/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General (formerly /wst/)

>>6910595
Usually helps if the OP posts more than one fucking image.

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>>6911151
have some more, then.

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Ded thred.

I'd like to request an /ss/ story in which the woman, preferably a curvy one, pegs the shota.

As for the story, something like this would be great:
Slightly girly boy from a barbarian tribe gets captured after his tribe loses against a Roman-ish culture. He's spent his whole life getting mocked and put down for his looks, and is suffering major survivors guilt for having run away during the battle. He and the other prisoners are sold at auction, most going to the mines.
The boy gets purchased by a very rich woman, perhaps a noble. I'd prefer is she were a widow, or if she is married and her husband doesn't give shit about what she does to amuse herself.
When the boy learns he was purchased to be her sex toy, he's slightly relieved.
Then she pulls out the lube and an ivory strap on, which she had custom made.

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>>6910595
Reposting my material.

Snek (complete)
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, vaginal, language barrier, bathing, teasing, kissing

Crashland (almost complete)
http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom, oral (male), oral (female), vaginal, kissing, female ejaculation, bathing, teasing

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Once more, with less angst:

http://pastebin.com/tW1Xx68y

Tags: hetero, gentle femdom, monster girl, kraken, tentacle girl, tentacle-on-male, sex ed, tentacle pussy

>>6911598
Is there butt stuff?

>>6911656
Rest assured, I'll put it in the tags when it eventually happens.

>>6911661
Things going up guys' asses are just not my thing.

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http://pastebin.com/SWBi8DGb
I gave Onyx's most recent entry into She Who Wanders a read. Not much to really say on it, I think it mightve been a better idea to integrate this part into a more complete story rather than put it out in its current state. This is the setup for events but nothing else, and while I didnt go into it with very high expectations it would have been nice to see at least some meat to this story.

There were a few grammatical errors I noticed as well:

"obscuring her beautiful but not hiding it."
"Priya got to feet"
"With a single, powerful bat of her wings" should be 'beat'

Honestly this felt like a throwaway chapter, and while i still want to read further entries in the series I think this one was not well thought out.

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Someone ought to make a fic using this pic as a template.

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>>6911972
That seems very specific to me. Are you sure you don't want to give that a shot yourself?

>>6911990
just an idea I wanted to toss out there.

>>6911994
Fair enough, good luck getting someone to pick it up.

>>6911562
Dat snek. I do love snek. Moar snek.

>>6911230
>>6911267
>>6911314

reposting these ideas. hopefully someone will pick up on them.

>>6911972
Most people who take requests here write one shots, covering an event or events that occur over a few days at most. Your pic is someone's career summary. We would need some specific kinks and people to pair her with to get a real idea started.

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>>6912490
Due to overwhelming demand I will do a Snek sequel when I've finished Crashland.

>>6913027
My dong appreciates your fine work for the good of mankind.

>>6913010
A pirate queen has been ravaging trade routes for various foreign powers, so a naval from one of those nations is sent to assassinate her. However, after infiltrating her ranks, he starts to become enthralled by her, uh, charisma. He eventually becomes her lover.

While she initially feels cold and distant, she eventually warms up to him. She may start out as domineering or dominant in bed, but eventually, the assassin has her melt in his arms and he gets to dominate her.

>>6911990
Actually, sometimes specific things hook a writer better than something vague.

>>6913027
My body is ready.

>>6911562
Did dj stheno ever get continued?

>>6913496
Is that a story?
That wasn't one of mine, I've only done two so far.

>>6911598
pretty sure i read this before, but it ended with the mc still in bed
new ending didn't really expand on much, did you change it because you plan to write more?

really enjoyed it btw

>>6911562
crash is damn good too

>>6913578
Nothing like that. I just thought the pacing in the original ending was atrocious - having the slowdown of a diamond made of sixty MPH hitting a brick car at the speed of wall. It was written at a bad time and it suffered because of it.

As for a continuation: not very likely. My amazon story taught me how crummy I am with overarching plots, so I don't think I would risk it.

Either way, glad you enjoyed it.

>>6913086
>She may start out as domineering or dominant in bed, but eventually, the assassin has her melt in his arms and he gets to dominate her.

Different strokes and all that but that just seems like a stereotypical turnout compared to how she's described in the original pic.

If anything I'd say it'd be better to have her start off as a prostitute brought on to a crew to please the men while they're at sea, but over time she starts to dominate them one by one getting better and more ferocious each time (and maybe gradually picking up 'pirating' skills or something) until she has enough crew members under her thumb that she leads a mutiny.

She becomes captain with a fervently loyal crew and it could end with her deciding to take on the world (implying she later grows her fleet like in the real story) and leaving it open to future chapters.

>>6913558
One of Kitty D's fics. Haven't seen that guy around in ages, but one can hope we get a continuation.

>>6913578
I'm happy you're enjoying it.
I should have it finished soon.

>>6913731
ok, that sounds better.

Here's a technical question: I've been considering writing a short conversation as if it were being played from a recording. How might I go about formatting that so it's not totally cumbersome to read?

>>6914160
As a script maybe?

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>>6914161
Yeah I think the best way would be to basically transcribe it like you would if you were trying to write down a real recorded conversation/interview. So basically:

PERSON 1: I am saying a thing.
PERSON 2: I am now saying a thing.
PERSON 1: Oh yes baby just like that I am ready for the sex now.

Lots of people try and get weird with formatting for non-traditional sources of dialogue like text chats and stuff, best to just keep it simple though in my opinion.

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Requesting short story where a lovely young faun-girl has her first sexual experience with a human man, something like pic related.

Girl isn't a virgin by any means, but she certainly isn't used to someone so large and "thinking", if you catch my drift.

I just realized it has been 34 days since I posted that link to what I had done on my Fallout story... I'll have to get on that since I am at 8 pages and about 5000 words now. I'll try to get it updated today. (Hopefully those who read it will think it is worth the time.)

Hello, I've been working on some stories for the last few months. They are all in the multi/conjoinment genres, and they're all on my DA as well. Here are the pastes, I've ordered them by series.

Stuck: conjoinment, multi/tf (LONG, like 70 pages long)
Part 1: http://pastebin.com/pws12JL5
Part 2: http://pastebin.com/KyGmKdL5
Part 3: http://pastebin.com/x6RVyJ4R
Part 4: http://pastebin.com/a3rQ4wRq
Part 5: http://pastebin.com/QDYScf9q
Part 6: http://pastebin.com/aRdxCQuQ
Part 7A: http://pastebin.com/c1TwXGry
Part 7B: http://pastebin.com/rqViF2qc

Long Weekend: tf, multibreast, tentacles(?)
http://pastebin.com/whG1Z5wB

Serpent Mother: tf, multibreast
http://pastebin.com/PgJtPh34

The Wand: NBM
http://pastebin.com/1L5W4AXA

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Story Request based on this image

Tags: Monstergirl, Femdom, Tentacles

Swimmer wakes up to find himself naked and bound by tentacles in a cavern by the sea. A jellyfish girl rises from the water and begins to stroke his dick, her hands stinging his dick with every stroke. The man begs her to stop so she does, then just stares at him with a knowing smile. He feels his dick throb and burn unbearably - the jellyfish's stings contained a powerful aphrodisiac. She laughs at his pain and makes a mouth-like tentacle loom over his aching member. She makes the tentacle kiss the tip of his dick and give a few light sucks as he pleas for release. Finally the tentacle swallows his dick whole, locking him into a powerful unending orgasm that causes him lose consciousness and slowly feel himself be pulled into the ocean

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Greentext story because I suck at writing this stuff. Considered making a request along these lines but felt it would have been asking too much.

Muscle Grill & Snek greentext
http://pastebin.com/S4DhJ8tH

Tags: Human F x Lamia M, SS, femdom, rape/dubcon, tail bondage, oral

Female Barbarian/ Amazone captures a young Lamia.

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Final Crashland update, finished!

http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1

I'd love to hear any feedback or suggestions you guys have. That one kind of went on a bit longer than I intended.

Soon I'll start work on a Snek sequel.

>>6915953
I'm curious- do you do anything besides sneks and the like?

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I wrote some fucked up shit

>Essence Lost
http://pastebin.com/94rCuDJu
>Tags: Elfm/OrcF, Shadowrun, dubcon, non-consensual body modification, scarification, breastplay, bondage, muscle girl, breathplay

An orc pitfighter is kidnapped by the cartel after refusing to throw a match, her former lover betraying her to them in exchange for a place in the organization. The cartel augments her into an assassin and implants cyberware to control her. To complete his initiation into their ranks, the cartel enforcer has her lover sorta-rape the orc, until...

