/hyw/ - How's Your Webcomic? #389

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>>94133684
Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
calligraphr.com

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ (surprisingly not a typo)

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>DISCORD CHAT going on:
https://discord.gg/rXMbdqP

>Wise words from John Cleese:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pb5oIIPO62g

>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>Guide to promoting your comic:
http://miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/

>Comics for makin' comics!
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=how+to+draw+comics

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>>94133684
Remember you can participate on our weekly challenge!

>Theme: Dracula tits
>Genre (options):
>heist
>college
>family sitcom
>Deadline: 07/27

Feel free to use your creativity to shape in any way the theme and genres.

Good luck to everyone!

>>94133414
That's not how you signal you can't talk, silly! he's gonna think it's a threat.
>>94133161
call it Indie Visual or .. SteamMates

>>94133733
instead of enforcing tripfaggery, why not just have each person name their comic that they enter with and refer to that?

>>94133951
>Poor Merchant thinks it's a threat and gets nervous
>Pike realizes she fucked up and tries to calm him down

Oh no it would be even more cute

>>94133956
and then if someone else uploads an edited version, how would you prove it wasnt you, just trying to sabotage?

>>94133956
Nothing wrong with using trips for stuff like this because of reasons like what >>94134019 said

>>94133956
you just need to use a name for the three posts you will use to post your comic pages, it doesn't mean all the time.

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comic from last thread.

Now, i fix the typos and stuff.

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>>94133956
>>94134019
>>94134039
I'm sorry if the name thing has made some misconceptions! you don't NEED a name to enter, just a way for us to know who's comic is from who in the voting.
Some anon told me before to remove it and I forgot while making this poster but I'll change it for the next one!
Again sorry and don't let this prevent you from joining the challenge!

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Still going with inking. 2 pages to go before lettering, toning and PUBLISHING

>>94134019
>>94134039
that's a risk some people could have the option to take. we have archives any way. there's no real point to exclude people, it's just for fun. if you want to, that's fine.

>>94134121
oh, good

>>94134172
Hey wait, howcome it's not the fixed version?

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>>94134172
FUCK WRONG PAGE.

>>94134191
I fixed the cat's eyes. I didn't export the page tho. I'm a french retard

>>94134178
We could accept anonymous if people dont want to pick a one-time alias I guess

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>>94134261

>>94134217
Vraiment? Didn't realize you were writing this from experience.

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>>94134286

>>94134261
is that intented to be a double page? Cause seeing the back of the head of someone isn't really interresting... :/

I'd do it like pic related.

>>94134297
Yes, I'm a french retarded anon. I'm proud of it!

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>>94134385
Anyone know a good way to set up a good comic tumblr? An anon in the last thread showed me a good way to start, but it's lookin a bit generic.

Anything I could do to make this have some zazz?
https://frankiementalcomics.tumblr.com/

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>>94134436
I'm fucking retarded tonight.

>>94134311
>>94134286
>>94134261
Pic related.

>>94134457
didnt mean to quote that random deleted post, whoops.

>>94134436
>is that intented to be a double page? Cause seeing the back of the head of someone isn't really interresting... :/
yeah, i thought it would be needless to do another front shot considering i've already done a few.
learning is part of the plan so thanks

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Got this page finished today, still fleshing the characters some more. I really should build a stock of pages, but as for now simply meeting the deadline is enough work.

Also, I've uploaded all the pages in spanish, if someone is interested.

Next month I'll try my best to make an extra page each week.

>>94135125
that should be put IN an extra egg, but if Guadalupe is meant to be less than fluent, that is in-character.

>>94135125
That black haired cat girl is hella cute, man.

>>94135195
I didn't want her speech to be perfect, but if any other character has some grammatical error, then is my my mistake.

>>94135314
post it or you are no man

>>94135443
[reposting the post because i was an idiot and had a thread name in my name don't judge me].

So I have a webcomic that pretty much boils down to a fan-comic to an animated movie, taking place in the same world it was made.

I really ought to be working on the next page, but I have that sense of "why" going on.

Anyone else get that vibe?

Also it's a comic to the movie Zootopia, so yeah also I hope im using spoiler right

>>94135477
post it

>>94135283
Thanks man. I'm enjoying your stuff too, brings me back memories when I was a bit of a metalhead in high school.

>>94135540
I would but my art style literally changed so much from page 1 to now that it's hard to show.

Page 1s art is horrible in comparison.

How do I find an artist when I'm a broke college student? I've been on fiver and that's too expensive

>>94135737
Draw it anyway.

Some webcomics have the worst art style but get away with it by having good writing.

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QUICK,


Describe your comic as if it were the description on the back cover of a book.

>>94135737
go to tapastic's forum and make a post begging for an artist. 50/50 chance you'll get a mediocre one

>>94135798
"good" - david attenborough

>>94135839
That's a review, not description.

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>>94135540
Aaaaaaa fuck it,

the comic is called Things Just Happen.

Centers around a hyena in Zootopia, and the experiences she has when the city goes through some drastic changes the pred scare duh.

>>94135771
My art skills are pretty shit. I can do head shots fine but my anatomy is terrible

>>94135809
sounds good i guess

>>94135999
Nice trips anon

draw it anyway, one way to get better is doing it.

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>>94135737
if it's for a one-shot or something short, >>94135809 or even the drawthreads here (or on /tg/,/v/, whatever other boards have decent drawthreads besides /ic/)
if it's long term, pic related. good fucking luck.

Someone spot me a (you)?

>>94136443
no
AW FUCK

>>94134236
Fuck him, the guy's a sperg. It's just a handle, you're an author posting your work for fuck's sake. Let him go back to /b/

>>94135972
Well so far it looks passable and not furry shit, so keep going

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>>94134457
Do you mean by this? https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018

You can combine both that theme and some css shit https://www.tumblr.com/docs/en/custom_themes

>>94136609
If I wanted to make a disgustingly furry comic, I'd just go and make one.

