/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General (formerly /wst/)

>>6980582
>>6980572
Okay.

How about both?

Noblewoman futa purchases a twink boy and dresses him up as her handmaiden. She constantly does stuff like having him walk around with something up his ass, or putting him in a male chastity belt. She is a total dom when they fuck and never, ever lets him cum until she is satisfied first, and even then he has to masturbate to get relief.

Bonus points for something occurring which offers the avenue of escape (maybe she loses a lot of money and has to get rid of her slaves, or slavery becomes illegal, something like that) and his deciding to stay.

>>6980619
sounds good. i'll be back tomorrow with results, hopefully.

>>6980619
>>6980621
I'd be cool with her just having a strapon.
Just sayin'

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Another ~3k short: http://pastebin.com/sXR5N063

Tags: hetero, gentle femdom, tall female, monster girl, kejourou, prehensile hair, bondage, hair-job, romance, positive reinforcement

>>6980624
that was cute as fuck, thanks dude

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>>6980612 (OP)
Reposting my stuff:

Snek:
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, vaginal, language barrier, bathing, teasing, kissing

Crashland:
http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom, oral, vaginal, kissing, female ejaculation, bathing, teasing

Snek 2:
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, language barrier, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob, handjob, orgasm denial, teasing, vaginal

Pinwheel (ongoing):
http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing

>>6980966
Hellhounds are great.

I've written a decent amount of stuff, usually involving rape, bestiality, impregnation, or a mixture of the three under the name Raccy on Hentai Foundry. Some is Rule34, some are original stories. My most recent one was for the /aco/ robot girl thread for Haydee, this super thick robot girl from a game of the same name on Steam Greenlight.

http://pastebin.com/uFk9f2wi

It's got inflation, tentacles, and forced arousal/mindbreak in it. I also have a lot more stories if anyone wants me to put some more on pastebin for you all to read.

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This is how my waifu kiyohime spends her days off. Should I clean, edit and color it /d/?

also not sure if this is the right thread but whatever

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>>6981091
Here's the cleaned version but not gonna color it.

>>6981091
You do that, but this isn't the right thread for it.

>>6981227
Why not? Art is just as welcome here as stories are. Always has been.

Hey longtime lurker here. I've been browsing since a couple months before the exodus from /tg/ and I have never seen any discussion of Warmachine smut in this thread. What gives? Is the demand for wargames smut drying up since the thread split from /tg/ or are all other Warmachine fans asexual freaks? I may end up writing something myself, but before I go in I wanna see if there's any demand.

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>>6981289
I'd love to see some Warmachine stuff, be it written or drawn. It's a universe I sometimes toy around with writing something in myself, but I've never quite found a hook good enough to spark something into life.

>>6981289
>>6981294
What's the fascination with wargame porn, if you don't mind my asking?
Why wargaming specifically over any other fictional setting?
I get D&D because it's extremely diverse and malleable, but then I look at people writing smut for things like Warhammer and I just wonder why.

>>6981296
I think it depends on the person. There might be a specific, particular character or pairing of characters they want to see material for, or something broader, like a race or type of monster that tickles their fancy. Love for the setting itself plays a part - it's the same sort of motivation that leads one to write any kind of fanfiction, erotic or otherwise. People want to add something to a universe they like.

Or they might have an idea that's broadly similar to something from an existing setting, so they just drop their story into that setting rather than be accused of ripping it off. Sometimes working within the boundaries of a set universe can help give you focus. You don't have to worry so much about worldbuilding, fun as that is, or having to hash out the hows-and-whys. The rules are already in place and can be used to mould the characters and situations you choose to work with.

Hey guys. I've noticed that i am way too much of a kinkster for rape porn and all of its related kinks regarding the loss of control.

I need to branch out. I feel pretty sad that it seems like rape is the only thing i get off on. I think i might be pretty decent at porn writing, if a little too focused on how the characters feel, so please give me a request and I'll try to fill it as best I can. I don’t know much about weirder fetishes like vore or stuff where your body is super elastic but that's why i need to switch things up.

I only ask that whatever you ask me to write, it be fully consensual between both parties.

>>6981463
Slutty trap boy goes to a nightclub and gets filled repeatedly by strangers.

>>6981463
>if a little too focused on how the characters feel

No such thing. How about this; the newly-chosen high priestess of a cult of the wild, which worships the monsters that lurk in the dark corners beyond civilization, summons an inhuman beast of the forest and takes it as her lover to celebrate her inauguration. She's nervous and excited in equal measure, because she doesn't know what will emerge or how she'll have to lie with it, but the blessings of her deity mean she doesn't have to worry about being hurt or killed.

Ritualistic, consensual monster sex, basically.

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>>6981463
The world could always use more consentacles.

A lady applies for a job as a teaching aid for a tentacle professor.

>>6981232
True enough, but we're not quite as skilled in it as more drawfags dedicated threads. But in all seriousness, do whatever you want with it. Who are we to stop you?

This place is pretty quiet. Anyone up to some filthy writing? Any ideas you want to run past other people?

>>6981474
I would read this story, fappability not necessary, it sounds awesome on its own

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>>6981676
I'm working on more Pinwheel.

Not sure right thread for this but does anyone know how to get in contact with Some_Pervert?

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What is /efg's stance on story length and smut to non-smut ratio? I have an idea for a story, but it would be long, like book length, and while containing graphic smut, there would also be entire chaps(maybe more than one in a row) of no smut.

>>6981716
It's a matter of preference really. Some people like buildup, other people want a quick jerk and done. Both kinds of stories have an audience. Personally, I prefer the quick jerk style, cause I don't have the attention span to read a fucking (heh) saga, but like I said, both kinds have an audience.

>>6981716
If it's good, it's good regardless of length. If it sucks, people will be angry that it is long and bad. So basically, don't suck and it'll be fine. Lots of people appreciate if you flag the smut, however. Having the ability to jump to the sex is pretty nice.

I've got a tentacle request, if anyone's around. Sort of like >>6981474
So a girl goes swimming in the ocean or some other cliche set-up, and a creature shoots its spawn inside of her. She doesn't realise what's happened, and goes home to her boyfriend none the wiser. Over the next few days she starts to feel something itching inside her, and after about a week notices some strange things happening inside her. She can feel its presence inside her - psychically as well as physically - and feels oddly healthier than before. She begins feeling impressions of its needs and wants and, despite being freaked out at the start, tries to give it what it wants, putting her in some odd situations and trying to hide it from her boyfriend. Her belly starts to bulge out noticeably, and things writhe beneath the surface.
Eventually she spills the beans to her boyfriend, and tries to jump him for sex in a daze. He tries to get away at first, but the weight of her and the thing inside her holds him down. She mounts him and the tentacles pull his cock into her, squeezing around him and starting to push inside his cock.
After that's all done, they both talk about what they should do, and he decides that maybe he's alright with it all. Maybe finishing up with him kissing her belly as the mass wiggles happily inside the girl - or taking it further and showing the girls life afterwards with the tentacles still gestating inside her.

>>6981716
Erotic doesn't mean smutty. Write your story.

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>>6981033
Why not post some more it wont hurt.

>>6981728
Alright, sure.

http://pastebin.com/a48SRByC - The Kwama Mines

Elder Scrolls based, insect impregnation/birthing, non-con

http://pastebin.com/NZGM1Z85 - Lonely With Dogmeat

Fallout based, Bestiality

http://pastebin.com/6QE7Dt21 - Wasp Infested

Original, insect impregnation/birthing, non-con

I have a lot more, but I don't want to get too spammy, so here's a couple random picks

>>6981694
tender space-amazon love cannot come soon enough

if they get integrated into wider society I get the feeling that they'd be hilariously chivalric and protective after their sense of honor and social status maps itself to the social contract and this human/krell thing you call 'friendship'

>>6981716
I'm up to 21,000 words on my most recent one and I only just got to the payoff in the last update, nobody has complained about the length or the pacing thus far.

>>6981786
Imagine how over protective they'd get when they found out just how fragile humans.
>guy walking with his Borealen "friend"
>he trips somehow and scrapes his knee
>she sees just from that he's bleeding/has a cut
>carries everywhere now while looking worried anything will harm him

>>6981790
absolutely, just looking forward to the next update

>>6981801
>tiny borealan doing the Transform: Anti-bully ranger! thing

For any artists that come around here - or writers I guess, it could make for a decent short fic - could I get a human standing between two figures, one a gleeful shortstacked goblin (or other short race, kobolds are cool as well) and the other a bulky minotaur stud. The human has been brought in to spice of the other two's sex life, and they're only just beginning to realise what they're getting into. Gender of the human is up to you.

>>6981860
Needs more jpeg.

