/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General (formerly /wst/)

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Reposting the fic concept I brought up last thread, looking for any ideas or suggestions for partners to feature within it or for what direction the fic might go.

Concept I've been working on is a 40k themed fic where a Rogue Trader has a member of the Order Famoulous sent to his ship, as he's apparently the only living male heir of his family's main line (or at the very least his family is concerned that he hasn't sired off-spring yet or gotten hitched at least). Said Sororitas is told to ensure he continues his family's bloodline as they're a historic family (specifically they just want her to arrange a marriage for him and serve him as an advisor), however she takes such instructions too far, coordinated with other high ranking female members of the Rogue Trader crew to fuck him at every chance they get in order to impregnate as many of them as possible.

So, who should be trying to get in this Rogue Trader's pants? Any ideas/suggestions/requests? Last thread we had a decent little discussion about the ship's navigator getting in on the action and potentially coming into conflict with the SoB coordinating everything.

>>6937099

Since the guy is a rogue trader, that puts xenos- specifically eldar privateers or 'allies of convenience' on the table. (Perhaps the eldar is particularly deviant hence being a distant voyager).

you could also have... I don't want to say an Inquisitor, because the kind of power that person brings is really tough to manage, but an inquisitor's acolyte, I think is the term? Subordinate Investigator, basically, who is there for personal reasons.

>>6936499
Definitely nice to see where this is going. Also interesting to see the person writing from a neutralish civvie perspective and some thoughts regarding how Advent troops deal with the fact that they're more boots on the ground of something much larger than them than the purely loyal soldiers of it.

>>6937226
Hmm, it does put them on the table for fuckbuddies but unfortunately runs afoul of the whole breeding theme I'm planning to go for. Still, could easily be worked with/included in some way.

Something with the Inquisition though could work or sure. Perhaps an Inquisitor that relies on the RT as a contact picks up on the fact he's getting lusted after and she decides to hop in on the action (and perhaps get controlling as if she's claiming him for herself over them).

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Anyone care to make a fic of this teen boy who's a bit nervous to admit he has feelings for the older elf woman featured in the pic, whom he has a crush on. But the elf woman is the one who approaches him and confesses to the teen she also takes a fancy to him and is OK in being in a relationship with him. And the elf woman would pretty much become the lucky teen's girlfriend and she'd help introduce him to some sweet and kinky sex.

>>6937079
Sooo... Anything can be requested?

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>>6937079

Snek
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, vaginal, language barrier, bathing, teasing, kissing

Crashland
http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom, oral, vaginal, kissing, female ejaculation, bathing, teasing

Snek 2: The Sneckening (ongong)
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob

>>6937276
>>6936843
Glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to get some more done tonight.

Where do I go if I wanna read stories where the premise is making money at clinical trials that result in Tf where they either grow a dick, it gets bigger, it changes to a different dick.

Used to read these on a site back in hs but it's long gone and I don't know where else to look.

>>6937548
I can't recommend any stories about that, but I did read a really good doujin about that called "P Total Bio-Chemical Laboratory."

http://exhentai.org/g/7191/00d89e912a/

>>6937559
Thanks! Also just read your first snek story. Shits lit af

>>6937509
I don't see why not

>>6937662
Sure can.

Also, be sure to check out our counterparts on /aco/. They've got some good stuff too.

>>>/aco/720672

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Repost time.

http://pastebin.com/WjhAGBBc
SWTOR - Spira heat
Male/Female, Mirialan/Human, Oral, Consensual, One Night Stand, Woman on Top, Cowgirl, Star Wars)

>>6937733
>one night stand
disappointed

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Smaller update today, but I feel like I should have the story wrapped up by tomorrow.

http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob, handjob, orgasm denial, teasing

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>>6938398
>wrapped up

I'm looking for one (not quite smut) story involving a psyker girl and a reluctant tehcpriest falling in love, but I can't find it on the master list. Is it posted elsewhere? It was really cute and I wanted to reread it.

>>6938669
Nevermind, found it.

>>6938672
Link

>>6938682
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Of_Techpriests_and_Telepaths

>>6939095
Seen it a dozen times before, step it up.

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>>6939106
I miss UQ...

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>>6939106

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>>6939155
>>6939157
I'm here, just tired. I really want to finish my second draft of Lamia and get back to DCBK's story but my job has been grueling lately and I'm trying to split time between two hobbies in my little free time which I usually spend just recovering.

I'm still around, still lurking, just tired and wanting to get back in the swing.

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>>6939158
If it's any consolation, I just got another DCBK commish yesterday!

>>6939176
Nice. That's quite a clutch of eggs.

I like that the feet are still humanoid too.

>>6939233
You'd of been fine if you didn't post the pic. Also, not many of us here are into necro stuff. Furry isn't anything new here though.

>>6939287
Don't talk to the faggot, son.

>>6939306
But I wasn't talking to you.

>>6939142
>>6939156
Transformation is such utter garbage, holy shit.

Anyone got that picture of the incremental stages of mouthplay? I think it's two boys and one has a nose ring. I need it for visual reference.

>>6940028
Never even heard of it. Try /r/.

Does anyone have a copy of "Moving In" by CaramelSeaSalt? It was up on literotica for while, but got taken down, and the archive is not being particularly helpful. Thanks!

>>6939309
burn accepted and logged
issuing response
"If I wanted my comeback i'd scrape it off your mom's teeth."

Does anyone know how to make your stories visible from the profile on Pastebin?
It looks like you'd have to make them public for that, which is obviously not an option because they're pornographic.
As it stands people can't go to my profile and see other stuff I wrote.

Also, update to Snek 2 soon.

>>6941671
You'll have to make them public for that.

Keep a back-up, just in case.

>>6941671
All of my stuff is public. I haven't had a problem yet. From what I can tell, most of us keep our pastes public and we haven't had any issues since the Master List kept going down. That being said, if you're interested in a realistic view count, post your stories as unlisted or private first, then convert them to public later. It keeps the bots away.

>>6941894
I keep getting sent to the login page when I click the link

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>>6941926
Oh sorry I must have accidentally linked you to the edit page, lemme just delete that post.

>>6941680
>>6941685
Ok maybe I'll give that a try, thanks.

Another Snek 2 update, very nearly finished but not quite, I'm tired as fuck.

http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob, handjob, orgasm denial, teasing, vaginal

Feedback is appreciated.

>>6941671
Make a pastebin with pastebin links.

>>6941931
I find unlisted works best, though there's a limit on the number of stories you can have unlisted at once. Most people find that you can bypass that by making more than one account though.

Why do people leave their stories unlisted? As a reader, it's really annoying to have to dig through archives to find a story I liked.

>>6941966
Because having them out as public pastes can get them deleted, since Pastebin technically isn't meant to be a place to store your porn.

>>6941981
I didn't know that. Thanks, anon.

>>6941981
The only thing I've ever seen get deleted was the old Master List. I don't think that any of our writefags have had problems.

>>6942008
Most of them don't want to take the chance, though. Nobody wants their fic to be lost like the missing chapter of Xeno-Lover.

>>6942019
This is why you have them saved in word or google docs or whatever for backup

>>6937099
I remember this. One idea was for a SoB Hospitaliar who had breast implants so she could wetnurse orphan babies getting in trouble because she liked having her nipples sucked too much. So she gets sent over and is a more cute schoolgirl type who fills the virgin's first time role and will wetnurse other's babies

>>6942242
Yup, I remember that idea getting floated around a couple of times when I had brainstormed it in the past. With how I've been working on it now I don't think I'm gonna end up going in that direction (though I did have a idea involving one character I thought up and breast implants), though I'm glad to see someone even remembered that (it's almost like we're a... community or something).

>>6942242
>>6942269
Implants? Why not just have a Magos Biologis? Then you have all of the possibilities that biological modification can offer.

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The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

Chapter 16: Punk Croc Girl
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

>>6942302
>Magos Biologis
It's almost like you're reading my mind anon. I plan on making a post like in the next hour or so to get people's thoughts on the characters and scene ideas I've thought up, but one of the characters is indeed going to be a genetor/magos biologis and will be engaging in all sorts of body moding fuckery as well as standard mechanicus fuckery.

>>6942304
Did not mean to post that anonymously.

>http://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/%27s_Smut_Index
Just looked at the master smut list, and saw LC&2SB on there. I'm happy someone thought enough of it to add it. I hope you all are enjoying it.

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>>6942269
Long time ago when /wst was over on /tg I originally thought her up in her wetnurse form who got punted over to an IG squad so she wouldn't end up a Repentia. She would meet a young Krieger and end up feeding him to make sure he doesn't rhow his life away like other Jrieger's and have to compete with a Ratling mechanic for him. Yeah, more Ciphias Cain style parody than normal Grimdark

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>>6941931
Liked it. Was probably screaming "you idiot" out loud when he went into the alley the second time.
And a very daww ending.