I upload it on Tumblr and Smackjeeves... for some reason.

I really mean it when I say that the original pages look like shit compared to the newer ones [that also suck but I digress]

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Merchant is the kind of guy who would steal all the health and mana potions before a boss room and then sell them at the door.

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a 20 minute practice sesh from earlier. Might go back in and fuck with it again later. I'm working on getting better at coloring so I found a b/w inked pages to try and play around with. obviously the original poops on me be I assume he took his time to make it look pretty.

I made it look more like dragon ball

>>94135318
righto, will remember in the future
>>94135283
yeah she's gonna get hella fanart

>>94136730
Yours just definitely looks more like old school hand-colored comics. More flat color and whatnot.

>>94136838
That's what I was thinking about going in and adding to, maybe some shading to give it some depth as well as some clouds or lighting in the sky.

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Our first book is done and out in the wild for one of the comics I do. Another book I am involved with launches this friday.

Excited to have those knocked out and out of my way so I can relax a bit.

>>94135737
I can do it but tell me the story and I´ll post some drafts

>>94135798
>"When 19-year-old emu farmer Mizu gets tired of waiting for life to happen, she takes her favorite babysitting charges out on the adventure of a lifetime!
>Taking place 11 years after the end of "Kiwi Day", this sequel carries on the story of the next generation of lazy, overpowered heroes. Its variable-length vertical-strip format required a unique "old torah scroll" form of binding, which our studies show is much more engaging than turning pages! And at over 40 pounds, you'll give your arms AND your funny bone a workout.
>Kiwi Day N: the Complete Collection is fun* for all ages!"
>*disclaimer: The author's definition of "fun" may include crude, low-resolution art, gratuitous nihongo, unbridled cussing, terrible forced puns, internet humor, boobies, naive depictions of alcohol and marijuana use, and l33t. The publisher takes no responsibility for any groaning, deflated erections, regular erections, or contagious weeaboo that may result from reading.

>>94136693
He looks like the kind of guy I would trust, allowing something like that to happen.

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>>94138008
It's based on the public domain Phantom Lady and Fantomah. Basically a homage to golden age cape heroes and old pulp heroes that came before. If you're not interested in cape shit I also wanted to work on a space opera

>>94138495
now that's a top i can approve of. I think I'll steal it

>>94138495
>soda mint killer
she pours diet coke and mentos in you til your stomach explodes?

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I want to make a collect-the-macguffins style adventure in the vein of Xaiolin Showdown/Bionicle/Jackie Chan Adventures/ect. in short, episodic chapters, with the characters going to a different realm to find a new powered artifact every chapter (before the deeper plot kicks in), with a team of aliens battling the humans for control over said artifacts. Is this still a viable premise these days or will it be seen as too cliche and boring? Also, what are some things I could do to spice the premise up?

>>94133684
Has anyone ever done or seen a racing comic? Like Motorcity in comic form?

>>94138595
Sadly it's just about someone killing people in a soda shop

>>94138662
You've already spiced it up a tad by making each one found in a different realm, I mean that's pretty nuts. An entire plane of existence to find each thing on?
Just don't make it fucking gay like most of them, make it cool like Jackie Chan Adventures.. only cooler than that.
Something that comes to mind for me is what if each of these trinkets is like, the same... thing for its realm. Like it's the keystone that holds that universe together or allows transportation to it or whatever. That would explain why these aliens want them, they're from our universe too but somewhere else, yknow.. maybe only the equivalent of earth in each realm has portals because we're speshul

>>94138723
It's hard enough to make a fight satisfying in a comic since it takes so much more panel real estate than dialogue does, I can't imagine a race working, when races are already boring on tv and in movies... i mean, when the race is the focus. If the race is PART of the story, it's fun. But racing as a sport is the most brain-dead activity imaginable.

>>94138539
The world could use more tops like this

>>94135125
What the fuck is going on with the perspective in the middle panel? The counter is four-dimensional.

>>94139151
I assumed it was an obtuse angle

>>94139214
Unless that angle symmetrical arrow shaped point at the center that just happens to slant downward, nah, that ain't what's happening.

>>94138008
So are you interested?

>>94139396
>angle symmetrical arrow shaped point at the center that just happens to slant downward
what?

>>94138771
Thank you. Advice on making the story "not fucking gay"? I will say ship pandering is pretty much a no-go since it attracts just the worst kinds of people possible, so I think that'll help cull a lot of problems. I'd prefer to avoid attracting "fandom" types.

>>94138831
Well, obviously there would be story besides "GOTTA MAKE ANOTHER LEFT TURN", street racing would just be one of the vehicles for conflict.

I was just thinking how autsitically cool it'd be to make a comic about race-cars and not fuck it up, because as you've said, action in general is hard to do.

>>94139661
Actually I was going to suggest focusing on the hot aspects, but the important thing is making danger and action feel real, the fantastic aspects not seem silly, and for god's sake if you're going to give things foreign names to sound cool, actually look up real ones, instead of what two of your three examples did.

>>94139848
I'll keep it in mind. Thanks, anon.

maybe, i need advice on making something interesting.

>>94141059
add a crab pinching a woman's vagina

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I'm pretty bad at sketching digitally, things just lack focus and I can't get strong movement going. Problem is I only have a small scanner which means I gotta draw on 8.5x11 paper and I'm not so good at small scale details. Especially when my gottdang blue pencils don't erase.
Any tips for stronger digital sketches? I have a medium intuous pro and I use SAI.

>>94141414
I would suggest drawing each panel separately then instead of all on one paper.
but forget all that if you're interested in digital sketching. Just go big and do exactly what you'd normally do. You'll never go back to paper again, once you can not just erase but resize, rotate, cut and paste bits together... I would suggest trying either really thick or really thin lines, depending on your sketching style. Also, as you go, if you think a sketch is getting there but you want to sort of go over it in more detail before the lineart stage, lighten the whole thing (or just the parts that need refining) and then draw over it.

