FutaDomWorld Public Alpha

So it's free?

>>7309498

Yup. It's donationware. So pay what you want.

>>7309496
Go back to plebbit.

>>7309668

Already posted there. Just thought you guys might like to play the game now.

>>7310332
Nope. Please leave.

I liked it, good job devs

>>7309496
Pretty fun game. I look forward to more. :)

>>7309496
xxxx52 is my nigga so I'll play it.

It's really sad that, out of all the possible futa projects there could be, this garbage is the one that gets stacks of money.

>>7311159
Yeah this was terrible

>>7309604
That was the worst written bundle of crap I've read in months. Can I get a reimbursement for the time I wasted?

>>7311202

Care to give any specific feedback? What did you not like?

>>7311210
cringey deviantart-tier fanfiction style writing

the futadom universe doesn't have many good writers, so emulating them is an even worse idea

>>7311216

Well. Umm.. I'm the guy who started it.

>>7311220
then get better

>>7311250
Ok help me out. What part of the writing is bad? How far did you get?

>>7311210
It starts with a poorly conceived setting, continues through stilted dialogue, and ends with characters reacting unnaturally and inconsistently.

The fetish is also extremely niche and has only gotten more so since you and your fellow writers started feeding into each others personal fantasies. I mean, I can't fault you for having a niche fetish, but deciding to make a game out of it is about the dumbest thing you could have done with your time. The huge majority of people who will notice your game exists will not be interested in your personal fantasy, and most of the rest are either already directly involved in making the game or would have been equally satisfied just reading more of those "captions" you kept pumping out for a long time.

I've made plenty of stuff—captions, photoshops, art, stories—catering to my own highly niche fetishes over the years, but I've had the good sense not to expect that more than a tiny handful of people would actually want to see any of it and have therefore kept it private.

>>7311259

It's more of a hobby that is also making a little money on the side. I tried to write well but there is always room for improvement.

>>7311259
In other words it's either so shit that you'd be embarrassed to post it on an anonymous image board, or you can't even handle the thought of receiving the criticism you give others.

Just share it, it's not like anyone on /d/ makes money, the whole board is a dedicated fantasy circle jerk. We're all just happy that you're taking the initiative and being creative.

As someone who produces hentai, hire a writer. Niggas cheap as fuck

>>7311286

Lol ouch. We have two.

>>7311287
here's what I do. I give them the general plot. I tell them what's gonna happen. and I develop key traits for characters. I usually let them fill in the rest...unless you know. Artist and writers do not play well together though

>>7311281
The world is a better place when people keep stuff that isn't polished, stuff that isn't good, and stuff that is too convolutedly personal to really be accessible to others to themselves.

The growing number of people who don't recognize that is why places like reddit, twitter, gaiaonline, and deviantart are so awful.

>No content for female characters

D'oh well.

>>7311295
Which is why an anonymous image board with no long term storage is a great place to post your stuff that you don't want released full scale.

Unless you're scared someone will take it and make it good enough for public consumption, but then it's up to you to do that yourself.

>>7311317

It is a game about futa on male. But we do have plans for adding women in the future.

>>7311292
I am one of the writers. Lol

>>7311295
>gaiaonline
What year is it?

>>7311326
your project lead isn't giving you guys enough direction.

>>7311338

Do you mean that Vicky's path lacks cohesion?

>>7311338
Not a writer and new to the thread, but what I think he means is "Lack of variety?" correct me if I'm wrong, guy. I, on the other hand, am game for it, I'll give it a go, and tell you what I think.

>>7311362
Me again, who does the art? xxx52 or...

>>7311220
I'm so sorry your fetish has turned out so shit. That's what happens when reddit adopts something.

>>7309496
I get it's an alpha, but I think you should have waited to finish more content before releasing the game. One girl and one four location (with only the bar having any sort of real plot), really?

>>7311381

Yeah he does the art.

>>7309496
Will there ever be an option to get a futa AND fight the oppression (joining the MIF or something)?

>>7309496
damn op is getting ripped to shreds in this thread

>>7311427
Its good criticism though. Like duex ex the "leaked" chapter lead to a lot of fixes into the game

>>7311422

There will.

>>7311427
Yeah it's pretty brutal. If I cared what a bunch of anons thought of me I might cry.

>>7311432

It does help. I would like more specific criticism but everything helps.

>>7311433
>there will

SOLD

>>7311445
Nah bro. The story will be about a will over there. And a character will be a caveman. "There will"

specific advice:

>hire better writers
>fire anyone who has ever written a "futadom caption" because they're pretty much all awful
>set out a schedule for releases so people know when to expect to see improvements
>test your shit in a small control group before you release it

Well I liked the game, my problem with it, is the fact that the main protagonist have to end dumb because of the "brainwashing futa cum". what would realy please me, would be the possibility to be immune from that or an option to completly remove it fro the game. Also not fond of the "gay" content (and by gay, I talk about a guy on guy action, I know many people think futa on male is gay, but personnaly if it doesn't have tit or isn't at least feminine, it is a big turn off). I think the original futadom world, is too niche too be realy popukar and some thing have to change, it's oblivious that the futa on male, the domination of this third gender is to keep, but other than that you may want to check to be sure if you want to keep it. And the dumb like mind at the end is one of them, particulary whan the player has to identify to him, he is REALY IRRITATING. please at least make it more subtle.

>>7311459
That helps. I'll think I can work on though.

>>7311458

So fire myself? I can do that. I do like the idea to set a schedule though.

>Can only save twice
What the fuck
Why?

I wonder, what is the things you anons don't like in this game/universe ? Personnaly, futa on male, femdom (or more futadom) are my fetish (with monstergirl but there isn't any monster girl in this game so...).

>>7311495


That is universally the biggest complaint.

Maybe the thing that is bothering people with the narration, is the fact that for a game that is close to the visual novel genre, it's quite short on text. you don't push the romance realy far, the realtion ship is quite short, I liked the dialog but it feelt a little rushed, like they have to know each other in less than 4 scene so speak quick please. But if you put more lenght to it, you have to put more sex scene between, since it an adult game. I personnaly would like to have 3 date with vicky, and a sexy scene or cg at the end of each.

But beware of opinion, we aren't the voice of reason, it's only some anons opinion.

I don't undersand the choice for the save either, I didn't understand how it worker, sometime, I get another possibility to save... but more than being hostile to it, I would like to know it is here ?

I really like the game and the basic idea for the universe, but I'm not a fan of the explanation for the setting. I really don't get what my place in society is as a male, or how the hell I got where I am. I'm also not a fan of the intro explanation.

Just put a bit more effort into the world building (like where are the girls?) take it from the perspective of a fiction writer trying to make a realistic setting for the story to play out as opposed to your sexual fantasy land.

I think the really hard thing about this type of setting is to know when you just genderflip modern day cliches or to just come up with totally new ones.

To be honest I skipped half the text because it wasn't very good, but aside from that the game is great, and it's a great idea. Keep up the good work!

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>>7311459
I agree; right now, it's just putting off one's inevitable descent into idiocy and doom (not that you'd end up caring, anyway.) If it were something more like "The cum is addictive - but you can develop tolerance" and/or "Too much all at once if you're not already accustomed to it turns you into a drooling idiot" and/or "It makes you highly suggestible" - I think those allow for much more agency and a reason to care about your ultimate fate and with whom you'd shack up.

>>7310444
kys

Why does everyone in this game have the exact same face.

Stop trying to be funny/quirky in the dialogue choices. You can't suddenly change from "This is what the characters says exactly" to some quirky choice like "Give me that hot futa dick" or ":/".

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i played through it an i enjoyed it enough, i mean up until the end you can hardly tell its a porn game, so id say you should add well, more porn into it.

like some mini games of porn, like the whole dildo darts thing or like, who can take so many dildos at once or go down a line of them with each one getting bigger. idk just more porn. also i like the cock size you got goin, dont change it its big enough that you know its really stretching people out, but its not absurd either.

so yea, release the other sites in the game an what not, an add more porn. plus dont do the limited amount of saves. for now it wasnt a big deal but in a full release that would be enough for me to not play.

>>7311770
Because they're all actually the same person.

...I'm sorry, that's not true. That would probably actually be better than this tripe.

I like it, but honestly it doesn't feel like it's been 1 or 2 years in development. Still though, really good so far. But personally I think it needs more public sex stuff.

>>7311326
that's disappointing. There's so much futa x female stuff, if this game starts to cater to that I wouldn't give any patreon money anymore. The futa on male fans are niche but strong, but I can't support something that panders to futa x female. Those people have literally hundreds of SFM videos and drawings anyway, it's oversaturated.