As soon as I got to the part about rubbing her hood I immediately thought oo-mox.
Not that there's anything wrong with that. Thought it was very interesting in part 1 as well.

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So, regarding the concept I've been working on mentioned in >>6937099, I've come up with ideas for characters vying for the Rogue Trader's attention. Specifically, I've thought up 5 characters, the SoB, the Seneschal, the Navigator (or Astropath), the Genetor, the RT's bodyguard.

SoB
>stereotypical SoB
>lacks experience w/ sex, but committed to assignment
>"it's fine if it's all for the emperor"
>gets TOO into it eventually

Seneschal
>plotting type: was planning to seduce the RT before SoB showed up
>wants him to herself
>aspires to make sure she "wins"
>can't stand other "harpies" going after him
>not bdsm-y, but domineering
>is eventually "broken" by RT or other girls

Navigator (or Astropath)
>virgin
>has crush on RT, hope's he'll look past her mutant-ness
>"but that's forbidden love!", etc.
>may potentially be possessed by demon wanting to toy with everyone

Genetor
>the pervert
>gets off on the idea of everyone breeding
>"oops, I injected everyone with aphrodisiacs and fertility enhancers!"
>phallic mechadendrites
>may also try to get knocked up herself

Bodyguard
>tomboyish, flat chest
>has cyber arms/legs (combat injuries plus enhancements to abilities)
>closest thing to a friend to the RT
>loves RT, hasn't made a move though
>is insecure over cyber limbs, chest, etc.
>genetor helps her "improve" her assets, push her to go after the RT

I've also considered having a Missionary type character (as in the role in Rogue Trader) who attempts to help the SoB in her efforts, though I feel like such a character would be superfluous.

Anyway, thoughts on these character ideas? Ideally I'd be giving each of their character's their own one-off or might pair a few of them together with the RT, and would thus obviously see this being a multi-chapter thing. That or just one long story w/ multiple scenes occurring.

Can someone help me out here? I've been looking for good trap stuff that doesn't involve masturbation and preferably not crossdressing. It might be more twink at that point but whatever.

I looked at 1d4chan but the only story that seemed interesting was the one by Proxy and their links are all dead. If you have any suggestions I'd really appreciate it.

Also, I saw that there wasn't a lot of blackmail tagged. Is this hard to write or just not something people are interested in?

>>6942952
Overall, we're a strange offshoot of vanilla. Pretty much every story is M/F, even if one or both participants is a cosmic horror, dragon, or giant insect. I also struggle to think of any stories we have with a "dark" tone. Blackmail is a relatively niche fetish as it is, and the writefags and audience here alike seem relatively united on sunshine and sparkles.

>>6942952
>Also, I saw that there wasn't a lot of blackmail tagged.

Personally I quite like the brand of dub/noncon that comes from the girl being forced or pressured into sex - unwilling consent, basically. A lot of the noncon or dubcon stories in my pastebin account will play with those sorts of themes, if you fancy taking a dig through. Tags are in the masterlist up top.

>>6942662
is the SoB supposed to the be Famulous sister?

>>6942983
Yep. Call it a carryover of our /tg/ heritage.

It only took two months longer than I originally said, but I finally finished the sequel to Mind Games.

Mind Games 2
http://pastebin.com/JiaAnz9a
Tags: M/F, 40k, Sister of Battle, psyker, mind control, reverse mindbreak, handjob, oral, deepthroat, orgy.

This story turned out to be a lot more difficult than I expected. I couldn't seem to find a premise that I liked. In any case, comments and criticism are always welcome.

Now that that's done, I'm turning my attention to the first-time consentacles request I picked up in an earlier thread. I'm going to be out-of-state quite a bit in the near future, so I wouldn't expect anything for about a month (although miracles do happen). After that, I'm going to have to stop taking more requests and clear my current backlog. I have about half a dozen WiPs ranging from a page or two to only missing an ending. Hopefully I'll be able to crank a few of those out in short order.

>>6942662
Just write it. The idea sounds fun and so do the character.

>>6942662
Uh, the Senechal is the Ordo Famulous? isnt' she supposed to be the planner behind everything?

>>6943079
praise be, man. Praise be.

>>6943020
>>6943098
The SoB is supposed to be the sister from the Order Famulous.

>>6943093
Plan to, just wanted to float out the character ideas and hear people's thoughts or see if they had a problem with any of them. Glad you find the idea and characters fun sounding though.

>>6943079
Just read it over, loved it. Premise is great and you've got a way with words.

>>6943002
Thanks, I'm readings cups and crowns right now and the first half is a bit closer to what I want. I'll try searching for dubious/non consensual on other sites to see if I can find anything. Maybe I'll also try looking through the slave general for some borderline stuff.

>>6943177
SoB are not of the Orders Famulous. They're of the Orders Militant.

>>6943187
Hmm, you're right. I think when I was just writing things out I just assumed all members of the Adepta Sororitas were considered Sisters of Battle and thus used the term there, so my bad.

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I just finished the second part of a blue slime story I didn't post here because I thought the first part was too short: http://pastebin.com/cge4fjme

Tags: hetero, monster girl, slime girl, oral, sexual feeding, super soft sci-fi, experiment gone awry, sexual exhaustion, language barrier.

I took a request from the previous thread and kinda flipped it around a bit.

http://pastebin.com/uFKqrqP9

Tags: F!DemonxMale, nipple play, vaginal, minor dom/sub, minor masochism, insect anatomy

Yell at me.

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I wish to see something based on this pic that Hayton did. I'm thinking F Pandaren Monk x M Human Paladin. Thrown in some Impreg and Pregsex, too. Maybe even some persecution against the couple because its taboo or whatever. Has an East meets West kinda feel to it. So anyway, this Paladin is a hothead or something and the Monk has to teach him balance in order to be an effective fighter. Yeah. That should do it nicely.

>>6943592
you're probably going to ge banned if you leave the pick up since you can't post furry on /d/ except for the furry stuff the /d/ mods approve of

So I have this half-idea for a one-shot, and I'd appreciate some help fleshing it out.

The core is focused on a gal who happens to be milky, and works as a maid. (Yes it's a pun on milkmaid).

Right now I'm juggling a few ideas. Like is she a human, or some fantasy race. Is she from an existing setting, or some original locale? So far my top-two contenders are cat-girl or cutie-elf. No matter what though, she's going to be buxom.

Other challenges include her personality- before I started writing this post, i was mulling over her having something of an exhibitionist streak- not so much as to deliberately expose herself, but lactating in public might be particularly fun for her. Related to this- how does she feel about her milking- ambivalent, embarrassed, a guilty pleasure, or wholly embracing it?

Lastly- situations, what sexy-fun predicaments can she find herself in? Does her employer want to arrange a private taste-test? Is she caught out in an awkward situation like at the market?

Open to ideas, and aside from 'busty and milky', nothing's really set in stone.

>>6943079
Neat, a sequel.

Expected slightly more harsh repercussions at the end but it works.

Error at line 97.
>body body

>>6943600

Riiiiiiiiiiight.

Because all the other requests for fics with Worgen and Khajits AREN'T furry.

Gotcha.

/sarcasm

>>6943745
Where the fuck did you just walk in from? Also he's referring to the image you posted, specifically.
Furry belongs in /b/, read the rules.

>>6943756
Not him, but we never had a problem with "furry" stuff and quite a few stories made in /wst/ can count has furry. I was more referring to how the /d/ mods will go after certain furry images, but not touch other ones. Like all those tf threads, threads of woman being fucked by monsters/animals/furry creatures, and similar stuff like that. It's really just the mods/janitors that still have a hate boner for furry stuff while most people on this site are neutral or like certain characters.

>>6943756

Actually, Furry belongs in Trash.

But that's beside the point I want to make.

You need to purge your lists of smut fiction then.

Because I've come across quite a few that can qualify as being Furry.

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The ironic bit is that we never even had any requests for Worgen or Khajits, so that guy is almost certainly just shitposting.

But in all seriousness, if you don't like the request, ignore it. It can go with the other metric fuckton of requests that also get ignored for lack of people able or willing to write them. Wouldn't be the first time a request gets passed over, and sure as shit won't be the last.

TL;DR, see pic related, put on your big boy pants, and try writing it yourself first.

>But I'm not a good writer, anon!
You'd be surprised how many writefags thought that about themselves once as well.

>>6943775
But positive thinking doesn't turn you into a good writer. Only practice does that. Practice and feedback to be real. But you can't depend on the latter happening, and since the former depends so much on the latter it all seems hopeless in the end and that hopelessness starts to fuck you up and turn you hopeless and then you wonder why the hell you're even trying and things only get worse as the the feelings get bluer and crushing like deep sea pressure and it all just spirals out of control like so many windmills in a summer typhoon in the holland baghams wit hall the stinging rain on your skin cutting like those tiny cocktail swords tghey have at gay bars that you freuquent because yor so insecure about your boyparts and it all serves to make your writing even nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo nogo gono

>>6943801
positive thinking gets you started, keeps you going for lack of any feedback, and gives you the spine to take criticism without crumbling like a sand castle, you mopey faggot.