>>94141571
Yeah I understand all those advantages and I've made use of them in my complete pages. It's just that the act of sketching itself I find incredibly difficult digitally. I'll just keep trying though.

>>94141652
I know it can be tricky zooming in and out for sure. I'd say do a VERY vague sketch while totally zoomed out, so you at least have the scale right, then zoom in a little for each part

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>>94141674
I'll give that a shot for page 4 and see how it works. For 3 at least I'm just gonna sketch over parts that need a bit more detail.
I'd love to bring my sketch quality to something around pic related but I feel like I can capture it with paper size and the rendering to be redundant given my digital coloring.

>>94141772
I mean, that is not a sketch anymore.. that is a finished product, emphasis on the pro

>>94142008
It's sorta a sketch. It's the pencils which are then given to the inker and/or colorist to complete.

>>94137257
I really envy people who can't into backgrounds

>>94142817
>can't

Why did I fuck up like this? I mean "people who can".

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>>94141200
TRAITOR

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working on some characters

>>94143782
A total cutie!

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>>94135125
WHO AND FUCK NOW. ANON THAT WHITE HAIRED CAT HAS THE SAME HAIRSTYLE OF MY CAT OC

>>94136693
>Merchant is the kind of guy who would steal all the health and mana potions before a boss room and then sell them at the door.

That is actually really smart business

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i have some screencaps of some sketched pages i've done i felt like sharing. i have more for those interested as usual.

the comic concept im still holding back since not fully sketched out, but i can answer some minor question on the sketches i planned to share if anyone cares.

criticism as always is very welcomed.

>>94143871
Fashion magazines are a thing dude. Also that's no cat, just a fox.

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>>94145660
Wait, white hair is supposed to be a fox?

Foxes have long, thin muzzles as well as that distinctive pattern around the mouth. Cats have shorter, rounder faces in comparison.

Even if she's an arctic fox instead of a British red fox, she should have a longer muzzle.
I'd just call her a cat and have done with it.

>>94135125
P1 - She shot those fuel barrels!

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>>94133684

any of you cucks ready for a brand new page of GOTH GRILL Z? I know I am, goth yeah mother fuckers!

When there's about 6 story ideas in the "cartoon/comics idea thread" that are just renditions of your story lmao godamnit give me a minute Ill get to way of the gun in a minute I got shit going on in life I'll get to it!!!

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>>94146246

>no responses

wow, tough crowd, tough crowd, lol

its done, video later on today! :D

>>94146671
*two

>>94141571
>I would suggest drawing each panel separately then instead of all on one paper.
Are you serious?
Why would you recommend giving yourself a crutch?

>>94146503
Ideas are nothing. Execution is everything.

One person's story about a cowboy riding a dinosaur is not your story about a cowboy riding a dinosaur.

Tell your story.

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I just found this
https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/93070993/#93071151
I never knew he really did read it. i thought i was btfo.

Someone get tentacle guy on the phone. Im gonna write another classic!

>>94139710
so watch/read initial D and speed racer

>>94146503
>Implying originality exists nowadays

Just do it

>>94144740
I am pretty sure there's someone like that in Recettear. and there definitely is in the Paper Marios in their special marathon dungeons.
>>94144811
This is really interesting. Your skill at drawing individual parts seems really fantastic, but the proportions look to me like they could use some serious tweaking. I'd like to see her eyes higher and spaced further apart, her right upper-arm thickened to match the left, and a longer palm (it should be the same length as the fingers. the other hand looks right)

>>94146671
Oh man, a yandere goth? That's pretty great, but when will a tsundere make an appearance?

>>94147064
It's what people do who have small scanners and still work on analog media. That way each panel can still be big and detailed. I don't know about being a crutch, it's a lot of extra work keeping it all planned out right. You have to plan how you're going to assemble it in the end, etc

>>94149380
I wouldn't call it a crutch either. Its just an added step. Doesn't mean you aren't planning a page layout before.

I think people like to just act as if "harder" or "less convenient" means better. It's not a crutch to do something if you could legitimately do it going forward indefinitely. You'd just be treating the final layout as a digital submission rather than a physical submission.

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>>94146671

and heres the video yall, i hope yall like it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=diJd6FSn9TI&feature=youtu.be


*you can read it on:

-comic fury: http://ggz.thecomicseries.com/
-taptastic: https://tapastic.com/episode/623701
-linewebtoons: http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/ggz/introductions/viewer?title_no=66734&episode_no=1
-the duck webcomics: http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/GGZ/
-tumblr: https://gothgrillz.tumblr.com/

>>94149378

only time will tell... pic kind of related lol

>>94141772
i love urien
that my nigga

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>>94142086
the comic industry is a funny thing when you see how all these things are done by all different people

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2 days left for the challenge bois, keep working and good luck, it's never too late to join!

>>94151678
TK directors cut of Vision?

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>>94152657
That is from the letter section in the issue #10 of The Vision by King, yes. The Director's Cut so far seems to only be a compilation of issues with sketches and scripts thrown in there.

>>94152792
I never read it to be honest heard good to great things about it though. I was more guessing based off of the creative team. I laughed at the bit about letterers.

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Reposting the cover.

I know people don't usually like flashbacks, but can I write a story that starts somewhere in the future or the present, and then flashback to how it started? start a story where a hero is fighting a villain and flashback to how he became a hero, or show two friends in the oresent and show later how they met? I'm trying to write stories, but I'm stuck on how to start the story, so I thought maybe I could flashback to stuff after I figure things out.

Anybody have a style guide for common/casual medieval clothing?

