Kim Reaper

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>>93019800

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>>93019811
Meet our ambiguous quirky hero

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>>93019830
She likes to put her hand over ppl mouth to tell them to shut up.

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>>93019836

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>>93019847

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>>93019873

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>>93019887

What the hell is this?

>>93019800
That's not even remotely clever.

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>>93019905

Why do you hurt me /co/?

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>>93019917
A comic from the girl who does art for Rick and Morty: Lil' Poopy Superstar
I believe it's Tumblr incarnate
>>93019923

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>>93019946

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>>93019963

>>93019830
This seems like a terrible way to start a story.

Not to mention the terrible art style.

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>>93019974
Remember if your job isn't cute you should quit.

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>>93019989

>>93020006
animals don't have souls

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>>93020006

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>>93020018
>>93020014
It her first job, she still learning

>>93019847
Does the Kim chick not hear them talking about her cause their sitting like right behind her

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>>93020034

>>93019830
gaaaaaaaaaaaaay

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>>93020044

>>93020061
Why would a hot goth girl be attracted to a fat blobby brown girl?

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>>93020061
Nothing good will come from clicking this

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>>93020014
>posting images during storytime
This thing has less than 250 page, right?

Jesus. This is all the worst part of the Tumblr artist community rolled into one.

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>>93020081
>>93020078
Brown girl is also a bitch. She deserves better, unfortunately this is not that kind of comic

>>93020081
My thinking is all the animals that get killed for food, like them grinding up baby chicks right after they are born because they are male. Heaven would be full of infinite baby chicks.

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>>93020086
>>93020103
Only two issues, so far

>>93020103
Brown girl was only interested in Kim for her booty.

>Comic is about a dumpy brown dyke, a sidecut "Goth" and it's done in a terrible frumpy artstyle while not being funny

Why is every tumblr comic the same?

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>>93020135

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>>93020145

Part time grim reaper? Cool enough concept. It's a shame such a concept has gone to waste and been butchered by awful art and writing.

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>>93020187

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>>93020228

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>>93020240

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>>93020258

>>93020267
I'm fully blaming Adventure Time and Steven Universe for this.

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>>93020267

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Becka is honestly a huge creep. She's only after Kim for her bootie, keeps being really insistent on those drinks despite the complete lack of interest, and is really stressing the unnecessary bodily contact.
>>93020018
>>93020034
But she's the MC so I'm sure they'll end up together.

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>>93020279
>>93020276
The only person to blame are the ppl who watch it.

>>93019905
>IT IS CURRENT YEAR
God has abandoned us.

The fucking noses, man. Why does every tumblr artist do this?

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>>93020298

>>93020279
>I'll see myself out
I still hate this comic but that is kinda funny.

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>>93020334

And I thought Erica Henderson was the worst artist I ever seen.

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>>93020350

>>93019836
Can't argue with that logic.

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>>93020374
Look at my stuff hotdog. It's funny because usually animals are plush dolls also drives home that I'm fat

Woaaahhh and now they're gonna go on a ROMANTIC date in this amusement park and totally fall in love with each other and become progressive lesbian protagonists which totally isn't extremely predictable

>>93019974

Why am i reading this

The arts terrible and the writing is meh

>>93020014
> mom look I posted bait on the internet for (You)s

>>93020034
I'm getting a date-rape vibe from Becka. Like, if she were a man, Kim would be calling the fucking cops by now. Also,
>Don't say this horrible screwup I caused is my fault
I am actually angry at a fictional character.

>>93020394
Her arm is around her? Jesus Christ, why?

>>93019800
so what kind of rule 34 should be drawn?

>>93020044
legitimately the first actual funny thing in this turd

>>93020145
I'll admit, I smiled a bit at the cat being ripped.

>>93020288

I've only opened a couple of these images but fuck me I've never met a more unlikeable protagonist

>>93020443

Why don't some of the tumblr artists start off with a comic like this, with its cutesy weird plump people art-
and then halfway through just devolve into gore as the main protag murders and dismembers her "love interest" I'm talking full on American Psycho.

It'd be a neat twist, no?

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>>93020394

>>93020518

wowe i never saw it coming

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>>93020518

>>93019830
Is this made with fucking bitstrips?

Look, I'm a progressive dude and even went to one of those weirdo art schools where a third of the student body was straight, a third gay, and the final third being 'straight but told everyone they were gay for attention.'

Even with that open background – ooph, this is horrible.

