/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General

>>7020455
You pulled the trigger early anon, please delete this before the old thread gets modleted.

http://pastebin.com/uVwp85Ej

reposting in the event that this one doesn't get purged

tags : whole lot of not smut, lewd girls, kissing, masturbation, first person

>>7020455
nigger get rid of that furshit

>>7020462
The other thread is literally on the end of the last page.
Literally any new thread creation will knock it into the archive.

>>7020443
I created my own publishing company. The editor is a bitch but it worked out in the end. :)

>>7020439
Good start. The teasing, details, I like those.

"I melted off the wall" was a strange phrasing.

“You’re a shemale?” I wanted a bit more emotional introspection before you got to that question. Most people who respond to something first think, then move, finally speak. This is a good point where you want to draw it out a little since it is so unexpected.

>>7020487
>I created my own publishing company
That sounds like a genius idea, so you released in paper back then?

>>7020490
Yep, paperback and ebooks. I happen to enjoy typesetting though I commissioned Mamabliss to do chapter images on Mummy's Girl but the Kindle wouldn't allow it. So I miss those. :(

>>7020510
>I commissioned Mamabliss to do chapter images on Mummy's Girl
It never occurred to me that kindle wouldn't allow chapter images, shit.
Well that's less effort I have to put into the book I guess.

If you don't mind me asking, how healthy are your returns?

>>7020508
>that sneaky butthole
Nice.

Friend of Snekguy here. To the anon in the previous thread who asked about making ebooks, the free software Calibre has a conversion and editing tool. You might run into some issues because DOC, ODT and similar file types are more feature rich than ebook formats. But you'll figure it out.

>>7020525
Thanks anon.

>>7020515
There was a porn purge a few years back because of images inside ebooks. Amazon (and a whole bunch of others) made a blanket ban for images inside books. Covers are okay, but naked women getting impaled on tentacles (apparently).

Returns are... harder to talk about. I don't really advertising and I only have the two books for sale. I've been writing for 25+ years, mostly smut, but I never really worked to establish a reader base who would actually pay. Eliza is my best novel, a lot of folks like it. A couple hundred dollars a year, but I really need to establish more readers.

Plus, coming up with a book more than once every three years would have probably helped.

From my experience, coming out with more books really helps. Patreon is helping a bit toward that and I really hope Derik's Luck will push me toward getting this more than just writing /d/-related smut for free.

>>7020557
>porn purge
Fuck.
I might have dial back my covers as well then, I had some rough ideas for one.

I might also have to look into patreon, I pulled carpal tunnel before I could really get into art so I never ended up exploring it but you're not the first person I've met on here who uses it.

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>>7020562
Covers are different. If you have a too risque cover, Amazon puts you in the "dungeon" (search for Amazon dungeon) which means your books don't show up under searches unless someone explicitly books your book title and name in. It kills the random sales entirely which means you have to build an audience otherwise.

Mummy's Girl got in there because it had a naked illustrated butt on the cover. Eliza is because... well, I'm attaching it.

Now, my D. Dancer byline has very Bauhaus covers and they are fine (mostly text with images) but gay porn isn't as exciting for me as tentacles, mummy, sentient dinos, and submissive males in harems. :)

I decided to try Patreon to see if it works. So far, I'm getting 1-2 new folks a week. I happened to have a number of serials in progress (Omelas just finished), so the "carrot" as it were was getting to read to the end instead of me slowly posting a chapter/week.

I mostly work word-of-mouth so... it is slower than most people.

Also, if I get enough through Patreon, I might write a Kindom of Loathing-style game with porn. :)

>>7020586
That amazon dungeon thing is a real ball breaker, I'm pretty much certain my work will go straight there once I upload it just of the keyword filter.

>>7020604
It seems to me that it would be more prudent to upload it with a comparatively bland cover, just to be safe.

>>7020466
Couple of minor grammatical errors here and there, but otherwise this seems like it has some potential. As it is though, it feels like it's got too much in the way of exposition to really stand on its own.

Of course, the easiest way to fix that is to just continue the story.

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>>7020645
Yeah it will be pretty bland, I think I may include a couple of extra chapters of non smut plot and see if I can pass it as standard fantasy.

>>7020645
Oh for sure, story will continue until Ally is a broken slut

>>7020540
It's like InCase and Legoman had an artist lovechild.

>>7020652
>>7020673
Both of those are valid options, depending on how you want to do it.

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A succubus outbreak in the style of a zombie outbreak.

Succubized women become nudist nymphomaniacs with horns, wings and tails. They feed on sexual fluids from men and/or from other succubi; their preference is based on their sexual orientation at the time of succubization.

Infection is by contact with succubus fluids. Women are succubized, men and children brainwashed into mindless servants. Friendly succubi like to grab and kiss people; sneaky ones may leave drool or cum where people live; mean ones will tie/chain people up and use whatever sadistic ways come to mind.

>>7020853
Stop requesting the same thing over and over. Just post it in the request database.

Can't believe how much Literotica sucks.
You post your shit on StoriesOnline it takes them about 15 minutes to approve, and they let you put a link to your Patreon at the end of your text.
FA let's you post instantly and has special links for Patreon on the profile page.
Literotica took five days to review my stories then rejected them because they have a Patreon link at the end, and the only place they'll let you put a link is in your profile where nobody will see it.
Do you guys use that site? Is the traffic worth putting up with their absurd restrictions?

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The final update for Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

EPILOGUE: Croc-worth Orange
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

Thank you all for reading, and a very big thanks to whatever Anon. suggested this idea. I hope it lived up to your expectations.

Someone in the last thread was asking about a follow-up to The Player Witch Augment.

I think it's clear the only thing I need to make a sequel to something is to find a way to make the title a pun. Would anyone be interested? Anyone have a suggestion on where it should go, so I don't add gangsters and pirates to it like a moron?

You can read The Player Witch Augment here:
http://pastebin.com/bPDQRrM1

>Tags: cock growth, huge penis, small penis humiliation, masturbation, exhibitionism, witchcraft, futa, autofellatio, walla walla bing-bang

>>7020961
I took one look at it and figured that here, Pastebin, and Google Docs are the only places worth it. Sure, nobody will find your fics without you directing anyone to it, but I'm not interested in Patreon and I'd rather not jump through hoops to appease them when I have all of you guys.

>>7020978
>>7020961
I mostly post my stuff on my own website. It is a bit more personal than Pastebin and easier to index than Google Docs. Yeah, it requires a bit of maintenance but you can easily run Wordpress. It does have that "money" cost, but I consider it worth it to have a tiny bit of branding.

>>7020961
I just looked at StoriesOnline. Then I noticed that they have a premium service where I found out that they are withholding most of the features that would make the site decent, not to mention imposing a per-day limit on how many stories you can read.

>>7020961
Which FA as I know a buncha of em?

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>>7020961
Snekguy, have you ever considered writing smut based on existing properties/concepts?

I think you would write a GOAT Grieve-tan story.
Multi-arms, athletic, Xeno, Tsundere, weaponry, vanilla...
It hit a lot of your strong suits.

>>7020978
>>7020986
I actually really like Patreon, the format is kind of like a blog and they let you host files directly on the page so I can put my Ebooks up.

>>7021000
Yeah, that's why I don't link there instead of Pastebin when I post stories, but it's very author-friendly and I've gotten a lot of traffic.

>>7021044
FurAffinity

>>7021210
That sounds pretty cool, I'm not familiar with the character, do you have more info? I've built up a bit of a backlog, I have to do Snek 3 and some more Pinwheel stuff before I start anything new, but hopefully I can get most of that done next week.

Oh and in case anyone missed it here's my last completed story:

Last Stand:
http://pastebin.com/SHF1Xmda
>bondage, femdom, oral, female ejaculation, tail job, kissing, size difference, large breasts, sweat, muscle, monstergirl, orgasm denial, teasing, vaginal

Ebook here:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6728846&i=565652

Where my Digimon Hentai Zone fanfiction bros at?!

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First 2000 words of Snek 3 are ready.

Snek 3/Uninvited: You Shouldn't Be Here
http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS

Expect frequent updates, I'll be writing all day and I'll upload more every couple of thousand words.

>>7021515
yay for NEET writefags

Did the OP image actually get deleted for being 'furry shit?'

So snek ladies aren't allowed? Or just not in the OP?

>>7021580
The OP is the most visible. The mods won't know of anything in these threads unless they're in them themselves or something is reported.

>>7021580
I've had lewd vipers deleted, but not SFW vipers.

>>7020961
i use it, but only because it's high up in google results

as long as you continually use the same name, literotica traffic could eventually trickle down to your patreon, i guess

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>>7021516
>>7021515
Another 2000 word update.

For short porn stories should I even bother using chapters?

>>7021889
I ended up using chapters even for short stories because it created a better reading experience when you convert them to EPUB/MOBI files. Just my personal two cents.

>>7021916
That's important to know, thanks.
I am actually going to epub this shit at some point.

>>7021889
Depends how short short is. I'd probably say not to bother though. They're mostly useful for navigation, especially in things you might read over several days, though as >>7021916 says they can be useful even in short works if it's going to be an ebook.


>>7021621
Looking good
Minor nitpick, for
>We believe he is in cohorts with XCOM
I think you meant "in cahoots", as in to collude or conspire with, to have clandestine involvement. A cohort is just an ordered group of people, usually a military detachment but often used to refer to an intake of students for an academic institution as well, and "in cohorts with" isn't a valid construction for the same reason you can't be "in parties with the Democrats/Republicans/whatever" in politics, you are just in the party or a member of the party.

>>7021916
>>7021920
When I say short I mean like 5k words, ish.

>>7021933
Sounds like one chapter's worth.

