Fat futa cocks getting fucked right in their dickholes! Rail that urethra-pussy!
Bonus points for testicular impregnation and/ or penile birth.
>>6497473
>>6497476
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>>6497491
>>6497492
like this
holy shit
it's like docking but one step futher
i've found a new fetish
I was waiting for a futa urethral insertion thread, but this seems to be titled specifically for urethral fucking.
In which case I have nothing new to contribute.
>>6497477
>small sperm impregnating bigger sperm
what the fuck is this?
>>6497490
how are they going to get out? the urethra?
>>6499757
How else?
>>6499757
Well, I'm pretty sure that if she managed to get a horse dick stuck in there then she might be fine...
MIGHT.
>>6499754
First time on the board eh?
>>6500942
>>6501696
>Google, IQDB, and Saucenao
You are doing it wrong. Try Exhentai reverse search.
>>6502281
Already translated:
http://exhentai.org/s/d150f91ebc/483245-21
>>6502946
>>6502983
>>6501710
>.jpg
>>6503563
Much appreciated.
>>6505876
>>6502350
>http://exhentai.org/s/d150f91ebc/483245-21
>too pleb to get on exhentai
>cries instead of fapping
>>6507355
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/d150f91ebc/483245-21
there you go anon
>>6507324
I wish people would post the uncensored versions of my drawings.
>>6507669
Holy shit you made this? This is easily the best in the thread, do you have a hentai-foundry profile?
>>6507672
No, but these are my galleries:
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=314223
https://twitter.com/JADF_
My Twitter includes more stuff, but the Pixiv is the main showcase.
>>6508797
>>6508798
For anybody interested in this thread, a very prolific artist in this niche is Dare Desu Ka at futanari palace https://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?24069-DDK-s-scribblan-thread
>>6509625
That's JADF, already mentioned in this thread.
He doesn't really introductions in these threads.
>>6497476
Sauce?
>>6510106
I've never been a fan of nipple penetration, but this is pretty good.
>>6507676
You need to make more urethra insertion by horse images god damn it's what is lacking this day, or fuck male monster urethra insertion on futa.
No love for Futanari Planter?
http://exhentai.org/g/816329/4cf812a0fb/
Is there any of this with a futa penetrating a male? It always seems to be the reverse, or futa on futa.
Drew some new stuff involving an egg-laying tentacle and Millhiore Biscotti.
Imgur link for uncensored:
http://imgur.com/a/hjQTy
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=53218070
>>6516971
Daaam your work is really good, can you make the eggs hatch into tinny slimy worms that make her cum tons of cum covered tiny worms?
Are there stories about futanari dick fucking? I'd love to read a story with that fetish
Anymore dickfucking stories out there?
>>6518558
of course not, because it's actually a good fetish and not a generic of alternate porn.
>>6517115
This please!
>>6518558
http://pastebin.com/dsN2Mzyf
It's about Stocking getting fucked in the dick by her dog and getting her balls impregnated as a result. Same author, but I don't know if it has any associated images.
>>6518578
Despite me offering another example for the previous anon, this is painfully true. There's not nearly enough content for this fetish, which is weird. Dick size has gone up and up in /d/ material over the years, to the point where modestly sized/ realistic cocks are so uncommon that they border on niche. On top of that, dickfucking creates an entirely new hole to stretch and turn into a gaping nut-milker. Capitalizing on these elements should be obvious, and I'm surprised more people haven't shown an interest in the fetish, let alone produced content for it.
>>6518558
>>6518514
>>6519269
Same writer, similar story:
http://pastebin.com/wRiDU002
>>6520524
This one isn't actually dickfucking, but docking, which also a nice fetish, but a different one.
>>6520540
Docking is a more vague term and can mean urethral fucking, though in that case it's just foreskin fucking.
>>6520944
Great more things I wont get to experience because of asshole parents/doctors.
>>6521598
There are ways to restore your foreskin, bro. It'll never be quite the same, but I hear it's better than just being straight circumsized. You should look into it.
>>6521600
Honestly if forgen does not come through in the next 3-5 years I'm killing myself.
Are there any more stories?
One's that feature pregnancy via dick-fucking?
One's that feature HUMAN BIRTH rather than some strange animal birthing from her penis?
Not shitting on anyone's fetish here, just would like to read about a futa/shemale giving birth to an actual human being for once.
>>6525385
>I want to see a woman with a dick get fucked IN the dick and have her balls impregnated. I then want to see her have a child from her dick.