>>6943766
>>6943775
Lnks to furry stuff is fine, but no directly posting it here.

>>6943923

FFS fine. I won't do it again. I can't delete the post file because I'm on some shit mobile chan app. Just don't fucking ban my ass.

Panadren are a fantasy race like Ogres or whatever. Talk about splitting hairs.

>>6943938
We don't have a problem, it's the mods who do

>>6943945
No. We really don't want furfags coming here. Once you let one in, they'll multiply, and all that will be left on /d/ will be furries and futa. No room for anything else.

>>6943821
THIS

The time you wasted playing the poor pitiful me act on 4chan of all places could have been better spent practicing your work.If you get no feedback here, look for it elsewhere as well. Just do something other than complain.

Failing that, consider asking your doctor about getting antidepressants or something, you sound like you need them real bad.

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>>6943960
Shut up and post smut or GTFO. The mods can handle your furfag boogeymen without you screaming like an idiot about them.

>>6943960
>loads of furry stuff in the master list and more made in these threads all the time
>thinking the people in these threads aren't already into "furry stuff"
>still believing in the furry boogeyman
>still not realizing 4chan has been full of furries since the start and that hasn't changed at all
the funniest part is the furries on 4chan hate the lifestyle idiots even more than the "yiff in hell" meme guys

>>6943974
Most of the furries stay on /k/

>>6944064
and /v/ and /co/ and /tg/ and /trash/ and /b/ and /a/ and /aco/ and /d/ and etc etc
/tg/ probably has the most board relevant "furry" characters/creatures/games/etc. Hell, there are several legitimate pen-and-paper games that are furry roleplaying games.

>>6944072
Honestly, I thought the hysteria about furries died out years ago. Other than a few really stubborn autists, who cares any more? The meme about hordes of furries waiting to flood into any community that even passingly mentions somewhat-anthropomorphic characters turned out to be bullshit in the end anyway.

>>6942983
>I also struggle to think of any stories we have with a "dark"
as the fuck if
there's a fucking load of greasy as fuck 'dubcon'/noncon shit all over the fucking place. honestly, a notable chunk of the porno here would be LWoP shit in even the most vague of real worlds, so I don't even slightly agree

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>>6943302
slime best waifu/10

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>A manga features a drug that causes a girl's clitoris to turn into a dick.
>However, a partial dose causes the clit to instead grow into a large, insanely sensitive organ that causes the girl to suffer constant orgasms. Said girl wants desperately to ejaculate from the pseudopenis, but it lacks the plumbing, so they're in a state of constant lust as though they were being held back by an unbreakable cock ring.

I was wondering if anyone wanted to do a story where a sadomasochistic dominatrix uses said medicine in this way to torture another girl, leaving her clit permanently in this unbearable half-way state, with the Dominatrix revealing that she, herself, had taken a partial dose so that she could enjoy the torturous sensation, ending with the two tribbing and frotting their half-cocks until they grow exhausted from the constant orgasms.

>>6944450
What manga is this image from? I am interested in it!

>>6944454
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/921539/edb9883c36/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/934101/0140771e47/

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>>6944450
>>6944454
>>6944460

been absent again: ive been tied up with stuff, and i haven't been able to really spend enough time drawing to finish much stuff.

hopefully I'll have more time to fool around with this hobby again.

anyways i uploaded incomplete sketches to my imgur album for the time being. nothing worth linking directly, unfortunately. just an attempt to demonstrate I've not completely dropped off the world again.

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Requesting really desperately, fic extreme femdom, a very voluptuous domme humiliating a German male slave (yes I'm looking for humiliation of his German nationality) including foot worship, with lots of kicking and trampling on. Ass worship with lots of ass licking. And pissing on. Most importantly just take it to the extreme, leave the slave ruined for life. Feel free to message if you need more details.

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11988120/1/

Futanari rape story.

>>6944576
Pls anyone, I need this so desperately...

>>6944591

for those too lazy to hit link, it's futanari Cammy and Chun-Li abducting and raping Mika.

>>6944603
You realize that whining about how desperately you need it just makes you look bad, right?

One post is enough. If people want to write it they will. Otherwise, tough luck.

>>6944528
That one with the two Dark Elves in it is great. The kiss is a nice touch.

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I enjoy writing, and a lot of what I write is /d/ material, and it's mostly centaurs. I'm posting here to look for good story ideas. So if you're into centaurs, I wrote up a longer description on Pastebin of what kinds of stories I like writing: http://pastebin.com/0KMNfi5D

If you have an idea that fits the categories I described there, please feel free to suggest it! (And if this isn't to your tastes, please just ignore this posting!)

I'm writing a Warhammer Fantasy Norscan male rape on a Nordlander boy.

Taking requests now, I plan to write out every version but...which first.
>Threesome with two lads getting ploughed rough
>Sickly sweet ending with boy wife for the Norscan
>Bad end with mind breaking and slavery

I'm still writing up the non-sexual build up to each story. So I got some time before writing it all out.

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>>6943514
Bumping with an unrelated image

>>6944880
Going off your pastebin, would a story involving a male centaur tribe trying to save itself by abducting human boys and forcing them through magical rituals to become centaur wives be up your alley?

What if it involved some particularly cunning boys who use it as a way to seize power and manipulate the tribe for their own benefit? I always love to see turnabout.

>>6944880
Here's a starting point.

>Warrior / Rogue / Mage 3-way party are clearing out some kind of dungeon. They are the archetypal RPG characters. Could be a cave, haunted castle, forest, etc.

>Warrior is male, Mage is female, Rogue doesn't matter but I'm picturing male because they're a dick.

>Warrior and Mage have a great back-to-back fighting style where they always know what the other is doing

>While they fight like this, Rogue can always be counted on to be doing their own thing, but that's useful when Rogue is able to fight without being attacked.

>Mage heals Warrior and protects them with shielding spells, Warrior takes monsters' attacks head on, both of them deliver powerful blows when the other is in danger. They're totally protecting one another, more than they're fighting for a cause, but they refuse to see what's in front of them.

>A powerful curse is triggered, while the party of three are fighting a large monstrous creature - a giant spider, a haunted suit of armour riding a haunted suit of horse barding, an actual hellsteed, etc.

>The mage is able to throw up a protective barrier

>When the smoke clears, the Warrior and/or Mage have been fused with the monster they were fighting.

>The Rogue ran the fuck away like a Rogue.

>Warrior and Mage have to learn to deal with the new body that one or both of them has, with its monstrous side occasionally trying to force them to do things.

>The can't return to society like this!

>>6944949


>But they have to find the Rogue and try to get the Rogue to help them, or at least make the rogue not tell everyone about the new, abhorrent form

>But it's not... so abhorrent, is it?

>And with caring for one another, Warrior and Mage's feelings blossom and the caring they had for one another can't be denied any more.

>You may be a strange creature-human hybrid, but you were always getting people's attention before. You could have had any of them, every village we visited SOMEONE was making eyes at you. Yes, even if you can't see it, I could.

>What do you mean, people were making passes at ME as well!?

>But... nobody would want me before, surely? And now that I'm a half-spider creature, nobody wou-

>interruptedbysuddenkiss.jpg

>legallyrequiredmutualconfession.mp4

>lawfulhotdickings.gif

>>6944948
Sorry, TG = thumbs-down for me.

>>6944949
This has potential. I'm going to have to think about it a bit, but it has a good vibe to it.

>>6944959
Cool. I was trying to come up with something that pressed all your buttons, so if I succeeded without hitting a nope that's good to know.

>While also playing to my own healer/tank loving relationship thing.

>>6944946
Looks plenty related to me.

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I'm intrigued.
I wrote something like this a while back.
It's not straight up erotic fiction like most stuff here but is rooted in it.
For some reason it turned out pretty gay, I'm n-not gay though.
It's more of a trap thing, I guess.

To summarize:
>Combat society where mental state affects body type.
>Masculine behavior promotes strength, submissive behavior leeches it.
>The more submissive the behavior you display, the harsher the effects. ( Slender arms instead of muscled, etc )

Openly submissive behavior with other people present is the worst, private submissive behavior after, submissive thoughts come after.
Having submissive thoughts doesn't really affect you that much but if you have constant stream of submissive thoughts, it'll add up.

>Society where you can literally be fucked into a femboy but you can come back if you don't break
>If you lose a battle straight up, you become property of the victor.
>He can choose to keep you. Recruiting for an army or simply sell you to a slave auction.
>At the auction they can go anywhere, from whorehouses to farmhands.

