Augment to Literotica. It is currently Pending. I have no idea what they're going to think of such a story, but it's my most popular one by far.

>>7403872
Aw, as the original Schafer/runt/scarface threesome requester, I really liked that one.
Ah well, maybe when you've got five spare days and I've got 40 spare bucks

>>7403887
Be warned the approval process takes fucking ages, sometimes a whole week, but the traffic is astronomical compared to any other sites I've used and the community is pretty good. The very first story I posted there before I had any kind of following got 26,000 views, so that will give you some idea of what to expect.
I would be shocked if there wasn't a futa sub-community there who would be thrilled to have a new writer.

>>7403902
Hmm, well let me think of a way to maybe satisfy both requests. Perhaps have her start off cuddly, but then take the reigns when Runt and Schaffer think they're in the clear, and have her rock their worlds?
I'm not sure if I'm gonna have time to do a hetero edit, so I'm assuming you're cool with me going full bi on that one?

>>7403920
>I would be shocked if there wasn't a futa sub-community there who would be thrilled to have a new writer.

They have a "transsexual/crossdresser" category, but... I filed this under "humor." I asked an admin to help sort it properly.

>>7403920
>Perhaps have her start off cuddly, but then take the reigns when Runt and Schaffer think they're in the clear, and have her rock their worlds?
Why not the other way around? She shows up all revved up for some furniture-busting double femdom, but after some oral, headpats and beer, she's much cuddlier for round two?
>I'm not sure if I'm gonna have time to do a hetero edit, so I'm assuming you're cool with me going full bi on that one?
Most assuredly. The whole interest was in having just as much gay as hetero content.
Also, two tiny suggestions, if shiny's OK with them
>Scarface actually makes adorably girly sex noises when she's not concentrating on not doing it
>runt has a bit of a crush on scarface and she kind of returns it
I'm just really into all three people in a threesome being romantically interested in each other, but it's so rare

>>7403922
I explored Literotica to see if they had much futa content.

One bloke has written multiple futa ballbusting stories.

Now, I'm not into that at all, but... I'm laughing too hard at all the preposterous reasons they come up with to kick someone in the nuts.

>>7403951
>I'm just really into all three people in a threesome being romantically interested in each other, but it's so rare

I'll take that as a challenge, it's perfect for their pack mentality. I'll see what I can do.

>>7403954
Well turn that record over cause you ain't seen nothing yet
Witness the madness
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=371839&page=submissions

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>>7403951
>>7403970
>Schaeffer,runt and scarface having their own tiny outsider subpack and smol cuddle pile in their own little corner of the outpost
My heart also has an erection

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>>7403977
Oh Jesus he's a canadian.
From my hometown.
Time to commit sepukku with a hockey stick

Putting together a shitty little, open world, text adventure game. Any requests/recommendations for early-game charas/scenarios?

>>7403977
>All Women Are Bitches
>20 part series
WEW

>>7404005
Setting? Tone? Storyline? Give us something to work with.

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>>7403977

>>7403977
>A Black Woman Rejects Feminism
>Black woman chooses Black love over Feminist hate
W E W
E
W

>>7404022
Sci-fi fantasy(?). Basically medieval but with old technology instead of magic. Tone is (planned) to change based on what routes you go down, so either smutfun or dark shit. Plot work in progress pls no bully.

>>7397921
You really might want to consider breaking that up into separate stories, D. I opened the link and was immediately too intimidated to try reading the whole thing.

>>7403977
Sammy X is a literotica treasure
For added hilarity, imagine
>Tyler Perry's
In front of every one of his story titles

>>7403951
>>7403970

>Why not the other way around? She shows up all revved up for some furniture-busting double femdom, but after some oral, headpats and beer, she's much cuddlier for round two?

When you put it that way, you can reasonably do both requests, the original one and then links directly to yours. I like it.

>>7403970
Unsolicited advice incoming
I'm 99% assuming that double vaginal penetration is going to be a part of this MMF story, and since I assume you haven't been there, I'm going to tell you that the feeling of the other cock rubbing up against yours is just as important when describing the feeling as the pussy is, especially with a fancy cock like borleans have

>>7403109
thank you. im glad the improvement is noticeable; im hopeful that will continue

>>7403364
oh, you flatter me too much
also, no

>>7403731
i had actually stopped at an earlier point but was unsatisfied with it, so I went over a lot of the lines again with a darker pencil, and did a bit more strong approach to the shading than i had done before. I think even that rough approach helped improve it in adding a bit of much needed depth/weight, but there's still quite a lot i know i can do to improve on both line quality and shading. and other things, of course. hands, hair, general anatomy, the usual.

the one thing i ended up being most satisfied with, weirdly enough, was the rat's armor. its got problems, but for once, it pops apart from the rest of his figure, and looks reasonably metallic. its the small things, i guess.

glad to hear that you like the piece. thanks!

>>7404309
the shading change comparison, for kicks: http://i.imgur.com/u9fi8xe.gif

i got a tendency to overwork things to death, but i think this time, it was called for.

>>7403777
Pirate Borealan fic? Whats the idea with that one?

>>7404377
Generic femdom rapeshit with invincible catgirls, that's about it

>>7404403
>>7404403

someone is really bitter around here.