>>7021935
Yeah I'm really just writing quick read porn scenes but the prestory is spread out over some time.
I need something formal to mark the passage of time. how ever.

>>7021940
Your best bet is either to use a section break, a "five years later", or a chapter. I used to use sections for those but with Apple requiring ebooks to have at least two TOC entries, I hate that Smashwords did the "middle of the book" entry so I switched sections to chapters. That way, there was always at least one TOC entry for the middle that I controlled instead of randomly inserted.

It also fits my story workflow. :)

If you want it as a single document, either go with section break or a "five years later".

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>>7021920
Ah, thanks for catching that, I'll correct it.

>>7021933
I tend not to chapter them until they get to around 15k words, and then I generally separate them into chapters of like 4-6k unless there's a long sex scene, I like to keep those as one chapter so people can easily find the smut in the chapter index.

2000 word update, more Snek than you can swallow without unhinging your jaws:
http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS

>>7021958
>>7021960
What I might do is use a timestamp as !not chapters.

Anyone know any good sizekink? Fairy/dwarf/etc... X normal sized or larger?

>>7021960
Damn, how is she getting him out? Thin men and vipers seem to be pretty high in the power structure, but I'm not sure they're allowed to unilaterally adopt pets from the holding cells and there's no way ADVENT don't have cameras on the streets.

Was the interrogators' reference to genetic material going into the vipers an allusion to the autopsy reports saying they're pretty much straight aliens and implying that it'd be used for minor augmentation of an individual, or are you doing your own canon and making the vipers genetic chimerae?

>>7021976
There are a couple such stories on the masterlist. Search for "sizeplay" and "bodyjob".

>>7022071
Yeah more of a "you're so worthless the most you could contribute to a new viper would be one tit" kind of thing.

>>7022081
Cool.
>"Normally we'd let you off, but the new girl has hayfever and we need you to make her shots and cure the earth allergies. Also she can't digest milk yet and your medical file doesn't indicate you're lactose intolerant, so that's a bonus since it's the ice cream social just next week and she really didn't want to miss out again."
>"CAN'T SHE JUST HAVE SORBET?"

>>7022108
kek

Hang in there I got one more update coming before I have to sleep.
That'll take me to 8000 words today.

>>7022081
>the most you could contribute to a new viper would be one tit

[outraged hissing]
>(TN:what are you sssuggessting? my girlsss are all natural!!)

one of the hazards of joining the vichy government is getting an indignant slap strong enough to result in a neck brace for failing to appreciate convergent evolution

Does anyone have any experience with adult-fancfiction the site?

I'm thinking of uploading my pokemon fanfic there.

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>read all updates
>no smut
>have to go to bed
nuts

also, what's the point of a lie-detector interrogator if they just sentence you to death after one round of questioning?
ADVENT are real jerks.

>>7022131
lol, does using more soylent green give them bigger breasts?

>>7022214
I got 2000 words of sloppy BJs and unwelcome kissing coming soon, I'm half way done. Smut takes like twice as long to write.

>ADVENT are real jerks.
Well they are trying to convert the human race into energy drinks.

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>>7021369
As quoted from the /aco/ Grieve-tan thread (>>>/aco/756808)
>some guy on pixiv made a rule63 of General Grievous, then somebody posted on /co/ everything went from there.

From becoming popularized on /co/, folks have developed concepts for imagining a Star Wars-based high school setting, with Grieve-tan as leader of the school's Kendo team.
If there's any interest at all, I'd suggest lurking the thread to learn a bit more >>>/aco/799738

>>7022225
>energy drinks
Please, they only do that with the spares, dregs, and threats. Main focus is on turning us into premium bodies.

I guess it's sort of like a mediocre mass market car manufacturer staging a hostile takeover of an underfunded supercar outfit because their own engineering base is garbage, or something.

Also humans are high protein/low fat, so we're clearly better for building muscle mass. If anything, too much soylent green would risk shrinking of the snektits.

>>7022249
That's pretty cool, very good art, if the character is up for grabs and it won't piss anyone off, I'll certainly consider it when I've finished my backlog.

>>7022214
Ok, special delivery.
http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS
>kissing, blowjob, reluctant, femdom, tail job, oral, female ejaculation, autocunnilingus

Gotta stop there or my hands will fall off.

>>7022262
Spoilers for XCOM 2.
Isn't ADVENT actually trying to upgrade both of our races to deal with something way worse than them? Granted they're harvesting us for our genetic code, killed a ton of people in First Contact, and are probably going to make us footsoldiers, but it's because they're afraid of Tyranids. Love and Coexistence can absolutely bloom once the Elders are taken care of.

>Sloppy unwilling Snek blowjobs with giant tongue.
>Any kind of Reverse Rape with Sneks at all.

You're doing the world a service.

Snektitz, what's the link to your patreon?

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>>7022319
https://www.patreon.com/Snekguy

You can find all my stories here, and all the finished stuff has free Ebook downloads that will work on Nook/Kindle/etc.

>>7022205
Don't bother. Thry have no standards and the layout is a wreck.

>>7022281
>Love and Coexistence can absolutely bloom once the Elders are taken care of
that XCOM fic about a viper living with a human girlfriend seemed interesting. Xrays born/hatched/whatever after the "liberation" who grew up integrated into the new society and believing the propaganda could be fun. It's surreal to imagine a civilian sectoid or muton earnestly trying to protect their human roommate when a terrorist attack takes place outside, plus there's the obvious emotional turmoil if they discover what's really going on and it then crashes straight into their pride for what they thought they had done to help humanity.

>>7022281
>Isn't ADVENT actually trying to upgrade both of our races to deal with something way worse than them?

Yes, or at least that's what they claim, but given the rest of their client races are mind controlled slaves, many of them cloned and all of them genetically manipulated, what they consider an 'upgrade' is by no means good for us. If XCOM fails, you're far more likely to see humanity processed into Avatar bodies for the Ethereals, and ADVENT grunts. Baseline, free-willed humans would probably cease to exist.

>>7022496
Vipers at least are ostensibly unaltered, and the other races it mostly seems to be physical or psychic enhancements. It seems like control via indoctrination is their style rather than destroying free will. I guess it makes sense since anything that could seriously impact free will would tend to cripple flexibility, which would make for ineffective soldiers.

So, regular jackbooted totalitarian society rather than mindslave totalitarian society, so that's clearly okay.

>>7022506
The final mission mentions that alien units across the world are starting to go crazy, either laying down their weapons or turning on each other as the Ethereal's psychic network breaks down. I'd say that's a pretty strong indication that their methods of control over-ride the individual's natural instincts.

Honestly, IMO if people want to write a broadly-canon human/alien fic set in XCOM2's universe, it'd make more sense to write on set after XCOM has reclaimed control of the planet. You'd be left with thousands of Vipers, Sectoids, Mutons etc that have been freed from the Ethereal's control and don't have any option but to integrate into our society.

>>7022514
Wonder how Firaxis is going to take things going forwards.
As long as it adds more ayyfus I'm sure I can get on board.

>>7022562
It made a sequel hook that was a thinly veiled reference to Terror from the Deep. But this is the erotic fiction thread, not the XCOM thread. Get back on track.

I keep coming back here because actual media featuring what attracts me to /d/ in the first place isn't exactly common or never directly shows it

so seeing it in writing is the best thing

sadly, it's already a rare fetish

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>>7022272
Damn, Snek 3 is coming along nicely

>>7022714
Care to share what it is? /d/ is not exactly free of perverts with highly specific fetishes that never get catered to outside this Atlantis of porn.

Hey Snekguy, do you have links to the other ones? I'd like to read them all if there's prequels to no. 3

>>7022783
All on the list.

>>7022808
I might just be a pastebin noob but your profile has no public posts so I can't find any others

>>7022817
oh, wait, I'm an idiot. Nevermind!

>>7020978

I have a literotica account and the views you get can be pretty obscene.

Take my one story Ravaged by the Roadside.

It's been on hentai factory for at least 2 months maybe more, just under 800 views.

Meanwhile on Literotica, it hasn't even been 24 hours and it's has over 1k views and even more votes. Sure it's like 6 but that's double what HA has netted.

I am not trying to make revenue off this so I don't give a single shit about posting my tip jar but I do like getting my work getting exposure.

Another suggestion I would throw at you is sexstories.com. It takes stupid amounts of time for your work to get published there but the traffic is comparible to literotica and you might be able to post your links inside your work.

Your choice.

>>7021000

Yeah fuck that site and its pay wall kneecapping people from getting to your stories to read them.

>>7022820
I'm not actually snekguy either.

>>7022836
I never cared about view count, especially since nobody's really willing to actually give you their honest opinion on what they think of your work. It's all empty flattery as far as I can tell. Quality, not quantity.

Is snekguy the only person writing for these threads now? He seems to be the only one who makes content on a semi-consistent basis.

Everyone else really has to step it up, he's making us all look lazy by comparison.

>>7022845

Literotica has yielded some honest criticism that allowed me to better construct my stories.

I do like having my ego pole getting a little stroke here and there.

What's patreons deal with multiple accounts?

>>7022337
Damn, I really want to find a place for posting my shitty 1-2k poke gym smut with a community who appreciates that kind of thing.

>>7022874

I am working on a monster girl story. I really want to push for a stronger narritive this time from my other work.

Snek also posts his progress in small blocks. So he is padding out his releases to make seem all the more active..
That's my defense.

>>7022876
That community is right here, anon. We not good enough for you or something?

>>7022880
I feel bad shilling my patreon on 4chan and I honestly don't think pokesmut is that big here.

>>7022886
We accept everything. Post it, you don't know how popular it'll be if you never show it to us. Besides, the whole point of the thread is to share fapfics.

