/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General

If I've fucked up the thead somehow, let me know and I'll delete it before it gets too far.

Meanwhile, I'm thinking of writing a story about a succubus who has to figure out how everything works without help - no mentor, just internet, hearsay, and trying not to get arrested.

What would people like out of a story like this? What's overdone and should be skipped? Any thoughts? Should I include lots of other supernaturals or not?

>>7040365
In most settings I think a succubus would instinctively KNOW how to seduce people because that purpose is built into her very existence as a demon. So some non-DnD background for demons that explains why she's so clueless might be necessary.

Maybe most demons live entirely mundane lives in hell until it's their turn to manifest in the prime material and corrupt people. The succubus is clueless about sex and seduction because she was a dorky legbeard in demon high school and has remained a virgin ever since. Although that might be a cliche now because >muh gap moe

>>7040434
I was thinking human-turned-succubus, or nascent/dormant succubus.

>>7040365
>>7040434
>>7040516
It's probably a beginner succubus that has been tasked with finding things out on her own, perhaps the instructor succubus just teaches them wrong on purpose for kicks.

Play up her curiosity about the penis and where it goes, don't bother getting too into the fiddly details.

I'mma give this a single repost in case there are any Amy fans that didn't catch it the first time.

I've finished a new chapter for my ongoing futa incest story Family of Three. I'd be willing to make a pastebin if someone has a problem with using google docs.

Tags: futa/female, mother/daughter, sister/sister, loli, romance, threesome, excessive come, big breasts, big cock

Chapter 11:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yXGt2W9HBV_K2xVKJ7pHoJg7GKItzYXAuLaPjhQQ3bQ/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 1:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VK9bYtAGIHbCfpnzSkBLghzO5fH2-BodWhX6cv-IZiU/edit?usp=sharing

Fo3 was inspired by an old story called Amy, a version of which can be found here: http://pastebin.com/MWUw9S23

Alright made all the changes to the dialogue, hopefully it is a smoother read.

The R-Virus: Trespasser

http://pastebin.com/hGMHdU7r

Resident Evil, Mutant, Zombie, Large Insertion, Stomach Bulge, Fisting, Exotic cum, Extreme.

Enjoy.

Here we go.

Shygirl Adventure: http://pastebin.com/uFiqBtwV

Mario, 3rd person, Shygirl, Orgy, Virginity, Lactation/Breast Milk, Futanari.

Shygirl Vore: http://pastebin.com/G35Qjksu

Mario, 2nd person, giantess, vore

SH Nurse: http://pastebin.com/Gx1tegxX

Silent Hill, pregnant, bubble head nurse,

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>>7041434

>>7041031
fun read so far, currently on 5

I await the next update on fineprint with bated breath Snekguy.

>>7041915
I'd rather he hold off on posting constant updates until each fic is done, really. It's not like the thread will go anywhere if he doesn't say he's added a few hundred more words every so often.

>>7041921
His stuff is the only thing I even read here so having something to read is nice

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Welp, here is a preview of what I am working on next.

Cudos for Gmeen planting this seed in my head with just two short animations of his.

http://pastebin.com/zQQmJKw6

Right now there is just lots of heads getting smashed in by Tifa and some electrocution inflicted by Hojo resulting in some bladder vacating.

>>7041921
thats fair enough. Still. His stuff is one of the first things where im really looking forward to new content

>>7041924
>>7041942
>His stuff is the only thing I even read here so having something to read is nice
Hasn't it occurred to you that you're missing out on a ton of other stuff both previously written and newly written by fixating on just the one guy? Plus, it's good to gain exposure to a variety of different writing styles. Who knows, you might stumble over something you like better.

>>7041945
I've been here since we were on /tg/ and since we got moved here there has been less and less I read from this general. I'm not going to read porn with fetishes I detest or care nothing for. I know my tastes perfectly.

>>7041949
Me too, and while I like to think I'm tolerant of that stuff it is getting a little out of hand. Pardon me if the following sounds rather blunt, but it has to be said.

It seems to me that we should stop being quite so.../d/, for lack of a better word. It stifles the variety of things people want to request and makes them want to stop coming here when it's just (as a arbitrary example) the same femdom monstergirl stuff they've seen a dozen times over. Some people are gonna like it, sure. But everyone else is going to get tired of it and leave if that's all that gets posted.

We should give the less extreme people a chance to have their requests filled too. Give vanilla stuff its time in the spotlight as well as the /d/eviant for a change. I'm sure we can do that, and I figure if guys like Snekguy and Omega can go to one extreme then they can go to the other as well.

Also, for future OPs use this for the master list- it's the most up to date and most easily updated:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit?usp=sharing

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>>7041949
>>7041970
thirded my niggas

>>7041970

Never even considered the option of taking a request... didn't think I was good enough to do one.

I am sure I can leave my growing repository of monsters alone for at least the odd story here and there. Or if someone wants me to write about a specific horror or beast that does not get much love.

But hey if someone wants something knowing my style done up I'll put my effort into mixing it up a little and seeing what comes of it.

No futa or loli stuff... nope nope nope.

>>7041995
You don't need to have experience at all to do a request, just the desire to do it. And hey, most people would be glad to have them done at all.

Still taking tally on this list of ideas I had. Lot of people seem interested in the sphinx one, even though it also adds pregnancy to the smut, but I've got a personal attachment to the first idea as well.

#1: Scenes from the lives of Ezekiel and Draahzin; a trappy wizard and his pregnant kobold boifriend. Human Trap/kobold Trap

#2: A father-to-be dotes on his girlfriend, a hugely pregnant sphinx. Human M/sphinx F

#3: A goblin "captures" (rescues) a trappy failed adventurer and tries to make him into her broodmare. Things... don't quite work out as she planned. Human Trap/Goblin Futa

#4: The clone-son of a witch-queen is politically arranged to marry two horde-queens to cement alliances. Can love bloom under such a condition? Human Trap/Orc Futa/Gnoll Futa

#5: Only survivors after their dungeon lair is invaded and their tribes are wiped out, a human necromancer and his "diplomatic envoys" become adventurers, and ultimately lovers. Human M/Goblin F/Kobold F/Ratfolk F

#6: The first time they got drunk and woke up in bed together was surely an accident. The second time, well, they brushed that off too. The third time? That was too suspicious to let go. Human M/Minotaur F

#7: When her human gish companion is hurt on a mission, a githzerai zerth is finally compelled to confess her feelings to the formerly oblivious soul. Human M/Githzerai F

#8: When an independent duergar smith buys a drow pleasure-slave to help her get through her heats, neither of them expected to fall in love. Duergar F/Drow M

>>7042017
>#8: When an independent duergar smith buys a drow pleasure-slave to help her get through her heats, neither of them expected to fall in love. Duergar F/Drow M
I find that implausible, drow may be kept as slaves but they're never sold to non-drow.

>>7041994
Lewd greentext stories and writefaggotry are starting to crop up in regular threads on /tg/ again. This is the kind of thing that spawned /wst/ in the first place. I think it's time to consider making a comeback and how to get the autosage filter removed.

>>7042030

Wow, brings me back to the old R.A Salvatore days.

>>7042041
So who thinks they're a bad enough dude to try probing for interest over there?

>>7042017
#4 has a lot of potential in playing around with the various tropes of political marriages, especially since the polyamory puts a twist on the usual mechanics, the factions are traditionally evil, and the genders are reversed compared to the usual form of these arrangements.

Personally I dislike futa, but that doesn't really change the scope for interesting storytelling and whenever you aren't filling a specific request you should just do you.

#5 could also be entertaining, lots of ways it could be taken. For instance, the necromancer "slumming it" with creatures that usually make up the cannon fodder of a good dungeon army might make for rich character interactions and developing relationships.

>>7042041
>>7042050
I'd say let those things grow organically by themselves, to be honest. There's nothing stopping anyone here spending time on /tg/. Trying to reinstate the threads in an "official" sense won't do much to accelerate things, but does have a very real risk of prompting a backlash against "those fucking threads again" and generally appearing to jump the gun would sour people's opinions.

>>7042060
Good point. Better to let them grow on their own and poke our heads in only when it seems they're ready for it.

>>7042017
I'm really excited to read all of these when you make them.

>>7042082
he's not writing anything, those are his request for others to write

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Artfag here. You write fags should post micro snippets of your work here. Green text them or something. Who says you have to read a book to tell if a writer has skillz.

Plus I want my micro smut.

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>>7041921
I never post an update that is less than 2000 words, or people wouldn't have anything substantial to read. That's also kind of my daily goal. Most updates are larger.
You can always wait until I've finished and the Ebook is ready, but it takes me two or three weeks to write the longer stories, it would get pretty boring.

>>7041970
Really everyone is free to write whatever they want. If you want to write less /d/ related stuff, nobody is going to stop you. Personally I'm into one specific thing and that's what I write about.
Can't really write about fetishes I don't like or content that doesn't interest me. If I did it would probably just end up shitty and nobody would be happy.

>>7041915
>>7041924
>>7041942
3500 word update!
Took me a while today, sorry for the delay. Pacing around a room chugging energy drinks solves writers block it seems.
I hope the new sex scene isn't too jarring, I was stuck on the transition for hours. Also it's 6am here so sorry for any typos, I'll edit this section tomorrow.

