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/wst/ - Sci-fi/Fantasy Smut Thread

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Elves, Dragons, Giants, Slimes, Aliens, Robots, Monsters and anything in between, if you know what I mean.

People especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. It's easy and both writefags and drawfags will love you for it. Also, try and keep image dumps to a minimum so that more OC can be posted.

Master smut list:
http://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/%27s_Smut_Index

Requests Document Database (feel free to add your requests to this when you post them in the thread!):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1
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What happened to the last thread, anyway?
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This is from a classic sci fi hentai that I always loved. A bit more horror oriented than erotic, but it's pretty lewd too.
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>>6524253
It was pruned, no idea why. My theory is that it lacked content, so post some more.

Also, reposting the fic Belgianon wrote last thread.

"SR3: Deep Care"
http://pastebin.com/dcUzswv7
M. Runner X F. Technomancer, (tomboy/reverse trap, vanilla sex/gentle powerbottoming)
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>>6524261
That's about what I figured. I was going to make a thread myself, but I was waiting until I finish the story I'm currently working on. Looks like you already took care of it, though.
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So is the same thread as the ones that were on /tg/ last spring? I still have some stories I didn't exactly finish for those...
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>>6524266
Basically, yeah.
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>>6524266
Last spring and nearly two years before that, yes. It's nice to see that more people are still finding us. Welcome back and get writing.
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>>6524270
Oh, cool. Then I'll try to get around to finishing my prompts.

http://pastebin.com/u/nirguy


>Animated Armour/Male adventurer, cum play and affection focus.

>POV of female human Submissive worshiping the body of her Lamia Domme
>Mind-breaking/humiliation/degradation long term slave training.
>sesshomaru raping a Female OC
>avalanche based encasement, possible watersports Herm/female anthro, ice play
>POV piece of male dom and female centaur/lamia sub, Worship Domination, light bondage, Sweaty, possible cum play.
>Lamia town-tour Bathroom-desperation. Friendly, affectionate.
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>>6524275
I'll be working on at least two prompts tomorrow. Any one want to add one on? I specialize in 2nd POV pieces.
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>>6524275
I'd like to see one of the first two or the second from the bottom. Lamia are awesome and practically made for this kind of thing. I've also always had a thing for animated armor. Avalanches scare the shit out of me, though. I hate them nearly as much as I do jellyfish, though jellyfish can at least be sexualized. Avalanches are just terrifying.
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>>6524275
Ah, I remember those. Anything you could contribute would be much appreciated.

>>6524276
There's still a metric fuckton of prompts on the google doc, but if you'd like I can add one more. A bit sappy, but it's there.

>you're a priest to a fertility/love goddess; for your dedicated service to her, she allows you the right to have sex with her and impregnate her.
>body worship, breastplay (possibly lactation), and that sort of thing could be worked in easily, but knocking her up should be the most important part of the thing. she is a fertility goddess after all.
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>>6524277
I'll work on the lamia stuff for you, and here is where I am so far with the Animated armor prompt.
http://pastebin.com/qYeGc0Jt
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>>6524278
oh. oh fuck yes. I am more than ready to do that prompt. I'll start now even, But It may be a day or so before I get anything back to you.

Also, Yeah I'm flipping through the requests now. I'm going to stop this namfagging post spam and get to work, see you my dear /d/edicated readers
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>>6524287
Take your time, I'm looking forward to it.
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As requested, a story about voluntary oviposition.

Maternal Instinct
http://pastebin.com/WhZfBvjN
Tags: MxF, FxF, insect-like aliens, oviposition and insemination, pheromones, large insertion, inflation

As always, I appreciate any feedback or criticism. Next up on my list is paladin orgasm denial. I am open to suggestions for that story or any other requests.
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>>6524450
A good read, definitely better than your previous stories in my opinion. The 'bugs loving breasts' thing felt forced and out of place though, and I felt the character descriptions could have been paced a bit better, instead of dumped in a handful of sentences and forgotten for the rest of the story. The aliens could've felt a bit more, well, alien, and fleshed out a little more, as it is they're basically just unusual modes of transport for a pair of cocks that have little to no character.
Overall I liked it, and it's a distinct improvement in skill. Keep it up.
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Anybody knows a place where I can find the thread that got pruned? There were some nice draw requests and archive.moe is kill.
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>>6524913

Yup. /d/ has an archive here:

https://archive.loveisover.me/d/
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So, it's NaNoWriMo and No Fap November so I'm planing on staying horny all month and writing a good ol' erotic novel, but I've no ideas for plot that can last
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>>6525256
Well, what do you like to write about?
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>>6525261
Sex. All kinds.
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>>6525313
A little more specific than that, then. Which kinds do you like writing about most?
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Anyone ever considered setting up a counterpart to these threads on /aco/? Cover all the angles, as it were.
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>>6524275
Welcome back. I remember your "Imagine the Gondola" work. Glad to see you again.
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>>6525441
I'd be hesitant to do that. we have a large enough split between the porn as is, I'd worry that we'd simply divide and wither.

BUt... It may work out, We could have at least a tester thread.
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>>6525441
>>6525452

We tried. Thread eventually died out from lack of interest.
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>>6525454
Bugger. I must've missed that one, got loads of western stuff I'd love to see someone right something for but can post on here without attracting the banhammer.
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>>6525455
*can't

Fack
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>>6525455
Link it via imgur, then.
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>>6525455
I don't think your requests have to be eastern or western themed. You can just request stuff, and have eastern pictures. And if nothing else, just post it to the request doc and we'll get around to it and then hopefully post it on the smut masterlist on suptg and you'll have your erotica!
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>>6525474
>you'll have your erotica!
Before or after the end of the universe?

