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The Voice - a short animation about auditory hallucinations 2017-07-17 09:10:55 Post No. 93936344
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The Voice - a short animation about auditory hallucinations
Not sure If this is the right place to share OC, I'd appreciate a critique of my latest work
2017-07-17 09:10:55
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2017-07-17 09:11:58
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2017-07-17 09:11:58
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Oc47WBbtE8
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>>93936344
>no waifu
0/10but seriously nice work man
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Really good work. If I had one criticism it would be that the ending felt a bit abrupt, but other than that it's a very solid atmospheric piece.
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>>93936344
The animations really nice, and i'm getting the guy is suffering from psychosis?
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2017-07-17 09:38:25
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2017-07-17 09:38:25
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>>93936513
I was inspired by a real life acquaintance with schizophrenia, but I willingly didn't get into detail about the specific mental condition of the character.
Thanks for taking the time to check it out!
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IGN - 1/10 - Not Enough Color
Awesome tho!
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It's ok. I expected it to be giving us an example what someone with them hears. I've always wanted to see what someone with severe anxiety/PTSD and/or hallucinations could animate to try and show us what they see/hear.
I have very mild auditory hallucinations myself(multiple-psyches confirmed) as well as sorta-not visual ones.
I really like the voice.
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2017-07-17 09:40:44
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2017-07-17 09:40:44
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>>93936512
I agree the ending almost feels cut short, it's something many people pointed out when I posted it on Newgrounds. I'm glad you took the time to watch it and share your opinion, thanks!
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2017-07-17 09:46:46
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>>93936597
I have to admit I don't have any personal experience with psychosis or hallucinations, although I did try to be faithful to real life accounts of such symptoms, I agree it would be interesting to see some similar work by someone who has this condition himself.
The voice actor is actually someone who could relate to the main character of my video, during the record me he sent me he said "sounds like the story of my life". I think he's great, he voiced it for free and I hope to work with him again in the future.
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>>93936647
Makes sense. If you want real critique and can take a bunch of huge assholes being assholes, there's an animation general in /ic/ you might be interested in it.
It's fine to post it here too but I wasn't sure if you knew about /ic/.
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2017-07-17 09:59:40
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>>93936720
I didn't know about /ic/, thanks for the heads up!
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