>>7022874
I'm still here. I'm writing a sequel to that cock growth story I did the other day. It probably won't be done until tomorrow.

Since I'm here. For a sequel, should I post it in the same Pastebin file, or make them separate files? I put them all in the same file with the Croc story, but I don't know if everyone was reading them or not.

>>7022891
Separate ones, if it's separate fics.

>>7022887
Alright I'll keep polishing it.
[spoiler]It's such a small series of one shots following the trail of a terrible pokemon trainer with big tits who loses gym battles but puts out for the badge, eventually becoming league champion without ever winning a single battle.[/spoiler]

>>7022897
Well, it's an immediate follow-up, so I don't know if it IS a separate fic. It takes place on the same day as the first entry.

>>7022914
If you consider them to be separate fics, then you should make them different files anyway. Plus, it's better for organization.

I've never posted to this thread before, but I have a few stories to share.

I've done some writefagging in the past, but I've always posted my work directly to 4chan or as expiring anonymous pastebins. Lately I've been polishing up my old stories, so hopefully it's alright if I post them here as I finish.

Second Date
http://pastebin.com/UD6ztvq3
Tags: M/F, Monstergirl (Creepy)

I've also been working on some new stuff, but it's just not quite ready yet. Despite scratching my head for over a month, I can't seem to finish the last scene.

>>7020466
Should I continue dropping the link to this as I update it? Are people interested?

>>7022770

Basically, slimegirls/any woman who can melt and reform into some elastic substance freely.

>>7022874
I'm mainly here by for the feels.I have so much in my commission backlog that I can't get to the one piece I have offered to do (the solar superhero verses her roommate the mechanical genius).

>>7023007
>http://pastebin.com/UD6ztvq3

That's a pretty good creepy waifu. Got any more of her?

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>>7022783
Sorry I usually post the full list at the start of the thread, but I don't want people to think I'm ruthlessly shilling because most are regulars and have seen it already.

Best way to read Snek 1 and 2 is this chaptered Ebook with both stories (all the stuff on my Patreon is free, no paywalls):
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6647983&i=548925

Pastebins here:
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

>>7022836
Yeah that sounds like about what I get on SOL.
Maybe it's worth putting up with them then, I do get the impression Literotica wants me to put way more in that I get back, when other sites have much nicer interfaces and more liberal upload requirements and approval processes.

>>7022878
Usually I do about 2k words a day, but this week I have even more free time than usual so I'm gonna go nuclear.

>>7023007
Nice I love creepy waifus. Your formatting is really good, keep writing!


You beautiful people doubled my Patreon subs last night, looks like I gotta do another 8000 today.

>>7023007
I like it.

>>7023035
Oh someone wrote a really good slime story the other day, I don't have the link.
The character was called Sophie that's all I remember.

discord channel isn't working, what gives?

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2000 word update, finished up the sex scene, I'll have more for you later today.

http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS
>kissing, blowjob, reluctant, femdom, tail job, oral, female ejaculation, autocunnilingus, vaginal, light bondage

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>>7022911
pastebin.com/ss751XEi
pastebin.com/Mxm99Yfg

Working my way through these two, I can't stop writing heaps of short paragraphs with sporadic dialogue even though it looks so shithouse.

>>7023162
>mfw missed a slime story

>>7023453 (You)
4000 word update, no new tags.

This one is kind of plot-heavy, currently holding at 27.11% smut.
You guys cool with that or do I need to get some more snakefucking in there?

>>7023723

Nothing wrong with plot.

>>7023723
It's fine. Convoluted narrative, etc.

But in all seriousness, no need to advertise every little update. I've found that posting them too frequently makes people less likely to read your stuff than they would be normally.

On a somewhat unrelated note, can we keep the namefaggotry down a little bit? There's no need to use names or tripcodes when not posting new content, or at least that's what I feel. We don't want to give the impression that we're just a circlejerk centered around two or three people, that makes us all look bad.

You know, since we moved onto /d/ I've realized we've moved too far beyond /tg/ subjects for it to really fit on 1d4chan anymore. And I'll be honest with you- it's growing increasingly difficult for me to keep up with everything posted. So I've taken the liberty to port the master list onto a google doc so anyone can edit it from now on.

I'll still be here to make sure as little as possible falls through the cracks, but hopefully that won't be needed as much anymore. So without further ado, here's the definitive, editable-by-anyone, master list.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit#heading=h.g1wtdvfcl2vp

>>7023723
Plot is great. If someone just wants fucking, there are plenty of stories they can turn to.

>>7023453
you have to drip feed me the smut.

too much at once and i'll overdose and probably die.

Is patreon slow as fuck and unresponsive for anyone else?

>>7023761
Thanks man, I've not been here long but I appreciate the work you've done maintaining that shit.

>>7023734
>>7023765
>>7023767
Cool, I'll keep it going then, back to work!

>>7023743
I kind of have to namefag if I want to receive and respond to feedback, personally I wouldn't be able to follow the conversation otherwise, and it's useful to know when other authors are giving or requesting feedback.

>>7023785
Yeah comments won't load for me.

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>>7023723
>protagonist-kun goes to rebels

Time to remove Ayy motherfucker.

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S'Okay.

http://pastebin.com/wienVbfT

Tags: sugar sweet lovey-dovey-hug-n-buggy romance, hetero, monster girl, sea nymph, kissing, blowjob, nipple-sucking, lotus-position, multiple simultaneous devastating defensive deep orgasms, pussy juice drinking, 69, taint tickling, sexual competition, underwater sex, consensual hand-holding.

>>7023817
>consensual hand-holding
l-lewd.

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>>7023817
>consensual hand-holding.
get that freaky shit outta here

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>>7023851
>>7023843
I wish stale memes would be allowed to die.

>>7023453
I love this story so much. Thank you.

>>7023121

Good lord I need a viper in my life...

>>7022874
There's actually quite a few of us old regulars still around. We just never individually had that frequent of an output. At least a couple of us will post a story or two every thread. Writing comes and goes in cycles. I've gone months without writing anything, then cranked out more than a story a week. It happens.

>>7023896
That's good to hear at least. Hopefully one of those would come soon, and with even more luck I'll be part of it.

>>7023896

Yeah my creativity is unpredictable like that as well... it sucks.

Do some of you fags write or plan to write something you can make money with? Would you like to do that or is writing for anons enough for you?

>>7023914
I plan to write something I can make money from, it's also a hobby because I wasted my youth and never learned to draw while I could still make it.

>>7022874
My output would look pretty impressive too if I posted updates every 2000 words.

Warhammer story when?! D:

>>7023924
Yeah but if he was releasing updates every 4000 or 6000 words he'd still be producing the same quantity of content.

So, I've been writing a BDSM thing that I'd like to sell, and this seems like a thread to ask about how viable my stories actually are. I'm worried about finding an audience.

My stories run Master/slave fetishism side by side with a main plot that's about, like, paranormal investigations and shit. The fetishism ties into themes of the story since stuff tends to be about power relations, and the relationships between the slave characters (my main characters) are often defined in terms of how they react to having been enslaved. Between the characters spending a lot of time talking or arguing (sometimes indirectly) about slavery and the scenes where they investigate sinister demon cults whose only relation to fetish is that one of the characters feels really guilty about accidentally giving them a demon army, I've got a porn:plot ratio that favors plot pretty heavily. Plus, a lot of my porn scenes don't involve actual fucking, just naked girls being tied up and/or whipped. Is there even an audience for this (outside of the ~20 people who read my alpha drafts for free)?

Given the popularity of fantasy and sci-fi novels with thinly veiled BDSM themes (societies where women/men are enslaved, or where a certain class of people are gagged all the time because they have magic voices that give them power over others and the people of this class we meet happen to be overwhelmingly female, or whatever) I'm hoping that there's a market for a science fantasy story that's open and explicit about the BDSM but I don't know how to actually find out if that market exists or how big it is.

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>>7023938
what kind of warham story were you looking for ?

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>>7023949
Someone was going to write a warhammer story along the lines of

"Start with a Sister at mass, hearing how the marines are descended from the Emperor (he made the Primarchs from his flesh, and the marines from Primarch flesh), then her growing lust would come from her seeing more and more of the Emperor in them.

From starting to notice how hot the Space Marines she works with are, to trying to sneak a peak in the showers, to not wearing underwear and hoping they notice, etc."


I got excited, its been a few days, I'm impatient and want my SOB sluts now.

Yes I see that I'm being unreasonable.

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>>7020977
Here is is. The Player Witch Augment 2: Paranormal Virility
http://pastebin.com/Fnfk6knG

>Tags for this entry: futa, cock growth, huge penises, huge ejaculations, humiliation, exhibitionism, food play, autofellatio, masturbation

I almost want someone else to come up with tags for me. I never know what I'm doing when writing them.

Nevertheless, I hope you like it. Let me know what you think of it.

*checks* Huh. The moment after posting it to Pastebin, it had 55 views?

>>7023914
I write serious stuff that I plan to make money with someday. I also write smut to relax. It's so much more easier to me that it's almost ludicrous. There's no pressure to be perfect, no need to be ashamed of anything, just me embracing what I want to.

Speaking of which, here's something I wrote a year ago. Haven't posted it anywhere before. Skimmed through it to make sure it didn't have too many problems.

Haven't used pastebin before, so hope I did it right. If there's interest, I'll post more later on. This is just a fifth or so of what I've written of it.

http://pastebin.com/5EhN0gDQ

>tags: drow, dark elf, femdom, cbt, chastity, D&D, forgotten realms.

>>7023954
Bots. That's why you post it unlisted first for a few hours.