Besides, considering the rest of the stuff on the request doc, most of the stuff I'm interested in wouldn't interest any of the people who look on there.
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>>6525313
>>6525366

Yess, need info!

Been idly fantasising about a smutty Monster Hunter recently. 3 KO's and the monster gets you.

Or a female hunter wearing Rathian armor. The Rathalos smells the scent of his mate in the armor (or an in-season female?) and goes for the hunter. Sexually.
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>>6525479

Oh, and a hidden set bonus of the armor is that she can really CAN take the Dragon D.
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>>6525479
>female humanXmale nonhuman
whelp, my interest is gone
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>>6525487
>>6525484

>female humanXmale nonhuman
One of my main fetishes. Although it's gotta be a bright non-human, or mythical. None of this horse/dogfucking.
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>>6525501
Its weird, for me if the non-human is sentient then there's got to be some kind of good reason as to why they're fucking, but if the non-human isn't sentient, then I don't really mind.
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>>6525511

Oooh. Plot twist. The non-human is sentient, but views the human as some sort of lower non-sentient being, and therefore uses it as a toy?

Alternately, the good old...
> "I wonder what it's like to fuck one of those?"
> "I won, and now I'm inexplicably horny."
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>>6525526
Hrm. Not sure. The implications trouble me too much for me to get off to it.

Another weird thing; moral ambiguities in these sorts of things disturb me more than straight up "Rar, I am an evil rape monster etc etc". Even though logically the opposite should be true.
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>>6525536
well, with moral ambiguity you have the push and pull, the edge of truth and the cloud of self-deception that allows one to go forward with the act. It's unsettling because anyone could civince themselves their doing the right/an okay thing and think they are not in the wrong. some one who is just 'rar evil, gonna rape' is at least full faced in their acceptance of it, even if they don't view themselves/their acts as wrong. they are safly in te extream end of the spectrum so we don't have to compare ourselves to them in any real way....

but I'm just rambling, may be full of shit.
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Don't forget your offerings of images to the mods, lest we be again struck from the board.
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>>6525542
No no, your poorly spelled waffling is mostly right on the mark.
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There's this hentai comic I found on e-hentai ages ago (its a parody of something, though I don't know or care about it), its 29 pages long so I can't be bothered posting it all on here, but I'd really like it if someone would have a stab at writing something for it. If no-one is interested then I'll stick it in the request archive and pray to Bacchus for a miracle.

Begins here; http://g.e-hentai.org/s/11c3689244/391839-1
lemme know if it piques your interest and I'll go into more detail.
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>>6525581
What exactly is it that you are looking for out of this? You said that you don't care about the parody, so just machine sex and mindbreak?
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>>6525589
Mostly, yeah. Machine sex, mindbreak, milf, them getting knocked up, the whole shebang (heh).

I reckon you could spin it as these two being the wife and daughter of someone who pisses off an evil CEO or something, and this is his way of getting revenge. Like how the "actresses" in JAV are sometimes relatives of people who didn't pay up to the yakuza.
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>>6525598
But how is this fantasy or sci-fi? It doesn't really sound like it ties into our preferred subject matter at all.
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>>6525605
Well, for one thing I've always considered these a smut thread first, fantasy/sci-fi second. If you're determined to keep to that definition though, I suppose you could say that its sci-fi.

I mean, the whole limb-restraint mind-break drugs thing seems like it fits, and as I've said, wouldn't be too hard to fit it into a cuberpunk setting with an evil ceo or scientist or something.
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>>6525598
So the mother/daughter thing is part of what you want. That changes my plan slightly, but I think that I may be able to work with that. Machine sex is one of my favorite things, yet I've never actually written it. I had a plan to do so as a sequel to an older story I wrote, but that wouldn't work with what you're asking for. That being said, nothing stops me from doing both.

>>6525605 does have a bit of a point. I also am not a particular fan of the scenario you described, either. I'm sure that the whole thing can be framed in some kind of mad science light, which would fall under sci-fi pretty easily.

Either way, it sounds like something I'd be interested in writing. I'm also working on the paladin orgasm denial story, so no promises on when exactly this gets done. I'll write whichever strikes my fancy sooner.
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>>6525620
Alright, that's a lot better than I had expected. Somewhat less enthused about the nebulous deadline though. If it takes too long I might just have to try and write it myself, and that never ends well.
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>>6525605
as others have said, smut first, theme second. Also, It plays into /d/'s MO of having outside of normal kinks and fetishes so it may help us homogenize with the board a bit better.
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>>6525630
It's not so bad as my language would imply. If I particularly enjoy the prompt and nothing bad happens, I generally finish a story a week. Even if I end up writing the other story first, it should not take more than a few weeks. Given that this is a fresh request, I'll probably end up writing this first. For reference, my current backlog: http://pastebin.com/g52YQ3gv.
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>>6525646
Super. Thanks friend, appreciate it.
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>>6525631
I know, I know. I just have a thing about disregarding the narrative and theme outright. The kinks are fine, I've seen way worse. Hell, we've written worse too. (Case in point- all of XS' work.)
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>>6525686
Not all of her stuff was that strange. Her series of lesbian monster sex was pretty vanilla, all things being considered.
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>>6525710
>>6525715
Best I've got is a few roleplayers on f-list that I know of who are moderate to good in skill.
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>>6525479
I'd love to see some sort of epilogue with the ex-hunter trying to raise a half rathlos baby or something like that.
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>>6525723
He said fapfics, not ERPers. Totally different things here.

In any case, this is the best I could find.

http://pastebin.com/JuxBPUgb
http://pastebin.com/b80w2xw0
tags: HalflingxOrc!Amazon

http://pastebin.com/YaqWLg0G
tags: OrcxElf, /ll/ (loli lesbians)

We don't have too much of orcs in general, they just don't seem very popular for whatever reason.
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>>6524249
Anyone know how to check the view count now on 1d4chan?