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>>93020541

>>93020554
after suffering through this I would kill for an entire comic book made from bitstrips

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>>93020563

"tumblr was a mistake"
>the internet, 2017

>>93019800

I'm just here for the badly drawn and badly written quirky lesbians in which one is ambiguously brown and the other is a goth with a side cut.

again, why the big ass noses

there's making your character's nose "sturdy" and then there's also deliberately making your character's nose look unappealing

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>>93020578

>>93020583
>ambiguously brown
This is the UK not the US, she's a Paki

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>>93020598

>>93020591

oh hold on i just noticed that the grim reaper's legs are hairy too, i guess the artist was trying to make the whole character design look unappealing

Someone post that how to appeal to tumblr guide.

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>>93020622
I think the Goth looks cute here

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>>93020631

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>>93020649

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>>93020461
the gross kind

>>93020623
Oh god damn it, you're right. Great: I thought the Reaper girl was kinda cute at times and now the leg hair made her 100% unappealing.

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>>93020662

1. stop drawing noses the way you think they should be drawn
2. get a writer

>Oni Press
Why am I not surprised.

>>93019830
>ambiguous
Nigga, I'm only two pages in and I already get that she's supposed to be obnoxious and ADDish. She's like that one rainbow pegasus, but so far without any redeeming traits.

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>>93020645
well at least she can follow instructions, to a T

>>93020701
don't you fucking dare compare this bint to RD

>>93019974
>>93020006
I'm kind of surprised she isn't mad at Becka for following her, but I guess there's so much more to be mad about.

>>93020645
>That How to guide that ended up looking almost exactly like one of /co/'s own OCs.

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>>93020709
>>93020701
I actually meant to put ambiguous brown like >>93020645 said

>>93020014
sup bloberta

>>93020742
that wasn't a coincidence, she hangs out everywhere

>>93020742
/co/llette was around before tumblr was even a thing

gotta say this is by far one of the least likeable protagonists i've ever seen in my life

kinda the mabel "i am the quirky likeable character who can never do anything wrong hahaha" pines kind

>>93020078
I have no reason yet to believe that the goth is also a lesbian or thinks she's being hit on. Friends can go drinking together.

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>>93020742

No, this one is ours.

Where's the porn?

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>>93020502
Well now I'm gonna file that idea away and possibly use it.

In like 5 years because I work two jobs and am slowly killing myself with stress.

>>93020126
Goth girls are a popular fetish 'round these parts. Also, I'm not calling it Tumblr until some anti-conservative bullshit shows up.

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>>93020810

>>93020228
>romance
no, no, no
They're not actually pairing up the goth with the negress, are they?

>>93020568
Fucking make one then. I'd buy it.

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>>93020833

>>93020833

>you're a reckless idiot

yep, horrible hypocrite protagonist with 0 likeable traits

we're in for a wild ride

>>93020267
I was totally on board with the comic until this page. The goth is no longer acting in a manner I find believable.

>>93019830
>Bearded brown-haired white nu-male in a lumberjack shirt

wow who could have seen this coming?

>>93020288
>Becka is honestly a huge creep. She's only after Kim for her bootie, keeps being really insistent on those drinks despite the complete lack of interest, and is really stressing the unnecessary bodily contact.
Yeah. I thought that was the point. But now all of a sudden Kim is cool with her? Wha?

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>>93020791
People who exercise AMR?????

LOL

>>93020810
Wow, can that brown bitch be even more entitled?

>>93020350
Why is Kim being really nice to Becka at this point? What?

>>93020502
Because the ones who draw comics like THESE lack any sort of imagination whatsoever.

>>93020407
I'm so pissed off. I've posted, like, five times, but I was sincerely enjoying this comic until SUDDENLY THE CREEPY, PUSHY LESBIAN GIRL GETS EXACTLY WHAT SHE WANTED!

>>93020443
This, this, thiiisss.

>>93020833
>even though i told you to take me to this dangerous place
>even though you saved me from possession by punching me in the stomach
>even though you've been warning about everything and i've been nagging you into doing stuff against your will
>you're reckless and i'm totally not interested in dating you
>bye

>>93020541
>I'm an anarchist, not a thief
Since when do anarchists believe in laws?

>>93020560
>tfw can't afford school and am NEET

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>>93020851
Why did I this? I said this comic was awful and you still read, because deep down you desire to be mad. We are not creatures of joy and compassion we are creatures of fear and rage. That's why Slot is writing Spider-Man. You don't have to lie to kick it.

this is the gayest shit i've ever seen

>>93020943
I just like to see how bad it truly is for myself rather than just eating whatever /co/ says

gotta keep my world perspective balanced.

this was so bad though I need to go read some BPRD or something just to cleanse my mind

>>93019989
>Part Time Grim Reaper
That is such a weeb japanesy thing, like if they could call it "shinigami" they would

>>93020662
>trying to impress a cutie
Fuck this comic to hell
Fuck this comic to oblivion

Is this by the same chic who does that awful "Our Super Adventure" comic?

