Weekend /co/ creation thread

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Last time:

-New pics
-The Greek alphabet conspiracy
-The question of who is Kay-2's father continues
-The Blang Sibling Rivalry comic continues
-Pastebins of many things were posted
-Other things I didn't mention

There's also a /d/ thread up >>>/d/7582867 which could be relevant to us.

And the next /m/ CYOA thread could happen at any time now, so watching for it.

>>94597553
>The question of who is Kay-2's father continues

Well, there's only 1 way to find out who it is?

Who has the best butt?

>>94597519
Now I'm thinking... if /co/lette is essentially a frankenstein's monster of belove /co/ features, shouldn't she have a SHAZAM-like transformation? Adding loli /co/-lette to the table as well...

>>94597777
First off

>Quads

Second, She kinda did. She was originally a ginger girl that would transform to /co/lette by the gauntlets.

But just the idea of Captain Marvel like transformation is funny to me.

>spoiler
How?

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>>94597875
Shazam mechanic, anon.

Though I'm not sure why /coc/ hadn't gotten any mileage out of this variant of the concept as of yet.

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>>94597777
As already mentioned, she did used to have that sort of transformation, but it got phased out over time.

Kind of like how She-Hulk almost never returns to her human form I guess.

>>94597875
>She was originally a ginger girl that would transform to /co/lette by the gauntlets.

"Originally" is an overstatement. It's true that at one time she did have the transformation, but that came after the original pitch. It was a temporary whim, rather than part of the initial design.

>>94598309
Ah, my bad. I wasn't there. It seemed important taking a considerable amount of the wiki page image count.

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>>94598309
I can trace the red-haired secret identity all the way back to September of 2008, though it was probably earlier than that.

I think it was semi-regularly used up until 2010, then it appeared less and less.

The oldest pic of /co/lette I have I can only trace back to March of 2008, but I know I got it from plus4chan, so it was a re-post to there from the thread that originally made her in 2007. I'm pretty sure it was late 2007.

>>94598393
That gallery is just to show the origin of her powers, which is more-or-less the same in each version.

It just so happens that the first time her origin got drawn was during the time when the red-haired alter-ego was still in use.

>>94597646
How does Golden Girl feel about having sex with sexy older black chicks?

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So how much blunt force does it take to knock Stretch out?

>>94598166
d'aww

Reminds me of a fusion of Star Butterfly/Goo from Foster's

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>>94599646
There used to be pics of young /co/lette's head saying random things everywhere, kind of like Question Duck, but then at some point that just stopped.

>>94599414
More than an average person for sure. A slam like this wont knock her out but leave her a bit dizzy.

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>>94598595

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Is anybody interested in writing a hourly break down of Collette's average daily routines?

If she still keeping an civilian jobs, at what time of an average day does she perform super heroics? Does she sneak away when she encounter such things? Does she does it on a part time basis? Or is she a "weekend warrior"?

Is she compensated for her super hero works? Is she working full time civilian jobs or part time? How does she balance her civilian time and hero time? If she is compensated for super hero works, why not go full time?

Just imagining scenarios that can explain some details about her life.

>>94597646
Nice.

>>94598595
Is this a reference to that black superheroine project which collapsed in a smoking heap after four threads?

>>94600019
Interesting conundrum.

Whenever I think of /co/lette I tend to think of her as a full time hero in the same way a firefighter is.

With how the Friends of the Justice /co/mrades (FJCs) are set up, what I always pictured is that members do get some form of compensation when dispatched by the Justice /co/mrades (J/co/) organization and whatever hero work they do on the side is their own personal work.

I don't tend to think of it in terms of quotas because I like to think all of our heroes just do it because they want to. Unless of course we have some Booster Gold types somewhere who spend a lot of time with a brand name.

Maybe that's where the funds come from? I know the Justice Coalition gets its money from marketing the image of their members. The J/co/ might do something similar, but only if they get the go ahead beforehand. Or maybe Chaptor is the one who pays the FJCs members.

If we're talking about /co/lette's daily schedule, how about she wakes up at 11am, does hero patrol or what have you until around dinner time, then works a night shift as a security guard until around 3am?

Or is she a morning person who is up with the farmers at 4am?

Or is she more normal and up at the 6am - 9am range?

I can't really imagine her holding a desk job, and I can't imagine he as a librarian, so actually being a civil servant or security guard are my best suggestions.

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I had a hard time seeing how a secret identity would still be doable in modern times.

That could make for an interesting view point of older heroes who remember back in their day that you did hero work while also holding down a day job and keeping it all secret from almost everyone.