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>>94146671
>>94150076

fixed all spelling errors

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>>94153072
And here's a little preview of the second page.

>>94153235
>can I

Always yes.
Will it work? Always maybe

Also that's fairly common. Shit that's half of the Deadpool flick. Vonnegut said "Start as close to the end as possible." and I've heard similar sentiments from other authors.

Only JK Rowling starts with "Let me tell you a tale of a baby on a doorstep". Though I paraphrase, we all know it was silly. And ate it up (if you didn't you're too young for me to care). And even then there was THE DEEPEST LORE that goes back to his parents being in school.

Flashbacks aren't a problem if they're preplanned. It's when it isn't that they're dangerously similar to retcons. As long as you plan "this will have happened to the character in their past" being a thing you have to fill in it shouldn't be a problem. Retro-fixing things with flashbacks is what generally draws ire, in my most humble opinion.

>>94153711

Guess I will go with my start in the middle of the story and flashback later sthick then, I just wish I could figure out some details to start of my story, but nothing comes to mind. Maybe I'll just sit down for a few hours and try to nail things out.

>>94153614
looks cute af

>>94153806
Write the scenes that come to you and figure out how they got there. Then figure out why the left the place they were before. Then figure out where that place was. And why the were at that place and not the place they were before that.


OR

Go back to the scene you had in your head and figure out what happens next or how it connects to another scene you wrote and liked which comes later.

Some may say "that's literally the worst way to write a story". I say, firstly, there is no "right" process of creation, and, secondly, you likely won't write a great story anyway so why not get better at breaking down road blocks along the way? That is to say none of us will ever find our work perfect don't let that stop you.

And you have to fill holes in a plot anyway too. So why wait until your idea gets stolen or stale? (don't be paranoid about losing your work but do work studiously and make measurable progress).

>>94153269
In cases like this one it's better to just look out for references on google, there are a bunch of drawings and recreation pics of the peasants. That and most guides show the fancy people instead.

>>94153269
i suggest lookin' at tapestries

>>94154873
the lord of the dance and all that?

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>>94134311

>>94156072
>"but anon..."
>"...my penis is down here."

why is it so awkward to draw someone putting on clothes?

>>94156269
heh

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So i was really drunk last weekend. Like I was on a vodka/Jack binge or something. All I remember is doodling some shit, I wanted to draw some hot shit or something. I found this in my comic folder.

I'm ashamed

>>94156525
have you ever tried to make some human proportioned women?

>>94156290
putting on clothes IS awkward. That's why they're so terrible.
But basically because your limbs twist in weird ways, the fabric stretches beyond its normal limit, and you have to move things completely out of the way and then get them into holes that barely hold them

>>94156910
t. nudist

>>94156900
perfect proportion is boring, that's why greeks stopped doing it when they mastered it
part of the fun of art is to exaggerate what you like

My tablet pen broke. It's an old wacom bamboo. Anyone have any experience buying pens for old tablets? I can't tell if they'll work with mine or not I'm kind of an idiot when it comes to this stuff. Also, recs for good comic making programs would be good. I like 'light' programs like sai or mypaint.

>>94156986
MediBang Paint has built in templates for making comic pages, and is small, fast and free.
While I use it a lot for sketching, I haven't fully used its comic templates as I use Clip Studio Paint for that.

As for the pens, do a thorough search to see which generations of wacom pen are compatible with your tablet. You might still be okay to pick up a new pen, but you may have to bite the bullet and upgrade.

>>94156986
I promise any online pen listing will tell you what it's compatible with, and if not in the description, then definitely down in the Q+A
as for good programs, clipstudio/mangastudio. It has everything photoshop has but better (except PS has a few superior paintbrushy tools), runs lighter, and it costs very little

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>>94156525
i think everyone here has drawn their characters naked at least once. it's inevitable.

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>>94157354
>MFW I have drawn more than naked pics of my characters.

>>94157561
You drew their guts and organs? you madman

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>>94157828
Yes.

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Inked the penultimate pen.

>>94156900
I'm a hack and I love what i'm doing. :(

>>94157856
hot.

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Character

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>>94157354
Who are those and why it looks so hot?

>>94156525
I have grown insensitive to your RAITA level of women but those inhuman feet are just something else dude seriously what the hell

>>94158208
i like her. oh dude, is this.. I remember this, wayyy back, the detachable arms.. they used to be further up, right? like biceps level

>>94158701
Those feet look about right, the toes are just really small. I've seen feet like that.

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>>94159051
>I've seen feet like that.

Now I'm more scared about what you have seen.

>>94159099
feet are a funny thing, they change a lot in response to forces (if you ever see someone with no arms who's had to use their legs to hold things, the big toe actually separates and spreads), and because you don't interact with them every day they have to be a lot weirder before they hit the eye as deformed-looking. The digits can vary tremendously in proportion. Those are definitely on the small side, but i find most drawings err on that side. I can't think of where, but I just saw feet like this in some cartoon

actually the one way he could probably fix it is to extend the lines between each toe further back

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>>94159022

Yeah, I moved it because the detached arms ended up looking kind of awkward alone.

>>94159217
everyone loves a flying fist!

>>94151785
>I have been working on other stuff and also getting my own comic ready
>Have the idea for the challenge but haven't done it yet

Welp I will have to do a real sketch this time around it seems, at least just to get these dracula tits out of my system

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QUICK,

Does your villain/antagonist get any sort of redemption?

>>94160732
that would imply he's doing something wrong

>>94160732

No. They already had their redemption years ago. They're just tired and forgotten now.

>>94160732
His redemption opportunity is long gone. I thought of maybe giving him one for real, but it would defeat the kind of character I wanted him to be (the guy you just hate because of how despicable he gets) so I scraped the idea.