Continued

>>6945030

Example:
Strength, although gained with great risk and effort can be lost seemingly overnight.
When you fight another opponent and win, surrounded by enemies and allies alike, you’ll feel powerful, masculine.
Thus, greatly enhancing your own strength.
The loser however is forced to admit to himself that he is inferior to the person he lost to, submissive.
Even worse he lost while his allies watched and suffers a great blow to his self-worth and ends up losing a great deal of strength.
In the cities there is hierarchy, a loss is regrettable but the kingdom will make sure the warrior recuperates as well as possible.
He serves to protect the city after all so he needs to be able continue to do so.
Small war-camps however have it much worse.
A leader can be challenged by an equal and lose. He loses strength and victor gains it.
The second strongest could then challenge the previous leader and with his strength reduced, lose that as well.
This circle can continue until the previous leader finds himself not shouting commands on the battlefield but rather finds himself stowed away in the back of a tent, panting on all fours.
Bottom of the food-chain.

It's a society based on combat, you can run away ( If there is nobody to witness, you won't become a slave ) but you can't run away from your own mind.
By refusing a fight you're openly admitting you won't want to indulge in manly combat.
Could also be perceived as submissive behavior, leeching your strength / muscle.

The world also contains pills / powders that promote and improve on the effects of masculine behavior. Very, very expensive.
There are also powders, considered poison, that stop of break down muscle gain trough positive behavior. Affordable.

The story contains muscle woman, feminine boys and everything in between.

Continued

>>6945033

Final:

The MC in my story was originally highly-skilled warrior and in service of the royal army.
Enemies seeking to beat him ( Beating a renowned warrior could turn out to be quite the boost in power after all ) poisoned him with the negative powders.
Ultimately he was kicked out of the army because he longer had the strength / stamina that was minimally required of soldiers, thus discharged.
He and his younger sister are removed from the army lodgings for soldiers and their families and returned to the street.
With his strength at an all-time low, his muscled arms turned slender and weak, he tries to the best of his ability to fulfill mercenary jobs.
He's still able to beat enemies trough skill and experience, selling their belongings and turning them free. He's able to support himself and his sister.
I don't want to give too much away but the MC wasn't able to run from a fight, to many witnesses, and is forced to fight a mercenary of a known slave-master.
The mercenary beats the MC trough overwhelming strength. You can try to deflect blows but if the blow basically launches you across the fighting pit, you won't last long.
MC is put up for auction at the slave-house, once the pride of the royal army he now stands before them slender and feminine, changes brought onto him by his public, overwhelming defeat.
He's bought by a whore-master and the story continues from there.

Would anybody willing to read something like that?
I've got some stuff written but if people want to I'll improve it and post it.

>>6945030
Literally Clan: Inception

http://themysteryprocess.github.io/clan-inception/

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>>6945055
What.
I don't think I'll ever have a original thought in my life, shit.

>>6944925
Shameless bump for attention to this.

>>6945081
Nothing is ever original. Focus more on the small difference you do with similar ideas. Little Red Riding Hood can be told many different ways, porn or SFW.

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>A female adventurer is attacked by a tentacle monster, but subdues and kills it.
>However, as she tries to head back to town to recover, the beast's venom starts to take effect...
>...And a nearby female monster(Harpy, perhaps) starts enjoying the show.

>>6944925
Bad end, please.

>>6945158
>venom starts to take effect
>that pic
Oh I'm on board with this.

>>6945158
>it's not venom
>it's an egg
>it's a symbiote with a complex life cycle

>>6944294
Perhaps I've been around the internet too long, but I don't really see dubcon/noncon as being particularly dark. Rape is like salt and pepper in internet pornography. Almost nothing we have really has what I would consider a "bad end". There is almost no snuff and nothing tagged NTR.

I guess it just depends on where you draw the line. Compared to a lot of other places, we're rather upbeat here.

>>6945346
You got it.

>>6945427
Bad end is the aftermath. Get raped and never get over it, die, become a junkie, never see the outside of the rape dungeon, etc.

>>6944528
I saw the first couple of these when they went up in your gallery a few days ago. The first sketchier one, http://i.imgur.com/ww7aM8v.png, was really good, it's not at all the angle I imagined when I saw the request being made, but it does work. I don't know what the original requester was after, but I do get the sort of dignified resistance feel from it.

And like >>6944672 said, the one with the pair of Witch Elves, or Sorceresses or whatever they are, that's lovely. I dig the contrast between the two couples and your expressions are definitely coming along a lot.

Either way it's nice to see you still around. Hopefully it's good IRL stuff keeping you busy.

>>6945437
By that logic, everything has a bad end because everyone dies (eventually). Again, I guess it just comes down to a matter of perspective and preference. We do have a shitload of dubcon/noncon, but I maintain that it's still relatively tame. I've seen quite a bit of smut that I get about halfway through and stop in disgust at the idea that anyone could get off to it. I've never had that happen here.

>>6945466
Pretty much all the dubcon stories made in /wst/ can be summed up has
>Oh no! This monster/alien/etc wants to kill me
>No wait, it just wants to have sex with me.
>I'm okay with this outcome.
>Also, I married the monster/alien/etc and we're now a happy family.

>>6945469
Hey, you write what you know. I'd imagine that most of us here would take that path. I would gladly put myself on the line to be the first to fuck some new monster/alien/etc.

>>6945474
Xenophilia and worlbuilding are two fetishes required to be a fa/tg/uy.

hey, anyone up for writing a Super Hero fic?

>>6945439
Norscan boy raping isn't too interesting right? I know you dislike male gay, and rape so...I'll see myself out.

>>6945427
Not exactly. It's more accurate to say that we get attached to our characters and actively freak out if bad things happen to them and don't get better by the time the story ends.

This also explains why snuff and NTR are avoided here as well. Those things simply don't work if you like the characters beyond their sex appeal.

>>6945499
What's stopping you from posting your request in the first place?

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>>6944949
>>6944952

So, hey, 5,200 words later, and I haz me a centaur story with a happy ending (in both senses of the phrase).

http://pastebin.com/C89tdPG0

It'll be on Literotica shortly, which is a better long-term host for this kind of stuff than Pastebin (IMO).

So, um, if anybody else wants to suggest something else good for >>6944880, I'm ready to write about some more centaurs >_>

>>6945779
How do you feel about frontpussy?

>>6945805

Kinda weird for me.

As the sign at the front of the store says: "All deliveries in rear" :-)

>>6945811
I guess that in a setting with male centaurs it would be weird. Frontpenis isn't nearly as appealing.

>>6945779
Try a more fluffy/SoL story about a centaur stallion and his humanoid mate. They're madly in love but there's all those little annoyances when you have a quadruped living amongst bipeds (or the contrary).

>>6945779
Mind posting the stories?

>>6945779
Damn, that was fast. I post a vague idea, go to sleep, and wake up to this being posted.

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Working on the final update to Snek 2, will have it out by tonight.

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>>6946473

>>6946473
Yayyyyyyy

Okay, here's an idea I had for a story but you never get around to writing. So there's this guy who was short, but he's really good at basketball, and he is in love with this girl who's on the girls basketball team but she's like a foot taller than him. She's in love with him too, but she's afraid that she's too tall for him, as well. This is in the not-too-distant future, so we've got Nanobots and gene therapy or something or other, so they both go to a clinic to try to get altered in a way that they think the other person is going to like. But while they're there, the engineered pills that they were going to take get switched up so he gets the pill she was going to take and she gets the pill he was going to take. The pill she was going to take had a general "more womanly" setting, as well as making her shorter. So this guy gets even shorter, loses his beard and all hair below his neck, his scalp hair grows really quickly, and he develops boobs and womanly hips. His penis is still there though, and while his skeleton shrank he kept the same muscle mass, so he becomes this short, buff dickgirl. His pills supposed to make him grow taller and increase his manly attributes, so she grows even taller and grows a penis. They find out about each other, at first they're disgusted and embarrassed and scared. He goes back to her after he realizes he can't stop thinking about her dick.s o now these two accidental futas get together and live happily ever after.

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>>6946491
That is so incredibly cliche and trite that it's physically sickening to me.

>>6946531
Aw boo hoo hoo. You hurt my feewings

>>6946991
He is right though anon.

>>6945055

How am I supposed to play this game? What's the goal? How do I win fights?

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Done!

Snek 2:
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob, handjob, orgasm denial, teasing, vaginal

Tell me what you guys think, did I satisfy your requests for romance and closure?
Now I gotta think of something else to write about.

>>6947471
You seem to have an affinity for monster girl femdom. I'd suggest running down the list of candidate girls and seeing if anything strikes your fancy.

I want to write my own stories but writing makes me super anxious and unable to think clearly
Maybe I could start with captions?

>>6947493
Don't build bad habits by writing captions. Write what you can. Proofread it yourself, then post it here. We're always glad to help new writers

>>6947485
That's good advice, maybe I'll have a look.