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Just remembered an idea I had the other day, for an amalgam mashup of Golden Girl and Briana/Breastquest, where a Fallout scenario causes Audrey to get cryogenically frozen and dethawed in the BQ world with her infamous figure.

>>94601680
How would supers adapt to the information age where everyone is always looking everywhere?

>>94598166
was that the whole ginger chick thing?

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>>94603778
It was an attempt at giving /co/lette a secret identity that didn't stick.

This was several years ago.

>>94602077
Curious how a 15 year old girl with no powers is gonna last more than a day in BQverse.

>>94604068
If it's a true Amalgam-style scenario, maybe she was irradiated before/during her freezing and gains Briana-level strength as a result.

>>94601680
>I had a hard time seeing how a secret identity would still be doable in modern times.

I like to imagine that the technology is all over the place. Where there's laser guns and flying cars, but Tats has a typewriter and there's no phones.

I just feel like, much like Westerns, a certain historical time-piece, or level of technology at a personal level, must be retained.

>>94604407
We know they have phones and internet and all that since this website exists in-universe with a board dedicated to superheroes.

Maybe it's just something to be ignored, or maybe the populace don't really want to know the secret identities of supers because it might put them at risk.

But it might still be an interesting line of thought to pursue: how would a super maintain a secret identity in a world with the same level of technology and surveillance as ours?

A psychic hero can just trick people with their "perception filter", a tech hero could have something that messes with camera, but what about the physically strong types?

Would there be a group of supers whose job it is to keep secret identities secret?

>>94599867
Could Stretch use the rubber band propeller concept to fly?

>>94603849
The ginger thing was silly, but I liked the idea that she was in school and overhearing with the boys say about her superhero persona.

Then getting grossed out once the topic changes to what they'd do to her awesome tits.

>>94600501
I wouldn't count them out so easily. I won't be surprised if that project somehow manages to bounce back when we all least suspect it...

>>94605991
Funny but I doubt it. If she needed to move quickly she would either elongate her legs or stretch/slither like a lizard to move about.

>>94606467
Vaguely related, but I've always liked to wonder what sort of real life and chat room conversations happen regarding various heroes/villains in universes like this. Especially what silly rumours they might spread about them.

Conrad and Colette are the ideal couple. If you disagree, you are wrong.

>>94607590
I can't help be see a relationship between them as incestuous.

I like the ship of Cookie and Kay-2 better.

>>94608177
I have thought for years that Colette and Conrad were made quite literally for each other. Even now that I know better I still ship them. They're perfect together.

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>>94600517
I thought it would be interesting if she transition to full time hero might be cause by something and it would be a story in itself.

>>94609679
Maybe her place of work gets destroyed during a super fight and she feels responsible?
Could be a reoccurring problem for her where her hero "work" ends up following her to her normal work.
She could take up heroing full time when she learns she's just a magnet for super activity.

Nice pic, that's probably only the second time those two have been drawn together.

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A hero waiting to be born.

>>94604804
I imagine there are legal ramifications for revealing the identities of sanctioned heroes. That's probably one of the things that have so firmly entrenched the Comrades and Coalition, since getting sanctioned by either one secures you certain legal protections.

>>94607465
Some heroes probably intentionally cultivate certain rumors. I think it's been mentioned before that Delta very deliberately maintains the illusion that they're unable to change their eye color. Then, because everyone "knows" Delta can't do it, it makes any picture with colored eyes suspected to be Delta get thrown out.

>>94611329
Or maybe just better legal representation.

I'd imagine the protections aren't exclusive to member heroes, there has to be some sort of "bush league" laws that protect up and coming heroes, though I'm not sure how any of that would work.

>>94610533
>Big body
>Tiny head
Gross.

>>94611454
First time hearing about that little detail.

So do we ever plan to go into where Delta came from?

>>94614734
Del's very rare, a natural born meta to otherwise mundane parents. True Shapeshifting also seems to be an extraordinarily rare power in the setting, so Del's the ultimate fluke, 20 natural 20s in a row, practically impossible to replicate.

>>94614734
>>94617030
If I remember, the narrative reason for this was our not wanting to deal with a setting full of shapeshifters, and having the ability to easily copy the ability would cheapen some of the other characters.

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Talking dinosaurs have been a thing in the setting for a long time, in-universe since the 1800s at least.

So how do they factor into the Bongs recent magical resurgence? They were already there before it happened.

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>>94617030
So Delta has had identity problems since birth since he/she/??? has never really had one really settled solid form?
Like they just came out that way.

