/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General (formerly /wst/)

>>6809882
Thanks anon, not on the scope I was looking for but it completely addressed a different problem I was having.

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So last thread someone suggested this
>If someone's up for doing a writing request, I'd really like to see a breast expansion/lactation one-shot.

>I'm trying to think of something to make the request stand out more...

And I figured it sounded like a great idea for TG/TF into a holstaurus. I'm writing a story right now, but given an essential part of the story the mama holstaurus is going to need a female lovebuddy. I'm thinking a Monster Musume/Encyclopedia troll or oni, but just looking for ideas for someone who would be able to milk and love a holstaurus to satisfaction.

Also, the appearance of the holstaurus will be anywhere from the meek holstaurus pictured to the big amazon ones from musume.

Also, working on editing my DCBK story, and doing some work on the concept pitched about an occult lesbian girl turning a guy into a girl.

>>6812636
I am the BE/lactation requester, so I am glad you're inspired!

Not to sound ungrateful, but the holstaurus angle isn't my speed- so like I said, I'm happy you're onto something!

In the interests of helping, your story's second lead could be... hmm. I want to suggest some kind of plant or water-themed gal. The former because 'thirsty soil/plants'. Like, they can just drink endlessly, or absorb it through their skin. The same goes for a water-gal, like a slime.

As far as what I was actually in the mood for, I was drawing a blank when I made the request. Having had a bit to think on it, I'd go for something like a dainty, slim elf being va-va-voomed into a fertility goddess.

>>6812648
I gotcha, I've got a thing for TG and TF so I tend to work it in.

The second monstergirl isn't a lead, but a complement to the mama holstaurus. I think I'll go with that troll idea or an oni.

As for someone blossoming into a fertility goddess... okay, I might be modifying an idea I had.

>>6812668
Hahah! Whatever works!

For the goddess idea, part of the appeal for me is going from 'what-confused' to 'totally into it'. You don't have to invoke that if it's incompatible.

>>6812671
That might occur anyways, I've had some ideas.

Anyways, for a short, busty, curvy girl with a soft tummy and auburn hair and rich blue eyes, what kind of voice suits her? Husky? High pitched? Soft and musical?

>>6812718

Soft and Musical

Does anyone know how copyright appeals to written pornography?

Such as writing league of legends fap fic?

>>6812727
Judging from the (huge) amounts of (badly) written fanfics about established characters on sites like adult-fanfiction.org; I'd say they don't apply as long as you don't make money out of it somehow. (And even then.)

>>6812825
Thanks, had 4chan not died I would have responded sooner.

I do intend to try and set up a patreon and make beer money by writing fapfic for league and dota.

Well maybe this:

Guy goes to work. Has an accident and wakes up in the body of a futa. Fucks the first female on sight (the doc) and eventualy comes to terms with the new props of his body

>>6812589
Has anyone read this. Best m>f story i've ever read. Stopped getting updated a couple months back, guess the author ran out of ideas. Would love to find something else they've written

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WnxdFRVfWzQinY3VoIgsqX3zvurLk5GZk2HbIDvoVyc/edit?pli=1

Here's an idea I don't think I'd be good at writing since I tend to gravitate to stories with smut sprinkled in rather than outright smut.

But a guy wakes up, goes to bathroom, and finds himself peeing out of a pussy he grew overnight. He still has his dick, but the only thing that comes out is precum and cum. Purely sexual now. The pussy is fully functional and has a clit but it's hard to get to with the balls in the way. Dude is freaked out, calls in sick, and debates on what to do. Ends up masturbating.

Next day another change. And another day, another change. Tits grow, hips widen, structure softens, etc. Essentially turning into a fully functional futa one day at a time. He's called in to work every day sick and spends most of his time frantically masturbating. It turns into a hedonistic cycle for him till he wakes up one day clearheaded and fully changed.

Or, even better than him calling in sick, he works from home as IT or in finances so he does his job for a few hours normally then he starts masturbating while he's working then he finds himself looking up more and more erotic porn to get himself off. He never leaves the house so delivery food stacks up, etc.

Like I said, a bit beyond my skill in smut delivery, but I think it'd be interesting.

>>6812945
But why? Not to be rude, but unless this transformation left him unable to control himself or gave him a good reason to try and fuck this girl on sight then it'll read more or less like a generic porno. We need context and plot, man.

Here's the intro to a story I just started writing (FxF, altered states of consciousness, and non/con). Pls tell me what you think...

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>Somewhere, on a hidden beach with pristine sands rung by impossibly tall cliffs, Elizabeth found herself calmer than she’d ever been. She walked along the shoreline, the water shimmering in iridescent hues, towards a figure on a boulder that jutted out into the sea. Surely they were the only other person around for miles, Elizabeth thought to herself, and that somehow seemed comforting in the moment. The clouds in the sky moved erratically – speeding, slowing, and switching direction altogether – in a dizzying dance.

>Elizabeth fought back the slight nausea in her stomach, and soon the figure in the distance began to take shape. It was a woman in a dress as black as the night sky, with hair falling in loose, bouncy waves all around her. The woman seemed lost in thought staring out into the sea, and the closer Elizabeth came, the more intense her feeling of inner peace became. A warm fog draped her mind, muting her inner dialogue, until there was no room left in her thoughts save for the woman on the rock.

>Elizabeth was only a few meters away when the woman turned towards her. Electricity shot down her spine, and her body froze in place. Those eyes… They sparked like the water, seemingly all colors at once, and shone radiantly. Elizabeth’s eyelids drooped involuntarily, but with all her willpower she held them open, if only just to stare into those eyes for a moment longer. The woman smiled warmly, and that warmth spread across Elizabeth’s body.

>She mouthed something Elizabeth could not hear over the sound of a wave crashing against the shore, and just like that, Elizabeth snapped awake in her bed.

>>6813331
There isn't much there to form an opinion of, unfortunately. Better wait til it's all done to ask for feedback.

>>6813331
What >>6813454 said.

I have no basis for this story whatsoever. It sounds pretty enough. A little trippy even, but this is three short paragraphs and a single line. Not much to go on.

At least a full chapter, or something more focused for feedback on. Like ideas or concepts you have

>>6813454
>>6813465

Yeah it's just an intro setpiece, was more wondering about the quality of the writing or whatever. I'm a few pages in now and I'll share a first draft of Ch. 1 when I'm finished.

>>6813501
Sounds good, right now we've got the bread on the table but we don't even have our appetizers. So looking forward to it.

I'll probably try posting some new stuff tonight based on a couple ideas that some anons threw out there too.

>>6813518
like what? If there's one thing we desparately need, it's new stuff.

>>6813644
Working on a chapter 1 of a BE/Lactation/TG/TF story. Also finished up and need to proofread the intro chapter to a story inspired by someone's idea of a lesbian girl into the occult changing a boy into a girl so she can love them.

No real smut in the latter, slower story. Former will probably be 3, maybe 4 chapters and each one will include smut.

Gonna throw another prompt out: perfect housewife style character dommes another girl because her husband likes to watch and, although the housewife isn't particularly kinky herself, pleasing her husband is the #1 priority

Alright, got a chapter of occult tg story. Just an intro, interested in how people feel about it.

http://pastebin.com/QfekRczX

My three original drafts of the DCBK story I'm writing are on my pastebin as well. I'll try and get the lactation/BE story started tonight but it will have a focus mostly on TG/TF.

Piggybacking off the idea above, I've had an idea for ages for a lemon fanfic for Ranma 1/2 where Akane sexually dominates female Ranma. Bondage, petplay, spanking, etc etc. Maybe ends with Akane making Ranma stay a girl permanently.

I'm no good with that stuff though, I don't know the lifestyle and I imagine I'd come off fake if I tried writing it.

>>6813686
But where's the plot?

>>6812589
Yay macha's back!

Anyone know if there's any /tg/ content creators making stuff?

>>6813844
Me and anonymouse are working on something big, but it'll be a long time before it's done, unfortunately.

Does the fiction have to be /d/ related? I have a yuri fanfic I wrote a couple months ago I'd be willing to share, in exchange for the self-esteem boost / criticism it comes with.

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>>6813854
Fuck, forgot my pic.

>>6813858
Sure, why not.

alright then, here it is.
http://pastebin.com/nFRRKKc9

>>6813920
As a general rule of thumb, every story should be posted with at least a title and tags. The title helps people to remember stories that they may have seen before and helps them notice the story in the first place. Tags are obviously always appreciated. You would also generally do well to provide a brief description, particularly in the case of fan fiction. At the very least, you should tell what setting it is and what characters are involved.

I'll give it a read over later. It's late now.

>>6813331

Hey uh so here's that thing I spent all day writing! It's probably bad and ends right before the good part because I'm a tease/too self conscious to write actual smut but here it is anyway I guess!

http://pastebin.com/9zW2EgW6

FxF, mind control, forced les, non/con

>>6812589
I've written a bunch of audio scripts for FSA, and I'm considering adapting one of them into an actual story.

Is there any interest in high-fantasy femdom/corruption?

>>6814098

That was pretty hot, and yes you need to actually write more of a payoff, but on its own it's a very solid ending point. Good chapter-cutoff at least.

>>6814144

Thanks :> I've never actually written a full story before and certainly nothing smutty so yeah wasn't too sure about it. I'll try to, um, come up with more ideas tonight

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Something in a brothel run by a sorceress or demoness who gives the girls power to transform into certain monstergirls during sex.

Such as:
Customer getting a night with one who fits him somehow; e.g. dairy farmer with holstaur girl, or crooked clergyman with demon or angel girl.
New girl getting her monstergirl power in an erotic ritual with the mistress; she could meet different monstergirls and choose one, or have it chosen for her based on her body type and personality.

>>6813920
>>6814003
Sorry. I did post the title and the fandom involved in the pastebin title but I'll put some stuff down here.

Title is Alchemy Class, a Touhou Fanfiction, featuring Marisa Kirisame and Alice Margatroid.

FxF, mind control, porn with plot.