New content starts at: "Eventually the kitten became bored, and toddled away back into the village."

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
>drinking, smoking, kissing, biting, dubious consent, femdom, rough

>>7042088
That your work? I might be interested in posting some things here and there.

>Plus I want my micro smut.
You want smut about tiny people?

>>7042088

What is even the text limit here?

I don't think I could fit a single sex scene in one post.

>>7042096
2000 characters or so, I think.

I know I'd struggle to write one short enough to work in comfortably, but I guess I could try and post a snippet of one.

>>7042086
Wrong. They're what I want to write, I just want to see if there's any interest in any of them first before I start up.

>>7042096
you probably shouldn't post stuff from a long form story directly here; snippet scenes off the top of your head that might later get developed into a full scene or act as the germ for a new story would probably be a better bet.

>>7042093
That was surprising.

>>7041934
Dude your formatting is basically perfect now, keep it up!

>>7042141
Good surprise, or "jarring transition" surprise?

>>7042141
>>7042153
Not him, but the moment you drew attention to the female guard I knew she was going to end up jumping him

>>7042153

I owe a big thank you to everyone here that gave me the time of day. You have all helped so much!

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work on the lusty sister of battle continues, slowly but surely

next up: the sweaty astartes she's been eyefucking for probably a solid half hour

>>7042172
(and yes there was some costume confusion when i remembered they are supposed to be from the argent shroud, oops)

>>7042172
>>7042176
Looking good, Prote.

>>7041934
Nitpick: tasers launch a projectile, there's no reason to thrust one.

>>7042172

WHEN SHE GONNA GET
THE POST-HUMAN DICK?

>>7042195

It was a one of those shock sticks, like a cattle prod.

>>7040365
If you do include other Supernaturals, here are some ideas.
>Werewolf can't decide whether to attack or fuck. Dem pheromones.
>Dragon who has no idea how this is going to work. Seriously.


>>7040853
Inspired by this post, how about a Trap Demon expecting to be named an Incubus who isn't manly enough for that role? Instead his targets are men questioning their sexuality.

>>7042172
Update your tumblr already, it has been a year !
Or just dump all that serf stuff on Imgur or something !

I need it. Serf is way too cute.

>>7042250

Yeah, I think I got that werewolf one covered with Ravaged.

So a while back, I commissioned a big story that might be of interest around here. Here are a few things it includes:

-Massive werewolves living in a modern society
-Sizeplay(because werewolves with humans of course)
-Tackling realistic problems that a werewolf/human relationship would face (theyre basically the new black people except its still kind of socially acceptable to be racist to them)

- The best hobo ever

- A focus on story over sex(the entire thing is mostly story)

The big catch is that the werewolves arent the normal humans with monster hand/feet/ear costumes, theyre sporting muzzles and fully covered in fur. I asked for that intentionally because it would feel so awkward and fake for humans to be nervous/racist to humanoids who looked exactly like they did save for some additional costume bits added on. Making the werewolves more beastlike(and by extension, harder to be intimate with cause of the muzzles/fur) made more sense in the long run.

Anyway, does anyone want me to upload it? It's a completed story clocking in at 55k words or so.

>>7042386
>The big catch is that the werewolves arent the normal humans with monster hand/feet/ear costumes, theyre sporting muzzles and fully covered in fur.
That's the biggest upside for me. Early pulp werewolves and weebshit are pretty shit, give me an actual anthropomorphic wolf any day.

>>7042390

http://pastebin.com/vHa934MM

There you go, full wolf fucking that just happenens to walk on two legs.

There is a rapid pregnancy and birthing scene. So if that ain't your bag... well sorry man.

>>7042390


Yep, thats a big part of what went into my thought process. If at least one more person asks, I'll post a link to the story.

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>>7041970
Wait a minute, I have the perfect reaction image for this...

>I figure if guys like Snekguy and Omega can go to one extreme then they can go to the other as well.
Hahahaha. From what experience, exactly, are you making this assumption?

Having people as kinky as Xiombarg's Storyteller in /wst/ did not kill it, and people are not going to, nor should they, write shit they have no interest in.

If you think there is a lack of [xyz thing] here, why not jump in and write it yourself?

>Also, for future OPs use this for the master list- it's the most up to date and most easily updated:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit?usp=sharing
wtf, it would literally take 2 seconds of find and replace to make the pastebin links there actual links that I can ctrl+click on. Sorry to be a dick in my response here, but your sanctimonious tone has already pissed me off.

It would be really useful to make this a spreadsheet instead. That way a viewer can sort by date a story was last updated and see what they missed if they've been gone for a while.

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Guys I'm writing a novelette with a spattering of smut in the center and I need some feedback.

How pissed off are you at the thought of the entire story taking place inside of a day?

Like following the adventures from morning, midday, afternoon and night time of two separate people who re-unite at the end.

>>7042459
Wouldn't care at all, unless it's physically impossible for the events to happen within the timeframe mentioned.

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1 big pic - short story is on it (futa/trap, short)

>>7042432
I have written things myself p0, but I'm just one person who takes a long time to write things and has other things to do in addition to smut. You'll have to pardon me for my own frustration as well. I just don't like how things have seemingly diluted to a small handful of fetishes rather than the wide range of stuff we had on /wst/.

Perhaps you underestimate the effort needed in making a fic?

And I know, I'm working on converting all the links in that doc but there's a lot of them and I'm busy with a bunch of other stuff as well as smut these days. I'll try to get more of them converted though. As for making it into a spreadsheet, that's a good idea in theory but I haven't the time to keep track of every single new fic like I used to. If someone else wants to give it a shot, I'd be glad to see it- I simply cannot do this all by myself.

>>7042756
And for the record, 878 fucking links is most certainly not going to take "2 seconds of find and replace" to convert.

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>>7041970
>stop producing /d/ content on /d/

No.

>>7042795
Well can we produce non-/d/ content on /d/ then? I'd kill for some good vanilla now.

>>7042798
Did you have anything in mind?

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>>7042798
You can write whatever you like, but you can't dictate what other people write, not unless you want to pay them.

>>7042800
Not especially, no. Just something more similar to the stuff that was most common back in the old days.

>>7042082
>>7042017
>all of these
Do you have any taste at all? Is anything that moves okay? The only thing missing is bara.

>>7042459
How is Raven relevant?

>>7042705
If Amazons were futas, they wouldn't need males at all. Who would want to spend time bearing the child of a weakling if they could be bearing the child of another Amazon? Women captives would make sense, as them being pregnant doesn't lower an Amazon's combat effectiveness. Sorry to burst your bubble.

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Hey peeps, just a question, should 'brown/dark skin' be a tag? Does anyone care about that, and would they look for it if they were tag hunting?
I know it's a tag on a lot of the boorus.
Thought I'd give you guys some variety.

>>7042902
You can, but it's not really a necessity. It's more useful as a tag when you're doing art, since it's an unmistakably visual thing.

Incidentally, in between bouts of reformatting the google doc list I've made a spreadsheet listing our newest additions, starting from yesterday. Attach it to the OP next thread, I'm sure it'll get a lot of use.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1i7J7K_YNvIemfZ7p4rYB7kJMdvzrqSeAuYkj_Bb9uyw/edit?usp=sharing

>>7042909
Sure, that makes sense.
Thanks for the fast reply.

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3000 word update, new content begins at "She dropped her XMR heavily on the ground beside him"

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
New tags:
>hair pulling, leash, muscle, sweat, large breasts, size difference, dubious consent, choking, light bondage, scratching, oral, tailjob, denial, female ejaculation

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>>7043289
>leash

>>7042851
Pretty much, there's few things I don't like really. I like to think that might be why I writing different stories and coming up with scenarios in my head.

>>7042017
I'm really looking forward to #5

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>>7041934

>not posting the best Tifa x Red art

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>>7043395

For completion's sake.

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>>7043293
Technically it's a tie being used as a leash, but I thought that was too complicated to tag.

>>7043395

Haha! Well honestly I haven't really gone scouring for it. Nice additions though!

>>7043472
Improvised leash sounds like it would be close enough, right?

>>7043560
Yeah that probably covers it. I figure anyone who wants to search for the tag 'leash' will be happy regardless.

>>7043472
It's probably not important to tag anyway. If you're operating some kind of enormous image database like the boorus, you need that kind of tagging. We write smut. The purpose in tagging is to give a peek into what the story contains so that people can decide if they want to read it or not. As such, many tags can be easily condensed. You could have simply tagged your last update with dubcon, size difference, bondage, tailjob, denial, collar, and missed essentially nothing.

>>7043582
Yeah that make sense.
>dubcon
I like that!

>>7043395
Legoman has such a bad samebody problem.

New stuff for breaking avalanche, kinda adopting Snek's update platform here to help catch smaller issues... like the taser thing.

http://pastebin.com/zQQmJKw6

Hojo, just could not help himself and reached into the cookie jar.

Bondage, Anal, voyeurism, unconscious play,

>>7043735

Oh yeah, line 45 is where the new stuff starts.