Must've been an awkward childhood, but they seem well enough adjusted.

>>94617080
What do you mean copy the ability?

Delta can change form, but not copy other powers. I suppose super strength isn't outside of the power set that comes with shape shifting if Delta can manipulate their muscles in that sort of way, but it probably comes with some sort of cost, like burning a lot of calories.
I'd like to think that Delta is constantly eating something in most of their conversations with Alex.

I knew I had this pic somewhere, there's always a bigger fish.

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>>94617125
The repot racy is using this opportunity to further the plans of their alliance with the saucer people, the lemurian merpeople, the crisscrossed vampires, the chitinous hordes, and those guys that hand out free tissues on the street.

They'll use the magic to fuel their ring of artificial suns and plunge the world into a very bright dark age.

>>94617666
Sure thing, Satan.

Time to find out there's still going to be a thread when I wake up.

If a top hat is what gave Chaptor sophistication, as is a law of the universe that anyone who wears one is REQUIRED to have sophistication, what granted the other talking dinosaurs their intellect?

>>94617463
>What do you mean copy the ability?

The current pitch for Toxique is that her condition was an attempt to recreate Delta, instead creating a monster that breaks down organic matter into the an infectious black sludge. The "plague" contracted from her is basically just her living cells transforming other things into more of her. She's an organic Grey Goo scenario, Black Goo, if you will. She's able to loosely shape the sludge, but not really alter its composition.

>>94619098
>creating a monster

Actually, this should be transforming her into a monster, rather. I don't mean to suggest they crafted her from whole cloth or anything.

>>94619098
Does Delta leave samples of themself all over town?

>>94617125
random idea: a situation where Chaptor is asked why doesn't he have feathers like dinos are supposed to have.

He replies that he shaves regularly (making him canon bald).

>>94622603
Probably not actually. Del is theoretically able to "program" cells removed from their body to rapidly biodegrade, intentionally corrupting samples. The fact there exists a sample of Delta being used is significant.

>>94623405
Oh, we've addressed that before with male pattern baldness.

It's a touchy subject for him.

>>94623602
Sounds like a stasis field is in play then.

>>94623849
Or, it's from a time before Delta knew to do such things. It could even be why Delta does that.

>>94624173
True, but then why is the sample breaking down?

>>94624574
It may not be, just the experiments using it haven't been particularly successful.

>>94619098
You really should just jump in and start the comic.

No one is expecting renaissance tier artwork, and I'd honestly just be happy seeing you learn by doing rather than fretting over being good enough to even begin.

Don't even worry about things like schedules, just set some time to work on it and see how far you get before real obligations need to be tended to again.

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>>94623405

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>>94626805

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Based on Chaptor's size, he's actually a Utahraptor.

I guess is was never mentioned anywhere which type of dromaeosauridae he was.

Now I finally get the reference about him having an American cousin who was the sheriff of a western frontier town.

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Okay, here's an idea:

A team of RADICAL pizza-eating TMNT-esque mutant animal people who were active during the late 80s and 90s and were very popular with kids, but disappeared from the public eye in the early 2000s.

Turns out the mutagenic process which gave them powers also basically gave them super-cancer, and rather than cling to their fame they retreated from the public eye so that the kids who loved them, particularly the more disfigured metahuman kids, would have the team's golden heydey to look up to as proof that being freaky doesn't mean you gotta be bad.

What do we think? Too dark?

>>94628567
Alright, so how do you work that into a story?

Is someone like /co/nrad or Tatyana hired to go find out what happened to those guys by one of the kids who are now grown?
Do they debate telling them the truth when they inevitable find it after having to talk to several people who don't want to talk for various reasons?

>>94628929
>tatyana

Would be a bit too on the nose considering April O'neil's 80s portrayal. Unless that would be the joke.

>>94628929
They could always be Grey Ghost-esque figures, moven away from public life, and disillusioned with their public personas (One of the four could have passed away already).

By the end of their return story, another of the team passes away, but the remaining resolve to return and stay in the public eye, as JSA-like mentors and activists.

>>94629273
Yes, I think that would be the joke and also why Tats would be picked for the job.

>>94629565
I don't think they should return, there comes a point where you just have to let the next generation take over.

Plus, if they all have super cancer, I think maybe only one of them would still be alive by the time whoever gets hired to find them finds them, and it won't be pretty.