>>6981910
Yeah, that is pretty damn awful.

>>6981294
Alright, I think I might end up writing up a story soonish. I have a rough plot idea in mind, but I'll try and insert some kinks if people want em.

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>>6980624
enjoyed this as well, positive reinforcement if my favorite new kink

Can I post something I wrote in this thread? : D

http://pastebin.com/qmvbgYkW

Doin it anyway.

>>6982378
There was supposed to be someone under her? Missed that.

>>6982386
Under him, yes.

>>6982347
Tags?

>>6982430
woops sorry

>witch, giantess, feet, navel

>>6981676
Well I'm >>6981463 and i'm gonna do my best to fill out all 3 of the requests. i have a pretty decent idea for the consentacles one already, i've already started working on it.

...and the second thing is something i keep in my terrible mind but it centers around gay prison rape of an elf; later his rape recovery. it's terrible 'cuz it involves a real-life person's character (i roleplayed with him on an mmo) but gdi it's such a turn on for me for various reasons...

i feel bad mostly because fantasizing about this kind of stuff...for example his character getting double-teamed while the people who put him into that prison in the first place watch in horror feels creepy and weird. i don't mind others doing it to my characters but i know that different folks have different strokes...

it doesn't help that i'm also 90% sure he's aware i'm currently getting off on his character getting brutally gangraped too.

sorry for the tl;dr. i'm venting a bit. i don't want to lose my friendship with him but christ on a cracker it'd be fascinating to see what happens to him during and after...

>>6982209
>but I'll try and insert some kinks if people want em.

It depends what you want to write, really, and what makes sense for the story. I'm sure everyone here has a laundry list of kinks they'd like to see whenever anyone proposes a new fic, but asking for Hordes-themed tetrophillia isn't much use if you're planning on writing, Vlad and Sorcha enjoying a reunion.

>>6981472
Seriously tempted to give this a shot. We'll see what happens.

http://pastebin.com/JWFXy2A7
>femdom, memes

hot off the presses

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Update:

New content starts at "I sat back, wiping my mouth, pleased with the quivering wreck I had made of Raz"

Pinwheel (ongoing):
http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage

Feel free to suggest tags, I'm a bit stuck on what a lot of this qualifies as beyond femdom which is kind of a blanket term.

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>>6982579
yes

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New story, hopefully its an improvement over the last. Any points/criticism/advise for better writing is appreciated.

A chick summons a demon for a deal.

http://pastebin.com/NGv9ZMBu

incubus/human female, cuminflation, impregnation, some size difference

>>6982594
Keep up the good work man.

>>6982579
9/10 it's alright

>>6981309
Alright. The prompt I was going to start with hasnt been as fruitful as I thought it was going to be, so I'm open to a short little Warmachine themed request to get the writing going. I have no idea what the ending quality will be, but I'm willing to give it a shot. My idea juices are just running a bit slow right now.

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would someone do some kinda story involving two female elves. one of them is practicing magic/voodoo while her girlfriend is out and she essentially keeps making the doll more and more curvy and it affects her girlfriend while she's simply out doing menial tasks much to her embarrassment.

So, I wrote a small piece for a dude in the /tg/ drawthread a while ago, and I'm not especially happy with it. The set-up is trite and the dialogue is forced as all hell, but if someone wouldn't mind giving it a skim and throwing some critique my way, I'd appreciate it.

pastebin.com/m4wKcqpm
>F/F, oral, lovey dovey

>>6983472
Your self-evaluation of it is a little exaggerated, but those issues are there. That being said, I've had those same issues myself, and I can only say that the more you write, the less those issues will get in your way.

>>6980624
Very nice. Cute and full of warmth.

>>6982347
>>6982432
Thought this was very amusing. Short and to the point, though the end seems a little abrupt..
I'd call it the witch and the orgasm doctor.

>>6981677
Now I'm trying to figure how how these tentacles communicate with people in order to hire said teaching aid.

>>6982594
you're a god snekguy

>>6983619
witch doctor. i like that.

thanks for the other compliments.

i might edit the ending next week.

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>>6982989
>>6983673
Glad you guys are enjoying it.
Working on some more, should be done by later tonight.

>>6983127
The ideas which immediately spring to mind;

Vlad and Sorscha, when she was apprenticed to him as a junior Warcaster. Completely canon and there's a nice teacher/student dynamic to work with.

Going aaaaaaall the way back to Mk1 fluff, the bit where Haley had to infiltrate a Cryxian port town solo in her attempt at assassinating Skarre. You could very easily spin something out of that, depending on who she met beforehand and what she needed to do to avoid blowing her cover.

Given the proclivities of the Satyxis, there's a whole wreath of stuff you could work with there. As much as I hate impregnation, they're described as often visiting seedier port towns to try and find worthwhile men to give them children. Or you could flip that concept on its head and have one fall victim to an angry survivor of Cryxian raiding. And don't tell me they don't get it off with the blighted Trolls and Ogrun that also serve on the blackships.

Deneghra and Asphyxious is another canon pairing, even if it's not stated outright. I've always loved the two of them and their weird sort-of relationship.

Beth Maddox, the new Cygnar 'caster, was imprisoned and tortured by the Protectorate for a period of time. Wouldn't be hard to work some bondage and non-con into that.

And there's always the potential for stories which aren't inherently tied to the setting, but use it as a backdrop - like a pair of Trenchers trying to find some comfort after the first failed attack on Cryx's necromanufactorum in Colossals, or the excesses of a Thamarite priestess. And if we're talking about Hordes as well (which I'll admit I'm less familiar with than Warmachine) there's a whole host of female Warlocks and warbeasts to pair off. The Circle and Legion seem most appropriate for that sort of thing, like Una and her Griffons, or Lylyth and a Raek.

>>6981743
Do you have more like the wasp and kwarma one?

Ovi gets me rock hard.

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someone helped me find an old favorite of mine
thought i'd post it here in case anyone is interested

not much PLOT, pretty much all smut and fairly vanilla
tags; slime girl, light bondage, female dominant, slight growth towards the end

>>6984259
>not much PLOT
That's something of an understatement.

>>6984149
I love the size difference stuff you do.

>>6984187
I do like the idea of an inexperianced trencher or longunner looking for comfort after first experiencing the horrors of Cryx. I'm thinking they end up shacking up with either a fresh faced junior warcaster whos just as nervous as they are or a more experienced combatant like a veteran gunmage or a CPS ranger. Ill probably start working on it tonight.

>>6984149
GIVE THAT GIRL SOME WATER

>>6982895
First of all, it could use some proofreading. There are a lot of typo's (probably autocorrected into different words) and some needless repetition. Compared to first story there were more complex sentences, so I barely even noticed the pronoun thing until I went back and saw what that other person said. I think this makes your writing less mechanical and more lively. However it is hard to say because I get distracted by typo's and the like.

>>6984259
You didn't include the link, genius.

>>6985079
>>6984259
my bad

http://pastebin.com/UKX41CwG

>>6985427
That's already in the master list.

>tfw you start out writing pokemon trainer smut
>turns into a short novel
>suddenly you've edited out all the smut

I wish I was a stronger writer and could stick to smut.

Does anyone here have any experience with patreon and lewds?

>>6985798
Not really, no. I remember one of the other guys did experiment with posting one of his fics on Kindle's Erotic Fiction section under a pseudonym, though. IIRC, it didn't work quite as well as he hoped.

>>6985798
I assume it's a lot like art, and people would only pay for very extreme fetish stuff that they can't reasonably find for free.

We'd all love to get paid for writing smut but I don't think it would ever be realistic.

What I was thinking of doing was self-publishing an Ebook on Amazon or something for a couple of bucks when I've got a collection of maybe 10 or 12 stories finished, perhaps people would pay for quantity and convenience, I dunno. I've still not found a satisfactory way to deliver content in a way that is easily accessible to people besides dumping Pastebin links.

>>6985993
I'd donate a few bucks for a Pinwheel story with even more slowbuilding romance

>>6985996
You would? I certainly wouldn't say no to that, maybe I'll look into setting one up some time.
I'm working on more right now.
I've had a lot of fun writing Pinwheel, I even find myself writing instead of playing videogames, I definitely like the longer format and the world building.

>>6986002
Patreon also let's you choose when you take people's money. You can charge per chapter, per story or per month. Whatever seems right to you.
If you just want people to find your story and don't care about money just post your stories on literotica or some place like that. That at least let's you keep track of comments and ratings.

>>6985798
Slash firestorm?

>>6985798
>pokemon trainer smut
This could mean so many things.

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2000 word update, new content starts at "We lay together for a while, our burning, exhausted bodies entwined".