>>7404418
Name one part of that statement that's inaccurate

>>7404418

It's the same guy who goes into a frothing rage everytime someone posts anything about borealans that isnt negative, then proceeds to call anyone who doesnt agree with him a snek fanboi/snek defense force.

I really wish there was a way to filter specific anons.

>>7404047
Well, I always felt like I was being slightly cheeky breaking up Player Witch Augment into separate pages, only because that wasn't meant to have a sequel at all.

What does everyone else think? It is over 50K words, so... should I break that up into chapters?

>>7404574
Maybe it will sound pretentious, but I never really care about what is good for the reader. I always ask, what is good for the story itself. If it's beneficial for the story, the structure or something, then chapters are fine. If it's not, then it's just one big flow of text.

Just keep in mind that chapters has to work like short stories. It has to have a beginning, a middle, and a sort of ending which makes a chapter a unique entity in itself. If you already have 50k words of text, solving this might be quite troublesome.

>>7404583
Well, I'm not going to change any of the story, of course. But... then again, there is something to be said for ease of access. I don't want people to turn away from it just because it's long.

Anyone else have thoughts?

Someone hit me up with a commission. I've never offered my services before, and I'm bored enough to do a write up on the fly. Keep it hetero/lesbian, I don't do homosexuality and traps.

>>7404603
>Keep it lesbian
>I don't do homosexuality
This is why America can't have nice things

>>7404603
You mean a request? Pretty bigheaded to assume people would want to give you money without even having piece of sample writing to go off of.

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>>7404603
A swordsman fends off a monster invasion led by a Lizardgal. After defeating her in a duel she offers him marriage, which he denies. Being a bit hard headed, she tries other methods to convince him to marry her, such as moving into his home (without his permission) and trying to seduce him with her body, pushing it to his back, directing hand to her boobs, and all that fun stuff until he touches her sensitive tail. Things get lewder from there, revealing that she has no idea what she (or what he) is doing.

>>7404254
Double vaginal penetration? Is that even possible? That sounds really dangerous.

>>7404701
A fist is bigger than two cocks and people do fisting all the time

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>>7404377
I want to take Equatorials to their logical extreme and have a cigar-smoking, eyepatch-wearing, leather jacket-clad pirate queen.
The story I'm thinking will be that she tries to take over a freighter with her crew, but the sole pilot outsmarts her, spaces her men and ends up trapped on his vessel alone with her.
She then takes it all out on him in all the worst (and best) ways.

I really like the idea of someone being alone with a villain who they've seriously crossed, I want to see if I can make the reader attracted to someone they're supposed to dislike. Should be fun.

It also serves to establish that the Borealans are using the ships people keep selling them, so the species can end up in more varied locations and roles.

>>7404219
Yeah I'm confident I can get both requests in, I may make some changes to the 'drunk equatorial' story to make them less similar though.

>>7404254
>double vaginal
I did not know that was a thing. Is that something people really do or is it more like a porn thing?

>>7404712
>Is that something people really do or is it more like a porn thing?
Well the guy who was telling you about it presumably has, but I've heard of it as a thing outside of porn, too

>>7404727
All I know is that I've heard of 'double-anal' and that it's extremely dangerous and ill-advised.

To echo the sentiments expressed here
>>7404701
I'm not sure if that's something people would be doing casually, I'll have a look into it and see what I can find. I shouldn't turn down any suggestion that lets me add more variety to my sex scenes after all.

>>7404737
When you think about it it's not actually that different or more dangerous than garden-variety large insertion.
Like a girl taking a dick that's twice as big as usual wouldn't even cause a blink here, and it'd actually be *larger* than just two cocks

>>7404785
Yeah, I guess you're right, I've done large insertion plenty and that's completely unrealistic. Ok I'll add that to my request list.

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>>7404712
I'm curious what the end game between them will be. Like, bad end? I'm not sure if I want to get invested in a story like that. You've made me like some characters that start out pretty shitty.


I actually liked Azi.

>>7404789

Hostage anon here. I like it a lot, especially the large insertions parts. Good job man, and don't fret over ratings, 4.6 is still pretty good!

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>>7404907
Nah, /efg/ has made me swear up and down with one hand on my heart and the other on my copy of Ringworld that I'll never write bad end or NTR.
That said, ending on a positive note doesn't mean it has to be sappy. It's all on the drawing board though and it will be a while before I can get to it.

That gives me an idea, how about having the 'drunk equatorial' short story be Azi kind of redeeming herself and having non-sexual assault relations with a human?
Or would that kind of trivialize her character? I know a lot of people wanted to see her redeemed but I don't want to skip over what should probably be serious character development either.
Still the idea of having her shitfaced in a bar, fawning over humans is fun.

I'm thinking of doing 4000 words of exposition and then 6000 words of sex as the formula for these shorts, I think that should let me at least tell a minor story with some setup.

>>7404913
Awesome! If you liked that you might want to check out Highway to Krell if you haven't already, it has several large-insertion scenes reminiscent of what happens in Hostage.

>>7404948
I will. Oh, and Crashland is great as well, the 4 arm girl there knows what's up, gentle femdom is cute and size difference does wonders to the narrative. Got something other than Patreon?