>>94629565
>>94629640
Now I'm thinking of them as an mutant animal covert unit, a sort of mix of GI Joe, Foxhound, and The Losers.
The mutation resulted in them aging rapidly

>>94628929
Pretty much what you described, yeah, someone stumbles across them. I was figuring maybe Marley and Lila when they get to their road tripping days, and Lila being the bleeding heart she is (and fan of monster heroes (Godzilla!)) offers to help get them better treatment, maybe through Carver medical. But I could see it working with any number of characters.
>>94629565
I definitely think at least one of them would have passed, yeah.

>>94629888
If they were a covert unit, how much of them is actually known to the kids who made up their fanbase?

>>94629894
Marley and Lila go on a road trip? For summer break or after they've graduated?
I think they're both still in their first years of college.

>>94630026
The girls won't be in Los Palos forever. Minor spoilers for act 2, but Marley's eventually gonna test her chops at the Justice Coalition tryouts in Sundial City. When that happens, they'll be getting out a lot more, and have a chance to meet a lot more of the /co/verse!

>>94630179
Neat.

So they'll be Scooby Doo-ing it up on the way there?

>>94630026
I'm thinking they start off secret, but make a name for themselves Fantastic Four style to avoid becoming freaks in the public eye.

Would they all be the same species, or would each be a different types if animals?

Also, would it be better to have any/all of them as siblings/family, or four different persons?
There's strengths to both scenarios.

>>94630793
Well that depends if their origins are from a freak accident or a military project.

A freak accident has better grounds for them being related or knowing each other, a military project means they'd have different backgrounds. (Operation Infinite Walrus anyone?)

I think they'd be different species and I'm more in favor of it being one of those situations where cosmic radiation or a truck full of chemicals tips over instead of a planned military project since we do have Operation Pillow Fight, even if we never talk about that anymore.

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>>94630372
Definitely gonna be some Scooby Doos, maybe even some Scooby Don'ts. Gotta get out and explore the world, y'know? Maybe she's not the world's greatest detective, but she might be the shortest...

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>>94631103
I very much so doubt that Marley is shorter than the Great Mouse Detective.

>>94631373
You're certainly right on that count. There's probably some manner of fairy detective too. It's tough out there for a Marley, can't even make that claim to fame.

>>94631612
The fae are almost all chronically sneaky, so I'd imagine one who spends all their time unraveling carefully woven schemes is met with some very poor cultural reception.

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>>94632481
Sounds like some Inch High, Private Eye shenanigans there. Snitches probably don't get stitches in the Otherworld, they probably get shanghai'd in pocket dimensions or something...

>>94632937
Makes me think of if someone sent a tiny fae-sized robot into Otherworld and how the fae react to such a thing.

I don't know why, probably because Inch High brings up memories of Inspector Gadget.

Too soon to be losing the thread, it's still Sunday.

What were school uniforms like in the 50s?

>>94603849
>dat pic
I fucking hated drawing that nose.

Needs more dudes. Did anything every come of Braun or what was the male stripper one../co/le?

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>>94636900
Like this, according to some Googling.

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>>94636900
Like church going clothes.

>>94636906
Nothing has been done with /co/le in a while, which tends to happen if no one is drawing a character regularly.

>>94637217
>button down front
More than perfect

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>>94637223
Did we ever get a clear idea of how we wanted gods and goddesses to work in the setting?

Since /co/le is the chosen champion of a goddess who only really chose him to sexually harass him, as gods and goddesses are historically known to do, and his only real respite from her is to be on a "quest" at all times which is his modeling career or whatever it is he now does.

I don't know if this thread will even make it to tomorrow.

Anyone have any ideas for other stuff that should be on the wiki, but still isn't?

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>>94637223
>no one is drawing a character regularly.

>>94640738
Alright. Let's see if we can develop him some more.

So what's the deal with the goddesses harassing him? What was he doing when he first became the target of her desires and what kind of weird crap does she try to embroil him in when he's not abusing loopholes to not deal with her goddess problems?

He's a stuntman, so what's his daily schedule?

Do gods watch movies? Could explain how she became aware of him.

What are his "amazing powers"? Those could also be how he became the favored play thing of the goddess, and she more than likely had the special outfit he has to wear to control them made.

All answers welcome.

So let's say this goddess is one of those forgotten deities, like a goddess of shadow puppetry or something.
One day, on set, Mr. Cole is between takes and preparing for his next big action scene he has to stunt for, he's got it made, he can seemingly survive anything, so falls and rolls are nothing to him. He's joking with some cast or crew to kill time and this somehow invokes this goddess, or she uses a loophole to claim he invoked her to begin meddling with his life.

Is that a start?