I wrapped up the sex scene so if you want to read it from the beginning it starts at "I arrived back at dorm room 47 and Raz was waiting for me, sitting on the edge of her bed."

It is now 6814 words long!

Pinwheel (ongoing):
http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal

>>6986044
Thanks for the advice, I'll look into setting one up over the next few days.
I did look into Literotica but the site layout was really dated and a lot of the content looked very amateurish and sleazy (in a bad way), like a far lower standard of content than our writefags produce.

Story Request

Tags: Goblin, Blow job, public

Man tries to eat his breakfast at a cafe but is impeded by a goblin waitress sucking him off under the table. After leaving a 'tip' in her mouth and leaving; he wonders whether or not he should return for dinner - the hotdogs sounded appealing.

>>6985996
>>6986225
Ok I set up a Patreon, so I guess I'll just drop that link at the bottom of my Pastebins.

Submitted this last thread, still looking for some input. Even if it makes me cry. Go for it. Thanks much.

Project H2
(female, non-consensual, monster, predicament, tragic)
A woman fails to fight off tentacle-esque beasts set on invading her body, with a tragic end.
3800 words
http://pastebin.com/jxGEWzNT

>>6986826
Some of those tags seem rather vague. Think you could be more specific?

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Quick sketch on stream.

>>6986225
If you think lit is too sleazy you could try storiesonline.net
Funny how your sex scene is longer than most stories in the master list..

>>6986848
Impressive. You gotta do a follow-up picture to that sometime with all of them getting the dick.

>>6986849
I'm kind of jealous of him there, really.

>>6984587
Thanks for the feedback, I tend to get lazy and don't go over the text after I'm done... bad habit, needs fixing

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>>6986849
I'm actually quite happy with how Patreon's layout is, you can just scroll down and see a list of all my posts and it's pretty nice aesthetically.
As long as I keep everything free (which I will) anyone can see it all without needing to register.

I think I'll just drop a link at the bottom of my Pastebins so anyone who reads them and isn't in the thread can find my other stuff.

Working on another big update, big thanks to the two guys who backed me already, you're awesome.

>>6986848
Moar.

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3000 word Pinwheel update, sex and violence edition:

http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal

New content starts at "We awoke with a start to blaring alarms"

Tell me what you think.

Requesting a tribe of monsterboys with healing cum who are attacked by enemies who force them to cum continuously, making it impossible for them to win in battle. In response their greatest warriors are fucked to deplete their semen and have their balls temporarily smashed so they're able to fight.

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>>6987726
Like this but with monsterboys?

>>6987901
Exactly that, with non permanent CBT to prevent it. I'm basing the idea on something written by someone who did a huge series on dragons with the same themes (regenerative cum).

>>6987592
Normally I don't like my lewd literature to be too long, but Pinwheel has been a fucking great read so far.

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>>6985987
I might try something like this, I expect the word count would need to be much larger than the usual fic length.

>>6985993
>>6985798
>I assume it's a lot like art, and people would only pay for very extreme fetish stuff that they can't reasonably find for free.

I miss the days when sparkle dog porn in ms paint could earn you money.

>>6986116
>>6986129
It's just the journey of an un-named as of yet pokemon trainer leaving his home town and traveling with a partner to battle gyms.
Originally it was just going to star a blank slate rance like character beating female trainers then fucking the hell out of them.
His sylveon would also fuck their female pokemon at some point just because.

>>6988075
>Rance-like
Why not just pokegirls?

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>>6987592
Kind of want to see Stanley interact/bond with other Borealans and get some jealous Raz out of it.
>Stanley is teaching another Borealan how to use the XMR better
>Raz just walks up and carries him off without a word

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"Call ME a Horse's Ass, will you? Well, we'll soon see who the horse's ass really is!"

She never should have rebuffed that young wizard at her debut ball.

Moaning helplessly, the princess continued to plunge her fingers into the swollen, juicy neter lips that occupied her now widened, fur-covered rump, but no matter how hard she tried, the burning itch was just too deep for her own fingers to satisfy...

(Stil designing her. Trying to decide if she should just have a horse's ass or the feet as well.

>>6988079
Pokegirls?

I mean i guess I could write something from the view point of a pokegirl who keeps losing and getting sodomized because she can't cover the loss fee.

>>6988140
I say hooves are clunky and cute

>>6988075
I have a lot of weird fetishes and it's difficult to find someone skilled who will write about them for money. It's awesome when I see something that covers them though.

Pokefucking of all kinds is a thing of beauty, but I really like when actual Pokemon are involved.

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>>6988207
I guess. The idea is the wizard cursed her into having an easily-aroused horse butt that can't be satisfied with her fingers or a human cock.

She's sort of a Princess Pippa counterpart. I need to have the Wizard and the Evil Queen sharing stories over coffee.

>>6988209
Where on a scale from missionary position to second womb impregnation via ass dick belly button fucking would you say your fetish sits?

>>6988271
They're much closer to the second than the first. A few are hardcore CBT, near constant forced orgasms, medical, crossdressing, the sparkledog kind of stuff, dragons, cumshots, sex for enjoyment, and orgasm denial.

>Race of monsterboys have regenerative semen that is produced in huge quantities when needed, and almost no refractory period. If they're attacked in the testicles, they cum much faster to encourage lots of sperm production. Savage ball attacks are vanilla for them.

>Hammerspace dragon agrees to be experimented on sexually, to test things like dick length and size when fully aroused, orgasm length, reaction to different kinds of stimuli, cum reserves, and stamina. They flood the room making it cum and try unsuccessfully to stop it by ballbusting it and shoving things in its dick.

>Porn in a world where holding back cum isn't allowed and most pornstars are valued for being able to orgasm multiple times. Guy who isn't sure if he's gay fucks a feminine guy and cums constantly. Even in the photoshoot when neither of them are moving his dick is exploding inside the pornstar's ass.

>>6988300
I like the sound of your fetishes anon, that's some patrician taste.

>>6980619
>futa on twink
I really want to read this too~

>>6988183
I'm not sure that you get what I'm referring to. Go look at pokegirls dot org.

>>6988455
I get malware alerts trying to access it, Is it like gijinka or a pre-existing fanfic series?

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>pastebin.com/Mxm99Yfg

If anyone has a moment and would like to read some rough draft pokemon trainer smutt.
I just cannot into dialogue.

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>>6988070
Glad you're enjoying it, I'll start wrapping it up fairly soon, I figure I'll get one more good sex scene in then start on something new.
So far I'm thinking maybe a scenario where a human pilot and a Borealan warrior crash behind enemy lines and have to bond to survive, or barring that a kind of Stranger Things scenario with a monstergirl, whichever sounds best to you guys.

I was thinking of perhaps formatting Pinwheel with proper chapters and releasing it as an Ebook when it's done, so if you guys have tablets or E-readers you can get a more traditional book experience from it, it's so long now that it must be a pain in the ass to read on Pastebin.

>>6988139
That picture is uncanny.

>>6988542
I want to see the lion chick peg your main character.

>>6988546
lol

I mean that's not out of the question, I did consider putting some prostate stimulation stuff in there but it's a very polarizing subject that might just totally turn off half the readers.

>>6988555
So long as he doesn't shit all over her lap afterwards I think /efg/ can handle it.

I honestly expected her to be a lot more forceful though.

>>6988600
Originally I was just going to have her straight up rape him in the dorm room after the firing range scene, but the people who I asked about it didn't like that and wanted a more /gfd/ style romance, ultimately I'm happy with the direction it went in.

>>6988621
I honestly thought she was going to open mouth swallow his entire cock and balls on the very first night.
I'm enjoying pinwheel all the same though.

>>6988621

Can we get some femdom rape in the next story?(whatever it is)

But nice job with Pinwheel.

>>6988686
Sure I can try to fit that in.

>>6988555
Pegging next time Tentacle girl on male the story after and then full on futa on male.
Everyone will love you.

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>>6988706
>Tentacle girl on male the story after
Well shoot, I better put the pedal to the metal on my backlog before I get upstaged.

>>6988555
>Pegging
Please no.
>>6988706
>Futa
Oh god no.

>>6988768
Don't worry I'm not doing Futa any time soon, Borealans are modeled after lions, not spotted hyenas.

>>6988768
>>6988796
See, everyone loves you so much they even call you god now.
You should do even more male butt shenanigans.

>>6988796
If you're worried about content, you should consider keeping the stories you already have free of anything new while including instead in a new story. No one attached to the old story will be put off by you writing something they don't like in a totally different story, while proponents get to enjoy the content they asked for. It also helps gauge interest. Over relatively short periods of time, the read counter can give a decent idea of interest in a subject or fetish.