Synopsis is that Alice catches Marisa stealing from her, and forces Marisa to teach her some of her skills in alchemy as a result.

I've been meaning to add more chapters to the story but have been procrastinating on it. However it's complete work as is.

Trying to start on a new piece, with some SECRET SPY spoofing, and a main character getting fucked by two competing agents. Who are also futas.

My trouble is really not making them too huge, 'cuz I'm way into that. I'd like to make it somewhat accessible to people who aren't as size queeny as me, though.

Anyhow, just had fun with figuring out the opening so far:
http://pastebin.com/Lb5MD6Rq

>>6814098
As a lead-up, it's solid. It sets the framework for the story well.

Two things you should pay attention to:
- Watch out for runaway sentences. Cutting up the lengthier ones in multiple smaller sentences would improve readability.

- Show, don't tell. The best example I can give you is line 61. You breeze through your character's backstory in three meagre lines. Write that shit out! Have the two of them dialogue and flesh both out instead of zipping through context as if it was an afterthought.

Can I test out an idea on ou guys i'm toying around with? I want to write about a magic store where people can go to get there dream body. You can become a centaur, or a mermaid, you name it, they have something to turn you into it. Also magic items like rings or charms to improve things like your love or sex life. What I want to know is what would be a good reason to get the customers to have sex with the people who work at the store? I have two ideas, one if the transformation makes you horny, and you have to have sex after the transformation to stabilise or something. Or its just part of the package, to make sure your body is in working condition.

>>6814113
There's an audience for just about everything. Go for it. Who are you, incidentally?

>>6814113
>Is there any interest in high-fantasy femdom/corruption?

OH MY GOODNESS YES

*cough*

I mean, if you feel like it, anon-kun.

>>6813884
Could I... ask that you make a drawing of Gabriel and Macha? Pretty please?

>>6814933
Actually, Inker drew that pic- I can't draw worth shit. You'll have to ask him the next time he shows up.

>>6814735
No one with any notoriety.

>>6814912
>femdom/corruption
So MGE?

>>6815009
No idea who or what that is.

>>6815103
Monster Girl Encyclopedia.

>>6815108
I was actually thinking of Domme!Sorceress seduces [spoiler]and falls in love with[/spoiler] sub!Paladin.

>>6814735
http://pastebin.com/ihcAPmkG

Here's my archive, although it's not complete.

I'm looking for stories featuring male to shemale tf, or forced feminisation, without the dick becoming locked up or shrunk. Ideally the male will be forced to undergo a transformation to a shemale with big tits, large dick/balls, and learn the pleasures of taking it up the ass

>>6815208
We don't have any even vaguely close to that. You going to write one yourself or just look elsewhere?

>>6815208
>>6815237
Yeah, that's way too specific and niche. You're going to have to wright that yourself if you want it.

Any writers available here for commission work?

>>6815296
I don't think anyone here does commissions. Traditionally, most of what gets written is either requests or simply stuff the writers themselves come up with.

Does anyone have a go-to source for stories of women being impregnated/bred by creatures which are not their own species, preferably at the woman's request and/or to their delight? It seems consensual multi-species pair-bonding and breeding is an under-represented category most places I go.

>>6815296
I might be. Details?

Of what you want, that is.

>>6815390
Have you looked at the list yet?

>>6815208
Well someone was writing something I think pretty close, but we haven't gotten chapter 2 or 3 yet where I think most of the fun will start. It basically just has an intro/setting build.

>>6815208
>shemale
>not liking vaginas
Who do you think we are?

This is a story i wrote last night >~> trying to be all sci-fi but I guess in the end it's more /d/

I lie in bed, exhausted, and in need of relief and needing rest.
From the chest of drawers on my right, I swiped through the various storage compartments - not too far, though, since this was a compartment I used pretty often - until I pulled out my special organ.

The penis was soft for now, but I switched it on and plugged it into it's recharge bay so I could fill its reservoir with blood, after which it became stiff and ready for me to use it.

technically I didn't need this in order to fall asleep - since the effects of orgasm could supposedly be made to occur automatically with just a command to the nervous system / bloodstream interface at my crotch where the actual effects of stimulation would be made to be felt anyways, it was maybe almost inefficient to waste time on procuring the stimulation in the way I was about to do. In fact, many people did not do much but initiate these programs - often downloaded from sources considered top-notch - that provided recorded sets of stimulations that could reliably satisfy their consumers. Those people usually kept their actual physical members almost entirely inactive, and in the dark, only being attached back on when they wanted to do things with whatever partners they might have. Except for those crass individuals that kept theirs out on display, like a trophy of some sort.

(1/2)

>>6815530
(2/3)

But I don't want a simulation - at least not tonight. The nerve ending simulations only really exist as a proxy connection for those that become severed during separation - in essence, they did not provide any additional simulated sensations of touch to the skin of any of the rest of the body. And I wanted all my senses to be stimulated... It's just more healthy that way.

So I took my now-stiffened penis into my hands and laid the item of my own flesh across my chest. I could feel the blood pulsing inside the detachment noe to an artificial hartbeat, one of an almost, but not quite identical rhythm to that of my own body's, controlled by a mostly-natural heart within my own chest, beating only a little bit away from the artifice.

Stroking it, I could feel sensations being transferred to me tele-electronically. Good sensations. Mind-blanking sensations, clouded of thought and perception by a small degree that got bigger as I went on.
The now almost dripping piece of skin made its way to being dragged across my face, leaving it feeling freshened with a small cooling moisture sitting over its surface. However, I did wipe my face of those fluids, depositing both the amalgamated residuals and the tip of the penis into my mouth to swallow.
This is what I really preferred to the simulations - the taste of flesh. There was a little bit of a taste coming from the chemicals that were used to keep the organs healthy and functioning while in storage - something I'm mostly sure is safe for consumption, but certainly did make a difference from what would have been the natural taste. However, a little time of sucking took that taste away and left me with the somewhat rubbery, salty taste that I had come to feel used to having left in my mouth at nights as I fall asleep. Too many of the foods that we ate then were such unnatural cocktails of chemicals and biological elements, it felt good to have the taste of something natural like human skin.

>>6815534
(3/4)

Missing from it was the taste of urine. When we started to have the technology to remove our genitals from our bodies and keep them separate and safe, their use in urination came to an end, being replaced by a small pipe ending which usually went into a removable vessel for the waste product to accumulate, removing the need for public toilets (with a separate, but similar removable waste chamber replacing later parts of the large intestine for solid waste disposal.) Often, the waste products would be plugged into a sanitation drainage system and analyzed to detect health measures of the person, before the fluids went to the treatment center where the water would often be purified and recycled for other uses (but only if nothing too dangerous was found by the tests, of course).
In the end, the function of the removed genitals was to facilitate a public equality of the sexes and to continue to fulfill the role of creation of sexual gametes for reproduction purposes in the future, while keeping those delicate cells protected from the harms of radiation and other stressors that often came from daily life out and about and in the workplace.
They also were for recreational use. Naturally.

When the stimulation to the penis in my sucking came to a climax, its delicious ejaculate - a product made of real semen from the testes, still attached and functioning - flooded my mouth, like a delicious sauce, while biochemical response of euphoric sleepiness flashed over my body and mind. I let the semen stay in there for a couple seconds, savoring the taste, as I took the still-engorged penis and attached it to its holding box. As I swallowed, and drifted off to sleep, the blood flowed out of the artifice, as it switched off and contracted back into its usual flimsy state while the extra blood collected into the system for analysis, and storage for medical needs.

>>6815535
(4/4)

It was good to be able to live in a world that was so pleasurable and free, that allowed us to live more dangerously with the safeguard of a technology that would provide us with no shortage of medical backups and protections.

As I dreamed that night, I once more imagined the many potential children that I might raise - of those that currently existed, frozen, in a refrigerator, waiting for me to make my decision. I still had so much time, but the choice excites the imagination for enough time that it would likely be engaged for until that time comes. I was thinking that I would probably have a boy...

>>6815530
>>6815534
>>6815535
>>6815538
It seems incoherent, and the setting itself doesn't make much sense. Not even good porn, really. I suppose it could have potential, but who wants to read exposition in the middle of a porn scene?

>>6815440

It'll involve some non-con and mind control with a bit of expansion.

[email protected] if you're interested in doing it.

>>6815530
>>6815534
>>6815535
>>6815538
So...

>>6815569 has some good points.

It doesn't flow as a story, your writing is also very hard to make sense of. I had to reread several sentences just to understand it. It also feels like a setting invented to justify the concept of detachable genitals when that's hardly sensible. You could install protect or an on/off switch more easily.

Detachable phallus is a cool kink. Just look at Sei so Tsui Dan Sho. All sorts of fun stuff to do with it.

But you didn't need that exposition. Hell, if we were just doing fap fuel, you could have focused more on the sucking and just gone:

"And with a gentle 'pop' I pulled my cock off my pubic mound, still hard and throbbing."

We don't need a setting to justify that insanity, unless you're doing something for social commentary, you're just giving men what's essentially a vaginal mound with no slit.

I already typed up a bit, if you want to see how I'd do it.

Yeah i wasnt trying to write porn was just trying to do a story

>>6815643
I noticed, but even there it wasn't a very good story. It was literally just a weird masturbation scene.

>>6815643
You're weird and grotesque, but there seems to be no point. Is it transhumanism? Is it social commentary? Is it porn? I didn't know man.

Even taking out the sexual/fetish aspect, it's not easy to read and meanders. It feels like writing for the sake of writing, which is relaxing at times, but it's also pointlessly putting words on a medium. It had no sense of guidance, and it was too short to really develop anything from what you have.

And anything done for no other point than the sake of it is basically masturbation.

>>6815582
>Detachable phallus is a cool kink

You're goddamned right.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PYwiwbgMusY

>>6814321
Watch your language shifts. It's a third-person story, yet we're listening to a lot of unmarked direct quotes from her internal monologue. It comes off as a bit jarring.

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Again sorry for bailing, have a set as an apology

>>6815917
>>6815915
Yes, yes,
give us more heresy.