>>94160732
yeah but the dumb git wastes it

>>94160732
in the sense that you can "redeem" old bottles and cans for 5 cents in some states, sure

>>94160732
Yes, but the good guys reject his change of heart and so he goes back to genocide

>>94160804
The only correct answer

>>94160732
demons can't be redeemed

>>94160732
>spend 5 years trying to wipe out an entire religion
>Keep a living saint as a prisoner the entire time
>Keep her alive out of respect
>Get sick of it all and ask her to help repent
>The Gods answer and say you're fucked regardless
>Say "Fuck it" and kill the Saint before continuing with the genocide because he's fucked anyways

>>94160732
Most of my early big antagonists get some redemptions, although I guess it all comes with the "defeat equals friendship" kind of deal. The later into the story the villains are, the less redemption they get.

>>94160732
>My story is slice of worklife with everyone being pretty chill with each other

Does that make ME the villain?

>>94160732
Nope. Literally irredeemable because he's programmed to be a irredeemable asshole

How do you guys write your plot? Is it wise to do it in script format(characterA:[quote] stage direction)?

>>94161983
couldnt you just add more programming and redeem him?

>>94162223
Here is an example of how a script can be done for comics >>94152792

I personally just organize everything on my head and then capture it on paper. I don't recommend it at all though, it makes me work double because I have to change stuff to fit baloons and what not. Is just I'm a bit lazy to actually do it as intended.

>>94162291
Now you get into the moral grounds of how moral it is to brainwash a robot. And do a Rogue One

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>>94136693
Merchant got gimmicks too.

And no, his shop is not bigger on the inside.

>>94162328
if he literally can't help but be shit, then you arent taking anything away from him that he actually had previously.

>>94162370
I fuckin love visual gags, this one is really good.

>>94162370
What is that sorcery, Merchant?!

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>>94162430
>really good
anyone sane still in these threads?

>>94160732
My antagonist is a bunch of hands that rip you apart if you touch them, so not really, no.

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>>94162899
Surely they'd make an exception for a cutie like Jennifer Connelly

>>94162291
The problem is that it's a robot created by a super genius in a fantasy setting. There's really no one capable of fixing him.

>>94162899
Is your villain David Bowie?

>>94162952
>>94162980

No Labyrinth in this comic, bud.

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Been workin on this comic series the last few days and got a few pages done, pretty happy with it

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>>94163145

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>>94163308
I do like to throw in some subtle There She Is!! references here and there. One of the biggest inspirations for this series.

>>94162986
>"You're hurting me!"
>"Of course"
>"We're Hurting Hands"
>"Now would you like to get torn up, or torn down?"

>>94163336
is that the thing with the bunny that loves the cat?

>>94163472
Yes

>>94163472
Yeah, an old Newgrounds cartoon. If you haven't watched them, the creators released an HD revision of them and it's really great.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3quYcNI3dOs&t=602s

>>94163510
man those were the fucking days

>>94160732
No. Resolving the conflict means that she ceases to exist.

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>tfw I don't know what character put on the thumbnail of my comic on tapas that only have 2 strips so far
>tfw the last time I made a poster boy for a comic he only appeared twice
>tfw I can't wait more because I'm itching for normie (you)s

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hopefully im allowed to post this. also sorry about the shilling im just too lazy to edit out the blog name

>>94164418
when will they ever learn

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>>94164479

>>94164418
I think the "The End" kind of ruins it a bit

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>>94164479
i've already learned. i've felt things you lanklets couldn't imagine

>>94133733
So we post the comic on the day of? Also I completely missed the genre part of it.

>>94165242
>So we post the comic on the day of?
Yes, we begin posting on the 27th

>Also I completely missed the genre part of it
You use one of those 3 genres for the setting of your take on the theme.

>>94165280
I already made a comic with the theme but not the genre. Hope you all like lesbians.

>>94165059
How so? if u dont mind me askin

>>94165470
It's just not a long or "big" enough comic to really warrant it.
The dude's face was a good enough ending as it was

>>94165443
I don't think there is a problem with it really. You can pretty much call anything a family sitcom nowadays anyway.

>>94160732
Hahaha, not a chance.

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>>94158208

Antagonist

>>94166417
What is it about "short-sleeved tunic with elaborately-wrapped arms and legs under it" that I love so much?

>>94166458

Gianna is a vampire with a plan.

>>94166483
so yeah it's okay if I read your entire comic with a large smile and also a boner, right?

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finished my tapas thumb-bait
>tfw you're so creative bankrupt you have to use cute girls that probably won't show up and sick meems

>>94166622
Those girls are cute.
Also even better! You bait people with them and make them keep reading waiting for them to show up!

>>94166656
oh, didn't think it that way. Nice, /hyw/ approved.

>>94136693
>>94162370
>multileveled dungeon, goes down forever
>run into Merchant on first floor
>hellishly brutal dungeoneering through the next few levels
>Merchant is there ahead of you perfectly fine and dandy to sell you wares.

I could see this happening with your character.

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This comic is based off of an interaction I had with a friend back in Highschool.
I didn't totally know how to interact with other people, or how to react to them either.

There are a lot of moments from Highschool that are just burned into my mind as almost lynchian examples of human interaction happening in real life.

>>94166550

The more emotional reactions the better I suppose. I also can't draw without taking a break to do this stuff. Let me know what you think.

https://clyp.it/1wihwpu1

https://clyp.it/2n4orxjw

https://clyp.it/lepp2yxf

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>>94166849
Anyway I made this basically just to practice a new drawing technique, as well as to consolidate this memory.
I don't want to forget weird moments of life like this.
This isn't exactly how it happened... well no it's pretty spot on, but some context is left out.
But I just wanted to do this quick.
I have a bad habit of allowing ideas to grow to much and become bloated with scenery, when people only care about the punchline.

>>94166849
>>94166902
kek this reminds me of a friend, he would totally do that in front of whoever.

You got a fun style here.

