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r8 my shitty ending.

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>The ending happens.
>Jack lives a relatively happy life in the past.
>Except he still doesn't age.
>He rules the kingdom once his father dies, and brings it to a long-lasting age of prosperity.
>Years pass. He begins to make preparations for a long journey.
>He leaves the kingdom in good hands, and departs.
>He travels the world, helping people wherever he goes.
>This goes on for a long time, until Jack finally finds what he was looking for. The Guardian and his time portal.
>They fight, Jack wins.
>"My man, you're worthy."
>The guardian's portal is different from the other time portals, it takes you to any time in your life, even those that somehow don't exist anymore.
>Jack chooses to go back to the future that is Aku, during the final fight.
>He stops Ashi from porting past-jack and herself, and duos future-Aku with past-Jack. They win.
>He explains to past-Jack that Ashi cannot go with him, and makes Ashi to send him back to destroy past Aku.
>He embraces Ashi in a long kiss while all the people he has helped are around him, cheering.
>The cheering slowly fades, along with everything else as the future is no more, with him in it.
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Nice fanfiction OP
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>>92589464
>Except he still doesn't age.
Stopped reading right there.
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>>92589508

why?
his immortality was a side-effect of time travel, he could have easily kept it.
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That's fucking beautiful. But why just a kiss? He should be fucking her on her knees, while the crowd masturbates and cheers, then the gods come and destroy the universe because of that abomination.
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4/10, pretty shitty, but with an inkling of a good idea.
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>>92589553
The whole point was that it was like the time travel never happened in the first place. Otherwise, you have a paradox in that Ashi would never have existed to bring Jack back to the past.
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>>92589693

that would mean jack would forget everything he did in the future.
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>>92589743

Its for the best.
Let forgetfullness wash over him, and erode away his sadness.
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>>92589743
>>92589784
We don't know how time travel affects memories in that universe, other than them not fading instantly.
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>>92589464

www.fanfiction.net
You have to go back.
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>>92589874

why would memories be unaffected?
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