If anyone is squeamish, this story doesnt contain any scenes of actual surgery or (sexual) blood and gore. Im not that far gone.

As usual, any feedback, criticism or critique is appreciated. It feels good to have finally finished something in months!

>>6916182
I dunno, I've only done two stories so far.
What do you have in mind?

>>6911661
>when
>eventually
Oh hey, it's you. This makes me happy.

>>6916202
Eh, I was just wondering is all. Anything you'd personally prefer to write about? Given some time I guess I could come up with a good prompt.

>>6916337
I prefer to write material from a more submissive perspective simply because I find the dominant perspective to be much less interesting, there's a lot less to write about I feel. I guess I could try switching perspectives during the story maybe.
I've promised another Snek story next but I'm open to suggestions and ideas.

>>6916187
I will try to get to this sometime tomorrow, though the subject matter isn't my favorite. I've always enjoyed your work.

>>6916358
I had an idea for a Dragon Cuntboy Knight story where he gets kidnapped by a tribe of Amazonian Kobolds sensing a dragon scent and assuming he's a guy with a dragon dick. Would lead to them inviting him on a mating raid, which he reluctantly agree/is forced into.

Ends with giving into lust and joining them in dominating ambushed folks, and leaving the Kobold party on good terms despite not taking up an offer to be an honorary sister.

Hey, original requester for Mind Games (Sisters of Battle, tyranids, psyker)

How's the story going? I think it's been weeks since I last heard from you.

>>6916394
I'm always alive, but often slow. Feel free to hold me to getting it finished this weekend. My schedule finally opened up a bit. I moved, defended my thesis, and started a (government) job in the past month, so I've been buried under more paperwork and other bullshit than I even knew existed in this world. I'm only now getting a chance to start doing things I actually like again.

>>6916358
The dominant perspective is a lot harder to write. Something just doesn't translate well into written smut. I think part of it is that everyone wants to read the submissive PoV. Subs like it because they can empathize and doms like it because they get off on inflicting the feelings the sub PoV describes. Not many people want to see it from the dom's side.

>>6916386
I'm not really into the "Dragon Cuntboy" stuff, although it seems absurdly popular lately, I doubt you'll have trouble finding someone to write that.

>>6916830
Hey, glad to know you're still in the land of the living. congrats for landing the job, too.

>>6916849
>seems absurdly popular lately
It does? For...research purposes, do you have some of the examples?

>>6916878
I swear every other story requested or posted is dragon cuntboys, and I've seen several regular threads about it.
It seems to be in vogue.
Check the archive maybe.

>>6916830
Yeah, it's a far simpler set of emotions, there's no real conflict, just "I want to bang this person".
If you're writing from the sub perspective then there are all kinds of aspects to it and conflicting emotions.

>>6916878
UQ's the guy who's been writing most of it, should all be on his pastebin.

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I keep forgetting to post here.

>>6916923
>just "I want to bang this person".

I don't think it's quite that simple. The need to control can be just as powerful as the urge to be controlled, and can make for an equally compelling story depending on how it's spun.

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>>6916935
Looking good, Inker.

>>6916934
>>6916935
>The wych is the flustered one
I love it.
Can we make requests ?

>>6916927
Hrm, only has four things on their pastebin and only one even has a dragon and that's just for setup. My 'research' is saddened. Thanks anyway, though.

>>6917042
Well, there's still quite a bit of it about.

>>6914690
Multibreast like Total Recall or multibreast like furfags?

>>6917106
No fur at all, but in case you're wondering if it's total recall 3 per row, or something like multiple rows with two breasts per row, there are both in there. Pretty much any configuration you can imagine is in one of those stories.

>>6917386
A subset of furfags are really into rows. It's understandable that it doesn't have a good reputation.

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>>6917462
>It's understandable that it doesn't have a good reputation.
I've run into multibreast lots of times on /d/ and never had issue with it.

>>6916187
Good stuff. I'm usually not into this kind of story, but you make things interesting enough, and Dona likeable enough, for me to stick through to the end. Also, good work keeping the story so concise and to the point. Nothing feels wasteful or indulgent, and the economy of the narrative is much the better for it.
I'm a wee bit confused as to what the ending means, but I still enjoyed it.

Good to see you back, FDS.

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Hey, if anyone is interested i do commission.
http://kingvego.deviantart.com/journal/Commission-Price-Updates-609092097
You can also see my NSFW stuff here
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/MrDickCumz

And ill leave something for you all to loo at.

>>6917592
>something for you all to loo at
I mean, I know it's /d/, but what do you think we're in to?

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How do you come up with your ideas? I've been wanting to write for the past week but haven't been able to think up a single interesting premise or scenario I've felt motivated to develop.
I don't want to fall back on the "just wait and it'll come to you" because I'm certain I'll lose my steam if I don't get to work quick.

>>6917606
Anything and everything

>>6917616
I stave myself off of porn and jacking it, and usually something comes to mind after a few days because my mind is trying to fill in the gaps.

>>6917616
There's always the Requests page. Even if you don't choose to do one, something in there might spark an idea you find interesting.

>>6917616
Just write, even if you just write poorly spelled words with poor structure, you can always go back and revise and correct things.

Ideas can come from anywhere, games, (characters or situations that come up in games you play that might have been different if the games were rated adults only, scenes on movies that might have come out differently, fantasies... all sorts of things can be inspiration for stories.

I have been working on a story for a month, I have been planning it for about three months, but never got started because I am a terrible procrastinator, and I tend to lose focus at times. I have a small laptop open on my desk to the side and now I just write whenever I get the urge or an idea. (I am the guy writing the Fallout story btw, I am at 5800 words now, and I think I will post it as soon as I am done writing her being fucked in the ass)

>>6917636
That is an... interesting way of going about it.

>>6917592
>http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/MrDickCumz

Oh hey it's you, I've been thinking of commissioning something from you since I ran into your profile on HF.

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>>6917651
Oh, really? Well, im glad my artwork gets around. Well, im always looking for more work since im poor as a motherfucker :/

>>6917616
In my case, sometimes an idea just gets into my head and I can't seem to get it out any other way. Corny perhaps, but it's worked for me just fine so far.

>>6917616
This
>>6917636

Or I play modded Skyrim with HDT physics for a few hours.

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>>6917636
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>>6917661
Thanks for the quick replies, although they're all things I've considered in one way or another. Apart from masturbatory abstinence. I might need to try that.
As for the requests page, I've looked it over multiple times but I guess I'm just too picky. Can't really fuck with anything involving bodily transformations or absorption of any kind.
I'll take any suggestions y'all throw at me that fit those parameters but I hope I can do better than rely on the originality of others.

>>6917669
im looking at a "masturbatory abstinence" right now :p

>>6917669
Mostly just try to write about what you're into.
If you have any recurring fantasies try fleshing them out and putting them to paper (or monitor in this case).
The first time I wrote something for /efg/ it was because I was frustrated as hell and needed an outlet, so I took a fantasy I had and made a coherent scenario out of it, then I just started writing and let the story evolve on it's own. Wrote for a whole day and got it all out, then felt a lot better.
Now I do it regularly, it's kind of therapeutic.
Whatever it is you like, there will be people here who will appreciate you writing about it.

>>6917636
That actually does work fairly well, it keeps you focused on the task at hand... because, reasons.

>>6917616
Everybody's different, but I find it easiest to not worry about the smut at first. I jot down anything that comes to mind and worry about how it would work as a story and as smut later. None of my stories, including requests, have ever started as smut. A lot of my stories have been smuttified versions of things that have happened in games or based on some folklore I thought could be raunchier.

My best suggestion is to immerse yourself in something you like. It can be virtually anything, from a genre of fiction, to a period of history, to a field of study. This is a /d/ community made mostly of /tg/ refugees. We probably can't judge you. Read a bunch and ask yourself what would be different if it was your story. If what comes out is interesting, write about it. Smut will find a way.

If you don't even know where to start, consider just looking up something you would like to know more about and see where it leads you. I have pulled several story ideas off of long Wikipedia binges.

>>6917650
It works, I have no complaints. Only problem is when you're actually writing the story you gotta make sure you stay strong through it. Otherwise you'll look back at what you wrote and have the worst post-ejaculatory regret over everything you wrote.