Its not on the bottom anymore.
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>>6525732
If you like cyberpunk, there's this one as well:
http://pastebin.com/uc79H0xr
Ork woman & human man.
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>>6525739
I don't think there is a way to do so now, not like it matters.

Anyone heard from that fellow who did Los Tiberos, the one who was doing the thing with the robot girl on the space station? I was looking forward to it and want to be sure it hasn't been dropped.
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Speaking of orcs, I think I got a good one.

Lady paladin is drinking up a storm, as you do, and decides on a drunken whim to forfeit her vows of chastity to the nearest tribe of orcs. In fact, she plans to go full bore and abandon her order's teachings completely and actually sign on with the tribe just to get some deep orcish dickings. She knows she'll probably be pumping out half-orc babies, but who cares, really?

The orcs, savage though they may be, attempt to reason with her and try to make her wait until she's sober enough to make that decision. They succeed...but she still wants some orcs pumping seed into her womb.

Ce la vie.

TL;DR: Pally drunkenly wants to be fucked/bred by orcs and join them. Orcs will only do it if she's sober. They fuck her anyway because she's so damn insistent.
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>>6525945
If her vows mean jack and/or shit, she won't be breaking them for shits and giggles.
If the vows don't mean jack and/or shit, there's no point bringing them up.
I'm confused as to what you're after. Are you after wanton sluttery? Corruption? Just impregnation and a gangbang?
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>>6525947

Wanton sluttery! Yes, that's it!
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>>6525945
Kind of like this?
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>>6526050

Yes, except more drunk and she's begging to be bred.
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>>6525949
Make her a regular warrior then instead of a paladin. Like >>6525947 said, otherwise the story just doesn't make sense.
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>>6524255
source?
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>All this talk of human girls getting fucked by monsters
Am I the only one more interested in human guys getting fucked by female monsters?
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>>6526081
Not the only one, but Female MonsterXMale Human is definitely in the minority.
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>>6526081
No.
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>>6526081
I was under the impression that it's covered so much that people are trying to diversify their requests.
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>>6526103
Female monsters!=monstergirls
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>>6526105
I don't have any non monstergirl female monsters that fall within the current rules of this board. You are of course free to post your own.
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>>6526066
http://tentaclerape.net/post/list/Alien_from_the_Darkness/1

Next time, use that little arrow next to the post number and then select "Image Search".
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>>6526109
Dragonesses
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>>6526119
Is that thing supposed to give blowjobs? Because the mouth on it doesn't look very comfortable for that.
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>>6526323
it has all these facets and scrubbers and suckers and auto-rotator-vibro oscillators
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>>6526418
They looked kinda sharp, that's all.I'm more of a robo-vagina person myself, but none of my images are quite good enough to be worth posting.
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>>6526113
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>>6526527
this makes me think of sokka waiting for suki. in the best kind of way.
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Why do you want to write smut?

Not being snippy here or anything, honest question.
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>>6526692
Because it's fun.
At least whenever I get around to doing it that is.
That's about it really. Other than I just enjoy writing stuff in general and smut is relatively easy to keep short and not turn into a deluded attempt at writing an epic adventure novel or something like that.
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>>6526692
Same reason why I write non-smut stories and NPC's/locations/plot hooks/... for RPG campaings.

My imagination would drive me crazy if I didn't write down whatever I come up with.
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>>6526692
For my personal use, and because I know others will enjoy the end result as much as I do.
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>>6526692
I do it because it gives me a boner, and it arouses others. I get a kick out of that.

I also like writing and it's fun to challenge one's self with he detail oriented world of erotica.
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Are there any good sites that have /d/ written smut? I know of a few but written is either a small afterthough, or it's all just vanilla m/f stuff.
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>>6526904
You mean /d/ content in written smut? Technically, Literotica does, but good luck sifting the chaff. MCStories has quite a bit.
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>>6526951

There's adult-fan-fic or whatever, and Archive of Our Own (AO4).
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>>6525728

Half Rathy baby becomes a pro G-Rank hunter. Maybe lancer? Sits behind their shield and spits fire at enemies. Poison spear, for Rath reasons.
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>>6526989
The former is equally...varied in quality, and the latter is a pain to navigate at the best of times, though.
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>>6526692
A much better question is "Why not write smut?"
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>>6526692
Hearing the praise and love boosts my ego like crazy and it gives me something productive to do while making me even better at english.
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What are your views on smut involving real people?
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>>6527235
Define "Real People"
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>>6527235
Perhaps you should look at the title of the thread again and notice the part that says "SCI-FI/FANTASY" before asking silly questions like that. If I wanted smut of "real people", I wouldn't be here in the first place.
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>>6526692
Partially because it's fun. That, and I know that nobody else will write the story I've got in my head but me.

Also it makes me feel good when I can make something that other people seem to enjoy.
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>>6526692
I have ideas, ideas I get while browsing /tg/ and I need to write down
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>>6527309
Speaking of which, we should start sharing those ideas. This thread isn't going to make itself hit bump limit before Friday, you know.
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>>6524281
>and here is where I am so far with the Animated armor prompt.
Oh hey I remember that one!

You planning to do any more work on it?
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>>6527235
Thanks but no thanks. Same for fanfiction using established characters.
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>>6527615
I think he said he was working on my prompt with the fertility goddess.
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>>6527329
So many elf threads...
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>>6528269
elf girls always was a kind of "standard of beauty". Also pointy eared girls are hot.
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>>6524450
Neat
>>6524558
>The 'bugs loving breasts' thing felt forced and out of place though
It did seem a little odd. More so with there being no real interest in them during the act itself.