>>7311794
This is what I think too. Porn minigames like dildo darts where maybe you avoid futas throwing dildos in your butt, or training yourself with dildos (or the teacher herself wearing a condom), public sex stuff, futas jizzing on you in public, a minigame to avoid getting futa cum in your ass/mouth while walking down buttfuck lane, etc. It's a nice game for a start, but doesn't feel porny a lot, and seems a bit barebones (although it's just an alpha). I think this thread is being too harsh, it seems like there's one guy who's really fixating on his hate of reddit and projecting it on this game, it's weird. Just ignore that nonsense.

Torrent where?

Why don't you guys allow futa on shota? That's the best kind of futadom. There's not enough futa on shota in the world.

>>7311903
>torrent a free game

The fact that you only get to have sex once and then it's game over and you have to start over seems problematic. If I'm playing a porn game I want to have more than one chance to jerk off.

>>7309496
>https://www.patreon.com/posts/futadomworld-v0-8446190
System Requirements?

>>7311786
second that. annoying as fuck

>>7312122
surfing cat is fine though

>>7311422
I'd settle with finding rhat one-in-a-million futa that respects the MC as a person, and is horrified by the idea of turning him into a drooling idiot.

>>7309496
Is that stalky advice-giving futa in the bar a possible lay, or is she basically furniture?

>>7311381
>>7311419
The intro sequence was done by someone else though. There's also one piece of art by Anasheya, if you check the silhouette of two people right next to Chloe in the bar.

>>7311459
Agree with that.

This whole "you do it one time and then game over" is annoying. I get that this is part of your universe, but hey, its a porn game.. maybe make it less binary, add penalty to having too much sex with futas or something, but not one-shot gameover.

Would probably also make it possible to have more development between the different characters. Or you could add the possibility to play a more slutty main character.. now this would only lead to game-over after the first event; I'd like that.

Also. Save game is in: C:\...\AppData\Local\Futadom_World_01_alpha
Values are base64 encoded.

I'd be willing to write out a character, if there's any interest in a 'good ending' so to speak beyond Vicky.

>>7312316
They should add something like he took some special MIF pill which makes him resistant to addiction. But after taking x futa loads, you become addicted.

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I enjoyed it and look forward to seeing more. While I'm a romantic, I think the fact that you can really only have sex once is a hindrance in a game ostensibly about sex. I want to slut things up a bit - sleep with my landlady for rent, offer rye my ass for safe passage through buttfuck alley, whore myself out for money and otherwise just put my hard earned education to use.

Maybe make it so that the protagonist is unique (or not-so-unique-after-all) amusing men in that he's resistant to the degenerate effects of futa cum. Not immune, but instead of a game over after getting your eager little hole raped, you take a major hit to current intelligence and a minor hit to maximum intelligence. That way you can have options where you can be a total slut, or where you can fuck and suck your way out of various problems, and when you do end up a fuck-dumb piece of meat you know its because you earned it. Maybe taking it up the ass is a very tempting option in a number of situations, but it comes at the cost of the slow corruption into a bimbo and eventual sex slave. And of course, if your intelligence drops below zero it can still be game over.

This resistance could be something he may not realize or something that it is vitally important no one else find out, lest he be fucked into submission or used for political purposes.

Maybe instead of (or in addition to?) gaining or losing intelligence you have a (hidden?) Resistance attribute that needs to be rolled in order to refuse sex or say the not-slutty option in any given conversation. Resistance goes down in big chunks as it fights the effects of futa cum or when you go along willingly with the institutional male subjugation, making slutty or complicit behavior a dangerous spiral that can be difficult to get out of. Resistance could be restored slowly over time or by engaging in self-actualizing behavior, or more quickly by interacting with the MIF, though that last one may come at a price.

Just some ideas..

>>7312353
There is an option to take a pill like that when you encounter the three rapists in the dark alley, but I don't think it appears anywhere else (yet?).

>>7312364
Yeah, but they should have like a meter through the whole where after x amount of cum, you get addicted. and you can use the other pill that halves your stats as a one time deal if you get too close to the end of the meter.

I'm disappointed that there's no prostitution. That trailer showed a button for it, hinting that you could sell yourself for money. But there's only the university. Plus they could add a mechanic like the futas must wear condoms, but you have a chance of the condom breaking, or the futa taking it off or using a one that dissolves.

The silouette thing is awesome, I realy want more of them, with CG like the one with the anasheya drawing, it realy is a great idea taken from that game I don't remenber the name....

I'm stuck at the pool scene with Vicky. Every time I finish the scene with her no matter which options I choose I just get sent back to the start. Someone please help.

The futadom world (original) cum brainwashing thing is too absolute for a porn game, I like what people sugested, something that is more progressive, it make more place for porn and sexy thing.
Example, the bad futa at the bar could try too snick her cum in your drink, it would occure a change in the drinking minigame, with a particular bad ending or bad event.

>>7309496
I think I was clicking the 'next' button too quickly and got:

FATAL ERROR in
action number 1
of Draw Event
for object obj_vicky_dialog:

Unable to find any instance for object index '201' name 'obj_vicky_face'
at gml_Object_obj_vicky_dialog_Draw_0

>>7312435
>Medium Sized Swimsuit
>Call her a Whale
>Splash her with water

>have sex once and your life is game over
For fuck sake this can't work at all.


>Vicky likes you as an equal parter
>Believe life is more than cock and sex
>Not really into that futa raping stuff
>End with you becoming her cum-drunked slut

GG Great storytelling.

>>7309496
preventing savescumming is bullshit, let people who want to savescum savescum, anyone who doesn't want to can just fucking not savescum end of problem. You're better off spending that effort on making the game better.

>>7312755
This

Basically had you something a lot of /d/eviants like, which is a corny af FutaDomWorld story, and within that something akin to a legitimate romance with mutual partnership.

But then in this instance you get to the 'we together now' stage, and loljk you end up a dumb cockslave like everyone else.

Just finished it, it was okay for the most part.
But I fully agree with other Anons that getting turned into a dumb bimbo bitch at the end is not satisfying at all. Pretty much negates the entire romance.
You should make something that allows males to let them continue to be themselves. Maybe if they are fucked by a Futa who truly loves them they are not turned into a dumb bimbo but are still mildly addicted or something.
Also I didn't really see any reward/punishment for clearing/failing skill checks.

>>7311327
>13 years later, in san jose
well fuck

>>7311326
You can make content for women without including women, though. Tastes and all that jazz.

I haven't played it yet, but it feels like you'd like as much feedback on it as possible, so I'll give it a shot and report later.

I'm not even into the whole going brain dead thing but I'd rather you keep it in. I hate seeing someone with a vision having it be watered down by the masses. If it's less popular because it's more specific, fuck it. You do you man.

>>7312903
>If it's less popular because it's more specific, fuck it. You do you man.

Yeah that is kinda the plan. I might make his bimbo talk a little less dumb but the main concept will remain

>>7312755
The idea is that she wanted him to choose that.

>>7312721

Still proud about the whale thing.

>>7309496
Thanks man. Been looking forward to this.

>>7310444
>doesn't want to play a futa game
What are you, some kind of faggot?

>>7312908
>The idea is that she wanted him to choose that.
Not much of a choice when he's being fined for staying sane lmfao
The entire premise is trash

>>7312908
I don't think you will see much support if you don't change the main concept.
I'm not sure if you know your audience.

>>7312931
I'd love to play a futa game. I don't want to click-click-click my way through some retarded person's nonsense fantasy that happens to involve futa.

Just finished, really enjoyed it. Especially the sex scenes

The key flaws are
>How easy it is to fuck up
>How grindy the first part is

One question, is the punk girl in the bar available as a partner?

>>7309496
Don't listen to those comments here that are claiming this game would be shitty.

It's futa-fucking awesome! I played it through in one shot and I love it!!
Very nice bad ending scenes, sweet writing and very good sim-style-love-story. I loved the pool scene and whished it would have not been one of the last love scenes.

Keep on the good work. I am really looking forward to your developement progress.

The only flaw is the savegame-system because it's very unneccessary and just time consuming. Just make it possible to save every round.
The minigame is well balanced though.

One quick thing. In the university you might want to switch up where the oral and anal buttons are because they are the other way round in the stat sheet. Sometimes I'd look and go 'Almost master of anal" and then accidentally trained oral instead.

I don't agree with anon that say that the cocept is to keep intact as the demo, the cum make you stupid and the "binding" being the direct and absolute with one time only is bad for the game design.
you should realy run a strawpoll or something to get to know what people think about it.

