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Which of these comic ideas sound the most interesting? If any

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Metamorphosis: Matt, a 15 year old high school freshman, comes home one night and catches his mother being attacked by an assailant. Completely froze up in fear, he watches his mother get stabbed to death by he assailant. His sister arrives and kills the assailant. At the hospital, the doctor tells him that their mother is dead but he also informs matt that they have technology that can bring his mother back to life, however it isn't covered by insurance. Out of desperation, Matt decides to enter "The games" which is an annual battle royale where competitors must fight to death in order to win the grand prize of a large sum of money and fame.

Kill room: Derrick spends most of his time using a chat room called ChatT where users are able to create accounts and talk with another on the chat room. Over the course of being on the chatroom he has made a lot of friends and enemies. One morning while he's walking to school, he gets abducted by a criminal who knocks him out with chloroform on a rag. He wakes up and finds himself stuck in a building with 12 ChatT users. The kidnapper instructs them that they must kill off someone every hour or they will all be killed.

The dupe and the devil: Rochelle, an esteemed royal knight is given the task of escorting a prisoner to the capital to face an execution.

Black company: Cynthia,a hot headed demon gets beaten to the pulp by the leader of black company: a mercenary group that kills demons in exchange for money. Instead of killing her, the leader takes an interest in cynthia and tells her he will spare her life as long as she swears allegiance to him.
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>The dupe and the devil
when the royal knight arrives it turns out that its his execution as well so in order for him to stay alive he holds the prisoner hostage and has to protect him no matter what.
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Whichever one has the opportunity for the most porn. So, the last one. Yes, that'll do just fine.
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Missing the "guy talks to alternate universe version of girl he has crush on" dumpster-fire pitch.
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>>92340422
Interesting, but I don't plan on going in that direction
>>92340426
lol, including a sex scene might not be a bad idea
>>92341055
what?
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>>92341153
>A boy falls in love with a girl.
Unable to confess, he is gifted with by a deus ex machina with the girl’s phone number. Never minding the strange area code, he immediately calls her, and is overjoyed to find out that she has a crush on him as well.
But, the next day, when he recounts the previous day’s confessions to the girl, she only looks at him with a perplexed expression. After some investigation, he finds out that the girl he called is not the same girl he fell in love with. In fact, she doesn’t exist in this universe at all. She is the girl’s alternate universe counterpart, who has fallen in love with the MC’s own AU self, who too is blissfully unaware of her crush.
Hijinks ensue as the two strike up a deal to give each other their darkest, most private secrets in order to equip the other with the weapons they need to conquer the heart of their other selves. While the two chase their respective loved ones, DRAMA ensues as they begin to fall in love with each other instead and question the NATURE of LOVE.

This is what your story ideas sound like
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>>92340364
The Dupe and the Devil has the most potential as it can focus on the dynamic between two characters instead of the situation they find themselves in.

Black Company is similar, but needs a lot more excuses for the story to work, and it can be seen a mile away it'll turn into a romance.
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You need to avoid ideas that sound like /r/writingprompts from Reddit.

Every prompt is a YA magical teen what-if scenario. Usually everybody is born with some tattoo on their skin with a counter/job or something, and your character has a unique one. Or maybe baby Hitler is involved. I haven't checked /r/writingprompts but if you go there now I bet I'm right.

The Dupe and the Devil is the most interesting idea here because it is the shortest and least fleshed out.
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>>92341235
Nahhhh
>>92341416
Yes, I was planning on focusing on the dynamic between the two characters. Would it too cliche if towards the end it became romance?
>>92341493
I don't get it. What's the problem with magical teens?
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>>92341153
>Interesting, but I don't plan on going in that direction
Yeah, it sounds like the setup for every buddy action movie
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>>92340364
These all sound very generic, I guess all that matters is the execution.

I'm a fan of "survival game" manga, so I'd probably read something like the first two. But even for the survival genre those ideas don't seem very creative at all.
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The dupe and the devil sounds the most interesting because of how little you tell me.

You seem to have good ideas of where your stories can start but then it seems to always go downhill. Like the first story. His mom is killed in front of him. I think it's gonna develop into some sort of character analysis. NAH FUCK THAT BATTLE ROYALE.

Or the demon one. I think it'll explore how this demon's life under servitude until her eventual death will be told from the point of view of a supposedly immortal being but then NAH FUCK THAT, ROMANCE.
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Can you guys give me an example of a plot you find interesting that's similar to the ones I came up with? Also explain why you find it interesting thanks
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>>92342321
>I don't get it. What's the problem with magical teens?
Not that anon but YA fiction is everywhere these days
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>>92344228
The plots are not bad, the important thing is what you do with them.
I feel these plots are too anime-esque and people can tell how will they go out of that.
I think you should read more literary fiction and literary comics like Daniel Clowes or Chris Ware ad understand that the set up isn't everything for a good story.
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