If you can make it through though, dick is diamonds the whole time and busting afterwards is cathartic as fuck.

>>6917749
I never thought reading or writing could get me off, not until i starting to write role plays with women i know online. It surprised me how hot and heavy it can be.

>>6916830
>Subs like it because they can empathize and doms like it because they get off on inflicting the feelings the sub PoV describes.
Great explanation.

>>6917751
I actually just got into RP not too long ago because I thought it was such a taboo thing for some reason. Goddamn it's like writing a story that writes back.

>>6917815
Agreed. I mostly got into it to get better at writing. And, the past two years, i have improved vastly. Although, i was rather surprised that most of the people i rped with were women.

I mostly got started cuz i have some characters based in the fallout universe. Here is a link to my blog
http://weird-and-wild-wasteland.tumblr.com/

Thing is, since its fucking tumblr, i managed to get myself backlisted. I was once populor and had fans of my artwork and rps. Now, even though i have way more followers, well, people dont really talk to me there anymore. And all cuz i said fiction is fiction and it cant hurt you :/

>>6914611
Wish I had an appropriate pictire to post with it, but I can't find anything at the moment so here it is. I just basically replaced the old file with this one, the changes to the original are minimal but there, I will possibly go back and fill out more of her past later though.


http://pastebin.com/RAesBVAi

TAGS: (current) M/f, virgin, Rape, painal, creampie, teasing, torment, whipping, spanking, bondage,

Yeah it is a bit rough, but I figured that the guy was that sort.

>>6917890
I guess I should add Fallout to the tags list... can't believe I forgot that one... went from 1500 words to 6400 words

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Anyone got the pastebins of the unfinished "Theseus Cruiseship" sections?
Anon in the /aco/ writing general is interested in the concept

Requesting something about a guy who offers to let a bunch of adult, single monstergirls practice sex on his dick. He's mindbroken and cums inside all of them. If not that, they like him enough to form a harem and date him.

making a game based on consentacle magical girls.

http://pastebin.com/ujUqwQhJ

How does this cast look?

>>6917499
>I'm a wee bit confused as to what the ending means, but I still enjoyed it.
I intended it to imply Hernando was going to attempt take Cazadore's position in the Cartel, and use Dona as the hit(wo)man Cazadods intended her to be.
I see how the end was vague, but when I got there I felt like adding anything more to it would spoil the drama of the moment. Almost like the ending to The Godfather, if you'll allow me a bit of hubris

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>>6916830
>>6917761

Wait, is this why I'm generally great at describing what my character's doing to the other, or what's going on in the scene, but when it comes time to describe how my guy's feeling I can't find much to talk about beyond how great it feels to have some exotic dignitary wrapped around his dick?

My partners often spend most of their posts describing how good it feels anyway.

>>6917981
Might be able to hunt them down if you're still around.

http://pastebin.com/G25i9RZC
http://pastebin.com/V3HU0caf
http://pastebin.com/hQapyf7g

As a writer I felt like there was a lack of dramatic tension to the concept. And as someone who has been on disability, being unable to work your job doesn't mean you don't get paid (unless this is some future where worker's rights are ignored).

I've toyed with the idea of a similar concept but instead it's a rogue AI who has taken her ship hostage on an endless tour. The "guests" are basically acting out their roles after so long in it, and every so often she has to restock crew members and guests at ports. (Dunno how to justify there not being a detailed description of the ship, but hey)

Main character is an Isaac Clarke "Fuck you and fuck your marker" engineering type who the AI takes interest in because she can't break them the standard way, so begins remodeling them more and more and inventing new "activities" to demean and deride the MC.

MC on the other hand is getting closer and closer to finding a way to permanently off the AI. Might be a choice at the end to let the AI go and get his body back or lose it forever.

But I have other stories that need attention, work has just been really draining recently.

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Hey guys. Well, i am working on an rp with a friend but im not super sure it really belongs here. See, its kind of an late Georgian era English story with a hit of fantasy (due to there probably being a ghost or two).

I have tried to make it "athletic" and "historically accurate" but im no historian and honestly, im not sure if im much of a writer. Im a much.

Anyways, point is, there is sex, plenty of it, but not until later on. And, all i have up right now is the first chapter which i am sad to say that there is not sex in it :/

My rp partner and i thought i would be a cool idea to draw the two main characters so you can look at them if you like. And, here is a link to the first chapter that i managed to edit and try to make readable.
http://kingvego.deviantart.com/art/Behind-Closed-Doors-rp-work-in-progress-name-614269874

>>6918104
Quite possibly. You could also just suck at writing how your character feels. Either way, the dominant perspective is really only appealing to dominants. I try to avoid using it unless I have a good reason not to.

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It's lonely down here in page 7.

>>6918824
It got to page 7? shit...

>>6916863
Alright. It's pretty much done. I'll need a day to go back over it, but I think I can safely say that it will be posted sometime tomorrow.

>>6918863
I could beta read it, if you'd like? I usually pick up on grammatical stuff, not necessarily content, though.

>>6918869
While I appreciate the offer, it's more for story continuity and phrasing. I wrote it over a longass period of time while working on a thesis. It's all over the place right now and just needs to be trimmed and neatened up. I don't usually need to do a normal proofreading, much less one that takes a day.

>>6918824
>think this picture is perfect
>realize there's no frontpussy
Well, you can't have everything.

>>6918904
It's just magically hidden for modesty's sake.

>>6918915
nigga we on /d/

>>6918992
Just saying she does have a perfectly functional frontgina.

>>6917994
can I get some critiques

>>6919241
>>6917994
Your villains and heroes seem better-thought out than most. Sounds like you have a decent start for a story, not necessarily a system or a setting, though.

>>6915765
I'm curious what's the source for this image?

>>6919734
It's literally in the filename, man.

Just finished a story I've been working on for a few weeks.
http://pastebin.com/NH0abBdU
tags: shrinking, intelligence drain, sex, recreational drugs

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I'm ready to start a new Snek story.

Tell me what you guys want to see.
Heavier on sex than the last one or more romance?
Anything in particular you want me to get in there?

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Does anybody know of any good minigirl stories?

>>6920140
Man, that's one helluva chode. No wonder he has to rely on minigirls.

>>6920081
As one lucky reader, I am a fan of the romance, whether it's sneky charms or defrosting a cold, scaly heart.
On the other hand, hot sexings.

>>6920032
>intelligence drain
Literally the worst.

>>6920331
Yeah, let's just say it's not the most popular of fetishes here and leave it at that.

>>6910595
Is there an actual dragon cunt boy knight story where the end result is the OP's pic or similar?

>>6920081
Romance is my highest tier fetish.
I'd be happy if it was follow-up the original pair, seeing how the end of the original left me burning for their relationship to evolve.

>>6920081
There's a reason why foreplay is a good thing. Lets go for romance, here.

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>>6920200
>>6920473
>>6920596

Ok, /d/ has spoken.
I'll get to work. Should take 4 or 5 days to finish.

>>6920602
Lamias give best hugs.

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>>6920684

That Thesaurus.com history tho.

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Ok, I got out a thousand words, I'll have another couple of thousand for you guys tomorrow.
Tell me what you think of the setup.

http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

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>>6920972
It isn't quite the first fic, but it's going somewhere snek. Godspeed, tripfag.

are there any websites for stuff like this? the only mainstream ERP/erotic story gathering site I know of is f-list

>>6920972
His intense need to fuck the snek is a bit extreme. I advise going a bit softer than total obsession, the dream was great though. Perhaps have him in denial of a newly sprouted snake fetish...

>>6917890
Those of you who have read this, anything I should know about that maybe doesn't work? Other than me not explaining very well why she is talking almost like Yoda?

I can't try to fix things if I don't know about it.

>>6921159
I see what you mean, I think I can fix that.

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Boo. I live.
Have a new story.

http://pastebin.com/WjhAGBBc
Spira Heat
Tags: Male/Female, Mirialan/Human, Oral, Consensual, Woman on Top, Cowgirl, Star Wars

>>6921652
Wow, haven't seen you in ages - welcome back! Will take a look when I get home.

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Page 7 again? Lazy, lazy. Surely you've all got something worth posting, right?

>>6922232
Depends. Is it good? Quality of work doesn't always require a lot of words.

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>>6922221
I'm working hard!