>Her other hand reached up, cupping and squeezing the alien breast dangling just above her. To her surprise, the Apocrytan didn't seem to react at all. Apparently her breasts were not nearly so sensitive as a human's.
I was a little surprised that even if the fake tits weren't as sensitive that neither took the opportunity to play with the the human's.

That's my only real criticism.
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>>6524558
>>6528319
The breasts were never really meant to show up in the smut. It was a one-off joke about how popular designs always put breasts on aliens, despite their complete uselessness. I guess I could have them be relevant, but they were really only there for my amusement.
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>>6528285
I definitely agree.
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>>6526105
Except that's wrong, you fucking moron. There is a large number of female monsters that are straight up monster girls without changing them whatsoever.
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>>6528386
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>>6528414
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>>6528335
Oh. Well then keep up the good work.
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>>6528362
So many elves, so little time.
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>>6528495
Has anyone even seen lewdanon around, on /tg/ or anywhere else?
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>>6528509
he showed up on /tg/'s drawthread yesterday, check the archive.
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>>6528530
Good to know he's still around!
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>>6528538
Does he know where we are now?
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Does anyone have more pics like this? Specifically normal-sized humans/elves getting gangbanged by smaller humanoid creatures like Goblins or Imps?
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>>6528825
None on me.
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>>6528825
Yes but they're CG. Are we allowed to post these on /d/ ?
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>>6524450
Finally got around to reading A Different Knight's Gambit.

Fucking lost it right at the end.
>Perhaps his explanation was a bit inappropriate for eight-year-olds, but it wasn't his fault that their parents hadn't talked with them about voraraphilia and bondage yet.
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>>6528959
Imgur links are always allowed.
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>>6524261
>>6525547
The old thread hit bump limit:
>>6513572
You people seriously need to get over your persecution complex. It's unattractive, and makes me not want to contribute.
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Okay, so I did a few more revisions to my little ghost story - now featuring actual possession! I took a different approach to the possession this time around, I think. Hopefully it's a little easier to follow what happens and who exactly is saying what, despite them being in the same body.
I'm still not 100% sure how to approach posession. If anyone has a good example of posession done right, I'd love to read it; at the very least some examples of how other people approach describing the matter.

Linky link - http://pastebin.com/Kye50Quw
Current tags: Possession
Future tags: Masturbation, soft vore, ghost sex

I know I'm too late for the spookening, but whatever.
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>>6529096
That's last week's thread. This week's thread was created on (American) Friday as usual, hit ~115 posts and was pruned. It was then put back up, on (American) Saturday.
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>>6529118
The possession scene itself was pretty good. It looked a lot cleaner since last I looked at it, though it still needs some proofreading. I'm not sure if I can follow the main character's emotional process here, though. She starts out in a panic, which is entirely reasonable. Then she begins to calm down a bit, to the point that she starts asking questions simply out of curiosity. It comes off a little strange considering the depth of her fear earlier, but it's not that big of a deal. Then, spontaneously, she decides to start walking the other way, despite the fact that she was initially only willing to listen because the ghost told her that she was in danger. Her progression here makes no real sense as-written. The transition from the first point to the second could be a bit smoother but is mostly alright. From the second to the third is a huge jump with very little explanation, particularly considering that we're riding in her head enough to hear her monologue. Either cut the third bit entirely or, if this is playing into your story, give her a more reasonable motive.
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>>6528605
Probably.

Back on /tg/ he'd "disappear" for weeks then drop back in with more drawings.
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>>6529096
You missed one, bro', let me dig it up for you:

https://archive.loveisover.me/d/thread/6523099
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>>6524450
This was fucking HOT.

Unlike other posters, I don't really care about the breasts one way or the other; humans do weird cosmetic shit that they can't feel things from all the time.

The only things that felt unrealistic to me were:
- the doctor's comment to her at the end; but I totally understand its function in the story and agree with it.
- the idea that they'd let her go home and go about her life if the mating procedure was really that delicate.

But these are just /tg/ sperging quibbles. Honestly it was fantastic and I really enjoyed the premise. Awesome job! Saved to disk.
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>>6529118
>soft vore, ghost sex
Ghost vore?
I kinda want to see that

Will read your story tomorrow night, I got work in the morning
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>>6528386
True enough, many mythological monsters are straight-up monstergirls/-boys.

Still, it's nice to see some real monster-on-human action from time to time.
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>>6529127
>>6529190
Oh, uhh. My bad, sorry about that.

>tfw completely schooled
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>>6529280
Seconded.

Not that I don't like monstergirls, mind you, but I never understood why non-human looking aliens/monsters got much less love than the "humans with extra bits".
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>>6529365
Well, the fact that you've acknowledged your mistake instead of needlessly trying to argue does you credit. Just don't let it happen again and you should be fine.
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>>6529513
It's a natural thing for us humans to be more closely attracted to things that are (relatively speaking) humanlike.
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>>6529513
On top of what>>6529609 said, I'd postulate they are simply easier to write about.
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>>6529651
True. Plus, it's easier to write the smutty parts when the anatomy of the nonhuman partner is either identical or very similar to our own.
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>>6529513
>>6529609
>>6529651
>>6529735
Personally, I like things with an attractive feminine ...silhouette maybe? not sure if it's the right word, but I like things who's shape hints at things like a humanish form and hips or breasts, whether it be a human woman, xenomorph, dragoness, or whatever, so while I love xeno and female monsters, I don't like the extreme nonhuman
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>>6529118
I thought it was done well the way it's currently written.