>>6947493
You can be forgiven for writing badly in order to get feedback and improve, people who make captions go straight to hell.

>>6947497
>>6947499
Aw, okay. I'll do what i can.

>>6947513
Try putting your favorite fantasy to words, that's a good place to start. You can always just write whatever pops into your head then go back and clean it up later.
Whatever you write about someone here will appreciate it.

>>6947242
You play rock/paper/scissors where there's like ten versions of rock and paper and two of them matter more than the rest.

>>6947605

Which two? Is there a guide anywhere?

>>6946491
>So there's this guy who was short, but he's really good at basketball
Fuckin what.
>It's transformation shit
Welp nothing of value was lost after all.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G_IqYtpp6KuEWtVGAhhI5tDyQep4tPKZlN_TN0_nPPo/edit?usp=sharing

someone care to read and give some feedback? The idea is nothing new, but I got bored :/

>>6947696
I notice no one else is trying to piss on people's parade here.

Did you have a bad day Anon? Shall I share my favorite transformation stories with you to soothe your wounded soul?

>>6947697
Tags, please.

>>6947493
Good captions don't exist. Don't attempt to be the exception.

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I started a story about a time traveler fucking historical chicks.

It's pretty vanilla for now, but I wanted to let things go crazy and weird shit happens due to time traveling.

I'm also gonna illustrate it. So here's the rough draft of the pics and story

http://pastebin.com/FuaY1fx0

Any comments, critiques or ideas/requests?

Anyone interested in writing a chapter?

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>>6948027
pic 2

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>>6948027
ending,,

I probably will draw one more pic for chapter 1, what should it be?

>>6948027
>tfw you will never save Jeanne d'Arc from being burned then pop her cherry

>>6948033
I'm pretty sure her captors beat ya to the punch.

>>6948035
Nope. Don't be a faggot.

>>6948035
And good 'ole Gilles probably beat them to it a couple of years before that.

Tags: Extreme Size, Gore, Magic, Satyr, Ritual, Demonic Worship, Pregnant, Violent.

http://pastebin.com/caSdMFhZ

Please let me know what you think. This is still rather rough and I am aware that my tenses aren't consistent. Probably needs two or three more drafts. Is a prologue to a much larger work I am compiling.

>>6943079
This looks really interesting. The link to the original (posting mainly for my benefit b/c I don't want to read the sequel without the original): http://pastebin.com/mnzMXu7k

>>6943801
I think I just witnessed someone have a mental breakdown.

>>6944064
Take your clips and shove them where the sun don't shine.

>>6944925
Second vote for bad end. But I'm interested in all of them.

>>6945036
Sounds interesting enough, but I wonder if strength can be lost that easily, can't it be gained equally easily through a badass mental state?

>>6945081
Literally nothing is original, don't worry about it. Plus a lot of fetish authors (like myself) end up writing the same themes with a different setting and characters but it can seem formulaic to people who aren't into it after a while. Just write what you enjoy. You're your primary audience after all.

>>6945477
I thought 40k was also required?

>>6948040
ND, is that you?

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Hey guys, I write a lot of pet play stuff, and I currently have two stories up right now! While none of it is particularly too hard core, it's still pretty kinky. Feel free to give me feedback and ideas.

https://platinumgriff.wordpress.com/blog/

>>6948039
Tags: Brutal, Bondage, Unclean, Femdom, Male Rape.

http://pastebin.com/mf8GFxRs

Another piece in the same world. Please let me know what you think of the content.

>>6942952
I was already planning on a story involving a boy raised as a girl but who is trying his best to appear manly (and probably failing miserably) who then has "boy sleepover" times with a more manly boy. Masturbation will most likely be involved, sorry. If this interests you, maybe you'll have something to read.

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>>6948067
Same author here. Stories include a male dom and his female kitty, and a female dom and her puppy boy.

>Pic related

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>>6948027
That was actually quite a pleasant read! You get bonus points for using proper punctuation and curly quotes. There are some minor spelling mistakes throughout (e.g. “felix” in line 53, “he manhood” in line 54), but I find the style to be enjoyable.

For people to write their own chapters, it might be useful to set up an episodic style of narration in which the status quo is more or less maintained after each story. Otherwise, as time goes on, you might find Felix collecting a harem of increasingly unmanageable size back home. I suppose whether that’ll become a problem largely depends on the scope you have in mind for your story.

Do you intend to limit time travel to actual history? It appears that travelling into the relative future is possible (at least in Lua’s case. I can also think of some very unconventional applications for the power to selectively age people by hitting them with wrenches, should it ever become more controllable.

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Something about two girls who transform into catgirls on every night with a full moon.

They gain feline ears, tails, nails, vision, speech, and athletic abilities. Their body temperature rises so they prefer going nude.

Examples:
- undressing each other while transforming together, then erotic cat play
- younger girl transforming for the first time, older girl gives moral support
- sneaking through town in nude catgirl forms for thrills, then making love at some romantic spot that only they can reach (with their high jump, better balance, etc)

So, I'm a hobbyist sci-fi writer that decided write about a future where the future is, quite literally, /d/. All that I have is the introduction, but this was quite a lot to write to begin with. Let me know what you think!

Contains:
>futanari
>dicknipples
>a huge cock
>multi breasts

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20643494/

>>6948282
Too bad you posted it in the /tg/ thread where /d/ stuff isn't that well liked.

>>6948283

That must have not been me. I don't recall making a post about this on /tg/, in fact, I don't really even go to that board.

If that's not what you meant, than as far as I'm concerned I'm confused because this is the e-lit general thread on /d/.

If you do mean that this was posted on /tg/, I'm flattered b/c that's not me.

>>6948300
This general was originally on /tg/ until it was forced here due to shitposters and incompetent mods. The bulk of the writers and anons here are /tg/ people and don't really bother with the rest of /d/. Even back when we were on /tg/ dickgirl shit and similar nonsense was disliked and avoided by pretty much all of us. I'm saying you'll not get much of an audience or readers from this general. Even with all the fantasy/scifi/monster/etc stuff pretty much all of it is very vanilla.

>>6948305

Oh ok, thanks for the info. Whoever posts these threads should really consider saying something about that in the OP.

>>6948310
>(formerly /wst/)
>/tg/ is mentioned several times in the OP
>the master smut list named "/tg/'s smut list"
It is. Not saying you can't post here, just that the audience for what you're peddling isn't going to be very high in this thread. You can even look at the threads to see what stories and request are being done and notice the trend in how the more vanilla /tg/ stuff is what's focused on mainly by most here.

>>6948283
>>6948313
t. fun police

You're being rude to newcomers.

>>6937518
I love these snek stories, dat lamia, dat HL2 style setting

>>6948251
Thanks for reading, I'm doing some proofing again.

No harems, I was thinking of just keeping it Lua and Felix as the main characters for my parts and other characters would remain in their respective times, like a Dr. Who episode.

The next chapter is going to be about the technology getting away from him, so other authors can have their own characters interacting with history and generally mucking up the present.

I'm not sure about traveling into the future, but the present changing due to interference will
create a bunch of alternative time lines.

I never thought about being able to control the time wrench, thats a good idea.

>>6937099
You can have the super closet nympho female tech priest. He has mars tech engines on his ship and she has been dedicated to thier maintanence. The faster she has to coax them to go, the more they speak to her and sunce he is capitain she cosiders him the embodiment of thier desire. Later if you want to go real /d/ you can have her go a little heretic and meld with the engines feeding only off of his cum and creating ancient tech integrated children. You know "For the Emperor"

>>6948684
I’m glad to hear that. Time-travel stories can become a terrible mess very quickly if you actually try to keep them internally consistent. I can see Lua becoming a rather interesting character as she gradually becomes aware of modern technology and learns the language (depending on whether you intend focus on her or on “changing history” one girl at a time). I look forward to your next chapter, and might write something based on a similar premise myself – perhaps about two or three scientists getting stuck in the distant past together…

>>6947697
I’ve taken the liberty of suggesting a few minor corrections in your document. You seem to have a fairly clear idea of what exactly you find arousing (possession, loss of control, some degree of masochism), though the story seems somewhat unfinished.

I would suggest expanding on the descriptions of what the original mind feels – the current descriptions are limited to screams and sobs (two very physical modes of expression which are unavailable to the victim), and the sensations are described rather simply as “pain”. Perhaps one could expand those? A particularly harsh slap on the butt might leave a lingering, stinging sensation and a glowing warmth. The possessed girl might experience a vague feeling of arousal despite herself, or come to look forward to her host’s lewder actions (and be taunted for it). The inability to move might heighten her awareness of every single touch, similar to the way a lover’s fingertips gently moving over a sensitive patch of skin.

>>6948073
>Unclean
Does this mean that it's inter-caste stuff?

>>6948300
There's actually a good amount of futa on the smut list, but dicknipples and multibreasts is usually a bit much.

>>6948724
No the literal sense of the word. Dirty.