>>94638969
>Did we ever get a clear idea of how we wanted gods and goddesses to work in the setting?

There are two practical approaches. Either it's sufficiently powerful beings ascribed the position of gods, or it's people thinking there are gods causing gods to be created from basically psychic expectations. Considering Whisper is meant to be a unique facet of the setting, I think we'd probably be doing more of the former, since the latter steps on Whisper's metaphorical toes.

>>94641148
Hmm, seeing how we do have a lot to pull from, might I set forth the magical option?

Beings MADE of 100% magic, but also get more power when they are worshiped.
How they came to be could be any number of reasons, but making them independent entities from something like the fae, who are only mostly magic, or Whisper, who is a self-perpetuating idea, seems to be the route we're going.

Which makes them very similar to demons in the setting, which I think is good since the only real difference between a demon and an angel should be the "grooming", if you get the reference.

So the magic of the world goes into decline, the gods can't really do much of anything since they don't have anything to work with, the magic is slowly coming back, bit by bit, either because of the portal in the bongs inverting or the fae working the narrative, but that gives those big magical god beings the crack they need to begin looking in again.

There's also that volcano goddess Skathi fights, I think a god tied to a physical entity would have an easier time in a magically declining world since the existence of the volcano doesn't go away, giving her an anchor.

Well let's see how far we go into this week.

>>94642203
Here's hoping that we make it to the end of the week.

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>>94641324
The way I had it when I was first working out the /co/verse magic system way back when is pretty much as you said. Magic works differently given the reality (which conveniently makes it possible for any given writer to tweak things to their liking for their story), but on our heroes' earth magic is essentially the essence of thoughts and emotions and forgotten memories - dreamstuff, as the fae call it. Gods are, for the most part, gestalt entities that arise naturally in the fabric of the Earth's collective dreaming (which the fae call the Grand Narrative). Thus, worship is important to them, because if they're forgotten they're in trouble.

Skathi's reality has a different magic system, so she's not subject to this problem... which is good, since it would have made escaping her reality an almost certain death sentence.

I am kind of working on the notion that an angel might be a different thing, but that only really applies to Halo so far.

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Only Briana is strong enough to save this thread.

>>94629273
>>94629640
I think it could be better from a story standpoint if she "falls into" this story.

Like her motorcycle breaks down, so she goes into a local store to call for a lift, when she comes back it's fixed by the not-TMNT

>>94643701
Apparently not.

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>>94644639
Don't be doubting.

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From the drawthread.

>>94642948
I thought Halo was a human with some sort of divine power or powers that lined up with what is thought of to be divine.

>>94643761
But if they have super cancer or whatever then how are they still mobile enough to be fixing bikes?

>>94640738
So what kind of personality should he have?

Is he just a normal good looking guy, or was he selfish, or did he have any personality shifts after he was granted magic clothes that let him control his powers at will?

>>94631043
Had an idea for a gal who's an Albatross Sniper.

>>94648772
Wings growing out of her back or operating the sniper with her feet?

>>94648772
I think if they're TMNT sendups they should all be male. It's more in the spirit of the thing, and it wouldn't really be tasteful for the cancer allegory to get fetishized.

>>94650712
So what are some suitably RADICAL animals or do they make the animals they are RADICAL just by being them?

>>94645611
Wondrous!

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>>94644639
>>94645468
Some extra muscle may be needed.

>>94653922
You should try bringing up something that could spark discussion if you want to bump the thread.

There's not much than can be said in response to just an image re-post.

>>94651500
Well, the TMNT/Biker Mice From Mars/Battletoads method takes inherently unimpressive animals and makes them XTREME. Then there's the other school of thought, the Street Sharks/Dinomites or whatever they were called, that takes hardcore animals and tries to make them more hardcore.

>>94648772
Another idea;
MANGOOSE
He's a Mongoose man, but people assume the literal instead.

>>94655368
All that's really coming to mind now are a group of boar men.

Or, if you really want to play up the cancer angle, Tasmanian devil men.

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>>94646559
>I thought Halo was a human with some sort of divine power or powers that lined up with what is thought of to be divine.
Well, yeah, Halo's origins are deliberately supposed to be kind of questionable and unclear in-universe, but even given that Halo may not be a real angel, working on the character still lead to considering what a real angel MIGHT be.