>>93020709
>the creepy, abusive one gets her feelings hurt
>the sane one feels bad
This is disgusting.

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What is it about comic authors who think making something gay means dumbed down hipster shit?

I mean check this out
https://youtu.be/tormYU27Ldk

This is literally, word of god, con fucking firmed to be a song about ducking dick, and yet it's some of the hardest heavy metal music out there. Freddie mercury and David Bowie were gayer than OP and could still make cool shit.

Why can't these comic authors make anything cool?

>>93020943
You know the Zim comics are surprisingly good.

>>93020833
>you're a reckless idiot
>I don't want to babysit you
Says the chick who interfered with her job in the first place.

>>93021029
Your gay

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>>93021056

>>93019836
>lesbo sandnigger

And dropped

>>93019800
I just want to know how these amateur hour series get picked up
do they know a guy who knows a guy?
did someone actually see this paint by numbers tumblr book and say "yes, I want lesbian romance with a crappy japanese light novel twist where every panel is a shitty reaction face"

>>93021029


Because California is a sink-hole of shit. Shit. More shit. And shit.

>>93021029
It's a combination of a lot of things, but it boils down that no one is willing to well rock the hornet's nest. See the fandom built around these comics have built a list of pet peeve tropes that are sometime necessary for a story to develop or make interesting stories. Like have you've seen a gay breakup story yet in any of these? Nope because that would hurt people's feelings, and we need to be sweet. There meant to be comfy rides but well they they don't really understand how to implement their stories or even question what they do is actually subversive or sending the wrong message.

>>93021093
The comics industry is entirely nepotism.
>>93021115
New York is equally a bastion of of progressivism and liberalism, yet we never produced such idiocy. What makes California so different?

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>>93021133
>yet we never produced such idiocy

>>93021133


It's the source of all shit.

>>93021056
My gay what? Hamster? Nothing shocking there. Water Bottle? Yeah, it gets sucked a lot, but I doubt it cares. House? Now that, sir, I resent most strenuously.

My house is NOT the site of festive and fun-filled parties, nor does it have genitalia.

>>93019800
This vaguely reminds me of It Hurts!, with the big differences being that it's not awesome and it sucks.

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>purple hair
>sidecut
>goth

>>93020502
Anon, i want you to know I'm working on this as we speak. You've inspired me.

>>93020502
nah that edgy for the point of being edgy.

I would have it start like that and eventually the less quirky protag realizes how awful the other one is and leaves them

>>93021510
>she's starts being a bother with her quirkyness
>i've made a HUGE MISTAKE.

>>93021029
Because the concept of being anything other than white and heterosexual encompasses their entire being and bleeds over into artwork. Because of this, they're unable to create anything even half way decent, and the only people who find their work appealing are people who get off on hipster bullshit.

>>93020986
I mean I can think of three or four western examples prior to the rise of weebery, but in this case I think you're right

>>93021349
It sure does hurt! to look at

>>93020809
>I'm not calling it Tumblr until some anti-conservative bullshit shows up
Then you need to reevaluate that definition. We're talking aesthetics and the tendency to blindly imitate other online artists' conceits and cheats.

For example, the slit nostrils are something she copied off another artist. They aren't organic, they look awful on bulb noses, but someone else did it so she figured she should too.

Pros and cons so far:
Pros
-- A bit of an actual story by virtue of characters who do things they shouldn't FOR WHICH THERE ARE IN-WORLD CONSEQUENCES
-- A couple of mildly funny bits (the cat lady being Gainz Dude, the six-pack on his forehead and his doomed cat)
-- Layouts on par with someone who deserves to be paid for doing a R&M comic and poses are good too
-- Good expressions with a minimum of forced anime tropes
-- Pacing is not fantastic but page breaks happen where they're supposed to
-- Coloring is actually quite decent for someone doing their own colors

Cons
-- Everything moves too fast and these two characters act like they've known each other for years when it's been barely a few hours.
-- Derivative visual aesthetics cobbled together from different artists with incompatible styles
-- British setting but bland US dialects for everyone
-- More time/effort was put into visual design of characters than their personalities, idiolects or backstories (which is virtually nothing besides Becky acting on a booty crush before suddenly becoming too mature to stick with Kim)

If this book had an actual editor instead of a virtue signaling Oni pusbag, I'd have looked at the first 2 issues and told the creator "This is a good concept, now go back and work on making the characters more interesting individually and decide where this book is set and stick to that"

>>93019830
>Giving up on perspective four panels in
>EVERY person is in perfect 3/4

Fuck you, I'm butthurt that I got rejected but this shit gets a pass.

>>93021133
NY isn't as media centric as Cali. Our hipsters and liberals mostly go towards corporate artistry like fashion and design.