>>7042432
>>7042795

Gonna have to agree with these two. If you want something and nobody is producing it, the most you can do is make a request or try and write it yourself. I'd love to see some more variety, but the simple fact is is that what's popular is what's written.

I can understand how much it sucks. Monstergirls and femdom are two of my biggest fetishes, so I get what I want from these threads on that side. But on the other, I have a real kink for expansion, weight gain, etc. You almost never see that shit in the Erotic Fiction General because it's a fetish that is fairly odd even by /d/ standards.

I've decided to start writing my own stories. Working on one now that is weight gain and gentle femdom involving a glitching AI.

>>7044131


Holy fuck, yes please

>>7043690

A little but its a body that works for Tifa.

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>>7044145
Yeah?

Well here's a couple of small sections if you want to see them.

http://pastebin.com/NeRbtuaN

I work on ideas as stories hit me so this one might take a while, but having someone give it a quick read might make me put all the others on the back-burner and focus more on the AI story.

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>>7044162
>>7044162
Oh there's a couple of lines in the third section where it's supposed to be her own thoughts. Forgot that pastebin doesn't take note of italics.

>>7042017
2, but no hyper preg! This has been voted on multiple times, get writing!

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>>7042386
>>7042390

Man, I just can't fap to muzzles for some reason. It's weird. I can fap to anything as long as the face is humanoid.

>>7044186

That's exactly why I had them put in. Fur and muzzles take away the fap, A story with sex in it instead of the other way around, like I mentioned before. Here's the story:

http://pastebin.com/NG40EwP4 (it's a pastebin link to a puush link because 4chan wont let me paste a puush link)

>>7044162

I'm liking what I see so far, though one suggestion is to find a less awkward way to portray crewing while talking. The *chew* stuff throws off the flow of the sentence too hard. That, and we really don't know what both characters look like, so it makes for a very blurred mental image.(but the food is making ME hungry, so good job on that)

>>7044223
Oh yeah, I was reading that after I posted it and I'm just thinking "Wow, this is really fucking clunky." Nah that shit's gone already.

I'm describing the both of them in an earlier scene with Jennifer in the bathroom before breakfast, which I'm currently writing right now. My way of story construction seems to be me getting an idea for a really good scene, writing it out, and then trying to connect them the best possible way, rather than a linear completion from beginning to end.

A basic description for Minerva is that she's a computerized face that's projected around the house on reflective surfaces and hidden in the walls of the house are her many helping hands. Kind of like how all the walls in Portal 2 could be manipulated like GLaDOS.

Anyone got a request or two they wouldn't mind me butchering? Been trying to get back into actually writing things, but coming up with a premise that I'm happy with seems to be the hard part.
Preferably something with aggressive monster dudes.

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>>7044274
How about a succubus gets pushed into the Whore Pits of hell by a rival succubus and the sexually ravenous monstrosities created to rape the adulterous and lascivious mortals who fucked outside of marriage set upon her en masse because they're horny and they don't care that she's a succubus. Hell, they want to fuck her because she IS a succubus, being fucked is what she's for, even if she was never meant to be fucked like they're gonna fuck her.

Include cum inflation please. She's one little succubus and these are some big monsters with huge cocks and balls ready to fuck every available orifice, it's bound to happen.

>>7044274
Well, I'm not sure it's what you're looking for, but I'd really like to see the male side of Snekguy's borealans >>7043289
with a really possessive borealan and a human woman.
Maybe you could ask him if it'd be okay to use his setting, maybe he could give a plotline for you to use?

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>>7044223
http://pastebin.com/KEhApbyp

Well here's actually the update on it, and the beginning of the story with an actual description of Jennifer and Minerva, instead of that last post where I forgot it like an idiot.

been caught up in some other projects for the last few months, but I've been keen on making more time for drawing again.

just a sketch for now, though.
http://i.imgur.com/cHQIOtp.png elf x skaven

>>7044364
Very noice.

>>7044364
So what's up with your humanoid rat fetish?

Alright so the first chapter of Breaking Avalanche is completed, The next chapter will focus on Red's side of things.

http://pastebin.com/zQQmJKw6

Final Fantasy, Tifa Lockhart, Voyeurism, Bondage, Anal, Forced Stimulation.

There is only one more scene after my last update.

Enjoy!

>>7044498

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>7044614

Might have to do with his name... also I like the rat men are getting all up in some elven puss.

>>7044171
>pastebin doesn't take note of italics
I ran into this problem in my writing, too. I ended up creating a separate document with single quotations around all the italicized thoughts and copying that into pastebin. Including dialogue tags (thought, pondered, wondered, realized, etc) with thoughts helps, too

>>7042386
I'd like to read it, at least.

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Am I going too far with the denial stuff or are you guys happy with the current pace?

>>7044279
That would be fine if someone wanted to write that. I'm bad at writing male doms so they wouldn't be stealing my thunder.
As long as they credit me and try to keep it faithful to the setting I don't mind, I can provide plotlines or reference material if they need it.

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>>7042017
5 please. Plot is my fetish.

>>7044929
current pace is good.

Though in honesty its gonna get kinda ridiculous if every female borealean just tries to fuck his brains out due to frustration (I assume that's what the current guard that has him in the bushes is gonna try to do). Maybe show a variety of responses? Means less smut, but when smut happens, its a lot more rewarding.
Maybe this text dump only makes sense to me, anyone else?

Also, enjoying worldbuilding man.

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well, got a few things of the sort.

got a blog going where I write a bunch of commissioned catfights, wrestling, boxing and such, and a few ideas of my own. /d/ probably interested in a recent futa fight between Murrue and Talia from that Gundam show I never actually watched
luffy316.blogspot. com

also got a long term project in the works for an action/lesbian love story. a girl in general olde fantasy world is injured in a cart crash that kills her family. she's found and adopted by the nearby clan of amazon women, who brand her to mark her as one of their own. the girl's left to go through massive culture shock of their people as she learns to fight, suffers prejudice from a few bitter rivals, learns to love at the hands of her mother, and falls in love with another girl. pretty story-centric, but fairly frequent sex scenes for how casual the culture is about it

>>7042386
Go for it. The miracle of a text format is you can ignore elements of character appearance if they particularly bother you. The problem with furry fiction is that it's often riddled with murry purry shit and character writing that makes I JUST CAME HERE TA FIX YER PIPES MAAM porn look like an Olympic diving venue, and has authors that demand everywhere they force themselves into should become their fucking hugbox. The problem isn't that the story remarked that some dude had a muzzle or something.

>>7044929
Denial isn't my bag, but I'm fine with it as long as it doesn't become absurd. My overriding feeling right now is just a desire to see Cola get hoist on her own petard, especially after such a misguided threat. There are reasons why even the most demented nations usually expel diplomatic staff rather than have them detained or executed, and actual assaults typically only come from terrorist organizations that are difficult to concretely identify for retribution.

>>7044958
>>7044968
Alright, that's useful feedback, I'll take it into consideration.
I've got a whole sex scene done with Cola, did I mess up the update somehow or did you guys just not get around to it yet?

>>7043289

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>>7045007
>leash

>>7044929
I think Xhe could use a little more interaction with Dennis

>>7045047
That's a good point, I'll keep that in mind.

>>7045007
I got that, I just presumed it was still a part of the denial thing since they were stopped before Dennis could get off, then she threatened him if he told anyone anything.

>>7045052
Yeah that's right.
No worries then, I was concerned I had dumped the update at the end of the wrong Pastebin or something.

>>7045049
one other suggestions, you compare things as "lasting an age/forever/hours" a lot.

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Update, new content starts at "You were gone a long time.” Xhe chided."

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
>hair pulling, leash, muscle, sweat, large breasts, size difference, dubious consent, choking, light bondage, scratching, oral, tailjob, denial, female ejaculation, femdom, drinking, smoking, kissing

>>7045089
I guess that's true, I'm trying to capture that time dilation feeling you get after an orgasm. Maybe it's too repetitious.

Does anyone have any idea where to find this story?
>>7044754
Haven't been able to find it anywhere.

>>7045191
I can imagine its hard to come up with more ways to express it. Maybe just go the simple route, don't try to use a similie to compare it to something else?

>>7045191
>http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
Oh shit a new borealan that actually has large tits for a borealan. Those puppers must be huge.

>>7041031
Just wanted to say that while not everyone in Family of Three is my bag, it always gets me going. I wish the original story was as fleshed-out, but I'm pretty happy with Fo3 as-is.

>>7045217
AFAIK, it doesn't exist.

>>7041031
Nigga you ruined it.

I couldn't get past using "she" to discribe the ""father"". I don't give a fuck if it had boobs and a vagina, it physically killed anything it had going for me. Use mother maybe??

>>7045191

Fuck yeah! Loving fine print!

>>7045191
>First of the jungle hunters described is a tall female with huge breasts who greets Xhe
Dennis will be inside her in a few hours won't he.

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>>7045191
did he think washing his face would stop him smelling like 8ft catgirl pussy?

she was grinding against his pants and dripping all over him

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>>7044964
also thinking of doing a short story me and my girl came up with last night just to put on here for fun. a busty fraud of a psychic gets called out when a goth girl invites her over to her actually haunted house so the ghosts can have their way with and humiliate her

>>7045769
That could be entertaining.