>>7404953
Here are some Ebook downloads for the two versions:

Hetero Edition:
https://pastebin.com/8yHfNjqf
Ebook: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=8748907&i=954840

Bisexual Edition:
https://pastebin.com/hE1muHCb
Ebook: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=8748907&i=954839

And some Krell art by Grimsby:
http://imgur.com/a/50A1D

Nah I only use Patreon, but I've recently been introduced to Ko-Fi thanks to
>>7403235
and I was wondering if that would be more convenient for people who want to to give a one-time donation?

>>7404948
WEBBER x SLEETHE OTP & BEST COUPLE
Also Reid should try and expand upon the unique opportunity that was presented to her.

>>7404948
>That gives me an idea, how about having the 'drunk equatorial' short story be Azi kind of redeeming herself and having non-sexual assault relations with a human?
>Or would that kind of trivialize her character?
Yeah, I can't say I'd be interested in that
Why not combine the drunk equatorial story with the human woman femdomming borlean male idea that's been floating around? Like a big young Alpha As Fuck borlean wonders what being sexually submissive is like and after a couplea drinks decides to get a human to do it so he doesn't lose status

>>7404948
>Redeem Azi
Hell yeah, I'd be down for that. You could also make up for cutting short of drunk sexy times in fine print.

>>7404948
I'd rather not have it be azi, nah.
If she's getting a redemption arc that she survives at all, it would deserve it's own full story

>>7404969
Aw shit man, thanks! Much appreciated!
Understood. Patreon is not a bad place after all

>>7404948
Azi redemption deserves it's own story, I'd say. Though, if you were willing to write a 95% action story I'd say that it could be combined with Moralez and Boyd Annihilate The Syndicate as a story, but anyways.
For the drunk equatorial story, I've got an idea
Say a human is drinking at the pinwheel E-club, and is yammering to the guy on the next stool about how he kinda wants borlean pussy but isn't crazy enough to volunteer for a mixed unit to try and get it
Say our gal hears him with her fancy cat ears and after her seventeenth gin and tonic decides to go over, hoist him over her shoulder and take him back to her quarters and fuck him through the floor, because she's curious about humans, too

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3000 word update, new content at "Boyd opened his eyes to darkness"

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
>no new tags

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>>7404971
I'll definitely do more Krell fics when I get time.

>>7404981
>>7404982
>>7404983
I'm leaning towards doing it with Azi, but I have time to see what more people think about it first.

>>7405006
I believe the original pitch was the Borealan getting extremely drunk and then lamenting that humans didn't have tails, which would lead to cuddly drunk sex. Again, I can probably fuse more elements into it.

>>7404984
No problem, hope you enjoy it!

>>7405213
Well, to be perfectly honest, I'm not a huge fan of aliens and such. The lizard pic you provided makes my heart racing and palms sweaty moms spaghetti because of the hips (can you call it like that in this case?), literally best. This pic right now - even better cuz she's stronk and cute and all. And you showed me literotica, I cannot be more thankful. But enough sucking your dick, you might like it too much. Take care, Snekguy, may your writing make our crotches diamonds and our needs fulfilled.

>>7405213
>I believe the original pitch was the Borealan getting extremely drunk and then lamenting that humans didn't have tails, which would lead to cuddly drunk sex. Again, I can probably fuse more elements into it.
I am fairly drunk, but wasn't that part of the outpost cuddly MMF request?

>>7403729
If you are OR, then I'm really happy that I could fulfill your request.

Like I've said, I hope you'll find the next one also appealing to your liking. It seems like it'll be much shorter, but hopefully for the best.

>>7404969
Thank you very much, Snek, for the cup of coffee!

To add to the discussion, I often see creators both with a Patreon and with a Ko-fi account, but since I'm unsure as a donator if I can provide them support from month to month, I prefer occasional tipping towards them.

I think of Patreon as a sort of subscription, so if the author can not provide a solid stream of new content, I would say Ko-fi a better option, but these are just my two cents.

I just had a look through the master smut list and couldn't find a fic I remember reading here a long while back.

I think it was written in the first person, but I might be wrong, the main character was female though. The plot was she's walking through a forest and hears moaning. She walks into a clearing and finds a bunch of people's heads and faces just sticking out of the ground, moaning in pleasure. As she gets closer to investigate a tentacle grabs her by the foot and pulls her into a nearby hidden tentacle pit, leaving nothing but her head above ground like the others around her. I think that she eventually gets corrupted into a bug-like girl with a belly full of seeds to go spread the tentacle creature further or something.

Hopefully someone remembers it and has it somewhere.

If not, I guess this is a request post then. Maybe vlose te corruption part and add in a second girl who leads her there and joins her in the same tentacle pit or something?

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>>7405275
Don't change your stories to appeal to me. Seriously! I like the way you write. Just write however you want. My only request is that you keep writing more awesome Nier stuff.

>>7405340
No such fic has ever been made, but good luck with the request. You're going to need it.

>>7405508
>No such fic has ever been made
It definitely has, but it was years ago. It may have been posted on /tg/ instead of /d/, back when /tg/ allowed this sort of thing to be posted there.