As for the ending, no I don't like most of them, MRA ending is gay, and so after a nice blowjob scene, instant boner loss, the landlord doesn't have that much sexy action so nothing, the bad vicky that it you, is realy to close from the reality of wife geating beaten, and just give me the need to hang myself (or call the cop to save him, not what you want for a sex game) and the good ending is realy shit for me because of the dumb and irritating protagonist.
I like futa on male, and many thing in futadom world apeal to me, but many thing also realy bother me, and it seems that I am not alone.

Yeah I don't like the gay stuff either, at least with the whole having sex with unfeminine men thing.

At least make them girly cross dressers or transsexuals or something. Normal dudes fucking normal dudes is an instant boner killer.

You know how a big thing is this new male protection act or whatever, how is that in anyway a bad thing?

It literally forces the futa to take care of their brain dead slaves who'd be totally fucked without it. If anything the protag should be happy about it.

>>7313204

Vicky agrees with you. I wanted it to be a little "On the one hand it's legalized slavery. On the other it WOULD be needed here."

But she has an end where she beat you regulary.

>>7313250
Yep. Consistent characterization doesn't mean anything here, never mind a society that could potentially function without collapse or the fact that without free will slavery means nothing.

Somebody came up with a throwaway premise for a quick fap fantasy, posted it online, and enough people (with the minimum required here really being like 10) thought it was hot that he tried to make a whole fictional world out of it.

We've been telling him how stupid an idea that was for years and he still hasn't gotten it.

What the gameplay like here?

classic but nice gameplay, you manage your time between training, flirting and working, it's not the most amazing gameplay but it do the job, and there is a minigame that require some dexterity.
it's not a bad game overall, there is some points that upset peoples regarding the futadom universe, but on other hand, futa on male is rare enought for justifying interest from a larger range of people.

>>7310444
Take your own life and spare us your autism you faggot.

You don't speak for all of us.

>>7311159
>>7311197

Make one.

What do you anons like inyour futa porn?
Futa X male
Male X futa
Futa X Futa
Futa X female
dominant Futa
sub futa ?
with balls
without balls
etc...

>>7313455
all of the above

>>7313442
Nope, just the people who wouldn't do the world a service by dying in a fire.

>>7313160
>>7313176
I mean it's suppose to be a bad end, also some people are going to like it. I guess what I'm really saying is...

git gud kid

>>7313455
all and add some more to the list

>>7313455
Ball inflation/expansion, there's never enough of it (And annoyingly JADF never properly concludes to his image sets, seriously where the fuck is Millhiore releasing the eggs)
Innocence/corruption (like first half of 'Kaitlyn no Nichijou' (up to page 30))
Excessive amounts of cum
Hypnotism (Like the non-guro content in Mitegura's works)
Tentacles/monsters (specifically focusing on the futa's penis)
Eggs

>>7313455
Futa + male as mutual/switch partners, perhaps with the futa as top more often than bottom; say 70/30 or 80/20.

I like the futa to be physically larger, fit/muscular, but loving and affectionate. And if I'm lucky, some legwear/socks/stockings/tights type attire and footplay.

They are supposed to be erotic bad ending, I can understand the gay one, but the beaten wife ending ? Is there realy people that like it ? Well maybe guro fan...

>>7313455
Futa x male, with the futa as dominant, and with balls. Don't like futa x futa or futa x female.

>>7313739
I'm into people I love hurting me emotionally and physically, really I am...

;-;

>>7313751
This

>>7313312
Fucking this.

After playing through this and trying to find all the endings ( 4 I think I found? ) all I really got out of it was that the world you've created needed to be attacked and destroyed.

I don't mean your creation, though. I mean the actual in-game world. Like men rise and beat back the futa menace kind of shit. I thought it all out that the MC gets out and moves to one of the free states, and proceeds to climb the ranks of the armed forces there. He leads guerilla raids, orders assassinations and in general causes a ruckus. Then, at the end, he's standing over the empress, and declares that she's his bitch from now on, and blah blah blah.

TL;DR your setting made me want to me a militant misogynist, or whatever the equivalent is for futa.

>>7313455
futaxfuta
futaxfemale
futa with and without balls is fine

If I wanted to see futaxmale, I'd look up 3d tranny porn, it's tons of that going around.

>>7309496
Why does this have to be so sad? I would love a sweet snuggly ending.

>>7313853
or give us a somenice futa rpublic that saves boys

>>7313853
Love to seelimp dicked little futas being manhandled and breed.

I like the somewhat odd art but the game itself i'm not a fan of. The fact its so extreme and you cant walk around without being gang-raped and having sex makes you a retard doesn't really do much for me, would rather just have reversed role type universe where you are a femme type guy.
>can't just be a nice home husband for futa waifu while being a /d/eviant in the bed

>>7313939

The game really needs cum addiction to be a gradual thing, and put in submit/resist/affection options and tracking to encounters. The endings should be based on what you get back from those options.

Choosing between a chemical lobotomy, domestic violence, slavery and homosexual ending for what advertises itself as a dating sim with futa is mind boggling.

If someone submits to addiction, give them those endings. If people resist addiction but still get into every encounter they can, give them a slutty ending. If they resist addiction and just involve themselves with one character, give them a loving ending.

We live in a world post-Mass Effect 3. If you are going to have different endings, don't put the same one in multiple times

>>7313953
>We live in a world post-Chrono Trigger. If you are going to have different endings, don't put the same one in multiple times
FTFY, kiddo.

>>7313953
>Chemical Lobotomy
Which Ending?

>>7313953
I agree a lot! There areny things i like about this game! Artstyle and the concept i very appealing, but the fact that y game ends after i get fucked a single time, makes me just frustrated and bored. I love some of the stroies the world could ell, but it seems to be a "how long can you survive unitl you lose your virginity" sim. I want to live the marriage and be romantic with my futa parthner.

>>7311210

to be honest, I don't like playing a normal boring guy

>>7310444
The fuck is wrong with you? Futadom binding pretty much originated here

>>7314293
And then we chased it out like the poorly conceived deviantart fantasy it was.

>>7311922
68% of jap made futa on male is futa on shota you fagget

Do you have shotas/lolis??
Futa on shota/loli is the best. Especially the latter which is rare .

>>7314303
Shouldn't you be in one of the diaper threads or something? Fuck off.

>>7314303
I'm not sure this "we" exists other than in your head.

>>7309496
Alright honest first hand opinions.

The writing over all is, well it's not perfect. There are a lot of places where the quality varies drastically.

Some lines are fucking great. "She's like a hero from a Springsteen song... if he, y'know, sung about girls with dicks." and "The Horny Jerk did nothing wrong, let's go dildodart that guy!'

Some of them are just... weird though and don't sound like something a human would say, like the landlord talking to you in the intro. "Your appearance and knowledge is just fine." or something like that. That sounds like whoever wrote that isn't a native english speaker.

Also, I gotta say here, I think you're driving off ALOT of people with the whole "you become retarded if you fuck a futa thing." The binding aspect is hot because it's a dom/sub thing, but it's pretty hard to fap to getting brain damage, y'know? I think you should seriously tone down the mental effects or at least make them far more subtle.

>>7314427
Non-existant mental damage would be far better.

>>7314377
You're pretty new here, so I'll give you some free advice. This is 4chan, not your white knight fantasy land. People actually call shit out as shit.

You might want to go back to plebbit if all you're interested in is endless circlejerks over crap like this.

I'm assuming that there will be vast amounts more content later, so I'll hold out hope of there being some way to find happiness without becoming a braindead slut. I mean, even Vicky seemed to be somewhat disturbed by it, even if she was playing along at the end.

Don't get me wrong, the option should be there to get binded, especially since that's in the damn name. But being turned from a man whom is generally worried about the state of the world, or who genuinely cares for someone into a mid to low level functioning fuckdoll just doesn't scream happy end to me.

I'll wait for a full release to give a full opinion, but right now this game just feels like a cyoa with nothing but tiered bad ends.

>>7314451
If this thread looks like a circlejerk to you, you may need to brush up on your reading skills.

>>7314468
If you think I was calling this thread a circlejerk, you definitely need to brush up on yours.

>>7314472
So why are you here complaining so much then? If this thread is already not a circlejerk, what are you trying to accomplish? Just hide the thread and move on with your life.

>>7314451
>You're pretty new here, so I'll give you some free advice. This is 4chan, not your white knight fantasy land. People actually call shit out as shit.

Oh wow... Shouldn't you be brandishing your 1000 fold katana somewhere? Don't forget your fedora on the way out.