>>6988826
>>6988836
I certainly don't want to get into a rut and end up writing essentially the same thing over and over again, but I'm just not into pegging/futa, so anything I wrote with that as a theme would probably not be very high quality.

>>6988839
So then what is your thing, other than monster femdom?

>>6988842
I dunno, I prefer to focus on the monstergirl stuff because it's something I like very much and people seem to eat it up, there's a lot of variety and also an element of romance conducive to storytelling that isn't present with a lot of /d/ fetishes.

I like traps but I don't find that very fun or interesting to write about, I like Yuri but that's isn't /d/.

>>6988855
I like the culture clash, and fish-out-of-water themes your stories have. Don't feel obligated to include pegging or futa just to fit some /d/ template.

>>6988855
Everything is /d/, but I will agree that yuri isn't exactly popular here. It's not that anyone minds, it just doesn't seem to attract the same attention. I've been meaning to get into writing trap content myself, but it's rather hard due to pronoun and description issues. I can't well fault you for not wanting to go down that road.

What this guy >>6988858 says is right, though. Don't write things you don't like. That being said, it is always a good thing to try to expand your portfolio. Have you considered giving mind control or TF (female to MG) a shot? They're both staples of the genre and not something I remember you doing.

>>6988855
I was mostly joking with the futa, but yeah, just write what you enjoy writing about.
Monster girl + gfd isn't exactly common, at least not longer stories so I'm happy with anything I can get.

>>6988860
Nah TF and mind control rub me the wrong way, and I feel like the last thing the general needs is more of the same, you know? We have so many people doing fantasy stuff and TF and things like that already I'd only be adding to the pile.

As for the trap thing it's just not very fun for me to write from the perspective of the dominant party, people disagree when I bring it up, so it may just be that I'm not good at it, but I feel like the emotions of the fucker are a lot less complex and interesting than those of the fuckee.

>>6988858
>>6988877
I appreciate you guys reading my stuff, I've got OpenOffice open right now working on some more.

By the way, what kind of Ebook format do you guys commonly use? I was thinking of going with PDF.

>>6988881
I don't like PDF for readiing too much. Unless I'm missing something I don't think there's a nightmode for it.
Usually I go with epubs.

>>6988881
I was actually the first person to agree with you (mostly) the last time the dom/sub perspective debate came up. It's not that one is more emotional or interesting than the other, but that the sub perspective has more universal appeal. Both doms and subs like reading the submissive side of the story. Only doms like reading the dominant side. It's the reason I almost exclusively write the submissive perspective, despite not sympathizing with their orientation. It's just easier and more broadly appealing.

>>6988909
Yeah you worded that a lot better than I did.

>>6988881

I would go with epub. Ereaders are terrible with PDFs and on PC there isn't really any difference in this case.

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Anyone have or know where to find some good male to horsegirl or horsegirl futa stories?

There's a thread at the CYOC interactive about a guy being turned into a horsegirl (furry type) and told that the spell will last a day longer for each time (s)he cums. The guy who cast the spell on him/her keeps showing up to complicate things, and (s)he finds him/herself thinking of him as her Master.

I don't need the furry bit, but I love the gender swap, resistance/corruption, humiliation, and Domination/submission portions, as well as dehumanization. In particular, I love horse tails on women: I've been a fan ever since reading the Well of Souls books!

Pic related: Dmitrys does great horses.

>>6988457
>malware alerts
You sure you're looking up dot ORG? Yeah, it's an incredibly fleshed out multiple-author AU fanfic setting.

>>6988999
Link to thread?

>>6988999
The thing about balls on futas is that I can't tell if it's an actual futa or just a shemale. It's not fantastic enough visually.

>>6988326
Thanks Anon! I'll let you know if I find anything that fits them, or someone willing to write for cash.

>>6989049
Sure, here you go. Full view: http://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_87176/full.html

>>6989055
Officially, the artist lists their gender as "Horsegirl Futanari."

Personally, I'm bi, and I like balls on them.

>>6989064
Some artists call shemales futanari. They either don't know or they don't care and want to capitalize on popular keyword searches.

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>>6989068
That's true, but in this case he's also established backstories, including this character having an older sister (pic) who's a mother.

>>6988542
>human pilot and a Borealan warrior crash behind enemy lines
That sort of isolation setup is usually good fodder for character interaction. If the two species have been working together for a while by that point they'd be approaching each other from a much less hostile angle at the outset, even if the borealans are just as instinctively dominant/aggressive.

>>6989092
You reminded my of Enemy Mine. Now the main character is played by Robin Williams. Thanks a lot.

>>6988542
>>6989092
>even if the borealans are just as instinctively dominant/aggressive
Isn't Raz just hyper dominant because of her position in her pack though? What if it wasn't an alpha that landed in the crash and was a normal Borealan. Would they attempt to take over and become the alpha between the two of them or let the human fall into the role? I'd kill for a read of a Borealan trying to goad their human into acting more like an alpha to help recreate what the status quo would normally be back home.

>>6981033
>thick inflation
You bastard.

>>6989085
>proud of her son, Courtney
No thanks.

tags: tentacle, inflation, mild aphrodesia

http://pastebin.com/077HVbi7

Length: ~4k words

This is a first draft of my first attempt at writing erotica. I'm not a writer so I could use a lot of feedback. The pastebin looks funny because I wrote it in a format for pandoc, sorry.

>>6989164
I didn't want to bring it up by name, but that's one of my favorite sci-fi short stories. It's an excellent exploration of character and culture in a compact format; never watched the film of it though. Darmok and Jalad was a fascinating approach to the story with a focus on trying to communicate through interlaced cultural and linguistic barriers, which really added a different dimension compared with a more direct adaptation.

>>6989168
I think that amps it up, but they all seem to scrap for that role if they think they can. Though something like a borealan from a non-combat background where strength isn't the central focus trying to push someone she interprets as her superior to fit into a more dominant role in the most extreme version of topping from the bottom could be hilarious and adorable.

>>6989216
First of all, this could use a bit more proofreading. I'm not going to waste my time our yours pointing out minor errors, but they are there. It is relatively clean, however. The first thing I would like to point out is the repetition of names in the brief lesbian scene. Doing same-sex encounters is difficult due to pronoun saturation, but that doesn't mean you should just repeat the names over and over. It might help to refer to them by additional descriptors, calling out their physical appearance (the older woman, the redhead, etc.). Alternately, you can focus a bit tighter on one character so it is obvious that one person is doing the action, while the other is receiving. It takes some getting used to, but it is much more natural than repeating names. Similarly, you use the word "appendage" way too many times in a row. It may not have many synonyms, but you should work to break up repeated use.

My only other point on language is that you should nearly eradicate the words "felt", "saw", "heard", etc. from your lexicon when writing smut. This goes back to the "show, don't tell" that teachers probably told you a couple dozen times while in school (without adequate explanation). A story is viewed through the eyes of the character. We have no idea what it is like for them to hear, see, or feel anything. What we can understand is the effect it has on them and their reactions. By and large, you already write this way. Your characters' actions and interactions are the only way a reader can experience the story.

As far as the story goes, the only thing I would complain about is that I find it unreasonable that she did not see this happening to other people. Raves are pretty crowded places. Once she realized something was up, she should have seen people other than her one friend being tentacled.

(continued)

>>6989216
(continued)
Normally, whenever I give feedback to new writers, I consign my erection to a swift death as arousal gives way to the need to take notes and keep an eye on formatting and narrative errors. However, I found this legitimately difficult for this story. In spite of my best efforts to focus on editing alone, I found myself actually enjoying it. There wasn't much to the actual exposition here, but the scene was set well and the smut was excellent for a first attempt. The only real issue I had was getting over the horrendous formatting. Seriously, you need to work on that. Overall, I would say that this lands toward the top of the first attempts I have read. Get yourself a real pastebin account and start writing.

>>6989313
>>6989319
Cherish these posts, RookieAnon.

>>6989313
>>6989319
>>6989333

Yes I will, thanks for the valuable feedback! I've saved them as notes for the future as things to improve upon.

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The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

Chapter 22: Croc You Like A Hurricane
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

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>>6989092
I want to see Borealan and human rivals be forced to spoon together to survive the coldness at night, with the human as the little spoon.

Have him wake up realizing she is groping him midsleep, and have him keep her actions to himself, and maybe have her moan his name in her sleep to drive it home.

In other news, Is there any interest in future cowgirl material (or persuading you to do slow TF)?

>>6986826
>>6986841
Sure: female, monster-rape, science experiment, sexual-torture, light drowning, light gore, death.

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Stream stuff.

>>6989712
Mr. Inker, where can we see the lewds and or porn you make?

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May I request a story of a lucky or fortunate human teen boy student being taken on by an older elf student?