>>6815922
Hey, uh, Inker, would it be too early to ask you for a drawing? Like, Macha x Gabriel Angelos?

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>>6815924
No promises though, sorry.

>>6815929
Inker, dude, did you get to the other requests from last time?

I wish I could detach my penis and there'd just be a vagina hiding under there. :(

>>6815932
No, but I remember there was SisterXPyker kissing, BansheeX(something) ass, and one more?

>>6815929
Unholy fuck, that is some serious heresy

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Star Wars is /tg/ related right

>>6816104
With the amount of board-, miniature and roleplaying games set in the SW-verse; you goddamn bet it is!

hey you've improved a lot since i last saw your stuff, inker.

I've been stuck in a sort of rut where i haven't been able to commit to finishing stuff. get around halfway and then i get annoyed with something and move on to something else.

i went and redid one of my earliest uploads for shits and giggles though, so here's that.

http://i.imgur.com/lAadGyh.png skavens x lady

>>6815946
>BansheeX(something) ass,

Oh yeah, this one was a Banshee and a Sister arguing over who's ass is better and a(n) (un)lucky guardsman has to be the judge, likely drawing ire from one of the women.

>>6816302
I think there was a request for the subsequent threesome, as well, but I dunno if it was from the OR.

>>6816321
that would also be nice.

>>6816188
Still nice of you to pop in. More drawfaggotry is always welcome.

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Hey, relatively inexperienced smutwritefag here looking for comments/critique. I've got two Overwatch stories (One D.Va, the other Zarya/Lucio) for anyone who's interested to take a look at:

http://m-didact.tumblr.com/post/144055295020/sunday-smutday-upping-the-viewer-count-overwatch

http://m-didact.tumblr.com/post/143951757030/bathhouse-time-overwatch-zaryal%C3%BAcio

Also, I'm working on a 40k series based around an Emperor's Children warband and the shenanigans they get up to on their ship, but that's probably for another time.

>>6816647
>Also, I'm working on a 40k series based around an Emperor's Children warband and the shenanigans they get up to on their ship, but that's probably for another time.
What kind of themes are we talking about here? Also, is this supposed to be comedy or something a bit more serious?

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>>6816651

To tell you the truth, I'm not entirely sure. I only have four characters mapped out; two Astartes and two captives. They'll both feature themes of corruption and mindbreak to different degrees, but one of them will probably get pretty abusive while the other will get progressively more consensual/warm/fuzzy.

>>6816738
who are the captives?

>>6816750

Captives are Kessima, the daughter of a planetary governor, and Leandra, her handmaiden. Kessima isn't spoiled rotten, but she's definitely lived a pampered life without really having to work for much of anything. Leandra is tough and defiant, which isn't very good for her situation, because she belongs to Luxon, who's beautiful but a real sadistic motherfucker. REAL sadistic. Kessima was picked by Urkarus, who's an ugly whoreson missing 2/3rds of his face, but he's a lot more benevolent and patient with his slaves - think the more saner members of First Claw from the Night Lords trilogy.

Later down the line I might include a dashing PDF captain captured trying to save Kessima, but I'm not sure what I'll do with him. Maybe toss him to the daemonettes.

>>6816765
could make the captain a female and have the Emperor's Children break her, too.

>>6816774

Nah dogg, already got two girls. Got to change it up a little. Knowing both the Emperor's Children and my own proclivities, he'll probably end up feminized anyway.

>>6816776
Woo, feminization

Will it involve chaos or warp or weird daemon toxins?

>>6816788

Haven't decided yet. Quite possibly all three. But that's what down the line. The first part's already up on my Tumblr and it uses some shady substance to increase elasticity, so.

>>6816188
Nice to see you back again, people sometimes drop in wondering if you still post stuff. Here's hoping you're able to pull yourself out of that rut.

>>6815578
Hm. What's doing the expanding, how, who and what sex are they?

>>6816933

The expansion is cause by subliminal commands via hypnotic suggestions. It's basically a mind over matter thing. It wouldn't be an instant thing. It would breast expansion and it would be pretty much all girls in the story.

>>6816937
Fascinating. Ah, something I should've asked earlier; whose eyes are we seeing the story through?

The girls or the person implanting the commands, I mean?

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Oh yeah, new thread.

http://pastebin.com/P3kD1G8H

To the Victor goes the spoils
Male/Female, Female/Werewolf, Fellatio, Cunnilingus, Outdoors, Rough Sex, Vaginal, Knotting, Endowed male, Light bondage

http://pastebin.com/5ffdA8bF

I wanna do bad things with you
Male/Female, Werewolf/Vampire, Urban Fantasy, Dubious Consent, Forced, Outdoors, Rough, Knotting

>>6816954

This is the gist of it...

Woman finds out she has or develops strong hypnotic powers that only work on other women.

She's extremely reluctant to use them. She uses them by accident a few times. The power is a bit corrupting. She begins to indulge herself a bit.

Meanwhile, other forces are at work who want her either for a weapon or eliminated.

She needs to find out what's going on and how to stop the plot against her. All the while, lot's of lesbian sex is going on.

That's a very bare bones explanation, there would be way more substance to it. But hey, this /d/

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>>6816966
Sounds like an awful lot for a commission.

I'll have to give it some thought.

>>6816966

i hope youre actually a queer woman irl because lesbian hypnosis is entirely my jam (i wrote this >>6814098 and am currently editing it/working on ch 2)

>>6816966
>>6816983

oh whoops youre asking someone to write it not writing it yourself sorry i am too high

>>6816974

I understand. Feel free to contact me at me email and I can go into some real depth with it.

>>6816983
>>6816987

Sorry, I'm just a guy that can appreciate lesbians a lot. I'll give your story a read though.

>>6817011

oh its cool if youre just a reader, i just think girls write lesbians better in general

>>6817019

So do I!

I've been looking for female authors but, I'm not adverse to hiring a male either. My favorite lesbian/mind control story of all time was penned by a guy. Believe it or not, it was very restrained and filled with subtlety. There was nothing really pornographic about it.

But, I still read it to this day because how awesome it is!

I'm willing to share the entirety of my idea if you'd like, I just do want to do it on the thread because of the limited space.

Got a suggestion for the writefags in the audiance.

Three girls, all good friends. Only thing is, they've been cursed to forever bear a man's seed in their snatch or a man's get in their womb. Normally this means they just find a guy they like, take him home, and rape the shit out of him. However, one of them finds out how to unbirth people, and all three of them switch to unbirthing guys they like.

The catch is, when they guys come out, they've been turned into futas, and are very willing to fuck their "mothers" into submission for being locked in their wombs for 9 months.

>>6817110
You're tickling some of my fancies in some ways. Unbirth/tg/transformation.

Some changes I'd make. No curse, instead it's three witches/enchantresses or what have you. They've placed a powerful spell on themselves that as long as they imbibe in powerful life energy (and sexual energy is part of that) they can remain youthful and live nigh forever.

But it's like... trying to heat a house you keep adding on to with the same furnace you bought when it was a quarter the size. You've got to keep throwing more and more fuel in to achieve the result you want. Because they aren't getting any younger.

One of them picks up on the fact that men in their prime, their primary targets, have LOTS of life energy and if they drain it all at once it's like loading the furnace with rocket fuel. They burn out, might kill them, certainly hurt them. But if you bleed it off slowly, over months, devouring it and storing it carefully, you can get a few years instead of a few weeks out of it. Only downside is you're essentially pregnant for a few months as you reform the body inside you, but once that's done it's relative smooth sailing for some time.

Of course none of them want to be parents so they dump the kids off at orphanages. Cue some years later and they find themselves confronted by dozens of people of mixed ages, and find out that to some degree or another every reformed kid (born as a girl) remembers their lives as men and what happened.

Then they all sprout penises because they too have some weird sexual magic powers and fuck the witches into overdrive which uh... iunno.

>>6816879
>>6816463

yeah I'll try to contribute more often; i know dlfg and a few anons like the stuff i put out sometimes, so i ought to be a bit more consistent.

speaking of, made another pencil drawing. same sort of stuff as can be expected.

http://i.imgur.com/uygG6Jh.png skaven x vampire lady

>>6816647
Is this your artwork or your inspiration?

>>6815296
>>6815389
We should really add something to the stick about some anons being willing to do commissions but it's more likely if you look in the commissions thread.

>>6817892

I didn't know there was a commissions thread. Link?

>>6817961
>>6762242

Writefags sometimes advertise themselves here too.

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>>6817970

>>6818218
google and iqdb give me nothing.

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>>6818238
Think I found it on dA. Try looking for it there.

As far as I can recall, it's basically two of the artist's post-apoc OCs who live together and deal with their disputes in a mutually satisfying manner.

>>6815296
>>6815578

I'm also interested in hiring some writers. For surprisingly similar themes, although no expansion.

Anyone found any writers to commission?

>>6817741
Oh, neat. I always did like that pairing. Can't remember if they were a request or one you came up with yourself, but it's always nice to see more of them. The vampire's expressions are certainly some of the best you've done.

And yea, I'll second the hope that you're able to get over the hump. I've heard that it happens to a lot of artists, or writers, or whatever - they become more and more aware of their mistakes as they become more and more practiced at their craft. So it's easy to get frustrated and abandon things, or feel like you aren't improving further, when in fact you are.

>>6818465

it was a request. they're fun to draw.

drawing them again is a good way to note that improvement, when compared to the original piece I made.

>>6818218
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/RoxyRex/424368/Every-Argument-Ends-Like-This

Anyone know of where to find good futadom on male stories?

>>6818765
>they're fun to draw.

You should do them some more, they've got a lot of character. Maybe the vampire being passed around his minions?

>>6819831
Nuns are for gentle loving/corruption, not rape.

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>>6819854
Why do you say that?

>>6819860
Because rape isn't my kink, thank you very much.
>orcs doing it

Could it be any more cliche?

>>6819854
>Nun: Mr Orcrish, I know you are the town butcher and are happy to donate wares to this church but I have asked you before not to come here dressed like you are for work and bringing your tools, it frightens the children.

