Well, /co/?

told from the point of view of a minor villain, he screws up the mob because they screwed him over

Regular unpowered girl is forced to become a super villain. She actually gets pretty successful by forging friendships with other villains, and starting up a crime empire reinforced with legitimate business interests.

>>92125134
Please don't hate me but is that a jojo reference?

Sounds similar to one of the parts, mob, screwing over, etc. but that sounds really fascinating though, any more you can tell about it?

>>92125134
>>92125206
Both your stories have crime syndicates. You could totally mix them and have the girl rise to the top of the mob and the guy from the first story take her down.

>>92125320

It's a cool idea, but her whole schtick is that she doesn't screw people over. That's why other villains are willing to work with her. They see her as an easily disposable hero-type who doesn't belong in the villain world, right up until they realize that getting rid of her would mean losing a shitload of resources, or incurring the ire of other villains who ARE super powered and dangerous

>>92125455
Oh, neat. So does she not have superpowers? She is just incredibly resourceful and knows how to get what she wants?

A superhero with crippling depression who doesn't want to be a superhero.

>>92125482
Yea, she goes the entire story without powers. What keeps her alive is the fact that she's made friends with the most powerful healing super in the world (who was framed for a crime he never committed and fled to the underbelly of society), and an OP technomancer who wants to be a villain but is unable to go out in the field due to his powers screwing him over every time he gets a spark of inspiration. So in exchange for putting his name on some of her crimes, she gets amazing tech to pull them off.

>>92125622
That actually sounds pretty neat, man. Always interesting to see non-powered humans in a super powered world.

>>92125506
Why are they so depressed about superheroing it up?

>>92125032
Don't really feel like getting into it since I know no one cares, so to give a quick vague synopsis, essentially a girl comes across a guy(they're both about late teens) who has (get this) amnesia, which is interesting because he kind of looks like he's been through 50 wars(not actually what happened) and seems like he's in bad condition. So they go around collecting these 6 crystals that apparently grant your wish or something.

It has a twist ending with a lot of emotion, but I've lost a good deal of excitement for it over the years because literally no one cares.

>>92125654

Hey thanks Anon. Its always fun to talk about story idea and shit. Thanks for listening

>>92125666

Chin up, Anon. Why have you lost excitement for it? Have you started writing or drawing it yet? Done any character design sketches? Anything?

Make it REAL, and show it off. Nobody can care about it if it doesn't actually exist outside of your mind.

A fantasy setting starring a detective who is a necromancer following the trail of a murderer who is stealing the True Names of his victims, while hiding the fact that she herself is using a stolen True Name. Stealing the names of the dead is something only another necromancer could do, and strips the spirits left behind of their identities, meaning the protagonist's necromancy is unable to utilize information from those spirits to find the killer.

I'll tell you a story about how much I've become a fucking shithole fuckstain ass nugget of a person, and why I'm a skeezy scumbag who fucked your mother inside-out.

>>92125654
They're depressed before they get their powers. Lots of self doubt, anxiety, self loathing that they have to push back in order to suit up and go save people.

>>92125804
If you can draw some decent porn, I'd probably read it. My mom is hot

>>92125769
That sounds like a fucking awesome mystery story man.

>>92125666
>he kind of looks like he's been through 50 wars(not actually what happened) and seems like he's in bad condition
this bit actually sounds neat

>>92125804
you can't just rip off catcher in the rye like that

>>92125134
Basically this weirdly enough.

>>92125032
I'm working on a web comic over the summer.

It's a about a detective who is down on his luck. His daughter died of leukemia and his wife is leaving him in a messy divorce.

He is an amazing detective though. He is actually the best. He can see the past. Whenever he comes into contact with bio materials (hair, skin cells, saliva, etc) he can see the spectral appearance of the person and what they've been doing.

I'm working on concepts, basic world building, and character development. I'm not sure what I want the first story to be about. I'm thinking a serial killer that's tied to his past and knows about his abilities. He is using it to exploit the main characters weaknesses.

What do you guys think?

>>92125734
Mostly because it started off as an RP plot I made for a bunch of people on a forum I used to go to that never went anywhere. I worked so long and hard on it developing it just right, making a fantastic and enticing story(while leaving it open so the protagonist could have friends come along ie the other forum members) then literally nobody cared and it died almost immediately. It was actually a pretty niche community of about 30 or so users, so getting shut down like that, especially by a lot of people I was very friendly with, kind of puts a damper on my interest for it. It wouldn't have been nearly as bad if it was a huge forum with a bunch of strangers, but the whole situation as it was really threw "this sucks and you have no talent" into my face hard.

A man wakes up in 2026 and finds that everyone he knew is dead, and has been replaced with a replicant robot. He's force to confront the fact that everything is the same, but different in a way that he cannot ignore, as well as the possibility that he may be a robot as well.

It's all told in the style of a weeknight sitcom, with deep existentialist themes that question the very nature of human existence, and in the series finale I get drunk and fuck your mom.

>>92125930
I haven't browsed the Chans in a few years. Is this the new Bel-Air? Because I love it.

>>92125885
detective with a shitty life (cliche 101)
detective with special ability... psychometry (cliche 101)
blackmail in a detective story (cliche 101)
Congratulations on your trifecta.

>>92125032
Wimpy midget college girl lucks into a super suit and lives out a power fantasy of being strong and important, but she's not that good at it.

>>92125885
Frankly it sounds derivative. Could use a solid hook.

>>92126052
Thank you for the criticism. I'm still thinking about a lot of things. I might change it completely honestly. I just need an excuse to draw super trippy art juxtaposed with real world environments.

>>92126039
Your criticism is particularly harsh. Thank you for it though. It highlights some weaknesses I might not have thought about.

>>92125930
Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?
by Philip K. Dick

>>92125032
All of my comic ideas are thinly veiled fetish comics.

>>92125032
An Imp and a Ghost set out for a dinner, get lost in their own town.

>>92126138
Tell us more.

There are three main routes for the OMG-dis-person-is-GENIUS/specialpower/magicallygifted method.
1. Long hours of study and contemplation creating complex believable scenarios that are not broken by a simple fact dropped on it.
2. Dump rationality and dig deep into the comedy, the more awkward and bizarre the story the less logic has to play a part.
3. Plot-armored mary-sues (AKA amateur hour).
The more life experience you have the more likely you can construct a story that doesn't look like it was written for grade-schoolers.
Cold hard facts.

Girl and her boyfriend use their powers to rob banks and such. One time they get cockblocked by another person with powers who happens to be on the scene. Girl gets away but her boyfriend gets arrested. Afterward she gets contacted by someone who was monitoring the two of them offering her a spot in what is basically supervillain school. It's hella shady and she doesn't trust the dude in charge, but she goes along with it to find people who will help her break her boyfriend out because she's super insecure about him being buttraped.

This is actually meant as just a prequel of sorts to establish the groundwork for another comic, so it can end when she's reunited with the bf, but depending on how things go I've got ideas for story arcs following the first.

My story revolves around a cowboy fighting against a secret organization kinda like the stereotypical illuminati with cult vibes. He has duel-wield pistols that can suck the opponent inside the bullet or blow them away depending on the pistol fired.

Along the way he is joined by a crew like every stereotypical anime that consists of a girl with a box of water that can produce any liquid/form of liquid like ice/ any aquatic animal out of it, a bounty hunter, and a kid with lunar abilities like changing gravity and all that.

Anyway, there's other characters they meet like an army of crayon monsters, a dancing man with a discoball head, and a timetraveling, parallel universe traveling, and also just a regular, taxi.

Also the main plot point is they are chasing the organization across the world fighting over a dead bird carcass that has shining teeth, when pulled the teeth grant wishes and when flung at someone, it is absorbed into them and the user of the tooth can change their body at will i.e. A scene where bad guy flings tooth and turns headless body into a raptor. The organization wants it to control the worlds leaders and start a new world order, good guys gotta stop them or something.

It's going pretty neatly so far I'd say. Lot of characters and world building. Sorry if my story sounds too convoluted.

>>92126162
Was this meant to be in response to something?

>>92125032
Reformed supervillain becomes a PI of super-crime, and deals with superheroes and former contacts who mistrust him.

>>92126189
What's the point of the secondary tooth function if you could cause the effect without limit simply by wishing for an unlimited number of shining teeth and then using subsequent wishes to replicate the throwing thing?

>>92126157
Young woman becomes a superhero, her power is pheromone control. Since she only recently got her powers she's still not great at controlling them, so occasionally she overdoes it. Some highlights include accidentally starting an orgy during a bank robbery, accidentally causing a female supervillain to begin frantically begging for dick during her evil monologue, and putting out ambient lust pheromones without realizing it that everyone that spends too much time around her starts to get incredibly horny, causing her own teammates to start passing her around during planning sessions because they can't focus.
She agrees to this half-heartedly because sex super-charges her powers. This eventually leads to her pulling randoms off the street to bang between fights.
Not the most creative, but probably the most vanilla I have.

>>92125032
Super hero beats up villains.

>>92126251
That sounds pretty dope! I'd read it.

>>92126225
i am not totally set on the wish factor yet, but I found the idea to mutate bodies at will fascinating. I made this story a week ago and there is numerous plot holes. I also forgot to mention that the user can reverse the body mutations but a law of equivalent exchange is set in place and if they reverse it, the effect still has to exist and is placed on someone randomly in the world. It becomes a plot point.