>>7045769
Phoebe x Hex Maniac?

>>7045329
Thank you so much! By original story, do you mean Amy? Because I had nothing to do with that.

>>7045372
Yeah, I can see how this doesn't make a lot of sense without the context, which I thought kind of ruined the flow when I squeezed it into chapter.

Basically, Emily and Kate's other parent insisted on being referred to as their father because she wanted everyone to know that they were biologically her children. She could have passed for a regular woman as easily as Emily can, but she'd rather people know she had a cock than for them to think that her daughters were adopted/made through a donor.

I'm sorry to hear it ruined the story for you!

>>7045769
>goth girl living in a haunted house
Such a cliché. If you need a goth girl, it's best when she's the one pretending and the normal-looking girl humiliates her with actual powers. Goths are a kind of chuunibyou anyway.

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>7042879
>>7042705
>If Amazons were futas, they wouldn't need males at all. Who would want to spend time bearing the child of a weakling if they could be bearing the child of another Amazon? Women captives would make sense, as them being pregnant doesn't lower an Amazon's combat effectiveness. Sorry to burst your bubble.

(A) Magic sperm

(B) I haven't worked out the logistics for child-birth and down-time, and I'm certainly not finalizing anything on a board thread that I have no control over.

(C) It's a WIP. Don't dump on my idea to have muscular chicks with dicks form unstoppable armies to invade villages and rape their virgin girls.

>>7044277
>pastebin.com/zK4LYRps
>tags, FxM(MM), succubus, monsters, rape, throatfucking, huge insertions, violence, cum inflation, mindbreak/bad-ish end, shitty dialogue?, 5.8k words
Hope it's not too disappointing. I got incredibly lazy about halfway through, and the character's have no character, and it's basically just a porn story. Anyway. Critique, or just general shitflinging would be appreciated.

>>7044279
>>7044929
Well, I could give it a burl if you're cool with someone writing in your setting. I can promise to be as faithful as I can, though quality is another question.
>I can provide plotlines or reference material if they need it.
Please do. Writing is way easier if I don't need to do any of the difficult bits.

>>7046210
Well, I can say at the very least that you were honest about its shortcomings.

>I got incredibly lazy about halfway through
You think there was any reason in particular for that? Knowing what it was could keep it from happening again.

>>7046228
Basically just working on the assumption that it's not going to be good anyway, so I was just trying to finish it off before what little creativity I had died.

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>>7046210
Ok how about this:
>prissy female protag is the daughter of a rich businessman selling ships to the Patriarch of Borealis
>there's a problem with one of the ships, being a culture that values honor and shit like that the Patriarch is furious and thinks he's being cheated
>businessman assures him that isn't the case and promises to return to Mars and obtain a replacement
>leaves his daughter as collateral to prove he's being sincere
>daughter is kept confined to a room on Borealis (note the heat and high gravity), but is treated as a guest
>the guard who is assigned to take care of her is a Borealan male
>she's a bitch and basically treats him like a manservant while knowing nothing of Borealan culture and society
>guard finally snaps and hatefucks the bitch out of her

I'm assuming you've read one or more of my stories and are familiar with how the whole Borealan social system works, if not I can give you an overview.

As for anatomy, like the females, the males average around 8 feet and are ripped as fuck because of the gravity, they wouldn't be dramatically more endowed than humans, but it would be noticeable.

There would be a lot of biting, scratching, not enough to wound but to draw blood, oral sex might be somewhat painful for a human because Borealans have rough, textured tongues.

If that doesn't sound like something you'd like to write, I might try to do that one myself, lol.

>>7046254
I'm pretty sure that's the definition of a sefl-fulfilling prophecy.

>>7046303

Questions!

Borealan's don't have fur on their midsections despite their harsh winter snaps. Considering their lack of fatty insulation fur would have to stuck around to survive exposure?

Male Borealan's have genitalia close to humans or would they be more cat like?

>>7046343
They used to be furry, but they lost their fur over time as they became adapted to living in caves and later huts and houses to escape the cold.
There are still some 'races' of Borealan who retain their fur who come from the polar regions, I'm going to include those in the story later.

I toyed with the idea of giving the males barbed penises like many cat species have, but eventually decided against it, because it would interfere with their recreational sex.
I figure at some point in the distant past their ancestors had barbs, but they selected against it as they became sentient and started mating for pleasure.
So at most the males might have some vestigial bumps where barbs used to be.

>>7046100
>It's a WIP. Don't dump on my idea to have muscular chicks with dicks form unstoppable armies to invade villages and rape their virgin girls.
He was dumping on the idea of muscular chicks with dicks forming armies to rape males. Raping girls still makes sense.

>>7046305
In a nutshell, yes. Of course it's going to end up bad if you don't put in the effort needed to be good. How do you know it would have turned out badly no matter what you did?

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Update, new content starts at “Tell him that I appreciate his hospitality.”

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
>no new tags

>>7046561
>Fineprint updates during the presidential debate
y u do dis?

>>7046596
why would you want to watch that garbage?

>>7046303
>Borealans have rough, textured tongues
>imagining a cat's tongue on my clit
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE
that'd be several notches above "somewhat" painful

>>7046601
Maybe his fetish is watching terrible people be cunts on the air?

>>7046303
>>7046601
i do want to say, i love the prompt though!

I don't really write much, ever. I'm not terrible at figuring out plots/settings/characters/whatever, but my writing itself is... Iffy. Would writing here potentially be good practice?

>>7046643

cant hurt.

>>7046643
As good as anything else. Why not?

This might be the place to ask. Several years ago, I found one of the dirtiest and most perverted stories I have ever seen. It was on ASSTR and it was called either "Girl Milk" or "Girl's milk". Quite frankly I'm leery of describing the contents, but regardless it no longer appears on the site. If anyone remembers this or happens to have a copy, I'd appreciate it.

>>7046373
That's a good idea vestigial bumps idea.
Perhaps Borealian dongs are ribbed, adapted for further pleasure on their mates' part.

I don't know if it's worth to ask here since all the talk seems to be about futa/monstergirls but do you know anything similar to this?

http://mcstories.com/MorePermanentPosition/MorePermanentPosition1.html

>>7046701
Only one guy's done mind control stories here to my knowledge, look under "MCMC" in the list.

>>7046666
>Quite frankly I'm leery of describing the contents
This thread was responsible for authoring the botfly removal story back on /tg/, and /d/ has its own outlandish content. I doubt anything about that story would be shocking. Describing the content might help spark some people's memories a little better.

>>7046303
Just caught a small grammatical thing
>“This the Alpha of the local ranger band, he welcomes you to his village.” missing the "is" in "this is"

>>7046697
I don't know about ribs, that seems too specific, but definitely bumps of varying sizes, I guess they could be vascular as fuck too which accomplished the same goal as ribs.

>>7046707
Ah, thanks.

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>>7040365
>>7040434
>>7044277

Speaking of succubi, and for those of you who are into it, the little story I've been working on might be of interest. It's not far off what was originally suggested (young, unknowing demon girl is taken from her home at an early age, discovers she has hidden powers, and slowly learns how to use them), though it takes place in more of a fantasy setting.

I repost this every now and then when I have more to show. So far I've been happy with the feedback I've gotten from you guys, so I welcome any thoughts, ideas and/or criticisms.

I'm intending to include a little bit of everything, and so far you can find non-con, anal, cum inflation, bondage, breathplay, all kinds of fun stuff.

>>7046758

Actual story here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/FlannaganTheRed/14894/Daughter-of-Demons

>_>

>>7046210
>pastebin.com/zK4LYRps
You fucked up and set it on a private paste; nobody can see it but you that way.

>>7046561
Something Cola said has messed with me.

Does Raz like Stanley back?

[spoiler]I'm a big softy.[/sports]

>>7046878
the other stories did bring up Raz telling others of her kind she and Stanley are mates

>>7046878
Yes, she loves him.
If you remember she held off raping him, and then later became upset when she realized she had scarred him. When they do eventually make love it's very mutual.
Cola and Zhari in contrast were just in it for power and sex and didn't really care how their partner felt about it.
Stanley and Raz are now a mated pair and live together on the Pinwheel.

>>7046726
To elaborate, I don't want the male Borealans to be dramatically better in bed than humans, because it might screw up the dynamic. The females might not be so into humans if the male Borealans had ribbed dicks that vibrate and cum chocolate sauce.
It's ok for the Borealan males to be slightly bigger than humans, wouldn't really matter to the female Borealans and because female humans are of much smaller stature, it would be noticeable to them without getting into 'large insertion' territory.
But I don't want them to have crazy dicks, I think the vestigial bumps left over from the barbs is good, and vascular is always a bonus. Those bumps would be far more noticeable to a human because they'd be tighter than a Borealan, so that could be the angle to go with.

So to a human female it would 'feel' pretty damn huge, even a couple of inches above the human norm is gonna be big enough to be uncomfortable, and the bumps would be very stimulating.