>>7309496
Alright, not gonna lie OP. Who ever thought only allowing 2 saves was a good idea needs to be kicked from this project.

I actually cannot fathom why anyone would think this is a good idea in a fucking CYOA porngame with plenty of opportunities for bad ends.

>>7314482
>if you didn't like it then don't talk about it

You're pathetic.

>>7314515
It's honestly kinda sad imaging how pathetic a person must be to get their jollies shitposting on fucking /d/ of all places.

>>7314427
Just finished the game.

Yeah, the epilogue where you're so stupid you can't even say the word anniversary? That's so fucking boner killing. Like, right up there with that whole, they remove your teeth thing you guys almost put into the game.

I implore you guys, get rid of that whole aspect of the universe, or if you really want it, make it so that only select futa with extremely powerful cum can do it or something.

>>7311220
I liked it

>>7314548
And yet you keep doing it.

>>7314452
>binded
bound

>>7311220
Okay, so the game is inherently flawed in the way the premise is set up. Right now as a player it feels like I'm playing FF where the random battles are always game overs.

Instead of making it so binary win/lose I would suggest you have a sluttyness/addiction meter which rises slowly with each encounter. Instead of having every girl be able to bind him, change it that non police binding must be with the consent of the victim. The sluttier the player ends up the less choice they get in the matter and they eventually start agreeing to more and more events until they find themselves agreeing to be binded.

That way when the player messes up instead of just an instant game over they can "pay" for their mistake while still progressing towards a game over but without ending the game right there.

Really if you're making an H game, you're kind of there for the H scenes so I don't see having that always be the game over as workable.

Furthermore I think you should consider having after binding part of the game where you're spending lots of time with your... special someone, but still doing things, this time at their command. Kind of like a minion or something acting for their interests to help them achieve whatever their personal story's goals are.

>>7314736
Not this guy, but another thing I noticed was that Vicky's characterization was a bit off at times.

She's supposed to chivalrous and old fashioned, right, and thus looks down on futa's raping dudes. But she approves of the male ambassador getting raped on live tv in front of the whole nation and makes the "that's hot" face while talking about it?

And when you tell her your opinion about that new law, that you think it incentivizes rape (to steal dudes possessions) she looks down on you as being pro-male political activist?

That really doesn't make much sense.

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>>7309496

are you actually going to post some screenshots or artwork from the game or is this just a shitposting circlejerk

>>7314766

also in pretty much any reality, an ambassador getting raped in public view would start a war within the hour... at which point you have Valkyria Chronicles Futa Edition, not a dating sim.

.... VC with futas. I am very okay with that, actually. Carry on.

>>7314789
I think OP left this thread a long time ago

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>>7313939
Just netflix and chill, bro.

>>7311210
Interface wise, having to alt-f4 to quit the game once it's fullscreen. Definitely need a "back to title" and "exit game" button under the save/load ones.

Also seconding all the "why the fuck did you implement save limits in a porn CYOA VN". The fact this mechanic even got on the table is a bad sign, and it even got past alpha testing ?

Have only played the first few days of it, no comment on that side for now. Will have to redo those anyway, because of the silly save system.

>>7314814
>Valkyria Chronicles Futa Edition
Now that's something I'd like Raita to get into... but I think he's not fond of it. Oh well.

>>7314789
>double parachute failure
Maybe one day we'll have emergency drones fly to the estimated splat-site and set up one of those nets up that absorb all the impact. Google it up, there's a couple vids showing those. Pretty awesome.

>>7314858
Nah still around. Gonna respond a bunch in a bit

>>7314974
Now that i got to the end, I have to point how the good writing. That scene with Rhea, where she confronts you after you give Vicky a bj is really damn good.

She's actually presented as a really complex character feeling a whole mix of emotions. She's jealous and angry not just at Vick getting a guy, but at the state of the world in general.

She actually touches the surface on how fucked up the world is and how angry it makes her (which she in turn takes out on the people around her). She makes a really fucking good point about how love can't really exist between a futa and a man because the instant a futa fucks him, they gain the mentality of a 5 year old child. She's not wrong. I mean, a futa basically for all intents and purposes, kills the person they love when they fuck them.

And the last scene with Vick when she's questioning the purpose of futa society, and how it's actually really fucked up that they're just basically 100% horny all the time walking cocks. (Of course, it's kind of mitigated by the fact that you then fuck regardless of what she said but whatever, its a porn game).

That shit was really good writing.

Ok so the save thing is NOT popular. The writing is okish with a little inconsistency here and there, And the people do not like the fact that males get stupid at the end. Am I missing anything?

>still no path with the lady who wants to make you a bdsm pet fucktoy/furniture
reeeeeeee

>>7315065
save scumming is integral in multiple choice games, more love, less bimboification. Less being little to none.

>>7315065
There should no bimbo involved at the end of a romance, this just doesn't fly.
Getting raped and get turned into a dumb bimbo bitch is fine because it's a bad end.

>>7315065
Don't make every sex scene a bad end. Your sex game shouldn't be a game about avoiding sex at all costs, especially with the limited saves and RNG fuckery.

>>7315065
i made a longish post in the reddit thread for it because captchas were giving me trouble here and i'd need to split it into a few posts anyway... some criticism of "sex=endgame" but a lot of other little things i posted too that i haven't seen here

>>7313751
You can never go wrong with this. This is why CoC just turned into nothing but futa because it's great.

>>7315065
More paths asap. I already beat vicky's

1 thing about the art.

Overall it's really really fucking good.

Needs cumshots though. So when they come, have some jizz leak out of whatever orifice they're fucking.

Also, the dicks. Vicky has a football dick, and that bugs me so much. It's narrow at both ends, and fat in the middle.

I hope there is a path for a happy relationship with Rye. Getting her to go from rapist to tsundere would be really fucking cute.

>>7315159
>>7315047

Like I said in this post here, she actually does have some characterization and it's actually pretty damn good.

A path where you turn Rye from an almost nihilistic rapist who only cares about herself and her own pleasure to someone who lives and loves another person would be great.

>>7315200
Or rather, I should say, who only cares about herself and her own pleasure because she's afraid of loving someone and then turning them into a drooling idiot.

I hate to break it to you but I seriously think you should drop the whole binding thing because it's not only unnecessary, but it's obscuring all the other good ideas in the world.

Basically I think you should just let the setting be a world with Futa on top, then women, and men on the bottom. You can either justify it by saying that years of automation has gotten rid of all manual labour and left men both weak and useless and so their only use is as prostitutes since they both know how to please a penis and are always up for sex. But of course you still need money so you don't get enslaved by your landlord, or anyone else and thus need to find the right futa.

From there give the player three main pathways:
1. Slut

By selling yourself for sex you can make heaps of money, but it comes at the price of your dignity. No matter how much money you make people still won't respect you, and you never gain any political power.

You can put all the forced bi in this path way by giving the player the option of teaming up with another male prostitute.

2. Model Male Citizen

You actually go get a job in an extremely hostile workplace, but also get a few chances at true love by gaining the respect of some of your colleagues. But even then you have to manage your romance with the sexual expectations of your superiors. If you get lucky you can basically become a househusband to a nice futa that you love. Otherwise you can fuck it up by letting her know that you're sleeping with your boss.

Maybe even put in a female love interest who also has to put up with shit from her futa workers.

3. Revolutionary.
You try to team up with other revolutionaries trying to escape the futa empire, but you don't know who you can trust. Punishments come from trusting the wrong people at the wrong time and can range from getting raped by the cops all the way up to getting tortured and brainwashed. If you play your cards right you escape and get to love however you want in a free state.

>>7315211
Because the thing is if you want to put lots of stuff in you need a simple setting that serves as a foundation.

Yes you can write a story where you loving give your mind over to your lover, but that's not enough to base a whole game around, because then it's a choice between giving your mind to someone who's going to be nice to you and someone who isn't and that's it. It's not even satisfying because no matter what you end up someone's mindslave.

But you should just make it one option among many.

That's why you just start with something simple like futa are socially dominate, women aren't, but men have no rights at all because X, think about the choices that males have from there and work your way up. Then you can create all these parthways that are organic to the setting that cover all your favourite fetishes. But if you start with futa + mindbreaking you create a very tight box where it's hard to put other ideas, fetishes and pathways into it.

>>7315225
i'm the guy who posted on reddit... agree with these two posts 100%. a "binding" can be one pathway but it really does cut off so many opportunities. because this is such an early alpha and you've got a great base to build from you've got a lot of opportunities to change the direction of this. how fully fleshed out is your design document?