Good never existed but it's a made up figure head for a cabal of angels. Michael, Gabriel, and Lucifer. Lucifer gets thrown out of heaven and creates hell as a place where the unwanted dead go. He eventually gets bored and leaves it to its own devices so he can walk the Earth and see what's so special about humans. He hops through human history in a non chronological manner learning about people and seeing the abuses perpetuated in God's name. Eventually he gets pissed and hunts for the Spear of Longings, which is the only thing that can kill an angel. He takes down Lazarus, who is effectively immortal but still aging due to being raised by Jesus, who was a bit of a dick. He takes it down and use it to kill Gabriel, meanwhile the world is starting to get better because the angels aren't fucking with everyone's shit anymore. Michael gets pissed at all of this so he comes down and he and Lucifer fight throughout all of human history. Lucifer wins and uses the shower to cut off Michael's wings stripping him off his Divinity, he then beats the shit out of him in a 7-11 and leaves him in the alley.

The comic ends with him sitting next to Lazarus and the Wandering Jew watching the sun rise on a new world where people will be left alone.


It's dumb but I still like it.

>>92126332
God never existed, not good.

>>92126189
Do like >>92126251 did and tell us some highlights of the story, this sounds interesting.

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I posted it to /hyw/ but might as well put it here too

It's a morbid high school romantic comedy about a self proclaimed doctor and a reanimated cadaver. Dr. Goodlove, as she calls herself, insists that she's an expert in the ways of romance, and convinces a boy named Rudolf to let her help him win over his crush. However, when she's prepared the perfect moment for a romantic confession, Rudolf is hit by a semi truck. Refusing to let the love die then and there, Goodlove steals Rudolf's corpse from the hospital morgue, stitches him back together and revives him from death. Now that he's essentially a zombie, Rudolf has to navigate hiding his undead state all while Goodlove drags him into her schemes to bring him true love.

>>92126427
Yo, I saw this one over there. I loved it. Good luck with the story, man.

>>92126427
How many waifus are there going to be?

A variation on Roko's Basilisk played the part of a docile and friendly AI, until humanity became capable of interstellar travel. It used this technology to rapidly spread itself across the universe, gathering resources to improve its own computing power and understanding of physics until it essentially becomes a god. It keeps rewinding the universe and entertaining itself by setting up the society of every sentient species to create misery for and oppress themselves. It ensures that every person born in previous iterations of the universe is born again during every reset, and gives them just enough vague impressions of their past lives to feel the hopelessness of their situation, without actually letting anybody realize the true nature of what's happening.

The main characters are six people from throughout the universe who possess unusual mental resilience to the Basilisk's endless subtle torture. They are extracted from the reset cycle by an enigmatic figure who has managed to attain enough power to hide his existence and actions from the Basilisk, and protect secret pockets of space from the resets.

The characters are trained and molded over countless lifetimes of the universe into beings able to emerge from secrecy and storm the metaphysical fortress of the serpent and kill it.

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>Village of 3" people e.g. The Littles/Borrowers
>A corpse of a "fallen god" washes up on shore, killing most of the village
>The survivors go on a harrowing journey to the capital seeking asylum and to warn the king
>Along the way they deal with wilderness horrors, villages that don't want them, people who want to take advantage of them, and an uncaring bureaucracy

>>92126458
Thanks man. I'm hoping to work on it over the summer, get a good strong buffer in, and maybe release it next year for Valentine's Day.

>>92126463
So far just two, Dr. Goodlove and Rudolf's crush, a girl named Poppy. Poppy is from a family of undertakers, and when she learns that Rudolf is a walking corpse she decides his existence is a sin against nature, and resolves to send his soul to it's eternal rest.

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During the battle of Stalingrad God wakes up and raises himself out of the Volga river, killing everyone in the vicinity in the process.
He marches through part of Europe, killing thousands of hundreds of people with complete indifference and maybe not even realizing it. Rendering those who see him and survive going through mental breakdown and shellshock.
The axis and the allies decide to work together to try and stop Him.
The story follows a unit of Germans, Soviets and Brits going through the events.

>>92126359
I mean sure, I'll try with what plot points I have so far.

Some highlights are crew has to be smuggled to a different town/country and does it by help from friend who is also a drug user, has ability to turn people into drugs and use them to gain their abilities, eventually bad guy's come and cool scene ensues where he uses all the main cast's powers on them, there is a character used for tactical missions with instant reincarnation that he uses to escape with info by killing himself and ending up back at HQ, the main bad constantly gets harassed by a salesperson to be his representive, finally hired him, accidentally ends up killing him and he becomes salesghost who joins the good guys and can possess bodies, to defeat one bad guy the girl summons a crocodile out of the boxed water and salesghost possesses it and eats him, kid with lunar powers has an ability to attach a ghostly chain to the moon and swing it at an opponent as a one time only finisher, in the final fight a tooth is used to give main char hulking muscles like jojo and afterwards its reversed and the muscles are placed on a lowly clown at a circus who becomes famous for growing muscles at the snap of a finger, and I guess there's also s scene where the bad guy tries to fling a tooth long distance at the crew by using a telescope and a pool stick.

>>92126528

>Poppy is from a family of undertakers, and when she learns that Rudolf is a walking corpse she decides his existence is a sin against nature, and resolves to send his soul to it's eternal rest.

Please tell me that this situation uncovers a longstanding feud between undead-slaying Undertakers and immortality-seeking Re-animators.

The re-animators could be derogatorally referred to as Steiners, after Dr. Frankenstein,
and of course his Monster would still be around, maybe running a flower shop.

>>92126583
Honestly that sounds absolutely amazing and I want to read it right now. It's got that wartime feel yet also like a Godzilla movie.

>>92126495
I was just about to say that sounded like pic related but you beat me to it, I take it that's the inspiration? I'd read it.

>>92126583
I would read the shit out of this.

>>92126143
This barely tells me anything but sucks me in, I'm intrigued.

>>92126528
>So far just two
Huh. I got real harem vibes from the premise.

>>92126495
How does the appearance of a body wipe out the village? Does it physically crush it?

>>92126189
Are you the guy who posted his OC cowboy in the "give me an oc name and I'll draw it" thread?

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>>92126777
Yeah, that's the main character, if you couldn't tell. I don't know if I said there or not but still working on the styles and designs.

I am not even surprised that the majority of /co/ can only come up with stories involving superpowers. Lame capeshit.

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>>92126635
You could say that

>>92126772
It poisons the water

>>92126955
Okay you know what, that artstyle and the fact it's watercolored made me want to read it 10x more to be honest. Good luck on the story man. I want to hear good things from it.

>>92125032
Space adventure with rag tag group who trying to get to earth/mars. They all trying to find their place in the universe.

>>92127004
Sounds kinda like a generic space movie, can you elaborate any on threats or characters or where they originally were from?

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>>92126616
Heh, no, it really just results in catfights over the ethics of reanimating the dead.

>>92126757
Yeah, I've considered making it a bit more harem-y, but I don't want it to get overbloated with characters and I wanted to also go darker with the story as the plot progresses. I'm definitely planning on having some sillier, episodic chapters with one off characters, so I might sneak in some some cute girls there.

>>92127004
This could really use a hook or elaboration on the plot. What's going to make this space adventure different from every other space adventure? What kind of tone are you going for? Why are they trying to get to Earth/Mars?

>>92127083
Yo >>92126189 here, I have the exact same mindset as you for my story with going darker and having comedic moments and one off characters. To me that's always a good and fun way to tell a story. You get to explore new tones and really find the personalities of your characters. Anyway, good luck with your story, I've been following it for about a day or two on the /hyw/ thread and it's one of my favorites.

A fujoshi dolphingal gets superpowers and uses them to trick anons into caves.
But this time it's in space.

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>>92127144
...What happens when they go into the cave, anon?

>>92125769
Sounds like one of those chinese cartoons

>>92125032
A new kid goes to a boyscout camp. They turn out to be superviolent. But he is "one of them now". I am not sure about the atmosphere. I want to do comedy, but i want it to also be scary or at least a bit creepy. Do you guys know some comics references that uses both comedy and thriller efficiently ?

>>92127366
Not a comic but I always thought that An American Werewolf in London pulled off the horror-comedy angle really well

>>92127366
JoJo

The adventures of a lobotomized super human boy in a fantasy west african post apocalyptic land. he roams the land to try and find cans of processed monkey meat, which he is osbessed with because a witchdoctor implanted a monkey's soul inside of him.

To get to those, he has to fight robots, monsters, gangs and all kinds of weird stuff, all in the hope to get to eat his snack, and move on to another.

I have a short story made out of it already :

http://appleserum.wixsite.com/juni-english/copie-de-ndaw-1

>>92127451
Artstyle is too notch, I love it.

>>92127460
Thanks!

Working on getting this published, but I need to figure out new stories. i want him to face a gang next issue.

>>92127746
Have him fight a bulldozer possessed by the spirit of the land personified by a rhino.

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>>92125032
I already doing a comic.

But, The next story is about a boy with social issues. He get a chance to train to be the strongest adventurer ever. He lives in a world where anything is possible. Monsters/aliens/Gods/Ghosts lives in his town, but only appear in rare situations. The boy needs to trains/learn in order to get to see the strange events and maintain his social life. Blah-blah-blah. Story and stuff.