>>6921646
For what it's worth as a totally different person, I think the NEED FOR SNEK can be reasonable. Exotic alien creature that he would normally only see at a distance and now it's gone entirely again and with no obvious way to ever contact it again or even to probably recognize it.

>>6922430
I appreciate the feedback.
I'll try to tone it down a bit and find a middle ground.

>>6920972
anon, i hope you know orange juice is highly acidic and you really should brush your teeth afterwards

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Questions, for purposes, what is that ancient thing that slaves carried rich people in, with the curtains and shit...?

pic not related, just amuses me to no end.

>>6922871
Googling "Carried carriage" got me "Litter."

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Litter_(vehicle)

>>6922874
thank you, that's it

>>6922871
>>6922874
Palanquin came to mind for me, but apparently that's just another name for the same thing.

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>>6920473
>>6920596
/d/ is suprisingly sappy

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I'm just about as new as you can be to writefaggotry, but I'll post my story anyways for the hell of it

http://pastebin.com/UfmZsCZn
>Monster Musume, monster girl, Polt, futa, oral, vaginal, ahegao, teasing, edging, ejaculation, futa ejaculation

All input and constructive criticism is welcome

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I wanna jerk off so bad, but if I do I won't be able to finish writing... maybe just take a break for a bit... why am I so turned on, haven't even gotten to the sex yet... writing does something to me, I don't know what it is...

>>6917669
>>6917674
Masturbatory abstinence has worked great for me, especially when you get into the mindset of "I can't relieve myself until I've finished this story/chapter"

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>>6921652
Wee

Does pastebin have any kind of word limits?

>>6923386
No but for free users it has a limit of 500kb file size

>>6920972
Good premise, I like how you picture the xcom story from the point of view of the common Joe, can't wait for more :D

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>>6914276
Don't know if this is what you meant, but here.

http://pastebin.com/tAcnHgZ1

Actually kinda nice to write in this format again. Been doing nothing, but script past few months.

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>>6910595
I wrote a story set in a (femdom) fantasy world. You're a male who is dropped off at a dwarfs house for the night to have your semen milked.

Link: http://pastebin.com/rMBiiYiw

It is actually my first story, and I'd like some criticism. One major thing I was unsure of is the dwarfs accent, and if it gets annoying when I'm writing it like that. Enjoy.

>>6923631
>>6923639
Don't forget to give tags when you post.

>>6923639
I'm going to try to get to this (and the other stories by newish guys) this weekend, but I figure I should point something out now. As a general rule of thumb, second person is a poor voice for erotica unless you REALLY know your audience. Some people are very put-off by it. Even if they'll still read it, most won't enjoy it as much as they would have, were it written in any other voice. This is especially true for BDSM topics. See the above conversation about sub versus dom perspective. If you use the second person, you only further narrow your audience.

Additionally, description becomes significantly more difficult in second person. Compared to third person, it is much harder to describe the physical appearance of the MC and impossible to describe the feelings of any partners. Compared to the first person, it is difficult to describe the mental/emotional state of the MC in a realistic and enjoyable fashion. Basically, it's more difficult and gives little reward. There are probably like two people who refuse to read first or third person. There are many people (particularly around here) that despise second person with a hatred I've never really understood.

I'm not suggesting that you change anything now, incidentally. Changing perspectives is rather time consuming and difficult. It would be better to just keep it in mind for the future.

>>6923631
>>6923661
Oh, sorry
>fantasy, human male/faun girl, consensual, oral, vaginal

>>6923668
Thank you. This story was actually first made for a caption, but it became so long that I thought it could stand on its own.

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The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here. It's a short one, sadly. I hope you still like it.

Chapter 15: Croc the Kasbah
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, violence, menace, animal death, foolishness, Florida.

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Might be a bit of a long shot, but there's a pastebin story I lost the link for, and I'd like some help finding it if anyone knows it.

Key details included:
-Futa Girl MC, who at the start of the story has tried to ignore and deny self-pleasure through her dick
-Affluent family, which affords her a doctor who has been tracking MC's growth since she was a child
-Daughter of said doctor is also the office secretary or something and the story cliff-hangered with her showing up at MC's front door (or at least had when I last finished)
-Lots of self-sucking, with major scenes taking place in her bathroom and closet

>>6923971
pastebin.com/MWUw9S23
Bam. It's a favourite of mine, does futa better than most other stories where it's just "I have a dick now, I'm going to go rape everything!"

>>6923992

Bruh, my dick is insta-diamonds. Thank you so much for the speedy find.

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I got another couple of thousand words done today and revised the opening, but as there's no smut yet and I'm still setting up the encounter, I'll wait until I have a bit more done before I post an update so you guys have something more fun to read.

>>6923206
>Polt
I hate how the artist made all of the kemonomimi monsters fucking furries.

>>6924191
Yeah, I wish he wouldn't gone the way of Fenrir, with some fur on the arms and feet, not all over. That's coming close to being a turnoff

>>6924149
Eagerly waiting for it.

Thank you! This story was the main inspiration for my own futa story, but I've managed to lose the link to it several times since. It seems to have more chapter than when I last read it too

>>6923992

>>6923963
This has redundant tags. You don't need both foolishness and Florida. One implies the other.

http://pastebin.com/dks1QkEm

Tags: exhib, voyeurism, fmasturbation, oral, vaginal

As always, let me know of any egregious errors I may have committed and overall just yell at me.

>>6925710
Well, for a start I suggest you look at >>6923668
for the general consensus about writing from second person view.


Apart from that...there isn't really much to say. For better or for worse, it's just the sex with no real attempt at doing much with characters or a setting. Not like that's bad per se, but for a lot of people the plot is just as important as the porn. Sometimes even more so.

>>6916386
>>6916849
>>6916878
>>6916923
What exactly is a dragon cuntboy...? Googling only turns up porn no definition.

>>6926568
Something that was made on /d/.Male knight gets cursed to have a dragon pussy instead of a dick and /d/ kept making him more feminine. It's like the gender opposite of the dickgirl shit rampant on this board. Not the most liked thing on /wst/.

>>6926568
some obsessed and autistic Anon's OC

>>6926568
Started off as a random delivery from Kaminitro/Modeseven/etc. Then someone got a second delivery based on it.

Blew up a bit, more deliveries. Then the writefagging, but it's all largely died off except for a few diehards who like the concept but can't agree on which directions the character ought to go.

So you have true cuntboy canon where he really doesn't change much in terms of becoming feminine and then you have matron canon where he slowly shifts into dragon-lady matron.

Yes I'm one of the autists involved in this.

>>6925727
That's fair. Normally I wouldn't do 2nd person perspective, but I very much wanted to try it for once, just to see how it feels and reads, I guess.
And I figured that was enough of a risk that I decided to keep the story and characters and all that on the simpler side. That, and because it didn't make much sense for me to flesh out or characterize persons in an anonymous sex kind of scenario.

Any more opinions would be greatly appreciated.

>>6927034
In this case, I'd argue that you went too far there and came up with a story and characters so simple that they may as well not exist.

Perhaps the idea of anonymous sex just works better in visual format than it does in writing.

>>6926588
IMO, it was never really good enough to justify even half the obsession that built around it. Even the original artwork was middling at best and kind of lackluster at worst.

>>6921158
Shit like Literotica and Nifty have been around forever, but they're mostly vanilla.

>>6923225
It's the visualization aspect, I think.

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Gimme a couple more hours and I'll have a nice big update out with some saucy action.
Got distracted by the whole Turkey thing.