>>7023954
That'd be bots, in regards to the view count. Set it to Unlisted so only people with the link can view it, then after a few days set it to Public if you want.

>>7023957
>>7023958
Why is it bad if the bots see it?

>>7023960
Because it artificially jacks up the view count instead of giving an accurate read of who's actually reading your stuff?

>>7023960
I'd guess because you can't estimate how many lurkers have read it and thus can't gauge interest realistically.

>>7023957
>>7023958
>>7023960
>>7023964
>>7023966

Roger. I didn't actually know I could make them unlisted.

Nevertheless, the bots reading my writing must be really fucking confused.

>>7023723
I love me some plot. Porn without plot feels lackluster. I like to actually know the characters in my porn and be invested in their story.

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I finished heavily revising another of my older stories. Ready to move on to some new material after this. Maybe a spinoff of this.

XXS/XXL: A Size Story
http://pastebin.com/ayM2XhEG
Tags: Futa/Futa, Size Difference, Muscle, Hyper, Excessive Cum, GTS
~8000 words

A tale of two young, oversexed futas with a massive size difference falling in love. Inspired by this picture by Uyorr.

In case it's not obvious, text in brackets [ ] are conversations happening through email/IM.

>>7023853
It may be stale, but it's true that fetishes go full circle.

So I'm into a few things that are kind of hard to specifically search for, would anyone happen to know of any stories that feature this kind of stuff?

Mostly I'm after stories that put a fairly in-depth focus on the sensations of a monstrous partner's skin/fur/scales, the warmth of their body, and the feeling of being squeezed/held, rather than the motions of the sex itself - ideally with a far larger male, and involving some biting/mouthing or gentle choking, but those are optional. The idea of being comforted by something so far outside the realm of 'normal', and slowly growing dependant on it to complete that side of me, is incredibly enticing to me, but there isn't exactly a tag to search for that I know of.

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Well since I had no real luck on /vp/ I guess I'll post my request here. I want to see a story where Wicke infantizes the protagonist and becomes their mommy. Looking for femdom, baby play, diapers, and wetting. You can add scat and messing if you want but I don't really care

>>7023974
They're not smart enough to understand anything they're reading, I think they just try and collect credit card numbers or something.

>>7024010
Tags?

>>7024013
pastebin.com/TGZdfmav

Reposting with tags.

Pokemon, furshit, ganguro gal, poorly written

>>7024001
You'll find most of those in my stories to an extent, those elements are all there, except that the characters are female, so I don't know if that's a dealbreaker for you.
I have lots of biting and mouthing in all my stories going into a lot of detail in the Pinwheel stuff, descriptions of scales in the Snek stuff, the warmth of the genitals, lots of light bondage, etc.

You might like this one, it's a shorter story with less plot and it will give you an idea of what to expect in terms of sexual content:
>>7021401

>>7023954
I was advised to keep all of my Pastebins unlisted, not sure if they're still deleting stuff, just a heads up.

>>7023914
It seems very unlikely I could make a living doing it, but it would be a dream job. I'm having much more luck with Patreon than I expected going into it (and much more fun), so that's definitely a viable option for supplemental income at least.

>>7024025
Don't be so hard on yourself man, that's not badly written, keep practicing.

>>7023734
>>7023979
>>7023809
>>7023765
One last update before I go to bed, I reached 8000 words as promised, I hope you like it. More tomorrow.
New content starts at "The rebels led us off the road and down a dirt path"

http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS
>new tags: muscle, sweat

>>7023723

Bro the plot was good. I felt weird that the sex happened at the part of the story where they are escaping, because at that point I was heavily invested in what was gonna happen to the protagonist.

>>7023804
So now that Vi is a rebel she's going to wear a beret, right?
If my understanding gleaned from TV dramas and video games involving the French resistance and/or South American revolutionaries is accurate, rebels have to wear them.
It probably needs to be a big beret, since vipers are huge as it is and she's big for a viper.

Slightly more seriously, shame she couldn't have deserted with her combat gear and one of those translator doohickeys from when she was billeted with the protagonist. They'd almost certainly have tracking devices in some of them though, and that stuff isn't much use locked inside a Faraday cage in the reverse engineering labs. XCOM can probably whip up a translator themselves anyway.

>>7024111
I guess she already knew everyone in the building had been mulched without raising alarms and she had two days of backlog she wanted to resolve.

>>7024119
>she already knew everyone in the building had been mulched without raising alarms

Solid Snake?

>>7024124
>with her unprecedented amount of free time while the rebels worked out what the fuck to do about her, Vi gets into video games
>she especially likes first and third person stealth or action titles

finally, we have discovered who The Duke controller was made for.

>>7023953
It's coming along. I did say I was a slow writer.

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>>7023953
oh! i usually do serf stuff but i can try to at least scribble some relevant material. as long as you're not too attatched to power armor with boobs.

i also hope your request gets filled properly!

>>7024162
You did that one? You're amazing.

>>7024096
I hadn't heard that. I have everything backed up, but nevertheless, I suppose keeping them unlisted doesn't hurt.

Thanks for the heads up, Snekky.

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>>7023953
oh right, any chapter in particular in mind?

>>7024174
thank you !

>>7024192
I'd recommend the ultramarines. Do you have a blog or anything where I can see more of your work?

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>>7024198
a bunch of my older work should still be up at http://serfnturf.tumblr.com/ ! i am very bad at keeping an updated gallery, feel free to yell at me to update.

>>7024096
>You might like this one, it's a shorter story with less plot and it will give you an idea of what to expect in terms of sexual content:
Thanks, it's not quite what I was looking for, but sorta close.

If you wouldn't mind some critique on >>7021401, I spotted a few things from what I read of it (I only read a few paragraphs from about when he's caught by the viper, so, grain of salt and all that).
Two main things: your use of 'It/He (did X)' or 'It was Y' to start a lot of sentences was quite noticeable - not to the point of being grating, exactly, but it was getting there in my opinion - and there were quite a few sentences that would have been far better split up, instead of multiple not-quite-connected clauses pushed together. For example;
>She held the thick lips apart with her forefingers, clear juice oozed from the pink, fleshy interior, he blushed with the indignity of it, his face was an inch away from her.
Could've been broken into 2 or 3 sentences of their own, or restructured to fit into one sentence properly.

Some more minor opinions; the word 'organ' was an odd choice, especially when using it to describe multiple different organs, and the man's inner monologue was a bit bland and distracting for me. I would've liked to see some more internal actions (swallowing, heart beating faster, muscle spasms, etc) to supplement or replace his thoughts. Similarly, I would've liked it to linger longer on each aspect of the scenario as it came, rather than pushing on to a new movement after couple sentences.

Again, biased and uneducated opinions, and thank you again for suggesting the story.

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>>7024204
Out of curiosity are you scanning in the pictures on your tumblr? Some of them seem to have really low image quality (not art wise, you know what I mean) and some appear cut off in parts. Pic related.

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>>7024210
nope! those are snipped off of flockmod, where i sometimes hang out and scribble. other people draw there too, but i don't want to post it all together/confuse people as to who drew what. or sometimes it's just plain messy before editing, like this.

>>7024229
Well, where we used to scribble anyway. When Cuteanon left it's been pretty much dead.

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>>7024229
Who do you think you are?

"Oh it's nothing much, just scribbled this 200% fappable picture on a restaurant napkin and uploaded a 120x290 .jpg of it to a website that will delete it after a few days. Hope you didn't intend on jacking off or anything!"

I don't often use the term "wasting your talent" but putting up most of your work in places where they will eventually get deleted is a massive waste. You draw SOOO good. At least also put your doodles in a place where people can enjoy them as opposed to letting them fade into the ether.

Also >BIG AMERICAN SPACE MARINE HANDS

>>7024229
What room is it?

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>>7024242
the flockmod isn't very big and i don't like taking up a lot of space, gomen on the image size

i will take this as a desire for updating my gallery though !

>>7024244
tgwst ! though like >>7024234 says, it's usually empty, and i use it to warm up/scribble in.

>>7024234
Cute left?

>>7024276
Yep, some time ago. His tumblr vanished as well, and nobody knows how to find him again. Or if he even intends to come back at some point.

It's a real shame, he was one of our best drawfags.

>>7020466
Damn, thats some crushing silence. Guess Ill work on something else to poat in here

>>7024355
Don't worry too much about it, sometimes (read: most of the time) you need to ask more than once to get feedback. I'll try and leave some later, but it's getting late where I am.

>>7024425
Also, the tags are rather vague. I mean, what kind of "lewd girls" are we talking about here? Be specific, man.

>>7023817
I'll review this in greater detail later, but overall I'd say you did a fantastic job, both in regards to story and smut.

Would anyone be interested in reading a commission of young Japaneses conjoined twins masturbating ? did it recently and i would not mind having other read it.

>>7023817

Wow, and I thought I was a little romantic in my story about a sea creature chimera.

That was pretty good. I was alarmed by the use of the word 'cunt' partway through the sex scene in such an otherwise florid narrative. But it seemed like the vulgarity picked up as the enthusiasm did, so I guess that makes sense. (I don't find that word sexy, except maybe in the context of a woman being so turned on as to refer to it as such to be dirty.)

The sex scenes are very nicely detailed as well. I wondered if the climax would involve some sort of roe production, but that's the stupid crap I come up with. And what happens to the guy at the end... it went on a little long, and I was saying 'yeah, I got it' to myself, until another sex scene started, and I was back in it. It felt like it might end on that revelation, but you were going someone I wasn't expecting.

If you have the time, I wonder what you would make of my sea monster love story posted above.

>>7023896
>There's actually quite a few of us old regulars still around.

Where?

>At least a couple of us will post a story or two every thread.

Where?