>>6820313
I agree with gentle, consensual corruption.

Let's all be responsible freaks

Requesting writing set in a world where the cum of male monsters is an incredibly valuable alchemic ingredient. They're all intelligent though, and most of them are wealthy enough to not care about being paid for their cum. So they convince them to give it voluntarily by making the process feel incredibly good. Which can be really hard when you're milking something the size of a house, or advertising to a culture that doesn't have sex for pleasure.

>>6820415
You try writing it yourself? Because it sounds like you have a really good idea of what you want to see, and that's ultimately all you need to start writing.

>>6820495
>it's usually much less fun to read your own stuff.
You can say that again. You can have the hottest idea in the world once you've written it you'll be editing and redrafting it so many times the finished product will make everyone except you happy.

>>6820466
Thanks! I do have a great idea for what it would look like, but it's usually much less fun to read your own stuff. I have all kinds of really specific ideas for the stuff that turns me on, but usually they're either niche or not something I'd want to write. I can already imagine it if I try!

>Lots of creampie porn produced as advertisement, focusing on throbbing, twitching dicks.
>Slimegirls mostly used in place of people, because the cum can be filtered out and they enjoy it like crazy.
>Qt elf getting his prostate hammered until he explodes into his third orgasm, werewolf in a knot-massaging onahole, centaur slamming himself against a slimebutt until he cums.

I've finally revived an old story project after about a year's hiatus, so I figured I might as well post it here. It was inspired by a similar futa incest story I first saw here that I've subsequently lost, but has gone quite a bit further and in a different direction than the original.

Family of Three. Tags: Mother/Daughter, Sister/Sister, Futa (hermaphroditism), Huge Breasts

Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VK9bYtAGIHbCfpnzSkBLghzO5fH2-BodWhX6cv-IZiU/edit?usp=sharing

>>6820515
See, I have an almost opposite problem. I don't generally need to do that much editing, but my brain refuses to read any of my own stuff without switching into proofreading mode. In order to actually like any of my own writing, I need to go to stories old enough that I don't really remember exactly how it goes.

>>6820657
Reading your own stuff is less fun, but I have always found writing more enjoyable than reading. Don't really worry about niche unless it's so weird that most people won't even recognize it as sexual. Nothing you have there looks bad. It may not be everyone's fetish, but it is at least obviously porn. Just be careful with some kinds of transformation or vore, as it's entirely possible to go so far down the rabbit hole that other people aren't even sure you're writing smut anymore.

Chapter 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cx_3YiXd2JDtOhmY6wmJyIShzVqnO2IRtAQbmqIBpwM/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 3:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wdhB29tmty0aGZ8aGlbp4gmfbZivyUQ3RNWklB7j674/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 4:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YDiLGpcJA9JrHvYzq6lDhGD-fE-dyMMAsaFuxc1bS4w/edit?usp=sharing

The remaining five chapters coming later. Comments and corrections are always really appreciated!

>>6820415
There's an h-manga like that, but without the intelligence.
http://exhentai.org/g/757398/3728bdacd6/

>>6820827
>>6820854
Hory fuck dude.

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>>6820827
As a visual reference, this was the closest match I could find for my vision for Emily, though her cock is slightly shorter and thicker (pic very relevant for a later chapter)

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>>6820868
And Kate

Greetings folks. I'm looking for a little guidance. I've had this story sitting incomplete now for WAY longer than I would like, and I was wondering if any of you would have any ideas on where it might go. I know that's kind of a broad request, but I don't like leaving things unfinished. Here's the gist of the plot:

I wrote a story series based around a generic (Not)Wonder Woman type character named Miss Americana. You might have seen her show up in various 3D comic art here and there. She's basically just a walking victim, but she was convenient as she didn't really have a lot of backstory to worry about. Anyway, the first series (Miss Americana vs the Horned God) is about the awakening of this demonic entity that seeks to corrupt and enslave humanity. She fights, and fails, and is eventually captured. That is the end of the first story arc.

The second pics up with another heroine, the ridiculously named Jungle Babe, who charges into the corrupted forest to save her friend. It's much longer and more involved, but I've gotten to where she's been captured too (but hasn't confronted the big bad yet), and now I'm stuck. I'm just not sure where to go. There's TONS of fetish fuel here, as I've incorporated everything from tentacles to monster girls to mind control and corruption, so you'd THINK I'd have no issues...and yet here I am.

I'm hoping opening up discussion will help lube up the mental gears and get it rolling again. You can find the stories here:

http://www.mcstories.com/Authors/Soul-in-Shadow.html

Much obliged, all.

>>6820893
well, I've followed some of those comics before. will give it a read when I have time.

I don't suppose you could also do a story that adds Got Gal into the mix as well?

>>6820827
Rubber bands are a poor choice. It would be very painful. A garter would be much better.

>>6820945

At this point I'm almost thinking I'll NEED another heroine, because the way i ended the last chapter doesn't look good at all for Jungle Babe or Miss Americana.

I'd have to go back and read up her power set though. I honestly don't remember what makes her distinct besides her propensity for dealing with inhumans.

>>6821028
does the story necessarily have to have the heroine win at the end?

>>6821028
>>6821035
I mean, I kind of prefer the heroines being completely defeated. But, if you need them to get out of a sticky situation, I could try and work with that, too.

>>6821035

No not at all. The first arc ends with the heroine losing. In my head I considered having Jungle Babe win the overall story, but getting there is a little tough right now given how I've set her up, I think.

At this point I just want a satisfying ending, to be honest. I can't stand having it hanging like this.

>tfw all you can write are bad ends

Three years ago I swore I would have a book finished and ready to stick online by the end of that year.
Still haven't gotten close to 50k words of genuine content.

hold me /smutgen/

>>6821145
I can only write good ends, myself. Can't do bad ends. Bittersweet at worst.

I'm similar in finishing works. I'm doing better write now but I can't help write like four stories at once. If I get tired or hit a wall in one, I work on another.

They all range in various levels of smuttiness but I'm not an erotic author. I'm more like a story writer with bits of fetish and smut thrown in. Essentially I want to write a story where if you took the sex scenes out, or implied them instead, it would be equally good.

But since I'm writing for a particular audience here, or I want to give something to you guys, there's definitely sex. Well it's for me too.

I made a thing.

It's still a WIP, but here: http://pastebin.com/KnKES0Nh

>>6821283
PE as in Premature Ejaculation?

Can anyone point me to any tumblr writers that do commissions and who they would recommend?

>>6821289
try Penis expansion. I know it's redundant, but with both tags makes it so it won't be excluded if you search only one tag or the other.

>>6817892

Neither. I just happened upon it and it seemed to more or less line up with that particular D.Va story. Sort of.

Also, I did a Roadhog/Junkrat Overwatch smut. Oral/Anal, male-on-male. I went easy on the explosive/pig puns.

http://m-didact.tumblr.com/post/144164785575/roll-on-the-rooftop-overwatch-junkratroadhog

A full E-novel over 85k words in first book. I worked 3rd shift and wrote most of it. The only ones worth reading are "Dark Incarnate" seems to be alot of interest in "Chronicals of exploration in formicophilia..."

A story of a girl with a special gift. Kelly Evans is able create spectacular works of art with ease. Her parents die in an accident on their way to her art exhibit, and she blames herself. Through self loathing and sadness she attracts a Dark spirit that links to her and incarnates itself though her artwork. She teams up with some unlikely new friends to learn the true nature of darkness.

Tags include: monster, horror, young, rape, insect, and much much more

google "Deviant Alternative Erotica Stories" for blog and full index

anyone remember me? i bought a ton of vidya and stopped doing anything else for a month.

anyway wrote some more shit. sense depravation even though that isn't / wasn't my thing

also optional thirdperson version, which is the best alternative to upgrading your taste!!

>Sense Depravation (yes i'm shit at names)
SP: http://pastebin.com/Zh76xkgm
TP: http://pastebin.com/hqLKzi6D
>tags: orc, femsub futadom, female reader, vaginal, sense depravation, drug cum, cum drinking

Do you think it's a concious decision on the part of most writers to soften the consequences of (and in-universe reactions to) most of the stuff we write about?

Let me explain; a story I was reading the other day had a pregnant woman being accosted by several men who end up fucking her. She decides she likes it, etcetera etcetera, everything works out perfectly. Pretty formulaic stuff.

What I'm asking is whether you think it was a concious decision on the part of whoever wrote it to soften things for the sake of the story, or if they just didn't bother thinking things all the way through?

>>6812589
Gonna be starting a series of parts and chapters dedicated to a wizard and her familiar, "How to Train a Familiar's Pet"

[Beast] is the main tag you need to note. This is kinda the 'teaser' chapter I finished last weekend, for anyone interested: http://pastebin.com/QJUq5ayg

>>6820893
Hey, could you also include some of the other heroines from the 'shared' universe?

>>6821852

I'd love to, but I'm thinking that I'd rather wrap up the Jungle Babe one and then start a new series involving one of the others, rather than shoehorn then into an already busy plot.

Azure Angel in a La Blue Girl crossover fic sounds fun. Or Green Specter investigating some kind of cult. I'd love to use Got Gal, but her name is just kind of absurd. It was already weird typing out Jungle Babe repeatedly, and that was at least somewhat descriptive. Got Gal is just a play on Galaxy of Terror and the rape worm. Maybe I'll rename her alter ego, or make it so the press calls her that derisively. Not sure yet.

>>6821852

I do have an Esha series already that's separate from the Horned God saga. That one involves mind control by an evil witch, possession, and corruption themes.

>>6821954
>>6821958
Well, I've read a few chapters of the Jungle Babe one, and I'm liking it so far. Not into monster girls, but it's still fine.

As a fetish, though, have you tried adding in lactation and milking? Piercings?

It may take a while for me to get to the end, though. At best, tonight. If not, tomorrow night.

I'm also kind of interested in seeing Sara Kraft and Kim Lee. I remember there was a story about a Golden Spider, but I never got to seeing what the thing developed into.