>>94160732
I'd say that only a couple of my villains are beyond redeemable. One is a crazed Dictator that wants to ascend into Godhood and another is a Super-powered Ex-con who threatens to destroy the upper caste of society merely for shits and giggles.

I like playing with antagonistic features rather than making someone "beyond" redemption. For example, one of my "villains" is actually just the necessary evil he feels is needed in the universe and to an extent his views and philosophies holds truth.

Another character of mine is a foil to the MC and acts as an antagonistic force from time to time, but the two usually team up and help each other overcome themselves.

>>94160732
They die.

>>94167010
So their death is their redemption or you mean they die as damn bitches?

>>94166849
Nigger is a fun word to say. Seriously, how childminded do people have to be to get in such a fit over a word? It's like growing up all over again when your parents told you "you shouldn't say things like cuss words" and then they do it anyway. The more you use a word, the more decentralized it becomes. Black people call each other niggers all the time, either in a form of endearment or to literally call them out for acting like a nigger.

>>94166622
Glad you're still around. Can't wait to see what this turns out like
Anyway you'll fit right in on Tapas. Tons and tons of "oh this art is so fucking cute even though nothing really happens" comics.

>>94167046
They die as bitches. Maybe one gets a bit of redemption but they also die.

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still juggling back and forth between so many ideas, it's hard.

current one i've was trying to make into a more serious plot aside from a cozy comic with a bunch of cute couples but i cannot pinpoint a good conflict so it's kind of devolved back into cozy little stories.

i guess that's fine? i've never really done a comic (cause i'm too indecisive on going with a story) so maybe it's a good start.

>>94167080
Yeah I guess...
Do you have anything to say about the comic itself.

It's just that when people start talking about actual black people on 4chan the whole thread becomes shit hole.

>>94166849
It really is a funny word. Most words that derive from uneducated southern people mangling English are funny.
>>94166856
whoa, you composed these? fuckin nice, dude. what's this for exactly?

>>94167080
More to the point, it has since gained a more neutral and useful meaning of 'shitty uneducated people regardless of race', something we ought to be putting our judging-energy into

>>94167175
Maybe start with a comfy strip if you've never made a comic.
It gives you a chance to practice character interactions and general character posing and whatnot.

>>94167229
I think it was already funny just in the first four panels, but the complete comic is also funny, I would just make sure to put all eight together. the break does nothing for the humor.
also, his friend IS black, right? it's a little hard to tell in Doubutsu no Mori style, and he.. kinda paused a bit, but that hairline..

>>94167271
I have done comics, granted only a couple. I just meant more in keeping an ongoing series of comics kind of way.
But practice sounds good nonetheless.

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>>94167285
>tfw you a black buddy making some small jokes and then your whitey friend just begins shouting NIGGER while laughing like a madman

Fuck the comic was already funny as it is

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>>94167175
Left one is cute as a button, but right one is tempting me.

>>94167285
The break was only because of the size of the page.
I didn't want to make the whole thing too big to post.
Also, breaking the pages meant less Layers to fuss with.

As far as race goes...DESU I don't know. I never asked him. I think he was maybe latte toned...IDK... I know he was big into Hip-hop
and anime.

>>94166982
thank you.
I decided not to panel it.
It's still easily readable right?

>>94167480
I didn't have any problems to read it nor to understand what was going on so I think it's fine on that regard.

>>94167239

>what's this for exactly?

A fantasy western about dead people. And yeah I did make these songs, here's a couple more because I don't think my personal compositions will make it beyond being placeholder. At least not in the form that they're in here.

https://clyp.it/rww4djkg

https://clyp.it/3e5gvlhw

>>94167315
I think it's better to begin with a more "comfy" kind of webcomic before going to a bigger story. Good practice and can also help you see mistakes on the whole process that you can avoid once you go for a story you actually want to see as ongoing.

>>94167347
>yfw a bunch of shuckin and jivin niggers of all colors, mostly white and a couple mexicans, are making a hoot and holler at some table, and your sensible black friend sits by you, shakes his head, and laments "niggers"

>>94167436
ah, right on. confusion is even better. You've preserved that nicely in the comic, it will serve it well
>>94167630
a fantasy western what? like, what's the medium in question, that will have music in?

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finished this specs card thing. thinking of doing these while I also work on practicing different poses, figures and what not because I have a bit of work for college to do, so in the meantime ill post these on here http://fav.me/dbhphm3

Keep going, guys.

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>start on tapas
>go to bed and decide to install the app on my old iphone
>asks for iOS 9.0
fug

>next to tapas app show up webtoons "the number 1 webcomic yadayada"
>it asks for iOS 7.0 and can install it just fine
someone redpill me on webtoons. I just found some artist who left tapas for webtoons shekels.

>>94172595
Webtoons was done first

>not using both webtoons and tapas for their combined shekels

>>94172595
Why would you need the app? You can use your browser

>>94172595
Tapas had an issue a few months ago because of a change in their policy that sounded extreme (they being able to take priority over other third party publishers or something like that). Their intention was to protect artists from publishers that wanted to offer them unfair shares and the like, but they did so without consulting anybody else and the community didn't take it well. The change lasted less than a day iirc, but I think some artists left after that. Maybe the one you mention did it for it.

>>94172595
They're both shit because it's not your own site that you are 100% in control of.

>>94156900
Of course not, he has a fetish and he loves it.

>>94156985
>coldfusion giving art advice

>>94173580
Doesn't more userbase always means more ad shekels? Iphone default browser doesn't block ads.

>>94173626
I read that artist page again and it seems he got a deal from webtoons and got featured.

>>94172873
I want to do that but webtoons doesn't have a gaming category for the vidya plebs.

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ok ONE DAY LEFT BEFORE THE CHALLENGE WOOOOOOO!!!!
be sure to be ready and don't forget; it's never too late to join!!!