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>>93019830
>>93019836
There is one character she reminds me of and it kinda ruins that character for me...

>>93023444
Mabel was the worst part of GF anyway

It'd be fine if they were cute

This is hot garbage.

I still want to see lewds of the main characters.

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>>93019800
Has /co/ ever found something so bad that we decided to redo it in our own way?
Literally one million years in MSpaint

>>93023987
>using CN style instead of Tumblr style faces

Not an improvement

>>93020018
Why didn't they just make a portal.

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>>93024082
I got you

>>93024511
Better.
The shadow for the nose's contour is backwards.

>>93024585
at least the nose looks closer to the source material
I might go full autismo and redo this whole thing

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>>93024851
>>93024585
whoops forgot pic

>>93021027
At least that part is realistic.

>>93020518
why am I still reading this.

>>93020107
You think heaven is finite or something?

>>93019800
Why is the brown one's design so horribly unappealing? Is it the teeth?

>>93025512
The teeth, the nose and the eyes.

>>93025512
>huge nose
>fat
>sandnigger

Gee boss I don't know

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i made a similar grim reaper-type universe a while back, same girl-type character, but the execution of this makes my blood boil.

i promise to try to make my reaper at least a little palatable. please see attached image

>>93025668

woah an actually appealing character design, didn't expect to see that in this thread

>>93020662
>trying to impress a cutie
>just earlier said it was creepy that she stared at her all the time and needed to stop
10/10

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>>93025668
Very cute Anon

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>>93019800
Couldn't have waited one and a half more months could you?

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>>93025972
thanks

she also has a DSOC (designated sidekick of color) but i want to make her more confident than the reaper. a well-read quasi-zombie. someone actually useful, rather than a fucking scrappy-doo annoyance like the comic in this thread

>>93020986
how is that any different from "part time spy" or whatever else? I dont understand your point

>>93019800
I'm disappointed in the contents of this comic, from the catalog it looks like the title is
>Rim Reaper
I expected it to be a story of rough lesbian strap-on anal sex.

>>93020685
Wew

Does that little bit of leg hair actually bother you?

Good luck ever getting a gf if you actually think girls be shaving their legs 100% of the time

>>93023987
This is cute but just looks kinda generic

Kinda reminds me of Star actually

>>93020578
LOOK AT THOSE HAIRY LEGS ON THE GOTH CHICK.

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>>93029196
Ffffffuck you for noticing that and pointing it out.

>>93026284
I have more pain if you want it
>>93027586
Give it some time, only second issue. The brown girl seems like the type of chick to playfully ignore the safe word.

>>93020103
OP, you and I have very different ideas about punishment. This is fucking gold.

>That complete 180 in their personalities within a few panels
>MC's love interest is not only conveniently gay, but is also suddenly interested in her despite telling her to stop being a fucking creep in what is likely less than an hour
>MC can do no wrong despite the fact that her reckless behavior is what led up to her feelings getting hurt
>Somehow lacks the self awareness to realize her hypocrisy
Unless the message here is that these two are shitty people it belongs in the trash. /fit/ catbro can stay though. Between the toxoplasmosis, energy drinks, and sleep deprivation I can only imagine what sort of shit that lunatic gets into.

>>93019847
So three pages in and our cast consists of
>loudmouthed quirky brown chunky lesbian with Stevonnie's nose
>pushover beardy nu-male hipster from Non-threatening Boys Magazine
>A "goth" who doesn't look particularly goth, more like Kate Leth
Off to a great start here.

>>93019830
What the fuck, they're in college? The art style makes them look like elementary schoolers

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>>93019830

> panel 1
> breaking the 180 rule

DELETE THIS

>>93029689
>I have more pain if you want it
Today we've had this, Nemesis, and Amazons Attack for the 2nd time this week. Hold off till later.

>>93019830
3 panels and I'm already annoyed

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>>93019873
that last panel

>>93020086
pic had more kekles than this entire comic

>>93019946
is she suddenly a giant?

I am literally shaking

>>93025668
Good Design actually

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Tumblr checklist

Story
>lgbtq ships
>random/ surreal sequences because lolrandom ammirite
>dark themes like death but never any substance and always stays light-hearted
>problems mostly from retardation
>everyone accepts everything in the blink of an eye. never any turmoil

Characters
>guys are numale cucks
>ambiguously brown lead
>lead has cutesy ADD and hair style (bonus if "m-muh bbw")
>they all talk like 80's valley girls and have blogs

Art
>inconsistent artstyle
>everything is round, even fucking knives don't have that sharp an angle
>gotta have them pastel palettes, boiiii
>rigid gestures with pouty mouths
>what are perspective and composition. what are fundamentals
>oh shit we went 3 pages without a funny face, better add one real quick

I miss anything? because this comic has each and every single fucking bullet.

