Hi, /co/ do you like my oc?

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"Some people are born angry, some are made angry through tragic life events. The latter is true for Marine Gunnery Sergeant Freefall.

While we sat in front of our TVs in horror on 9/11, a family of American Eagles was tragically destroyed. Sgt. Freefall’s parents created a nest at the top of the World Trade Center in early August. They thought they had found the perfect home to raise a family. Soon thereafter, Sgt. Freefall’s mother laid her first egg.

Unfortunately, just as the egg was ready to hatch, the terrorist attack took place in New York City. While Sgt. Freefall’s mother and father were killed in the bombing, the egg fell from the sky and miraculously landed in the hands of a fireman. Inspired by these events, that fireman would join the Marines to fight for his country.

Once again, tragedy would strike.

This brave marine would graduate from basic training and draw the attention of the Raiders through his heroic actions in battle. The Raiders aggressively recruited him and he was more than willing to serve on this elite military team.

After years of successful missions, Sgt. Freefall’s adoptive father was killed during an assault of a terrorist base. It was this event that would turn this innocent eagle into The Angry Patriot!

The once timid eagle immediately signed up for the Marines to follow in his adoptive father’s footsteps and dedicated his life to protecting our freedom. He would climb the ranks and retire as Marine Gunnery Sergeant Freefall.

Today, he is sickened by the state of the country he was willing to die for and that his father, mother, and adoptive father DID die for! Today, he is The Angry Patriot!"

Thank you for your criticism, /co/, I hope he isn't a Mary Sue.