>I want a human child, though! Animal babies are weird.
Love you guys.
>>6525385
Are slimegirls humanoid enough, anon.
>>6525385
I don't have any stories, but here's a doujin link.
https://hitomi.la/galleries/25395.html
It doesn't have cockfucking, but this image in particular might do it for you.
I've always wondered why there are no real stories dedicated to dick-fucking...
I also wondered, why does anything having to do with dick-birthing, always have to be some sort of creature and not a person...
Can someone give me any links to a story with a kid being popped out of a dick instead of a worm or other type of none human thing?
Preferably futanari...
>>6526055
Suto's Laws by Demon Man has a bit about it, but it's not really what you're looking for. Not a real story so much as a description of a setting.
>>6525611
I guess they consumed his balls in order to procreate in the ballsack
>>6526247
>I guess they consumed his balls in order to procreate in the ballsack
Just some reverse fertilisation
>>6525385
>>6526055
Penis-birthing probably isn't as relatively popular because human babies are much larger, more strangely-shaped objects than other penises and whatnot. Add that to an already rare fetish and it's no wonder there isn't much material for it out there.
Just like with art, if you want to see a story that doesn't exist yet, you're welcome to commission one or create one yourself. I'm writing one right now for >>6516971 because I think it deserves it; should be finished in a couple of days.
>>6529078
Have a bigger resolution version.
Ok, so I had an idea for a drawing/fantasy where a funnel is shoved in the dickhole and some substance/liquid is poured into the cock/bladder/balls/whatever. Do any of you /d/udes have any ideas for what could be dumped into a cock? Anything at all, whatever twisted thing you can think of. Go nuts.
>>6532214
With what purpose, positive or negative ? Growth/reduction, castration, testicular pregnancy, what goal do you have in mind ?
>>6532236
Either pleasure, discomfort, growth, or punishment.
I'd like to keep it somewhat realistic, no magic stuff.
Do punishment
The one thing I've learned from sounding is that the entrance to the urethra just inside is the biggest road block to larger insertions. Maybe it's just my dick but there's like a tiny bend or kink that just refuses to stretch out as much as the rest; perhaps I've hit my limit at 9mm?
Though I can slide in a 6mm all the way to my bladder without any effort; learned that one by accident when I damn near pissed myself. The real joy is finding your prostate with the thing and applying a strong vibrator to the rod while you get at your prostate from the rectal walls as well.
I really recommend trying it.
Also, I could maybe write some dickfucking stuff, though I much prefer shemales to futa if that's a problem to anyone. No impregnation, 'cause that just ain't how biology works, but I'm down with cum inflating balls until they're the size of grapefruits.
I'm busy with nanowrimo and something that isn't extremely niche smut at the moment, but I might sneak something in. I'll keep this thread open as a reminder, or the next one if this 404s within the next few day(s). Feel free to drop any specific ideas you guys want.
For some reason a canine dick knotting a horsecock is kinda appealing. I've been on the internet too long.
>>6532214
Glitter
>>6532214
molten lead
>>6532239
various syrups / fluid honey / cool caramel sauce
then the mother of all deepthroats
>>6532214
Worms or parasites that invade the balls
>>6532214
Pump it up with air or helium.
Release massive dickfart.
Spawn new fetish.
>>6533342
It's somewhat of a turn-off if you're not into heavy femdom.
Like, at the end he's pretty much turned into a braindead breeding toy after drinking her milk.
>>6533353
>>6533699
Well, that's a whole bag of saline right there. Impressive.
>>6533674
Anon you're making me want for a translation even more
>>6533990
You know what to do then.
>>6533353
>>6533353
Someone did this.
>>6534393
Source?
>>6534492
https://hitomi.la/galleries/765779.html
>>6533353
Underrated post
>>6534478
No, IVE done this before, many times, at first by accident, then on purpose, and later during urethral catheter play.
>>6520128
>http://pastebin.com/wRiDU002
>>6519269
>http://pastebin.com/dsN2Mzyf
>>6518514
>http://pastebin.com/kfz7WSgm
for the love of GOD does anyone have more of these stories? ESPECIALLY ones with impregnated balls
>>6497477
>The genetic code within her own sperm is being hijacked by/merged with the other futa's sperm
magical
>>6537603
Sometimes you just want to fuck Science raw until it's full with your babies.
>>6525385
>>6526495
Why not testicular pregnancy?