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I'm a complete newfag when it comes to writing erotica, but I might as well post it here

http://pastebin.com/UfmZsCZn
> Monster Musume, monster girl, Polt, futa, oral, vaginal, ahegao, teasing, edging, ejaculation, futa ejaculation

I have some other stories I'm going to try and update, but college is starting soon and the application process is hell incarnate

>>6948507
Not him, but I suppose it's important that they know. It's been a while since the old /wst/ name last saw the light of day on its original board, after all- I wouldn't be surprised if some people who frequent here never even heard of it.

>>6948727
Additionally, the futa fics that do get posted tend to be held to a higher standard than usual. Go ahead and post stuff like that if you wish- but be warned that you'll be dealing with a rather tough crowd which won't be won over by those fetishes unless their execution is above and beyond the norm.

All that aside, our counterparts on /aco/ are much less averse to writing about those more extreme fetishes than many of us here are, so it may be worth a shot dropping a line over there as well.

>>6948067
I'm going to give the Mrow story a read later today, but I can offer some advice based on what I read in the first few paragraphs.

Something I noticed is that you use the world 'my' a lot, which is really hard to get around when writing in the first person. Instead of "I clacked away endlessly at my keyboard, trying to finish an essay for my math class", you might omit the second 'my' and leave it just as 'finish an essay for math class'

>>6948834

I am the poster of >>6948282

>I wouldn't be surprised if some people who frequent here never even heard of it.

Yeah, unlike what >>6948507 thought I'm not a newcomer. I've been browsing this board for something like 7 years and I've never even known about the existence of the /tg/ fiction thread. In my opinion I think it's pretty dumb to have a thread for an outside board hosted on another board. I'm not mad, nor am I trying to insult you guys for being here, but this is honestly a silly situation.

>>6948871
Yes, we know. When the exile happened, the only alternative on 4chan to /d/ was /b/...and you can imagine how well THAT would have turned out.

There's nothing we could have done about it then, and even less so now. I've often wished that there was a dedicated board for erotic fiction so we wouldn't need to worry about such things, but after several unanswered feedback tickets requesting that I'm not holding my breath over such a thing happening anytime soon.

Still, as long as we're here we ought to stick together as writers. There's no point in bickering as to what fics should or shouldn't be posted here. Me, I'm not overly interested in the fetishes you specialize in myself, but if the writing itself is good then I have no quarrel with them.

>>6948888

You guys could always make a board on eightchan. Maybe your post number is a sign.

>>6948900
I don't think that there's a word for how slow that would be. "Tectonic" isn't slow enough.

>>6948911
/3/ would be moving faster

>>6948911

Yeah, it's unfortunate, but true. You know, as I said I've been browsing this board for years and the last couple of years have been really challenging for everyone involved. Bad mods, shadowbans, janitors... I honestly thought that this place would be free from the drama because /d/ has nothing to do with drama, but I guess those days are just part of my teen years now. Man, this is really sad.

>>6948911
Plus, there would be no way to inform those left behind of the move whatsoever. Even moving to this board from /tg/ left several of the old writers behind due to the suddenness of the shift. Changing to an entirely different website would leave us with only a skeleton crew, so to speak- it just wouldn't be enough to sustain itself.

But I think we've spent too much time dwelling on the past, it's better that we focus on what we're working on now and plan to work on in the future. Or want to see, you know what I mean.

>>6948888
>>6948900
What's the problem with /d/?

>>6948924
Nothing inherently wrong, but much less traffic and much less of a writefag "culture" compared to /tg/.

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>>6948928
But fortunately, we're working to change that little by little. We won't accomplish that by just indulging in nostalgia and talking about the old days, though. That smut isn't going to write itself, folks.

>>6948928
I getcha. I hope the thread doesn't go anywhere. Or at least I hope I know where it goes if it leaves. I'm not from /tg/ . I just seen /efg/ show up one day and have been tempted to write since, but never had the time.

>>6948929
Just once I'd like to see a brown elf without gold eyes and silver hair.

>>6948929
>That smut isn't going to write itself, folks.
You first.

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>>6948936
Well, now you can scratch it off your list, eh?

>>6948920
I'm honestly kind of glad the shift happened, we can write about whatever we like here, nonsensical 40K fics and tired, trite stories about elves and dwarves were getting fucking old. There are only so many variations of those formulas before it gets stale.
I mean if you want to write about that kind of thing, power to you, but it's no longer the only option.

>>6948939
I'm trying, but it's a slow process at the best of times and my RL job keeps getting in the way. I'm convinced we lose more writefags to the demands of work than anything else.

>>6949070
Your implied personal tastes notwithstanding, the old saying "write what you know" seems to apply to most of the subject matter of what's written here- in regards to settings at any rate.

Of course, having more people here means that more subjects and fetishes can be written about now than they could be before, and variety never hurt anyone.

>>6949070
No one ever said that you had to do 40k or Tolkienian fantasy. Literally any supernatural or sci-fi element would be enough.

>>6948930
We made sure to put a note on the 1d4chan page pretty quickly once the migration happened. If anything ever happens, it should be listed there. I don't foresee us having another problem, though.

Writing honestly isn't that time consuming. You can squeeze it in, I guarantee it. The hard part is being in the mood to write after all the shit you actually have to do in a day.

>>6948850
How'd you like Good Boy?

>>6949119

I agree with that. I mean, my stuff I posted is about 2800 words (and not event complete either, I'm trying to work towards a novel-length work), took about 5-6 hours to write. Yet, the most challenging thing is finding a good time where you can let the words flow, after that happens, writing 1200+ words in a sitting is literally nothing.

Also, this is completely off-topic, but I've noticed a large amount of e-lit on deviantArt. Yet, I also read the terms of service and noticed that it was apparently against the rules to post smut (which doesn't make any sense for half the content on DA). Since I deal with very hardcore /d/ themes in my writing, would I be able to get by with posting on that site or would I get in trouble with the mods?

why do so many erotica sites have the worst web design I have ever seen?

>>6949222
Because they're old and are run by old people. Which are you referring to?

>>6949222
I have two theories. The first is that porn is pretty much the original inhabitant of the internet. Most of these sites are ancient. They also make a fraction of the ad revenue of video porn sites. As such, they haven't been able to put forth the money to redesign their websites. Most of them are less bad than obviously dated.

My second theory is that someone's fetish is extremely poor web design.

What's a good site to host stories and pics?

Tumblr or Blogspot?

>>6949312
Both of those work, though pastebin and google docs work just as well if not better.

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>>6945779
Story seemed like it had good pacing. Got everything done well without being too long.

I would definitely read a sequel either seeing how things work out for them all or to see some spider thief hijinks.

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>>6949524
>typing with only your index fingers

>>6949312
I post min on tumblr but I don't think there's much of a community for original (i.e. not ero-fanfiction of children's cartoons) stories.
Then again I haven't looked very hard so if I'm wrong someone feel free to direct me.

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>>6942304
More Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels coming at you.

Chapter 16: Croc Market
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

I hope you like it. If you have any ideas for tags that I should add, let me know. I'm new to the tagging thing.

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>>6949106
Honestly, the worlds I write in are basically DnD lore unless I say so, plus tons of shit I made up on the spot

>>6944672
>>6943002

well, i was able to get that image to a more finished state at least.

been trying to use larger paper and use pencil, and it's been different. i need to figure out how other artists are able to make their pencil linework "pop" so strongly. they probably use better pencils, the cowards.

http://i.imgur.com/T1JBxf5.png skaven x f dark elves

>>6949759

Well I can tell you a thing or two about that, and yes, one thing is that they use better pencils. In fact, a pencil artist will typically have more than 5 different types of pencils, and 10+ if they are really serious. Also, when I mean types I mean hardness of the graphite, however, I typically picked up faber-castell because they are dirt cheap and work good, however, one is always free to get those super-expensive pencils (you might be looking at upwards of 40 dollars depending on how many weights you want) that have the smoothest graphite around, and their super soft leads melt like butter.

But, as for the smooth, clean, line thing, that's just keeping your pencil sharp and having a kneadable eraser (basically a putty eraser) or you have a square eraser that you constantly cut with a knife to keep the line sharp. Basically, what I'm telling you is that a pencil artist can work for 10 minutes making a crucial line straight, drawing/erase a little bit/repeat and making sure you have an eraser that can do the precise erasing job you want it to do is key. Also, always start your lines in a soft lead and never a hard lead. If you are using a decent weight paper (something like 100lb. paper), you're going to create divets in the page where you can no longer erase with the hard lead, and then you're going to end up with fuzzy lines that get bigger and bigger and bigger because of the divets in the page. This can happen with smaller weight papers as well, but it's much easier to notice with higher weights and is still very advisable not to use hard leads on any weight of paper for outlines. Hard leads (such as the good ol 2B) will create divets on any weight of paper. So, again, keep a soft lead pencil sharp, draw the line, erase as needed, repeat. Now, you can go ahead and do outlines in hard pencils, but you have to make sure that they are light... cont. in next post, reached char limit.