And where are all the drawfags, that used to post in here and now only post to their Tumblr?

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>>7020455
http://pastebin.com/YHqg02rG
Enjoy my smutfic, new chapters

I'm gonna give a new chapter and entirely new smut

any suggestions? I'm thinking gangbang

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>>7023953
it be gins

(this also reminds me to finish inking up the demon summoning marriage thing)

>>7024536
Yep. For better or worse, moving to /d/ has pretty much killed the original /tg/ community. Some like Belgianon used to post stuff here, but received very little attention and subsequently vanished. And quite a few people didn't bother moving to /d/ at all. When was the last time you saw something by CB, for example? I'll occasionally post something, but while on /tg/ I used to get a lot of ideas and inspiration from the threads, these days they're a wasteland unless you're into femdom or monstergirls.

>>7023955
I'd like feedback on this.

>>7023162
>>7023670


http://pastebin.com/cge4fjme

Just slimegirl sex doesn't really do it for me anymore. Reading about one fucking a girl everywhere and then making HER slime and stories of that nature are what I'm looking for.

>>7024560
Rather than complain about the lack of /tg/ related content, why not produce the content you want to see?

>>7024592
Been there, tried that, didn't get any response beyond seeing all the like-minded people vanish one by one.

>>7024592
I do, when I feel the urge to write. I posted two fics back in June. But given the way the community has shifted, I don't draw much inspiration from the threads any more, and have doubts as to how many people would be interested these days.

I've also started running a Changeling game for one of my RPG groups, the prepwork for which is eating up a lot of my time.

>>7024560
DLFG posted several stories a month or so back, Smutomancer did one, and Monster posted a story not more than two threads ago (and got very little feedback, btw).

>>7024600
>>7024602
Well, what content exactly do you want to see?
I'll be the first to admit I'm no expert on /tg/ settings but I probably have enough passing knowledge of 40k to write something for you.
Maybe I can take one for the team.
Assuming you're not requesting extreme fetish stuff I'm not into our wouldn't know how to write about obviously.

>>7023953
>>7024157
I'm shooting for Friday.

>>7024554
Aaaaaaand now I have a solid character design to work with.
You are amazing.

>>7024611
>DLFG posted several stories a month or so back

That was almost three months ago. When you compare with the height on /tg/ where multiple people delivered such stories on a (bi-)weekly basis.


>Monster posted a story and got very little feedback

And here you hit the second problem straight on the head. Stories get posted to apathetic indifference.

http://blackspyro33.deviantart.com/gallery/60322758/Codename-Stinger

> It's a series, has a whole season out so far

> Tf, BE, one episode (Thunderstruck) has GTS

Has transformation (mostly human girls into super powered metamorphs) and sometimes includes breast expansion. Series very often gets lewd, and whenever there isn't fan service being thrown in your face there's also fights, comedy and comic-book-esque moments

>>7022347


Gonna need you to post that fic, please and thank you

Also Snekguy, your speed is only matched by how amazing chapter 3 is coming out, god damn. Definitely loving the story to smut ratio.

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>>7024207
Yeah I was somewhat aware of the "he" problem but couldn't think of a solution, do you have any suggestions? And thanks for the feedback!

>>7024674
Glad you're enjoying it! More coming today, I've still not run out of caffeinated beverages.

>>7024612
It's less a problem of content than a problem of community. I'd never thought I'd post this, but I'd take the trolling on /tg/ any day over this toxic drudgefest of "how to publish?", "How to make money?" and namefag e-cocksucking that simply does not motivate to write in the slightest and actively drive people away. At least back there, there was an active exchange over the week-end in-between the rageposts and trolls, and more than one drawing/fic got made over something discussed in the thread or as reaction to what one of the artists drew in the flockmod.

Here there's just not a single shred of that! Even the Discord chat, which was supposed to help with that, didn't end up as a place to bounce ideas off and generate motivation; but as a place to shitpost/dump the occasional drawing that doesn't even make it here anymore.

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>>7024703
I'm trying to throw you a bone man, but you're not on /tg/, you're on /d/, I'm sorry your general got banned but that isn't our fault and getting angry at us for producing content relevant to the board that people enjoy isn't going to bring it back.

If you won't make the content you want to see, and you reject my offers to help you make it, then where is it going to come from?

I've only been posting for a few weeks but I've found an active, friendly community that has helped me improve my writing enormously through encouragement and constructive feedback.
I don't presume to speak for everyone, but when you call that community a "toxic drudgefest" the only advice I can give you is to find a community that better caters to your tastes.

I don't know what I can do to help you.

>>7024703
Yeah /tg/ fag here, I think most people didn't even know about the move.
I for one prefer the new threads, old wst produced a lot more content but it was all "love can bloom" shit with no substance.

>>7024710
You still don't get it, it seems!

>If you won't make the content you want to see

I am still producing it. I simply have no motivation whatsoever to actually post it here where it just gets ignored. Not even shot down in flames or raged at; ignored.

> find a community that better caters to your tastes

Oh, the irony! Where did I ever hear that one before?

>>7024712
>it was all "love can bloom" shit with no substance.

Try better bait, please.

>>7024718
>Where did I ever hear that one before?

Perhaps if that's something you keep hearing, the problem isn't the communities, but your unwillingness to participate in them?

Again, I don't know what I can do to help you, I've offered to make content for you and you snubbed me, I'd be more than willing to read content that you post but you say you won't.

>>7024710
>If you won't make the content you want to see, and you reject my offers to help you make it, then where is it going to come from?

I didn't want to put my trip on for this, because I try to stay anonymous unless I'm posting something or providing feedback these days, but since I started this conversation with >>7024560 this post (though not all of the posts relating to it are mine), I might as well own up to it.

The core issue is this; the thread dynamic has changed, and it isn't going to change back. It isn't an issue of whether or not individual fics regarding specific fetishes are or aren't being written, but the attitude which inspired many of us in the first place has evaporated. I feel very little urge to write because I don't think the audience is there any more.

To be clear; while it's personally disappointing, objectively it's neither a good thing or a bad thing. People come and go, communities change, shit happens. The threads are just servicing other people now. But it rankles when I see people trying to claim that nothing's changed, that the old /tg/ crowd still regularly contributes, and so on and so forth, because it's misinformed at best and an outright lie at worst.

>>7024721
>Perhaps if that's something you keep hearing, the problem isn't the communities, but your unwillingness to participate in them?

That's what trolls told us on /tg/ so hard and repeatedly they got us banned, Jesus...

>>7024722
I guess I'll just drop it and get back to work, but I feel like there's a lot of misplaced anger directed at the people who are enjoying the threads and the content.

I've never been on /tg/ and I have no idea what the general was like, how much content was produced, how active people were or what the community was like.

I'm just trying to make stuff that /d/ enjoys.

>>7024726
Like I said, I'm not angry, though a couple of the other people commenting on the issue certainly are. Disappointed maybe, but not angry, and I'm sorry if I gave anyone that impression. I just don't like to see people shoving their fingers in their ears and pretending things haven't changed. Those of us who contributed in the past might as well accept that they have and deal with that accordingly.

>>7024726
Then keep at it.

Just understand than when people who actually got this whole thing underway, got punished and kicked away for it, did their best to restart and keep it going in another place and then find themselves no longer welcome in the thing they started; it's goddamn normal they get angry at people pretending everything is still the same and all right and they're the problem.

>>7024733
The /d/ mods also carry a lot of the blame too. Them deleting threads or images for whatever reasons didn't help. Only got worse when /aco/ was made too.

>>7023987

Not into hyper stuff, but I enjoyed it.

>>7024733
You're not unwelcome, No one here complains about new content being posted.

>>7024718
>try better bait please

It's true anon, every second story was a 1-2k opposites attract that ended shortly after someone nutted.

>>7024750
>every second story was a 1-2k opposites attract

It really wasn't. There was certainly quite a bit of it kicking around, but it wasn't anywhere near that prevailent. We had a far wider range of content in the older threads - nowadays you've got lots of monstergirl/soft femdom stuff on one side and some of the more extreme /d/ content on the other without much in between.

>>7024756
It really was that prevelant, if I'm being honest it was more than half the content produced.
Some people have moved beyond that, long running serials have replaced sex scenes with a brief physical description before hand.

>>7024765
Be that as it may, there was more than enough stories with worldbuilding to go around it never was a problem.

Hell, worldbuilding was one of the major discussions taking place in the threads.

>>7024765
>if I'm being honest it was more than half the content produced.

Prove it, then. The masterlist is right up at the top. Go and list all of the 1000-2000 word "opposites attract" stories, and we'll see how many there are.

>>7024840
Anon it's no secret, you're asking me to prove the sky is blue when I have better shit to do.
/tg/ had a very narrow yet concentrated content focus and a far higher board population as a whole.

You're confusing a lack of interest in your stories with a lack of audience, /d/ just doesn't have the population required to jerk your ego off.

>>7024505
Very glad you enjoyed it, bud.

>cunt
I agree, it's hard balance to strike, but I'll always believe that raw things should be described with raw language. I never really found myself getting amorous at the thought of sticking my manhood inside of a flower.

>ending
Yeah, that entire bit was just an excuse to show the sexual potential of having a submarine wife, and also an excuse to have them floating on the surface and looking at the stars. Could have been handled better, but eh. I had fun with it.

>sea monster love story
You mean Croc? Man, that's going to take me a bit to catch up on, but I suppose I owe you one for taking the time to give me some feedback. I'll put it on my reading list and hopefully have a list of pros and cons to give you eventually.

>>7024451
I am breathless with anticipation.