>Future tags: Masturbation, soft vore, ghost sex
Type faster you cock tease.
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>>6529118
What the fuck does "soft" vore mean? Tentacle pit? No digestion?
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>>6530485
I believe it means no digestion, but the same author used it to describe a scene with explicit digestion. In this context, I have absolutely no idea.
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>>6530485
Usually it means that people aren't chewed / chopped up in a gory manner.
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>>6530499
But hydrochloric acid is okay?
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>>6530501
as long as the dissolving process isnt focused on and detailed, yeah
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>>6530485
Person being eaten isn't harmed. Swallowed whole and no gore. Sometimes also means the person isn't digested either. Through magic, different biology, science, or just other made up stuff the person isn't harmed from being in a stomach or is spit out.
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>>6530508
It's all magic based on how they practically never asphyxiate.
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>>6530510
you know it's possible to swallow air
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>>6530513
You can asphyxiate from having too much carbon dioxide rather than having too little oxygen.
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>>6530516
not sure why argue this when we both already said it's all fantasy based anyways
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>>6530554
Corellon Larethian pls go!
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Sorry guys, tests have been wiping me out so all I could do was dumb monmusu pictures.

Have something that's probably /d/ enough, I'll try seeing if I can get requests done again this weekend.

I haven't drawn porn in so long....
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>>6530932
Doesn't look like you've lost your touch at all, at least.
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>>6530932
Hey Inker, are you taking requests for now?
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>>6530932
Did you draw lewd monmusu pictures, at least ?
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>>6530932
Inker, mate, I'm begging you. Monstergirls.
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There's this idea for a smutfic I've had knocking around in my head for a few days now (not much more than the basic idea, I'm worried if I put too much thought into it then it'll go out of control again) yet I can't quite seem to push myself to actually start writing it down. I was wondering if anyone had some advice?

That said, its not sci-fi or fantasy based so I'm not sure if I should be asking about it on here.
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>>6531321
Hi Peekaf ! If you don't mind me asking, have you figured your issue with your banshee pic ?
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>>6531371
Well the issue of course was that my knowledge of anatomy is still at a beginner's level, so there's not much else to do but grind. And look at pictures of feet. Not that I'm complaining. Plus assignments are bogging me down, and now I've started an animation project on the side, I don't get much time to contribute here.

In short, yes, but too unskilled to fix up. Here's a little something I was working on for a friend top up the thread.
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>>6531423
Is that Eldar a dude? I honestly can't tell.
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>>6531674
And that's what makes Eldar great.
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>>6529140
This initial possession bit is tripping me up something fierce. I have a few ideas on how to fix it, but again, if anyone knows of a good possession story I'd love to read it - get someone else's' take on sexy ghost times. Unfortunately it's not something I've found to be very common.

>>6529245
no no, not ghost vore, ghost sex. Though, if I can figure up something interesting for ghost vore, I might give it a shot.

>>6530466
I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far; and once I get my groove down for this story I hope to finish it rather quickly. I've got a ways to go, but I want to get it done right instead of going back and re-writing bits. Re-writes are the worst.

>>6530485
Soft vore means no chewing or gore during the consumption process. Digestion can still occur (and more than likely will in this story) - so I should probably tag it as soft digestion, or at the very least non-graphic digestion. ie - the digestion will not be detailed or will happen off scene.

>>6530525
>>6530510
To be fair, this story has monster girls and same-size ish vore. I'm not exactly going for realism.
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>>6532197
Possession is depressingly rare in smut. Again, though, I thought you did the possession itself pretty well. I think that you need to just slow down her thought process through the scene immediately following. She flips through emotions with staggering speed and it really just doesn't fit.
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>>6531055
Thanks.
>>6531095
Not yet, got shit to take care of. Probably tomorrow or day after that.
>>6531243
>>6531321
No, I cannot draw lewd monmusus because I like the girls too much to make lewds of them.
Now, not-monmusu monster girls on the other hand...
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>>6532485
Inker, Inker,[spoiler] who is best girl ? [/spoiler]
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>>6532504
Can't I love them all equally?
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>>6532517
Fair enough, I guess.
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Geez, this thread is still here? We had better step things up a bit, then.
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>>6532485
YAY!
SFW, Suu For Work!!!

Though Inker, Suu is Lewd by default.
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Hi guys, are others /tg/ licences than warhammer okay, namely Confrontation/Rag'narok from late Rackham ? If so, can I ask for sexy times of this girl, with her armor partially removed ? Either receiving both creampy and facial as she ride a dick and blow one or two others, or simply giving a messy titfuck, or else if you feel it better ?
Don't pay attention to the hips, sculptor fail...
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>>6532621
Sure, other /tg/ licenses besides warhammer are ok.

Getting someone to do it might be the hard part, though- we're woefully low on contributors as it is and I don't think many of them know what Confrontation might be.
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>>6528269
>>6527329
...so about that.
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>>6532683
Space Elves girls are hot
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>>6532662
Eh, can't be as bad as trying to find someone to play with, at least.
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I've decided to start writing mini-stories for this thread, based on ideas or pictures presented within. First out I've written about two pictures.

>>6531085
Treacherous Woods https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zNQKCVXZ5797hCBiHtvQMllKlMAMmkZ_pTUtsowE4JQ/edit?usp=sharing
~ 550 words.

>>6531273
Revenge of the Pigmen https://docs.google.com/document/d/1amNGSkyblAw8JmWL5wan3xIrA335JFcY48VacZ5Kn3Y/edit?usp=sharing
~ 1300 words.

I'd like to apologize for my English in advance, I've run the stories through spellcheck but there might be some odd sentences or miss typed words left. Any and all ideas, criticism or other feedback or opinions are welcome. I got a thick skin to have at me!
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>>6532866
They're still of pretty good quality given their length. Well done.