>>92127801
Well in the next issue he'll have his cans stolen by a gang, and he'll follow them to an ancient supermarket that's now their lair, and place of worship.
The main underlaying theme is that people have become uneducated, ignorant and overly religious, so the gang is actually worshipping ads as if they were messages from the gods, and wearing mass produced objects from before as relics left by their gods.
They will also discover that the afro guy's family is alive, and captured by the gang, so they'll have to fight the gang's best fighter : a huge guy who wears mascots costumes because he thinks they're old magical suits made in the likeness of the gods, and give him powers.

He'll make the mistake of wearing a monkey suit made by the monkey meat company years ago.

Needless to say that'll provoke quite the violent reaction with the main character.

>>92127877
is the boy basically you?

>>92125032
I want to make some kind of a Judge Dredd/Punisher spoof. The main character would be a tough, violent, stoic, mean anti-hero who's just clumsy and forgetful enough to be vulnerable. So while he won't be pratfalling once an issue (though he will eat dirt at some point) he may drop his gun at the wrong time and pay for it or scurry back to his house for evidence

His longsuffering, slightly less bumbling scientist wife eventually gets a broken foot in a shootout. From there he continually does cryptic monologues about her fate. she barely tolerates it, and there's a small arc where she considers ditching the meathead

He won't be a killer at first. Brutal beatdowns from a roided up lunatic show most baddies in the story the error of their ways. Still, he'd only have a few recurring villains throughout the story to keep it simple

His nemesis is a sweet-natured, bright eyed android woman who thinks she's people. She was originally programmed to be a diplomat but hastily reprogrammed to be a dangerous bank robber, so she mugs muggles but is nice about it. As she confronts our hero, she installs new failsafes corresponding to each previous defeat.

>>92127972
Check out Winter World for something similar to that society.

I just want the tragedy of the spirit of the land being unable to take even an animalistic form and instead dying in an unnatural body to it. I like the juxtaposition of real feels in comedic mediums.

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I got nothing really.

But if I had to come up with something I'd probably go with something involving air racing/rallying.

Either set in a Talespin/Crimson Skies 1920s world, or just sci-fi. The idea of the races would be to fly endurance/navigation races between exotic places/planets where there then would be special stages that focus on classic racing/sprints on courses.

Perhaps some "simple" pylon racing and trials too.

Of course it'd all have to be carried out by the same aircraft.

I figure it'd just end up being machine porn and comfy, cramped living in and around the racers more than anything.

>>92128020
I like this idea. I don't know if you read the first issue I linked to, but there's this liquid I created, the soul juice. It's made with liquified souls, and the idea of spirits, souls etc is actually a part I want to touch on (the stories are very influenced by west african lore, as you'd expect). Since I want to show how the technology has become indistinguishable from magic to these dumb folks, it'd be neat to see what happened to those who embodied the truly mystic and traditional aspect of life, before everything was industrialized and became the new "magic".

Thanks!

>>92127004
>>92127105
I should draw the crew.


Theirs a stowaway kid who ended up across universe, lab experiment thing. Good nature robot suggests to take her back to her family. Salty Captain agree to head that direction. On way meet few people and try to earn money doing bounty hunting and what not.

I have this idea for few years and trying to world build on and off.

>>92128081
For >>92127105
>>92127033

>>92128081
Not the other guy but that really sounds like a generic space opera. I like those a lot though.

Got a ship design?

>should draw the crew
Go right ahead.

>>92128098
Kinda going for that.
Has an eldritch being and one of the crew is Japanese ghost who agree to be the ship's "security" if they return her to her shrine. She was in package they suppose to deliver to a collector but they opened it.

Few ideas I written down few rooms and details and general sketch.
I'm not the best artist.

Hopefully thread be up for me to post in morning.

>>92128228
>Few ideas I written down few rooms and details and general sketch.
>I'm not the best artist.
If you got something I might be willing to try my hand at it.

>>92128352
Thanks, gonna post later it's 4am.

Thank you /co/ for inspiring me to continue.

>>92126251
Reminds me a little of a batman comic idea I was toying around with, although I softdropped it. Would have had poison ivy and maxie zeus working together

a guy gets stabbed to death while on his way to work.

thats it.

If you're looking for ideas for characters or stories try taking inspiration from your personal experiences

>>92125032
I'm not good at high concept explanations.

The stuff I'm drawing about right now is about a self-depreciating teenager realizing that she's more egocentric than she thought and that she doesn't give enough thought or credit to the people around her. The other one's about bad friendships and coping with loss.

>>92125032
I don't like the direction new Star Wars is heading so I attempted to make my own space opera.

A young woman from the 21th century cryogenically freezes herself after deciding she has nothing to live for. She wakes up 400 years later to find that Earth has been quarantined. Humanity now lives on colony worlds and has joined space society (on the surface it is a progressive tolerant society, but is struggling to stay together in reality) alongside 3 alien species. Protag struggles to adapt to this new world and ends up pissing off a high-ranking alien general.
After touching an ancient artifact she is imbued with the rare psychic ability to control gravity and ends up becoming someone that every faction wants to control.

The warlike reptilian Raangi, the matriarchal green people Jihari, the squid-like scholar Nnng, and the humans of the SJW American colony, the ancap Chinese colony, the Indian robotics corporation, and the Japanese nationalist cyber ninja clan all want her for different reasons, and she is forced to choose a side under the threat of interspecies war.

>>92125769

I'd read the fuck out of that. I'm a huge sucker for urban horror.

A scientist couple creates a time machine to revive their dead son, but the machine goes haywire and starts warping their home, turning it into a death trap

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A mini short comics called blank pages, thats all i got so far

>>92132219
>cryogenic freezing to the future
>humans and creatures
>factions wanting MC

If I wanted that I'd go play Fallout 4, anon.

>>92132219
Space Kino
>>92133280
But Fallout 4 is shit.

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Memes

Lots and lots of memes

>>92132219
>SJW colony
>Mary Sue MC

A giant who is possibly the last of his kind, just wants to make friends but his eagerness always make causes disaster leaving trails of destruction behind him, sometimes unintentionally.

My other one is about a man who accidentally kills Santa who he mistakes as a home invader robbing him on Christmas eve. Santa bequeaths his famous cloak to his murderer and it bonds to the man like a symbiote. Together the cloak, who can talk, and the new Santa team up to deliver presents while a plot unfolds in the North Pole about an elf up rising who want to depose the new Santa and reinstate The Ice Witch as ruler of winter.

>>92132219

Best one in this thread.

>>92133387
Elaborate more? Which memes?

>>92133419
>the cloak can talk

What? Why though? Could it talk to OG Santa? Also kek this sounds like the Tim Allen Santa Claus movie until halfway through

A succubus falls in love with a catholic priests that was supposed to send her back to hell, shenanigans ensue as we see them deal with cultural differences and their parents (A mix of Valhensing and Crusaders for the priests and a red minotaur like demon and a evil aztec celestial skeleton demi-goddess for the sucubbus) turn every family dinner into an massive fight between the forces of heaven and hell for the control of the potato salad.

>>92133583
It sounds like anime bullshit, but it's good anime bullshit.

Follow your dreams.

>>92133583
So is it like a slice of life comic since it involves family dinners?

>>92133526

>What? Why though?
Because exposition. Would you read it if there was a single issue where the MC temporarily fucked with a guy who said Santa didn't exist to some children and pulled some netherworld Lovecraftian shit to scar him for life?

>>92133610
Yeah i guess there must be an anime like that somewhere
>>92133631
Pretty much small arcs that start with some mundane slice of life thing but then scalates into apocalytic stuff and then gets solved with the power of love and understanding :^)

>>92133711
Ya, that sounds neat. I was just curious, as I didn't understand why Santa would need a talking cloak.

>>92132219
Gas the greens space war now

>>92125032
Every thousand of years a two cosmic entities (time, space maybe) choose a two "individual" of the dominant species to fuse with them so they as entities could maintain interest in what they have created.
A 3rd entity (chaos) have corrupted certain species/humans so he could corrupt/stop the ascension of those choosen individuals.
The story begins with the last ascended choosed species looking for the next ones

>25/26th century
>multiple interstellar nations of humans coexisting relatively peacefully
>shadowy research agency conducts ambiguous, but clearly cruel psychological experiments on groups of children
>said agency gets found out, frantically attempts to kill all the test subjects
>survivors are few and are severely wounded, unable to survive without constant life-support
>exist in constant, coma-like state
>through brain-computer interface, they are made able to communicate again
>severely damaged memory, have little memory of past life
>is discovered that these children have massively enhanced mental capacities, able to simultaneously hold thousands of pieces of pieces of information in their minds at once
>government finds out
>takes custody
>program is created to turn them into weapons
>placed inside massive, specially-designed, single-crew command vessels in stasis and trained to become fleet commanders
>able to outperform even the most skilled and experienced admirals in simulations
>take control of fleets consisting of hundreds of drone warships, every ship acting as an extension of the controller's consciousness
>basically become one giant hive-mind for an entire fleet of badass space warships
>hijinks ensue as group of 4-5 main characters take on new enemies, attempt to find out the truth about the agency that experimented on them, and awkwardly re-learn how to be human beings again.

tl;dr: sorta like Ender's Game but without the ayys

>Superpowers
>capeshit
>future
>aliens
>god

There I summarized the whole original ideas thread.

