Patriotika #1 Story Time

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>>95339807
America, fuck yeah!

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>>95339917

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>>95339931
Check these sweet dubs

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>>95339965

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>>95339931
>kyaaa
just like in my chinese funny pictures

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>>95339807
What is this? Is it just an excuse to show tits and ass? If it is then I'll read it.

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>>95340051

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>>95340056
You''re not entirely wrong. From what I understand the guys making this just got tired of all the shit that goes on at the big two with all the SJW shit and wanted to go back to a simpler time. Yeah it's tongue in cheek stuff, but comics aren't meant to be literature.

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>>95340113

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>>95340132
I wasn't really all that jazzed about this page. The dialog seems silly. But then again, a skin tight flag uniform isn't exactly the height of seriousness.

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>>95340164
Is this Starship Troopers

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>>95340164
THE END! That's all folks. Who knows if this comic will actually hit the stores or it will just be a digital download. Who knows if it will even make it. I hope they do make it. The art is nice to look at and the story didn't have any crazy feminist/gay/SJW bullshit in it. Just muscled up bitches in skin tight outfits hitting shit.

Kinda like how She-Hulk used to be.

One more kickstarter scam.

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>>95340113
>but comics aren't meant to be literature.
Kill urself my man.

>>95340113
Ted Cord and Jaime Reyes

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>>95339807
>DO YOU LIKE MUSCLED UP BITCHES!?

>>95339807
No one cares about this nazi garbage.
Fuck off.

>>95340299
Just keep believing that and you keep getting hack writers trying to write character defining story arcs with every comic and failing miserably every time. Comics, cape comics specifically, are meant for children. Do you think a child wants to read catcher in the rye in comic format?

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>>95340390

>>95340397
But children lack the disposable income to buy comics. Rather, comic books have their niche in manchildren.

>>95340204
Eh. It sorta feels like something you'd see in Deviantart.

>>95340430
Children get their parents to buy them stuff. Are you even trying?

>>95340445
That describes most of the big two's output nowadays.

>>95339977
I kind of want to see someone claim this is a male power fantasy.

>>95340390
Fuck off commie. Go back to eating your soyslop and jacking off to cuck porn.

This is drawn, written, structured and even fucking lettered like a porn comic. Why not just go look at porn instead?

>>95340453
Do children go into comic book stores? The Diamond distribution model makes it so that comic books are not accessible by simply going to a supermarket, but specialized stores. This is why trades are so prominent in present day. Those have relatively larger range of markets to appear in.

Assuming OP isn't just the creator shilling his work, good job - you funded a deviant art fetish comic that's sub-par.

>>95340516
They go into my LCS. I do agree with you there. Back when I was a kid they used to put comics on wire racks anywhere magazines were sold. Now you never see that.

>>95340518
Just glad I'm not funding a web comic. Yesh.

>>95340518
>fetish comic
Like Wonder Woman?

>>95340485
Oh, it's a male fantasy all right.

>>95340113
>that "action"
How embarrassing.

>>95340516
My LCS usually has a bunch of kids go there after school, some parents do still give their kids money to buy shit.

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>>95339807

didn't read anything, just came to say "Patriotika" is an absolutely awful name.

>>95340576
But it's pretty close though

>>95340390
>75% of her costume is covered in stars and stripes.
>Is named Patriotika, name is also covered in stars and stripes.
>Has big fat American tits.
>Goes to desert shitholes to fuck shit up.
>"Nazi garbage!"

Know what?
I'm going to buy this comic just to spite you.

>>95340476
Yeah but they have the special kind of amateurish dreck that makes it seem like they didn't try.
This feels like an amateur who really kinda tried but couldn't do better.

>>95340624
Be fair though, it's still just the first issue. There's only so much you can cram into 20 or so pages.

>>95340690
>I'm going to buy this comic just to spite you.

Stop buying comics to spite people, buy good comics.

>>95340822
>Stop buying comics to spite people, buy good comics.

I have enough disposable income that I can do both.

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>>95340397

>since it's for children, who cares if the writing is good!

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>>95339807

From one writer to another (or the "backer") the problem is that in this day and age this premise and character isn't interesting outside of obvious sex appeal. The art is great, the writing is decent, and that's about it.

There needs to be a hook outside of "look at this hot musclebound girl!" There's too many of these basic comics and they never really pan out because there's too much competition.

I think there's more promise in making it full on porn and pitching this to the muscle fetishists. Not those hyper muscle ones but those that like their She-Hulks and Power Girls. Large market and plenty are willing to pay for it.

Other than that it's so bland and overdone.

i like how the powerset is a rip off of gen 13 and a little firestorm. this comic isn't very good.

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>>95340870
>expecting capeshit to be works of literary genius

Eh, the art is good. I don't think I'll buy it though. It's just not the sort of thing I like to read.

this comic was dynamite level bland.

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>>95340939

>Good means literary genius! there is no in between!

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>>95339807
So this is the American version of Ultraman.

Better than I expected

>>95339807
This is what comics would be in a world where everyone was retarded.

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Decent first issue. It has potential

>>95339807

God that was terrible

So the general consensus is its bland, its awful or it has potential.

It still is the first issue though.

so how long before Tanya goes evil and becomes a vessel for an evil god

>>95341214
Potential just means it's bland and or awful but there's one thing that I like.
In this case, tiddies.

I prefer the one where the girl busts a chair over a dude's head and wins a device that turns her into a musclefu.

The writting defintitely needs some workshopping. But I'm on board.

Comics need flesh blood. It might be a bit shaky now, but who knows, I believe one day, Patriotika could save the world.

>>95340390
[SJW DETECTED]

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>>95341384
Same series this?
Kinda sad, I'd like the guy to do more than just porn.
Also I'd like him to do a lot more porn.