Alright, so I did some cleaning up of the fight. Squeezed in a bunch more details. Also added some more scenes because it was better to cut the first part off at the end of the day in the story... not somewhere in the middle.

So this is Breaking Avalanche: New Specimen.

http://pastebin.com/zQQmJKw6

Fighting, Non sexual violence, Stripping, Bondage, Voyeurism, Anal.

Let me know if I messed up anywhere. I figured by opening with a fight it would be a better hook for the story.

>>7046938

The average human is around 4 inches, but lets say that average in the Borealan race is much more skewed towards a better average.

After all, they seem to be highly skewed towards eugenics. Humans have larger penises than our ape counterparts because our women are more attracted to larger male organs.

If the Borealan male genitalia have evolved with pleasure in mind. Then the females are gonna favor some thick meat. Considering how heavily the Alpha can dictate the course of their genetic development, yeah I can see some heavy hanging going on

Not saying they are hung like horses, but even the average sized Borealan should have a womb whacker by human standards.

Also Female Borealans seem to enjoy the act of the human males actively resisting them. When a male Borealan would just lay there and take it because he knew he couldn't fight.

Soo, big dick but fucks like a dead fish.

Same thing would apply on the reverse. Having a woman writhing and resisting him the entire time he copulated with her would be very thrilling having to constantly dominate her and keep her in check.

>>7046987
Females of lower ranking would be dead fish for males that are alphas too.

>>7046987
>average length
>4 inches
While it varies widely by country, this is decidedly below world average. Unless you just mistyped and meant '5'.

>>7047006

Nope just poorly recalled the info, thanks for the correction.

Anyone got a fresh link to the discord?

I need help, anons. I haven't written a finished fapfic in ~6 months. I started a few unfinished ones a few months ago. So today I finally got around to writing more
except my edge failed so i only got past the introductory shit, also i think fantasy is probably my niche and the only thing i can write

TAGS: Gay / Feminization / School
http://pastebin.com/hfd4c6Y3
tear me a new one anons
is it worth finishing or should i write some orc porn or something? how could i make it better?

>>7047197
I think this suffers from "tell not show" a bit too much. I like immediate scenes where you are actually in the head of someone instead of just being told something. It makes it a lot harder to get emotionally involved with the story.

If you wrote out specific scenes, even one per your original paragraph, it would have a lot more impact and fap value.

If they started the seat dildos in year three, by year four, they would be perfectly fine with them. It would only take a few days at most to get used to having something shoved up one's ass for hours at a time. Though, the idea is lovely and I have a pair of stories with that same theme myself... just have to finish them.

Overall, promising but too vague for me to get into.

>tfw you learn about the monster porn days of amazon
>terrible short stories about women being fucked by monsters put people through college
>bonglands media fucked it up for everyone
>pretends that mass muslim gangrape never happened
>outraged that imaginary consensual sex was written about

>>7046987
Oh, well maybe we have a different idea of what qualifies as big, lol.
Honestly they could be 9 or 10 inches on average and that would be fine. Would feel large to a human, but it wouldn't be absurd, and it wouldn't make the humans totally inadequate in comparison.

Hello fellow perverts!

I just noticed 7chan has gone down (domain expired). Hopefully they will be back up soon!

I just so happened to do a download of the whole elit board on 7chan late July (2016-07-23).

In case 7chan doesn't come back online, I have uploaded the archived copy to mega:

https:// mega . nz /#!XdwyEY5R!_IRRSKmKwHFP4wOmP_qcjHKaoQ1-WRxpq-u1lFu50mM

I was looking around for where to post this link, I thought 8ch had an elit board too? Couldn't find it. Finally ended up back here ;).

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>>7046561
Any more stories like this?

>>7047350

Yeah, that sounds about right. An impressive size for any female

OK but now let's get down to a more interesting subject.

Blood flow.

You have the Borealan's living under high gravity so they have larger and stronger hearts pumping their blood through their veins.

Then they go into space...

Human kind already has issues with their blood getting unruely and swelling up their faces while depriving their legs of it.

Even if a Borealan was exposed to normal human gravity... that would cause some unique physical issues as well.

Lots of problems could occur, bloating of the face. Burst capalaires, brusing if the skin. Things only get more dangerous when their heart starts pumping under duress.

They would have to be wearing suits that put pressure on their bodies just so their own vascular system dose not tear them apart from the inside.

Sex for Borealan's outside of their home world would be dangerous... even fatal.

>>7047394
Shush.
This is scifi-fantasy.
Boring realistic problems have no place in things like this.

>>7047393
Yup.

Crashland:
http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1

Snek:
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B

Snek 2:
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

Snek 3:
http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS

Last Stand:
http://pastebin.com/SHF1Xmda

Pinwheel:
http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr

Splashdown:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP

The Snek and last Stand stuff is XCOM, Pinwheel and Splashdown are Borealan stories, Crashland is standalone.
The tags for all of them are basically the same.

If the longer ones are a pain to read on Pastebin I also have free Ebook downloads, raws you can read in a text editor, or StoriesOnline links.

>>7047394
Well Borealans were not spacefaring when they were contacted, so all of the ships they have access to have artificial gravity. They should be fine in space.

As for the rest, I'm not sure, I'd have to do some research.

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>>7047400
>there's a snek 3

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>>7047409
Yep, 22,000 words of Snakefucking.

Chaptered Ebook here:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6768624&i=572857

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>>7047411
My favorite kind of fucking, next to amazonian and mermaid stuff.

>>7047399
Plus between sufficinetly advanced science, and sufficiently bizzare alien biology, most problems can be handwaved.

>>7047399

Psssh, where is the fun in just fluffing it off. Since humanity has done most of the footwork Borealans only have to worry about dealing with reduced gravity and not the entire lack of it.

They SHOULD have body gloves that put pressure on them at all times. And more advanced suits would compress their midsections to compensate for their physical duress.

You could take the more easy route and give them a hyper dense body structure. Mind you this would make them appear more lithe and agile looking but still be powerhouses. Think like the navi from avatar.

I had to confront this issue a while back when I was tinkering with a bio engineered race that lived under 1.5 gravity.

Pressure suits were my go to since they were not interested in swapping genetic material outside ideal conditions.

>>7047375
Thanks, m8

>>7047411
I want more Snek.
Please give us more snek.

>>7047375
Damn, that's handy. Thanks, anon.

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>>7047400
I know what I'm reading tonight.

>>7047532

Lol holy shit, I forgot about that episode.

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>>7047491
Last Stand features snakefucking if you haven't read that yet. I'm definitely up for more Snek in the future, but I don't want to make promises and end up with a backlog again.
I gotta finish Fineprint first.

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>>7047555
Yeah finish Fineprint first plz.

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Is there a reason this general is one of the most civilized on 4chan?

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>>7047555
Are there any types of gals you'd like to write in the future?
I know you got a horror piece WIP.

>>7047577
Because we touch ourselves at night.

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>>7047604
Oh yeah I had forgotten about that, I guess I should finish that some time, it's the only story I have on the burner that I didn't really know what to do with. After Splashdown I'm less apprehensive about writing really rapey stories, as that is the highest ranked by far on SOL.

I thought about doing an Ork story so the D&D guys would have something to read, and maybe a succubus summoning gone horribly wrong, that would be fun to write. I should try to fit in more shorter one-off stories in between the longer series.

>>7047577
Through dick, unity.

>>7047350
>>7047006
A lot of it depends on the method of measurement, actually. A side effect of the tissue structure that lets it rise when erect is that it's a good inch shorter along the top surface than measured through the center, and depending on how you measure along the underside people can easily measure stuff like 9 or 10 inches since the column of erectile tissue extends back into the pelvis.

>>7046987
>Humans have larger penises than our ape counterparts because our women are more attracted to larger male organs.
Actually, that has almost nothing to do with it, and it's a product of a reproductive arms race scenario; the relative size for social animals correlates extremely reliably with degree of infidelity or promiscuity among social groups. Most apes have pretty strictly obeyed social access to sex, so they have teeny weenies and vaginas the size of a thimble. Same goes for a lot of pack carnivores.

For anyone who wants some hard (hur hur) data, here's some tl;dr:
The actual medical average is something around 5.5" along the center when erect, though for reliability and ease of measurement the dorsal length is often preferred in the literature, and the best meta analysis I know of (covering basically the last 30 years of reliable published data, so tens of thousands of measurements by medical professionals under lab conditions) gives a mean erect value for this of 13.12 ± 1.66 cm (5.17 ± 0.65 in). The ± is for a single standard deviation above or below the mean, so that means about 68% of the adult male population lies within ±0.65 inches of the mean, and over 95% of the population lies within ±1.3 inches. There's actually remarkably little difference in length for almost every man on earth, and certainly not enough to make a particularly meaningful contribution to how effective it is outside of psychosomatic effects.

>>7047636
Surely orc?

Orks are from space and don't have dongs because they grow from spores.

>>7047636
there's also lizardkin, gnolls, and many other fantasy creatures that might tickle your fancy

>>7047666
I don't know about that, I've been privy to situations where someone's dick was big enough to cause discomfort and make sex awkward, and that was in the 8 or 9 inch range. Not dramatically above the norm. I think having the Borealans be around 9 or 10 is gonna be a good balance between not completely overshadowing the human males, but having them be large enough that the difference is more dramatic for a human female.