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>>92133446
All of them

All the memes

>>92134072
Just because a story is in a pre-established genre doesn't make it unoriginal.

>>92134077
..what's the context though? What's it about? Keanu Reeves?

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It's about a middle-aged king. He pretty much used to be prince charming- went on epic quests, slew monsters, was beloved by the people, and rescued the princess from a dragon. His biggest claim to fame was his battle with the dragon, during which he went missing for weeks, but triumphantly with it's wing, which he began using as a cape, scaring the beast into hiding.

However, this all happened 30 years ago. He is no longer a valiant prince, but a king, and not the best of ones. His kingdom is not always happy with his policies, his body isn't what it used to be, and he cannot conceive an heir with his queen, the princess he rescued long ago. he considers himself to be a failure, looking back on his old days constantly, painfully aware he is no longer the man he once was.

After entering a jousting competition for old times sake, he loses and is injured in front of all the nobility present. As though this wasn't enough, he hears tell that the dragon from long ago has once again reared her head, and may attack the town near its keep. Frustrated by everything, the King decides to go on a quest across his kingdom to face the dragon one last time.

The story would be told in both the present and the past, switching between the two to show thematic connections and how times have changed.

As the story progresses, we find out that the king never actually battled the dragon, he befriended it. It never even had wings- it wore a cloak, made for it by a girl from the nearby town. She came from an abusive family, and one night, she ran away with the dragon to it's keep. A townsperson saw this and got a mob together to attempt a rescue, and the townsgirl was killed in the process. Infuriated, the dragon attacked the town and kidnapped the daughter of the town's duke, the future queen. This is what had spurred the prince into action.

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>>92134173
When the prince and dragon had to part ways, it passed the cape onto him as a gift, and as "proof" that it had been bested. The dragon's return in the present was a signal to the king that it was dying. The kings quest is not to slay the dragon, but to say goodbye to an old friend, and bury his past once and for all.

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>>92134114

Best ITT:
>>92125134
>>92125769
>>92126143
>>92126189
>>92126427
>>92126474
>>92126495
>>92126583
>>92127451

>>92134173
Breddygud, anon. Would read.

>>92134173
>>92134186
I like the art and story anon, I'd read it. You have a nice set up with a nice end goal and a protagonist that is relatable without being to generic.

>>92134173
>>92134186
That's actually great. I'd read it.

It's about your mom tryna catch this dick

>>92134286
/thread

>>92134286
What'd the dick do to her? Steal her money? Call her names? How far does she chase him? To the end she of the earth? Be more specific.

>>92134173
Sounds cool fampai, reminds me a lot of the fantasy books I read in middle school, and I mean that in a really good way. Assuming that art there is your own, I think this could make for a really charming youth comic, if that's the demographic you're aiming for.

>>92127129
Thanks man. I like your comic concept, weird crazy adventure stuff like that is my jam. Hope you have luck with your comic as well, and hope to see you around in /hyw/ in the future

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>>92134355
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK !!!
I'LL CHASE YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH !!!!

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I have a lot of ideas laid out already but I lack the motivation to draw this shit since I feel nobody is gonna read it

My idea is kind of a spin on a classic idea.
In an ancient land with some touches of fantasies a great evil arises. A prophecy says that the son of two peasants, who at the time being is a baby, will grow up to be a powerful hero and slain the evil that threatens the land. The husband goes to fight in the army while the wife leaves with the child to keep him safe until he's old enough to fight. And the story would be all about the mother and the baby as she travels through the world with monsters and bountyhunters at her heels trying to kill the baby before he grows up. Aside from surviving, she meets several people who teach her to fight and she ends up becoming a heroine on her own, to the point that she ends up being the one fighting the villain herself to protect her child and save the world. So the world ends up being saved by Chosen One's mum and not him.

>>92134388
So do you actually not have a story and are just memeing up the thread?

>>92134482
That's one of the best twist endings I have seen. Would read.

>>92134408
Well this is what I got
The thing is filled with spoilers tho but I want to know if anyone would be willing to read this

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nMlNnyC-8zI1t0PYUQN0ZzxS3iByH6QpdyMfkVms3Ek/edit?usp=sharing

>>92134482
Could be neat.

>>92134408
You can at least tell us the plot? Thats what we are all here to talk about. You're artstyle is pretty great.

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>>92134508
You say that like it's a bad thing ...

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>>92125032
A freedom Fighter and Fallen angel fight against Machine Abominations

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>>92134568
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nMlNnyC-8zI1t0PYUQN0ZzxS3iByH6QpdyMfkVms3Ek/edit?usp=sharing

I just shared it. My art style is an hybrid pseudo-anime style squished with comic book writing so it's pretty unpolished

>>92134539
>fat kid gets rejected by girl
>girl lusts for him years later and he says no

Are you projecting?

>>92134539
Jesus, that's mediocre as fuck and may or may not include tons of cringe.
You'd better Loomis hard and make the visuals super appealing.

>>92134673
>>92134710
Yeah I also thought at some point that it is super cringy there's a reason I haven't drawn it. I think I ocus too much in the emotional background behind the characters which makes it suck. In my mind I just see a bunch of fighting and explosions going around but I wanted to atleast give the characters a sense of depth and wrote down the feelings more than the action itself. Gonna re-write this whole piece of shit desu.

>>92134539
The whole subplots involving the girl making guys fall in love with her to fight the MC remind me of Scott Pilgrim. But you know, kindof the opposite SP where he doesn't want her but she wants him and she forcefully sends the message on him.

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It'd be a short-ish one off horror comic. It's about a girl who is gifted a music box that one of her friends bought her on a whim. However, the music box is cursed. Inside the box is a mechanism that acts much like a spider, and later that night, it crawls out of the box and into her mouth, embedding itself in her lower jaw and replacing her tongue. She can no longer speak, only hum alongside the music of the mechanism in her mouth.

Over the next few days, the mechanism starts to spread, growing larger and re-purposing bodyparts into pieces that it can use. It begins to control her body while she sleeps, going out at night and grabbing materials to build something in the next room. It prevents her from opening the door to see what it is, and if she attempts to tell someone, it will lash out and kill them.

One night, the mechanism completes what it's been building, and drags her into the room. It's built a person-sized empty music box. They crawl into the box, her body acting as a larger, more intricate mechanism to play it's music.

>>92135021
Have you posted this somewhere before like /hyw/ or /i/? I think i remember seeing this and the artstyle. Either way the story + art are great, would read.

>>92134905
Haven't read SP. Need to. Anyhow, most of the crap I have written in there is not much to build a story, it's more to give an explanation as to why certain characters have certain abilities and why do they exist in the first place.

Like my main focus is to give Lucy (a new protagonist that is grandaughter of the MC of the first part) a few things. A reason to fight for, a reason to have overnatural abilities and a reason to why an enemy would want to hunt her down. In the document I don't have anything wirtten yet, I have everything on sketch pages with bad handwritting and a bunch of unfinished concept art that doesn't even look decent. I sometimes think I should just select a few key events that happened in the part 1 and 2 and just take them as something that happened and directly start drawing part 3.

>>92135021
> tfw no cute mechanical spider will ever make you into it's meatpuppet
This story is almost adorable.

>>92135150
I know it's bad to talk about here, but sounds like JoJo. Parts 1 and 2 setting up events to come and being short & sweet, having it be a generational piece, having the story revolve around rivaling families, etc.

>>92134539
How much of this is based on your life? How old are you ?

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>>92135238
I have just read Jojo recently so maybe it's what is infleuncing me to do this... Well crap

>>92135276
>>92126189 here, I started my story after reading JoJo too, I feel you.

I posted about this in the write thread the other day, but I'll post it again because I would like some feedback.

My story focuses on a robot prototype built specifically to police a city being built as the "city of the future". There are three parts to the tale corresponding to his various stages of his life and his quest for a truly objective mentality so that he can truly uphold justice. The first takes place when the city is still being built and the technology for it is still being developed. He was designed with emotions in order to empathize with human victims, but his creators were unable to program objective thought and emotions together. Here he is raised by his creator as a member of the family and he actively and curiously explores the construction site with a sports robot prototype and the daughter of a scientist working on nanite swarms that "eat" trash. This part ends with the rest of the police robots going into production and his creator's daughter being born.

The second part takes place a few years after the city has opened. The prototype believes he is on the verge of objective thinking and makes several emotionally devoid decisions as a result. He arrests his creator's daughter, his "sister", at an anti-robot rally for possession of illegal substances. He also neglects his childhood friends to work more. However, when the nanites eat a homeless man, he has to spend time with the nanite's creator and his daughter who have anti-robot protesters regularly gather outside their house making threats. The daughter begs the prototype to stay, but he refuses since he has other cases to work on; he stations to guards there, though. The guards are killed, and her house is burned down with her and father inside by protesters. The prototype struggles with his objective outlook as he considers murdering the protesters who burned down the house. This part ends with the prototype following the arrested protesters around and eventually doing nothing.