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God what an annoying fat nigger.
I would rather have a comic of the roided cat dude though, He's pretty alright.

>>93020943

Holy fuck, something good came out of this. I didn't know they were starting The Damned back up. That little bit of knowledge may have just redeemed this entire story-time of crap.

>>93020869
what's the context here?

>Crappy comic
>Oh look its by a women
Coincidencre?

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>>93032584
>>93032584
Man masturbate's during a feminist rally where female walked around naked.
they then blame the patriachy and start blowing airhorns at the man.

no joke.

>>93022728
>Pros
no
>-- A bit of an actual story by virtue of characters who do things they shouldn't FOR WHICH THERE ARE IN-WORLD CONSEQUENCES
there never were and never will be. at most slaps on the wrist
>-- A couple of mildly funny bits (the cat lady being Gainz Dude, the six-pack on his forehead and his doomed cat)
maybe, but not with that setup
>-- Layouts on par with someone who deserves to be paid for doing a R&M comic and poses are good too
if you have the standards of a 2yr old
>-- Good expressions with a minimum of forced anime tropes
wew. surely you jest
>-- Pacing is not fantastic but page breaks happen where they're supposed to
pacing is shit, senpai. higher your standards
>-- Coloring is actually quite decent for someone doing their own colors
no color theory applied. no composition values considered.

garbage, all of it

>>93024881
i like this, keep going.

>>93031530
don't think you get what that rule means, senpai

>>93032626
TOPKEK
what a good man

>>93020833
Did the author even read through this comic once in a draft to make sure the story made consistent sense? Did anyone?

Kim didn’t want to take Becka to the haunted ship because Kim felt Becka might get hurt and was pushed to do it, but now it’s retconned as Kim’s idea the whole time? How can anyone editing this comic not see the discrepancy? Kim’s been more of a “straight man” this entire comic until the end of this chapter where the author just wants us to think Kim’s been the ~crazy reckless idiot~ this whole time. If anything, Kim’s recklessness was encouraged by Becka’s behaviour.

This is so poorly-written. I can’t believe this got published.

>>93025668
good shit anon. keep it up

>>93025668
mouth and hands are best parts
face and hair could use slight adjustments to not be so generic

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>>93029196

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>>93020809
I remember when Goth meant something. This girl's barely Goth, she's just "alternative" like all the other lazy fucks who want to be different but only want to put in the most minimal amount of effort in.

>>93029196
>>93029496
If it helps, the hare will go away and come back at random.

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>>93024881
I made it cleaner, How ya' like it /co/?

>>93032850
>Kim didn’t want to take Becka to the haunted ship because Kim felt Becka might get hurt and was pushed to do it, but now it’s retconned as Kim’s idea the whole time?

Somehow I read that as Becka took some kind of emotional damage from being possessed.

>>93020598
The Capt needs a hug.

>>93033763
Great.
Now give her a Punisher shirt and have her say "I'm goth as HELL".

>>93021093

IIRC Oni Press literally had a submission process that said they only really accept comics by women, minorities, lbgt, etc. So if you're a queer female person of color and/or pitching a comic about queer females of color then you are guaranteed to get a series.

>>93019800
welp I almost liked that. I mean I could have.
Generic brown girl and 5th wave goth girl go on wacky adventures with lesbian crush side plot.

But wait a minute, Is the crush the side plot or the main plot? Pick a focus.
and then
Fight scene that feels like its copying Scott Pilgrim. And then we don't actually get to see a fight at all.
Spooky ghost fight with a couple pages of build up? Nah just slap em a bit.
and further
Inconsistent personalities.
haphazard composition and "movement"
will never show tits
etc.

I'll file this under "I enjoy the r34 more than the source work"
big brown butt facesitting goth girl when?

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>>93033610
Holy fuck muh dick
I had forgotten about real Goths

>>93034087
>will never show tits
Both of them are near flat anyway.

>>93033763
Thanks for the fix I wouldn't have cleaned it any way

>>93034221
what do you mean?
chubby brown girl's got big boobs.
They look like she's got a bra that straps them tight to her chest, but they take up 50% the height of her torso

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>>93034367
No prob
>>93033923
Like this?

>>93034454
OMG looking back, they're just flopping around
>>93034629
bigger tits pls

>>93028721
>Implying I want a girlfriend

>>93026420
>>93025668
i would read it if you ever actually make something out of this

>>93020688

Did she just punch her fupa?