Measuring from the belly to the tip, of course. Besides I don't know if that kind of detail will be necessary in the story, it could just be described as "bigger than the average human".

>>7047678
Orc? Are they gonna sperg on me if I try to use fantasy characters without being familiar with the D&D fluff? I guess I could not have it take place in an established setting and just do my own orcs.

>>7047686
Nah, everything people suggest from the setting sounds kind of gross to me, to be honest. Rat creatures and dog people and little wrinkly gremlins and shit.
No offense intended if you're into that, power to you, but it's not something I'd enjoy writing about.

>>7047703
>I don't know about that, I've been privy to situations where someone's dick was big enough to cause discomfort and make sex awkward, and that was in the 8 or 9 inch range.
That's usually a misrepresentation. There are people that big, but it's astoundingly rare; usually the discomfort is a result of things not being "limbered up" due to a complex balance of mood, expectation and personal feelings towards a partner, as well as just whether there's been enough time during foreplay for stuff to get ready. Men and women quite commonly report those sorts of stories, but on the occasions where it does get subjected to a rigorous test, it pretty much always turns out they were wrong. I've had direct experience of two guys who their long term girlfriend swore up and down they were huge, and lo and behold they were just within the normal range. And having typed that out it'd really hitting home just how fucking weird university was compared to the real world.

Not that these people are liars or idiots or anything, it's just people are incredibly bad at actually assessing these things. Strong positive feelings towards your partner combined with the stuff being horny does to your brain routinely makes people see an unbelievably massive cock or feel a crazy tight pussy, while nerves, a negative attitude to sex and that sort of thing can have the reverse effect. It's like how the placebo effect can produce huge, genuine changes for better or worse to your physical health and condition; that stuff applies just as ludicrously dramatically to our perception of the world. From a pervy utopian perspective this is actually kind of nice, since it means that if significant sex positivity can take off and become broadly ingrained, it will quite literally have the effect of making everyone get tons better at sex simply because everyone expects it to be better.

>>7047738
Not to toot my own huge dick or anything, but I don't think it's as rare as that.

>>7047375
Jackpot! Thanks, anon.

I think they might have one or two over there, but with so many

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Update, new content starts at "Dennis reached out a hand and touched its head gingerly"

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
>no new tags

>>7047770
if Yuta's really that much larger than most borealans but isn't the alpha, does that mean she has a docile personality (at least for a borealan)?

also bless Dennis' little cotton socks, he's getting brownie points for trying.

>>7047808
Big isn't everything. The actual alpha may be a smarter fighter or knows how to use size against others in fights.

>>7047814
True, but even with differences in skill we still use weight classes in fighting since anything more that a small size advantage usually makes a big difference to the power you can deliver and absorb. I guess Yuta might be fairly unskilled or the alpha is just shit hot.

Or maybe the social standing has just persisted since they were much younger and the size difference wasn't the same. For all we know Yuta might end up challenging and taking over by the end of the week, we don't really know how stable things are in that community right now.

>>7047814

Size means a lot, that is why professional fighters have weight classes. Just 20 pounds diffence between two warriors can easily tip the scales. Skull means less and less the wider that weight gap grows.

You don't hear about kung fu masters karate chopping bears to death.

A Borealan could have a personally where life is much more simple than being a subordanate than a leader.

>>7042172
Link to the story it goes with?

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>>7045769
made it happen! tags for ghosts, humiliation, and big titties

docs.google.com/document/d/1ZrAle-D5UqKql_7Vc5CwvVduXnRNPLPuAK96FHZrprY/edit

>tfw seriously consider quitting your job to write erotic fanfiction on welfare

>>7048132

Just pen the next fifty shades of gray. At the cost of your soul you could write the shittiest fan fiction and make tons of bank.

>>7047703
>"bigger than the average human"
I read that in the same voice yogi bear says "smarter than the average bear"

>>7047770
Haven't read the update yet, but a question:

how do consensual borelean relationships work? Its been stated and alpha can fuck anyone lower than it in its pack, and even have them carry its children. This makes it seem like a consensual relationship would be rare, as if two are ina relationship, but one is say in a lesser position in another's pack, then they're going to have to accept the possiblity of their mate getting fucked by their mate's pack's alpha.

Seems like the only time this would work out is if both partners are alpha's of their own separate packs, or one is the alpha of their mate's pack.

>>7047415
Do you prefer fantasy fish mermaids or anatomically correct half-dolphin mermaids?

>>7047808
There are other elements that might count as well as strength. Yuta might respect him and not wish to challenge him for various reasons, perhaps he has accomplished a lot as the Alpha and deposing him would be detrimental to the village. Perhaps she has tried before and failed, or maybe he can just straight beat her in a fight. Not all Borealans are ambitious and there can be varied reasons for challenging someone or accepting their rule.
For example anyone could potentially challenge the Patriarch, but that doesn't mean other higher ranked Borealans would accept the outcome, they might just challenge the usurper themselves until he was defeated. If the leader is popular and respected then it's unlikely he'll be challenged, and unpopular Alphas would have to constantly defend their title.
It sounds precarious but it all works out.

>>7048204
Consensual isn't really the right word, since when a Borealan submits, they become servile and thus any sex resulting from that is consensual. In that way rape doesn't really happen among Borealans, on a genetic level it's desirable to mate with the Alpha because they have superior genes.
That's why humans resisting them even during sex is a huge turn on for them, because it keeps that excitement going where with a Borealan it's a very brief skirmish that results in servile, boring sex if the victor is in the mood.
As for mutual relationships where both partners are of equal standing, it doesn't commonly happen, as if two Borealans of equal standing were together long enough they would eventually fight to establish dominance. It can happen with humans, because the tactics they would normally use to force compliance don't work, humans are too fragile. So they kind of end up in a limbo where they can't fully establish dominance, which is also a huge turn on.
I wouldn't say it's impossible, but it's certainly rare and would require very special circumstances.

>>7048315
Long as they have tits and magical twats I don't care.

What does a borelean look like? google keeps giving me pictures of the Northern Lights.

>>7048361
Cat people, they're not an already existing thing. Snekguy made them up.

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>>7048361

Basically this but with a mane and paws.

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>>7048365
>>7048396
And the women are basically Amazonian's who subject Human men to snu-snu? Any other races like that? That shits my jam.

>>7048398
Everything Snekguy has written is amazonian nonhumans screwing human guys.
Dig through the smut archive and you should find plenty similar stuff.

>>7048398

Snek is all about the stacked monster babes.

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>>7048361
Thundercats is a pretty good approximation, except with small round ears on top of the head like a lion, a flat brow and feline nose, and jointed heels.
The only fur the dominant race has is on their head, groin, tail and feet.
Please enjoy this extremely crude sketch before the art police take my pencils away for crimes against paper.

>>7048398
All my stuff is listed here:
>>7047400

It's basically all the same theme.
I have raws or Ebooks if you need them too. Some of the longer stories are much easier to read with chapters.

>>7048408
You are now imagining Raz looking like that.

I wonder what kind of a first contact it would have been if the human diplomats were giggling like complete retards.

>>7048441

Or the guy was a closet furry and yanked on a Borealan's tail on first contact... or worse... rushed up and gave it a leaping hug which was converted into the first recorded body slam of a human ambassador.

>>7048446
Gruff Not Sly Marbo petting borealans when?

>>7048451

Uhh, care to elaborate on that?

>>7048462
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCMNWAJiz5Y

>>7048462
>>7048465
On a more serious note.
http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Sly_Marbo

>>7048468

Well if it was this sly marbo... he would be doing the body slamming. Then eventually becoming the high alpha of all Borealan kind.

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>>7048441
>>7048446
Obviously I suck at drawing, but that's the general idea.
If I could draw better it might look more like this. I'm sure you understand what I'm going for.

>>7048488

Eh, I just imagine them how ever I want to see them. That's the beauty of writing. But when I read their midsections were hairless...

King from tekken burst into my mental imagery and I might have had a good long giggle about it.

>>7048488
I'd suggest downplaying the cat-ness from now on, /d/ mods will probably think they're furries now.

>>7048510
Of course, however you choose to imagine them is best, it is porn after all, and they need to be attractive to each individual.

>>7048520
Nah they're as hairless as humans. I just can't find any concept art of cat people that isn't drawn by furries.

>>7048520
Mods rarely ever check on these threads and none of us report stuff, also written stuff is fine and breaks no rules. We've had even furrier stuff posted before.

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>>7048488
I thought of Panthera from the Thundercats reboot, but splashdown made me think of Cheetah's design in DCRebirth.

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>>7048488

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>>7048539
That is pretty close.

>>7048538
>>7048510
It seems like everyone has a different interpretation based on what they're into personally, so maybe I should just shut up and stop ruining it for you.

>>7048408
>>7048441
I've basically just imagined them looking similar to Charr from GW this whole time. It was the first way I thought of them until exposition said otherwise, but its stuck for me.