>>6817674

Hmm. I can see the witches really easily, and it makes a lot of sense. Might fool arround with the unbirth victims dicks, see what can be done there (maybe some get dicks, some get multiboob, some get detachable limbs...)

Still, great editions though!

Having only written a few scant lewd greentexts before, I've been throwing around some ideas for smut fics for a while, and now I've come up with a nice, crazy one, a fantasy creation myth featuring a bit of beastiality and also tremendous incest.
Only problem is, since the narrative framing is a creation myth, I should probably write it as such stylistically. But good smut is all about conveying the sensations the characters feel, and letting the reader vicariously experience them. Sight, smell, touch, taste, all that, not just describing the fuckin'. How do I write a story as a myth while also abiding by this?

>>6821621
Second person as narrative is cancer.

>>6821767

So I think the answer varies wildly based on the author. Some do exactly as you say and tend to gloss over the ill-effects, while others try to portray that as realistically as possible. Personally speaking I try and find plausible ways to work around the absolute worst of it, because frankly any honest appraisal of some of the subject matter is just horrifying to imagine happening to anyone in real life. It's necessary I think to establish some elements of fiction and fantasy in order to let the story play out in a satisfactory way.

Now, that comes with a huge caveat of course; gloss over it too much and it becomes jarring to the audience, and can yank them swiftly out of immersion if they have to stop and notice how unlikely something is. It's a balance, but it helps if the world is already somewhat fantastic (either fantasy or sci-fi or comicbook or whatever) because it becomes just another element of suspended disbelief, as long as it's treated respectfully.

>>6821969

Lactating is definitely something I've considered, perhaps as an effect of one of the transformations, but it didn't feel like it fit any of the characters quite right. I tried to make the monstergirl forms of the Beast's victims somewhat linked to their personalities, and I haven't added anyone who might make for a good cowgirl in my mind.

Not into piercings, really. Branding in some other ways might work, like being painted with cum that stains the skin and marks someone as property.

Thanks, take your time. I know there's a lot there.

>>6822144
finished! definitely want to see how both miss americana and jungle babe end up as love slaves for the rest of eternity.

>>6822088
I think your question is ill-posed. Creation myths are, practically by requirement, short and terribly lacking on details. Otherwise, it's not a myth. It's a story. There is no way to square this with good smut.

That does not mean that you have to abandon the idea. Mythological events make great backdrops for smut. There's a rather wonderful series on Literotica called The Eighth House that's a smutty interpretation of the love affair between Hades and Persephone. The thing is that the mythology must just be a backdrop, even if it's one of your own design.

I'm not sure if you're one of the /tg/ exiles, but I certainly am, so I find it easiest to explain this in such terms. The mythology is like a GM's notes written before and during a game. They provide a concise summary of events. This character does this, as a result, this other thing happens. The game created from these notes is the story you're writing. It visits these elements but also gives the full story in all of its detail. This is what you want to be writing.

Write out your creation myth, just for you. Then select a person to witness it. Follow this perspective closely. You shouldn't be writing a creation myth, but a single person's experiences during this time. Basically, think of it like an "insider's view" to an infamous event. In a way, the end result should read something like a memoir.

>>6822081
I like the idea of it being several generations of kids with no apparent oddities thrown into adoption. Then they sprout cocks to fuck them into submission years later as retribution.

I like the idea of it being ultimate karmic retribution. No weird kids because it'd be hard to put them into normal society and pawn them off -- my idea is that these women are totally irresponsible and unscrupulous. They suck a dude's life energy and turn them into babies, toss them into the adoption system, and then coast on another year or three with the life energy while occasionally topping off with the more direct injection method.

This ultimately means there's dozens of kids who are now their "offspring" with differing amounts of memories recalled. And they're all pissed.

Maybe they can alternate forms as manifestations of the warped magic that shaped them. They're all normal looking/functioning, some are quite happy and loving in new lives as wives and mothers or whatever, but they all desire retribution.

For an uncomfortable aspect, could describe many of the offspring being younger and present, watching. The implication will be they exist anyways.

>>6812589
Eeeeeeeeee! She's soooooo cute!

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What's up /h/.
So, my little sister likes to draw a lot, she is even creating her own characters already, this is one of them, could you draw her sucking two dicks or something like that? it would be hilarous. Thanks!

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>>6822184

>>6815237
theres a fuckton of sissification but why do people always gotta lock up the dick.

>>6815239
It's not exactly that complicated, it's sisification without chastity.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-transformation-device-ch-01

this is what I'm looking for, but it's the only one I've found that fits what I like.

>>6821621
I think that starting in second person has let you get sloppy with description. You fall very heavily into the "telling, not showing" category. The scenes are erotic, but written about as enticingly as a manual for a dishwasher.

>>6822193
Forget them anon! Though I haven't done anything for this thread before, I've got some decent writefag skills and your idea sounds quite lovely to me.

I presume that, beyond that general outline you gave, I'm free to fill in the blanks as I please? You wouldn't mind some kemonomimi stuff, like animal ears and tails, as well?

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Hey /efg/. New smut writer here, I'd like to ask your perspectives on sex scenes... What's the right balance of clinical and vulgar when describing body parts and the acts themselves? I understand that everybody has their own style and preferences, but I'm just trying to get a feel for it.

>>6822244
Purely subjective anon, write what you're comfortable with. There's people who love the dirtiest filth and other who will want it cleaner, maybe more impersonal. Some people want it flowery.

Write you.

>>6822244
Personally I'd avoid steering clear of using exceptionally vulgar or clinical terms unless they're absolutely necessary. The latter means the story feels too cold and detached, while the former sounds (IMO) childish and disrespectful. My preference is to approach things a little bit sideways, with lots of metaphor, especially when describing the woman's body. "Lips" or "entrance", rather than "pussy" or "cunt".

That said, word choice is hugely important because it determines the tone of what you're writing. So it's going to vary depending on what sort of scene you want to set - or the way you want to present each character. There's a time and a place for even the most unpleasant verbiage.

Has anyone thought about writing porn where both participants cum multiple times, instead of once at the end? I have a premature ejaculation fetish and there are a lot of great clips of guys going a few thrusts over the edge and cumming too soon. Something where the point is to cum multiple times would be extremely hot.

>>6821152
I flit back and forth between erotica and genre literature.
I regret not starting in my early teens where fap fiction was much more dear to me, as I'd be able to stick with it all the way through then.

>>6822596
Well not to get personal or tumblr, but I was recently diagnosed as potentially having ADHD. It fits a lot of my behaviors in not finishing projects.

I'm really hoping that once I get treatment I'll start to work on a lot of things I've begun but never finished. My writing included.

That said I'm hoping to dump several first chapters in the next week for various stories, original to me and others inspired by stuff mentioned here.

>>6822599
>ADHD

You know I've always believed I might have that also, the problem is the meds for it will make people who don't have it perform better as well.

Except eventually you'll become dependent on them to enjoy life.

>>6822621
I've got other stuff which has me take meds daily to function normally every day. I can't feel bad about adding something else so I can actually accomplish the projects I want to in my life.

If I have to use medication to get the enjoyment from life, I'll swallow that. And the pills.

>>6822625
That's a great mind set to have anon, come back and tell us how it goes.

>>6822655
With any luck there will be some new stories to add to the list.

>>6822569
tell that to >>6821294

>>6822161
That's exactly the problem.

Easiest from a smut perspective would be the ditch the mythical thing, but the entire scenario hinges on it. I was thinking of having the "myth" part feature in short snippets, then switching to smut perspective.

I curse my need of a convoluted narrative to really get off

In your opinion, what makes storywriting more fun than roleplay?

Or vice versa if that's your opinion?

>>6822736
Roleplay with fellow players, preferably in the flesh, is interactive.

Writing is not, or much less so. Perfect way to spend some free alone time, though.

>>6820657
>it's usually much less fun to read your own stuff
Funny, I've always thought otherwise. In fact, if I can't get off to my own work I consider it a failure.

>>6822851
Maybe that's what I've been doing wrong all this time.

>>6822851

Agreed. Basically I'm not satisfied with a story unless it turns me on. I can't just write through something just to do it. If i don't feel anything then i can't expect my readers to.

>>6822911
ever thought of doing a Lara Croft story?

>>6822923
pleb tier

>>6823058

That's not very generous; Lara Croft might be the subject of a LOT of erotic fiction, but that's for damn good reason. She's fucking hot.

One of my favorite authors, Krellscholar, actually had a fantastic piece about her involving an ancient civilization and a very devious (and aggressive) priestess.

>>6823076
/v/ content is generally discouraged here.

>>6822203

I usually do more with adjectives and description but it's a bit hard to do that when 'you' are completely unaware of anything but touch. If you're talking about the third person version it naturally suffered from the original second person.

>>6823182

buh i forgot my fucking namw

>>6822923
I did a little something with her having some fun with a Burmese Python a few months ago.

What do you have in mind?

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>>6823077
Since when?

>>6822225
go for it =D

im cool with anything, magic/sugery/parasite etc.

i do prefer gradual tfs though

how will i find it when its finished?

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I actually started writing erotic stuff when Girlfriends 4Ever did a promotion for giving Sayako a backstory. I had a silly idea and wrote it out. I did not win, but a second contest was about writing "a day in the life" of the two main characters.

Inspired by the posted image, I wrote a story where Sayako turns Tara into a ball-less futa with her semen. The story was supposed to end with the reveal of Tara's cock, but... I got carried away and wrote them fucking each other over and over.

And now I've written lots of entries, with new original characters introduced and lots of ridiculous situations.

Somewhere along the way, I went from just being a regular lurker of /d/ to someone who writes erotic fanfiction under the mononym "D." (The name was more inspired by the letter-names of Death Note, not really the name of this forum, not that it makes it any less frigging pathetic)

Where did I go so wrong? Or right?

I am D, and apparently, I just can't help myself.

If you want to read them, they are on the Affect3D forums, where I post as "Mr. D," because I couldn't have a username that was only one letter long.

>>6823345
Congratulations, you'll fit right in.