>After cumming inside the urethra, semen travels until it enters the testicles
>There, I guess there's a bunch of eggs with antibodies that only accept sperm that dont have the antigens of the host. Fertilized egg latches onto something inside the testicles
>Would the fetus grow in a bubble full of Amniotic fluid? Or would sperm replace the amniotic fluid? Or would both be present?
>As the baby develops, so to do the testicles grow larger and dangle lower. The pregnant parent might have to carry their balls in a cart of some sort
>The baby's kicks give off a pleasurable sensation
>When the baby is ready to be born, the parent becomes extremely horny. Amniotic fluid is rapidly expelled along with pre-cum. Baby starts kicking, further stimulating the parent
>With enough stimulation, the parent climaxes, sending the baby out of the testicles, through all the tubes and what not, and finally out into the world.
>The afterbirth is delivered in the last few spurts of the parent's climax
mmmmm
>>6538868
pretty good
>>6538868
+1 fap.
>It's probably not all that great since I don't write this stuff often, but I did my best.
Don't worry, you did great!
>tfw my balls will never be filled with someone elses cum
I never wanted this feel
>>6538868
>http://pastebin.com/8KmJytRd
not one for the animal features personally, but how you handled the fetish part of this was awesome. Thank you for sharing.
>>6539097
The only animal features were dog ears and tail.
This is how I think a testicular pregnancy(Human child) should work for futanari/shemales.
Futanari/shemale that is capable of carrying children to term in their balls should have a thinker than average cock.
The urethra slit should be slightly puffy around the edges, like a pussy.
Her urethra should have a different set of muscles that can both contract and somewhat suck.
Her precum should flow out much quicker than a normal cock and the inner walls of her cock should be slightly ribbed.
When a cock enters into the piss slit, it should be pulled in by her cock muscles and massaged.
As the fucking goes on, her cock should become more ridged and when she comes, it should alternate between her cock squirting out her cum and sucking the others cum in.
Her sperm should actually help the other's sperm find the eggs or there should be one special sperm altogether that can become an egg, the other's sperm just has to find it.
The remaining sperm from the other should become nutrients for the babies. Any subsequent sperm from fucking during the pregnancy should result in the same fate for the other's sperm.
She should know she's pregnant because of morning sickness and a recurring case of blue balls for the next few weeks. She should also know because of spontaneous erections that don't go down for hours at a time.
As the months pass, her balls should swell significantly and her cock should start growing larger and thicker as well.
When the babies are 16-25 weeks old, they should start kicking within her sack. She should also start leaking precum at random times.
When the 9th month rolls around, she start feeling strong urethral contractions from day to day.
When the babies are due, her cock(now very thick and almost 2 feet in length) should go have a spontaneous orgasm, spraying out sperm everywhere. This replaces the "water break".
Her cock should go semi hard and somewhat slump over her gigantic balls.
Continued...
The birthing should feel like one continuous orgasm.
The babies should be pushed out with every contraction of her cock.
The first one should pop out with a bit of difficulty and their should be a shit load of sperm and amniotic fluids with an umbilical cord.
The second should almost fly out because of it's predecessor opening up the way.
The babies should be twins automatically.
The problem of course, with a species where you can identify the female because she has the larger penis, is birth.
It's common for the female or first born to die, due to the difficult process of giving birth through a penis.
I am of course, talking about Hyenas, because as it turns out, truth is stranger than fiction.
>>6541563
Pretty much exactly what I said. Weird hormone issues in the whole species, results in the females all ending up with a larger "penis" than the males. They are impregnated through this organ, and also give birth through it.
Nature is special.
>>6541606
So yes, basically this whole thread is about how hyena sex and reproduction actually works.
>>6541563
The cock would grew due to hormones and extra food intake.
The cock would have to grow in order for her to push out a 7-8 lb baby.
I'm want to commission a dick-preg story.
Any takers?
>>6541839
Can somebody explain how a futanari with pregnant balls would cope with having close to 11-16 pounds of weight hanging from her crotch in the 9th month?
Also, what about her actual testicles?
Not the sack but the organs? Would the babies kick them by accident or rest on them?
I imagine the shit would hurt... still hot as fuk to know that she's gonna pop kids out her dick.
>>6542326
I imagine ball bras of some sort would be very useful.
Kicking around may still be painful and cause a lot of cum leakage though.