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>>7048560
>I've basically just imagined them looking similar to Charr from GW this whole time
This has never been more weirdly appropriate.

>>7048564
same goiy from >>7048560 here, its a fantasy thats pushin all my buttons. bless you Snek

>>7048543

No worries man, you got a fun race there and I can easily see the route you have taken with them!

>>7042386
Have you heard of "The Beast and his pet high school girl" ?
It's a manga that would extremely absurdly relevant to your interests
>no sex in it though, which makes it even better somewhow

>>7048725
That manga would a lot different if the genders were reversed.

>>7048727
I have thought about that.
>Female Furry (lioness?) needs protection
>Decides to buy a human guard because they are loyal and intelligent
>Mistakenly gets a male wearing armor and brings him home

>>7048736
Unlikely given the sheer size difference between the animal people and humans in that manga. I was talking more a high school boy would a lot more receptive to a huge wolf woman trying cuddle him and shower him in affection.

>state wide power outage
>mfw there's probably murder and rape happening everywhere
>mad because I can't work on my smut

>>7048736

I would read it.

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Long time, no post.

The Player Witch Augment 4: Hocus, Poke Us
http://pastebin.com/tCPmkVgh

>tags: male-on-female, female-on-female, huge cock, small cock humiliation, other humiliation, public nudity, large insertion, anal, magic

This could have kept going, but it got long enough. I'll just continue it in the next part.

Let me know what you think.

>>7048725


No, but now I'm going to try and find this because that sounds awesome.

Oh, and before I forget, reposting the link to that story I mentioned in it's own separate post for the people who wanted it:

http://pastebin.com/NG40EwP4 (it's a pastebin link to a puush link because 4chan wont let me paste a puush link)

>>7042386
Please upload this.

>>7049058
>>7049075
And then there it is! Thanks friend.

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>>7042386
>Download, super excited
>Oh
>It's another one about monstergirls
>Not a hot male business werewolf fucking his assistant

God damn it. I feel mislead.

hey everyone, I originally made this story

Giantess World Chronicles: Ch.1 "Of the hungry ones"

contains Vore/Giantesses/Some fear play

http://pastebin.com/XCnJguhk


I came by to say I am working on something else though it is non vore related. In light of how popular HAYDEE is getting over on /v/ i though I should try that story i've been wanting to write about some people discovering a sexbot/genetically developed sex slave in the far future. Will post it once it is done.

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>>7048596
>>7048595
5000 word update.
New content starts at "Dennis adjusted his new tie, the downy, shining fur standing out brilliantly against his black suit."

Fineprint:
http://pastebin.com/k411SZV2
>no new tags

>>7049049
>>7049267
I'm gonna read these tomorrow and give some feedback, kind of wrote myself into a coma today.

Is the 40k story a pipe dream? Author said it would be done almost 2 weeks ago. I think it's been long enough to not be called impatient.

>>7049633
Not him, but I've taken six months to finish a request. These things happen. I'm not saying to stop asking, but this isn't exactly unheard of. We write for fun, so smut often gets put to the back burner when life happens.

>>7049641
Plus, the Fall semester for college is going on and a lot of people on 4chan are college students

>>7049641
And nobody likes an impatient requester. Ask again and I can say with no small degree of certainty that the guy writing it will refuse to post it just to spite you.

>>7049641
Ahh. I'm not used to efg threads. I'll shut up then. My bad.

>>7049644
This was the first time I've asked. If people have asked before than it's not something I can control.

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>>7049576
>soon

>>7049651
Cats in snow are unambiguously hilarious.

Plus it's a definite asset in cold weather when there's a few fuzzy space heaters wedging themselves around you in bed.

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>average Borealen and human relationship

>>7049678

Holy shit, this was a Fate comic?

>>7049576
This is gonna be good.
Also, be aware you sometimes type "out" instead of "our".

>>7049738
those keys are right next to each other so that sort of thing happens and since both are words/spelled correctly it won't be caught by prpgrams

>>7049744
Of course, that's why I brought it to his attention.

It's getting boring reading the same stuff over and over again. Where's the maledom?

>>7049750
start writing

>>7049752
No, no, I'm a requester. You're supposed to be the one filling it, and I'm requesting maledom. Is there none here?

>>7049738
Oh thanks, that's hard to catch.

>>7049750
I'm up for it but I'm really busy with Fineprint.
I did pitch a maledom idea, not sure if anyone actually claimed it, if they didn't I'll write it at some point.

>>7049754
Look though the smut archive. Femdon has always been very popular here and even back in /tg/. The writers aren't just going to change what they like to write about. If you really want more of a certain fetish then start writing to make the change.

>>7040361
Could I get a new discord invite please? It said that one's expired.

>>7049754
That's not really the way it works, if you want to commission a story it will probably cost you money, otherwise you'll just have to read whatever people are willing to write.
There's plenty of maledom in the list.

>>7049760
It would be nice to see a little variety for once. I know it was popular back then too, but it never dominated the threads to this degree. Though I suspect the constant linking of the same story a dozen times does make it look more popular than it really is; why not just link back to the original post on the thread for the updates instead of copypasting the link to the fic itself?.

>>7049762
https://discord.gg/vYwdHes

>>7049758

Eh, my writing block is currently free. Just been polishing up my previous entries.

I'll take a swing at having a male Borealan taking down a pompous human female a few notches.

No promises that it will be of Sneks quality though... still working on my skills of writing.

Oh yeah, did anyone read my first part of breaking avalanche? I got like zero feedback on that one.

>>7049769
You'd still have to post in the thread in order to tell people that there was an update, where the new content begins and what the new tags are.
Don't see a reason not to post a link again too, it won't get more or less views, just saves people an extra click.

>>7049782
Oh sure, I just wondered if anyone had claimed it. I'm eager to see what you come up with.
Link me your story again and I'll take a look at it tomorrow.

>>7049750
The next story I'm posting is maledom, so there's that. Regrettably, there really isn't all that much in our archive, at least compared to femdom.

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>>7049764
Look, can we at least dial back on the Borealeans or whatever they're called? I've had enough of them to last me for months, and now they're starting to feel overdone.

We could use some more variety-what about angels, or nymphs, or some kind of exotic alien shit beyond the same old things? I know I'd kill for good angel smut.

>>7049789

http://pastebin.com/zQQmJKw6

Final fantasy, tifa, red xiii, fighting, violence, bondage, anal, forced stimulation.

>>7049794
Nope, sorry. I've had multiple requests to continue this series, and I'm 33,000 words into a story.

I'm gonna take a break when Fineprint is finished and do something different, I was thinking maybe Orcs or a Succubus story if you're into that, but I can't stop writing in the middle of a story.
Gotta keep up the pace and get it finished, I'm still probably 15k words off.

>>7049799
Oh I remember you posting that, I have no excuse for not reading it, I'll give you some feedback tomorrow.

>>7049794
Other writefags have stuff along those lines if that's what you're looking for. You can't expect one person to write smut for every occasion and fetish

>>7049803

All my shit is pretty much maledom revolving around monsters. Breaking avalanche is the first time I had two humans fucking and size wasn't a huge part of it.

>>7049801

Lol I have been slowly digesting your work snek and last Stand are done. Pinwheel is currently being processed.

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>>7049576
> “Ambassador, I'm sorry to wake you early, but the Polar Regent is here to see you.”
watch out dennis boyo

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>>7049817
Eh fuck it I'll just do it now.

>Breaking Avalanche:
Typo in the first line, "game them away" should be "gave them away". Formatting is great, besides one or two minor errors you've pretty much got it down now, keep it up.
Really good amount of buildup, you keep the tension going and the story is of a good length so far, I'd be interested to see where it goes from here.
Really no other complaints, the narrative is consistent, dialogue is good and properly formatted, and you do a good job of switching perspective between characters. I like how you're building her up to sex with Red rather than just making it a 3000 word fap fic, it's much more effective.

>>7049267
>Giantess World Chronicles
I'm not really into the subject matter so I can't comment on the content, but I noticed some problems with capitalization and formatting. It might just be personal preference but I think stories that use tabs properly look like a real novel and flow a lot more nicely. You should read through the story when you're finished and just ensure that all of the sentences start with a capital letter too. If you want examples of how to format the text, check out my, .D's or Omega's stuff.
Basically the rule is that you should use the tab key on your keyboard to make a 'break', which denotes when a new character is talking, or just when you feel it's appropriate. That way you can avoid spacing the story out like that when you write dialogue.

I fucking love Haydee, I look forward to reading that.

>>7049049
>The Player Witch Augment 4
Great as usual .D, I'm not in a position to give you any advice.
The "quavering voice" is cracking me up.

>>7049831
kek

>>7049817
It's well worth going through the index on 1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/'s_Smut_Index once you're done with Snek's stuff. It's way better than free online smut has any right to be, it's well tagged and there's a decent diversity of settings and ideas.

>>7049633
>>7049646
No, you're quite justified. I've been incredibly slow, even for my standards. I've started the story over three times already, yet I can't get it right. The tone is wrong, the characters are wrong, I can't get it do be anything other than ridiculous...

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to admit defeat. Apparently I just can't write any more.