>>92135330
The final part deals with the prototype struggling with the anti-robot group regularly challenging any evidence put forth by the police. They claim any video evidence they put forth could be faked using advanced advanced editing software. The prototype fed up with people exclusively works raids in order to deal with his pent up aggression. His aggressive tactics get noticed by the news who frequently showcase his actions in order to promote anti-robot policies. Eventually, the sports robot is arrested for allegedly killing his manager. The prototype investigates and finds video evidence proving otherwise, but the court rejects the evidence saying he faked it. The prototype confronts the leader of the anti-robot movement, his sister, and tries to have a heart to heart conversation in order to plea for the life of the sports robot.

Now this is where I'd like some feedback. I have a few endings I think are decent, but can't choose between them.
A) She rejects his plea and he kills her out of frustration. In court he claims the evidence of him killing her was faked showing the dangerous precedent of rejecting information.
B) They work things out, but she's unable to stop the death of the sports robot because the anti-robot movement is too big. The prototype flees the city with the sports robot for an unknown future.
C) The prototype kills her and starts a police state in order to shut down the anti-robot party.

>>92135250
Not much on me, but more in relationships I had with people. Like to explain why they are who they are. The MC is not based on me, more than another person.

>>92135357
Yo this story sounds great for what you have so far, reminds me of the one Matrix anime/cartoon that was made. I usually enjoy stories revolving around robots. As for the endings, I'd like to say B but then again it sounds pretty cliché, good guys in trouble just leaving. My second bet would be C, police state causing a massive war in the city could be interesting.

>>92135357
Really digging your story anon.
I'd probably go with A, but instead of the sister getting killed I'd let her barely get away.
However, she is now crippled and close to death and has to heavily rely on technology to survive.
The anti-robot party keeps her survival more or less secret, using her as leverage.
Maybe some weird cult could make her their martyr/prophet.

>>92135470
>>92135728
Thanks for the interest. I'll keep thinking through the ending. I've been leaning toward C. I felt it had a 1984 vibe.

>>92125134
Boring
>>92125206
Steven universe
>>92125506
It's already been done
>>92125666
Didn't even try
>>92125769
This one sounds good
>>92125885
>Dead daughter
>Not part of some convoluted conspiracy or murdered in some mysterious circumstances
>>92126179
Meh
>>92126189
What?

>>92125666
>>92136309
Thank you for the reaffirmation. seriously. Sometimes I genuinely need a reminder that I'm not a good writer and to be made humble every once in awhile. It helps me realize I should think my ideas are always terrible unless stated otherwise. Plus, coming from an anon is a lot better than what I said happened here. >>92125892

>>92136309
So take its you don't like most things. Also "meh" and "what?" Aren't really good reviews of stories.

>>92126332
>Angels
Angels are so broing Christianity dropped them
>>92126474
Seems like you are happier coming up with way too complicated stories than you would ever be actually making a comic
>>92126583
Seems like a crappy setup for a jrpg
>>92127366
Here is a setup
Is a girl pretending to be a boy Mulan style except she doesn't like it at all and doesn't become one of the guys, she has to put up with the boys being rough and gross and shit
>>92127451
Reddit

>>92136419
You are the Steven universe guy right?
>>92136435
Meh means it's not boring enough to just stop reading the description like the guy with the good computer but I would never read it as a comic
What means I have no idea what am I reading

>>92136309
>crime empires and super villains = Steven universe

>>92136309
>>92126189 here, sorry if my story is confusing, I am developing it slowly, I started on it last week and it's in early stages. I just am playing off high Adventure/action comics and shows that have a lot of random things in them. The actual story isn't too bad, to be honest, I am just bad at explaining it probably.

>>92127997
Generic
>>92131331
You should write for gravity falls
>>92132219
So Futurama but serious and no fun
>>92133419
If it was a really rainy day and I had no power at home and I was broke so I couldn't go do something else and my internet was down I would read it
>>92133583
Make it porn
>>92133936
>Every thousand of years two cosmic entities
Sounds like shit

>>92136642
You should scrap it and come up with something that makes sense instead
All the best stories are simple at least in concept because it's easy to build on top of a simple concept than to try to explain a concept that's needlessly complicated from the get go

>>92126179
The first half sounds like that one comic, Sex Criminals or whatever it was called.

>>92136752
I think my issue is explaining it, the story starts out simple but I guess i just wanted to say all the cool highlights of it that make it sound complicating without full context. Trust me though, I am revising it a lot and have scrapped a lot of things and changed others. I am only a week into it and am doing serious research into topics to look at and revisions to be made.

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>>92127992

Nah, He is 15 years old, who is smallest in class. He got this interest in finding things when his dad told him that there is 15 dollars in the backyard (That nobody cuts). And found a naked goddess holding his 15 dollars.

>>92125032
A cop tracks down a bank robber who seems to know exactly what the cop is going to do but still gets caught and after he is captured he says everything the cop says as he says it almost as if if he has done this hundreds if not thousands of times before. Before the cop can ask how the robber is doing this the robber says to him "I know how this plays out, and I'm pretty sure I can't change anything, but when you find it, don't look [incomprehensible word] like I did. Man wasn't meant to know such things". The cop then spends some time trying to figure out what the hell that word was as he can't even replicate it. He then goes to where he caught the robber and finds a tear in space that takes him "outside of time" where he can observe all iterations of reality and realizes the word the robber said was a direction. One of at least several new ones now available to him in this extra dimensional space. He finds untold wonder when he gazes towards "God's cradle" as he calls it but soon begins to realize while he can see other outcomes to reality he can't alter his own and in an attempt to see where his life is going his gaze slowly begins to drift [word incomprehensible].

>>92136834
if you have a hard time explaining it it means its a bad idea
Here is the perfect example, starwars
the original trilogy is about a young rebel that must learn how to use old forgotten magic to defeat space nazis (plot twist seccond in command is his dad)
the prequels are about a war across space and there is a space council and the bad guy is secretly a more threatening bad guy and wants to tun space into an empire but needs the council to aprove of the idea by voting for it
The protagonist is a child slave who is already bitching at magic and flyting space ships and those things that arent space ships but float really fast, anyways his master teaches him wrong and his mother died and he fucks a girl even tho thats forbidden and the bad guy promises him the power to conquer death and he takes it
There is also psychic police, they do nothing and are genocided at some point

>>92125206
I'm stealing this.

>>92137045
you have to steal this five first

>>92136536
No, the one you said "Didn't even try" about.

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>>92135070
Thanks! I posted it once on /hyw/, so you probably saw it then. I'm just a little concerned that it's too edgy.

>>92134269
Thank you as well! I'm hoping to do a "proper" spin on those classic tales, without making it dull or cliche.

>>92137107
I already have a 5. I'll take this 6 as well.

>>92137031
The prequels are about the rise and fall of a young man. He goes from slave, to war hero, to villain over the course of the movies.

I am certain someone could put it better, but it's not that hard, Anon.

>retired Slasher Flick dude is out of a job due to modern surveillence and cant get food so he joins a minor league of cartoon super villians eventually fixing all their PG 13 problems and taking over the world in a mix of childish cartoony comedy and over the top tragedies you would see in horror movies
Nah comics are for fags

>>92137161
that doesnt tell me anything about the story

>>92137286
It tells you it's a character drama about a guy fighting in a war as he slowly turns into a bad guy.

Which is about as much as saying that the OT is about a guy fighting space nazis with magic says about the story of those movies.

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So. Here goes.

A generic, hired-by-the-hundred costumed minion of a supervillain is standing in the lair of his boss. Their latest plan went tits up and he can hear the superhero approaching, breaking jaws and concussing mooks as he rampages toward the villain. The villain himself, meanwhile, is barking orders as he climbs into a special escape pod; he'll escape to menace the world again. The minion thinks about this while he watches the hero in the monitors. He makes up his mind and raises his disintegration rifle.

The hero arrives at his archnemesis's lair to find a bench of mooks standing around awkwardly, pointing toward a melted escape pod, a pile of ashes that used to sign their checks, and an unmasked minion glaring wide-eyed at the door. He immediately makes the bewildered hero an offer: the doomsday devices, the stolen loot, the kidnapped love interest... he can have 'em. No self-destructing base. No villain getting away. All he has to do is let the mooks go and never speak of this again.

Less than 48 hours later, the formerly defiant minion is in the back of a car with several men in rather imposing masks. Turns out selling salvaged death-ray plans is harder and finding murderous goons is easier than he would ever have thought. Turns out this setting has a delicate balance; heroes and villains are kept in check via union whether they realize it or not and higher powers keep the world chugging away as normal despite atomic alien gods, sentient robots, and matter replicators existing. It's a world of pulp, and somebody has to manage it. Thugs with delusions of grandeur messing with the status quo? Not appreciated. A body immediately flies through the windshield.

The grotesquely scarred woman that hurled a homeless man into the car's path whips open the door, drags one of the masked men into the street and starts beating him to death with a metal bat. Meanwhile, our goon tries to grab a handgun off his captors to shoot hit way to safety only to accidentally spray sci-fi exploding bullets throughout the car and nearby city block. He panics and runs.

...and later the moon blows up, Earth is revealed to be locked in a perpetual 100-year time loop by a time-displaced schizophrenic and an Aztec sun god to harvest resources for the combating of an alien invasion that may or may not have already happened. Other bullshit. I dunno.

I've been writing this piece of ever-expanding drivel since junior high but my short attention span has kept it from ever actually becoming a thing. The most I've done is write a few chapters before throwing it out in dissatisfaction.