How would umbilical cords work?
http://exhentai.org/s/d4b4647265/142023-38
Not sure if this is a real product or not.
>>6546123
No kidding, can anyone confirm?
>>6546138
http://www.amazon.co.jp/gp/product/B017NKKCQ6
>>6546099
>>6546102
Is there any reasonable way to order one? I made an amazon.jp account in an attempt to do so, then I was told that I can't order it to the US because I need to increase the quantity. I wouldn't mind paying for the thing twice over in shipping, but I don't exactly need a pallet of these.
>>6546654
>buy several
>perfect secret santa gift
Come on anon, make some people happy.
>>6546654
In before they are all too small for comfortable use because Japanese microdicks.
>>6547200
>implying the average /d/ browser isn't a microcock loser
You don't have to try and impress anyone here, friend, we're all in this together.
>>6547879
Not really trying to impress anyone, but the target audience was still probably intended to be under 18 cm dicks.
It can be a real problem if it's too tight or short to be comfortable.
Not that I have experience using onaholes though.
>>6522415
There are very few things I can fap to over and over again. This picture is one of them.
>>6547910
Then how about this?
does anyone practice stretching in real life?
>>6547950
No, because I appreciate the feeling of cum shooting out of my cock instead of just oozing out.
>>6547882
Is everything less than 18cm a microcock to you? Average is 16cm.
>>6517115
oh god please
>>6533279
What he said
>>6548761
>And why are we using metric?
All the civilized people do.
>>6548762
And if all the civilized people jumped off a cliff, would you do that, too?
>>6548802
>And if all the civilized people jumped off a cliff, would you do that, too?
Yeah, I wouldn't want to be left alone with all the uncivilized ones.
>>6497481
s-sauce pls
>>6549255
the dimensions are so tiny that I doubt you can stick an average size inside the urethra without breaking it
>>6549278
*Shrugs* People wanted to find it, I found it, they can do whatever. Perhaps it can make a small man very happy.
>>6549298
Yeah I just mean it's a shame it's so small, maybe more in-depth and larger ones can be made for the future
>>6549255
>http://otonajp.com/futanari-musume-double-hole/
You're my hero, anon. While I'm not a furry, I've heard good things about Bad Dragon's cum lube, so I'm going to order a bottle from them to really complete the effect of this product. I can't wait to try it out!
I'd post some fetish-relevant content as a thank you if I could, [spoiler]but I'm the OP and I've already dumped everything I have.[/spoiler]
>>6533353
Dude, I did that back when I was like, 8 years old. Along with a water balloon in the ass.
Over 30 now btw.
>>6549006
Artist is Mura.
>>6550619
This
This is kinda off topic, but while you guys are discussing perilous insertion of stuff into the body... How bad would it be to swallow a small balloon filled with water? (Small enough to not get stuck in your throat, big enough to stretch cause of water; imagine one of those mini balloons)
>>6550711
>This is kinda off topic
More like completely. Also no idea, I guess it's a unique way to die.
>>6550711
It is a horrible idea to completely insert anything into your body that wasn't made to be there.
>>6550711
If it doesn't burst it could obstruct your intestines. Trip to the ER and surgery, or painful death.
Do it anon
>>6532214
A thick, viscous, pink aphrodisiac that basically kicks your balls and prostate into overdrive.
Anyone injected with it feels a strong but pleasurable burning and the overwhelming need to cum. It ramps up the production of cum and precum and also makes the urethra, prostate and associated organs stretchier to handle the amount of cum as well as making them more receptive to insertion.
>>6555746
i want this sooooo bad
>>6538868
Holy fuck, I would love another chapter of this.
>>6557314
Thanks for your interest, and thanks to everyone else for the support. I'm glad some people found it worthy fap material.
Unfortunately, that story already exhausted most of the material I'm personally passionate about, and I don't think I'd be able to make a high-quality sequel that would be sufficiently different from what I've already written. Maybe another time.
>hear about sounding years ago
>try it with something thin a few weeks ago
>a DS stylus
>have a medical to enlist on wednesday
>"sir, we have found trace amount of blood in your urine, so I'm booking another medical"
>it's not enough to be seen with the eyes
I fucking hope it's just a UTI
Clean your tools kids, fucking alcohol rub or nothing.
Any one know how to clear this shit?
>>6561489
What actually happened is you probably just created some microcuts in the lining of your urethra, bro. It's super easy to damage. I'm pretty sure UTIs don't result in blood. Not really anything to clear, it'll heal on its own. My advice is use more lube, and toys that are smoother. A thin glowstick works well, but things that are made to go in your dick, like metal sounds or silicone plugs, are best.
