CRITIQUE THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF THIS

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Uuuuh this looks like Egoraptor

>>92763417
your animation isn't fluid enough, the guy on the right just moves, there needs to be a walking animation to him. also you should animate the boys face so that its a smooth transition from his happy to shocked face, not just automatically switch from one to the other

>>92763417
Sorry, but your animation sucks.
I can make better things than that in fucking PowerPoint, so don't be a lazy ass faggot, and put some effort on your work. Wish you luck.

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>>92763417

That voice sounds like Peridot

WOW FUCKIN EGORAPTOR MUCH?

NEHGHGHNENEN

>>92763417
>animation
Where?

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>>92763417
We critiquing animation now? lit. https://vimeo.com/216780510 Heres mine, tell me wat ya'll think.

>>92764598
first thing isn't an animation critique, but get a better mic, it was a bit grating to listen to.

something that stood out to me was the few frames at :10. When he pulled and let go, it looked like he kinda flopped. Add a few frames or work on his placement there.

>>92763417
make an animation before asking people to critique it

>>92764598
>no memes
>no shilling a shitty youtube channel
the animation is bad but i like you anon

>>92763417
Guy on the right needs a walking cycle
And this >>92763487

Liked and subbed ya bastard

>>92763417
Stop trying to make your art look like chris o neils or psychic pebbles and become your own fucking artist.

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>>92763417
>critique my animation
>no animation

???

EGORAPTOR WOULD GIVE ME CHANGE FOR A TWENTY

This isn't animation. It's a slideshow with effects.

On the one hand I hate it.

But on the other hand it's better than 90% of cartoons airing today.

>>92764792
thx man, i would have used my schools recording studio but it was booked all the time :(

>>92763417
Well fuck you too.

>>92763417
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1rdIWlf8uI

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>>92766806
Wtf are you talking about.

Googles algorithm literally put your audio source in the recommended videos:

https://youtu.be/1PPA_SEEg88

Stop being such a fucking faggot.

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>>92763417
>'critique my animation'
>posts a Powerpoint

>>92763417
But this is only five fucking seconds OP. Come back with a full minute, maybe even TWO, and we'll see what's to like

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>>92766944
I'm not OP dude I'm >>92764598 sry for the confusion

THIS TASTES LIKE EGORAPTOR

>>92763417
This sucks. Stop posting now.

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>>92763417
>tfw there will never be another Worm and Gnome episode because I'm too fucking busy with life

>>92768087
Forgot to shill out my failed abortion
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/659195