General topic: Would you let your lover choke you until you pass out?
Yeah I would but I'm much more of a dom desu. Wouldn't choke out my waifu either
Also here is pilot story about a male dandere yandie I'll write more if people seem interested. I also need an editor if it isn't already painfully obvious.
Bro, your writing is edgier than 90s Superhero Comics. I get it you are trying to be dark and atmospheric, but it just comes off as trying to hard.
Also, in multiple instances you used one word multiple times in the same sentence. Writing 101 teaches you not to do that.
I'm gonna give you an honest critique. Not gonna be nice, but neither am I gonna say anything to discourage you on purpose.
I won't say it's bad... but your writing can be redundant ( I raised my fist up towards the mirror and winced as my fist followed its fate and met with the mirror.), I sooner see this guy as some highschool-level edgelord than a yan and... it doesn't feel like it flows well.
When it comes to writing, it's gonna suck, but you're gonna have to learn how to edit your own stuff.
As far as a pilot goes...I've no clue what to expect out of this guy outside of him feeling like he's 2kool4skool. From what's been said and described, I question how good of a legitimate character he is.
Keep writing.If you continue with this, I'll read and see what develops. Hex/10
yeah I was posting it for feedback most people have told me it came off as too edgy so far
MC is too much of a supreme gentleman
A friend has offered to help me along with it and write it in sort of a different style to help me sort of get a better feel and sort of dimentionalize him better.
Hopefully I can turn down the edgy dial and tryhard dial and use all the criticism to make a good story
I'll make a revised version of the pilot and go from there
>Decides to read
>Usually am kind about reviews and critiques
>IT'S SO EDGY
Also why did he punch the mirror is this just to show how edgy he is
>“What does one do to deserve all of this torment?”
BEING SO EDGY EVEN THE MIRROR CAN'T HANDLE YOUR EDGINESS
>my body was aching for her.
This feels like it was shoehorned in to make him sound obsessed.
idk man this guy sounds like a boring one-dimensional edgy dude who you're trying to sell as yan by putting in that one little line about him being obsessed with someone.
You'll take these threads away when you pry them from my cold, dead, dere hands
I think that hobbies are the best way to get into serious relationships.
What hobbys do you very clingy girls would swarm to? Something tells me archery.
Would you bang your qt's brains with your fingers?
Vidya, anime/manga, books, writing, and collecting Pokemon plushies. I'm fairly obsessive about these things too.
Vidya in general is nice, although I wish Yandere Simulator (even if it is in a glorified alpha stage) had some focus on actually romantically pursuing your senpai. What's the point of killing the competition if I can't tell him how much I love him as I show him the extent I've gone to win him? At any rate I can generally satisfy my fantasies in the vidya...
Another collector of pokemon plush dolls?
Would you ever rape your obsession?
Are you saying you wouldn't give your eye to your senpai if he asked? You wouldn't be completely blinded. Missing one eye ain't that bad. Sounds like you two aren't devoted to each other enough.
I collect Mudkip plushies, Eevee and Eeveelutions, and legendaries. I'd link to my personal collection website but it has personal info on there.
Maybe one day I'll post my writing. I am professionally published in a couple of magazines (for short stories) and I'm working on a novel, but I've toyed with the concept of writing a series of short stories from the perspective of a female yandere that explores more than just the fetishized concept of a crazy woman (since, well, that is a large part of me but there's more to it than any work I've ever read explores).
But most of my yandere energy and focus goes directly to the sweet wonderful boy that's sitting next to me as I write this. Maybe one day I'll sit down and start drafting ideas.
Favorite book is a really hard question for me. My favorite genre is dark fantasy (I really like earlier Neil Gaiman; he's become too SJW after marrying Amanda Palmer who is almost certainly kekolding the shit out of him) but as a part of my degree I've taken classes on Shakespeare and a variety of other lit classics that I adore.
Maybe writing about extreme yandere stuff could be fun. Body horror, rape, murder, all that stuff. The pic of the girl getting her eye licked by onii-san is adorable.
not yandere, but I'm posting it anyways because it's John K Peta.
I'm just gonna post the link here.
How big is your collection of pokemon? Do they take up several shelves?
Yanderes, would you let your senpai crush your ovaries?
Probably, but she's stated before that she's polyamorous and told Neil she would sleep with dudes and girls while on tour. Personally as an obsessive yandere I don't understand polyamory--it even disgusts me on a kneejerk emotional level--but I guess if it works for them then whatever. I just wouldn't tolerate it at all in my relationship. He knows he's mine and mine alone.