>>7404309
>>7404322
It's pretty cool to see the two versions contrasted against one another, artist technique is always something I find quite fascinating. The armour did turn out nicely, and I see what you mean about the shading making the difference when it comes to texture. It also helps to emphasise the pale skin vs dark fur contrast going on between both characters, which definitely adds to the picture.

>>7405662
Hey, are you open for other story prompts?

Like, are you ok with Superheroines and stuff?

>>7404309
>>7404322
Skavanon, could you art the following, please?

Dark elf girl bending over and presenting her full, heart-shaped pillow of an ass to the viewer. The skaven from the pic you just posted is either holding on to her hips with his dick just about touching the lips of her pussy, or he is enthusiastically eating her out.
She looks like she's either eagerly anticipating the imminent penetration, or is quite enjoying getting head from the skaven.

>>7405678
I'm juggling two stories at the moment (one is looking increasingly like it's going to get ditched or completely restarted though) but I'm always open to pitches and ideas. Never done a comic-booky Superheroine story before, but I wouldn't mind taking a shot if the concept hooks me.

Just going to leave this story here
You didnt get it from me

https://chyoa.com/story/Cracking.10837

>>7405784
Tags?

>>7405785
Here are some of the ones I got from the site. There ore more there if you care

Excessive Cum
Cum Inflation
Ahegao
Breast Expansion
Ass Expansion
Rape
Crazed
Bukakke
Huge Tits
Huge Ass
Rough
Transformation
Bimbofication
Story
Virus

>>7403559
Futanari Palace, it's a forum for futanari.

>>7405781
Well, I was thinking of a superheroine trying to breaking up a sex trafficking operation run by a mind controlling villain.

Alternatively, a superheroine story where her boyfriend finds out about her secret identity, creating a new dynamic between them.

>>7405515
I was there when we were on /tg/, I'm sure I would've remembered a fic that weird.

>>7405688

ill give it a go

>>7403977
I Fuck Girl Wrestlers In The Ass: 2 Part Series

Unreal

>>7402057
Alright, this is officially happening.

One To Grow On
Coming This Summer

I don't know when it'll be done, but I'll try to get it done soon. Do you want credit for the idea, or should I attribute it to "anon?"

http://sadehall.tumblr.com/1/eat-cute.html
Not mine
monstergirl, BDSM

Probably my favorite story atm :D

>>7406581
Oh, and click the symbol in the upper-left to open the options bar

>>7406366
Excellent, I look forward to seeing what you do!

>>7406541

I love you.

Anon is fine.

>>7405802
Eugh. How dreadful

Goddamn, how much on Literotica is written from a first person perspective? Is that what people want? I find it so awkward most of the time... or is that just the writing itself?

>>7407131
To be honest I've never even considered that first person would be a problem to anyone up until this point.

>>7407131

Supposedly, first person feels closer/more personal to the reader, and thus, works pretty well when you're trying to arouse them.

Its just a detail when against writing quality though.

>>7407131
A lot of it; I have the impression that the majority of what's on there is for author wish-fulfillment, because some of the stuff is way too specific to appeal to anyone beyond the guy who made it.

>>7407131

Since its literotica, I'm going to say that its the writing quality.

90% of everything is crap and all that jazz.

>>7407131
Lots of books are first person. Plus, it lets you escape pronoun hell with gay stuff.

>>7407144
First person increases your awareness that the author exists as a real person, and they're very likely male, so it feels a bit gay. Third person is more detached so you can pretend it's records of a real event that spontaneously appeared.

>>7407167
You reason like a child.

>>7407167
this one of stupidest mental gymnastics I've ever heard

>>7407167
You sound like someone who thinks sword-chucks are a good idea.

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>>7407160
>Plus, it lets you escape pronoun hell with gay stuff.

What if there was time-travel selfcest, where both characters were "I?"

>>7407179
Then it would read like it was written by a Rastafarian.

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>>7407179

>>7407179
Could be interesting, but thoughts experiments are just that- thoughs.

>>7407131
At least it's not second person.

>>7407327

can someone give me an example of first, second and third person writing?

I never quite got the difference.

>>7407331
>1st: I did the thing
>2nd: you did the thing
>3rd: he did the thing

I'm surprised to be requesting something, but just as a very vague request, it'd be nice to see Lord Shen x Boss Wolf. As in from Kung Fu Panda 2.

Just read this and oh lord I didn't know I wanted this but turns out I do.
https://exhentai.org/g/854625/e8622d86f3/

Told to post this in /efg/, cleaned it up a bit.

>Tough to Love - 11371 Words
>https://pastebin.com/GR5CRpz9
>Human(M) x Anthro(F, Doberman), Oral (Fellatio, Sixty Nine), Vaginal, Cream Pie, Forbidden Fetish (Hand holding during sex)

First time writing smut, please excuse my ADHD if words are just missing because I thought I had typed them but didn't. Post script pastebin at the end is just a collection of my thoughts on it all after I finished it.

2000 word update, new content at “Where shall we take him,”

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
>no new tags

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>>7405244
I don't think so, but I may be mistaken. Scarface is basically mute so any dialogue involving her wouldn't really work.