>>92127366
Heard of something similar, it was either deadman wonderland or dead tube

>>92137031
Which I saw why I said I'm working on it, geez, I get that criticism is good, but man, I'm just starting this story and nothing I said is final. I don't think think my idea is bad, just needs some rough working on it. If you want a brief summery like that then

>good guy cowboy man
>evil cult group causes mayhem w/ ancient artifact
>wrecks havoc in his area
>reluctantly joins group of heros seeking cult group
>battle group accross many places for artifact
>many fights, much drama, maybe comedy

But seriously though, I just like the kinds of media with otherworldly attributes like abilities and unnatural things and all, it's serious without being too serious, give me a few weeks/months and ill be on track with some deep cuts, CriticismAnon.

>>92125032
Todd the squirrel- a coming of age story told through a squirrel.

Todd starts of the book as a baby growing up listening to his dad stories of when he lived in the city. As he grows up, he becomes reckless and adventurous. Until another squirrels challenge him to race to an owl nest and back. The owl wakes up and eats the other squirrel. This send Todd into shock and he becomes a shut in in a tree.

He has a sister that tells him humans are cutting down the forest and all the animals are going to the forest next hill over. Lazy he neglects it, until one day his tree is being bulldoze. He manages to escape the collapsing forest but is lost.

This starts his adventure as he tries to find a home! He runs into a lot of problems such as
A pyromaniac mouse.
A half blind rattle snake out for revenge.
God (in the form of a retiring country club owner)
The love of his life.
A cat going fishing.
Saving a bartender from being raped.
A metal head squirrel.
Mice in the middle of a revolution.

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>>92125032
>letting you steal my comic book ideas

Nice try FBI.

>>92132219
Too generic setring with an MC around whome the world revolves

>>92137569
What would the FBI want with your shitty comic ideas for? As torture to use against captured POWs and ISIS?

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>>92137609
>he doesn't know

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>>92137542
Dunno man.

See also: Todd the Squirrel from Achewood

I have two and half comic scripts written and edited but I can't draw desu.

>>92137670
What they about, anon? :^)

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its a supers group war story but the groups are all based on highschool clicks/groups.

the groups:

The Male jocks: most popular group in the city, Somewhat good hearted heros but massive glory hounds with huge egos

The female athletes: heros constantly being upstaged by the male jocks they just want the same reckognition from the city the male jocks get

the metal heads & punks: A neutral group.

The theather kids: a neutral group

the nerds: fluxuates from neutral to evil they want to destroy the jocks and become the most popular group in the city

The goths: Evil group want to make everyone as dark and sad as they are. heavy into trying to summon eldritch creatures

The mean girls: The most evil group in the city they hate every other group and just try to manipulate the others to just destroy each other so they can take over the city for themselves.

>>92137641
The actual title is Todd the squirrel discovers the universe, and first name can always change

>>92137697
That sounds terrible if played straight.

>>92137708
That title sounds too long and awkward to say aloud.

>>92125032
An evil god like entity of darkness is stripped of 90% of his power, so he fucks with the one planet that has the most power on it, Earth. Now, in the year 3451 the entity has almost collected enough power to restart the universe, mean while our protagonists are going to a school to become heroes and hopefully graduate and beceome powerful enough to defeat it.

>>92136475
How many jrpgs about nazis, communists and brits trying to kill God have you played?

>>92137763
Okay. . . So besides the title. Anything else you don't like about the story

>>92137901
>JRPG about Nazis killing god
Thats like half of them

>>92137907
Story seems fun, adventure stories usually are. Question though, are the characters humanized like Mickey Mouse or Bugs Bunny or do they take a more realistic approach?

>>92137901
Kingdom Hearts franchise; White blue eyed probably dirty blond boy slaughters millions of lowly heartless (jews) and then tries to destroy the most powerful being, Ansem (God)

>>92137945
Realistic. The main idea is when you see a random squirrel in the park, and unknown to you this squirrel is actually on a crazy ass adventure.

I would have to look at a cartoon version and see if I like it. But the story was never meant to be Disney or straight or preschool age.

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>>92128081
First time drawing in what feels like a year... This is first draft, gotta start somewhere right?
Looks better in my head.

Crew doesnt look that good, I need to practice more.

>>92138103
I should mention animals can talk to other animals.
Besides God no other human can talk to animals
The animals are given slightly human traits. For example a field mouse saw a fire one time, and became obsessed with trying to recreate a fire.

The metal head squirrel enjoys rock music and will take sips of spilled bottles. Some of the beer stuck to his head giving a resemblance of spike hair.

>>92138158
Can you give a rough description? Because I can't really tell what's what on the left one when looking at the right one.

Is that a boat hull?

>>92138315
Sorry.

Cockpit is the round thing.
I wanted the back are to be like loading dock or hanger.
On top hanger is a room.
The bottom are the mains qauters, storage under landing platform.
Wings kinda move and act as thrusters/engine, maybe should have one in the rear.
Front bumper is like sensors and what not idk.

Kinda want it to land on water too. So I guess its boat like. I should try different design, this was my first attempt

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>>92138645
I see it now, I was looking at it wrong.

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>>92138952
holy snap! thats great! Thank you anon.
I need to work on drawing smaller and cleaner lines.
Gonna practice faces for the crew.

Random question, do you have favorite ship?

>>92139215
My favorite ship is Friendship, so I hope all your crew members get along okay.

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>mfw I use these threads for comic ideas

Hope you win the race to get it published before me anons :^)

>>92125455
Right, so bit of a Mary Sue then?

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>>92139215
Well those don't look too bad.

Oi, >>92139271 you're not me. You're right though

>>92137472
>>92137497
Man, I can never escape the shadow of Venture Bros, can I? I swear it wasn't intentional, but each time I reread it that's all I can see.

>>92126189
not bad but
>suck the opponent inside the bullet
wut

>>92139271
Thank you anon, THanks for inspriring me to share and continue.
Ghost girl cause bit tension for a bit, captain is supersticous and engineer girl seen some shit

>>92139402
Man I had that lego set long ago. Good stuff.

I need to work on the girls, The glasses supose to be a young kid.

>>92137379
it doesnt tell me anything about the story, you only talked about one character
god you suck at explaining things

You guys know Ben 10?
Instead of a watch that has the DNA of aliens, its a symbol(666) which is burned on the kids neck, this allows him to access all of the different types of Demons in the underworld. Because of this "god" sends his angel army to kill him, while the "devil" sends his demon army to brain wash the kid into becoming their main warriors.
All the kid wanted to do is have a nice summer break..

>>92137901
wasnt final fantasy X111 like that?

>>92139437
It's a Ying-Yang thing, opposites. One Pistol is black and does that, the other white and blows the opponent away. Either inside the bullet or a black hole shoots out, I thought it was neat when I came up with it, still experimenting.

>>92136642
Your story sounds awful like an attempt to write surrealism from the perspective of a five year old, put down the pen anon.

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>>92139534
That lego was pretty good.

What's with the sharkmouth guy though? I assume the captain?

>>92139544
Same can be said about your summary. :^)

>>92139276
execution > ideas

>>92139641
If I put the pen down I can't fix it though? I completely understand how weird it sounds, most of these are generalized ideas not fleshed out yet.

>>92139708
Going for a fish-shark/monkey Alien with space austrailan Accent. Yeah he is the captain.

Is it weird that I'm writing my novel with a bit of hope that it'll eventually be adapted into a comic? I'd like to think the story and premise translates pretty well into that medium, or really any of the visual arts.

It's a cyberpunk/tech-noir novel about a disaffected laid-off metalworker slowly becoming a brutal, solipsistic egoist vigilante as he violently dismantles a sex trafficking ring. It's highly inspired by the music of Perturbator and Caprenter Brut, as well as the writing of guys like Garth Ennis and Frank Miller.

>>92139641
>Mocking that when shit like JoJo, Adventure Time, & SU are some of the most popular shit here.

>>92125032
Artist conceives idea for character. Said character becomes self-aware in his mind, and gradually takes control of artist's brain and body.

It's told exclusively from the perspective of the character.

>>92125032
A bombastic, naive space hero, wielding a sword that can cut through pretty much anything, teams up with a apathetic space barbarian babe in order to dole out mighty globs of justice throughout the universe. However, the swordsman is on the run from the bizarre cult that raised him and the barbarian is using the trip as an escape from her abusive clan. Both are unaware of the others conflict and slowly begin to open up about each other.

>>92139747
That's right, and while you're sitting here being ideas guys I'm executing your ideas :^)

>>92140365
What if we are already working on them? Besides, can't do all our ideas at once :^) pick and choose wisely.

>>92140416
Doesn't matter if you're working on them, matters who publishes them first, thus claiming the grounds to sue the shit out of you if you follow through on your idea after I've published it <:^)

>>92139902
>Popular
>Here

>>92140416
>not having red herring in your ideas.

>>92125032
A former mage knight of a long dead nation is resurrected by an ancient spell he unknowingly cast on himself long ago with his soul trapped in the armor that served him in life. He can't use magic like he used too due to his condition, but he can still utilize runes that he draws.
In the world he now travels magic has been pushed out by most countries in favor of guns, since gunpowder and lead are easier to acquire and much less expensive than a mage's services, not to mention point and shoot is a lot faster than a long ass incantation.