Combining both my childhood collection of American plushies and my more recent adult collection of Japanese stuff, yes, they'd span several shelves. My Japanese collection currently occupies two shelves.
No. I want children with him. If anyone is doing crushing, it's going to be me with his balls if he were ever to stray from me.
>NG: “We both came from closed relationships (although Amanda had tried all sorts of relationships before that one). We both wanted to be with each other, but also we wanted more than that. From the very beginning of the relationship, in early 2009, possibly even before we started actually going out, we knew we wanted to be free to be with other people when we were away, and that we wanted to build the kind of a relationship in which that would bring us closer. So far it’s working pretty well.
So yeah, he's polyamorous too. He's not really getting keked, they're both consensually banging other people. They've also been married for two years.
Last time I was suicidal and a friend noticed and made me stay at his house with him and his wife, they're like my brother and sister. The wife works from home so there was someone there all the time.
If the person is your everything quitting them cold turkey would be like attempting to quit air cold turkey, wouldn't it?
It means they were a great feeling to you at some point, but you had not fully adapted to become incapable of moving on, or fully accepted them to be your everything yet.
I guess this acceptance is what separates an obsession towards someone and the anime term yandere.
Perhaps truly "becoming one" with another human being is impossible IRL. Why can't we live in an anime?
I think hentai where two people merge with each other should be considered yandere.
Open the gates of both of your minds and let each other in.
If it's about wanting to not change so your love can be whole, I think changing won't be that bad towards this. But then again you can't just choose someone randomly. If you manage to find someone that is compatible in more ways than not, there is a big deal of those incompatibilities that can be accepted into yourself, and you can work on fixing the rest.
Maybe ones idea of their self should be more expansive, and yet unchanging. That way they can understand their possible lovers causes and reactions.
I'm still kind of proud of these. I used to be terrified of making my own blood flow, but I've overcome that. What should I draw next?
Alright. I'll do it next time I make blood flow. I might use a pen or something to make it prettier-- using blood alone is pretty difficult... maybe if I used a paintbrush instead of my fingers it would be easier.
I feel your pain, but only have this to contribute to your suffering.
You're on 4chan, newfag. There is literally an amputee thread on /d/ every week, and that isn't even the creepiest thing here.
Right now we have
>four active threads for /d/eviants who get off to the idea of slowly digesting alive,
>a thread for individuals who like the idea of rupturing the insides of some chick with a massive load,
>a body horror thread,
>threads about getting off to people who have their souls raped out,
>a thread for women melting into soup,
>a thread for parasitic eggs being shoved into a helpless victim's uterus,
>tentacle rape (a classic),
>a person devolving into a mass of reproductive organs,
>a myriad of brain washing thread involving everything from simply submitting, to becoming a sex craving animal, to changing your gender,
>a thread for losing your humanity and embracing sick, unnatural mutations,
>a thread for turning into a statue. A fuckable statue.
>A thread for suffocating one's lover during sex
>"Semen Food". I'm not checking what that is, exactly.
>A thread for sex in public,
>turning into someone's genitalia
>and plant fucking
Just to name a few.
TL,DR; Nothing is disgusting here, because everything is disgusting here.
Is that why there's that saying that you should never date a girl who owns a horse? I've never understood that piece of handed-down wisdom. Is it because they see massive horse dick or something?
Not that guy, but personally I haven't come to /d/ in like year as I was just linked by the yandere thread on /a/ and I can honestly say that every time I've ever come to /d/ I am amazed that such odd fetishes exist and I am glad a place like /d/ exist to provide a house for all of them.
Depends on what type she was. Pic related.
Y'all niggas need a sermon.
"welcome home big brother, you're a little later today than usual"
I'm the asshole somehow after being lead on for a month then starting to talk to a girl who shows actual interest in me, right? I'm just another thirster, right? But encouraging me to sperg gets your laughs so I guess everything is all fine and dandy.
Hopefully you've all got your laughs in at the sperg. Make sure you make all those logs/archives that you've made, made public now so even more people can laugh at me being lead on for 3-4 weeks and know how much of a loser I am.
Peace out. I hope you've all enjoyed the show. its all for the fun in it, as long as its in the expense of someone else, right?
Would it be too much to ask of you people to at least hide everything about Corpse, especially the second message I sent to yan-san about him? I am a human so I do actually care about other people's feelings unlike some people.
Why couldn't you people just let me idle in peace.