>>7315065
Make futa addiction gradual rather than binary. It'll open up a lot more freedom in your game design. For instance, my first time playing I spent all my money the day before the cop came to tell me about taxes. Rather than get forced into an unlucky bad-end there could have been an option to instead take a hit to sanity by offering up a blowjob or something instead.

>>7315211
I don't mind the binding thing. Like if 1 particular futa fucks you enough, you basically become hers, that's fine. Hell even being addicted to her cum (and hers alone) is fine with me.

It's just the whole bimbofication thing that's such a turn off.

>>7315239
But then there's little point in a world where you're basically financially dependent on a futa anyway. The thing is that it gets super convoluted because then you have to deal with futa cum addiction in every pathway and plot line.

Like you know the scene where Vicky asks you if she's nothing but a cock to you? That makes next to no sense because you're literally signing up to become addicted to her cum, and she knows it. If Vicky really loved the protag she'd be asking him if he was actually okay with being turned into a gibbering cum addicted idiot for her, and asking herself whether she'd really be okay with destroying the entire personality of the man she feel in love with.

And all you're doing there is trying to write a simple love story and it's already been cocked up binding, just imagine how bad it's going to get down the track when you want to write other story lines.

>>7315239
It's easy to just make it one bad ending where the oppressive futa regime brainwashes you into a bimbo instead.

This game really pisses me off somehow. All endings are bad endings. Your character being raped is just as happy as finding the love of his life.
The bimbofication just kills any sort of relationship two people had before fucking. What's the point of having a romance when they're just going to lose everything they liked about each other.
At least make the mc immune to this shit and maybe make him a possibility for the world to start recovering.
Love dom futa on male but the premise of this is absolute garbage, especially for a porn game.
Also, why are all the skill checks useless? None of them seem to do anything except to change the very next line of text. Ugh.

>>7315307
>All endings are bad endings.


Yeah I kinda wanted the world to be "Erotic Dystopia"

>>7315116
Actually CoC turned into nothing but furries.

>>7315047
>i have to point how the good writing

Was that English?

>>7315360
They're not mutually exclusive.

I always thought furries were the main audience, I just remember for awhile everyone was complaining about how all the updates were to futa content. I remember a lot of people getting pissed of about the shemale gnoll and calling it cliche, but I thought it was great.

I only played it for the futa anyway.

>>7315307
In addition to this, the artist needs to pay more attention to the story. Vicky is described as an inch shorter than the mc but the kiss scnene has her like half a head shorter than him.
I'm pretty sure in the scene on the couch he's supposed to be leaning on her but it's the other way around in the art. Maybe I'm misremembering but it stood out to me.

It's frustrating. because I really want this game to be good but it has so much going against it.
Would support on patreon if they got rid of the bimbofication( at least of the mc).

>>7315364
>Points out typo where an extra word was left in.

>Ignores the rest of the post.

>Hurrdur english?

Seriously man, I know you hate this thread and the futadom thing, but stop shitposting.

Why doesn't Vicky use condoms to avoid MC corruption?

Every time I try to download it just says 'product key not valid'. This is one of the reasons I hate mega.

Does anyone have a mirror?

>>7315452
https://futadomworld.itch.io/futadomworld

>>7315459
That's literally the link that gives 'product key not valid'. Downloads fucked.

>>7315463

Oh fuck really? Thanks for letting me know. Sorry about that.

It worked for me though. Huh. I'll let them know though. This is really bad. Thanks for bringing it up.

Thought it was pretty good for what it is, obviously heavily lacking in content.

One of the biggest things (besides adding content) in my opinion is the UI. In particular, the save system was unclear, I had absolutely no idea what the various items were actually for unless one showed up in a dialogue option, and the investment scheme at the store could use a graphic or something to make it more intuitive/obvious how it works.

Art quality was good, if a little flat. Sound and music were actually quite impressive for a project this size - usually its either fucking awful anime-type music, electronica, or stereotypical porn music, so having some quality neutral backgroun music was a nice relief. For some reason, however, it was really loud when I first started, so a volume slider would be nice, as would adding the option to mute music alone (keep sounds).

I do want to echo the criticism about tone. While it's fine for the NPCs to vary in tone (I thought Chloe was pretty funny), the game itself should not - having the vast majority of text options be read by the PC "straight" but a handful with silly hyperbole or with fucking smilies is jarring. As for writing, I thought it was pretty good overall, particularly the later Rye stuff, though of course a little editing and fleshing out the characters wouldn't hurt. Vicky has a little bit of a generic personality.

As for the sex stuff and the premise as a whole... well, I'm a big fan of the futadom world so I liked most of it (only issue I have is with unrealistically big proportions). I can, however, see how people would be turned off by unexpected male x male content; ideally there would be a "gate" there so players who don't like it could avoid it. (Maybe a dialogue choice - "Ok, just so you know, we're putting you in solitary confinement, but if you act up we'll throw you in a cell with another male and won't bother checking on you; you'll have to play with him before we feed you...")

>>7315519

As for the binding I don't see what the big deal is. It's a big part of this concept, and I think it's pretty hot. That being said, it's entirely possible to please both sides if the binding is structured as a sliding scale. That way, those who want to avoid it can. This would also improve the game by making failure less immediately punishing and opening up more gameplay options. My first run, I simply said yes to Rye because I wanted to play as a horny corrupted little slut, and got one great scene and an immediate game over, which was disappointing. It would create some interesting tension to be able to sex your way out of rent/tax at the cost of increased stupor.

The game could use some random and/or periodic events to keep the gameplay from getting too reptetative, and I'd love the ability to replay dates/games/events instead of always being forced to progress to the next stage.

There were a few bugs/issues. Of course, some might be things I just missed or content that hasn't yet been added.
- I invested $10,000 at 10%/7days at the store but when I went to withdraw I didn't get the full principal.
- I also thought I saw something about her stocking new items if I invested enough money, but there's no indication how/when this is accomplished.
- Being a TA at the university mentions various levels of "risk" but nothing ever happened besides getting paid.
- Chloe mentions getting a raise at the university for looking beautiful but there's no indication how/when this is accomplished.
- Chloe mentions using the MREA badge to dissuade trouble, but there's no indication how/when this is accomplished.

I didn't pay for the game, so I hope these comments are useful. I greatly look forward to the next release!

>>7315523
The only thing a slider would do is delay the inevitasble turning into a useless bimbo. Apart from letting you have sex a few more times it doesn't help anyone.

>"Tee-hee I'm just ah s-slut for mistress"

>>7315421
This. It's not like there are no STDs in that world, right ? Futas probably hate getting chlamydia from one of their random rape/orgies as much as anyone.

>>7315578
Thought that was some kind of government thing where males have to be mind broken, otherwise they have to pay an ever increasing amount of fines. That's why the cop lady comes every two weeks.

>>7313899
>Implying there is no tranny porn of trannies fucking eachother or women

>>7315065
Make the MC less manly.

>>7315585
What does the male tax have to do with STDs or condoms ?

>>7315675
The post you responded to was asking why she isn't using condoms to not turn him into a bimbo and that's why.

So... any chance we get to play as a futa or something? Submissive male really isn't something I'm interested in.

>>7315810
It's a waifu dating sim. Why would you expect to play the other way around?

>>7315817
Havent heard much of this game, expected to BE the one dominating, sorry.

Also I heard about another futa game that was/is being made, but I can't find it. I think it had Vivian James in it too. Anyone know what it's called?

I actually really enjoyed it.

You're 85% going in the right direction.

>>7315817
What if you're a domme and want to RP fucking and mind breaking some cute fuccbois?

Really wish there were more areas to explore and visit. More love interests. Maybe the ability to play from the other end too (i.e., as a futa, or a woman). And getting fugged isn't the end of the game every time. Also a better save system.

That said, the game definitely has promise. Good direction.

>>7309496
I liked it. Looking forward to when theres more to do
Although can we get an option not to wear the lingerie? Its kinda weird

>>7313455
futa x male
male x futa
With balls, no vag
No huge proportions
Perfection

>>7315998
>no vag
not a futa then

Male is penis, no vagina, no tits, no ass.
Trap is small penis, no vagina, small tits, small ass.
Female is no penis, vagina, tits, ass.
Futa / Shemale is big penis, no vagina, tits, ass.
"Fully Loaded" Futa is big penis, vagina, big tits, big ass.

This is an objective fact.

so who can i fuck/get fucked by in the alpha

>>7316050
Traps don't have tits. That would be a shemale. And dick size doesn't matter.