>>93034629
10/10

>>93033930

they publish alpha male brian omalley tho

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>>93034629
now someone do Freddy as the Muscle guy

>>93019800
I wish whoever made that would die.
Just die painlessly right now, fall over and be gone.
And the same with everyone else copying that fucking HORRENDOUS shit art "style".

>>93019830
>mum
How shocking

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>>93019830
Oh look. Non-threatening nu-male homo friend with ironic beard and obligatory flannel shirt.

Are they made in a fag factory in Canada these days?

>>93020228
>Rick and Morty
How predictable

>Portland

TOP

KEK

>>93035331
He's written and drawn like a faggot but
>>93019830
>>93019836
He gives off the vibe of a nigga that just waits for the brake up and creeps in. Like he is based off the author IRL thirsty ass friend that can't take a hint.

>>93019800
The CalArts... it BURNS.

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>>93029196
Fuck, just when I found a new punk / goth waifu

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>>93019800
I wanted to give this the benefit of the doubt, I really did, but holy fucking shit, the angles, the perspective, the character designs! It's like they made a visual representation of the feeling you get when you have gut-murdering diarrhea.

And the writing just keeps going down! Any one of those alone and I would have been fine, but all combined it just hurts. It hurts! It hurts to read this!

>>93025668
>>93026420
I really like this.

I mean, it wasn't good, but it's not exactly horrible. We didn't get anything political (yet), just reaper hijinks and hamfisted romance.

>>93036113
It might help if I didn't watch Wakfu right before browsing /co/. But seriously, they couldn't create a few different body types beyond 'chubby girl'?

>>93036241
>I mean, it wasn't good, but it's not exactly horrible.
>after this >>93020810 >>93020833

>>93036311
Yeah, it's stupid, but not really infuriating.

>>93021027
Hey, if you're going to write an abusive main character, might as well make them a histrionic gaslighter too.

>>93021092
>Sandnigger
>Not niggernigger

How many sandniggers do you know named "Becka" and not "Falafel"?

>>93021029
Because Bowie and Freddie were excellent musicians who happened to be gay.

This, this is written by someone who views being gay as an identity in and of itself. Being homosex is the crux of any and all personality a faggot is allowed to have.

What is Becka supposed to be? I figured she was Indian, but I get some black girl vibes from her.

God.... those eyeliner wings are so obnoxious. These characters look so self obsessed.

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......who's gonna tell her

>>93021029
Wait, Jawbreaker is about sucking dick?
Hm. I can see it honestly, i just never saw it in that light. Makes sense considering Halford though.
Anyway the answer to your question is these cocksuckers and cuntlickers are all uncreative piles of mediocrity. Over-emotional, the simplest cues get them worked up and that reflects in their creations as everything is soft and simplistic.
Plus most of gay culture is fucking self-mastubatory trash.
Fuck the coolest gay guy i know is a wannabe cowboy that races and builds cars in the boonies.
Fucking suburban cancer with no real culture, interests, or intelligence.

>>93036919
What does she need to be told?

>>93036919
Hopefully no one.
Let her have her fun since outside of this thread no one has heard of or cares about this.

It's a bad comic, but with time she will see that on her own.

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>>93037051
that her art style is really unappealing and her writing is joyless and if she cares about improving her craft she might consider not bowing to trends we've been seeing for what feels like ages now.

She seems to be doing pretty well for herself. She just got picked up by Scholastic UK for a graphic novel after a five-house auction. She's a hot item at the moment.

>>93037224
this, she has potential but man is she wasting it on a toxic tumblr culture

>>93020006
Keyword is one word not two

>>93037352
So what?
You're just going to say something like:
>4chan here, we hate your comic, but think you have real potential as an artist and hope you improve

I can't see many people taking that well.

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>>93037224
Honestly what would be the point? She'd probably outright ignore scathing critique and if we were nice about it I don't know if I trust her to improve on constructive criticism even if she took it well. It's a piece of shit but I've seen similarly-styled comics think they're much smarter and capable of some form of commentary

>>93037510
>if we were nice about it I don't know if I trust her to improve on constructive criticism even if she took it well
Even more so if she found out it was from 4chan. We do kind of have a reputation that makes it hard for people to take criticism from us well.

>>93020578
The goth's pose is stiff like a stick figure on the bottom panel.

>>93037510
We need to try pulling something like this

https://youtu.be/fuYndvNkiA8

>oh, is this the best you can do? Ah, well, it's a fun book for kids and I'm sure yourE giving it your very best. No no, take your time, I'm sure oni can wait, everyone can wait, no one is expecting it to come out sooner than it has to :)

>>93037567
every page is stiff and terrible

look at this >>93020279
the third panel couldn't be less dynamic even if it tried its hardest

>>93037534
Just a question, but why should she have to listen to anybody here in the first place? She enjoys what she's doing and how she's doing it and she's even found a certain measure of consistent success. Why does it matter if anyone here likes it? She's not contributing to the tanking of a company. She's not pushing any existing tv network away from its original goals. She's out there in isolation making stuff that people here don't care about. Which should be fine, right? There are hundreds of artists who are making stuff people here care about and with work /co/ genuinely enjoys.