>>6927331
>gorgan's snake hair act on their true emotions
>they rub against and coil around the guy she likes if he's close enough
Or in this case they're attracted to the human's natural body warmth. Anyone who writes about gorgans needs to remember to use the hair snakes more often somehow.

fucking hell, El Paso is getting hit by a sandstorm and it sucks outside right now

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>>6927331
>>6927334

>>6927350
http://i.4cdn.org/wsg/1468636965980.webm

>>6927415
>shai hulud
Texas would be full of dickass desert monsters

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Hey I'm a girl who lurks the /gfd/rr/ threads all the time. I'm really looking for someone atm to write with me or just play with me in text. Basically my main fantasy is being a tomboy or monster and completely taking advantage of a helpless younger boy. BUT these are my other kinks, it's a pretty comprehensive list, I'm 100% dom btw NOT a switch or sub in anyway:

-Another person being nervous; shivering, blushing, stammering, stuttering, looking away, not able to make eye contact, squirming, shyness, whimpering, nervousness, trembling, bashfulness, 'cuteness', etc. I consider this my main sexual interest. It is necessary for me to become aroused. I enjoy it on some primitive primal predator level but I am always careful never to be forceful about it but gentle and seductive instead.
-Social classism or outsiders. This leads into class based dominance and degradation, always on a gentle and challenging level, never to just hurt or shame someone.
-Virginity taking. The idea of making this a special moment is very arousing to me.
-Romantic/emotional rescue, emotional nursing, hurt/comfort, care taking, pampering. Making someone nervous then comforting them about it. Or mental play where I degrade and shame them but always followed by nurturing and comfort afterwards. I want my partners to know and understand well me so they are empowered by our play.
-Straight shota; gentle dom, romantic dom, mommy dom (giving).
-Reluctance (especially religiously/morally based)(receiving).
-Cross-dressing, gender swap (aesthetically).
-Wearing a strap-on, anal sex/pegging (giving).
-Costumes/role-play.
-Teratophilia: monsters, aliens, creatures, non-humans (usually watching one with a conventionally beautiful woman but also the /rr/ same thing).
-Tragic sapiosexualism: unwanted superintelligence/burdened by superintelligence.

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>>6927446
-Reluctance (especially religiously/morally based)(receiving).
-Cross-dressing, gender swap (aesthetically).
-Wearing a strap-on, anal sex/pegging (giving).
-Costumes/role-play.
-Teratophilia: monsters, aliens, creatures, non-humans (usually watching one with a conventionally beautiful woman).
-Tragic sapiosexualism: unwanted superintelligence/burdened by superintelligence.
-Schediaphilia: cartoon characters.
-Medical play and physical exploration.
-Blasphemy, satanic, demonic play, religious play. I'm agnostic outside of play.
-Insanity play. Meaning straight jackets and insane asylums.
-Clowns, silly/funny/joking/absurd play.
-Slime, food, messy play.
-Bondage play.
-Fantasy/sci-fi/psychedelic/surreal settings. Sex on psychedelics.
-Abandoned, derelict, condemned, industrial buildings; horror settings.
-Latex gloves.
-Being Little and other Littles. Cuteness. (NOT LOOKING FOR A DADDY DOM OR DOM OF ANY KIND).
-Love and romance. Which all leads into the little play, I love being cute and vulnerable at times with someone who understands me so we can be cute littles together. Btw I have two little sides a male and female.

Soft limits:
-Doms of any kind.
-Hyper-masculinity.
-Non consensual racism, sexism, lookism, judgements, bullying, or hate speech. When it is outside of play and established safe areas. When it is obviously just to hurt people it's not attractive. It's probably one of the most unattractive things ever.
HARD LIMITS:
-Scat/poop/vomit.
-Incest.
-Sex with animals.
-Pedophilia. I like shota and ageplay but I don't like real pedophilia; I think it's morally wrong. If you have a different opinion it's fine I just don't care to hear about it. Please don't message me if you are under 18.

>>6927446
We don't do RP stuff or the any of the /soc/ stuff and are very much against it due to past quarrels. You're in the wrong thread.

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>>6927453
>-Teratophilia: monsters, aliens, creatures, non-humans (usually watching one with a conventionally beautiful woman).
Oh but also especially recently I love looking at the opposite of this too, monster women with shota boys. This is what really does it for me right now. I started this thread about it:
>>6926000

This has to do with anything where the female is bigger/stronger/tougher more badass or more 'dangerous' than the male. I do like the gender reverse of this in a voyeur kind of way, but when it's a monster girl and shota boy I relate to the monster more.

>>6916187
So cute. ;-; Haven't finished reading it though.

>>6927446
>>6927453
Not only are you in the wrong place lady, but you couldn't think to just post a link to your f-list to cut down the clutter?

>>6927478
I don't use f-list.

>>6927482
and this thread doesn't ERP

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>>6916187
Finished reading it pretty hot. Thanks for writing this. Great writing too. Great job.

My favorite thing was the position they were doing it in and the size difference. That was really cute. The non con body mods and scars was interesting.

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>>6927517
Oh and I like that the rape was sort of forced on both the orc and elf, has some kind of trauma bonding aspect to it. Then them killing that guy together seemed like a good end to that. On psychological level I found it to be interesting as hell. According to my own personal tastes and preferences at this moment there should of been more emotional vulnerability and bonding. I would of liked to see more love between the couple, that's just my own personal taste right now though. They way you described the sex was pretty amazing though.

>>6927046
Okay.

I don't know how else to acknowledge this without coming off trolling. But okay dude. That's your opinion and you're entitled.

I'm going to fap and write.

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Alright peeps, 5000 words and a revised opening. I'll have more probably on Monday.

Snek 2: The Sneckening:
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing

Feedback is appreciated.

>>6927533
>>6927528
>>6927517
Thank you, its always nice to hear someone enjoys your writing, especially for niche stuff like this. I dont currently have any other plans for the two, but I appreciate knowing the chemistry was there.

>>6927572
You made me jealous of Dona, I really wish I was getting pounded like she was, god id practically pay for that.

Any slow growth giantess stories? I love the ones where they grow to city size and beyond.

>>6927572
Will you write me this:
>>6927533
Right now in this thread? I just want to hear about Dona hunting him down and having her way with him. And lots of love too.

>>6927562
Nice. So is the other Viper going to catch them and decide to join in the fun?
Might be funny if the Vipers spread the word or get him to wear something that means he's good for Viper "interaction"and he gets to know more Vipers than he ever wanted to know.

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>moved from the hyper muscle thread

This pic somehow keeps popping up in my fantasies it was the OP image from thread 4. I hate to sound like some selfish fuck but if any of you kind writers feel like giving it a shot, I would love to read a story you could write around the is image. How this adorable little girl ended up in that place where she is on the pic, how she grew so muscular and how her biceps became so huge that now she is now unable to work out until they relax and go down. Bonus points if she feels like her body is taking control of her wanting to grow bigger while she is reluctant about it.

Thanks to everyone that tries!

>>6928162
Have you ever thought about trying your self? Sounds like you have something specific in mind.

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I want something with a slime girl and lamia having sex with each other. Biggest detail I have in mind is that the slime girl is the dominant of the pair and I don't want it to be about absorption. You could have it be a BE-centric story where the slimegirl fucks the lamia's tits and fills them with goo to make them grow really goddamn huge, you could have a simple story where the slimegirl grows a dick and fucks the lamia until she passes out, or something else.

Sorry if it's too vague!

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>>6927454
Not the poster, just curios. Why would allowing rpgs cause quarrels?

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So, I finally got around to writing a sequel to a story people liked. Unfortunately, it's not the sequel anyone wanted. My characters have developed faster in my mind than they have in writing, thus my new tale is a bit of an exposition and hella short. I still popped a few boners in it, but it may not be the cuddly shit you all would expect from this series. I'm so sorry for this whole story.

Lythra's Lover
>http://pastebin.com/jt16sFqT
Tags: trap, rape, some early egg pushing

(As always with Shannon and Lythra there's probably going to be some he's and she's out of place. Please let me know if you find any)

>>6928123
More sneks would be fun to see...

>>6928243
It's a very long story that involves our past on /tg/, and recounting it now would be more trouble than it's worth. Suffice to say for the time being that it would cause some rather ugly arguments to break out that nobody wishes to be a part of.

>>6928123
>>6928279
more than 1 waifu will ruin your lifeu

>>6928412
That's not what my dick says.

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>>6928244
Mein Gott, Monster lives.

Well, you're right that this wasn't what I was expecting, but I love the characters and I'm just happy to see them in action again. You realize this calls for a sequel, of course? That's quite the cliffhanger ending.
And it's great seeing you back in the saddle as well.


If I could make a small suggestion, it might be easier to follow what's happening with clearer breaks between sections (namely the flashback and the jump forward at the end). I had to read over a few parts twice to catch everything that was happening.
Maybe a line of periods or dashes?

Anyway, good to see you back. Please don't be a stranger; I've missed reading your work.

Lovely pic, btw. Are those actually Lythra and Shannon?

>>6928197
I thought about but my writing is just a basic as it gets, english is not even my first language, I cannot into characters, and I cannot even type a single sentence without typos. I just want to get to the end pic, I don't know how to make a story with a beginning and an end.