>>7405275
No problem, I enjoyed your story but I didn't have much to add that hadn't been said. Keep up the good work!

>>7407663
>I don't think so, but I may be mistaken
I'm the guy who made the original suggestion involving friendly borleans from a non-elysian equatorial city/ethnicity/tribe who had zero alcohol tolerance because I hadn't read fineprint and didn't know they were all that way, and somebody responded with
>drunk borlean hugging humans and say they're sorry that humans don't have tails
I also made the request involving scarface being a cuddly drunk and included that phrase became it's fucking adorable, all credit to whatever anon came up with it first.
I kinda had an idea that a few drinks and actually feeling comfortable with Schafer (and runt but not quite as much) would get her to drop her strong silent stoic act a little in addition to the physical cuddlyness, because I'm into that sort of thing

>>7407658
Neck self furfag

>>7407658
Oh good, you posted it here, too
This thread needs more vanilla
Y'all take requests? Because lots of folks around here want requests with that stuff

>>7407701
On it.

>>7407718
Not sure "y'all" is, but I don't mind hearing some requests. My work ethic is akin to a pile of burning garbage, though. Took me a week and a half to write TtL because I had a hard time sitting the fuck down and writing.

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>>7407718
>Doberman
>vanilla

>>7407802
If I had to guess, I think he means vanilla sex rather than anything else. Nothing crazy going on besides a dude fuckin' a dog lady. Which I guess ain't any level of 'normal' but this is the part of 4chan where people would be put off less if the dude had consensual honeymoon sex with a sentient blob of elmer's glue than a dog person, so folks just gotta take what they can get.

Anyone up for an elmers gluegirl request?

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>>7407915
Cheeky fucker

>>7397704
>>7397662
OR here. I'm heading to an area with no internet or cell coverage until Friday. If you do manage to complete your story during that time, I apologize in advance for not being able to read and review it until next weekend.

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Ok I shat this out really fast because someone pitched a story in the xeno thread on /aco/ that I liked, and I'll finish it off tomorrow when I'm done with my 'Or Die Alone' update because I'm up irresponsibly late.

Dextro-chocolate:
2500 words (in progress)
https://pastebin.com/axtc0wsp
tags so far:
>kissing, Turian, oral, interspecies, Mass Effect

>>7408009
I'm at 2000 words and somewhere around halfway done. Expect it on the weekend.

>>7399278
He'll man, no shame.

My kink is happy consensual sex. Bonuses for consensual mind break.

>>7406751

dark elf lady x skaven http://i.imgur.com/TV1akgC.png

hey did you know that foreshortening is really difficult :|

i also need to go find some mountain hermit to give me shading pointers. that or just practice more on it.

>>7408336
I did not know that, but I do know what I like and I like this very much. Thank you, Skavanon. This really made my morning!

>>7408348
you're very welcome! I'm glad you like it.

and yeah, it's challenging stuff. but it's nice to struggle with something other than gross anatomical errors, for once.

>>7408371

forgot my trip :V

>>7408323
>consensual mind break
This interests me. Can you describe any scenarios that'd involve this?

>>7408336
>foreshortening is really difficult

You pulled it off pretty well, though. Nothing jumps out as particularly odd-looking.

If you're still up to taking requests, how about the pair of Dark Elf girls kneeling back to back, giving (and being forced to give) their guests some oral love?

>>7408389

alrighty. won't be able to do it for a few days, tho.

>>7408401
Cool, no problem. I'll look forward to it.

>>7408389
>group sex, nc
How generic and dull.

>>7408381
Not him, but one idea I've had for a while involving that is a henchwoman of some villain who keeps getting turned on watching female heroes be put into the mindbreak rapemachine or thrown to the tentacle monster to be turned into a mindless milk cow/breeding slut, and eventually one day asks the villain to go through the process herself. The villain of course agrees because it would make her more obedient/it saves going out hunting down a new girl to put into the tentacle pit.

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>>7403920
>>7403887

The Player Witch Augment is now my first work posted to Literotica!

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-player-witch-augment

It's already got two favorites! Not sure if that's good or not.

>>7407160
I don't really get this pronoun hell thing... My native language only has one third person pronoun and we still manage to make things understandable...

First time writing anything lewd, would like critique/advice.
https://pastebin.com/JwZycUa2

The lewd part only comes at the end and isn't very in depth, as this chapter serves to establish everything and give the two characters involved enough sexual tension to actually have sex in the next chapter.

tags for the story in general at the moment, and this mostly non-lewd chapter :
>humanoid beetle man, fantasy, hetero, female PoV, wet dream, not!Mongols, hivemind

For a quick synopsis of this chapter, not!Mongol female warrior meets a beetle man her people are allied with, gets curious about his anatomy but represses it, has a wet dream.

>>7408718
What language is that? It might have features that English doesn't, or more implied context or something.

>>7408721
Finnish

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>>7408719
>humanoid beetle-man
Now this right here is the kind of forward thinking that we need.

I thought the descriptions of the creatures were very good, excellent punctuation and grammar, though I would add either a break or a new line when a new character starts speaking which will split up some of the larger blocks of text and just make it easier to read.