The human teen boy is your typical awkward, timid and socially awkward shy guy who'd easily get picked on by some bullies looking for target practice.

The elf woman is a new student/exchange student took a fancy on the lucky teen boy because she finds him really cute, adorable and pure.

She decides to take him as his boyfriend and one day she decides to invite him to her home and have sex with her to make him a "man". She of course understands that he's still young and a virgin and while they're in the process of going to have sex. She gives him positive encouragement and just talks nice and coos to him.

Basically some gentle femdom about an elf woman to a timid first timer human teen boy, thanks to anyone who'd take this up.

>>6989740
You said awkward twice.

>>6989740
"The girl is an elf" isn't enough to make this not ultra-boring and cliched.

What would be some good stories about girls being affected by lewd curses of any kind ?
Cursed/irremovable equipment counts.

>>6989731
His tumblr is notreallybuttpants.tumblr.com.

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>>6989740
Isn't the only difference between an Elf and a human the pointy ears? That's not very /d/.

Ok me and a friend are in the process of figuring out how to make Ebooks, I'm testing them in different apps, I'll have Crashland ready in epub format pretty soon and then you guys can try it out and tell me if we fucked it up.

Pinwheel will be available in epub when I've finished it, not long now.

2000 word update, new content starts at "One of the marines charged in with a combat knife and drove it into the chest of a bug"

http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal

Ok the Crashland epub is ready, if you have any formatting problems please tell me what app you're using and I'll try to fix it.

https://mega.nz/#!OI8SWDgC!OfeVB6nrQcNCJybhCqCeaQR7yza16dccvKmvPrS5KF8

>>6990229
Nice update. Damn the commander must be tiny if an eight foot alien is almost double his height.

>>6990346
Thanks, also I just now realized I can host epub files directly on Patreon so if you don't like MEGA links for any reason it's on there too.

Welp. My power level slipped. Anyone have anything new to take my mind off of the embarrassment?

>>6990644
Storytime.

>>6990644
How about worldbuilding?

How do Borealans breed? Do they take multiple mates, or go for monogamous love? Can a human impregnate a Borealan, or vice versa? How many per birth (single or a liter more common)? Average height (male, female)

>>6990645
I'm a not-quite NEET still living with my parents. I work for my dad while trying to get my life together after a nervous breakdown in the last semester of my honours year. While I was mowing the lawn today, my mom had looked at my browser to find where I spend my time. She must have been using the search function in my history because what she found was not something I'd been looking at recently. When I came back, I noticed a tab open that I hadn't had up. I have a habit of opening a new tab whenever I leave my computer or anyone walks by. That and I have a habit of opening up tabs for things that I might never get to and neglect clearing them up. The tab was a chapter of Three Square Meals, a sci-fi fic on Literotica which features cum inflation at its most /d/. I wasn't that suspicious until she asked if I'd been "going places where I shouldn't". It was only until a few minutes before my post that she called for me to have a talk. She's pretty reasonable and she did bring up Literotica, which I had expected, but then she mentions something that I didn't expect: a father/daughter incest fic that I hadn't even read more than a page of before dropping. I could feel the color going out of my face and nausea came in waves. I did my best to explain that I had only read a bit because of curiosity in what I had heard was the most popular section of the site (this was true), but she doubted me since she saw that I had looked at five chapters of it. I stuttered through explaining my tab habit and I think that she may have believed me. She only mentioned "anime stuff" in passing. The conversation went onto other things and I knew that I was safe. She saw Japanese words in my history and passed it all off as manga. She hadn't seen my 122 tab collection of sadpanda, which must include some incest and the recent scylla doujin.

>>6990707
>Not using private browsing
You deserve it, but that's got to be real fucking uncomfortable.

>>6990707
That sucks man.
Luckily my parents respect my privacy and also they never loved me, so they don't snoop.
You should use CCleaner periodically to wipe all your stuff.

>>6990717
or just set it so your browser history is cleared when you close you close your browser

>>6990719
Gotta watch out for those thumbnails saved to the C:\ drive if you use a family computer or share one though, they can turn up in image searches, then that's a whole can of worms.
If you use CCleaner, go to options, include:

C:\Users\(Your Username)\AppData\Local\Microsoft\Windows\Explorer\*.*

That way every time you run it, it will blitz all the temp files and cached thumbnails and stuff that private browsing doesn't catch.

>>6990720
right, had my own computer for so long I forgot that sort of thing

>>6990721
If you use an SSD you should do it anyway, frees up a ton of space, you might have several gigs of cached thumbnails.

>>6990707
Was she snooping on your personal computer or were you using the family computer?

>>6990714
I used to, but I remember having problems when firefox would crash and I couldn't recover those tabs. For a while I used Save My Tabs, which saved my ass a couple of times when I couldn't recover my tabs, but the small txt files every 15 minutes added up, so I disabled it.

>>6990717
>>6990720
I have a mac, but maybe I should periodically delete all of the porn and 4chan stuff from my history. I thought that my mom was better than this. It's my computer and it was in my room, but she thought it was okay since she's "worried about me".

>>6981463

Bronahole
>double-sided onahole is advertised
>it works like a chinese finger trap but with dicks
>two cute boys decide to see if it works

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I've recently added a few more chapters to one of my ongoing stories, featuring this lovely little pink lady.

Would like to hear some honest feedback on it, I haven't been doing the erotic writing thing very long.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/FlannaganTheRed/14894/Daughter-of-Demons

[demons, bondage, non-con, violence, deepthroat, gangbang, breathplay, mindbreak, tentacles, light inflation]

>>6990879
I looked over a couple of chapters and noticed a few issues. It's quite possible that they were addressed in other chapters since I haven't had time to go through them all, so I'll apologise in advance if that's the case, but here's my thoughts.

Your chapters are very short. I feel like the overall flow of the story could be improved if you condensed them into a smaller number of larger fics, and it would help with another issue - inconsistant build-up. Personally I feel that written smut works best when the author leads the reader into it gradually, establishing a context which puts the reader in a sexual state of mind before the first actual sex acts take place. For example, in the first few stories, you could merge chapters three to five together, and either show the pirates taking an interest in T’Lar right away, or her imagining what might happen to her, and her reaction to that potential danger.

Which leads into another issue. It's mostly a personal thing, but it'd be nice to see a bit more spirit from your character. I don't get much of a feel for her personality - she seems very placid. For me, one of the main draws to a non-con fic is the victim's emotions and her relationship with the aggressor. If she's angry, does she fight back despite the danger, or choke down her fury and use the promise of getting revenge later to help her through what's happening? If she's scared, does she try and bargain with her captors for better treatment? Does Stockholm syndome begin to take effect, or does she constantly look for ways to escape?

>>6991109
On more technical notes, the dialogue feels a bit stilted, but dialogue which feels natural and not silly or 'porny' can be a real pain to get right. One bit of advice I've seen people give is to read the lines out loud - if they feel strange or awkward, then tweak them until they feel natural to say. The actual sex acts themselves are over and done with very abruptly as well, when they should be the culmination of the little bit of smuttier writing seeded through the story beforehand. So a bit more meat there wouldn't go amiss.

I hope this doesn't come across as too negative, and take it with a pinch of salt - a lot of it is just what I like to read and how I like to write. But hopefully there'll be some useful points there.

>>6990732
My pc requires a password to open up from sleep mode, this way I don't have to close everything down if I'm just going to take the dog out or something. Also automatically go incognito when I'm looking for something that might raise questions, not even anything illegal, just shit that's useful for world building. (I use a zoo forum for info on what weird dickings feel like.) Also porn of any kind. I may be a bit paranoid since my family has no interest in keeping tabs on me, but sometimes they want to borrow my pc.

>>6990717
>tfw your father doesn't respect your privacy

It sucks, I hate that I can't put anything down without turds trying to go through it.

>>6990816
Genius.

So, I've got some /tg/+/d/ inspired "couplings" I want to write for, but the problem I'm having is that I'm not entirely sure what to actually write with them. Would it be allowed for me to ask ideas on scenarios to get them involved in? Both couples involve human traps and non-binary-gendered monstrous humanoids derived from a more /d/ interpretation of Dungeons & Dragons.

Couple 1 is an evoker and his kobold lover. Technically, the kobold is male, but because all kobolds grow pseudo-breasts (like boobs, but no nipples) as mating displays cum status symbols, and because kobolds are "triggered hermaphrodites" as a survival mechanism (that is, you can fuck a male kobold and he'll get pregnant, and a female kobold will sprout a dick if she tries lesbian sex), well, he's not exactly male by human standards. They're both quite fertile, they really like breeding, and they're very much in love with each other.