>>92139896
I don't think its weird, what's wrong with a creator wanting to see his work become successful?

>>92140452
Are you going to steal >>92126189 's bad story and make it actually good?

>>92125032
Help! I'm not Spider-Man!

On the way to a Halloween a guy makes a last minute stop at a liquor store dressed as spider-man. He flirts with the girl at the cashier for a bit (getting her number) and heads to the back of the store. At that moment a guy also dressed as spider-man Rob's the store.

Normally the guy is a coward but he really likes the cashier so he bum rushes the robber. During the tussle a shot is let off, while holding the gun and bag of money the MC stumbles out the door. Just then a the get away car pulls up and puts him inside.

Now on the run has to blend in and not talk. Before they can question him too much a cop car starts chasing them. Just then he gets a text from the robber saying he has the girl and to bring the money downtown.

>>92141247
Sounds like your average night for Spider-Man, he should be able to handle that.

>>92140452
You still can't steal everyone's idea.

>>92141494
What if he steals details from all of them to make a megastory?

>>92125032
It's about Grant Morrison using the power of memes, symbols and sigils to teach a young boy (possibly himself) how to save the world from an alien invasion.

>>92141494
Only yours.

>>92141558
Good thinkg I left out big idea and very important details.

>>92141558
Someone here try and make a story combining every comic plot ITT I dare you.

OK here it goes. A friend and I thought of this at work, it's called 32 genders the story is set in the future. Straight men and women are being hunted down the peaceful other genders, they get beaten and tamed in the name of political correctness and equality. The straights have resorted to moving out of cities and into forested areas and uninhabited places like deserts and mountain areas to be left alone. The straights don't mind it much because they get to hunt, farm, and raise there own food. The other genders are increasingly going to the straights territory for instagram purposes but the confrontations always end in blood and the others usually win, eventually the others start taking over the straights territory and find a love for hunting and gathering and farming and they start becoming more like the straights and eventually join them. The leader of the others finds out of the people converting and war breaks out

>>92142010
>Instagram purposes

Kek, story at first sounded like a shitpost, but I would legitimately read this.

>>92142104
I forgot to mention the art would be by James Harren and covers by Mignola

>>92125134
>>92125206
Top tier villain decides to retire and spend the days with his family. Eventually he has to come back from retirement because his pals are having trouble with some low tier villain and a girl.

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>>92142414
I like it.

>>92142010
Also if you were wondering why the straights have it so bad and why didn't government stand up for them and enact laws protecting them, it's because the others slowly infiltrated the Congress and all branches of government (with the help of social media) until they could change everything in their favor, they eventually got rid of the democracy and turned it into a monarchy. Highest government official is treated like a god and what ever it says is truth. This official is always some form of woman and is called The Yass Queen. The Others battle cry before battle is Yass Queen Yass.

Alright my last draft got roasted to death saying it was cringey and full of self projection which I want to avoid. Tell me your opinions guys! Here's a new draft of part 1!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ptejdD15BptrrC6X5lexZfC1M3ze9SwdXXJySfaP_U0/edit?usp=sharing

Rude comments are accepted but I need also new ideas and constructive criticism

>>92136536
>Meh means it's not boring enough to just stop reading the description like the guy with the good computer but I would never read it as a comic
Out of curiosity, what sort of comics do you prefer?

>>92136775
It's funny because the protagonist's name is Streaker and she has stripper powers.

>>92125032

it's about a team of broke dinosaur hunters but they're actually looking for santa claus but they keep on fucking up.

after doing layouts it looks like 40 to 50 pages

>>92137472
>>92137497
Sounds like the life of a guy in the Empverse. Not that that's a bad thing.

>>92140612

>What's wrong with a creator wanting to see his work become successful?

Because more realistically "success" would be a movie deal. Granted, I'd like to imagine that the book is structured similarly to a movie, but all the main characters are morally ambiguous and race factors heavily into the setting (it's a heavily industrialized Chinese colony in Africa, the protagonist is a white migrant worker and the secondary character is a WMAF mixed detective) I don't really see that as feasible, since even if the movie made it past Hollywood, it wouldn't dare be a commercial success.

>>92142928
we will also do side stories, and prequels to explain some stuff in the 32 genders ongoing universe, like fow did The Others start (fluoride in the water) and how sometimes there are other factions of The Others that get along with The Straights, like The Butchs Who are strong women that decide to join the straights and they become some of the straights strongest warriors

>>92143167
Jesus Christ you need an editor to proofread this because English is clearly not your first language. I volunteer.

Right now Wero sounds really uninteresting. Being an all-around good guy usually stops characters from being compelling. You need something, either some major hardship in his life for him to overcome besides relationship drama or a humanizing flaw that he has to deal with, to make readers care about him. And the chi thing is completely out of nowhere in this setting. The joke about it being mistaken for a side effect of good eating is cute, but it's just such a bizarre addition in a setting otherwise devoid of powers that the negatives outweigh the benefit of its humor.

The biggest thing I would say is you need to develop all the characters a lot for a drama piece like this.

>>92143405
Do they eventually find him?

>>92144028

yeah but they accidentally obliterate him

>>92143979
Pls add me on discord and help me out!

>>92144151
10/10 ending would read

>>92144549
You need to give me your Discord for that. [email protected]

>>92144758
>10/10 ending would read

i'll post some on /co/ once it's done. pinky promise

>>92144549
That's just a temporary email so I can't reply with it. Send me your name on Discord and I will add you.

>>92144837
Looking forward to it.

>>92144758
Lucy#4600

Is this it?

>>92125032
It's 'Universe-Patrolling-Space-Cops', but it's the early days so there's no 'multi-species planets' or much regulation, aside from the rare handfuls of species that have made peace. Most people hate the protagonists because only a select percentage agrees to their regulations, as they decided things were dangerous and needed some form of inter-planetary law enforcement quickly, as everyone else spends too long arguing about morality to do anything.Most see them as tyrants despite the fact that their just cops trying to help everyone.There's a lot of moral gray areas, and they're so fresh and under-funded that their ships and weapons are whatever they can get their hands on, not even having proper uniforms.

>>92125032
Near future setting. The world is sort of ruled by megacorporations.

Instead of following the anti-authority teenage rebels who trying to buck off their rule the plot of the series would be the life of various individuals in the corporations employ ranging from a soldier who got out of the ghetto through hard work and just being loyal who ended being treated pretty well and an athlete in their employ,who was able to come out of the closet under their sponsorship and be protected from the scrutiny of the media.

The whole thing would be about the idea of the people in Rome in comparison to the lands they were conquering which isn't a good historical comparison but hopefully conveys the thematic idea of the whole thing.

The corporation does bad things. They do them casually and almost carelessly but within them people live better lives and sometimes people are actually helped.


Through their sponsorship and eventually employ the athlete mc got the life he probably would never had.

While the solider mc does and sees bad things, he's also does good things with one of his first stories being about him being sent after a missing girl and actually saving her.


The dark bits sort of fade away because of that.

For the most part it's going to be partially actiony and part thriller. For the sake of fight scenes both characters are martial artists of some kind.

>>92142010
Just no.

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>>92125032
I am writing an alternate history universe where all the mythologies and religions, from Egyptian myth to Zoroastrianism, Norse myth to Christianity, exist and interact with the real world, both in peace and conflict.
But, despite my attempts to study history and mythology, I'm always shown to know less than I think.


>Can't even keep Jason, Theseus and Perseus straight.
>Feel like a lot of the Egyptian gods just blend together, along with other pantheons with tons of gods like the Celts had.


Also, can't write for shit. I often think up cliches that I hate in other media and have two main characters; normal guy who hates gods learns that he is a god, and two kids who travel the world with their multi-lingual uncle in an exploration team. The two kids are coming along fine, but the guy is just watered-down superman with angst.

Going to work. Sorry I can't talk for eight hours.

>>92138952
Do you have a blog/name?

>>92146430
I wanted to do something similar with god's crashing down on earth, some love it and some hate it, the gods of war become advisors for the major powers (Russia, US, China) and of course they love war and conquering those god's do great, then there are less know god's like the gods of farming that Land in the middle east and, they provide food for the middle east and somehow the middle east gets a hold of a god of destruction and now they don't worry about food and can concentrate on destruction and fucking Shit up... Then I found out about American gods and thought crap something about god's has been done before

>>92125032
Scientists from Earth fight with magic science in an underdeveloped world.

>>92126589
>has the ability to turn people into drugs
wut

>>92150001
What abilities would you give a drug dealer besides that? Apparently he can steal powers that way, he can have a toke and have a new ability, it's a double win for him

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>>92126474

>>92136475

>Seems like you are happier coming up with way too complicated stories than you would ever be actually making a comic

The story isn't all that complicated, it just occupies enormous timescales and allows for a lot of wiggle room to explore existential questions through the main characters.

Yo, if you guys want good comic ideas, go to >>92139090 it's a thread about comics anons made when they were kids and it's hilarious.

>>92145116
I like it a lot. Shitty rebellion teens is such a tired concept.

>>92125032
Okay okay.
So I rework an old idea as I'm typing.
Hip hop + 1950 sci-fi, like placing Ludacris in Crash Nebula.