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>>94655353
Well, I've had a couple of GG dream strip scripts that I've been sitting on for ages and ages (as in, one predates the A-Z page) for different reasons. One because the gag (Audrey dreams her chest is so large she's able to use it to trap some escaping crooks in a dead-end alley; all we'd see of her in the dream is a giant wall of yellow blocking the alleyway) strays into kind of a grey area between here and /aco/, and I wasn't certain it would be acceptable to pitch. It does stick to the idea of Audrey's dreams reflecting her anxieties about her chest while presenting them as useful in exaggerated ways, though. Making melons into melonade, as it were.

I've sat on the other strip because the punchline is it's actually Billy's dream and I wanted there to be at least two dream strips first so there was a pattern to subvert.

>>94656559
Depends if there's one all mighty god who has minions, or if when a god/goddess reaches a certain level of power they can create such things.

>>94656859
You could have her so that she herself also becomes HUGE in the dream, not just her boobs, that way it stays proportional.

>>94655766
Only if he fights a snake themed villain.

>>94657596
>You could have her so that she herself also becomes HUGE in the dream, not just her boobs, that way it stays proportional.
True, but I don't think she'd view that as a nightmare. As I have it, the punchline is that she wakes up, realizes her boobs aren't any bigger than usual, flops back onto her bed in relief, and then goes all bug-eyed in worry/panic when all the motion causes one of the buttons on her pajama top to go flying.

>>94658224
She's skinny as a rail otherwise, so it could b that it's only her boobs that get stuck in the dream.

>>94658309
It's not that they get stuck; in the dream, she's deliberately using them to trap escaping crooks. It's the sheer impossible size of them that causes her to jolt awake.

>>94658224
Sounds good. Let's get it drawn.

>>94658578
All right, here's the script, then.

>PANEL 1: A pair of crooks flee through the streets.
>CROOK 1: She's gaining on us!
>CROOK 2: We gotta hide!

>PANEL 2: The two duck into an alley.
>CROOK 1: This way!

>PANEL 3: The crooks run smack into a dead end. One turns around in fear as a huge shadow looms over them.
>CROOK 1: It's a dead end!
>CROOK 2: Oh no...

>PANEL 4: The crooks' POV. The entrance to the alley is now blocked off by Golden Girl's chest, which is so ludicrously massive that all that can be seen is a wall of yellow material with her logo.
>CROOK: IT'S GOLDEN GIRL!

>PANEL 5: Audrey jolts awake in bed, looking down at her no-bigger-than-normal chest in alarm.
>AUDREY: GAAH!

>PANEL 6: Audrey catches her breath as her mind processes that she DOESN'T have house-sized breasts.
>AUDREY: Huff... Still the same...?

>PANEL 7: Audrey flops back on her pillow in relief.
>AUDREY: Whew...just a dream! They're not getting bigger...

>PANEL 8: Audrey's eyes widen in shock as all the motion causes a button to pop off her pajama top.
>SFX: PING!

>>94658472
>>94658578
>>94658691
Take it to /aco/, kids. There's no passing this off as not a fetish comic.

>>94659426
I fucking said it was in a grey area in the first place.

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>>94659426
>muh /aco/

This type of posting got old months ago.

>>94659454
>>94659478
You should just ignore him.

We all know that /aco/ is, unfortunately, incapable of discussing GG with a narrative. All they ever do is apply random fetishes without any thought into how to form a joke, punchline, or anything that resembles structure.

>>94658691
I think that works, it's funny enough to carry the huge boobs aspect of the build up to the reveal.

Can't say I can see what that says about her psychology since she seems to be more and more thinking of herself as mostly being her growing assets that no one seems capable of noticing.

>>94659662
>Can't say I can see what that says about her psychology since she seems to be more and more thinking of herself as mostly being her growing assets that no one seems capable of noticing.
As I see it, even though no one can see her chest, Audrey's still a bit self-conscious about it. Any girl in her situation would be. In particular, she's worried that it might negatively impact her crimefighting ability if they keep getting bigger. (We know they don't, but from her perspective it'd be a reasonable concern.)

The dream scenarios, in which her bust proves beneficial (intercepting missiles with her bras, trapping the crooks with the sheer size of her chest), are her subconscious trying to assuage those worries, trying to tell her, "So what if they keep getting bigger? We're not going to let something like that stop us!" It's the plucky determination at the core of her character shining through.

>>94660658
OK.

So I was updating the GG script ideas pastebin and noticed we still don't have a solid introduction for Jade Empress.
Should we put some thought into that?

>>94661158
Could be a Rita Repulsa scenario.

>>94662988
Would it be one of those types of stripes that has pretty much nothing but narration going over how she came to be?

>>94663141
Well yea, this is the Golden Age after all. And the sentences would be really short and half of them would end in exclamation points.