>>94174208
Well desu both sites are similar but tapas looks like is the most up to date. Also I'm not really sure how webtoons work with their weird "selection" system.

I still wonder what happened to the schizoveggia comic that was there

And personal opinion here but tapas is the less ugly of the two design-wise

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I'm unsure how to do text boxes

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>>94160732
Sometimes he has a chance to redemption himself.

But he prefers to keep the "villain dad" trope to make his child's life impossible until son dies, if that happens.

>>94176602
Is that your art

>>94160732
yes, but not untill after the main story arc

>>94176682
obviously not, the retard used an unaliased line tool and couldn't even make a proper box. he's literally so braindead he tried to put a box on a picture someone else drew to simulate a comic panel because that's the limit of his abilities.

>>94176682
>>94176769
http://cushart.deviantart.com/art/TPST-568052825

>>94176802
Thanks for source

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>>94134007
Here's the full page. He gets what she meant.

>>94177603
Oh nice.

Well is not like you can kill a merchant anyway.

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>>94177603

>>94177603
These are actually really good.
Excellent dynamic posing.
But you could you make font larger. It's a little hard to read.

>>94177938
>really good

Yeah if it wasn't for the shitty panel flow and walls of text they'd be somewhat readable

>>94168099
I like this kind of subject matter, but I feel like you could use an editor. You're making a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that kind of take me out of the "Specs card" mood. There's also some logical issues that bring me out of the "cool mutant things" mood, y'know? If you wouldn't mind being critiqued on that as well, I'd have a lot to say. But as it is, obviously you have a way to go with your art, so maybe you have enough to worry about and are sick of being pestered?

>>94178138
>He calls that shitty panel flow and wall of text

You have not seen shit

>>94173731
>implying I would ever support exaggerated proportions

>>94177603
Oh of course, a silent hero. Makes sense.
>>94176602
first step is get a better program.

>>94178271
>there's even worse
So?

>>94178268
>If you wouldn't mind being critiqued on that as well, I'd have a lot to say. But as it is, obviously you have a way to go with your art, so maybe you have enough to worry about and are sick of being pestered?
beta as fuck

>>94176602
get Clip Studio

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dont really know where to post this but theres not enough undertale porn comics so...

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>>94180187

>>94178138
Fair enough. I did cram a lot into one page.

>>94180216
didnt even do it!

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I had a nice idea on the dractits comic contest, but i'm far too late to produce good content.

I wanted to make a comic about a vampire college teacher and her teacher's pet of a vampire killer who happened to be diabetic, but fuck it, it will never be done on time.

Plus this time, I had a cute vampire girl.

>>94181161
I like it when people point out all the complications in the whole drinking blood thing, instead of just taking it for granted
so far i've never seen anyone address how blood-drinking animals usually have to pee constantly because blood has a ton of excess water you don't need to carry around

>>94181204
in my planned comic, i wanted the vampire to be a glorified insulin tester thingie that diabetics use. It would have been cute

I wish we had longer deadlines. I can't work on two comics at once and do my dayjob mang

>>94181161
As long as we can understand what is going on, anything goes

>>94181161
Reminds me of an old idea I had when I read that vampires actually are weak to iron (well, cold iron), yet the blood has a small amount of iron. Guess the alcohol/drug analogies are stronger than what I thought.

>>94181161
this design is really cute, my comic is really sketchy and I'm just beginning heh, don't stress too much about quality

>>94181330
yeah I've thought about that too. You don't hear that weakness as often because people tend not to consider them in that same family of magic dudes, but sometimes

>>94181344
noo I want my comic to be cute!

Not some scribbles on paint... I might try to devellop something out of this idea beyond the point of the contest

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Finally finished this page.

Losing data can suck man!

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>>94180187
>>94180216

Bleugh. Also gimme a obscure character to draw I need a break.

>>94181426
Oh lawd, Sarah has a cute little sister? So got dang cute.
located to* though that phrase still makes no sense.
whose* boneless ass
Saudra? is there not a missing N in there?

>>94181479
obviously Bob
although, isn't it impossible for anyone to get into the ruins?

>>94181623
Actually, Saudra is the older one.
And yes, it is Saudra, it's a funny and odd name that I came up with a while ago.

I've been planning and hinting this character the whole comic and I'm glad I'm showing her off. I used to post her in the /coc/ threads and decided to hold her off until now.

>>94181204
>that spoiler

Kek I didn't know that
Does that happen to insects? I have an idea for vampire bugs and adding that would be hilarious, but if it's just a vampire bat thing and all that I'm worried about adding too many jokes to the issue

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>>94156072

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>>94181649
Ah yes Bob from Undertale
Also, anything is possible when you ignore canon.

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>>94181276
well, if anything goes...

>>94182387
>that last panel

Oh boy here comes the porn

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http://character-limit-blog.tumblr.com/post/163463037345/final-page-for-this-chapter-see-you-next-week

Final page for my chapter.

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>>94182387

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>>94183256
>that reference

God damn it I shouldn't be laughing this much!

>>94183215
Hey now, what's this?

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>>94183390
TREASON

>>94136730
Wait, did you make the one on the left? That looks excellent, the bright Background works really well.

>>94183390
http://cultcontrol.tumblr.com/
that reminds me, I need to put a watermark link in the corner of the page

>>94181965
bats, mosquitos, fleas, and bedbugs for sure. ticks, i think, just inflate.

>>94182387
oh hey, I need to remember if I do one of these challenges to do it in black and white like this

>>94182753
Shouldn't luna's name be capitalized?
She's* trying to sell my soul
what kind of person would* do that?
and it should either be 'make lunch, brunch, and a snack' or 'make something for lunchtime, brunch time, and snack time'

unless there's something in rabbit culture called nuts time, the way english people have tea-time...