I would have liked significantly more elaboration in the sex scene but since this is your first story, and it's short, that's not a big complaint.

>>7408571
Scoring well so far!

>>7408721
Trying to think of how we'd say things as opposed to English... The biggest difference probably comes from the fact that Finnish uses a lot of conjugation. We don't really even use pronouns, since you just drop those.

Run=Juosta
I run=Juoksen
You run=Juokset
S/He runs=Juoksee
We run=Juoksemme
You run=Juoksette
They run=Juoksevat

But this doesn't really explain why we can handle it so easy. Also I don't think it's that hard in English.

Jane left the house this morning to meet up with some of her friends. Her sister came with her, which she was unhappy about. She was sure she's end up embarrassing her.

Pretty clear which she is which, at least I think so.

>>7408733
Thanks, I appreciate it. I'll edit the format accordingly.

The next chapter will have more lewds and actual beetle anatomy, I'll post it here for feedback once it's written.

>>7408734
I think what they mean by pronoun hell is the simple fact that it just looks butt ugly to read he/she, his/her the thousandth time.

My mother tongue also loves to conjugate, which means we can express a 3 word basic English sentence with one single verb. However this comes at the price that a verb has around 64 forms, so I know that feel, anon

>>7408864
Hehe, verbs are the easy ones for us. Having 4 time formats, and 7 persons (we have persons as opposed to the more common six). Nouns though... 13 forms, that can almost all be mixed and matched at will, plus expressed in all the seven persons... Think I read the final count for different forms of a single noun in Finnish is around 2000. Yet, to a native it seems so simple. I can totally understand why foreigners here have such a hard time with language.

The whole constant repeating of pronouns does look ugly, I agree. One of the things I like about Finnish is precisely that we can just drop pronouns all together, makes the whole thing look so much nicer when you're not constantly repeating some word.

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>>7408719
>Line 28, act as it
>Line 14, smell you from the distance
>Line 45, sitting her side
The only oddities I spotted in a quick scan, and while the story is still quite short at the moment, you have my congratulations - though there are a couple more problems with formatting and punctuation.

In no particular order:

You have a lot of weird spaces all over the shop. Every question mark has a space before it, as does every semicolon, and dashes are irregularly spaced, randomly connecting at one end or the other.
Using two dashes to denote an interruption seems wrong, but if it suits your style to do so, then continue on.
Capitalisation and punctuation after closing a quote is a little shaky in a couple spots, but they might simply be typos.
I'll also fervently echo the recommendation of additional line breaks.

Tone and pacing wise, it all feels just a little off to me. For example, in those first three paragraphs, you try to establish a new thing with every sentence without giving much space to expand on important concepts like the war against the Cacimen, the culture of the Asutan, or even who the main character actually is.

By stepping back and fleshing a few things out a little more across the story, it'll help to slow the pace down and give the reader more time to attach actual value to your characters. The dream was especially promising and enjoyable, as were the more characterful moments of their conversation, but just felt like it suffered from the breakneck tempo carried from the rest of the story.

I'll just cut it short here, since this is just the first part of your story, but I'd definitely be interested in reading the continuation of it when you get around to it.

Also:
>very human-like features such as hands
>necks and lungs
I feel like necks and lungs probably aren't the best examples of humanity.

>>7408963
Oh yeah? Name me another species that has a neck or lungs
>spoiler, you can't

>>7408986
Every mammal and bird just to begin with?

>>7408963
>Every question mark has a space before it, as does every semicolon
We do this in my language, I keep forgetting it's not a thing in English. Would you use ellipses to denote interruption instead of dashes ? I usually read that as falling into silence than an actual interruption, and I can't think of something that would work better than dashes.

I'll try to do something about the worldbuilding exposition, I agree it's clumsy. The descriptions of Asutan and Rilem are definitely something I need to have early on, but I could delay the war and alliance stuff to give it more depth. I'll try giving information about it in Okra and Altun's conversation.
Honestly I tried to get it out of the way at the start because I didn't want to bore readers with it, because while it interests me I'm worried others wouldn't be fond of it.

Regarding lungs, bugs don't have them, which contributes to limiting their size. I felt it's important to establish that those do. [spoiler] might be super autistic, this kind of stuff can ruin smut for me though [/spoiler] I could change it to mammal-like though, would make more sense.

Thanks for the feedback, as well.

>>7408963
Oh, and it is actually "smell", if that's why you were pointing out the line as a typo. The beetles are almost completely blind and rely on smell as their main and most developed sense.

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So... I'm thinking of posting Lock Croc to Literotica.

PWA was split into two "pages." I guess pages are roughly 2500 pages long, since PWA is close to 5K words long.

Is there a way to make the pages fall on chapters manually? Or is that why people generally post things chapter-at-a-time?

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2000 word update, new content at "The shuttle drifted on the outskirts of the solar system"

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
>no new tags

>>7409341
I'm pretty sure the reason is takes so long to approve is that a human goes through it and formats it.
You could try leaving instructions asking for one page per chapter, I don't really worry about it as long as the end result is legible.

what's the worst fic that's ever been posted here

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>>7409492
Definitely this one.