Couple 2 involves a necromancer, the opposite sex clone "son" of a psycho evil witch-queen, and his arranged marriage to a gnoll chieftess to further his "mother's" political arrangements. Gnolls in this setting being, to put it bluntly, a race of cunt-cocked futas - they look like shemales, but the penis is specially adapted to also double as female reproductive organs - they get pregnant through dick-on-dick sounding and give birth through their cock. It's a political matchup at first, but as they get to know each other, they start to like each other, though they don't know how to convey this at first.

>>6991270
With couple 2 it sounds like you already got a story idea, so not sure what you're looking for

couple 1, maybe the evoker is fed up with the kobolt playing tricks on him and plays a trick of his own (just going based on intell from dandd wiki, never actually played this game) and creates another kobolt to impregnate his lover...

>>6991270
for the gnoll you just more or less described of spotted hyenas are normally

>>6991287
If it helps, for the first couple, my plan is that humans in this setting can breed with *anything* that's willing, so they can make all the eggs they want together.

And yeah, I know that there's more or less a serial in the background of couple #2, I just thought that maybe I should try some simpler stuff relating to the two of them first.

On a different topic, would there be any interest in a waffy oneshot involving a hyperpregnant sphinx and her human boytoy turned baby-daddy?

>>6991311
well according to the wiki, gnolls are pretty family oriented, so... a short bit about the gnoll trying to get the necro to raise some of their dead

If you were thinking more smut, just write their wedding night or some such thing

As for the oneshot, this is /d so long as it's weird there's interest, also femdom type things seem to strike a fancy among many on this thread specifically

How do you guys feel about second-person smut. Is it weird in the context of fiction since it dictates actions/thoughts/feelings? Or is it more immersive since it puts you right in the middle of things in a way?

>>6991341
For me, it breaks immersion, it feels like the story is lecturing or ordering me. Makes me very aware that I'm reading.

>>6991341
Not a fan at all. It projects thoughts and feelings onto me, as a reader, that I wouldn't necessarily feel, which completely breaks immersion. First person stories, if they're well written, achieve that sort of immersion without making assumptions about the reader.

>>6991341
They can work really well both for a sense of immediacy and immersion, and from a roleplaying perspective they can be fun for getting into the mindset of a character who may differ from you to a lesser or greater extent. The biggest issue is that the more outlandish any fetishes are and the greater the immediate enthusiasm the character has for them, it can quickly become jarring and kill any immersion as per >>6991357 and >>6991363
Done well, it can take you along on an emotional journey to understand what it is about a certain fetish or scenario, and even if you still don't care for it after you disengage from the fiction you can enjoy it at the time through the character you are getting into. Done poorly you're being told by a halfwit with bad grammar that deep down you, the reader, should have always yearned to ride an inflated hermaphrodite down a river of diarrhea gushing through the streets, and everyone is now wearing diapers for some reason.

>>6991109
>>6991111

Some great advice, thanks!

To give you a little more context about the way the story is structured, the text is meant to go along with illustrations, so I wanted them to function more as extended captions rather than chapters of a novel. So each "chapter" has a corresponding image.

I agree with your other points, that the dilogue could use some more attention and the sex scenes could be a bit more involved.

I also think you might be right about her personality showing through a bit more, but I think I've accomplished that later on.

>>6991381
That's really cool, I wish I could draw.
You get the best of both worlds.

>>6990879
>tribal tattoos with no balance
>overdone eye makeup that clashes with the tribal tattoos
>disgusting wasp thighs
0/10. Would not summon again.

>>6991126
>I use a zoo forum for info on what weird dickings feel like
If you could provide a document for science, that would be appreciated. Other writers would definitely benefit from your knowledge.

>>6991508
Too shy to go look yourself? I can make a compilation, probably include the weird dolphin vagina... that was... mind blowing, also a lil' suspicious

Sheesh. I am way too vanilla for this thread.

>>6991512
I mean I don't really want to fire up tor to look up zoostuff for science right now. It will probably be a long time before I do. I'm on an engineering binge right now. Who knows when the next animal physiology binge will be?

>>6991514
Actually, most people here have quite the soft spot for vanilla. You don't need to have a /d/-tier fetish in your smut for it to be good, after all.

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>>6991512
I could use this purely for scientific reasons related to writing.

>>6991514
/tg/ has always been like this, not just /wst/. Now we are on /d/ and nothing has changed. /wst/ was rather vanilla. Most weird stuff starts spontaneously out of threads with weak topics.

>>6991522
>>6991515
Here, the more commonly discussed animal partners, included females as well as males. As said in the post itself this is stuff people have reported online, so make of it what you will

http://pastebin.com/Q4FDsfnj
>info on animal sex as told by zoophiliacs

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2000 word Pinwheel update, the lewd has returned edition.
New content starts at "We arrived back at the barracks and packed our gear".

http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal, hair pulling, 69, face sitting

>>6991698
Had just finished reading, and decided to refresh in desperation.
Keep up the good work.

>>6991703
Glad you're enjoying it!

By the way did any of you guys try out the Crashland Ebook yet? If I got it working right I'll reformat Snek and Snek 2 and release them as an Ebook too.

>>6991341
I think they can work alright for CYOA style stories but not much else, though maybe it just depends on the fetish, like femdom or something like that.

Personally I prefer third person whenever possible. First person is fine but also gets a little weird depending on the plot.

>>6991698
Gotta say I still like Crashlands the most. Has that intimate feel like nothing matters except the relationshiip between the protagonists.

>crashed ship, almost died, might still die
>all good though, met hot grill

Much more lighthearted than the other two stories.
In your other ones I always think you want to write much more plot but have to focus on the relationship instead, but in crashlands it's almost the opposite.
All relationship but have to write a little bit of plot so the characters have some reason to stay together initially.

Already looking forward to what you have in store next. Hoping for something like a manticore, as in one of those monstergirls that just keep on going even when the mc is already unconscious, like in rampant serenities(rsanon in the masterlist) manticore and a half.
That's hot as fuck.

Also I think it's pretty funny how your Pinwheel mc always emphasizes how dominant the Borealans are when the girls in your other stories seem way more so. In your XCOM story the mc can't even lift an arm half the time.

>>6992028
Hey snekfucker, how badly did the cat ladies abrasive tongue fuck up your main characters penis?

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>>6992379
>I always think you want to write much more plot but have to focus on the relationship instead

That's kind of true, I'm mostly doing this as practice to improve my writing, one day I'd like to write a real publishable scifi novel when I get good enough. Not that writing in /efg/ isn't a whole lot of fun.

>In your XCOM story the mc can't even lift an arm half the time.

I guess I was going for a more social/emotional kind of domination with Raz (as well as her just sitting on his fucking head of course), the Viper will just pin you and go to town without saying a word, the excitement there comes from it being kind of animalistic, it might not stop if you wanted it to. But with bullying it's more about wearing someone down emotionally or applying social pressure to them, I hope I conveyed some of that in their interactions.

That's really good feedback though, thanks for your input. I'll keep that in mind when I write the next one, I'm nearly done with Pinwheel now. I had a couple of ideas, a Crashland style scenario in the Pinwheel setting where a shuttle crashes behind enemy lines and the only survivors are a human pilot and a Borealan warrior, or a kind of Stranger Things/Alien inspired scenario with some horror elements where an ultraterrestrial/extradimensional monstergirl is stalking a dude.
What would you like to read?

>>6992431
I don't know, glue some catnip to your dick and stick it through the bars of the tiger pen at the zoo to find out.

>>6992638
Don't think catnip does anything for big cat species but lions seem to love lavender scent

>>6992640
>lavender

Oh that's good, I should have gone with that instead of the daffodils.

>>6992640
On the contrary, catnip has some lovely effects on big cats as well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tklx3j7kgJY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_OPA1bZwOWc

>>6992649
>the humans buy the Borealans a big bag of catnip has a thank you gift and just see what happens
>the result will either be hilarious or end with a lot of humans being snu snu by the Borealans

>>6992659
I like it.
>human gives catnip to Borealan as a gag-gift
>turns out it's a powerful aphrodisiac

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I'm writing about a Lawful Evil obsessive witch girl who fawns over a Chaotic Good tiefling and is determined to make him her familiar for nefarious deeds. She insists it's all so she can achieve her power goals, but really she just likes being by him.

>tfw my most masculine male tiefling pic is hella gay and from tumblr.

>>6992675
I'm missing Witchy pictures though, I can't really get into a witchy mood without them.

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I saw this in a /tg/ thread yesterday and thought it had some potential. Especially if the clay boy had some different hungers.

Looking for suggestions on directions I could take this in.