>>7316050
>This is an objective fact.
Only if you're an objective faggot.

>>7316065
>Only if you're an objective faggot.

Good thing I am, then.

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>>7309496
is this futa on male or futa on female? I can't enjoy gay lesbian stuff

I told the rapist bread to fuck off when she came to my apartment, but she's honestly kind of cute. Is there any way to go back to her or no?

>>7316176

She's one of the characters we have planed for future.

>>7310444
fuck off you nigger

>>7316172
futa on male, male on male

>>7315396
I'm sorry, what word would you remove to make that sentence make any sense?

>>7316179
Nice if true.

I sort of rejected her outright because she was a drunken, horny jerk who tried to rape me every other week, but then she comes to the apartment and...man. Sort of feel bad for her.

Plus she has the best character design.

>>7315817
Because that would actually fit in perfectly with the utter lack of cohesion and consistency in the rest of the game?

>>7316186
>male on male

what the fuck is that doing in a game called "futadom world"? gaaaay

>>7316203
Touché.
>>7316208
It's part of a game over rape ending. Of course wIth the bimbo shit going on your mc still loves it as much as he loves everything else.

So, Idk if the devs or writers whatever are still hanging out around here, but I played through.. (As far as I know)... every scrap of content the game currently has to offer, including getting a stupid fat stack of cash and buying everything I could etc etc..

My thoughts on the game are a bit of a mixed bag. Personally, I really like the art style and 'feel' the game's overmap and everything has.

As far as the characters go, the girls, seem to have pretty well fleshed out personalities and such, they seem likable and fun, including the rapist bitch after the apartment incident.. The PC though, I'm just.. Im just so disappointed in at times. There are lots of fun back and forth bits between the PC and girls, and it's great. But sometimes things feel.. inconsistent.

The thing that probably bummed me out hte MOST, is also something that was almost definitely intentional, and won't every change. The way that both the PC and Vicky handle things moving into the first attempt at the good old fuckaroo, makes it seem almost like they are going to be careful and try to avoid completely wiping the PC into a mindless boi-pussy and have some sorta fun, real relationship the way they had been leading up to with the dates. (The 'thanks for trusting me' and such, when the other option involves backing out over the FEAR of being bound.)
I got really excited for that, thinking through some careful choices I'd be able to work my way to some kinda 'proper' happy ending where again, the PC didn't become a ditzy, fuck-toy with legs.. but instead kept some of that personality I felt he'd developed through the course of the game..

At the end of the day, it's the 'futa binding sim' and I shouldn't have expected this as a possibility, but, it still bummed me out horrendously the way things ended. I know that plenty of people are probably happy with it how it is, and it would be silly of me to think you all would put together these other endings unless you already planned it.

>>7316251
Overall, I enjoyed my time messing around with the game. Honestly I did. Besides my complaints about 'wah wah the ending doesn't suit my non-game fitting desires' I DO agree with the general public that you should change the limited saves function.

Not sure if it was a glitch, or this way by design.. but after a few days, or perhaps specific events.. I seemed to gain my saves back, allowing me to save far more than 2 times, so it wasn't THAT bad.. but anybody playing a CYOA or VN really likes the freedom of saving before choices, and playing out as many options as they can, WITHOUT having to start a whole new game. Just food for thought.

Other than that, I'd say mayyyyybe tweak either the amount of money you gain from the top tier job, increase the dangers of it, or increase the pay-off FOR said danger. I found that I was VERY EASILY able to out-gain the losses of once every week or two getting caught on my way back from work. Again, all of these things are my own thoughts, opinions, criticisms and praises, feel free to ignore them or listen to bits as you wish.

I'm still going to pop in and check out the game whenever you guys release new builds, but as of right now, I'd say there is some work to be done before you've really got my support.

>>7316251
>So, Idk if the devs or writers whatever are still hanging out around here, but I played through.

I'm around.

> My thoughts on the game are a bit of a mixed bag.

Fair enough. We still have a lot of work to do.

> The thing that probably bummed me out hte MOST, is also something that was almost definitely intentional, and won't every change. The way that both the PC and Vicky h.........

Yeah I see what you mean. I intended to write it like he choose it so that make it ok to her but that does not seem to have come across. This will be somthing we look at in the future. So thanks for giving the game a try. It mean a lot.

>>7309496
What development tools do you use?

>>7316269
No problem, like I said I'll keep trying it as you guys release content. I'm hoping it turns into a 10/10 game at some point. Just don't take any criticisms from myself or other anons too harshly, we've seen too many devs die out cause of that.

>>7316276

> Just don't take any criticisms from myself or other anons too harshly,

Nah we're gonna keep going. This thread helped out a lot. I'd forgotten how good /d/ can be sometimes.

>>7316280
>Nah we're gonna keep going.
Cheers man, gunna hop out and grab some drinks. Anything you want downed in your honor?

>>7316280
Leave.

>>7316283

Ha just drink what you want and have a good time.

>>7316284
I bet you kiss girls faggot.

it's not hard to tell who wrote which scene. There's three people writing on this shit, they all have different styles, and one of them doesn't speak english.

devs can't change the core bimbo/fuccboi/mindrape thing now without alienating all the backers who get off to it

bitching from /d/ doesn't change where the money's at

>>7316296
Obviously not, the dude that brought that up even said he doesn't expect it to change. Although, you wouldn't have to change it to add another option. Adding optional content should never upset people, it should only please different people.

>>7316301
>Adding optional content should never upset people

not if the game forces you to wade through it

>>7316306
Do you know the meaning of the word optional?

>>7316283
MILK

>>7316310
Chocolate or white? None of that strawberry shit.

Is there an official Twitter page I can follow for updates?

>>7316321
we have a website and a patreon, having a twitter too sounds exhausting
http://futadomworld.com/
https://www.patreon.com/FutadomWorld_Game

>>7316313
Dude, white.

Organic whole, my negro. Get those GAINZ

>>7316326
>having a twitter too sounds exhausting

Have you heard of a browser extension called "Buffer"? It lets you crosspost to almost every social media platform at once, and you can set status updates to be posted later. Might be worth looking into.

I was just asking for Twitter because it's short and quick. Like, "update [number] is out now, check it out! [insert link]", or "[story addition] in the works, check back later!". It's a good way to monitor interest from different sources too, a la retweet and hastag.

>>7316328
Ugh.. I mean I guess.

>>7316326
So is there any chance you'll get rid of the bimbofication? Just this thread alone should tell you just how many people hate it.

>>7316308
agreed. that's why i asked how fleshed out the design document is, i hope it allows for the bimbo and strict binding stuff to be an optional path. this way you can please the original backers and potentially bring in new ones who won't be offput by it. and it wouldn't be a tremendous increase in workload because the strict binding path just leads to a dead-end..

>>7316343
Even if you don't like it, you can't expect them to off it. That's the premise of the game. The best we should hope for, is more options. Like...
>>7316345
says, if both are an option you have, you shouldn't make anybody mad, because they shouldn't have to encounter the option they don't like.

>>7316351
Sure they can get rid of it. The whole reddit futadomworld is really just girl cock worship. Doesn't look like anyone over there cares for the rest of the lore. And it just doesn't work in a whole game with more fleshed out characters.

>>7316365
But why would they do that. You're wanting them to remove so much content they've put work into, and make a different game. Instead, just be glad if they make a NON bimbofied slut option in addition to what they have.

>>7316365
i'm not a patron (and would be if i knew of a good anon way to pay), but not being a patreon, can't see the responses to backers-only posts. it may be the case that the people directly funding them really do dig it.

also you have to keep in mind this started as a passion project, and if you ask the creator to kill off an aspect that greatly interests them, project quality will suffer.

this thread started off with really bad posts and "fuck off etc" but eventually got to some good criticism. i don't want to be too harsh but it seems like the devs are a group of very talented people without a lot of game design experience, and hadn't fully thought through the consequences of the initial design choices. luckily it's still really early and they seem to be taking the feedback and criticism well. honestly this really is a phenomenal foundation they've got and if it can be changed in a way that would keep the devs interested but also fix the major criticisms of what would be a key part of their target audience (no "slut or smart or mixed" paths since cum = dead-end, bimbo/sissy gay stuff) that would be the best outcome. here's to hoping..

>>7316371
It's really not that much. They could just turn it into cum addiction that leads to males losing some of their inhibitions or something and they'd only have to change some of the dialogue.
Or just give the mc immunity to being bimbofied and they can keep the rest of their work in. That would only mean redoing the few endings that are in the game.

> i'm not a patron (and would be if i knew of a good anon way to pay),

We only see your patreon username.