>>6823076
I'd love to read that.
>>6823249
Well, i was thinking Lara would attempt to unravel the mysteries of the Bermuda triangle, only to have her expedition capsize and then find herself washed ashore on some tropical island with an alien sky.

As she explores, she find out the hard way that the plants here are tactile and aggressively attempt to restrain and inseminate animals. While surviving that ordeal, she is eventually found by descendants of long lost sailors, and is made a slave. From there, she learns about the island not being any place on Earth, but being in a completely different dimension altogether, filled with nasty creatures, beastmen, and eldritch phenomena. There is no way back home.

There is an eldritch god like entity that looks like a kraken combined with a jellyfish that requires sacrifices of females. Fortunately for the slavers, they had subjugated an Amazon like tribe and interbred with them, using surplus womenfolk as an offering to prevent the monster from outright destroying their civilization. Some of these offerings are selected from a fighting arena, where women are pitted against perverted beasts and such. Those who lose are tossed away. Lara must eventually compete in this tournament.

The leader of the slavers has found the fountain of youth and has used it to keep himself and his inner circle alive and in charge. He likes Lara so much that he offers her a chance to be his concubine for the rest of eternity. She may acquiesces before finding her position unbearable (however long it takes. Weeks, months, years, centuries?) and attempt to assassinate the leader. Successful, she will be beaten and subdued and added as an offering to the eldritch god.

And from there, Lara experiences the tentacled insides of the monster, which houses all the other females it has devoured over the eons, wrapped in fleshy tendrils and fed a gooey substance that keeps them immortal, their breasts milked to provide more nourishment for the monster.

>>6823582
>>6823249
That's the end of it.

>>6823582
I see.

You seem to have the plot pretty-well sorted, what's stopped you from writing it yourself?

>>6823594
I am an extremely shitty writer. That, and I'm usually busy with work related stuff and I don't normally have time to do creative writing.

>>6823603
Ah. Well, there's only one way to get better at writing, and you know what that is.

I, too, am struggling with too many things and not enough time, so I cannot help you here.

>>6813702
I'd go with Robin.
Hoping you're going for the discussed angle where they end up together, rather than Robin being boy-crazy.

>>6823744
Robin over Finley as a name?

At this point I'm juggling a few other stories, and I hope to let it progress naturally. I envisioned Finley being bisexual to begin with so the idea of sex is more uncomfortable due to role, rather than partners. It's going to be Lisa that will make the decision of whether they end up together or not.

Lisa is going to keep things from Finley and when it comes out, she will feel betrayed. In the meantime there will be some really uncomfortable aspect where Lisa is feeling guilty but can't help push Finley further and further into femininity despite looking for a way to bring her back to normal. Lisa is a person who doesn't accept herself, so if there's going to be a relationship there needs to be healing.

I'm mostly judging interest based on the intro so I know how much to devote to it, but I have three other stories right now I am pursuing. One will be short, 3-4 chapters. Another is DCBK which will be longer, and another is a rewrite of something else I did before and I imagine will also be rather short, 3-4 chapters. Once I finish the two shorter ones I will probably focus again on the occult girl story if there's still interest.

Had an idea for a story but the more I try to work out the details the less it seems like efg and the more it seems like an RPG scenario.

>Lamia sorceress wants to attract the attention of other snake people suitors
>Wants to be sure there is lots of food in the area so it'd be a good place to have kids
>Uses magic to create rabbits that breed faster
>Druid magic so that plants they eat grow faster
>other predators keep eating all her rabbits
>create dire rabbits to protect them
>Suddenly it's known as the cursed woods
>only able to attract adventuring parties instead of the desired suitors

Suggestions on where I should go with this?

>>6823807
Since she can't attract snakepeople, sorceress makes her own.

Promising adventurers are abducted and through whatever means gets you off turned into snake people to suit her.

>>6823807
>>6823818
If she's a snakewoman then she'd prefer the warmblooded adventures. She'd ruin that by turning them into snake people. Also, when snakes are overfeed they do become fatter, but more fertile at the same time.

>>6823823
If it's a fantasy setting then I imagine the rules for her are pretty loose. And she obviously wants snake people so she can do the slithery tango and get knocked up, if you handwave the warmbloods doing that then it can just as easily be handwaved that she's warmblooded or has a way to manage that.

Either way I'm all for transformation. And chubby ara ara Lamia given what you mentioned about fertility.

>>6823807
She becomes the "Initiation test" for some kind of do-gooder group. The male prospective member is sent to the woods and told to 'deal' with the lamia.

[goddamit]The full members all know she's basically harmless. It's an object lesson in appearences being decieving.[/no spoilers on /d/]

>>6816955
>Knotting

Haven't heard of knotting before. Let me Google it...

Oh.

...

And here I thought I was pretty far out there on the debauched scale.

I've been monitoring the requests out there to see if any of them interested me, but there's a lot of what I suppose is called "non-con," which I am very much not into.

If anyone has an idea for a single story that doesn't involve that, feel free to make a suggestion. I don't know if I can post the story here, as it might be too long for a post.

>>6824253
You're on a board where girls with penises are bog standard. Why do you think that animal dicks are out there?

>>6824284
...I suppose, in that context, it's not that out there (for /d/).

Animal genitals is one of those fetishes that I never understood, but wasn't immediately repulsed by, depending on the context. I remember some artist doing MLP porn and giving them all horse cocks. Appropriate, for sure, but that combination bothered me more than either MLP or horsecocks separately.

I don't know. Maybe I just don't like dogs.

>>6824295
Snek porn is always popular. The things you can do with a hemipenis beggars belief.

>>6824295
If you prefer cats, you should be aware their dicks are barbed.

>>6824295
And let's not even get started on ducks.

>>6824343

>Googles hemipenis

Well would you look at that. I had no idea.

>>6824374
It's surprising the amount of stuff you find out checking the facts for smutfics. I once ended up reading about these ancient cultures that used to be in what's now Burma.

>>6824343
>>6824344
>>6824347

Hmmm... what about a story about a world where men had gone extinct somehow, leaving a world of only women. To facilitate reproduction, on their twentieth birthday, they were given their own fully functioning animal cock, having lost the genetic blueprint for human cocks when the men went extinct.

The assignment of cocks was mostly random, with some rich to-do folks getting classier, sleeker, more easily functioning ones, like dolphin cocks maybe, whereas others get stuck with cat dicks or hedgehog or other exotic weirdness. The scale could be the same from human to animal, leaving some with rodent dicks only a quarter of an inch long, but others have a meter of ungulating bison dong they have to contend with.

Reproduction is actually a minefield of differing tastes, with some people insisting they don't want to have sex with someone with a dick covered in thorns or something, where others struggle to find someone they're compatible with emotionally and sexually. Maybe it's be possible to get your cocks reassigned, if you found someone who consented to the trade. It could be a procedure as easy as trading baseball cards. You just enter one of numerous convenient cocksmith locations, they spray you with a little sleep gas, and ten minutes later, you're the proud owner of a lobster dick.

...this is the part that interests me about erotica or smut or porn or whatever you want to call it. Most of my entries in my G4E fanfiction are entries trying, in some way, to point out how ridiculous a lot of smut is. At some point, this has moved into trying to come up with the most ridiculous ideas for smut I can conjure.

I don't actually know enough about animal dicks to properly write this story, and I'm not going to type "animal dicks" into Google because I don't want to be visited by two men wielding butterfly nets. But if someone can sort out the animal dick details, I would be willing to write at least a short story with this theme.

>>6824295
Horsecocks I believe are best since they can combine sheer, cylindrical volume with flaring. Flaring is basically knotting on the other end, used to keep cum from seeping out of the vagina.
But the way I use it? If one gets a horsecock into the womb, the flare will lock it beyond the cervix so it can function similarly to the knot, too.

>>6824380
Heh, tell me about it. I once wondered how fast a rattlesnake's rattle vibrated, wondering if it'd make a good vibrator.

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So does anyone still keep a pastebin with drawfag requests or ideas ?

Might take on some for fun.

>>6824462
I have a request or two, if you're interested?

>>6824453
Horses only last around 15 seconds so you big dick but no stamina. Humans have greater sexual stamina than many species, but there are also many species that out do us too.

>>6824462
You might want to take a look at the request doc linked in the first post, see if something catches your fancy. Some of those could just as easily be fulfilled by a drawfag as by a writefag.

Or you can illustrate a scene from a story you liked.

>>6824465
A pig's orgasm can last 30 minutes.

>>6824465
That's why there are som much half-human monsters. Better tool with human stamina. Best of both world!

>>6824465
Yeah, I remember reading somewhere that it takes, on average, 30 seconds for a stallion to reach orgasm.

No idea where I found that out.

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>>6824462
I screencap ideas I get, if they hold interest

>>6824471
Seriously, pretty much every halfbreed in fantasy settings are either half-human or half-dragon.

>>6824473
Gotta go fast, that poor mare won't take his weight forever.

>>6824479
Apparently all the pleasure spots on a mare are closer to the front of the vagina meaning they get less from horse dicks.
Female centaurs/other creatures with horse vags would like smaller dicks like humans.

>>6824479
Unless, that is, the stallion cums so much her swelling undercarriage touches the ground and supports both their weight.

>>6824471
I like the trope that the genetic upside of humans is that they can breed with other species

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>>6824483
score 1 for pic related

>>6824474
I tuck them away in a little folder of mine. Used a few up now, actually, not replenished them for a while.

>>6824464
Sure why not.

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>>6824503
Appreciate it.

First one is a naked Caitlin Fairchild (left) being bonded with (as in, it's enveloping her body, starting from her lower torso) by the Venom symbiote (right). Details are in the picture.

Reckon you can handle it?

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>>6824458
>I once wondered how fast a rattlesnake's rattle vibrated, wondering if it'd make a good vibrator.

>>6824451
The fuck is G4E? Also, those kind of searches are why TorBrowser was created.