Come to a Head
http://pastebin.com/gL3b6S1H
>tags: short story, male-on-female, blowjob, severed head play, magic, dullahan, Irish? Scottish? stereotypes, really really stupid

>>7408058
Finished the Turian quickie:

Dextro-chocolate:
3600 words
https://pastebin.com/axtc0wsp
tags:
>kissing, Turian, oral, interspecies, Mass Effect, female ejaculation, vaginal, creampie

>>7409008
>>7409008
>Dashes
I mostly meant the usage of two of them at once. It's like using multiple exclamation marks, it's just a superfluous thing.

>Bore readers
>With worldbuilding
I'm pretty sure like 80% of the readerbase here likes worldbuilding more than the smut itself. Every story can have fucking, but your unique ideas helps give the story much needed flavour, and set the stage for whatever fucking takes place afterwards.

And I might be wrong, but I think it's 'from A distance', rather than 'from THE distance'. It doesn't make much of a difference either way though.

>>7407658
Responding to this a bit late. I enjoyed the method of storytelling you used, jumping back in between scenes to fill out and reveal more and more of the events leading to the present moment, with the various reveals building up.
The girl's species wasn't used very much though. The points where it touched on the story seemed inserted point by point rather than woven into the narrative; reminders they "hey remember doge" rather than continuations of the difference between partners.

>>7403595
>>7404104
I believe samualx is literally the worst author on that site. If he isn't writting as the most dedicated troll then i don't want to live anymore.

>>7407658
This is good. Her race didn't play a huge part but i think it's refreshing. Too many times nonhuman pairings focus on the nonhuman bits and the personalities take the backseat. In this there's less focus on the fur and more on teh feel. Nicely done, i look forward to more of this from you.

I have a question. For some writing advice, about exposition.

So, on e wishes to describe a species physiology, psychology etc. But no characters capable of speech know the information. Generally when you need to have this information about the species being used, you just kinda go with the ''scientist'' character that can just explain the stuff, but what if no such character exist, and I don't want to insert one. What would be a good way to then go about informing the reader about what and why something is happening?

>>7410497
The character looks it up somewhere. Alternatively, they come to the conclusion by themselves by observing the species' actions and you write their thoughts out.

>>7410497
I'd say it depends on the PoV you're using. Are you using internal focalisation ? If you're not, you can go with the omniscient narrator giving the information, which is really the most standard thing.

If you're using internal focalisation, it'll be tricky. You could show instead of telling, which could be impossible for certain bits of specific information, or switch PoVs for a bit.
Depending on the genre/structure, you could also insert other documents telling the information (like if it were a journal).

You should give us more details about the story and the information you wish to give, though.

>>7410523
So I'm working on a xenomorph thing, but I need to go into some detail about how their reproductive cycle works, how queens come to be etc. So the main character is held captive by the xenomorphs. As such looking it up isn't really an option, and the stuff is kinda too in depth for it to seem reasonable for mc to come the conclusions herself. Maybe given enough time, but still. Sadly your idea isn't really applicable to my case. Thanks though.

>>7410526
It's 3rd person, mainly focused on the mc, with a few instances of mentioning the feelings, for lack of a better term, of the aliens, as they don't have much in complex thought. So I fear an omniscient narrator might be jarring.

The information I wish to give... Well...

So ya'll know that aliens reproduce with the face huggers and have queens. But there are also some other things, such as the queens are implanted by royal face huggers, which are larger, in cases where the queen dies before a royal egg is laid, a normal egg can be transformed into a royal one, by some unexplained method. The aliens do not attack those who are host to developing aliens. Also, the hosts health is part of determining how long the new born bursts out. If the host has a particularly nasty disease, like leprosy, the alien never develops far enough to burst out.

That's all info, from the extended universe.

Additionally, I plan on using a little bee factoid. If a bee hive has a queen egg, they will attack to kill any new queen introduced to the hive. If no queen egg is present, they will except to new queen. Use this for xenomorphs, and you get a situation where a queen has been implanted, but will not come to term, but the aliens keep waiting and will destroy any new royal eggs.

https://pastebin.com/9LNDbRLN

Parasite birthing snippet

>>7410628
Based on the first few sentences I think you need to add few tags... since it's a man giving birth

>>7410635
Eh, it's MtF. Figured it didn't count.

>>7410776
It still needs tags, friend.

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2000 word update, got a bit burned out on the sex scenes so I'm going to go back and add more to that previous scene when I've recharged my batteries.

New content at "A beeping noise woke Boyd"

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
>no new tags

>>7397921
You know it's a good pron story when you're shipping the MC *hard*.

> “So... you want to take a nap?” Selena whispered to Layla. “Or you want me to fill you with my babies?”

DO IT SELENA YOU WONDERFUL PERSON, GIVE LAYLA WHAT SHE WANTS!

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>>7411151
Don't blueball us nigga.

>>7411261
Thank you so much. I'm glad people are enjoying it.

Any other feedback is greatly appreciated.

>>7402057
One to Grow On
https://pastebin.com/QjWmxvu6
>tags: amazon transformation, futa transformation, growth, huge cock, futa-on-futa, muscle, autofellatio, size discrepancy science!

I hope it's what you were looking for.