I wish you all the best of luck, hopefully you all find your soulmates. Peace out.
honestly I take calling her a catfish back. I may be upset but she doesn't deserve to be called names. They're a good person. Sometimes things just don't work out.
Holy shit. How cute would a story about a dead yandere stalking her lover from beyond the grave be? A cute little ghost girl causing negative things to happen to all the living girls who pay attention to him.
Holy fuck, are you still assmad at her or something?
Reverse search gives literally nothing. I hate to be that guy, but...
Well, have this, so the post ain't a waste of space.
I know too much about feeling.
Oh gosh look at all those pretty things on the desk. I wish I could make something similar for my little chuuni.
>tfw no qt yandere gf to watch anime or play video games
Just kill me now
sorry to hear anon
my s/o and I play games all day and watch a movie (anime or 2d) every night, we might start watching a few eps of an anime every night if we dont have more movies lined up.
Good for you man just cherish those moments. Maybe one day I will get them.
Last night we talked about how lives can be so separate and so intertwined at the same - not just talking about ours either. How some people can feel like they are doing the right thing but other people can think otherwise.
About how love is different for everybody, and each time it's different. How crazy the mind is, how it's impossible to explain and portray certain thoughts.
Also about how fun it would be to be handcuffed together and stuff.
I don't know if love was the right word to use, I just thought about how interesting it was that even though 'relationships' are really just two people who are together, no matter how many relationships you're in, the dynamic and attitude and whole personality of the relationship is different between the two people involved, as well as different from previous relationships and from future ones.
It's just a cool thing to think about.
>Romanticizing suicidal tendencies
Lots and lots of cliches in your writing, not seeing any purpose or distinction that makes me care about that scene any more than every other scene where a character stares themselves down in the mirror.
Are you saying that it's okay to glorify killing others but that glorifying killing one's self is wrong? How does your mind work?
Neither should be seen as "okay", dumbass. That should be obvious. I just mentioned that there's a difference between the two.
I'm sure not everyone here wants someone to commit suicide.
Since we're on the topic of suicide, we could talk about our suicidal thoughts.
I've been wanting to do it for a long time. For some reason, there are people who insist that it isn't my time to go. If it wasn't for them I'd probably be gone by now.
A few weeks back I wanted to jump off the balcony. And you know what? I actually thought it would be a noble act. I thought it would be good for everyone, maybe that it would make senpai smile or laugh. I sat on the railing but eventually backed off. And for this, I feel guilty. Guilty for not being yandere enough to go through with it.
If I were properly obsessive, if I was what he wanted me to be, I would be dead. I should be dead. I feel disgust at my fear and lack of devotion. I want him to laugh and smile because of me.
And resting, and waking up so you can get tired again.
In certain cases, suicide is the best option for everyone.
Why would you value a stranger's life? Wouldn't my death be amusing? It could make our community famous. What is your goal?
Your death would be inconsequential. If I was presented with your death, I'd feel bad, as I am conditioned to, and that's about it. Your suicide idea thing is a small-time ambition. It's comparable to a shitty martyr blowing up accidentally. Don't mock me in particular by suggesting I would profit greatly from such a petty thing.
Yes! Long distance.
Will be a shorter distance when I study in his continent - which I had been planning to go to before I met him anyway. Distance doesn't bother us since we spend every waking and sleeping moment connected anyway.
What in the hell are you going on about?
Reading this thread is like watching a walking corpse shamble around in circles and run into walls. Funny, but ultimately pointless and pretty sad.
Why the fuck are you refusing to let it die?
I wish it was so simple, doc.
No, I'm pretty sure I can still identify a dying general. Shitposting and /soc/ all up in this shit. 82 out of 281 posts so far have images. Not even half is actual discussion. There is literally no purpose to the thread, since apparently everything goes on in IRC or wherever the fuck.
this just in: the girlfriend of the site's owner talks shit about site members behind their backs
Nice people are trying to get me away from senpai, I've spent so much time here that I feel like giving up on senpai would be disgusting even though it would be healthy. I don't want to be a quitter like senpai. He always said perseverance was noble. I want to be a good yandere. Why can't I be a good yandere?
I'll draw more sometimes. It feels kind of nice to make something that would cause most normal humans to feel disgust. Maybe one day I can get the courage to cut my wrists instead of more benign spots.
I think I'm going to stick this card in someone's mailbox.
anyone want to be friends and play video games or watch anime?
It's about how to cut the veins on the underside of your forearm in order to kill yourself. If you cut across you'll also cut the tendons which will cripple your hand. Which is kind of irrelevant if you actually want to kill yourself, but a lot of people chicken out, so it's better for them to not cripple themselves.