[cantspoileron/d/]Or I just end up fapping in 2 minutes and get no work done.[/cantspoileronf/d]

Also I should have written "anyone that tries" instead of "everyone" in my previous post I probably came off as some demanding asshole.

Requesting story about a cute shota foxboy wearing a chastity cage, teased and fucked by a kind milf kitsune with giant cock who turns the shota into her cumdump. Cum inflation ensues. Happy story, and the milf keeps her boytoy's cock locked up.

>>6928598
>happy
>things that literally damage your junk
pick one

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>>6928598
>getting off to being prevented to get off

>>6927562
Shit be dope, yo. I am very happy you continued this because it's sweet as hell.

>>6928598
>>6928616
>>6928635
Orgasm denial isn't really that out-there a fetish, even if i'm the sort to say that he should still get a 'happy ending' of his own at the end.

>>6928651
I'm not against that at all. Sure, let the boy have his 'happy ending'. I'm just hoping a writefag picks up the request.

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>>6928635

>>6928651
I just don't understand how one to keep a "happy" tone whilst involving chastity.
My understanding was that chastity was a form of punishment, rather than something subs enjoy.

>>6928711
But subs enjoy punishment.

>>6928715
gonna go ahead and say that's a gross generalization

If you want gayshit, I'm your guy.

No feeders, fatties, trannies, crossdressing, shotacon, ultrafemme guys, or ABDL. Willing to at least consider most everything else. Be warned, I am known to write at Mach Snail.

>>6928711
Check out a blog called Denying Thumper some time if you want to understand the chastity mindset. Recently cucking has been more prevalent as a subject than I care for, but it's a decent resource aside from that and has helpful comparisons of chastity cages. The TL;DR version is that he enjoys being able to focus on pleasing his wife and being used as an instrument of her [and other people's] pleasure rather than focusing on his own orgasm. He divides himself into his 'lizard brain' which is his basic male instinct and his 'rabbit brain', which is his submissive side. It's interesting.

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>>6929022
If you do monstrous stuff, I've been wanting to see a cutesy homo fic about a knight of some description setting out to slay some local monster - maybe a minotaur or a small dragon - but failing in his task. The monster seems content to just break his weapons and send him away, which confuses the knight to no end. He returns to confront the monster without his weapons, one thing leads to another, the monster has him on his back and is nuzzling against his body. Whether they bang and part forever, or develop a further relationship is up to you.

>>6929022
A rich aristocrat is shopping for slaves when a young man catches his interest. The slave is a barbarian who was recently captured when his tribe's army got defeated in battle. He doesn't speak the aristocrat's language (or only knows a few words), but knows that resisting is probably a bad idea.

I'm not sure if I'd prefer the story to be about the aristocrat "sampling" the merchandise or the slave getting used to his new position (his knees, as often as not), trying to keep in his new master's good graces despite not knowing exactly what his orders are (language barrier). If you pick this up, I guess just go with whichever you think is more fun to write?

>>6929022
So farting and pissing are in? :^)

>>6910595
Whoever wrote "Crashland", I fucking love you. That story was absolutely fantastic, one of the best I've ever read.

>>6929061
I've been wanting to write something with a minotaur for a while now. I've got some outline notes down so I'll get back to you when I'm done.

>>6929099
Think I'll pass on this one for now, sorry.

>>6929125
Sure, as long as the scenario is interesting.

I'll also take requests and suggestions since I"m having trouble coming up with a premise for a new story, but my tastes are largely vanilla.

>>6929298
Have you checked the requests link up at the top? There might be something in there that interests you.

>>6929298
Virgin girl has a huge crush on her (slightly) older neighbor and childhood friend. She's convinced he thinks of her as a little sister, and as such has never thought of her in a romantic way. To compound the issue, the girl is really shy and can't bring herself to confess her love.
So, instead, she asks him to do her the "favor" of teaching her how to have sex (so she doesn't embarrass herself when she's with her [nonexistent] boyfriend, or something like that) in the hopes that he'll fall for her during the act.

Bonus points for fantasy races in a modern-ish setting. Maybe she's a halfing girl and he's an elf, and she doesn't think herself worthy of such a sexy guy. Or she could be a monster race, though nothing too exotic, and he could be a regular human.
Some sort of dynamic like that would be fun.

>>6929309
I have, most are either out of my league or not all that appealing.
>>6929338
Might do something like this. I was thinking of doing some kind of modern fantasy setting but was struggling to think of anything more specific.

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>>6928519
First no, that's not really Lythra and Shannon, but pic related is actually Ami and Jarun drawn by mask.

Yes I want to write more about Lythra and Shannon, but their time will be split up and Shannon may have his own adventures while he's away at war.

Also, looking at it I know what you mean by the flashbacks. I'm usually a fan of italics myself, but pastebin doesn't allow that. I'll try some ~

>>6929136
So glad you liked it, that was my first real attempt at a completely original story.

If you liked that you might like some of my other stuff. I'm always working on more.
>>6911562
>>6927562

>>6929338
Sounds ultra-vanilla. I approve.

>>6929368
You could use piratepad.

Is there a name for settings like Log Horizon and Overlord where RPG elements and game mechanics are explicitly referenced? I have an idea for a story that takes place in one such scenario but I don't know how else to describe it.

>>6929517
Other than being meta I'm not sure what the name would be. Sounds fun though.
A fanfic called Harry Potter and the Natural Twenty has a lot of that. It's a DnD crossover, one charter is a PC who is semi aware of this. He often references the dice rolling in his head, as well as the DM (Dimensional Mechanics, etc). Midge serve as a model for what you're going for.

WE INTERRUPT YPUR REGULARLY SCHEDULED FAPPING TO ANNOUNCE THIS BREAKING NEWS: LEWDANON YET LIVES.

>>>/aco/716151

>>6929646
Exxcellent! More high quality fansmut

>>6918875
So, how are things going?

>>6929534
that fanfic was awesome. too bad there haven't been any updates for a while.

>>6923631
That was pretty nice, but there are a couple rough spots I would like to call attention to.

There is no reason to spend an entire paragraph on physical description at the beginning. All of that can be worked into the story without disrupting it. You also do not need to spend so much time describing the appearance of characters who leave within a page of their introductions.

You also have a fairly clunky writing style. For one thing, use more pronouns. The repeated use of names is maddening at points, particularly during the smut. You also devolve into the he does [x] to her format a couple times. This is most evident around line 16. The result is a very rocky flow. Read it again and you'll see what I mean.

>>6929902
I found a couple parts I didn't like and felt needed to be changed. Then I had a bunch of overtime and just haven't been able to finish my revisions. I'm going to take a shot at finishing it today, but make no promises on that. I can, however, promise that it will be done this week. If I take any longer, I'm going to forget what this story was supposed to be about.

>>6923206
The only thing I can say is that you should write more. There are no real errors, but there is a lot of room for improvement. As it stands, this story is programmatic and awkward due to lack of detail and rushing. Both of these problems generally disappear with practice. Take your time next time you write. Try to read more smut and see what gets you off in terms of details and descriptions. Imitate what you like. You're on the right track. You just need to keep working at it.

>>6923639
This was significantly shorter than I expected. Had I realized that, I would've just read it when I commented on the use of second person. It's hard to give criticism on a story like this due to the length and narrative voice. It's too short for you to have really done anything wrong and there is no point to commenting on narration style if I'm going to suggest changing voices. Writing in second person tends to lead to bad habits and forces you to use awkward and repetitive constructions.

With as short as this story is, you might do well to just consider what you have now an outline. There simply isn't enough here to be an actual story. There is absolutely no exposition (not surprising if it started its life as a caption) and you even shortchange the smut. The scene you have here could easily be expanded to about three times its current length just by following good writing practices (focus on detail and feeling, imitating the styles you like) before even touching exposition. As far as the plot goes, it would be nice to see something of the world, even if only through the interactions of these two characters. Is this practice common? What is the point of dedicated milk maids? Why dwarfs?

Try writing this as a full-length story and see what happens. Until then, there is not much productive advise I or anyone else can really offer.

>>6925710
I actually quite liked this. The smut is good and there is no exposition to criticize (though it would be nice to see some). The only complain that I have is that the smut is very one sided. Perhaps it's a result of using second person, but there is very little feedback from the girl. You should always flesh out the partner's reactions. It's a big part of what makes written smut so wonderful. Take a look at the oral scene, for instance. You do a good job of describing the oral sex, but the fact that the MC is fingering her at the same time is all-but forgotten. Figure out how and what she is feeling, then describe it through her actions.