>>7316377
i really like "bimbo immunity" as an option. it could be something you choose at the start of the game. it's an inelegant option, but it would very cleanly fix the very unhappy contingent of people who don't like it. and since it's early alpha maybe you can work up a way to make bimbo immunity an in-game mechanic you can acquire early on at some point later in the dev cycle (like an inexpensive trait you select ala Fallout. it does have to be very inexpensive or possibly free though since if you have other selectable traits, making "getting rid of this thing i don't want but is in the game by default" a choice that will leave you unable to afford other desirable traits will understandably not make people happy)

>>7316377
I guess the main problem is that the whole thread is full of people despising the bimbofication and the devs aren't saying anything about that. Just answering other things. I'd really like to know if they're considering changing it.

>>7316389
i don't mean you, i mean in terms of credit card bills and bank accounts... i'd want that entirely separate

>>7316394

Ahh got it. Sorry. No prob

>>7316393
iirc the dev teams live in different time zones (one's in japan i think) so i'd imagine they want to discuss internally for longer than a day or two before publicly committing to drastically changing what is right now the core of the game. i'd hope to hear something over the next few days for sure though

>>7316394
I heard that Patreon doesn't show what are you paying for. It's just "donation for Patreon".

>>7316402
Well, that's one way of looking at it. Hope that's the case.

>>7316411
even so that could beg the question to anybody who sees the credit card statement "what is this supporting" - maybe you can use visa gift cards or something with a throwaway email, that would be ideal and not tied to anything irl that could raise questions..

>>7316402

Yup. One is in Japan, and then West Coast USA and then Mid West USA and then France.

This is literally the first time I have ever felt the need to actually post. This is the least sexy piece of shit I have ever played. It actually made me angry while I was playing it.

>>7316417
i'm being pretty optimistic. i really want this game to work and it very easily can. they've seemed receptive to honest and good criticism and for what i think is a first time game dev team, some poor design choices are fine and excusable and with guidance from the community i think everybody can be pretty damn happy and turn out a fucking awesome game. since it's such an early alpha it can be righted on a good path very easily.

i guess this won't hurt to ask... dev guy, are you discussing this internally with the team? can we expect a comment in the next few days or within a week or somethin on making bimbo/sissy and cum=dead end optional? so much of the foundation of the game is excellent (music, 99% of the art, most of the systems, rye character writing) and people are giving criticisms bc they want it to succeed so i'd hope you do take this consensus into account. cheers bud :)

>>7316426
Do you not like futadom? If so, why did you play it?

If you do like futadom, what didn't you like about it?

I tried it because it was here, like I do most games that pop up. I LIKE futa but this is not fun. The art is fine but there is no point to any of the content. You might as well have just put a big red button in the center of the screen labeled "Bad End".

>>7316445
That's pretty much 90% of this thread.

>>7309496
Ah man I didn't know this was even a thing. I remember a bunch of of pics on /d/ a few years back with futa on male stories that involved "binding" in them. Wonder if it's the same sort of thing. Either way futa on male is my fetish so I'm definitely gonna give a try.

I think that alone should be enough to let any devs that are still paying attention to this know what a majority of people seem to think about the content or lack there of.

>>7316481
>Wonder if it's the same sort of thing.

Yup!

I also have to question the exact physics behind the futa's having supernatural strength without any muscle mass to speak of.

>>7316505
Aside from their tits, asses, and meat sticks, they're 0% body fat. Pure muscle.

>>7316505

Its not supernatural. Just stronger on average.

>>7316505
Eh, if you've ever watched anime/cartoons, that's pretty standard for girls. Although actual muscle girls would be nice.

Vicky is strong enough to the MC to feel like she could CRUSH him. Also the MC could "never outrun a futa", The futa empire somehow has the strongest army in the world so they think nothing of committing acts of war on live television.

>>7316519

The futa empire SAYS its army is the best.

>>7309496
MREA scene was great. I suggest trying it out

>>7316532
So does America.

I like the futadom world in so far as I like the idea of a society ruled by futa with lots of futa/male content, however my biggest crux with the setting has always been the central mind control/binding aspect to it which has always been a boner killer- that and the whole cum diet thing. It removes a lot of what makes romance games great: you have no agency, no personality and your relationship with the futa is just creepy and infantile. I don't think you could scrap it since it is such a sacrosanct part of the world (but a change I would be all for) nor would the whole immunity/resistance thing work since a lot of the kink comes from the domination via cum and in dealing with the typical actions of the futa society

The setting makes no sense and there would be VERY few people willing to emigrate to a place that literally turns them into mentally retarded slaves. It would not be very long before your futa empire would turn to raiding and that would get them swarmed by literally every other faction left. I don't recall the precise tech level of your world but your futa empire would be carpet bombed for the safety of the rest of the world.

>>7316411
>>7316424
Ew god.. if the specific project you're supporting on patreon shows up on bills and statements and such, I'll literally never be able to support any projects I want.. I don't want people seeing that shit.

>>7316570

Ahh you're close to it. The empire crams propaganda down its peoples throats. There is no way to know what is real and what the state wants you to think.

>>7316426
Elaborate

>>7309496
Could they not afford a better artist..?

>>7316570
desu the geopolitical ramifications are not that important to me. they'd be fun to develop but very time-consuming and ultimately unimportant unless you're going to make war a central tenet of the plot, which seems like a fuckton of work for very little benefit... not entirely opposed, but i'm able to shut off my brain for it. i do agree that a short paragraph or two explanation would be nice though as to why people live there... it would help with beginning exposition.

>>7316576
yeah i didn't mean to derail. if you donate to patreon your information is secure, it shows up on your credit card as PATREON.COM or something with no specifics. i just don't want that on my credit card statement because then one could wonder, "what was being supported on patreon?" and the patreon creators only see your username. it's totally safe to pledge.,

>>7316433
Im glad to see another anon honestly wanting the game to be great, even though they aren't thrilled with the current ending stuff. Im the anon who had that brief little back and forth with the one dev or writer or whatever before dipping for drinks.

>>7316517
Who knows, they may add a sexy toned futa with a great pair of abs who will have a sweaty after-workout fuck with ya.. (that won't end in binding? Here's hoping.)

>>7316583
Its an art style, maybe one you don't like, but some of us do.

This is my final post here but I will try to be objective. I found the art to be of decent to good quality and the writing was OK, but there were literally no redeemable characters. Vicky was a bitch and rhy was... sad. There was no real point to going to school other than seemingly minor changes here and there. I literally spent most of the time upgrading my stats or making money because that was all there was to do. If the MC is that upset about the state of affairs he only has one real option: leave or die trying. And yes, I am including being bound as death.

>>7313455
All of that

>>7313455
Futa X male
dominant Futa
with balls

I do not agree with the argument : "the majority don't like the bimbofication".
I don't like the bimbofication either but we shouldn't forget that the game wasn't made only for 4chan user, they have other peoples that can like this
kind of stuff. But we can say that they fail to appeal a larger audience by
proposing alternatives or by making this fetish more appealing for other people.
It is possible to make most fetish appealing for other people if you do it right, the game actually just show the fetish raw, so it bothers people.
They may want to try changing the writing of some scene to make it more erotic or more discrete to other people.

>>7316617
also should mention i love realistically sized cocks... huge dicks are fine, but only huge with respect to the real world... vicky's dick looked great in the swimsuit (maybe a tiny bit too big) but in that other scene did resemble a football a little bit.. i'd love to see some futa in-game with smaller sized dicks, maybe some unshaven ones (rye seems a prime candidate for being too lazy/not caring enough to shave), some uncut ones, etc.. also hoping we get to see some soft and/or uncut ones from time to time.

>>7316618
I think most people are proposing alternative ways to accomplish this. Most people here seem to be saying "We don't like this, but here's how you can keep it in the game while pleasing people who don't like it."

So I think we can say the endings need to be more appealing even if the world is a distopia.

>>7316624
Which, is amazingly constructive criticism for 4chan.

>>7316636
i don't necessarily agree with that... the happy vicky ending seemed perfect to me. the bad vicky ending was perfect. the bad mrea one fit.

unless i'm reading everybody wrong, which i don't think i am (please correct me if i am though), pretty much everyone except the "???" anon's chief complaints about the endings were just how easy it is to run into an ending. this can be alleviated with loosening/making the binding optional as people have suggested. like maybe in version 0.7 of the game, you can choose to "accept" rye's proposition in the bar and then continue on in the game while trying to pursue her, or vicky, or whatever other characters.

the save system also plays a huge part in this. running into an ending in buttfuck lane and needing to redo a bunch of days is frustrating.. in short, the endings don't necessarily need to be "happier" but that they result in a game over is disappointing because this seems like something that won't change even by 1.0 if the binding stays that strict..