>>6561537
I used a lot of lube but I guess it wasn't enough.
And no, i'm not doing this again, it just didn't feel good throughout. Not for me, fampai
>>6561568
Stylus isn't incredibly smooth plastic, it's still abrasive. The urethra is incredibly sensitive whereas our hands are generally weathered and calloused. That's probably why you didn't know that it scraped the insides.
The reason it didn't feel good is probably because you weren't using the right tool (super smooth metal) and it's your first time. It feels better once you acclimate to it, the few times I've actually done it. Though it's not for everybody.
Helps a lot if you're "in the mood" and not just looking to get off.
>>6532214
Nanobots. Sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic.
Anyone else here a fan of other improbable penetrations? Nipple penetration, cervical penetration and the like
>>6564025
Huge fan of cervical, but only when's it's done in a context without pain. Fantasy, basically.
>>6547921
doesn't do anything for me.
Anything where a trap gets his balls stuffed by a futa?
>>6564983
>Not a single one of them would do it
Bunch of hosers, them.
>>6565374
Pony
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>>6563687
Any news, anon?
>>6561537
for a long time before getting proper toys, I would use a sharpie pen that I smoothed over by sanding away any molding seams and flash, and then exposing it to a flame to slightly melt the surface to smooth out where I sanded, and any other micro-imperfections. It has served me well to say the least
I would really recommend actually getting a proper toy, but if you're more curious then willing to potentially waste money it can be a good diy toy to try it out once.
Just make sure the surface is immaculate. Anything short of a smooth surface does not feel good and will more than likely damage the delicate urethral tissue
>>6507676
>http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=314223
will you ever try extreme urethra gape?
>>6568095
I have all kinds of toys. After a while the really smooth rods don't do much for me.
I've got ribbed robs, chained plugs, balls, vibrators - quite a bit. The vibrator is great, get the tip right on my prostate and holy shit; I just lay there gasping and twitching and without touching anything I cum so hard I force the vibe out.
The others rely on just as much mental imagery as physical pleasure to get me off. I like using a webcam aimed at the bottom of my cock so I can see the big bulges running up and down my urethra, disappearing into my body, as I basically fuck my cock.
Something else that's nice is when I get really turned on I produce enough precum that I can use a thinner rod, like 6-7mm, without any lube. I like to dip it all the way to my prostate, stir it around, then lick it clean.
I'm one hell of a deviant.
Also, does JADF do any commission work, if anyone knows?
>>6569869
How do you actually reach your prostate?
Metal sounds can't do that, right?
>>6570022
Metal sounds can go all the way into your bladder if you want. I did that once by mistake, oops.
The prostate isn't too far into the body, at least for me - just two inches or so beyond the base of my dick and there it is, surrounding the urethra. A few pokes and the pre really gets flowing and my hips quake.
>>6570039
Oh yeah. Feeling it right now.
Can't seem to fin that sweet spot, but I sure feel it on the prostate.
Huh... I seem to have caused some kind of tear here. There is a bit of blood in the precum.
>>6570068
Even after all I've done I still sometimes get carried away and get a spot of blood. It's very easy to forget how delicate urethral tissues are.
What kind of sound are you using? Does it have a tapered tip, a ball, or kind of a blunt end? I've found even the larger tapered instruments can cause bleeding if you use them for prostate massages. One of the reasons I love my vibrating unit; nice flat end to really mash all the cum out of my prostate without much risk.
At any rate, you should call your session quits and give it two or three days to mend before trying again.
I've got a real fucking horror story about getting over zealous with sounding. Lost so much blood I passed out - I was literally pissing blood; managed to stay conscious long enough to piss out the rapidly clotting blob - and took a nice long break after that.
>>6570084
Yeah, stopped the poking, got off real nicely.
Got no idea where to get a blunt urethral vibe, though.
>>6570136
Look up a website called thechaingang.com, they've got all kinds of finished steel toys. Some of it can be a tad pricey, but the quality is good.
>>6570140
Do they ship to Europe?
>>6570142
Pretty sure they do, they've got notes on some products about extra shipping charges to Europe.
I think I want to try sounding again (last times were with things you don't want to sound with), since it's technically easier to prep and keep clean than anal, as you don't need an enema or to adjust your diet and all that jazz. Still, sounds can be pricey and I don't know where to start.