>>6992638
Curious how you would turn a horror story into happy ending gfd, so I'll vote for that having just recently read both crashlands and that bermuda story.
I hope for a happy ending at least, I don't htink you're into the whole bad end scenario. And I mean no bad ending as in your mc deosn't die or is made into some sperm supply thing or whatever usually happens.

Erotic horror doesn't usually end without the other kind of happy ending, after all.

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>>6992638
While I was a supporter of the Crashlands-esque scenario with the Borealan and the human from the start, I'm interested in that new scenario.
What kind of Monster Girl, because I immediately thought of this.
>>6992659
>>6992664
Maybe Catnip could act like Red Kryptonite to Borealans, flipping personality so they go from dominant to submissive or from tomboy-ish warrior to girly sex machine.
I'd love to see a sequel/viginette to Pinwheel where Stanley buys Raz Catnip when on earth for the holidays, accidentally radically changing her personality for a night.

>>6992638

You should do both.

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A teen girl wakes up in the middle of the night with cat ears, tail, eyes, fangs, and claws. Scared, she runs to mom, who tells her about the family curse that gives women the power of ailuranthropy.

Mom says she'll learn to control it over time, but for now just go to bed and she'll change back by morning. But daughter is too scared to be alone and wants to sleep with mom. Also she's in heat and starts to get naked and make love to her.

While resisting, mom accidentally releases her own feline form. Thus she also goes into heat, her resistance breaks down and they have many a hot naked night as catgirl and catwoman together.

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>>6992675
Do you need more masculine tieflings?

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>>6992813
Unnf, those work too.

I've only got feminine ones.

>>6992809
That's pretty specific. You don't wanna write it yourself?

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Hello all just noticed this thread and wanted to contribute with some of my smutty content.

Galaxy of Terror X-Rated Cut is full of tentacle sex and some impregnation as well!

http://pastebin.com/xy4n6cNM

Let me know what you all think!

>>6992761

I don't think it'd cause that sort of personality change. Probably put them on a serious high, which...could have some amusing results in and of themselves.

Also now I'm imagining the first few rounds of integration training to be similarly disastrous to the attempts for this pack of Borealans that just got shipped off...albeit in the opposite direction.

>>6992640
Dammit, I should've made a catnip joke in my story with the catgirls.

Oh, well. At least I talked about the hooked papillae on the tongue.

>>6993017
>tentacle sex and some impregnation
finally something /d/
looking forward to reading this later

>>6993017
Consentacles?

>>6993167

She gratually submits to her repressed sexulaity even though it is a giant worm that is tapping into her lust.

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>>6992695
Well I've done four /gfd/ stories now, maybe I'll do something a bit harder. I'd like to try my hand at horror, I got a shelf full of Barker and Herbert which usually have some kind of sexual overtones to them, if not outright sexual themes.
I don't like "bad end" in general, but I'm sure I can find another solution.

>>6992761
It would have to be something creepy. /d/ sometimes has "creepy waifu" threads those would be a good place to look for inspiration.

The question is though how "horror" can I go before it just puts people off? I assume body horror and gore are off the table, the monstergirl can't be overtly grotesque either.

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>>6993151
I would love an episode where one day they're bored and try smoking it, discovering a new transformation method and in their resulting frenzy having a cute playfight.

>>6993249
I guess that horror that's not a bad end would be somewhere between a husband/sex toy end MGQ-style and Ane Naru Mono.

>1-2 more weeks until the next chapter
Current cryotechnology is insufficient.

>>6993161

Well the breeding tendril is also very appropriately /d/ sized as well.

>>6993251
>I would love an episode where one day they're bored and try smoking it, discovering a new transformation method and in their resulting frenzy having a cute playfight.

I wrote that one specifically as a single entry so it wouldn't grow out of control like the Croc story has. (Also, I have absolutely no experience with drugs, so it would probably turn out stupidly ignorant)

Not saying I'll never go back, but it's not in the plans at the moment.

>>6993249
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/798065/c91e023f03/
Something you might like then.

>>6991698
I loved it. Thank you.

got something in the works. expect it within the week.

I must say, it's hard to transition from the action that sets up the plot to writing the smut where you really want it to matter.

>>6993842
Oh I've read that, your taste is scholarly.

>>6993844
Glad you're enjoying it, I got more on the way.

>>6994144
Tell me about it, it took me 20,000 words.

I'm almost done with Pinwheel, I feel like I'm at a good note to end it on, but I feel kind of bad about the first sex scene being 6000 words and the second only being 2000, shall I drag it out a little longer for some better payoff?

>>6994221
Eh, do as you want. The buildup was pretty sweet, and after reading Crashland I kind of wished it took longer to get into lewd.
Your worldbuilding is pretty damn good.

Also if you go and write horror, I'd personally prefer body-horror and Silent Hill-ish things.

>>6994221
>>6994311
Maybe even such a shitty idea as a female not-slenderman?
Size difference and tentacles would go well with a horror theme I'd say.

>>6993249
I have a question on this, I am putting together a story that has some horror elements (body horror inspired by Event Horizon) the stuff is not in a sexual context, but instead is just a plot device to make whatever bad guys especially hanus, is this okay?

>>6993017

Made some edits to my story. It needed a little more work in some places.

>>6994752
First of all, we are not a hivemind. Unlike some other generals on this site, we don't do content policing. If you want to write it, it's fine. If no one likes it, no one reads it. It's that simple. We have way more readers than posters, so you will never get an accurate sample of the thread's tastes until you write something.

Second of all, there is no "anus" in "heinous".

>>6994221
Quite bluntly, most of us would kill to be able to write a 2000 word long sex scene.

>>6994221
God damn it Snekguy stop having the exact same taste as me.

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>>6992809
Are you the same anon who requested the story I wrote? Because that request is very similar.

Out of the Bag:
http://pastebin.com/69PdJVLf

(I used 'felanthrope,' which I suppose isn't a word if "ailuranthropy" is a word.)

>>6994221
>>6994795
But what I'm planning with mine >>6994144 is that
the sex scene never really ends.

>>6994865
But can you tell us what's going to be in it?

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>>6994342
I'm always gonna do size difference, I love that shit.

>>6994311
Thanks, I'm really glad that went down as well as it did, I was worried everyone would get bored if I tried to cram in too much plot, it looks like the exact opposite happened.

>>6994752
That sounds pretty cool, I love that movie.

>>6994865
I would be interested to see how you pull that off, a continuous scene with no breaks?

WOO FINISHED, that's the longest thing I've written, final count is a little over 34,000 words.

I reformatted the story with chapters so it's easier to navigate, I'll have an epub version up on my Patreon in a short while for those who want a better reading experience, or just want a copy to keep on file.

New content starts at "I wrapped my arms around her lower body and held on for dear life"

http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal, hair pulling, 69, face sitting

>>6994882
Do standard lamias and centaurs count as size difference?

>>6994884
Yeah I guess they're mostly portrayed as being bigger than humans.

>>6994882
>http://pastebin.com/69PdJVLf
Its done! Simply enjoyed this story so much.

>I'm always gonna do size difference, I love that shit.
Welp looks like I'm going to enjoy your new stuff then.

[spoiler]More Snek story eventually[/spoiler]

>>6994882
Everytime I read one of your sex scenes I'm like "Come on, man, just get it over with. Fuck her damn abs already".
Great job with the story, looking forward to horror-girl.

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>>6994882
>leglocking
<3

>>6994833
Yes, you did an amazing job, I just can't stop thinking of yuri catgirl scenarios.
This next one is focused on incest and big age gap. I may actually do it myself as suggested earlier.

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>>6994882
Really enjoyed it Snekguy, I look forward to your next one

>>hiding daffodils
the fluff train never stops

>>6995191
Thank you very much. I'm glad it was what you were looking for.

Nevertheless, incest is one of those lines I don't cross. It's actually complicated my G4E fanfiction because I've basically had to leave out Ayako from the story until I come up with some way to fold her in that doesn't make me uncomfortable.

>>6995382
Wait what? Who's related to whom?

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>>6995389
In miro's early work, the star was Ayako. He introduced Sayako, the same model, but with a cock. In the 'story' of his erotica, I'm pretty sure they are twin sisters.

There was a contest as to "how Sayako came to be." The winner was one that said Sayako was Ayako from another dimension. So... that would still be incest, but they're not technically sisters. I forget if this is 'canon,' if a canon exists for some naughty clips of a chick with a fifteen inch dong.

>>6995398
What's wrong with having sex with yourself from another dimension? It's practically masturbation.

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>>6994903
>>6995065
This guy gets it.
>>6995110
>>6995317
Glad you guys liked it so much, I'll start work on a new story in the next couple of days.