Cont. from >>6949925

... you have to make sure that they are light because, again, if you do it too hard, you'll make divets. You can then use these faint lines as guidelines to contain your shading, and then finalize the line with a darker line and a softer pencil (just in case you make mistakes).

However, I did look at your newest pic there and I can tell that you have some trouble shading. I'd read over the fundamentals of shading techniques (because, not trying to offend, but you're not even hatching or cross-hatching, you're kinda scribble-shading and that will make your lines seem less defined and catches the eye too much - do you want the viewer to focus on the scribbles or the composition as a whole?). After reading up on the fundamentals of shading, I'd do some shading tests, get 4 rows of 12 empty squares, 1 inch in area each, and go from white (which when speaking in drawing terms is a brightness equivalent to looking straight into the sun) to black on the 12th square (which would be the equivalent of being in a pitch-black cave with no lights on) and be sure to make the transition from black to white look as smooth as possible. Also, use different shading techniques on each row. This might take a few tries, so don't get upset if you don't do it right, just do it again until you get it right. Then once you're confident doing that, get an apple or other smooth piece of fruit, put it under a light, and draw that shieet. Don't draw it by how you think it looks, draw it with your EYES, and put that onto paper.

I guarantee if you practice more drawing before making your illustrations you will get better at drawing your illustrations and you will be happier with them.

I'm sorry this post was so long but you wanted to know, and that's a tough question to answer.

>>6949759

Also I forgot to mention this but you have a very good perception of your characters and you have good composition fundamentals (such as placing of the focal points of the drawing, and how those focal points interact with the background and other secondary elements), but getting your shading down is going to be the best thing for your pencil work.

>>6949956

thanks a bunch for your advice!

I've got some proper pencils kicking around but Ill need to get more, since quite a few of them are pretty trashed or stubs; I've been using mechanical pencils since they tend to endure longer and I'm lazy. Kneaded erasers are super great and I've got a few; don't know how I got by without them.

you're right about the shading: it's something I've neglected and I dont spend enough thought on figuring out how it ought to look as opposed to just winging it. it ends up contributing to stuff feeling a bit flat. the scribbling shading is also a symptom of that lack of patience and lack of conception of what I'm aiming for. I'll have to focus on that element of composition some more; I've practiced it in isolation but I need to put it better into practice.

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>>6948027
One final pic for that chapter. I'm hoping to do at least 1 colored pic per, for practice sake.


>>6948721
I'm planning the next chapter from her perspective,

I'll look forward to your story too.

>>6949998

Well, there are certain types of mechanical pencils that are good to use. You can actually get something that pushes out a large graphite stick (equivalent to that of a pencil graphite stick), but you'll have to get a bunch of those or hope to god you remember the hardness of each of the graphite sticks because you'll have to switch out the graphite stick according to the drawing. Also, if you draw with it too hard you'll break the graphite and that sucks. Also, you'll have to sharpen the pencil by "shading hard" on a piece of scratch paper.

IMO, make it easy on yourself and get the real pencils XD

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>>6937079 >>6945779 >>6944880 >>6944949

Permalink to my centaur story "The Fated Party":

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-fated-party

Might be worth adding it to that list of stories you folks are maintaining.


Anybody have any other good story ideas? (And a reminder: This is what I like to write about: http://pastebin.com/0KMNfi5D )

>>6950303
You can always add it yourself if you like. It's why we have it on a wiki, after all.

>>6950303
What's your experience with Literotica?
I kind of want to put my stories on there so people can access them easier, but the site web design seems so outdated and when I browsed recently submitted stories everything was kind of sleazy in a bad way.

>>6950769
Not the author, but my biggest gripe is how short the descriptions are. I barely know what I'm going to be reading until I'm into the thick of it, although that complaint could be made irrelevant if it had a decent method for viewing and adding tags.

>>6950769
>>6950807
A lot of content, not a great layout. It's been around for years and not updated to take advantage of better interface tech, better search and reference tools, etc.

However, it's one of the best amounts of content out there due to age, even if junk also gets posted there.

>>6949925
>>6949932
Not the skaven guy, but this was really helpful for someone who's looking to get back into drawing again. Thank you.

>>6951842

No problem, to both of you guys. I'm just glad I had enough advice to give after dropping out of art school XD Didn't drop out of art school because I was shit tho, they were really fucked about what they accepted as "art". One of those "progressive" art schools and if you tempt their motives they will fuck you over. So, I dropped out of there and doing college for a completely unrelated field and still do art in my spare time, whatever type of art that may be (I have quite a variety of arts interests).

However, this reminds me, kids, don't fucking go to art school. Go to school to learn something profitable, learn how to get better on your own, and then use your money from your degree's job to fund your artistic endeavours. If you get lucky, maybe you'll be doing galleries internationally and you can stop working. If you don't, you'll have the satisfaction that you still made good art, and noone can take that away from you. If you go to art school you will, at some point in time, be required to leave your opinions behind and become what they want you to become.

>>6949123
Well, it's certainly not bad, but I do have several suggestions.

Grammar is one of my main concerns. I understand autocorrect can be a real bitch some times, and it's a good idea to read these stories over and correct any mistakes before posting.

The vocabulary, as well, could use some work. I enjoy pet play, but reading 'nom' every few sentences does become a bit routine, which is the last thing you want in a story like this. Conversely, using words that you wouldn't encounter in everyday speech can easily bring reading to a halt. There was one spot in particular where I had to pause to look up just what 'lasciviously' meant.

Also worth noting is that I didn't know that the main character's name was Alyssa until about halfway through. Maybe inject that into the conversation before John arrives, to give some background

Other than that, I noticed a few things wrong with the timeline, not the least of which is that unless you're way out in the boondocks, it shouldn't take nearly so long for pizza to be delivered.
Another minor observation is that after a man cums, he's typically oversensitive to the point where he will stop because the feeling is so overwhelming. This also means that if Alyssa were to start up right after the ruined orgasm, there would be noticeably more thrashing around on John's part, with whining intermixed.

I recommend you keep writing more, and stay active in these threads. The best way to become more skilled is to keep writing, and seek out peer review wherever possible

>>6948027
Look forward to seeing more from you in the future anon.

>>6948027
Interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

>>6950021
Looks awesome, do you use references?

>>6951998
Thanks man, I'm trying my best here :) this is my first time actively posting my stories onto the internet and such

Have you read Mrow?

>>6952629
Yeah, I really liked it. It was definitely more professional feeling, though the issues with vocabulary are still present.
I find it helps to open an online thesaurus in another tab, and look for synonyms whenever you find yourself using the same word several times in the same paragraph.

I hope this helps!

How do you folks feel about comic books scripts?

>>6952846
What does that even mean? A name?

>>6952851
I want to submit stories in the form of comic book scripts.

>>6952870
No, I mean what the fuck is a comic book script? You mean a strip?

>>6952873
he might mean manuscript. Used for acting and occasionally comic books.

>>6952881
This

>>6952846
>>6952873

Ok, I really want to know.
Did I really make a big faux pas by calling it a comic book script?

Also, can I post manuscripts here?

>>6953003
The way I write outlines, I've always considered writing a comic script/commishing a lewd comic.

I usually dabble in TG/TF trash, but while I was skimming some old shit I used to like (key phrase "Used to") on Fictionmania I discovered I wanted a story where the ego-driven witch wanting to somehow teach a man a lesson by turning them into a stereotype bimbo backfires as she fucks with a more powerful magic user than her.

The wizard/warlock/whatever then proceeds to turn her into a twink/trap and makes her continue living life like normal even though he puts her through situations like forcing her to having a tentpole in a skirt while he keeps everyone from noticing but she has to carry on a conversation as he fingers her prostate.

Make it even better by adding in a second witch character who is left largely alone but is forced to have sex with the new trap twink who can barely penetrate with their weak cock until they're getting rammed up the ass and moaning as they get sandwiched.

>>6937518
I love your stories, but cold blooded animals do't sweat.

>>6953407

yk I'm not a fan of snakes but I've never thought about that. Good point.

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>>6953407
>>6953420
Damn right, they don't.

Chapter 19: Rock Out With Your Croc Out
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU


>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

She may not be a snake, but I hope people still like Odile, despite her limbs.

>>6953791
That was definitely not what I was expecting with the xeroxes. What is up with your sick mind?

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>>6953407
Well they're aliens, who can really say how their physiology works.
(They know! SHUT IT DOWN!)

Have some unsolicited smut.

>Willing gender bending, het, yuri, futa, physical age regression, Dom/sub dynamics, and some dirty talk.

http://pastebin.com/eXDRm6fB

A wizard turns her barbarian boyfriend into a loli. For fun.