(couldn't find a picture to match it, and the other one's still on the thread, so... just look at that one)

>>7411504
I got a quick pitch for ya, D.
>girl writes and sells gangbang porn stories on the internet, accompanied by photos of her thoroughly cumglazed body and creampied holes, soaked clothing, splattered sheets ect
>the stories are always about getting plowed by 20-30 dudes and the pictures also look that way
>the funny thing is, the girl writing it has never actually had sex with a guy
>the vast quantities of semen are solely provided by her futa wife, who also takes the pictures

I'd like to request a story about a female scientist who's researching several different alien parasites that infest women's vaginas and become the host's cock. While inspecting the five main groups of parasites (a horsecock-like ovipositor, a long tentacle, a knotted cock with three thin tendrils hidden within the urethra, a barbed dick, and a snake dick with a mind of its own), she accidentally lets them loose, and they all go to the nearest pussy available: hers. After the pain of all five of the parasites trying to fit into her pussy knocks her out, she wakes up to find that all five of them have permanently taken residence inside of her and are making her horny.

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>>7411151
Damn it. I had a mighty need today.

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https://pastebin.com/ScWVExiX

Here's a quick little Berserk fic I typed up recently.

It's got Casca as a shemale/futa, and she fucks Farnese.

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>>7411989
Alternatively, I am looking for someone to write me a story centering around girls not bathing for up to a week on end, and having their (hairy) armpits, feet, and more sniffed and worshiped by their friends or teachers.

Could be set in a number of anime, but I am really into Watamote smell-themed fics and also Azumanga Daioh.

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>>7399824
aw fuck i didnt see this until now. i'm still in exam hell but that should be finishing up soon, and have been making slow but steady progress on the story. dont worry anon, i haven't forgotten about you.

>>7411504

OR here, consider me a happy customer.

>>7411504
> “OoooOoohh...” Farah moaned musically. “You came so much, and you’re still so hard...” She dipped her fingers in the puddle and brought it to her tongue. It was as natural an instinct for Selena’s lovers to do that as it was to blink when firing a gun. Some people didn’t, but... almost everyone did. Selena looked at Layla, who seemed to be hiding herself. Selena hadn’t come, she knew that for sure. Yeah, I am.” She said. “Like I said, I’m a professional.” Selena offered to help her clean up, but Farah said she was fine. They were still customers of Wajba, and customers never had to worry about that. Selena and Layla left the stock room as Farah unwrapped a new roll of paper towels.

Write a spinoff where Selena is making an instructional video on how she did that without cumming. Then have her go slightly too far and cum. She manages not to fully explode, but she does fire a few shots. It's obvious by how far they fly that she hasn't cum in a long time.

Then she tries to make the video about how to keep fucking right after having an accidental orgasm.

After that, do a follow up where Selena shows Layla how to make an orgasm last as long as possible. She already lost part of her load, so why not?

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>>7412036
Same anon and first off it's fine lol, exams are super fuckin time consuming. Really happy you're still working on it tho. Thanks for the response, good luck with your exams and looking forward to whenever you're able to post the rest of the story!

>>7412036
OR. Nice to see that you're still alive. Still looking forward to the story!
>>7412218
I'm surprised you're also pretty stoked about the story. Are you also a bel Chandra fan?

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I'm going to look through these and sketch out a few, but I can't finish a full work before the thread is down probs
If anyone wants me to draw their story y'all can commission me

>>7412744
You are a wonderful person.

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>>7403055
I wasn't sure if the request was for the hypnosis since you described it so much or the threesome. But I sketched this out. Might finish up the image or work on the threesome, not sure yet.

>>7412770
Thanks :)
Sketched something here if you're interested >>7412744

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>>7412777
>Those heavenly tits
>Those thick thighs
>That bush

>>7412085
Whew. I'm glad you liked it. I thought I might've gone too far away from the request.

>>7412170
>Write a spinoff where Selena is making an instructional video on how she did that without cumming

Um... maybe I wasn't clear there, but... that was Layla jacking off to orgasm while watching Selena and Farah.

Still kind of a cool idea about the video stuff. Not sure if it fits, but I'm always happy to hear suggestions.

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2500 word update, new content at "He met Lorza in the hall"

Or Die Alone:
https://pastebin.com/WYh3N6HP
>no new tags

>>7412823
Thanks I'm happy you like it~

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>>7413154
>potential planetary invasion

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>>7398544

what would you like to see in it? i have a fair chunk already written but its not up to snuff imho. i kinda feel like i wrote myself into a corner; all the good stuff was used in the first one and just doing 'more of that' would be boring

some shoddy proof from chapter 2

How do I ERP?

>>7413806

imagine you're writing a story, but taking turns

>>7413806
not really the place to ask

>>7413812
That actually helps a little.
>>7413968
Where should I ask?

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New collab story out: Thalmandor (featuring writing by Spooky)

Get your bro on bro buttfucking here while it's hot and covered in lube.

>Tags: Fantasy, M/M, Anal, Exhibitionism, Dubcon, Wrestling, Yaoi, Combat

https://pastebin.com/KBPvrKmt

>>7414084
Not bad at all, was fun seeing the back and forth followed by the domming at the end. Would've been fun to see the loser take some more punishment though.