The Pinwheel Ebook is ready in epub format and is available here:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6611423&i=541149

We got the table of contents working so you can skip to chapters in supported e-readers if you just want to whack off.

>>6994882
man, this was just perfect

>trying to fit with Raz onto a single bed
literally living the dream

>>6995655
She looks like she needs a glass of water.

>>6994879
>>6994882
what I did have in mind was a one-on-one grows into an orgy of at least 8 members, and an epilogue/coda about what happens to the protagonist 6 months later.

Now that I think about it, writing about one male after fucking 7 women in a row sounds like i'm biting off more than I can chew.
But that's what I had in mind at the start.

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>>6989439
>>6994833
The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

Chapter 23: Croc-in' on Heaven's Door
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, tittyfucking, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

>>6995655
>AB Jobs

Oh god, what's the name of that mango where the russian prostitute goes to the wrong address and jerks the guy off with her abs?

>>6996228
I don't know but now I'm interested.

>Artist sitting at home in apartment, has no inspiration
>Knock at door, it's some tall blonde woman
>Opens door to see what's up and she barges in.
>Very happy-go-lucky but she doesn't speak much japanese
>Can't understand that she's at the wrong place
>She's very strong and insistent and he's a weakling little jap guy
>yada yada
>"I'll use my famous special technique!"
>Suddenly she's jerking him off with her abs
>Guy is completely stunned
>She get's a call from her boss and realises she's gone to the wrong place... again
>"Wait what does "you are fired" mean?"
>Artist becomes famous for drawing muscle girl porn

>>6996230
I can swear I've read your stuff before. I don't want to call you out on your previous aliases. But its great to read your stuff again.

Have this http://g.e-hentai.org/g/418510/c6c70bad1b/

>>6996329
Nice thanks.
Nah I'm pretty new to the whole thing, only been writing for a couple of months, wish I had had the confidence to start doing it sooner.
I've done Snek, Snek 2, Crashland and Pinwheel so far.

>>6996329
Thanks! That's the one I was thinking of. Thought it was a bit longer, but it's been a long time since I read it.

>>6996329
>decently detailed musculature
>downey animeme face
I don't understand how anyone can get aroused by that.

Can't get a direct link going at he moment but I have written some stories under the moniker MrPessimist at Hentai Foundry. Feel free to take a look. Especially with my two favorites that I keep considering going back to.

"Putnam"
>NC, Impreg, Monster
>A quiet, small mountain town in rural Kentucky gets secrets dragged out into the light when it becomes the center of a mysterious string of rapes. All committed by an attacker whose description is medically impossible.

"Y"
>Impreg, Sci-Fi
>Centuries after a runaway
biological weapon wiped out the male half of the human race and the species only survived as an all-female clone-variation of itself. A salvage ship makes a shocking discovery when they find a cryogenically frozen male astronaut technically still alive. Now the Last Man in the Universe is learning to survive in a fully working space-faring civilization that can't decide if they want to welcome him or kill him outright.

>>6996490

Non con monster breeding women, I'm in!

>>6996490
How the heck do you use Hentai Foundry?
I tried making an account but their text box doesn't respect the formatting of anything I paste into it, I pasted from a .txt file, from an .odt, from Pastebin, Google Drive, it just dumps the text as a massive block without breaks or paragraphs.

>>6996591

Weird I just use word and copy paste...

I got like 4 stories up there, at least there is no annoying approval process and it's kinda ok for finding what suits your tastes.

>>6996490
>>6996513
>>6996591
Just was browsing it at the time when the lark started.

Alright, going send up a round of links. This is "Putnam". Starting to set off the robot detector so "Y" will be later.

http://pastebin.com/tpxcSZqh
http://pastebin.com/HZVSinpx
http://pastebin.com/qpQfmheA
http://pastebin.com/kF2HQPWv
http://pastebin.com/4zXEjGbf
http://pastebin.com/vBaTybTj

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>>6995655
Snekguy, have you ever considered a story with a non-athletic bodytype, more specifically thicc?

I just thought about Raz having a bit of baby-weight postmarriage to Stanley.

>>6996896

I already gave your stayr my thumbs up.

I got three stories up on paste bin now.

All my stories are gonna have monsters forcing very large members into the tight holes of the women they are paired with.

Galaxy of Terror X-Rated Cut:

Monsterms, rape, impregnation and birthing larva.

http://pastebin.com/xy4n6cNM


Ravaged by the Roadside:

Caution, it's got a bad end.

Werewolf, rape, snuff and gore.

http://pastebin.com/vHa934MM

The R-Virus: Tresspasser

Some rough zombie banging.

http://pastebin.com/hGMHdU7r

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>>6996686
Maybe I should try using a different browser? It's very weird.

You should check out Storiesonline.net, that site is great, props to whoever recommended it to me.
I got Pinwheel, Crashland and Snek to 10th, 13th and 16th in their top 50 stories list already, they're eating it up.
I tried making a Literotica account too but I can't even register and the site admin hasn't gotten back to me yet.

>>6996918
I do love that body type but for me at least it inspires the opposite feelings to femdom, and I'm really bad at writing that at the moment.

>>6996940
>Werewolf
+1

>>6997004

Thanks for the heads up on stories online I have been struggling to find a solid place to post them.

Literotica sucks all the dicks and not in a good way. It has the most inconstant approval process I have ever seen.

If you even dare to use the word rape, denied.

If the sex seems far to rough to be plesurable, try again.

Meanwhile I have read top listing stories where the theme is fucking rape... the fuck?

Anyway enough ranting, currently working on another story based around the 80s sexpliotation movie humanoids from the deep. Gonna take a swing at describing some exotic fish man cock, maybe give it some ridges and spines.

>>6997040
A lot of fish externally inseminate so most fish don't even have dicks. So there's not much for you to look for inspiration unless you want to go with prehensile dolphin/whale dicks.

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>>6997004

Hmm, you need a membership to post stories?

>>6997043

Nah I am just gonna spit in the face of biology and give it a huge spiney cock.

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>>6997073
Yeah, think twice about making your email visible for feedback though, my inbox has been inundated by one autist who is doing math trying to disprove my fictional light speed method that I put zero thought into.

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>>6997111

Hah, I'll have to take that into consideration!

Una pequeña loli para aquellos que las desean

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>>6997478
You'll have to go somewhere else for that, mate.

First 2000 words of my new horror story, tell me what you think of the setup, is this something you guys would want to read?

http://pastebin.com/JYsDp9Tf

>>6997508
seems like a good initial setup, certainly grabs my attention and raises some immediate questions.

got any prospective tags to indicate the direction and content you were thinking of going with?

>>6997564
Definitely harder than the /gfd/ stuff. I won't stop doing that by any means, but I've written four in a row and now I feel like doing something a bit different. Maybe something around 10 or 12 thousand words.

Probably gonna aim for some fairly hard monstergirl rape/femdom where the male is unwilling and fights back.

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Further updated my galaxy of terror story.

I just cannot leave it alone and I keep tinkering with it... UGH I feel like George lucas minus the money.

Also good news I got aka6 to do an illustration of my story so that will be tight as fuck!

>>6997959
That's awesome I love that guy's art.
Keep us updated.

>>6997587
>Probably gonna aim for some fairly hard monstergirl rape/femdom where the male is unwilling and fights back.

Guess this is a bad time to request advice for my story then

>>6998017
Why's that?

>>6997987

Yeah man super stoked about that. Sadly... it'd gonna be coming around October.

>>6998021
I don't want you to keep shifting gears between gentle and hardcore just to help a greenhorn out.

>>6998055
Well unless you'd be asking me to write you a brand new story I don't see why that would be an issue.
I can't help you out if you don't tell me what you want after all.

>>6998062
well,
I'll give it one more good look-over to try to overcome a writer's block. If I come up with nothing by tomorrow, I'll give in to you.

>>6997959
>galaxy of terror story
link? not sure if I missed that or if I'm just spacing out right now.

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>>6998852

http://pastebin.com/xy4n6cNM

Sorry posted a while ago but didn't leave the link.

I was trying to work in my werewolf story but I got frustrated with the sex scene and scrapped it because it was just far to long and bloated.

So now I will be writing about a warg that will be giving a women his /d/ size doggy cock.

I am on the fence on how the birthing scent should play out. Does she watch helplessly as she squeezes out his infernal puppies or do they violebtly rend ther way out of her belly?

Might just flip a coin on that one

>>6998872
We're not really very big fans of bad ends here, so the safe bet is the former.

>>6998908

Fair enough, but a bad end can also be considered being turned into a monsters breeding slave.

I get that gruesome ends are not gonna be enjoyable for everyone reading but sometimes I want to mix things up and throw down some of the old ultra violence.