Speaking earlier of exposition, I do have a suggestion. Both the stories you have posted here have been very to-the-point. It seems like your writing style lends itself more to that than longer stories. Have you considered writing multi-work series? There is a lot of development that can be done with both your stories by expanding them into multi-chapter works. It allows you to keep your current style but also work in a more in-depth narrative. I think it would be interesting to explore this story more. Who is the girl and why is she doing this? What happens afterwards? Is this the beginning of a relationship, or is she just going to jump on the next man to strike her fancy? I think it's worth a shot to see what you can do with this.

>>6929959
Thanks a lot of the feedback, I really appreciate it. As with the previous, I suppose I'm still trying to balance pacing between smut and non-smut, although this one was more intentional in that regard.

I doubt I'll continue this story in particular. Despite some flaws, I'm still largely satisfied with it, and because either I or the reader would get tired of the 2nd person perspective were it to go on for much longer.

I'd like to do a series of some kind, and I've been trying to come up with a persistent setting I can keep referring to for either a bunch of independent stories all taking place roughly in the same area or with actual recurring characters or both.

I dunno, I'm really trying to juggle all my ideas at the moment. I just want to keep working and improving. Anyway, thanks for reading.

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>>6917470
>>It's understandable that it doesn't have a good reputation.
>I've run into multibreast lots of times on /d/ and never had issue with it.
Yeah, it's not like Udders or anything, the only reason it shows up in furry art is due to a large number of mammals having rows of teats.

>>6920472
>Is there an actual dragon cunt boy knight story where the end result is the OP's pic or similar?
Don't know, but I'd personally go even farther with it...

>>6924191
>I hate how the artist made all of the kemonomimi monsters fucking furries.
>>6924250
>Yeah, I wish he wouldn't gone the way of Fenrir, with some fur on the arms and feet, not all over. That's coming close to being a turnoff
PLEBEIANS!

>>6927046
>IMO, it was never really good enough to justify even half the obsession that built around it. Even the original artwork was middling at best and kind of lackluster at worst.
Hey, some of us just want to be the Dragon MILF...

>>6928244
>>6929646
'Tis the Second Summer of Smut!

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>>6929298
>dumbass mage tries to bind a demon to teach him more magic
>accidentally makes a marriage contract
it's vanilla as it gets

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Good evening /efg/. Have a quickie:

The Tavern Wench
http://pastebin.com/dsPmqBGD (embed)
M. Half-orc & F. Gnome (shortstack, oral, vaginal, huge insertion.)

Down on his luck half-orc soldier gets companionship for the night he'd never expected.

It's more of a pointless sex romp than my other recent stories, but I needed to write and keep my momentum. Enjoy!

>>6929907
Thanks for the feed back.

The advice about descriptions, I'll take that. It would give a more natural pacing to give details about appearances as things come up. I will say what I meant to do with the description of the other fauns was to give some idea of the species, also the bit about saggy breast, figured it be a more interesting way to describe the main's than just having a sentence vomit of ''she had 'x' type 'y'.''

To my own ear replacing names with pronouns doesn't sound any better. This maybe a language barrier, one can never have the kind of poetic and emotional connection to a foreign language as one does to their own. Excuses, excuses, I know, but I just don't see the difference. (in my native language (finnish) it's possible to leave out names and pronouns altogether, which in my opinion gives a better flow to things, but I don't know if that's really possible in english). I won't be re-writing the faun piece, but I'll try and pay attention in my next piece to figure out more of a variety of sentence structures.

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>>6930331
>>dumbass mage tries to bind a demon to teach him more magic
>>accidentally makes a marriage contract
Personally I'd go with:
>accidentally makes a contract to become another succubus

>>6930547
It's a marriage contract with a male, straight demon.

>>6930461
Honestly, it probably is a language thing. Trust me, it grates on a native speaker's ear. There's really no need to rewrite anything. I'm not sure that anyone ever really gets better that way anyway. Just keep it in mind.

>>6930331
I second this. I always love this type of story. It's also disgustingly vanilla.

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>>6930559
>It's a marriage contract with a male, straight demon.
Ohhh...

>>6930572
The best kind of vanilla, really.

>>6930331
>>6930572
Kind of reminds me of that story where a guy took a bath and ended up being forced into a marriage with a slime girl.

>>6930559
The pic was M/F, so I'd assume it's what was intended. Bonus points for not a Lust Demon.

>B-but I'm a Greed Demon. Why would you want to form that contract with me? I just collect magical knowledge. I've never even done any of that stuff. Wouldn't you rather a succubus or something?
>R-really? You think I'm better than... It doesn't matter that I've never... A-alright. I accept.
Magical first-time lewdness ensues.

>>6931298
No no.

Summoner is a male, summons a male demon.

Male demon is "sure okay, we're married now but I'm straight" and goes about fixing that.

TG is MY fetish.

>>6931303
Who the fuck are you? It's clearly a female demon in the picture. Are you retarded or blind? Also, rape is bad. Let vanilla TG cleanse your soul: http://exhentai.org/g/947673/f57974c212/

>>6931311
I'm someone hijacking the concept for my own tastes you silly cunt.

I never said anything about rape, I just said demon turns the dude into a chick.

>>6931319
And then sex happens? Either the summoner was gay or it's rape, mind-rape or physical rape.

Also, if you're just hijacking, don't say "no" like you're the person who posed the scenario. Writefags can write whatever they want anyway.

>>6931329
Wow you are certainly worked up.

There's not even a point in arguing with you.

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>>6931340
I just think too much about existential horror. Thanks, /epg/.

pic unrelated

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>>6931340
You're a fucking master ruseman anon

>>6931340
Repeat after me, other anon:

"I will not hijack requests, I will make my own."

Is that so hard?

>>6931383
No thanks.

Since I'm a writefag I'll just take whatever concept appeals to me and write it how I want.

In this case male summoner summons male demon and accidentally binds them with a contract of marriage in an effort to learn demonic magic. Demon turns the summoner into a woman in an effort to get the summoner to release them but the summoner is bound and determined and starts doing awkward seductions to make the demon accept them as their "wife".

Cause power is worth losing their dick.

This will have to go into my concepts folder though since I've got a lot of shit I've been shuffling my feet on.

>>6931405
I haven't seen a whole lot of TG content in these threads. I'll believe it when I see it.

>>6917616
let people suggest stuff and then work on it and play with it, or I just go with fantasies of mine at the time.

My problem these days is too many ideas all at the same time and an inability to prioritize.

>>6931383
It's not like this is a problem--a request that gets changed over time by someone else's idea doesn't erase the original request. Writers can still see all of them and choose what they like best. Everyone can pitch ideas based off of requests because there's no limit on ideas and they don't invalidate each other.

Personally I'd like to see a version with a female mage and a male demon with a focus on newlywed life and the woman introducing her incubus husband to her family.

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>>6931405
If I was a writer, rather than a fellow who just drops off lewd ideas here, I'd go with the summoner accidentally doing the binding contract, which starts turning him into an Alph and then to Succubi, and have it be mutually disliked by both parties at first.
Perhaps in demon terminology, being married to another demon means you are limited to monogamy rather than forming a supernatural harem, or Marriage contracts are difficult to create, and their power is magnitudes stronger than regular contracts.
You could go from both parties trying to escape their union, through their growing attraction to each other. Maybe go for a role reversal where the slowly shifting succubi gains confidence as attraction flips (goes from hetero-male to bisexual to hetero female) so she starts taking charge when new impulses and urges manifest.

>Mage begins needing male essence to survive
>After much arguing, Incubus lets him/her use his spunk
>Humorous scene ensues as fellatio is attempted, with the giver starting toothy, but proving a newfound lack of gag reflex by the end as both surprised by how well it went, and in heavy denial of their enjoyment
>Future blowjobs become competition in attempt to make the other admit they enjoy it
>Mage uses knowledge of magic channeling in demonic creatures to disable pressure points on Incubus (Pulling horns as to take dominant position, knowing where to squeeze to leave parts of him immobile, where to prod to intensify orgasm)
>Incubus uses knowledge/experience with other Succubi to mess with her anatomical kinks (for example, rubbing spade tail as an erogenous zone, and stroking it as to give it a pavlovian response so it naturally starts fucking herself when giving head)

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>>6931724
Back to demons entirely, I've been thinking of Succubi TF for a while, and considering different branches/professions of succubi based off of fetishes, sub/dom personality, which ultimately affects their physical appearance.
For example, Subs may get a "breeder" status, which means when fully developed they will have hooved feet, childbearing hips, and milky tits for their profession in the underworld.
A "recruiter" (one sent to surface to corrupt people) have dominant personalities, and develop more human features so they can better blend into human society.
A "punching bag" would have masochistic tendencies, and a higher healing factor/tougher skin to better handle rough play.