Be a worthy senpai and the kouhais will come to you. What do you have to offer a kouhai?
I have my self to offer.I am good at listening, better at advice. I'm very thoughtful and can go quite in depth. I am able to analyze people and situations quite fast and accurately, doubly so when presented with truthful information.
I am also very loving and dependable, I have skills like cooking and repair of most technological items. When it comes to cooking, I am not picky and if my kouhai wished to impress me with cooking I would gladly eat it because they made it with their love for me.
I have also been told that I am very accepting of people who society or others would turn away.
Ehh, he spends most of his time talking to scared. Hes alright but I don't see why anybody looks up to him. He doesn't seem to have the qualities of a leader who one would want to follow for a long time.
Nobody really "looks up" to him except girls who like him, I think. He's just good at taking leadership roles and making friends with everyone.
Now now. Nobody said it wasn't common for 4channers to tell others to go kill themselves or to be amused by other people's pain.
But someone who runs a website full of vulnerable folks who might actually go through with it? My, my. A community leader should take better care of his flock, no?
Bullying others to suicide is a crime and would reflect poorly on our community, know what I mean? Words cut deep, and people here are particularly fragile.
He has, in the past, said that he's the type of guy who could commit a murder and walk away completely unfazed. He doesn't care about other people's lives and only runs the IRC because he likes being in a position of power.
And here's one of his rejected groupie spilling autism at another rejected groupie because of jealousy? We should form a fanclub.
You'd better not be calling spooks an autist, you mong!
I don't really know much about this but does spooks really have that many groupies surely people have better things to do than worship a relatively anonymous person over the internet... Oh wait.
To the right person, the world. I don't play these bullshit peacock games to impress others only to disappoint them later. You get me, and you get loyalty, confidence and the support people want from their other half. But if you try to pull the wool over my eyes, or abuse my loyalty then I will dispose of you like the garbage that you are.
What's the most yandere thing you would ever do, yg? No edgy "I'd kill his enemies for him" responses unless you actually believe you could do it.
>tfw playing neko atsume and the first cat you get is Spooky
Here's everything i would do for my senpai:
>make food(with my blood in it)
>stalk(honestly who doesn't?)
>watch them sleep at night
but i don't know if i could kill, but i have harmed others.
Speaking of yandere being a harmful mindset. Don't we have screenshots of Dutra claiming she was planning to commit an actual murder?
Not just bone fragments. You can find full bones in there, and sometimes intact skulls! And think of the stuff you could do with the fur. You could stick it in someone's mailbox, make cute little wigs for your rat skulls, make a nice collage or make a fancy fur coat for barbie dolls. The possibilities are endless, anon. The possibilities are endless.
>making pretty earrings out of skeletons isn't fun
Playing games won't show you if they are worth sticking with and in general shows that they aren't. If somebody tries to play with your heart or your mind the should be abandoned like the trash they are.
I disagree. Having your mind played with can be a lot of fun of the person doing it isn't malevolent. It all depends on why and how they are playing their games. Manipulation isn't always used for nefarious purposes. Senpai has proved that.
Your right. Let me rephrase my post to make it better
> If somebody tries to play with my heart or my mind the should be abandoned like the trash they are.
I don't enjoy somebody attempting to toy with me for petty games. I have found many people try for jealousy or anger rather than something more positive when you are outside of a relationship, this is my skewed world view however.
Fair enough. It depends how you define petty, I guess.
The way I see it, folks who do it out of jealousy or anger are broken and need fixing. One man's trash is another's treasure-- I guess it's like how not many children would want to play with a barbie they found in the garbage, even if all it needs to be a proper toy is a little tweaking.
>tfw actually played with trash barbies when I was a kid
They were in real good condition, though. Just needed to be disinfected and to have some holes in their clothes patched up. Grandma still advised me not to tell people where they were from because they'd probably judge.
Loving the unloved, caring for the broken. Manipulating broken puppets and making them worthy again. It's got its charm. Have some dollie hentai.
>digging through my fashion folder
kinda reminiscent. bigger boobs though.
Pretty please with a cherry on top? What if I post some really good hentai?
You can do whatever you want, the thread's past bump limit anyways.
I don't know what spooks is doing, especially behind the scenes. I was just referring to him managing the website and not fucking up completely. And I guess some people like him.
but now I noticed that the post I replied to might have been asking if he's doing good healthwise. if that's the case then my bad, I have no idea about that.