You ought to more of them, we need all the content we can get.
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>>6532866
I was going to try and do something similar to that the other day, write a mini-smutfic for all the pics in my porn folder. Still trying to work up the motivation to do it. Or to write anything for that matter.
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>>6532949
Thanks dude! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

>>6533106
How about you throw some of them up in here and I can try and write about them? I'll do the same, and if you see something you like you can write about it.
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So what have we got for this weekend?
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>>6533341
I'm currently working on the requested mother/daughter dubcon machine sex story. I expect it to be done this weekend and hope it to be finished tomorrow night.
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Anyone want to critique my work?

It's about an initiate of a fertility goddess, performing the last rites to a prisoner facing the noose.

Contains snuff and impregnation

http://pastebin.com/8dEaDPYt
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>>6533437
Don't quite have the time to review it thoroughly, but technically it isn't snuff since the death itself isn't part of any sexual activity. The sex itself is a bit on the scanty side, but in this case it does make sense since it's literally just a few minutes before the guy's execution. One has to wonder what kind of society thinks that kind of thing is normal.

Might be wise to add the "exhibitionism" tag, since it's implied the whole thing happens in front of a crowd of onlookers.
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>>6533629
I wish Nezumi was my waifu, too bad she is female neckbeard most likely.
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>>6532866
Another mini for those who feel like fapping. A Bump in the Road: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XAVEAqEFpQeTzqLOGHbJp4fwuEjLWoM8-iLqAh5kJZ8/edit?usp=sharing
~1200 words
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>>6533800
How is this either fantasy or sci-fi?
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>>6533178
I'd love to, but I got pretty much all of them from the /aco/lytes, so I doubt I could put them up on here.
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>>6533857
I keep saying, imgur is your friend.
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>>6533811
Well, it has to be either sci-fi or fantasy to make sense.
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>>6533866
Alright then, here's four to get you started. http://imgur.com/a/BDgyS
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>>6533909
Legoman has such a samebody problem.
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>>6534325
Hrm, might be more to do with the subject matter than him.
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>>6534374
No. He draws girls that clearly don't have that body type, but he gives to them anyway.
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>>6534378
Eh, maybe so. Makes no difference to me.
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Sort of off topic, since this isn't really a request, but you know what I wanna see? An NTR doujin where the guy takes his girlfriend back.
>MC is an innocent, friendly guy, wouldn't hurt a fly
>Mr. Steal Yo Gurl comes along and steals MC's gurl
>keeps her chained to a bed for a week while fucking her brains out and brainwashing her into his mindless fuckpuppet
>MC arrives in chains himself, and the villain challenges him to sexually satisfy his GF
>heart sinks when he realizes he can't
>"I'm so sorry, Anon... I love you, but I love this man's cock more! I'm his now... goodbye, Anon..."
>MC kicked out and sent home
>MC vows to get his GF back, by force if he must
>eyeofthetigerAMV.avi
>hero has to not only become strong enough to defeat his rival, but to satisfy his GF as well
>unlocks a sadistic streak within himself just as the rival unlocked a masochistic streak within his GF
>he wins and takes his bitch back, and then they go home and the indulge in their newfound proclivities with mind-blowing sadomasochistic sex

Definitely not the most progressive thing ever, and it might even defeat the entire point of NTR, but man would it be hot.
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>>6534405
I'm with you on that one. I've a big thing about betrayal that means I usually hate NTR stuff, but I feel like I could get behind your idea.
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>>6534405
There's this
>wife is fucked by big dick trap and becomes addicted
>husband finds out
>this page happens
>he now has his wife and the trap has his bitches
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>>6534413
That's good for a laugh, but I'm not sure it counts.
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>>6534405
Does this look like a place where we make doujins to you? We do fapfics here, not comics. Those things take fucking AGES to make you know.
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>>6534418
>Sort of off topic, since this isn't really a request, but you know what I wanna see?
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>>6534405
>>6534413
Made me think of this and that one story a writefag wrote for it about the guy getting NTR'd by the elf girl but slowly becoming the trap bitch for both of them
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>>6532517
Hey, Inker, can you still draw another pic for me? Psyker uses psychic powers to bridal carry SOB
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I'd like to request two potential stories

1. Straight human males are abducted en masse by alien studs to be converted into gay sex slaves and forced to fuck the asses in a galactic culture where being the receiver in sex is seen as preferable due to the lack of work involved.

2. A shemale adventurer combats either a witch or wizard (gender not important) and fails. The magician then proceeds to cast a spell on the shemale that magically and permanently removes the mouth from her face, leaving nothing but skin where the hole used to be, and proceeds to humiliate her by publicly exhibiting her in revealing clothing as their dickgirl property.
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hey, has anyone heard from Onyx recently?
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>>6534496
No. Keep in mind we lost a lot of people during our move here, and even now some of the old guard are just learning we're here.
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Huh, thread seems very dead this week, anyone working on anything?
Got a bit of a back log and if I find the time I might have something by the end of the weekend
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>>6534525
do you take requests?
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>>6534525
Nothing major, just going to keep writing minis.
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>>6534525
I'm still plugging away on the same fic I've been working on for some time now. Should be done relatively soon though with luck.
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>>6534549
If something interests me yes, but it really depends on what you ask
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>>6534582
40k related stuff.

specifically, psyker on sororitas.
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>>6534464
wait what? You mean to help lift because power armor is heavy?
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>>6534587
yeah.
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Flockmod is kill. No one on IRC. Hoping AA doesn't become an hero.
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>>6534593
I'm right here, and flockmod's actually doing just fine. Cuteanon's there and all.
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>>6534595
I'm just getting server not found, though.
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>>6534583
Gonna need to be more specific than that, but just on the surface probably not
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>>6534596
It does that a lot. Flockmod's a finicky beast, sometimes it takes a few reloads to make it cooperate.
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>>6534597
ok, I'll make it more specific.