>>94181426
>2nd to last Panel

I think this is the first time ever I chuckled at one of your gags and I've been coming to hyw almost as Long as you. Good Job I guess.

>>94183215
That is some top quality falling-down. Worthy of Yamcha.

>>94183256
Am I the only one who thought, when i was a kid, that vampires sucked blood up THROUGH their teeth, like reverse viper fangs?

>>94183722
you mean thats not what they do?

>>94183722
You aren't alone, I thought they worked the same as mosquitoes and other bugs. Later on learned they do it more like bats, which also means their fangs should be on the first premolars instead of the canines

>>94183803
>first premolars

HUR and this is why I didn't become a dentist. I meant the lateral incisor, and if you can make them on the central ones even better

>>94183803
wait, what dif would that make? I thought vampire bats' fangs were their secondary incisors
I know that bears and tigers and shit have their canine teeth as their fourth tooth in, rather than the third like ours.. is that what you mean? because in humans clearly the third tooth is the canine and if you're a mix of shit that's how it'd turn out. like how you have a pointy human ear, not a little bat ear..
>>94183839
>lateral incisor
>central
wait what? I mostly know my dentition by number

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>>94183660

Shit, I thought that it was perfect.

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>>94183694
>>94183215

Graphic Design is my passion

>>94184071
pfffft

>>94183803
What's hilarious to me is that the association of vampires with bats came before anyone had been to the new world and seen... vampire bats. That must have blown their damn minds. In Brazil, the vampires are supposed to be fish people or something. It's a total crapshoot
It's just like how vampires became associated with the social class of 'count' (and thus the pun about counting for the muppet) totally unrelated to their fabled tendency towards compulsive counting

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>>94183942
It's a matter of diet and how to suck.
Canines are mostly for intimidation and to eat raw meat, which is why carnivores and omnivores have them really long.

Bats that drink blood have larger incisors (central ones to be exact) because they bite their victim, let the blood come out and then just lick it.

If you were to bite someone and claw your fangs on them, if they are in your canines the blood will just go all over the place. I guess that kinda explains why some vampires end with their whole face being a mess and wasting so much blood. On the other hand if you bite and claw your incisors, the blood flows more naturally into your mouth.

>>94184071
ahaha, wow

>>94183942
Is more "scarier" if your vamp's teeth looks like a predator (bear, lion, wolf, etc) than a bunny, that's why Vampires in general have longer canines than longer central incisors.

>>94184017
English is hard. It's probably even harder than learning to draw well.
>>94184071
I hope you put that on your site below the comic and the comments area and whatnot

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last page of the dractits comic. I should have drawn more of my main comic. Pff.

And there goes my entry for the contest!

This is stupid, but I could make a monster of the week comic about waifu dracula and van helsing fighting evil (dracula being "evil" herself) in the Belmont University.
Could be cute.

>>94184196
>English is hard. It's probably even harder than learning to draw well.

Eh, little fixing could help.

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>>94184159
Oh it's the FIRST teeth. Yeah I think I knew that, actually. They just sort of pierce-and-lick
But if your plan was to cause major bleeding but suck it out, canines would work great. just as long as you had proper lips. humans have fantastic lips. great for sucking.
also I don't think canines actually help with meat, that's what the carnassial molars are for. My molars are fucking bitchin, none of that flat shit for me, they have serious bladey edges.
But yeah, i just looked up pictures, bears' canines are one more tooth back than ours. I guess they can fit anywhere
also I see from pictures that vampire bats have their first AND second teeth as fangs, but the second ones are sitting back where canines normally go. I guess that's for backup

also, it occurs to me, wasn't there a silly old-old-movie vampire whose front teeth were the fangs? I guess that one was more accurate.

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>>94184272
cute as balls
>>94184342
Yeah yeah it was this grotesque motherfucker

>>94184413
Orlok will never be remembered as anything other than Nosferatu, poor fellah

>>94184272
This was a fun comic, also for them being kinda quick you made them real good. Now I have to step up my game for the challenge even though I wanted to go easy on it oh you!

>>94184459
well thanks man. I'm not half bad at drawing, i'm just terribly lazy.

>>94184342
I think those other fangs work for fights, but I'm not sure myself on it. Technically canines is not that they are so helpful with meat, but they are prevalent in predators because of all the fighting and killing they have to do. My first molars have pointy edges as well, I think those are the ones for meat too. Technically our other molars are more for our plant needs mixed with meat.

Damn the teeth world is just another level.

>>94184525
your FIRST molars eh? interesting, mine get less flat as they go back.
Yeah teeth are fucking nuts. I wish we could just replace them shark-style. but then I guess we'd have to eat a lot of bones to make up for it... and then we'd have to be able to digest bones.. and then if we puked it'd hurt more.

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>>94184841
Yeah I got them extracted when I was younger and I remember even the dentist said they were really pointy. The second molars get their share on it too but I think those are more a result of too many drills on them.

Also yeah shark teeth are just too cool to be viable. Sad.

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>>94184931
You know, I don't really think too much about it but after writing all of this damn I truly had horrible dental care when I had a few less years. Good thing the dentists aren't as expensive on this country, I bet my parents would have killed me if they ahd the same cost they seem to have in America.

>>94184931
aw fuck, a FRONTAL tooth pulled? that's an ass. Friend of mine had a quack dentist pull her eye teeth. But she was premature so her mouth wasnt formed right.
Me, plenty of room. No cavities. Don't even brush. My wisdom teeth are rebelling slightly and trying to move out of place, but I have faith they'll eventually fall in line. They took a decade and a half to erupt properly after they started, so..

>>94185333
wisdom teeth are a damn bitch, I only kept them because I already had room made for them. I got cursed with a small mouth on top of not taking care of my teeth when I was younger. Now I pay the price.

>don't even brush

How

>>94184989
This looks really cool. How long has that skeleton been dead I wonder?