>>7024750
>No one here complains about new content being posted.
It's even worse than that. It gets completely ignored. Hell, I'd take a chewing out like happened to the idiot believing second person writing was God's gift to mankind any time of the week over this utter indifference. At least that way I'd know what to improve.

>>7024846
>Anon it's no secret, you're asking me to prove the sky is blue when I have better shit to do.

Funny, that. You're the only person making this claim, you have the means of proving yourself right - if it's 'no secret' it shouldn't be any great chore - and yet you suddenly retreat from the opportunity to do so. Try and make your shitposting a little less transparent in the future, thanks.

>>7024726
Breaking my anonymity for now as well. I've been here since day one of the old /wst/, and went through the entirety of its history up until now. But at this point even I don't know how much longer I can be here.

Above all, nobody wanted to profit from their smut. They just posted it. All this talk about patreons and publishing combined with the circlejerking over some writers at the expense of everyone else makes it seem like the only reason you write is for greed and personal recognition. That's nothing like what we wanted.

This is /efg/, not Snekguy Appreciation Station. At the very least, acknowledge the work of others and leave actual feedback even if they don't post with names. Is that so hard?

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I must say this is getting very uncomfortable.

>>7024911
What can I say? A lot of us were bottling it up for quite a while, so letting it all out was never going to be pretty. But to diffuse the tension and to practice what I preach about feedback, I should follow up to >>7024451


Above all else, I was impressed by the chemistry between Yves and Simone- their songs really helped drive home the connection. The smut itself was vivid and detailed, and melded together nicely with the basic narrative of a man being reunited with the lover he thought was dead. The way you described Simone's naiad form was equally appealing. Most works only depict sea nymphs as being blue humans, so it was a welcome change from the norm.

>>7024895
>if it's 'no secret' it shouldn't be any great chore
Are you literally fucking 12?

I'm not doing your research for you, if you were legitimately from /tg/ you would know its demographic.

>>7024898
>This is /efg/, not Snekguy Appreciation Station. At the very least, acknowledge the work of others and leave actual feedback even if they don't post with names. Is that so hard?

This is erotic fiction general, not an erotic fiction dump thread. It covers all aspects of erotic fiction, including doing it professionally.
Had to repost because my picture didn't attach.

Also for the record snake fucker reviews more work than most of the people here and answers questions about the technical aspects of writing.
We need more snekfags and less pissy fa/tg/uys.

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>>7024898
>acknowledge the work of others and leave actual feedback

I've left plenty of feedback, assuming the content was something that aligned with my interests. I enjoyed the Croc series enormously even if it was mainly for the humor, Ravaged by the Roadside was great, I loved some of the ideas from the Sophie slime story that was posted recently and I left feedback for that, though regrettably I forgot the name. It's all in the archived threads if you want to go back and see.

>the only reason you write is for greed and personal recognition

Are you saying I shouldn't enjoy getting positive feedback and encouragement? Because I do, it makes my day when someone says they loved my story. This might be the only thing I've ever been good at.

Excuse me while I swim like Scrooge McDuck in my nine bucks of Patreon money. If people want to drop some money in the tip jar because they appreciate the content I'm producing, I'm not going to refuse. There are no paywalls on my Patreon, I don't do paid requests, all the Ebooks are free for anyone to download and have no DRM, every story I've ever written is on Pastebin.

There are real published authors in these threads, people who have been writing for years, were they wrong to turn their hobby into an income?

>This is /efg/, not Snekguy Appreciation Station

I feel like this is increasingly about me, and if you dislike me so much simply because I post frequently, then at your request I will use a tripcode and you can filter me, you'll never have to see me again.

This is the last I'm going to say about it, I'm here because I enjoy writing, and some people enjoy reading it, that's 300 words right there that could have gone into a story.

I don't want drama I want to write, I'm certainly not going to be reprimanded for doing that "too much".

>putting the final edits on a story
>thread is going to self destruct before it's done
pls no

>>7024950
This board doesn't move that fast anon, /d/ is slow as fuck.
The thread will still be here when you get back.

>>7024957
takes hours to fall off the board even when it's at page 10

>>7024942
Your picture seems to disagree with you.

>>7024947
I'll admit, you've been great about both feedback and technical help, and your writing is of excellent quality. It's just that when all this started, even the idea of "professional" smut was laughable. It was something we did for its own sake. To me and some others here, the idea of profiting from smut simply feels unnatural.

I don't dislike you or your work at all. It's just that for lack of a better way of describing it, it makes old guard like myself feel like we're no longer needed or wanted. And I'll be honest here- I'm a little jealous of you for getting so much more feedback while others languish without even an "I liked it" post. I sincerely want you to keep writing, and I want others to follow your example in giving feedback.

If that was the case, I wouldn't be complaining as I am now.

Anybody else having trouble writing entire scenes from a single perspective?
I feel like I'm just running out of content without giving them a prop to work but then I read a book and it's 15 pages of some asshole running a monologue.

>>7024965
Yeah I'm not going to try a second time, too busy writing.

>>7024966
>To me and some others here, the idea of profiting from smut simply feels unnatural
That's because people don't profit from their work on /tg/, /d/ has always had a healthy collection of artists producing work at a professional level.
Stop trying erase our boards culture with your colonialism.

>>7024968
You can always switch between character's PoV if you think things are running too long.

This being said, lengthy 'monologues' where you contrast what the character feels with what happens are a good way to write too. First person writing is all about that.

>>7024968
We had our own culture too, and in a way this is bringing back some of our old fears that /d/ culture would erase it.

I don't want to erase this board's culture, and I apologize if that's what it comes off as. I'd just prefer not to assimilate entirely and lose the culture we came here to preserve in the first place. Surely there's a middle ground we can reach, right?

And for the record, I've always used third person omniscient view in writing so I can't say I've had the problem you're describing myself.

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>>7024971
I might just start including a split perspective every now and again, I don't think I'll ever get the hang of it otherwise.

Writing my novella/ novelette, not sure how the character comes off in this situation as a person.
pastebin.com/AahSLJa3
Tags: No porn, elves, fat people, investigation

>Surely there's a middle ground we can reach, right?
If you don't want to discuss for profit writing and want more feedback you can do so by filtering the term patreon and providing critique on every piece of work posted..

>>7024968
What I like to do if there's a drawn out scene with lots of dialogue (assuming I understand and that's what you're asking), is write the dialogue, get all the exposition out, and then go back and add details to break it up.

Say two characters are having a conversation, give them some imaginary mannerisms or tics, maybe one smokes and he lights up between lines of dialogue, maybe one shifts because his chair is uncomfortable, maybe it's cold and one character is rubbing his hands together and blowing warm breath on them.

Imagine you were watching a conversation from a distance, people lean on things, scuff their shoes, cross their arms, there are all kinds of mannerisms you can insert after the fact.
Stuff like that breaks up the massive blocks of exposition and makes it feel more organic.

>>7024966
Honestly dude I'll read anything you want to post, and give you all the feedback I can think of, but if you don't post the content nobody can read it.

>>7024983
Caught a few spelling mistakes there.

I like your writing style, it reminds me of the inner monologue from Styx: Master of Shadows, don't know if you've played that game.

I think using breaks to separate the monologue might help with readability, I've only recently learned how to do that myself.
Just hit tab when you feel there's been a change in perspective or it just feels appropriate.

Like this:
http://pastebin.com/UngwkVLJ

>>7024984
I've been stuck between writer's block and an increasingly demanding RL job lately, so I may not be able to post anything other than maybe a WIP anytime soon. But if you want to look at what I've done in the past, my work is under "SmutArchiveAnon" in the master list. If you'd prefer me to post it in here, I can copypaste links to some of the work I consider my best.

And thanks for being so understanding. It's not easy for me to recount our full history here, especially since some of it involves things I'm not especially proud of doing.

>>7024998
Sure, if you want to pick some stuff, I'll read it. Not right now because I'm trying to get an update out, but later tonight, I promise.
Also consider just reposting your stuff when a new thread is created, new people won't find it if you never post it.

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>I think using breaks to separate the monologue might help with readability, I've only recently learned how to do that myself.
Just hit tab when you feel there's been a change in perspective or it just feels appropriate.

I legitimately had no idea you could do that manually. I use Q10 and the help menu is spotty at best.

I might check that styx game out at some point, if I ever get some free time anyway. Goddamn end of year work schedules.

>>7024983
>>7024983
Here's my take on it.

>As Snekguy mentioned, readability is the main issue that jumps out at me. Most notably, the sentence at the end of line 5 just stops partway through.
>There are a few points where a comma would be appropriate (e.g. line 11 after "on raised heels", line 12 after "sure enough", and line 3 after "itself".
>Similarly, some parts could be better served with a period rather than a comma, like on line 10 after "body".
>Otherwise, you do a fine job of setting the scene and showing off the more unsavory parts of Hiro's personality. While I feel like I don't entirely understand the plot, I assume that's because it's an excerpt from a longer work.

Overall, it could use a little polish but otherwise has a good deal of potential. Just watch for those run-on sentences.

>>7024942
>if you were legitimately from /tg/ you would know its demographic.

Burden of proof. You're the one making the assertion, so back it up. Unless you can't, of course.

>>7025027
Thanks for the feedback anon.

It is from a larger work, run on sentences have long been a problem of mine.

>>7025029
It is physically possible for me to do so, I'm just not going too.
You are free to continue believing that I can't and I will continue to believe you're either being deliberately misleading or aren't an oldfag.
Yet not caring either way.

>>7025029
As an actual oldfag, I think I can answer this with a bit more certainty.