An IG unit is working with a Sororitas unit to hold a place from tyranids. They intend to send out a patrol of Sisters conduct recon, with a psyker to provide some support. The psyker provides some advice for dealing with the aliens, but the Sisters disregard him because he is a 'witch'. Unfortunately, most of squad is captured, leaving the psyker and one sister to figure out a way to rescue them. After being freed from the tentacles of the alien, the squad see fit to 'reward' the witch for helping them escape.
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>>6534605
Yeah, not quite my thing, I'm open to other things though

Not really familiar enough with 40K to write something like that
Also I tend to be more interested in more /d/ish and fantasy related ideas
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>>6534644
alright, fair enough.
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>>6534413

I love how she thinks this is the best idea ever, and yes, I believe this is how you should handle spousal unfaithfulness.

"Me and the wife share everything. Now bend over."
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>>6534666
next page she holds down the trap so her husband can fuck him
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I know this request is super vague and doesnt give a whole lot on terms of story, but I really would love if somebody wrote a story about a group of human MILFs fucking with a MILFy centaur
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>>6534932
If you know it's super vague, I suggest making it less vague instead of requesting anyway. Asking for a fetish is just boring.
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>>6534977
Something I've noticed is on /tg/ you got requests that were story idea that happens to have a fetish, on /d/ you get requests that's just fetish
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>>6535009
I think that we just got more requests on /tg/. I remember there being innumerable shitty requests, even as much as a year ago. We just never really paid attention to them and only remember the good ones that ended up being written. We don't have the volume here to produce really good requests yet.
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>>6535015
Agreed. And the /d/-/aco/ split made it worse. Losing people with the move didn't help at all.
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>>6535015
>I remember there being innumerable shitty requests
We had a lot of unpicked up requests but I don't remember much shitty ones, though my tastes are fairly out there and varied so I may just have lower standards
[spoiler]Also I think about half of them were mine[/spoiler][spoiler][spoiler]No /d/ spoilers[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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>>6535032
I don't necessarily mean requests for shitty material. For every well thought-out request, there were dozens of "how about an x fucking a y but with z" requests. I never mind any sexual content in requests, I just find it slightly annoying to deal with anything that vague. It's hard-enough to write smut regularly and in good quantity without having to worry about starting a story entirely from scratch. If you want a particular fetish catered to, at least propose some kind of believable situation for it to take place in.
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>>6535042
Part of me gets the feeling that the X fucking Y with Z requests would tend to not get added to the list with the same vigilance as more in-depth requests.
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>>6535051
The requests database? Anyone can add stuff to that, and same goes for the 1d4chan page.
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>>6535055
Well yeah, but someone with a more in-depth request is more likely to go and add it, right?

As opposed to the guy who just wants +Fetish.
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>>6535051
>>6535059
Yes, that is generally correct, but I've rarely spent much time in the database. I tend to read and pick up requests straight from the thread, as fresh ones generally attract the most interest and the OR is practically guaranteed to still be around. I haven't paid much attention to the change in request quality in the database, but the overall quality of requests is about the same as it ever has been. The quantity has just decreased sharply. It seems as though we have much fewer members carrying on disproportionately more conversation. That does make sense, though, as the people who found their way here are probably the ones most active in /wst/ back in our /tg/ days.
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>>6535064
Yeah. It's a shame we ended up where we are right when the board was split, but all we can do is compensate as best as we can.
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>>6535094
The split really didn't help, but I don't think we have any particular reason to be concerned. We've got a decent number of new faces and and some of the old guys, as well as a few people who are coming back from a long absence. We seem to have a much better on-topic percentage now than we ever did on /tg/. My only real complaint is that we've fallen a quite a bit on finished story throughput. I don't mind having bunches of WiPs, but I'd like to see more stories being finished. In time, I'm sure things will stabilize. The board as a whole is starting to become aware of our presence, and the erotic literature thread about a month ago actually did us a lot of good. We managed to shuffle a bunch of scattered writers all into one place.

Really, if I have one thing to complain about, it's that we weren't given a chance to form a consensus before we were banned. Even if we would have still lost a lot of people with the move, it would have been nice to know that we actually lost them and not that they think we disappeared for good. Honestly, it surprises me how often we still get people just finding us now. I was always under the assumption that damn near all of us were /tg/+/d/ crossboarders. Apparently, I was wrong.
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>>6533437
Short, simply, hot, can't really complain or suggest improvements, it was nice
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>>6529096

Shut the fuck up. You never would have contributed anyway.

We had our fill of shitposting back on fucking /tg/.
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>come back to 4chan after a while
>no /wst/ on /tg/
>confused
>see message on 1d4chan

Oh god, why were we banished to /d/?
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>>6536559
Another latecomer? Join the crowd.

Long story short, shitposters shitposted, started dozens of fake threads, and the mods just started pruning both the troll threads and the real threads. Nobody had a choice in the matter, and here we are today. On teh one hand, we're much better at being on topic now and shitposting has stopped, but on the other hand discussion in general has slowed to a crawl (with the /d/-/aco/ split not helping).

So many people ask this question now that perhaps I may as well can the answer on pastebin for future reference.
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>>6536559
Good news, we weren't technically banned
Bad news, trolls got the mods so assmad they made a habit of wiping any thread remotely related to /wst/ to stop the trolling
I say wait a few months and see if we can pull a /qtg/
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I really should stop procrastinating and start writing on the weekends again
Ah well, I'll do it next week
[spoiler]Maybe[/spoiler]
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>>6536757
What is this week but last week's "next week"? The sooner you start writing, the faster you'll get back into the swing of things.
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>>6534378
Yes, and? I don't see the problem.
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>>6536568
I'd suggest to make it part of the OP.