>>94663152
Really? I'd think all of the narration boxes would be super wordy and descriptive.

Or at least that's what I've noticed with most of the golden age comics I've read, which admittedly is not that many.

>>94663706
Guess it depends on the comics. For some of the non-cape pulp stuff like the crime comics it was probably more verbose.

>>94663810
So what level of word boxes skirts the line of acceptability?

Would having a strip just be an info dump be wasted effort? How do we introduce Jade Empress to GG through SQ explaining her archenemy?

>>94663977
I mean it's a golden age villain. It's not like she's gonna be all that complicated. Break down the narration into reasonably sized chunks, then give each chunk a panel. Ancient Han dynastery era witch/magic woman is defeated by the emperor and sealed away. Fast-forward and an archeological expedition accidentally frees her, but she's a horrible old undead creature by now. Vowing revenge and the fulfillment of her desire to rule Asia and beyond, she dons the mask of jade and proceeds to be evil. If you want to go even more ethnic you can make her a Jiang Shi or give her some qualities.

>>94664180
Not what I was getting at, I just mean what is the situation that calls for this information to be delivered onto Silver Queen's young ward?

Was their a jewelry heist and the only objects stolen were made of jade?
That would lead into SQ suspecting her old nemesis issuing her a warning and then she'd have to explain who Jade Empress is to GG.

It could be in the car/bike ride to the next location SQ thinks JE would hit, and something SQ says along the way would play a role in GG figuring out how to win the day in the end.

>>94664250
Either of those things sounds fine.

>>94664268
It's more of a single continuous thought.

The question become figuring out the joke/punchline/word play that factors into "the day is saved".

I'm not going to put any more thought into it tonight though. We'll see if the thread is still up tomorrow if anyone has any ideas.

>>94664250
>>94664346
Possible thought:

>Jade Empress stages a robbery to lure SQ and GG into a trap
>they're captured and tied up by JE's latest mystical acquisition for draining SQ's magic bracelets
>the necessary configuration for the ritual means that luckily enough, GG is able to knock over the mystical object or otherwise disrupt things with her chest, allowing them to break free

>>94667495
This artist was so much better before he started doing furry porn.

>>94668221
/coc/ don't pay the bills.

>>94668221
Did his art get worse, or is it that you just don't like furry shit?

>>94670237
Or do much of anything apparently.

>>94670237
I really need to dust off my wacom and get in on this furry art racket, those guys just have money to burn.

>>94665954
How is GG able to turn or wiggle enough to do that?

Is the way in which they are tied up/restrained such that she can swing (think suspended upside-down)?

>>94670258
Art is now noticeably worse. His proportions are fucked, compare this >>94645611 to this >>94667495

I mean I guess I can't shit on him too much cause money's money but it's a shame to see a decent artist's style degrade.

>>94670476
Comic book magic

>>94668221
which artist?

>>94672540
http://laureldog.tumblr.com/

>>94673220
uh. I don't mind furry but all I see there is fat gay porn.

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>>94674006
I post more sketches n stuff on my twitter if you want to make fun of me there directly https://twitter.com/Laurel_dog/

I even doodled one of my fat titty girls there recently
please like me

>>94646559
>>94643761
Or they steal her bike and we get a recreation of the scene from Big Trouble in Little China, where Burton is trying to explain the situation to the insurance company.
>Wombats came out of the sewer and stole my bike! No, not alligators, that's an urban legend.

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>>94674142
>please like me

I always did Jeb.

>>94674260
I wish we lived in the Jeb!-verse...

>>94674407
Make ¡Jeb! the President of the /co/verse. That's a perfect setup for shenanigans.

>>94674488
I'd rather not include any real people in the /co/verse setting unless they were from the "real life people who look like supers" thing since otherwise it's an open invitation to fuck up the whole setting with assholes from other boards coming in for the sole purpose to shit up the threads.

Like what happened last time and the time before that and the time before that.

>>94604804
Well, they could probably jump rather high or have some of their tech buddies help them find unobtrusive spots to hide things or change. Also, it seems speedsters answer this by just vibrating fast enough to blur themselves. That all said, maybe the cover up aspect is a function of SHIELD like agencies.

>>94674592
I was kidding you big goober.

>>94674596
With how advanced cameras are these days, I think they'd be able to record with enough frames per second to capture a speedster trying that trick.

Yeah, a SHIELD-like agency would probably be the easiest way to have supers maintain secret identities in a 2017 setting, but then that organization would know and them knowing makes them a target for cyber attacks.