>>6954112
Well it was cute but I was thrust into a world where I felt a lot out of context.

It needed to be about four times longer, and while this is personal preference I feel like the first person perspective is sort of a lazy way of writing. Not bad, but third person is used for a lot of good reasons.

Second, we need context. We pick up from some clues within the story that the character is a Barbarian... but only if you're familiar with DND.

Don't get me wrong at all, because I love the story premise. Consensual TG is a major favorite of mine. I love the big barbarian turning into the small, petite girl who fits into her lover's embrace.

But I felt the story lacked detail, you don't need to give us everything in minutia but we sped through a major sex scene in like five minutes.

That all said, I enjoy what there was and if this is your thing keep writing

>>6953814
>What is up with your sick mind?

This is the greatest compliment I've ever received on /d/. Thank you very much, fellow pervert.

Taking requests to jog my motivation.

>>6954556
What kinda stuff do ya like?

>>6954559
I'm open to most weird shit barring growth and transformation and the like. Just spit shit at me. I might not take a request in its entirety but a particularly interesting scenario can easily get the creative juices flowing.

>>6954566
I had the idea that all men had died and all women were assigned penises at adulthood by the government for reproduction, but since all the men were dead, they were all animal penises. But they can be traded like Pokemon cards, so it could be the story of a woman who starts with a lobster penis trying to trade up to something better like a dog or cat or dolphin or something.

How's that? I doubt I'd actually write that, but... the croc idea was someone else's, and now that's quite long now.

>>6954743
Why would they even have lobster penises?

>>6954754
There are however many billions of people, and they all need to participate in reproduction. They need to get their penises from somewhere, and it's the one part of any animal we don't eat, so...

I didn't say this idea wasn't really weird.

>>6952143
>>6952162

Thanks, I think I got pretty good start on the second chapter.

>>6952476
Thanks, Yeah, I grabbed the pose from google

I'm into something rather odd, but every fetish on this board is. I can never fIna any images of it, for good reasons I guess.

My fetish consists of a curvy woman wI think big tits and huge booty, being inpregnanted by an alien, and after a while it grows and makes her tits and ass bigger, lengthening her nipples and often lactation. Then, she grows a huge cock and balls, so the alien can't escape, and whenever it moves around it gives her an erection, and makes her cock bigger everytime, with uncontrollable lactation.

This is my ultimate fetish

>>6954924
I can see why you would have so much trouble finding such images; I'm not sure that fetish even has a name.

You might want to consider commissions.

>>6954743
Passing on that one. Like I alluded to before, I'm not a fan of body modification. It's like my one red flag.

>>6948039
Ill just rerefrence this for some comments. Thanks people.

well i got new pencils as recommended and tried them out. shading is still... something to improve upon. but they do make life easier.

i lost the one brettonian damsel thing i was doing, so i took another shot at it with much the same concept.

https://imgur.com/bZduoxy damsel x skaven

now if you excuse me I'm going to draw a well shaded triangle fucking a square until i improve

>>6955445
It's pretty good, though ironically I think the first version of the scene you uploaded to your imgur gallery is still the best. Her chin looks a bit soft as well, almost like her face is a bit plumper than the rest of her body. I think the pencils are definitely helping your shading though.

And yea, the completed foursome with the Dark Elves is great. I'd love to see some more of them, if you feel like it.

>>6955498

i probably will do that, and yeah I do agree that the other one is better. Ill take note of the facial characteristics; ive been trying to do faces from different angles which makes conveying such features more difficult, since the shape of the head is so funky. probably getting ahead of myself, there.

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>>6954556
>>6954566
A fisherman catches a mermaid (ningyo), has sex with her (preferably against her will, but consensual works I guess) and makes her cum out fish eggs, which he discovers make quite a tasty treat

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>>6955519
oh uh, here's a colored pic of her for reference

>>6955519
I thought that they were dragonballs for a second there.

>>6955879
The similarity is definitely uncanny.

>>6952830
Hey, I just posted something new, hope everyone checks it out!

I can't honestly say it's /d/ tier really, I started out with intentions of kinky sex, but ended up somewhere else.

Have fun!
https://platinumgriff.wordpress.com/2016/08/01/the-hunt-by-platinum/

Anyone ever do that Doll-Joint TF story with the person still being animate?

Request for a guy playing 'Monstergirl GO' accidentally walking into a mamono controlled neighborhood.

>>6957047
Can you translate the weebspeak into english?

>>6957122
Mamono is Monster Girl Encyclopedia's term for monster girl.

>>6955498

okay heres another dark elf / skaven pairing https://imgur.com/G6qZh7g

to be honest, probably going to shift to a more simplified sort of shading until I get a better feel for it. It's a pain to do without more direct references.

>>6957197
Oh neat, I wasn't expecting anything so quickly! It's pretty cool to see more consensual spins on the concept - noncon's always fun and you definitely do it well, but seeing somebody pair up willingly with such a horrid creature makes for a nice contrast. And while I didn't notice at first, I love that you can see the other couple in the background. A companion image showing the same scene from the unwilling Dark Elf's (sister? I don't know, I get the feeling they're sisters for some reason) perspective, with this picture going on in the background, could be fun. I think you could get a lot of milage out of those characters.

>>6957265
yeah, new supplies helps that. softer lead is easier to work with.

them being siblings could work; adds a dynamic between the pair. desu i don't do much characterization or storyboarding past high concept for the stuff i draw, but when i do the same subject i do get "hunches" about them i try to keep consistent.

but since you got me thinking about it...

i imagine the younger one would be the more enthusiastic of the pair; she could have a sort of deviant, something-to-prove streak to her sexuality, so being lavished with attention from some horrid rat man is exciting in a degenerate way; there's a sense of power over a creature to appeal to a dom sensibility, and an allure in knowing you're definitely the "beauty" in that beauty/beast pairing.

The other sister is more excited by politics than sex; more of the sadist, prima donna type, who wants to spend her time in the company of powerful elven men, so there's nothing psychological for her to undercut the grossness of doing it with a henchman fleabag (that and her sister picked the better groomed one and knew it would further irritate her; part of what could make it more pleasant for the younger/humiliating for the elder is that the younger's ability to enjoy the encounter adds a feeling of one-uppedness to the more status aware elder, and a sense of smugness for the younger to be able to gloat at her siblings discomfort).

that gives me something to aim for more when conceptualizing a drawing, i suppose. consistency of characters is something I'd imagine would be important with repeat subjects.

>>6957321
>i imagine the younger one would be the more enthusiastic of the pair; she could have a sort of deviant, something-to-prove streak to her sexuality, so being lavished with attention from some horrid rat man is exciting in a degenerate way; there's a sense of power over a creature to appeal to a dom sensibility, and an allure in knowing you're definitely the "beauty" in that beauty/beast pairing.
>The other sister is more excited by politics than sex; more of the sadist, prima donna type, who wants to spend her time in the company of powerful elven men, so there's nothing psychological for her to undercut the grossness of doing it with a henchman fleabag (that and her sister picked the better groomed one and knew it would further irritate her; part of what could make it more pleasant for the younger/humiliating for the elder is that the younger's ability to enjoy the encounter adds a feeling of one-uppedness to the more status aware elder, and a sense of smugness for the younger to be able to gloat at her siblings discomfort).

I like this a lot. It's a simple dynamic but that's all you really need - something to give them a little characterisation and help define how they might react to whatever different situations you throw them into. Little touches of personality like that are so important to smut art - they help the viewer connect to what's going on, draw them in and make them feel what the characters feel. It makes for a much sexier piece than two disconnected people going at it. Or that's my take, at least. As with all things, I can only speak for myself.

I'm working on a couple of things right now, so I don't know if I'll ever get to it, but I might take a shot at something with these two characters one day.

>>6957047
>>6957122
People playing pokemon go keep wandering into restricted areas like military bases or crossing international borders (often without realising it) and getting themselves arrested. It's caused enough problems that most countries are now banning the game from being used by anyone on military bases.

I take it the anon is after something similar except they wander into a part of town controlled by monster girls.

>>6957756
Nobody can be that stupid.

>>6957987
think about what you just

>>6957987
>>6957989
Thinking about where that would be a high risk, has anyone wondered into the Tenderloin district at night playing pokemon go and been accosted?

>>6937079
Okay, maybe you guys know this thing. I found this choose your own adventure story where a girl got a magic ring, I think. Like, the last three words she says are the spell

The main thing I remember is at some point, she makes her friend grow a dick at her birthday party, calling it a GIANT HORSE COCK or she turns her friend into a STUPID SLUTTY BIMBO in the mall. Could never find it again, hoping someone knows what I'm talking about

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Not dead yet, just wanted to let any interested parties know I've resumed work on the Kraken/Mermaid fic I shared a while back.

Pic not really related, but still nice.

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>>6957987
#Somebodycallsecurity

>>6947471
Good Shit Mang, keep It up.