On the one hand, we did have plenty of vanilla stuff. On the other hand, we also had things like

>Space Marines drowning a girl in their piss
>Three different fics involving sex with giant spiders
>Everything by Xiombarg's Storyteller, including one fic with a fetish (erotic botfly removal) that at the time it was made even /d/ considered to be too extreme for its tastes. (Sadly, I don't have the screenshot of its reaction right now. It was hilarious.)
>A high elf (from Warhammer Fantasy) being literally fucked to death by a Cold One (a creature best described as an 8-foot long dinosaur)

So it's accurate to say that tastes of all types were represented to some degree or another.

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>>7025041
Cold One?

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what happened here?

some dude complaining about some other general getting banned?
who gives a shit.

>>7025056
All manner of resentments surfacing and people shitposting. Somewhere along the way people forgot to read the stories.

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>>7025041
I have you covered. Does being on /wst/ from the beginning really make me an oldfag, though?

>>7024942
>This is erotic fiction general, not an erotic fiction dump thread. It covers all aspects of erotic fiction, including doing it professionally.
Global Rule 11, faggot. Patreon shilling is bannable.

>>7025071
As old as I am. I should know, I made that screenshot.

>>7025076
It's not patreon shilling you stupid cunt, it's advice on how to use patreon and other services. All necessary information to an erotic fiction general filled with authors of varying skill level.

>>7025056
/tg/ used to have weekend smut threads, they got B& because /tg/ is a blue board and some sperg reported them.
Now they have migrated to /d/ but can't grasp the boards culture or slow post rates.

>>7025083
>they got B& because /tg/ is a blue board and some sperg reported them.
Wrong. Some sperg used a phone to ban evade while shitposting the thread to death because we were having badwrongfun on the weekends with pastebin and imgur links and self-censored images.

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Snek 3 update, new content starts at " I drew out her swollen protuberance"

http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS

Sorry for the delay, I was distracted by drama.

>>7025009
Just repost the same links over and over again? We made a master list just to avoid that!

>>7025090
You expect people to read the master list then post in these threads about it?

>>7025090
If he's announcing the new content in any case, adding a link doesn't hurt.
Are you suggesting only completed stories should be announced?

>>7025092
I'd already be happy if they reacted to the new stuff getting posted.

But yes, the list was made to be a readily available index of everything written. Why do you think we always ask for tags?

]>7025083
The migration was a while back, as a matter of fact. It's been what, nearly a year now since it happened?

I for one want to have both thr /d/ culture and the /tg/-in-exile culture coexist with one another, but the loss of the old guard over time is getting the remaining ones (myself included to some degree) on edge for fear that the latter will die off and leave them once again looking for another place to call their own. It doesn't help that I don't care much for the common /d/ fetishes and can't shake the feeling that their absence would mean nobody would care about my work in their absence.

>>7025090
Well, more as a way of ensuring they would never be lost to 404s, since it was made before the board archives were widely accessible. Even back there it was still common to repost links to relatively new fics, although the same fics weren't posted in the thread after the first week they were made- it gave the impression the author was being overly needy, as I personally discovered.

>>7025094
It isn't new, that's the thing. The "newest" one was made months ago, that's why I'd rather use the list than pass off an old thing as new.

As for the WIP, after posting WIPs several threads in a row in the past only to make myself look overly needy I've been rather shy about doing it here. Chalk it up to old habits I learned back in the day. But if it's really okay, I can do it next thread when everyone's calmed down a bit, including myself.

>>7025099
It's also why I made it into a Google doc. I always worried that I was the only one doing much adding of fics into the list and feared what would happen if I couldn't do it for whatever reason, and given the wider variety of subjects since we left /tg/ it didn't feel quite right to keep it on 1d4chan exclusively. This way, anyone can add to it, no questions asked. Ultimately, it helps everyone.

>>7025094
Depends on what exactly you write, but posting only finished stories/chapters worked pretty well so far.

>>7025071
I feel like that was one of our worst moments. Someone worked up the courage to ask for something he wanted despite knowing it would likely be negatively received (which can be difficult even in an anonymous environment), and we mocked the poor guy for YEARS. Still do.
Yes, XS eventually wrote the story, but the OR more than likely never came back after that.
And that's not to say I think he had some sort of right to get his request done, but the mocking was just wrong.

>>7025125
Do you feel sorry for catfucker as well?

>>7025126
I do not know who that is.

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>>7025129

>>7025131

Wasn't there that other guy who fucked a dingo or something?

Fucking /k/, man.

>>7025088
woooooo. go Vi!
post battle sponge bath time

in Xcom game canon, do the alien troops not have freewill?
and if no, how are they controlled (in the context of the game)?

>>7025126
>>7025131
>>7025139
/k/ is pretty much fifty percent furries.
Every time I come across a hunting thread there's always someone who gets WAAAAY too into scent collection.

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>>7025139
I don't remember a dingo.

>>7025143
I've got that one too. I was looking for it before you posted.

>>7025142
If I remember right they have a kind of psychic network that controls them, and once its broken the troops lose direction and many regress to a sub-sentient state.

>>7025145

Probably not /k/ then, it has been a few years since I read it.

>>7024947

I am still working on ravaged. Lots of run on sentences and more details need to added.

Probably gonna give galaxy and r virus another look over as well.

As mucheck as I want to move on I keep seeing ways to improve them!

I really need to work on a story with a more engaging narritive right now my stories are mostly 90% smut.

>>7024947
Thats a very good pic. I wonder what pic you think looks most like Vi.

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>>7025181
I'm really bad at writing the male-dominant stuff, I feel like you're my counterpart in that department.

>>7025185
Probably this one is my favorite.
Needs some Mikoyan abs though.

>>7025196

I think that one is my favorite image so far of the viper!

Just resposting some assorted human/monstergirl or monsterfuta ideas I brought up on the last thread. Trying to muster the will to write them and it'd help if I knew if people were interested in a particular one.

#1: Scenes from the lives of Ezekiel and Draahzin; a trappy wizard and his pregnant kobold boifriend. Human/kobold

#2: A father-to-be dotes on his girlfriend, a hugely pregnant sphinx. Human/sphinx

#3: A goblin "captures" (rescues) a trappy failed adventurer and tries to make him into her broodmare. Things... don't quite work out as she planned. Human/Goblin

#4: The clone-son of a witch-queen is politically arranged to marry two horde-queens to cement alliances. Can love bloom under such a condition? Human/Orc/Gnoll

#5: Only survivors after their dungeon lair is invaded and their tribes are wiped out, a human necromancer and his "diplomatic envoys" become adventurers, and ultimately lovers. Human/Goblin/Kobold/Ratfolk

#6: The first time they got drunk and woke up in bed together was surely an accident. The second time, well, they brushed that off too. The third time? That was too suspicious to let go. Human/Minotaur

#7: When her human gish companion is hurt on a mission, a githzerai zerth is finally compelled to confess her feelings to the formerly oblivious soul. Human/Githzerai

#8: When an independent duergar smith buys a drow pleasure-slave to help her get through her heats, neither of them expected to fall in love. Duergar/Drow

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>>7024554
200% quality post.

>>7025142
They're controlled remotely by the "Psyonic Network". Troopers receive orders from officers, officers get orders from those above them and so on up the alien hierarchy.
If you kill an officer surrounded by troopers, the troopers won't stop fighting you but they'll lose some tactical support and finer abilities.

>>7024686
>do you have any suggestions?
Well, for the 'He' problem - keep in mind I'm not a good writer by any stretch - I'd say to either just start the sentence with an action instead of the character perceiving or performing the action, if that makes sense, or to (sparsely) use epithets or proper nouns.

>She gripped his hair painfully, and the tip of her tail wriggled down his body, seeking out his groin.
Could become
>The chubby viper gripped his hair painfully, and the tip of her tail wriggled down his body, seeking out his groin.
or possibly
>Hard claws wound painfully tight through Moreau's hair as the tip of her tail wriggled down his body, seeking out his groin.

>He felt the tip of her agile tail press forcefully into his member just below the head, and it began to rub his sweet spot rhythmically
Could become
>The tip of her agile tail pressed forcefully into his member, just below the head, and began to rub his sweet spot rhythmically
or
>Smooth scales coiled firmly around his member, just below the head, and the agile tip began to rub his sweet spot rhythmically

I dunno. You'd need someone who knows what they're talking about to properly 'fix' the problem, but the best I can offer is that you chop up your sentences and rearrange them until they flow better, or just cut out bits that stifle said flow.

>>7024649

Upon retrospect, I feel like I made a mistake posting a whole folder and expecting people to read it all. So instead I'll contribute one of my more generic lesbian smuts.

> Has BE, butt expansion, F/F, and erotic contortionism

http://blackspyro33.deviantart.com/art/Attention-Getters-488641337

So I'm trying to decide which of my partially written stories I should finish next. I'll get to both eventually, but I wanted to see what there was more interest in first.

A) Set in the same world as >>7023987
A gender-bender story about a feminine guy with breasts and a ridiculously huge cock that gets hit on by his boss because she thinks he's a futa. Hyper-sized funtimes ensue.

B) Monstergirl story set in a slightly more magical version of our world. A man gets stuck living with a clingy female elemental who's slowly becoming obsessed with him.

>>7025009
It's well worth going through the master smut index on 1d4chan and CTRL+Fing for tags you might be interested in/scrolling down to see if something grabs you. Given the disjoint in communities following the board change, posting a link with some review comments might help to spark interest in other ideas.
Plus scavenging plot devices, themes and character traits is of course a well-respected and essential aspect of high-level writing.