>>6824483
While there's plenty more touch receptor activity, there's much less stretch receptor activity. Point being that both are good. Also, if you have centaurs, you can probably magic or science up a way to get a huge dick with plenty of ridges and bumps so you could have both at the same time. You pretty much need magic to make >>6824484 happen, though. Conservation of matter is a problem there, unfortunately. I guess you might do fine with soft sci-fi, but you'd at least have to explain it with some technobabble.

>>6824979
thanks for the tip, but I'll write this off as magic.

At least I included "extra blood received" to sustain a bigger erection w/o fainting.

>>6824962
G4E is Girlfriends 4Ever, a computer animated futa erotica video. .gifs have been posted of it every so often. I referenced it in my first post in this thread here. >>6823345

And I've never heard about TorBrowser. Not only am I not perverted enough for /d/, neither am I technically literate enough, either.

Is there any subject in which I will not scrub up the place?

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>>6823826
>And chubby ara ara Lamia

>>6823823
>Also, when snakes are overfeed they do become fatter, but more fertile at the same time.


Oh. Oh my.

Anybody know where I can find stories with centaurs? Preferably shemale type?

>>6821621
> depravation
Is this supposed to be a pun? Because it looks like a spelling mistake. Consider hyphenating instead.

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Would it be kosher if in the future I posted a macro growth/giant story for critique? Giant on giant on regular sized dude with dicknipples and putting a tiny man in places he wouldn't fit in under regular circumstances.

I know m/m is technically /y/ and /y/ has its own writethread, but that board's full of little girls (and not the good kind). Looking at their front page makes me want to kill myself.

Pic unrelated, I just happened to read it yesterday and it was good as fuck. The petrification story in this series wasn't bad either.

>>6826044
Do you hear anyone complaining about more content? Go on ahead, you don't need an engraved invitation.

>>6826149
Righto. I've got another couple stories to finish and then I'll get back to work on it.

So im pretty bored and have nothing to do today or tomorrow, and i've never written a story before but I believe I could make a decent one, albeit a bit on the shorter side most likely.

So, anyone wanna give me a topic or two as the focus? Only things im 100% not gonna write about would be bathroom things like scat, vore, torture, or giant people. Though vore and size are only there because I am completely unfamiliar with them and would probably do a poor job translating them into a good story.

Although it shouldnt restrict you, some of the subjects I am more familiar with would be Futas and maybe master/slave stuff. Oh, and i'd love if one of the topics involved some sort of monster girl.

So yea, thats about it, feel free to suggest anything you want to see, after a reply or two i'll get to work.

>>6826377
Could you do a master/slave one?

A recently captured Amazon warrior is sold to her new master in his harem, and he has to break her in. He can be harsh and stern, but also tender and soft, all to break her will and make her submit.

>>6826377
Just read any or all of the requests here, there's no shortage of them.

>>6826377
Just skim the thread

There's a google doc for ideas floating from /tg/

And then there's other ideas, some I've posted, some others have.

I'm writing stuff currently but I'm more a story guy + fetishes rather than outright smutfic writer

>>6826387
Sure, that sounds interesting enough, thanks for the suggestion

>>6826394
>>6826401
I read a few of them, none really interested me all that much desu.

Is anyone interested in writing about a qt crocodile girl jumping on a guy hiking through her marsh, and getting much more serious about things when she realizes he's a virgin?

>>6826602
Crocodile girl lives alone along stream in a marsh.

Likes to sun herself topless/nude.

Is doing so one day when she hears something and realizes a lone kayaker has been staring at her.

Jumps in water in furious panic and snatches him off the boat.

In a panic, "No don't kill me I'm sorry I don't want to die a virgin"

... this I could write. I'll save the idea though since I've got a bunch of stuff at the moment

>>6826958
>>6826602
What the hell does a crocodile girl even look like?

>>6826602
>>6826958

I could take a crack at this. I don't know where I would post it, though.

>>6827001
I envision a lady version of Killer Croc from DC comics. No large snout, but a mouth full of sharp teeth, leathery skin, a tail... probably no hair?

>>6827025
Throw it up on an Anonymous Pastebin, or make one with a bogus name/alt account for yourself and link it here.

There's weird shit posted here, but basically as long as it's not directly on 4chan it'll be fine.

You do the monster, I'll do the weeb monstergirl. >>6826958 here by the way.

I've got some ideas already in mind so it might happen sooner than later. I need to try my hand at just writing a convincing smut scene.

Anyone know if 3Dfag will continue "Catholic Bitch"?
Or know of other such stories?

>>6827105
No idea if he's even around, really. Same can be said for a lot of our old contributors.

>>6820827
It doesn't look like I managed to hook anyone in with the first chapters, but here are the remaining ones in any case. The story is called Family of Three, with the (expanded) tags: Mother/Daughter, Sister/Sister, Futa (hermaphroditism), Huge Breasts, Big Dick, Underage

Chapter 5:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1haKRUeqZafSUNNiCqV91y9hzlev68ne8RinoTy-rcYU/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 6:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f1oQQNFKFDrA_l4uxNYBs6nld2Xu8BRzrzrcCMAg3mw/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 7:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uhutj_j9HMrirFd8uGtXEQfb6OsIYuClkcD-MSIjphU/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 8:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17PDbvXsBZN0xY-D8hrv4djpeYONSU0XxKcKG2XfNb2c/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 9:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MnzUBfgjVmoXKWyiQXAFBbeu_eo7vo6dGvTj2dlnfdo/edit?usp=sharing

>>6820864
I'm going to take that as praise, so thank you!

>>6827338
I'm suggesting you to put all links in all your documents, safe measures after thread dies.

>>6827352
Good point, thanks!

>>6827105
>>6827244
Sometimes a man just has to move on.

>>6812589
Pulling the back of the thong with her foot is really, really sexy. I think I have a new fetish.

Are there any dominating futa/traps fics?

>>6827511
Is that even physically possible?

Still sexy, mind you.

>>6827576
I imagine a really limber human could do it, yeah.

>>6826602
>>6826958
>>6827001
>>6827099

Here it is. Chapter 1: Don't Croc the Boat
http://pastebin.com/i1Fczb4Z

>>6827805
Very good. Fairly accurate to Florida ecology too, crocodiles are only found in the swamps far to the south.

I like the description, but I guess the one thing I would say, and this is the Florida boy in me being needlessly nitpicky, is that large reptiles like crocs and gators are actually pretty active at night. And depending on what time of year the night will be plenty warm.

If you set it during January though it's easy to justify, and I think a lot of the nighttime activity is due to the water holding heat longer than on land. It's a prime hunting time for them.

>>6827835
I could probably push back the time that she returns to the hut to later that night rather than right after dusk. But I suppose that depends how much human is in her, and how much croc.

I think, with the way I write, the croc aspects will come out whenever it's funny (or sexy) or makes for an interesting story.

Thank you very much for reading.

so I can write pretty damn well, what kind of money is there to be made in smut?

>>6828261
Depends on who's buying. Here, on the other hand, we do it for free/ for shits and giggles.

So what have you written then?

>>6828261
Depends on how much people are willing to give you for it.

Bint what wrote 50 Shades of Grey made a fortune, and it's not even very good smut.

>>6828261
Depends how good you are at selling yourself.
If you want to ghost write a bunch of boring scenarios, you can make probably 200-300 a month. Not the best depending on where you live. (That's USD btw)

If you can get commissions on say a tumblr, or other social site, you could probably make more than that, but it may not be consistent, and you may hate what you have to write even more (or you could love it).

Best case scenario, some small erotica press house accepts you and you make... whatever that one offers.

>>6827805
Cute, short, fun.

The social situation moves fast, without a lot of sense why Odile is doing what she does. It feels like she just goes from 'I'mma eat this' to 'suddenly I'm impressed by this, and want to be shy and cute'. Which implies she is always impressed by the people she eats, but if she likes fancy clothing she sure doesn't go out of her way to emulate the fancier things in life. I don't know, character wise she is 'convenient'.

Also, it was slightly jarring when the pov focus switched to her for one line near the end of the story, just so we could know that she could feel his heartbeat. That's the dangers of close 3rd POV though. It doesn't feel like that characters point of view, but to the reader we are following Michael. So suddenly being in Odile's brain when we never were before, sets off an (easily silenced) alarm.

But like I said, good work.

>>6828277
honestly god damn nothing because I'm a lazy cunt but the english language has always been my forte

>>6828279
yeah but that was some stupid stroke of luck that clicked with white women who thought they wanted to be fucked harder, I'm going after sweaty clammy autist dollars. I can write anything, doesn't matter how fucking weird or specific the request. I'm just too busy and lazy right now to start doing it, but if I can make decent money sitting at my house writing about animals fucking or whatever ill do it forever

>>6828289
im pretty damn decent at marketing and branding from what ive found via previous endeavors, but I'd have to be making at least $1200 a month or so for it to be worth it. an option im considering is convincing some dev to let me write their game, because even if they drop out later (which amateur devs always do) i know how to program and can just pick up where they left off. honestly if I find the time ill just develop my own game lol

>>6828307
The problem with going after the 'autist dollar' as it were, is that men are hit and miss when it comes to paying for their smut, in any form.

Videos at least can easily claim unique content that would rarely come up free, or use an advertising scheme to get their money even while offering it for free.

Comics... well most western smut comics are either webcomics (advertising dollars again), or terrible.

Writing though. It is hard to get anyone to believe they need to pay for writing in general, and that goes double for smut writing. I imagine women do it because they feel that the stuff on the internet isn't legitimate or safe (women being soccer moms in this case, instead of the ff.net sort of crowd), they consider what they read 'romance' or 'erotica' instead of any sort of smut.

Men... I don't know. Surely some buy stories online, but they seem like a more elusive market.

>>6828321
>Men... I don't know. Surely some buy stories online, but they seem like a more elusive market.
If they're anything like me, they'll go to any length imaginable to avoid paying for their smut.

>>6828337
I spent at least an hour last night trying to find a scan of a doujin that wasn't even particularly smut, just ecchi.

>>6828321
The right autists will gladly pay through the nose if whatever you write hits their fetishes, including men.