>>93037615
Wasted potential is bad no matter where it is and it's ultimately better for an artist to take good criticism from anyplace they can

>>93037510
Aren't those guys supposed to be government aid workers or something? Pretty well-decorated, gardened, and maintained home for someone who's been struggling to find work for a year, is blind, and I'm assuming lives alone

>>93020502
Isint there a gay comic popular on tumblr about two muderes who rape and kill people but its ok cuz of teh yaoiz.
It has a silly name.

>>93037615
The clarity of this statement is so out of place here, pretty common sense though. I don't see why people get so worked up.

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>no porn of the thicc brown one fingerbanging the goth while she cries
>no porn of the thicc brown one choking out the goth while pegging her and yelling that this is her fault for telling her it's her fault
>no porn of the goth getting smothered in the thicc brown girl's thighs while the brown one grabs her hair roughly in place

>>93037615
>Just a question, but why should she have to listen to anybody here in the first place?

She doesn't. I really do think we should just leave her alone.

>>93019946
>I believe it's Tumblr incarnate
It's clearly showing it's strengths, but it's a very crowded field this year.

>>93037702
>no porn

Wait, did we break R34 again?
It's about time, I'll add it to my list of things that don't have porn. A whole 2 things now.

>>93037510

If you're implying Monsterkind here, we have to be fair and admit that whenever a painful attempt at portraying social worker proceedings comes up it's always immediately derailed by talk or action of cartoonish Dick Tracy-tier kidnapping rings

>>93020809
>anti-conservative bullshit
Give it time, only two issues so far.

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>>93037716
But that'd be boring.

Dont you want to bug her even a little bit? Isn't there a part of you that thinks it'd be hilarious to corrale her on twitter and just bug the shit out of her, bait her into some reactions, see if she ruins her own rep by saying some shit? Wouldn't it be fun to see it all unfold?

Live a little, anon.

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>>93036919
Well fuck, reading this made me feel kinda sad. Yeah the comic is horseshit, yet it really seems like a passion project that she poured her heart and soul into.

I guess it's a weird thing to say about someone I know basically nothing about and for all I know she could be a huge cunt. But eh.

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>>93036919
>you will never be friend her and slowly show her better stuff and give her better taste and some art tips until she stops making shitty comics

>>93037702
http://i.imgur.com/XQiDILW.png
just for you, anon

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>>93037888
W E W

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>>93019830
>>93019836
I immediately started reading the brownie's lines in this voice.

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>>93037797
No, there is no fun, because she doesn't have Chris Chan levels of delusions there is nothing to be gained. Only regret, disappointment, and a shitton of SJWs that will jump to the rescue, creating a bubble of safeness that she will sink into and refuse to come out of.

The moment that happens, any chance of her improving goes out the window.

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>>93037888
nice

>>93037510
You're right, that is a pretty nice house; they're not actually meant to be poor, are they?

>>93038003
they're college kid poor
not enough money to buy the newest videogames, but still be able to spend in steam sales

>>93033610
Goth has different levels.

The only goths I see now are this middle aged couple. The guy has the spiked mohawk and wears the trench coat in public and somehow has the worst fucking acne on his cheeks and jaw.

Goth is fucking dead.

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>>93037960
But don't you want to break the limit, see how much you can push her and push her and push her until she cracks? Until she starts becoming paranoid and self doubting, until she becomes as deluded as Chris chan?

Don't you want to ruin her? Come on, it's fun! It's fun to break people. There's a million other artists out there who can take her place, and hundreds making the same stuff she does, do you really think anyone will notice, or miss her?

Isn't it exciting to just think about it, how easy it could be to just ruin her? And we've done it before, internet artists and people in general have gotten so dependant on connections and connectivity that they've left themselves wide open for bandits like us.

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>>93038114
I wholeheartedly and unironically enjoyed reading these lines.

It felt great reading them an extra time.

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I'm glad people were calling for porn of the characters because that was the only thing that would keep me interested in this thread so I drew the one girl.


>>93037874 lmao

>>93037684
that tends to happen
think you can find it, senpai?

>>93038114
Sounds like work. Go play video games or something.

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>>93038114
No, unless she is already as deluded as Chris Chan was in the beginning, there is nothing fun about it. You know damn well this is a new time. You aren't going to push her to any breaking point. She will just hide behind a wall of blind fans that will cry 'misogynist', 'racist', and 'sexist', washing you away in a tide of social justice. Whatever impact you may have had will be quickly forgotten.