I get the feeling we talked about something similar in the /co/verse setting a while ago, like that's how Harpoonist's secret identity and the alter egos of a bunch of other heroes got exposed during the 90s.

>>94670476
Possibly?

I had been awake for about 15 minutes when I posted that, so it may need more than the usual amount of work to make sense.

>>94675167
So JE has SQ and GG tied up, upside-down, in a room with one of those magic symbol things on the floor surrounded by pillars or whatever.

SQ is over the symbol, GG isn't because she has no magic. GG begins swinging and is just barely able to have the reach needed to knock over one of the pillars, which ruins the whole ritual and gives SQ the opening she needs to break free and do heroics.

>>94675555
Yeah, that works! Maybe the pillars have some sort of sharp ornamentation on them, and GG manages to not only disrupt the ritual, but knocks the pillar towards SQ in such a way that the ornamentation hits her bonds and weakens them enough for her to break free.

>>94676452
Or the chain that was suspending her was strung through all of the pillars as part of the ritual and them being knocked over caused her to swing to some other air space not above the magic circle on the ground and also loosen her chains.

>>94677448
Ah, a chain reaction. Even better.

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What's a good name for this hoe and her demon?

>>94677611
Follicruel.

>>94677611
Debbie and Downs.

>>94658691
>>94656859
It occurs to me that I might as well post the other script while we're at it.

>PANEL 1: Silver Queen and Golden Girl confront a mad scientist wielding a shrink ray. (Maybe some shrunken buildings/people around to show what he's done.)
>SILVER QUEEN: It's over, Dr. Dwindle! Your rampage of reduction ends now!
>DR. DWINDLE: Never!

>PANEL 2: Dwindle fires his fiendish device at our heroes!
>DWINDLE: All the world will shrink before my genius!

>PANEL 3: Golden Girl bravely leaps into the path of the beam, protecting Silver Queen but taking the hit directly in the chest.
>GOLDEN GIRL (1): Look out, Silver Queen!
>GG (2): GAAH!
>SQ: GOLDEN GIRL!

>PANEL 4: Silver Queen helps an evidently unharmed Golden Girl to her feet. GG is bent over, preventing a clear look at her body.
>SQ: Golden Girl, are you all right? The ray didn't affect you!
>GG: I'm...okay?

>PANEL 5: Golden Girl straightens up and realizes, to her elation, that her chest is now completely flat!
>GG: In fact, I'm better than okay! Dwindle's shrink ray busted my bust!

>PANEL 6: Back in fighting shape, Golden Girl easily and heroically punches out Dr. Dwindle.
>GG: Thanks for helping me get something off my chest, Doc! Maybe they'll give you a REDUCED sentence!

>PANEL 7: Rocker Billy sits bolt upright in bed, screaming in horror.

So yeah, this is the one I wrote before even the A-Z page. We could easily replace Dr. Dwindle with Dr. Baron von Verrückt if need be.

>>94679825
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0NNfJs2YIfU

It's pretty funny.

Dr. Dwindle could be a villain exclusive to Billy's dreams until someone invents a machine that makes dreams real and Billy goes full terminator on the nightmares that emerged from his head before they can unleash their horrors upon GG- I mean the world.

>>94679932
>Billy teams up with GG to defeat Dr. Dwindle and his other chest-threatening nightmares brought to life
>GG thinks it's for the good of all (after all, he's not a wanton-destruction type of supervillain)
>Billy does his best to avoid answering any questions she has so she won't find out what his nightmares are REALLY about

>>94681418
Dr. Baron von Verrückt invents the machine that brings dreams to life (like in that one Sonic cartoon now that I think about it).
He gathers up all of Platinum City's notorious villains so he can pull the nightmares from their twisted minds.

And that's the set up before what you said kicks in.

>>94681573
Perfect. Makes for a nice twist on the trope of a villain teaming up with the hero to oppose the other villains; instead of the reason being that he has standards and they're crossing a line even he deems unacceptable (which is what Audrey thinks is the case), Billy just really wants to protect GG's chest from being flattened.

>>94681738
So those are the pieces, how's the presentation?

Do we begin with GG and SQ fighting a slew of new villains, almost being overwhelmed, before Billy jumps in and uses his voice to gain some control over the hoard before revealing the situation?

>>94682059
Yeah, I like the idea of an in medias res opening here.

>>94682140
The trend is to start with action, then provide exposition once there's some investment in the situation.

It's a pretty old tactic, but it'll work well given the time era we're working with.

So, which other villains would get their brains picked aside from Billy?