>>95341227
>male and female friends
>male and female evil gods at the end

Two issues?

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Here's some cosplay pics for you tiddy fans.

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>>95341934
What an awful costume.
Also did he hire her to do this?

>>95341639
Yeah, that one.

>>95341995
No idea.

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>>95342013
Good taste. Too bad it's stuck on a growth fetish site.

OP here. I really did just bring this to you for a little bit of different. Enjoy or hate it, I'm the one who paid for it.

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>>95341934
Be honest, you just used some of your kickstarter money to pay that woman to do this.

>>95342149
A cosplay photo shoot was legit one of the stretch goals.

>>95342144

Expect criticism on an anonymous image board but the reception is mostly "meh."

>>95340204
I think there must be something in between "crazy feminist/gay/SJW bullshit" and "completely substanceless cheesecake that might as well just be porn," OP who is definitely not shilling his comic.

>>95341589
I think it was just somebody who hates shit

>>95342809
I actually did just want to do something nice for once. I remember a time when /co/ got shit done. The original kickstarter release was in a PDF format that I had to go in and screen shot each page.

Not everyone on this website is an asshole.

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>>95340985
nope this is

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Sincere Thanks OP.
Sexy super soldiers vs mythological gods is my thing down pat.

Speaking of kickstarter comics I have been trying to find a copy of Prince-s Star Thief but no luck.

>>95340906
>The art is great
Absolutely. I will read this just for that.

>>95340513
It's really not drawn like a porn comic, yes there is cheesecake but it's not of the cheap back broke posed glossy fake vapid pornstar looking variety.

>>95339807
this has been on 8 muse for about a year already people that backed it just wanted a physical book.

>>95343350
>Static poses
>Awful muddy coloring
>This shit >>95340035

I'm not just talking about the cheesecake, even though it's a blatant fetish comic. Just because there aren't any bimbos doesn't mean the style (or lack thereof) isn't there.

>not porny enough to be porn
>not interesting enough to care about otherwise
It's aggressively mediocre, I guess.

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>>95342946
good for you dude, I enjoyed it.

I mean, not enough to buy it, care about it, or remember it long enough to find the second one, but I read the whole thing.

>>95339807
that was neat, Fan Service wasn't as explicit as I thought

>>95340204
It wasn't awful but it's kind of boring and Erin is a bit plain.

Like what can she offer than Powergirl already doesn't?

>>95339807
Apparently the giant chick from the beginning is getting her own comic eventually.

Can't lie, I'm hyped. There's a distinct lack of GTS cheesecake in comics.

Nothing special, but it was fun.

>>95343097
>Way Big's species is literally called To'kustar
It's the little things that made the show great.

>>95340390
This is bait.

>>95340513

Some people haven't ruined themselves with porn and can still enjoy being lightly tittilated while enjoying a pleasant action adventure.

>>95339931
>kyaaaa

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>>95342035
Yes, one of the stretch goals was she was going to make and wear the costume. These shitty selfie pics are the "photoshoot" promised of her? Fucking hell

It's okay.

Is it really that hard to write a fetishy cheesecake comic with a half-decent story?

>>95340653
Sounds Russian.

>>95345880
Yes, cheesecake is a sign of a lazy writer who goes for cheap appeal

>>95339807
Dialogue is a bit off. Art is pretty good, better than current Marvel. Ok concept and unexpected ending, 6/10.

>>95340390
Go back tumblr fag

>>95339807
You had me at muscles.

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For whatever reason, the ka suffix carries some edgy connotations.

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>>95339851
>urghhh thicker!

WHERE THE FUCK IS THE PORN

>>95340113
>comics aren't meant to be literature.

literally textbook anti-intellectualism

>>95339807
It was okay. The costume needs reworking.

>>95347908
Glen danzig? Like the singer Glen danzig?

>>95340204
And none of this faggoty diversity!

>>95340164
I'd like the costume better if the stripes on the torso were vertical instead of diagonal

>>95349124

The very same.

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>>95340506
>>95340690
>>95341589
>>95347671
There's no conceivable way...

>>95349947
That makes me think the comic will be hilariously bad.

>>95340164
>Puts on a stars and stripes
>"She's got to be on our side!"

What a gullible idiot.

>>95339807

I backed it for no other reason than I have a thing for patriotic-themed costumes.

Well, and female-shaped females.

Have they got another Kickstarter or somrthing else I can donate besides buying the comic? I don't really collect hard copies of comics

>>95350312
No idea.

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Why not just say Patriot

>>95351359
Because they probably wanted an over the top name.

>>95340939
If using the word "capeshit" required an auto-ban, this board would be a much better place.

I liked it.
Getting /co/mblr triggered over sexy heroines is just icing on the cake.

>>95352328
what kind of fag actually gets offended over the word capeshit

>>95352662
>le offended
More like annoyed by a shitty buzzword used by total retards like you and >>95340939
or cross-boarding shitposters.

>>95339851
dat thicc ass!

>>95339977
This seems like a fetish comic.

>>95352732
A bloo bloo bloo
People just like saying the word capeshit. Get the fuck over yourself and just refer to it as capes if you want

>>95353219
I don't care what retards like to do, dickhead. It's used solely by faggots and shitposters and therefore is cancer just like "kino" and any other idiotic buzzword your idiotic ilk loves. Fuck off.

>>95352328
lol what a pissbaby

Too bad the illustrator couldn't hire a decent writer for this. Also the costume is garbo.

>>95339977
using the same image of the background characters for the top 3 frames seems pretty lazy...

But the bottom half of the page makes up for it.

>>95353299
Case in point.

>>95339851
I'm surprised no one else is talking about this giant ass. When will it be raped?