>>93037874
The /lit/ and /mu/ in me can't handle this

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>>93038114
nah
better kill yourself

>>93038202
>her legs aren't hairy.

Why do you hate women so much, anon

>>93038114
Op here, don't rope me in to your autistic shit. It's a fucking comic on issue two, calm the fuck down. Most of the work world is probably just her. If you want to waste your time go for it, just don't tag the thread.

>>93038224
Recommend me 3 books, anon. I like novels but I don't get into forums or discussions so I never know what's cool outside of popular stuff

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>>93038224
???

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>>93037811
>she poured her heart and soul into.
That means her heart and soul is pure shit.

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>>93037811
do you think she will sell, anon?
I hope to never end up like this

>>93038284
What I'm saying is that I'm a pretentious faggot

>>93038275
Dune, the gulag archipelago, and machiavelli's the prince are kino

>>93038320
>>93037254

>>93038275
/lit/ standard would be something like Infinite Jest, Ulysses, Blood Meridian

I guess personal picks that aren't discussed much right now would be Beloved, Disgrace, and The Swerve; House of Leaves if you want something that's more fun

>>93038258
http://imgur.com/a/ZGHpM lmao my bad

Can someone draw the characters good?

>>93038452
Noted, thanks anon
>>93038390
Sounds boring, anon just kidding I do want to read them but they're nothing I didn't knew beforehand

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>>93038320
>>93038310

Anon, I'm gonna teach you something. Sit down, my son, this is the true tragedy of society.

Some people just aren't gonna make it. And sometimes you can tell, they're never gonna make it. And it's not just making it in business, I mean making it in life. Some people just aren't gonna make it and aren't gonna be anything else but garbage collectors or something.

And these days, some people is most people.

You can only try, but you've got to accept it. Some people just didn't make it when ee were hunter scavengers and died off, and we live in a society where we spare them that and they just subsist.

My son, sometimes the good guys lose and people don't make it.

>>93020355
Different weight class being from Oni. She's definitely the worst eisner nominated artist I can think of..

>>93020502
I hate fairyland is sort of this idea.

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>>93038482

>>93038482
do it your self nigga
>>93038582
why the man shoulders?

>>93032626
Vid related.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PylaKpIbh0

i think it was one of those pussy riot type protests. I don't actually recall what the protest was about.

>>93037811
I would rather have someone try their heart out and make something unintentionally hilarious than the same sack of boring corporate crap.

>>93034629
>>93035139
this is absurd

>>93038491
I'm almost certain this is gonna happen to my ex-girlfriend who wanted to be a novelist... I never had the heart to tell her that her writing was passable at best, since it was the only thing she really wanted to do

it's extra shitty because on top of that, she came from a dysfunctional, broken and impoverished family and had a ton of issues due to that constantly pulling her down... it's like she never even really had a chance

>>93020910
becka has done absolutely nothing to make herself likeable or attractive to kim throughout the entirety of this comic

literally all she's done is be an obnoxious hypocritical creeper (who would, as another anon noted, probably be arrested by this point if she was a guy)

so WHY the hell would kim suddenly care so much what she thinks of her? or fuckin'... want to date her now, apparently??

utterly incomprehensible

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>All this ragging on Steven Universe in comparison to this comic

I adore Steven Universe, and even I think this comic is a big pile of dicks. Steven Universe, at least, has a heart, which is more than I can say for this drivel.

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i dunno why i decided to read nemesis and this in the same day, did week of pain come early

>>93038482

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>>93020228
Literally everything on that list looks more appealing than this comic.

>>93037954
Okay, that does make the comic at least slightly entertaining.

>>93019800
Great. Have more?

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>>93020228

>Small Favors is still a thing

What fucking volume is it on now?

>>93038207
I think it was called Killing stalking.

>>93039896
It's the hardcover collectors version.

>>93020578
I'm very confused as to why this ancient ship's captain appears to be someone with dyed red hair and a nose piercing

>>93038114
You make me uncomfortable and I wish you were dead

>>93020187
Buff dude is totally in the right. Two girls are in his house and saying they want to kill his cat, and he's supposed to just accept it on their word?

He loves his cats and his cats all love him too.

>>93020541
>I'm an anarchist, not a thief, Becka!

Right after she stole cotton candy from the park they illegally trespassed in.

>comic about two girls on a fantasy advonture having fun
>/co/ get super mad at it
There is zero things wrong with this story. Just because something doesn't appeal to you doesn't means it is bad.

>>93020443
>>93020443
Uhh, she is right, you know. Kim shouldn't have opened a portal in a crowded place.

>>93040881
Hi Sarah