>>6929924
Yeah, I can see where I was rushing it, since it was quite literally a one-off that I wanted to get out as soon as possible.

Thanks for the feedback!

>>6931311

>male:succubus

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>>6931883
>Porn involving proper, sexy male demons will always be a rarity compared to the amount of trap/shota trash produced

Feels exceedingly bad, man.

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>>6931931
Do tell what do you think a proper, sexy male demon is exactly?

>>6931936
A GQ model with horns and res skin I think

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>>6931936
Start with something that looks like a man and not a prepubescent child, then go from there. I'm fine with weird and inhuman, so long as it's clearly male.

>>6931968
Aren't masculine demons the norm, for the male ones I mean? Surely the trap and shota stuff is just 4chan's obsession with that crap.

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>>6931357
That looks like Kiriha.

>>6931974
>Aren't masculine demons the norm
Not in Japan.

>>6910595
Sooo... Anything can be requested?

>>6932907
Yes

Such as requesting shortstack centaurs giving blowjobs to people and being visibly waist height.

>>6932907
Yes, but writers still have their own tastes and your request has no guarantee of being done or in the way you want.

>>6932911
Naturally.

>digits

>>6929370
I like how Snek 2 is going so far. personally I am hoping for some good romance to go with the sex.

In the meantime I'll be giving Crashland a try.

>>6932928
Good instincts.

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I'm doing some more writing. Should have another update by tomorrow, assuming this heatwave doesn't kill me first.

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Sup /efg/. Lazy writefag/lurker here, I got two things I need help with.

One, need pairings for a fic concept been working on. Concept is a 40k themed fic where a Rogue Trader has a member of the Order Famoulous sent to his ship, as he's apparently the only living male heir of his family's main line. Said Sororitas is told to ensure he continues his family's bloodline as they're a historic family (specifically her superiors just want her to arrange a marriage for him and advise him in being the male head of the family), however she takes such instructions too far, coordinated with other high ranking female members of the Rogue Trader crew to fuck him at every chance they get in order to impregnate as many of them as possible.
So, who should be trying to get in this Rogue Trader's pants? Any ideas/suggestions/requests?

Second, it's my birthday. Got any good mind control/hypno, impreg, or deepthroat themed story recommendations?

>>6935017
Well, his navigator could be a potential suitor. A bit of forbidden fruit, so to speak, seeing as how they normally only breed among those of their houses and not normal humans, iirc.

His body guard? having a close relationship with the person protecting you is something of a cliche, but it still hits some points.

The famulous herself. She gets the matchmaker's crush on her younger charge and decides that she will personally see to ensuring his and his children's loyalty to the emperor.

>>6935017
Now that I think of it, I think we had a guy who was working on something with a very similar plot, but he vanished a while back. [spoiler]If this is you, then I feel so awkward.[/spoiler]

But in all seriousness, the Famulous herself is the most logical choice. What better way to ensure his line remains pure than to bear his children herself? That, and we are seriously lacking in SoB smut.

>>6935041
Hmm, honestly surprised I hadn't thought of having the navigator within the story, closest I'd gotten was perhaps having a "normal" psyker on board who gets possessed leading to some Slannesh shenanigans or serves as a conduit for stuff like Enslavers (Psyrens, Krell, etc.) getting onto the ship or something.

Body guard's not a half bad idea, and oh don't worry, the famulous will be getting some action in for sure.

>>6935049
And yeahhh, I've been speculating on the fic idea for a long while and way back when we were on /tg/ would probe for suggestions/ideas, but stuff like writing a thesis paper and other shit while finishing up uni took precedence. Plus honestly the whole kerfuffle of /wst/ getting kicked off /tg/ and having to have ghost threads for awhile also kinda pushed me away from engaging in wst/efg style writing. Now though while unemployed the only thing keeping me from writing is my own shitty self-discipline so hopefully I'll be able to actually work on producing some actual content on here for once.

>>6935060
I can't see the Famulous letting the Navigator in on it- they're too far removed from the holy human form to be worth mating with, given that they're classified as their own species.

As for your birthday recommendation, FDS's "Getting To Know Herself" isn't too bad as a MC fic, and MersenniusPrime is working on one called Mind Games. Its pastebin should be up on the list, but bear in mind that it's not done yet.

Finally, good to have you back. You can count on us to keep you disciplined, at least.

>>6935072
True, though it's porn so the rules can be bent a little bit. Perhaps the Navigator gets jealous about all the fucking going on without them and forces herself on the Rogue Trader? RT going along with it cause free pussy, not much to complain about.

And thanks, I'll look those up and keep an eye on the WIP one.

>>6935076
True dat. And if the Famulous doesn't know she won't complain about it.

>>6935076
>>6935077
perhaps the navigator's house wants to have increased ties with the Rogue TRader's? And as the Nav House is on hard times, they're unofficially branching out until they get back on their feet?

>>6935086
Hmm, as opposed to him being the only heir I could actually potentially work off that angle, his Navigator is trying to seduce him/have his child to strengthen ties between their houses, meanwhile his family sends the famulous to specifically seduce him before the navigator can. Que catfights/threesomes, etc.

>>6935086
Problem is, a Navigator only breeds 'true' with another Navigator. Any child they have with a regular human lacks the third eye.

Now, her bedding the Rogue Trader for favors is certainly doable, but you'll want to keep in mind any child won't be considered a suitable heir, with the whole 'spawn of a mutant and not even a useful one at that' thing.

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>>6930331
ok !

part 2 coming...eventually !

>>6935195
Looks great so far anon, looking forward to part 2.

>>6931288
sauce?

>>6935195
kek
rabbit familiar :3

Is anyone going to make another thread?

>>6935366
When this one falls off the board, sure.

>>6935366
We have to wait for this one to fall off the board. If we make it before that, this will likely get deleted, meaning it won't get archived

Uhh mind if i wana ask what the post limit is for this board?

>>6935607
300 posts before the thread no longer gets bumped back to the first place of the queue.

After the 300th post, it's only a matter of time.

>>6935269
It was one of Smutomancer's.

>>6935269
aww, someone noticed the rabbit! :>

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>>6935195
>i'm going to learn ALL the forbidden love
l-lewd
oh wait it says lore

>>6935195
Protein, is that you?

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>>6936032
yep! i'll be slowly working on part 2 in the flockmod today in between cleaning house

>kissing is now a tag on sadpanda
this is my fetish

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>>6936348
Deviancy goes full circle. You get into so much weird shit you eventually circle back to stuff like hand holding, cuddling, being in a loving relationship etc has your fetishes. Granted, your weirder fetishes get mixed in too so you end up with wanting lovey dovey stuff with a big female monster/alien/etc.

>>6935128
would the child have any latent psychic abilities at all?

>>6936246
Glorious.

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Ok another 2000 word update, feedback is love feedback is life.

http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V

>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob

>>6936475
I'm no expert on stuff with psykers but I'd imagine at the very least the kid would have some increased chance of being born a psyker. That said, hopefully the chance of the kid being a null doesn't increase as well, otherwise that pregnancy would be incredibly not fun what with all the excruciating constant pain and/or death.

>>6936475
Nope. Navigators aren't psykers. They're close, and are akin to distant cousins, but they are not pyskers.
If you count ADB's BL books as canon, then navigators can still reproduce with regular humans (at least w/ f-navigator x m-human pairings, which I take to imply it would work the other way).

>>6935017
Subplot: the sister's parallel machinations of skewing the gender balance of those who surround him as far female as possible, and comprised of people enthusiastic about the (dubiously) divinely ordained harem-come-orgy.

The appointment (in the Sister's role as the chamberlain of the household) of a noble fashion designer known to the ordo to harbor licentious and hedonistic tastes as official tailor and dressmaker coincides with female uniforms becoming somewhat racier, though the materials budget gets noticeably lighter.

>>6929912
any luck so far?