>>7025104
At the risk of ressurecting the nerdy whining, I also want to see a coexistence of the /tg/ and /d/ mindsets. I will add that it took a little while to find this after the move since I'd been visiting /wst/ less due to being busy at the time of the move, and since then I've been more tentative about posting criticism or just drifting off on worldbuilding/idea tangents since /d/ tends to be more anal about how board related the discussion is getting.
I've started trying to give some more feedback recently; although I'm still pretty busy the lack of response like that has felt like the biggest absence here. As for avoiding posting too often, posting updates every 2-4000 words seems reasonable, and I wouldn't mind seeing stuff from the old guard in an unfinished state to see if we can't get the diversity of content up a little more.

Are there any stories with reverse-mindbreak? Like, it starts out with the traditional 'fuck her until she loves me' plotline, but then the breaker starts to lose himself in the girl he's trying to break?

>>7025772
Not that I remember, but that does sound interesting. I have a story tagged "reverse mindbreak" but I used it to mean something else entirely. I'd be interested in seeing it done.

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>>7025545
Elemental. I dislike hyper.
>>7025772
Also, hatefucking turning into vanilla lovemaking is the best. Especially between childhood rivals/enemies.

>>7025772
I requested something like that awhile back but no one picked it up.

>>7025242

I'm always up for some Sphinx porn, and preggo is a pretty big turn on.

>>7025242
>>7025906
I can never find any good sphinx porn, so I second this.

>>7025365
Those are good suggestions! You undersell yourself.

Man, people really dislike it when you write in the present tense.

Or maybe I am just shitty at it and have just been hindering myself all this time.

>>7026101
In my experience, variating between the different past tenses is the easiest to avoid any confusion; But it's doable with present tenses as well.

Why do you think people hate it?

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Small update, and I also restructured and reformatted the story with chapters, seen as it has ballooned to almost twice its intended length. I'm going to do my best to finish it today, then get the Ebook out.

http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS

>>7026101
I think it can be done well, but in general it's just not very desirable for storytelling.

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Hey /efg/ I was cleaning out my folders and I found an unfinished work of mine back when we did smut-offs on /tg/. It hasn't gotten to the smut yet, but I care nothing for these characters and have no plans of continuing it. That said, I think it was written well and someone would like it. I wouldn't even mind if someone wanted to take the whole thing and just finish it. Proper smut, I just couldn't find and in to it, plus I've got tons of other stuff to work on. Hope someone enjoys it.

Polymorph Problems
>http://pastebin.com/CJJQz6tE
tags: fantasy, wizard male, dragon male, loli, cuteness overloads (not for weak hearts)

Dragon gets tricked into a loli body by a crafty wizard shenanigans ensue.

Picture is unrelated but I heard people talk about a story with a blue slime girl and I liked it so I wanted to contribute my blue slime.

Question: does anyone know another verb for "kissing"?
I don't want to use it four times in the same paragraph but I can't find any alternatives besides "embrace" and "make out" is way too casual for what is happening.

>>7026213
I like "Locking lips". A bit purple, especially if you add a couple extra adjectives, but it does the trick.

>>7026213
You can describe it more detail("show don't tell"). Like "their mouths pressed together sloppily" if its two people doing it, "he/she pressed his/her mouth on XYZ and massaged it with his/her lips". Just be aware of what you're doing, it can easily degenerate into overly complicated nonsense like "their tongues were like two slugs that each tried to vie for dominion as they wrestled in the wet caverns that were their mouths."

>>7026226
>>7026228
Thanks guys that's useful.

>>7026228
>"their tongues were like two slugs that each tried to vie for dominion as they wrestled in the wet caverns that were their mouths."

I LOVE stupid nonsense like that.

> Her cock was so long now, there was a second-long pause between when Katrina experienced the orgasm and when she started to ejaculate, like the delay in the nervous reactions in the tails of sauropods.

Maybe that's why I shouldn't be writing erotica. But whatever.

>>7026248
Are you kidding that's genius.
I always enjoyed the term "cavernous love tunnel", that slays me.

>>7026191
I remember that! Good times.

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Final update, fuck her right in the abs edition.
Word count is 21,706, I'll have an Ebook ready soon.

Snek 3:
http://pastebin.com/GnT0gJaS
>kissing, blowjob, reluctant, femdom, tail job, oral, female ejaculation, autocunnilingus, vaginal, light bondage, handjob, abjob, muscle, sweat, massage

Finally finished, I hope this is a satisfying conclusion to the series, as their story from now on is basically just XCOM 2.
Might I suggest downloading the mod that allows you to use ADVENT units and naming a Viper after Vi.

>>7026191
I remember this!
D'awwww
>>7026310
You are the hero we don't deserve, SnekGuy.

>>7024425
>>7024428
I mean there's no sex, it's just the two characters having sexual tension for now. Future installments will get to the fucking. I didn't put more than ten seconds of thought into tagging it

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>>7026310
>ab fucking
What a good note to go out on. Loved it.

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>>7026310
A cute.

>>7026366
>>7026409
Glad you guys liked the ending.

>>7026425
Perfect! Even the color is right.

I'm gonna take a break tonight then tomorrow I'll get to work on the new Pinwheel story.

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http://pastebin.com/NVetpQzC
witch house I: giantess, navel, witch.

http://pastebin.com/3QiP2YZw
witch house II: giantess, vore, growth, feet

http://pastebin.com/KRDRsbEJ
fawn: cock vore, vampire, feet?, navel?

Let me know what y'all think.

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oh, and here's "dave the pizza guy". not strictly /d/ material, but it does have femdom.

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>>7026366
But he's the hero we need.

On this topic why are we lacking in Super hero smut?

>>7026757
Because there's /aco/ for that.

>>7026758
Does /aco/ write original character super hero stories? I don't want the usual capes. I want unique powers that can be used for smut

>>7026687

Fan fucking tastic end to snek, now I need to devour your other stories!

Gotta say that is probably the first fan fiction where I enjoyed the fluff and the sex.

Noticed one spelling error, when she 'checked if the coast was clear' you spelled coast as cost.

>>7026901
Glad you liked it!

Yeah I need to pay more attention and edit better, I'm usually so excited to get it out that I forget. I know a guy IRL who has offered to edit my stories but I don't really want him to know what I'm writing about.

Ebook is ready if anyone wants to download it:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6768624&i=572857

>>7026921
I'm sure plenty of people here would be happy to offer editing advice if you wanted it.

>>7026943
Well I wouldn't want to put someone in a situation where they had to read through like 30k words of my shit and correct it all.
I just need to pay more attention and do a better job.

>>7026952
30k isn't too bad, and I personally kind of like the tedium of it.
And getting an outside critical opinion is always a vital aspect of growth, which you can't really count on in this thread. If you rely solely on yourself to police your work then some things will always slip through the cracks, no matter what. Working on something creative like that makes you think a certain way, and missing what would otherwise be an obvious mistake is very easy to do when you've been looking at the same piece for hours on end.

>>7026960
That's true, sometimes I'll look over a section two or even three times and a typo will still get through.
Then I'll see it in the published story and I'll be like "Fuck how did that get past?"
I do kind of want to let my friend do the editing, but when I told him I'm writing porn, he probably expects "Ma'am I'm here to repair your plumbing" not "help this giant alien is raping me".

>>7025906
>>7026023
Hmm, I hadn't actually thought about sex for that one, but I think maybe it could work. Any particular preferences/requests, or do you just want to see what I do?

>>7025242
Any other interest in any of these?

>>7026965
4 through 7 all sound like they could be taken in interesting directions; 4 has obvious space for high society type shenanigans, bickering minions especially when they're suddenly bumped up in effective rank as per 5 are always fun. 6 and 7 are more conventional premises, but they're strong emotional storytelling fodder; they're common for good reason. Plus big women with horns are kickass.

1 is too open ended really to have much opinion of it ahead of time; 3 and 8 are both Falling In Love With Your Slave stories, and rely a lot on the details of the personalities for interest.

2 and a story revolving around domesticity with a supernatural creature does sound terribly cute though.

>>7026965
Well, for a significant proportion of women the hormones during pregnancy boost libido a ton, which could be a theme to play with beyond the obvious approach of sifting through preg hentai doujins and the like and the whole tits getting bigger thing.

Really though do what you think you can make work/makes for the most engaging story.

>>7026857
Yes, it does. And a bunch of other stuff mostly focusing on characters that don't usually get attention here, especially cartoon characters (for obvious reasons).

>>7026310
Excellent finish.
All I could really ask for is an epilogue of the transcripts of their interview/interrogations, with protagonist-kun awkwardly skirting around the sordid details in his while Vi rapidly sidetracks into gushing about her boyfriend and their exploits due to a total lack of understanding human social niceties. Bonus points if she starts giving her interrogator wildly inappropriate/illegal (and possibly physically impossible for a human) advice on how to snag herself a man.

On a technical note, your writing is tightening with practice but you still need to keep an eye out for run-on sentences; it can make things read a little breathlessly. Sorry I can't give more detailed feedback on that front but it's stupid o'clock here right now.

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>>7025279
thnx
will try to do more on-topic art for the request today!

>>7023953
still wanna know if there was a chapter you had in mind for the marines (or an order for the sister!), otherwise i'll use ultramarines as suggested and make up an order. or use one i like.

>>7027058
Not him, but I've seen enough of your work to know you have a thing for the Blood Angels. Work with what you know best, right?

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>>7027063
yes.
(not my art)

>>7027058
man, this chapter serf thing is sounding insanely off-canon. for starters aren't the serfs almost entirely marine aspirants who never made the cut at a stage early enough that they didn't get crippled or killed by the trials? either way don't let me stop you.

>>7027042

Hah! I second thus just for the reactons that would follow learning the graphic truth abouy how he had actually 'tamed' a viper.

>>7027081
>for starters aren't the serfs almost entirely marine aspirants
Nope. There certainly ARE serfs who were aspirants that didn't make the cut, but the majority are descendants of earlier serfs or just regular humans.