Plus, do you boil the sounds or use an antiseptic wipe? Absolutely sure you don't use anything alcohol based.
>>6571561
You can get a sounding kit for $50 that includes quite a few sizes. Name doesn't really matter, just make sure you get ones that have curved ends.
The most popular lube - surgilube - is also a bactericide. Just clean the sounds with water and soap before and after each use and you'll be fine. I've never had a UTI at all.
If you're in a pinch you could also use one of those ointments you apply to a wound to make it heal faster - they're a petroleum jelly base and packed with antibacterial ingredients. Downside is that stuff isn't very 'slick,' so there will likely be a bit of discomfort.
>>6547950
I do, i started with 7mm, this October i got 10mm, i got pics but they're not /d/ worthy
>>6548761
Because the rest of the planet does, only a tiny handful of countries doesn't
>>6561489
Welp you're not supposed to use that for sounding but a real sound or plug made especially for that
>>6573744
Name of doujin?
>>6574242
"Hime the Lewd Doll"
http://exhentai.org/g/499190/c8f20cfbb4/
It's not bad, but something about the guy's art is just really offputting. I can't get off to it.
>>6576468
When I see stuff like pocky insertions, all I can think of is that's a UTI waiting to happen.
>>6569869
>Also, does JADF do any commission work, if anyone knows?
https://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?27172
http://pastebin.com/Avydyism
There's one spot open at the moment. Contacting happens in private. (contact info in the list)
>>6578368
Dang that's expensive. Too rich for my blood, unfortunately.
Guess when you're one of the few artists that will do really niche stuff like dick fucking and causing someone's balls to swell and bloat because their dick is being repeatedly creampied, you can name your price.
Dang, now I want to write about some poor tied up futa being used as an onahole.
>>6578915
Out of curiosity, how much were you ready to pay?
Also I suppose you could call my dynamic prices "haggleable".
If it's stuff that I already like, you might get some discount, etc.
Anyone know some good places for more docking porn
Drew something new with Shinobu from the Monogatari series (as commissioned).
Posting just the links here because loli.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/40wvdsuzo2t6ftu/Shinobu%20jamming%20F%20comm.zip?dl=0
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=54033201
Dropbox link for downloading the uncensored, Pixiv for viewing the censored.
>>6580783
I've never liked trying to haggle/low ball artists because it just feels rude, but the most I could see myself paying for linework with greyscale shading is like $40-50 for something with a bit of detail.
The other bit is I'd rather use an 'original' character, but if I had to pick an existing design I think Tamamo would work.
I'd like to see a nice, thick tentacle forcing its way in her cock to deposit a number of urethra-stretching and ball-filling eggs and lubricant/semen.
>>6582593
I wouldn't mind giving a noticeably cheaper price if Tamamo was involved in a scenario like that.
Although I think it's better if I left this conservation to the private messaging (Pixiv, Twitter, whatever), don't wanna shill here too much and too obviously.
>>6582879
Hot damn
There's a couple of awkward word choices and sentences, but this is so far above what I normally expect out of a fic for a niche fetish it's unreal.
>>6582939
Mind pointing things out? I only proof read it once, so that might explain why.
>>6583068
>Her slavering cunt had expelled enough squirt
"Squirt" isn't the word I'd use there, but I'm hesitant to actually call it an improper usage.
>There was just one problem of the obstruction, but as the wolf had cum in her…
I think it'd work better like
>There was just one problem--the obstruction
And "cum" should be past-tense.
>Howling in delight the Vicki’s hips
"The" is superfluous here.
>“Just hurry,” Vicki said in a whimper, trying her best to present herself to the wolf.
Pretty sure that's supposed to be Karen talking.
>revealing... two tangerine-sized balls filled out her sack
There should be a "that" between "balls" and "filled".
>>6583360
Thanks anon, make some fixes. I hate releasing things with such amateurish mistakes since it just smacks of laziness, but I suppose I was impatient.
Here's a link with the adjustments. http://pastebin.com/z1nKSfqW
>>6582879
Absolutely wonderful work. I admire the descriptiveness and vibrancy of your words, it's something I need to work on for my own writing.
First part of this has some dick fucking.
http://exhentai.org/g/638516/9906e9ccd5/
>>6584118
Anon. We will never meet, let alone actually know each other. However, I want you to know that somewhere out there a fellow anon appreciates you.