>>7316649
No, that's not my complaint at all. My complaint, is that the 'happy ending' you know, the good one you're aiming for.. ends in the fun back-and-forth banter and personality between the PC and Vicky becoming 'Duhrrhh.. Girldick and cum!~ Kawaii desu!~ I used to have a personality but why would I want that when I can have brain-wiping cummmmm?!~'

They seemed like a fun match up and made it seem like the pair were going to somehow carefully work around the binding thing, and then.. well yeah.

>>7316653
oh i forgot about that... sorry, didn't mean to misrepresent... yeah that definitely needs some work too then. maybe like suggested earlier, at some point in later versions of the game, it does follow that your personality and displayed dialogue stems from two things:

-what you study in school
-previously selected dialogue options

that way your happy end with vicky stays consistent with how you two were before..

>>7316661
>>7316653
Again I know it's a silly desire for this project, and I don't expect them to change things about it, but I just deep down want happy endings that don't end in being bound and personality-wiped.

>>7315483
Download is still broken, and I still want a mirror somewhere.

>>7316765
download works for me. what browser are you using?

>>7316770
Firefox. It always gives a 'provided key is invalid' error on mega.

>>7316772
i've never seen that message on MEGA... works for me on firefox and pale moon and opera. i'd recommend giving either of those a try. maybe some setting or add-on is interfering, not sure

>>7316765
Download works for me on Vivaldi.

I'm not a fan of the becoming a retard thing either, but it's not a big deal. I have to agree with the progressively get bounds idea, like a meter or something. Maybe add expensive pills to negate a cumshot without degrading your stats. The pill idea is in the game already anyway.

What I think it needs is more public sex/rape/prostitution. Whore yourself for money, etc.

Plus sex minigames. Like using your mouse to move your head up and down or back and forth on a futa's dick. And we really need some live action "practice" animations with the instructor at the university.

Just throwing out some ideas, a lot of which are already in this thread. Nice game so far, really looking forward to more stuff.

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>finished the game
>one fuck you're done
>Vicky "good" ending
>no rye option
>can't savescum
Why even bother.

>>7316856
>I'm not a fan of the becoming a retard thing

Speak for yourself, mate. Mental regression / intelligence loss is my jam.

>>7316901
Both of ya could be pleased if they integrate a path that changes along with your intelligence stats, and also remembers your past dialogue choices and branches future dialogue/paths accordingly.

>>7316907
And I'm all for that.

But we need to remember this game is in VERSION 0.1 right now. There will probably be a lot of changes between now and the final release.

I wish there was some male dom in this fictional world.

I realize that this is a complete opposite of what the entire thing is about and that it's a pipe dream and will never happen, but a man turning the tables on a domineering futa appeals to me.

I've been considering trying to writefag a story in which a man is born with a resistance to addiction but I'm lazy and have never written shit before.

>>7316914
Give it a go, show it to us, get bashed into the ground over stupid shit, delete the write, fade into nothingness.

>>7316922
dubs demand.

There's not a single money shot. For an idea so heavily focused around cum I don't know why there's no scene with cum in it. All the animated scenes are cum-less. Game is good so far and the futas have nice dongs. But I want to see them cum on/in the male. The more futa cum in males the better. Let us hide the dialog box in certain scenes too please.

>>7316914
why do people try and stick their fetishes in unrelated works? thankfully there's not a lot of people asking for a female/futa player character, and maledom. But this whole thing is basically about futas dominating men. I don't ask the gay furry community to start making human futas fucking men.

There's already virtually endless amounts of porn involving male dom, and a shit ton of porn involving futa x futa/female. The hundreds of SFM videos alone should sustain those people.

>>7316957
I agree with you, I don't think male dom needs to be shoehorned into the game, I really do want some options though that don't result in a 'you become a brainless cum addict' ending.

>>7316957
Hence the 'I realize this is a complete opposite of what the entire thing is about' part.

>>7316997
write about it then! it might inspire others.

anyone else having issues loading city center?

At some stage you just have to stop and ask yourself: "Is this a bimbo game, or a futadom game?"

If you do both at once you introduce all this stuff that we all find too hard to swallow, and it turns into a janky mess.

Anyone on /d/ will accept the premise of a futadom world, and will even applaud a game set in a futadom world. But when you add all this stuff about their cum being addictive and making you stupid at the same time it just goes too far for no reason.

If the protag really does fall in love with a futa then he'll become addicted to her cum because he loves the taste and loves pleasing her. So there's no reason to throw in this poorly justified bullshit about futa cum being addictive for no reason.

I get with Vicky that the whole romance is that you love her so much that you're ready to surrender your mind to her, but she doesn't seem to realise that at all, and that's the case with everyone. It's almost like all the characters forget that they live in a bimbo universe. Like when Rhae wants to fuck you in the ass she doesn't stop and say "I can't believe you'd let me mind break you you cheap whore."

Why not just rewrite it so Vicky tries to convince you to let her hypnotise/ labotomise you instead? It would make heaps more sense than just saying that futa cum is addictive, and would hold a lot more weight in a world where she's one of thew few people who wants to do it to you.

In the end if you just make it a futadom world with lots of different branching stories that appeal to different sub-futa fetishes you will win heaps more fans than if it only appeals to the cross over of the bimbo and futa crowds, which is going to get real old real quick.

Anyway, we're just going to keep hammering on about this until you respond because we want to see that you've acknowledged and considered the criticism. It's not that we just 'don't like the idiot stuff'. To be honest I had fun and I'm totally fine with that.

>>7316957
>But this whole thing is basically about futas dominating men.

The issue is the game isn't. I thought it was as well, but it's actually about futa dominating men because their cum is addictive and makes you into an idiot.

We want a game that is just about futa dominating men in lots of different ways, and breaking their minds and making them addicted to cum is just one of those ways.

>>7313853
Carthago delenda est

>>7317094
>anyone on /d/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FopyRHHlt3M

>>7316638
Well, we did add a fair amount of pure shitpost too.

>>7317094
I loved the setting personally. I think it keys off the same success of mind break rape of a guy that Monster Girl Quest had a lot of success with.

Your entire argument revolves around the fact that not everyone loves bad end stuff. However I think there's a big enough market for that to keep the game focused.

>>7316570
>looking for logic in a porn game

why anon

>>7317185
MGQ has a lot of bad end that don't have mind break. Even the mind break endings don't happen instantly when he gets fucked once. It's a slow process (mostly) without any drugs or similiar things.
MGQ also has "bad ends" where the mc starts living with one of the girls without any sort of mind change except for realizing he likes being with her.
That sort of variety makes game over endings fun.
In futadomworld literally all endings are exactly the same. Dumb bimbo happy about everything.

Add plenty different bad endings and ways to get them.

I hate this 'cause it's so close to what I want. But the "one and done" hypno jizz ruins it for me.

>>7317545
This seems to be a fairly common complaint.

Ok I played through the game and I don't think I'll be discovering america here but it has issues (which mind you I think are perfectly fixable at this stage of development).

You definitely need to revisit the writing, it's often disjointed, like the second (I think) time you talk with Vicky and suddenly you act like a bimbo for no reason, or after you give her a blowjob and she seems pissed at you though it's implied she's angry at herself.

IMHO limited saves are just annoying, let me save every day...

Drinking game is VERY poorly explained despite being relatively easy once you know what you're supposed to do.

Needs a better ending than "You're stupid now"... I mean I get that some people get off to that but they're a minory within a minority. Have it so stupidity is an effect of binding fast (rape, gangbang, optional player choice of going all in) while if you choose the slow and steady path it doesn't happen.

I really enjoyed the game though. Is there a way to support the patreon without letting everyone see I'm a gigantic pervert?

>>7317702
Make your account private.

>>7317702
I second the 'bimbo for no reason bit' Looking at the way the PC and Vicky talk up to that point, having the only positive dialogue option be like 'Hell yeah gimme dat futa dick' or whatever it said felt jarring and out of place to me..

There are a couple stat checks in this game that i don't think are possible to meet in this build, namely the (i'm assuming athletics based) one when you fight Horny slut at your house and (unreachable intelligence) telling Horny slut that there might be someone out there for her. Also the -5 energy option with vicky seems to be completely worthless. Why couldn't this cost 0 energy? at best all it does is limit the amount of times you can talk to her to 4 or 6 depending on what else you do that day.