Unfortunately, those autists tend to have highly specific tastes that can be peculiar even by Internet standards.

>>6828339
I once tracked down a smutfic that was written six years ago, spent two days piecing each chapter together from three different sources, and then when I was done nobody wanted to read it.

>>6827400
I'd move to new such material, no problem, if I were capable of finding it.

>>6828289
I pictured that change in perspective to show, once we know her name, she's no longer a 'monster,' but a character, even if it's brief. Maybe it doesn't work the way I hoped.

Thank you very much for reading. I'm pretty happy with it so far. I hope the anons who suggested this read it and enjoy it, too.

looking for an older story of a Succubus seducing a female paladin, half way through a male rogue comes in and she pegs and kills him

>>6828861
>pegs and kills him
Whoa, that escalated quickly

After much work and rewriting my original unbirth story http://pastebin.com/Qv6DCrCC has almost been completely rewritten.

The new version is here:

http://pastebin.com/Xfg1myMP

Tags: Monstergirl, Lamia, Unbirth, Torture, Bondage, Body Horror, Transformation, TG

Now that this is finished (and significantly longer than anticipated) I'm going to focus on another story.

Love feedback and critique though. Especially on the last half dozen paragraphs or so as I feel I might have rushed them out.

It's a long read too, so make some time. Almost 8,000 words

>>6828912
Ah, forgot to mention it's chapter 1. I anticipate 2-4 more chapters.

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Requesting some naga/lamia shota x human milf.

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>>6828928
Actually I think this one is far funnier.

>>6828928
This is tempting. I and my other half are both fans of male naga... Hmmm, the question is how shota though.

>>6828928

Something like this? http://pastebin.com/6dfUr1Zh

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Saw this Skyrim pic on the Monsters raping girls thread and now I'd like to request a fic where a Minotaur/Woman warrior are willing mates of each other and bang in the woods. Maybe kinda humorous where the woman has more endurance than the minotaur and keeps wearing him out. 'Don't fall asleep! I want more!'

>>6828985
I've been looking for an interesting enough prompt to get me writing again, and might end up taking a shot at this one. It hits enough of my kinks and there's enough room to spin it off in a direction of my choosing, so we'll see what happens.

>>6828985
I am looking to do something along these lines as well. However, my grammar and writing skills are bottom tier. Any resources I could check out so I don't kill boners with my bad writing?

>>6829360
Get a prereader. Or load it on Google Doc since you can allow people to edit/notate the stuff.

As long as your writing is coherent though and conveys itself well enough, don't worry about being professional grade.

I'm sure there's guides, advice, lessons, etc out there. But the biggest thing for me was simply reading novels growing up. Reading stuff that already made the cut of professional standard (to one degree or another) imprinted a lot of my writing habits.

I couldn't tell you the rules for good writing, but I can do it okay and I can tell you when something sounds off.

>>6829368
Sounds good. Thank you for the advice.

>>6829360
If you're absolutely desperate for some guidance, get a grammar bible, like strunk & White's. Usually pretty cheap, and they go over all the rules that matter. Most English nerds (such as myself) will swear by it, even though I don't remember being all that impressed by the information inside.

>>6829136
Much obliged. Minotaur cuddling ahoy!

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Although I it would be good this to be written by someone, I fear I'm the only one who can do it right:

A boy just lost his abusive family from a police raid (or Mafiya hit) while he was out of his apartment. The pretty woman next door (busty, blonde, religious, late-20's) takes him in. Breaking down crying in her chest, the boy is comforted by 2 large, soft alabaster bird wings originating from her.

She reveals that she's an angel; and after a long time of looking, and calls that were "too late" for her to save, she finally has found someone to raise and protect.

And since technically there's no rule in the Bible saying she can't, the angel has a very close, intimate /ss/ relationship filled with love, hugs, milk, compassion, etc. May include age regression.

Pic related (something I wrote), and I intended this story to be about gentle femdom/momdom (emphasis on gentle) with the focus on altrustic kindness, motherliness, and possibly-if not certainly- a passage to eternal life, love, and pleasure in their slice of heaven.

>>6828912
I didn't expect how much I LOVE this story.
I'd reinsert that "It's okay, I'm not mad." before going all the way makes it a bit tender...

>>6830092
Write it, then. We could us more stuff with angels.

>>6829360
Write your draft, post it here mentioning it is but a draft and bugger the thread for some assistance.

We're abrasive slowpokes, but we'll help.

>>6830118
I'll take that into consideration, it was definitely something I liked from the first draft that I'd be happy to work back into the story.

Most of all I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, it was a major rework of the original concept but I have something like a story arc planned out which should give me plenty of chance for lewd but first and foremost I'm a story writer.

Not to namedrop for no reason, but I write more like Minikisa. There's lewd, it's explicit, but I'm more concerned with a story where you can take the lewd out and it still stands on its own.

I do intend to write some lewd for lewd's sake stuff though in the near future, to try my hand and get better at it.

The next chapter I might expect next month, I think it's better to put myself on a monthly cycle for these stories since it means I can bounce from one to another as I chase inspiration.

>>6830092
I love me some gentle femdom/momdom stuff. Only thing I'd say, going off your caption. The word "fucking" conflicts with the gentle nature. Loving, lovemaking, euphemisms... fucking implies a hard, rough act. This is supposed to be soft, comforting, and safe.

Just a nitpick given what I read. Might want to watch out for 2edgy stuff. The nature of the boy's state is less important than the state itself. You can leave it at him being an orphan/homeless. That's sympathetic enough.

>>6830239
>One month
AAAAAA
And Minikisa is who I was reminded of, alongside DCBK ideas I've had.
I really hope they get a happy ending...

>>6827805
>>6827835
>>6828289
If anyone was interested in this silliness continuing, here is Chapter 2: Croc and a Hard Place

http://pastebin.com/zB477nTU

>>6830298
You'll probably want to repost this in the next thread.

>>6830279
http://pastebin.com/u/UrsusQuaestio
This is my main PasteBin, I have some DCBK writing (doing my own take on the story) that I'm in the process of doing secondary/final draft on. You can see some other stuff I've thrown up.

Major tags are TG, TF. Two stories feature unbirth as a central feature.

>>6830298
My body is ready

>>6830311
I'll have to do that tomorrow. It's late o'clock for me.

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>>6830317
Hey, you did all the ideas I was fond of/contributed towards!
I love what you're doing, and complement you got me into unbirth.

>>6830354
I only like unbirth when it's associated with some transformation. It makes sense to me on a visceral level, the place of birth being a place of rebirth. I don't get into the whole "eaten by a vagina" thing where people are just like absorbed into nothingness.

And I'm glad you like what I'm doing. I've got a few more I'm going to be posting soon, but they need some more work. My DCBK story is on hiatus only until I edit the previous chapters, they need a good proofread.

>>6830366
Yeah, that's the context I enjoy as well. Vore and fetishes that involve death (Physical and/or mental) are utter and complete turnoffs to me.
Longer term mental changes/character development, on the other hand entice me.

>>6830366
>>6830369
this.
Unbirth is the ONLY vore I like because it's almost never fatal.

So I was inspired by Doom and wrote a Marine/Imp story. Features anal, unconscious rape, and non-con-turned-con. Tell me what you think!

http://m-didact.tumblr.com/post/144505007695/cock-deep-in-a-demon-doom-marineimp

>>6830092
I would be excited about this if not for the how your caption shoots itself in the head.

>>6830701
Not him, but what makes you say that?

>>6830722
Well it pretty much what just bothers me personally with it.

His caption saying she's a oni then coming back with actually being an angel but then going back to calling herself an oni for no real reason after saying she is an angel.

What bothers me with it is that she goes back to "being" an oni after the fact she is actually an angel comes out without any real reason for it.
There is no real reason for her being an angel to come out nor is there any reason to call herself an oni again after she states she is an angel since the person she is talking to doesn't seem to have anything against her being an angel or real preference that he prefers her being an oni and wishes to "keep" her as one.While there is no real reason for her to call herself an angel(despite her saying she is) after telling the person it just seems more likely she would instead of a oni since she is "actually" one.

There also wasn't really any need for being an angel to come out during this because unlike the anon's idea, there is no mention of wings(or a halo) being in the situation. It was just put in there needlessly because the anon wanted it to be.

I hope I'm not nitpicking or being confusing about what basically kills it for me.

I was going to hope for the best for his story and put aside my unease despite for whatever reason there being a police raid and/or mafi(y)a(fucking russians) hit and there not being any real action towards you, whether it being the police trying to find you to put you in child care or the mob trying to track you down because you being the child, sibling or relative of the person they killed might know something about them and rat on them.

>>6828985
How is her ass able to take that Minotaur dick in the cold like that?

>>6830856
Training and lube?

>>6830856
Magic

>>6828985
Also, why is she holding a sword at this point?

>>6830931
Minotaur dick is addictive if not used responsible. If a Minotaur goes feral(no idea if this is the right word) they are likely to use cunts and assholes till they are gaping and loose and you are likely to be addicted to it by then. So I am assuming it is a safety measure incase he shows signs of feral-ness to put him down quickly. There cum is also quite addictive.

Only Idiots and the brave fuck Minotaurs.

>>6830931
Safe sex requires protection.

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Ive been trying to write something but ive ground to a halt. Here's a WIP, not sure if ill pick it back up. No smut yet, I stalled just at the part where it was supposed to get good.

Untitled Kraken x Mermaid fic
http://pastebin.com/H8hbVv1q
Tags: MermaidxKraken, Tentacles (consentacles),

As usual feedback or criticism is always appreciated

>>6830877
>>6830893
>>6830931
She hails from a warrior tribe, the greatest of which after years of training scale the mountains in search of the greatest foes.
Upon defeat they offer their bodies in exchange for their lives then travel back down the mountain to return to their tribe, with a rank reflecting the monster or beast they faced. This serves the dual purpose of hardening their combat skills and ensuring none of them will ever lust for men, who would be unable to satisfy them in the way a monster could anyway.

Like mountain amazon barbarians.