I apologize for wasting so much of your time and getting your hopes up, but I just can't do it.

Anyone feeling like requesting commissions? I have two that will be finished this week and have not yet find anything to do for next week!

>>7049846
It's out of date compared to the doc version though, and there is the spreadsheet that lists recent entries.

On the subject of "write the things I want", is there any interest here for vanilla non-/d/ stories?

You know, for being prepared in 2050 if I manage to maybe finish something. Maybe.

>>7049892
A ton of it, it just gets drowned out a lot.

>>7049892
I've heard multiple, often angry requests for non-/d/ material, I'm sure there's a lot of interest.

>>7049576
>>7049831
>Polar regent speaks good English
>"I have enjoyed your company, Ambassador."
>“I think you will enjoy my company, Ambassador.”
uhhh
UHHHHH

From an unnecessarily academic point of view, it's interesting that she seems so positive about their interaction despite it being pretty much 'as equals'. Though, social animals from harsher cold environments do tend to be more cooperative for survival reasons, I suppose; when gathering together to stay warm is an important strategy, aggressive competitiveness is going to be quite a bit riskier.
Plus the language thing despite her (and maybe anyone from the other territories) not having left the planet means she might be a Xenophile. Dennis is going to get there and find a small but lovingly curated room of human knickknacks. With a bookshelf of explicit doujin displaying a concerning bias towards titles involving catgirls.

>>7049897
The fact humans don't go all hibernation when it gets cold might endear our kind to polar Borealans too. I'm sure they'd love our colder regions/countries.

>>7049897
Oh yeah maybe I should change that, good catch.

Yeah that's what I'm going for, I figure the Polar Borealans will be a lot more chill (no pun intended) than their equatorial cousins. Less competitive, more cooperative.

Kind of spoiler but I want to give the /gfd/ guys something softer to get off to than the constant raping, so there are gonna be some cuddly, somewhat-more-consensual-than-usual interactions.

>>7049897
here's my tinfoil theory:
we know some boreleans aren't all party hard over the patriarch and his now human buttbuddies.
The polar regent is just better at hiding it than everyone else. While the rest of them are hibernating, she gets the ambassador to her territory, fortifies, and now has a very valuable human hostage once anyone realizes dennis hasn't come back when he was supposed to.

>>7049895
You have to remember that this started primarily vanilla, and there's naturally quite a bit of resentment about how nobody seems to want to cater to the old fetishes like they used to. Even the OP's starting to feel like a lie since it's clearly not "all types" of erotic fiction anymore. Just the stuff that the two or three most prolific authors churn out nonstop, with not even the slightest hint of acknowledgement by the vast majority of people. Snekguy's been good about that, but if you're not him then no one else will even post to say "I read your thing".

All the fixation on his one setting over trying to create others as well doesn't help much. It doesn't even seem to be an especially interesting world, to be honest- at the best, it's decent but highly overrated.

>>7049905
/gfd/ thanks you

>>7049834

Open with an error... GRR how did I miss that?!

I really dont like reading how tifa is always seeming to be so powerless against normal people. When she is so far beyond just an average person.

I looked to the fight scene from advent children for the best refrence to her fighting ability and I made my brain hurt that she would come across as weak in other stories.

That is why I figured she might have been exposed to the mako energy in more minor way that cloud was. You know... because she also has red eyes.

This is why I wanted Hojo to actually have to wear her down to make her comply to her demands. While also doing the same to Red XIII because he is not just a animal. He has honor and compassion and can think logically.

Ultimately by the end of this chapter I wanted to establish that Hojo is one depraved scientist and that Red and Tifa do have a mutual curiosity in one another.

>>7049911
>All the fixation on his one setting over trying to create others as well doesn't help much.
Well, we could fix that. A bit of collaborative worldbuilding if anyone's up for it, maybe? Create a connected story/stories covering some of the fetishes people have been wanting.

>>7049871
It's fine anon. I appreciate you trying. Guess we'll just have to find someone else to pick up the torch. Don't give up writing all together though.

>>7049905
>Oh yeah maybe I should change that, good catch.
I don't see any problems there
Just implictions coming from what the regent was saying
She enjoyed his presence at the banquet, and she reckons he will enjoy her company during the eclipse.

>>7049911
I was enjoying Iron Oxide and look forwrd to any more from there, seems like a solid urban fantasy with an interesting minority/prejudice/jutifiably worrying group in the elementals.

I'd love to discuss more stuff, but right now it's not being produced much. There's been some futa stuff, but that's really not my thing and they seemed much more fetish-first than setting-first so I can't give much good criticism.

>>7049911
And you have to remember that you're on /d/, where cum inflation giantess tentacle genderswap is the order of the day. Nothing wrong with vanilla at all, but telling the people who routinely produce a large amount of content to lay off isn't going to make the content you personally wanna read magically appear, it just results in less content for those that want to read it.

>All the fixation on his one setting over trying to create others as well doesn't help much.

It's not like everyone was trying to create original scifi settings before Snek showed up and he drowned them all out, I've not personally seen anything resembling what he's doing, and certainly not as quickly as he's doing it.

I'm having fun, it's nice to have people producing stuff consistently every day, and it's nice to engage with the authors and have them respond to your feedback in a way that is immediately obvious.

Seriously dude you come off as an asshole, telling people what they should and shouldn't like, how they should behave in the thread, criticizing productive people while not producing anything yourself.

>>7049911
I have offered to write stuff for the old /tg/ crowd in the past, but nobody took me up on it.
I don't like that people aren't producing the content you want to read, but I don't see a way I can help with that.

>it's decent but highly overrated

I mean you're welcome to try to do better, nobody is telling you 'not' to write vanilla stuff, there's a guy offering to write some ITT and plenty of demand for it.

It's cool if you don't like my stuff, maybe you're just not into that, I'm not into a lot of fetishes that get posted, but I'm just trying to do my very best to write stories for my readers.

>>7049939
Yeah whatever happened to that story? I was enjoying that too, the one with the junkyard golems and shit.

>>7049930
I don't mind throwing some ideas out.

>>7049801
>Succubus story
Fuck yes

>>7049911
Personally, I'd like to see non /tg/ properties covered, as folks started to do in /aco/ with their fiction threads. Then the mods started blocking them, and we gave up.

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>>7049960
I was thinking along the lines of:
>/x/fag tries to summon a succubus using retard instructions someone posted on the internet
>to his amazement it actually works
>the succubus doesn't give a shit about what he wants and just drains him like a jerrycan
>loads of NonCon femdom shit happens

>>7049949
I'll confess frustration is playing a part in my reaction, I'll say that much. It gets demoralizing when you could originally count on seeing content of all types being made by a dozen different people at any given time, and now I can only expect to see a small handful of things by a small handful of people.

Look at Henric and Alex for example- it's arguably one of the best fics written in the history of the threads. You have character development, an expansive setting, and a wide assortment of fetishes to boot. Compare that to all of Snekguy's fics: they're decent in their own right, but they all may as well be the same story with the same characters. The plots are almost insultingly simple at times, and the characters keep coming off as having minimal degrees of development.

>criticizing productive people while not producing anything yourself

While I could say you don't need to be a professional chef to criticize someone's cooking, I can say I'm trying to make my own content here, but unlike Snekguy I take a long time to write and don't like the idea of advertising what I'm making until it's 100% finished. Quality over quantity, if you will.

>>7049966
>femdom
ugh, not again

>>7049958

Actually snek, would you be opposed to the idea of me throwing a race into your fiction?

Was just mulling over an idea for one and this is what I got so far. The would be a gentically engineered species at first designed for slavery. They eventually rebelled against their creators.

What was left in the aftermath of the war was the tech they scavenged and an predatory outlook of us versus them xenophobia.

They are not one of those typical galactic threat types and prowl space in small numbers. Their ships are all spinal mounted battle craft designed for one shot one kill engagements and rely on stealth over shielding and armor.

Ground combat and appearance I am working on.

Thinking something of a cross between a leopard seal, their faces look absolutely primeval and an otter because sleek body structure is pleasing.

I imagine they use peacemeal powered armour with some crude plasma rifles because they don't have the ability to manufacture complex weapons and mostly use what they can fight for and plunder off aliens.

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>>7049966
Bad end isn't quite my cup of tea for erotic literature. How's this idea?
>mc summons succubus from bizarre instructions he found somefuckingwhere
>he didn't think it would actually work
>succubus seems determined to slowly drain his life
>she can only return to her realm once she has completely drained him
>process would take several days
>succubus hasn't been summoned in centuries
>she's amazed by the technological process she has missed
>gets hooked on vidya and other modern luxuries
>she decides she wants to remain in this realm
>that means not draining the life force of the mc
>also means depending on him in other ways (could depend on cum for nourishment)

>>7049992
*progress

>>7049967
>It gets demoralizing when you could originally count on seeing content of all types being made by a dozen different people at any given time, and now I can only expect to see a small handful of things by a small handful of people.
Too bad you got yourself kicked off of /tg/ then, isn't it?

>>7049992
>Bad end isn't quite my cup of tea for erotic literature.
Pansy.

At this point it would be subversive to have the succubus actually be a deadly efficient demon that kills people.