No, this is only 62,17% joke.
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>>6537466
We really should just add an extra post after the OP for this kind of thing. "Yes, this is the /wst/ from /tg/. We were kicked off by trolls. No, you shouldn't try to make a thread over there again. Really. Yes, you may post here, stop asking. Yes, you may post WiPs here and ask for help. Yes, you can make requests, that's about 80% of the reason why we have threads at all." I kinda like the pile of WiPs and new authors we've been getting, but all of the people asking for permission to post things gets annoying. This is an anonymous board. What are we going to do to stop you? We obviously couldn't stop the trolls, how or why would we stop you from posting content?
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>>6537581
Agreed, although perhaps it could be said a little less bluntly. It's amazing how slowly word of our move has gotten around.
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>>6537609
The first thing I did when I realized our last thread was down was check the archive. I figured that everyone else would've done the same.
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>>6537622
Archive.moe's been down for months, for most people that's not an option anymore.
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>>6537796
I was referring to the smut archive on 1d4chan. It seems like the rational place to make announcements.
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>>6537832
Oh, right.

That reminds me, I should add the shit from this week (and technically last week) soon.
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How's it going /d/?
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>>6537952
Do an anatomy study fucking now. Jesus Christ.
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>>6537967
>I don't know how the anatomy is supposed to look.
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>>6537952
Okay, yes, that is bad, individual parts are okay but perspective and anatomy is all whack, from the ass down is mostly fine, left knee is a bit too narrow though, head is turned too far around and the neck is a bit too long, shoulder should be blocking her chin some, chest though, chest is all fucked up, too small, skin bunches up too much, and only way it could be that narrow from the waist is if she was missing half her ribs

But again, most of her parts are fine, there's potential.
I'd suggest looking at a few anatomy references to see how the body comes together, sketch out a few other poses and compare them to see if they all look correctly proportional and see what you need to work on
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>>6537952
I'm definitely not an artist, but this guy>>6538105
is pretty much exactly right. Draw almost exclusively off of references for a while or take a good, long look through some anatomy books. It looks like you're an ass man who drew everything up to the hips and then suddenly remembered that women have a top half. Also, that head is fucking terrifying. Hair looks nice, though.
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>>6533444
Thanks, now I'm thinking of removing the crowd entirely. Would you happen to have any examples where you think the sex was of appropriate length?

>>6535181
I have a few more if you want to read them.
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>>6537609
>Agreed, although perhaps it could be said a little less bluntly. It's amazing how slowly word of our move has gotten around.
>less
No.
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>>6538291
Can't really describe it myself, it's more of a general impression on my part.
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>>6538291
>I have a few more if you want to read them.
I wouldn't mind
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>>6540363
Trude, is that you?
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>>6540369
It is his work, but not him, alas.
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>>6524249
that sucketh
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>>6537952
>>6537973
Which one is the good one?
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>>6532581
Wrong board for SFW . U might be lost in NSFW land and not know it.
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>>6540369
Kim Possible
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>>6540477
Why does she have a dick?
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>>6540491
Because this is /d/, it's par for the course.
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>>6540461
No, I now have a new Suu for Safe For Work boards!
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The Original Request: Pregnant runaway princess cuddling up with her orc hubby post-coitus, and orc husbando can't help but give her belly rubs and light kisses up and down the curve of her stomach...

If the writer wants to throw in some cute pillow-talk before and during the belly-worship, I wouldn't mind in the slightest.

The Result: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ycWUl0O5uB9kEENIvCXTpjeTYSXra1bOG5hAXm0Fy-A/edit?usp=sharing

~ 800 words
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>>6541378
You'll have to repost that next thread, we're pretty much dead on weekdays.
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>>6541385
Will do! Looking forward to the weekend :3
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>can't post this on /tg/ because muh magical realm

I recently put a lot of thought into this and sort of included my magical realm into a larger campaign of D&D. The players are scouring through a broken empire, now scattered into kingdoms.

One nobleman from the collapsed kingdom, pissy about the fact that he was screwed out of everything, pours all his remaining forces into capturing the last Emperor, who happens to be a 19 year old kid, too young to be smart enough to manage a continent spanning empire.
Nobleman doesn't give a fuck, in good with a ton of mages, who help him build his own demi-plan, which he rules as a petty god. The young ex-emperor is dragged into it, beaten within an inch of his life, and has his body spliced into that of a demon of excess/lust, to the point that the only recognizable part of him is his head protruding between two demonic heads.
The demon has control of his body, he can only move from the neck up,
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>>6542436
So, now that his new form is established, the noble toys around with him for a bit, before just tossing him down into the lowest layer of the plane, where the demon controlling his body essentially forces him to do as many degrading things as possible, every moment of every day, while the demon itself is preserving his sense of pride so that he exists in a constant and eternal state of sexual torture/barely resisting corruption, the demon feeds on his despaire.
Every time the guy passes out, the demon absorbs his memories, and the next day, forces him into even more degrading acts, in every sort of fetish imaginable, ensuring that it never gets old to the guy.

I think this seems a little too hardcore though. I'd hope a good story overwrites my blatant fetishism, but hey, I may just save it for an ERP profile
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>>6542440
You'd probably be fine to just omit some details. You don't really need to go into what the demon is doing or what kind of demon it is. Without that, what you have really just sounds like a demon tormenting someone and debasing them.
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>>6542454
That's true at least. Thinking about things like that, I just tend to get detailed with how I'd like it to be. Oh well, I'll at least use a much more skimmed down version for the game proper, full description is getting an F-list!
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>>6542460
That's more like it. To be honest, almost all of my stories are just lewd versions of things that have happened in games. I also pull dialogue from games if I find it particularly amusing. Astoundingly, I generally manage to keep the flow in one direction. My players don't know that I'm a hopeless pervert. Mostly.
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