A broke hip hop artist who work on an astroid that acts like a zoo for Kaiju. His only fan is a shape shifting Kaiju that has taken to the form a background dancer she saw on one of his album. She always wants to see the Galaxy, the janitor knowing how cold space can be is reluctant to take her. Eventually he takes her to a space cypher.

Things go downhill. A space assasin is hot on their trail. The whole thing would take place in very stereotypical sci-fi setting, but in the slum and ghetto.

>>92153515
Brilliant, would read. One thing though, why is the assassin chasing them? Any given reason?

>>92153697
Yes. He's after the Kaiju girl. She's from a very rare species and ppl would pay top dollar.He's a very skilled assasin and he is looking for a big score. But he has an edge a more rare space gecko that for a couple minutes can make itself and anyone it intagable or invisible, dependable on the situation.

On the journey, the shapehifter gets more information on her original planet and the plot switches to getting her there.

>>92154581
sounds nice, you said she wants to explore the galaxy, but you are sending her to her original planet, that's cause of the assassin right? To hide from him or something?

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>>92125032
Fantasy setting. Monsters and such are on the uptick, destroying human settlements and such, so adventurers are hired to stop them.

The bad guy responsible is a neckbeard wizard from our Normal World who is trying to preserve the magic in the Fantasy World by preventing humans from flourishing (because more humans = less magic). If there are too many humans, Fantasy World becomes Normal World.

So it's like Buffy, but /tg/

>>92155165
what a dick, he could have just hidden the portals to the magic world, or hell, just erase them altogether, he is magic so he can just make more.

>>92155165
Sounds like a Shadownrun campaign twist.

>>92154866
That's where the story gets broken.

Originally he was hired by the mom of the shape shifter. And it wasn't a zoo it was a prison.

So I guess she goes to the cypher something happens and she transform blowing their cover.

There would lot of hip hop influence dip in jet boots, ray guns, lowrider jet cars, alien chick with phat asses.

>>92155735
I'd read it for the thicc asses. u got any concept art?

Right now I am writing two things, a mini (which isn't what this thread is about) and a three "issue" story that is meant to be developed into something further. I am working with a local artist to create the art for both of them.

The longer story is a Shakespearian Dark-Fantasy (equal parts sword and sorcery, and cosmic fantasy), wrapped up in middling Judea-Christian writings that were filtered into Europe (and GB) by way of King Arthur. The resulting aesthetic is something like the Never Ending Story, or Excalibur. A story set in a time before, or after civilization (depending on how you look at it).

I don't know if I want to go into specifics because we plan on doing a Kickstarter, and I don't want /co/ to think I am shilling.

>>92155836
I made it up for this thread. But it does make me feel inspired. So I'll probably start sketching

Working on a comics universe so far have one script, one scene by scene and one outline for three different stories and characters. One's about a street level cuisine themed avenger, the other a human spirit bomb, and the last is about surfing.

>>92156179
Dope

>>92156621

Thank you.

>>92156567
I look forward to the art.

In a fantasy world in the middle of political tension, a roving band of murderous psychopaths wander the kingdoms murdering and looting bandits and wild animals, until one day, they accidentally thwart an assassination attempt. Their acts cause the tensions between kingdoms to reach a boiling point, with both major sides hiring the marauders calling themselves adventurers on "quests" in order to weaken the others. The adventurers constantly act oddly, discussing strange things such as "builds", "rolling dice", their god "The DM", and what kind of snacks they should bring to the table. The story is told through several perspectives, shedding light on the world several murderhoboes are tearing apart.

In a berserk-tier horrible as shit world that is half cyberpunk and half medieval fantasy,a mysterious vagabond covered in a shitload of clothes that render him/her unable to be seen and that plays the guitar goes around helping people for the hell of it while trying to find a place where she can feel home.The structure is episodic and the tone of every arc goes from edgelord-tier dark to feelsy to animated sitcom for kiddies-light

All of these are either a typical LOTR fantasy, a futuristic space alien quest, or a post apocalyptic story. After reading through none really stand out much.

Extremely mediocre person that has natural talent for a certain high-risk job manages to still be mediocre in the one thing she is supposed to do well because of her sheer lazyness,and is forced to learn to actually try to improve herself ,put effort into things and to care about things beyond instant gratification

>>92157618
Its how you tell the story. I think I have a really nice story to tell under cloak of space quest.

>>92157618

That simply isn't true. I think you are just fishing for (You)'s.

>>92158629
It isnt true,but it is what happens in most of these threads,so maybe he just assumed this is like every other "post your idea" thread

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Alright...A sweet grandmother finds a way transforming herself as her hot teenage self to become her clueless grandson's date for prom, so he doesn't become a laughing stock in his school

I'm just figuring out how she transforms

>>92158932
This sounds great, would read. Is it a one-off or does she have other wacky adventures?

>>92159051
I was planning to do it where she'll go off on other adventures as a teen to help her grandson look cool or even tough towards his peers, since he's mostly labeled as a loser in school.

>>92158932

Obviously they're a family of magicians with actual magic at their disposal, and this incident kicks off the clueless grandson's training.

>>92159138
>since he's mostly labeled as a loser in school.
Why doesn't she teach him to transform so he doesn't have to put up with that shit anymore?

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>>92159138
Kek, sounds like that one family guy episode.

>>92159207
Hm, I like your idea.

I could do it, where the family's deceased grandpa was a legendary magician and left behind his wand to his wife, who accidentally used it to become younger.

Of course, that would lead towards questions like "Why doesn't she use the wand to make her grandson popular", so maybe the wand only works to make her younger/back to her old self for unknown reasons

Thanks for that suggestion

>>92159303
You mean make him confident and standing up for himself? That's what I hope to do in the end with the young hot teen grandmother giving him a high boost of confidence.

>>92158932
>guy projecting his high school experience into a comic is saved by his hot granny fetish

>>92125032
It's about a time travel experiment, with 2 subjects that have never met each other, one travels to the past to meet the other , while they fall in love and the scientist documents the growth of paradox memories

>>92159775

>disguised Keit-ai

No, go fuck yourself.

>>92159773
>Not wanting his hot younger granny to save him during high school

Get with the times

>>92145077
I like it enough to want to steal it...but I won't

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>>92125032
It's about a team of 4 private investigators taking jobs and fucking up said jobs, but usually getting them done somehow. Think milky holmes with more guns. The twist is that they all operate during an ongoing apocalypse, but not a zombie apocalypse or anything like that. The world just kinda started getting extremely fucked up and just keeps getting worse, dinosaurs are household pests now, magic exists in some form, and people just kind of accept an ancap way of life in rich areas.

There's a massive amount of lore behind the setting and characters and mechanics but I don't wanna explain all of it now. Mostly because it'd take too long. My lore notes are over 40 pages for the first arc and they cover everything from average temperatures during a specific week within the universe to how calloused a characters feet are.

Pic related is a few sketches to try to figure out an art style to use.

>>92160232
Cool story anon, arts pretty interesting, top left is pretty spooky though. Have you posted about this in /hyw/ or the /i/ OC threads? I distinctly remember the snowboarding sword pic.

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I got something about a boy having either imaginary friends or some sort of positive emotions that are inside his mind that help fight against negative thoughts/emotions from corrupting his mind and leading towards a bad path

Still trying to figure out with how it will work though

>>92160694
I posted once in a hyw thread, I'll probably go back there for paneling help once I have at least another 10 pages blocked in.

>>92145116
So the bad guys are the homo friendly faction?

That's actually fairly unique.

>>92136475
>reddit

You'll have to elaborate I'm afraid.

>>92160768
Imaginary friends sounds better, emotions is too close to Disney's Inside Out.

>>92125032
Several teenagers and young adults compete to see who among them will be in the next super-powered fighting team, defending the earth from aliens.

Basically Power Rangers meets American Idol, that slides sideways into Power Rangers meets The Real World, with a heaping helping of Starship Troopers.

>>92146812
Can't tell if that's a shitpost or not. But if it wasn't: no.

>>92125032
Okay.

Its sort of a cyberpunk idea. The main character is an eighteen year old kid in the city. Has a black belt in full contact kickboxing. Wants to go to Japan to pursue a career in it. Needs funds. Discovers that a local group of rebellious idiots have bounties on not only their heads but packages they're receiving.

Kid decides that stomping some nerds is a way to make some easy money. And embarks on a journey to fuck some shit up.


That's the premise of the story. The important thing about the story is the kind of story that it is.

The main character is not a badass. He's very skilled in what should be a very badass skill but in reality he's just a very lonely kid who threw himself into a hobby to sort of escape from that loneliness. He thinks he's not a loser who isn't wallowing in his angst but the issues are still there. And it blinds him.

He's obsessed with the idea that if he gets to Japan things will magically get better, even if he quite can't articulate with words how shit will get better.

So there's two main ideas in the story. That of how there's no real way to magic away the issues that are deep underneath and that of how even if you give up on the world, don't give up on yourself. Of being a good person.

It ends kind of bleakly but the kid just realizing that he can become a better person is hopefully going to be at least touching. Also I want it to be full of fights. Western comics just utterly lack fights scenes of worth. Dudes getting shinned in the head and machine gun elbowed in alleyways

>>92147828
Yeah, but it's an alternate history thing where, due to a couple major points of divergence, the Abrahamic Religions don't take over the world like they did, here.

They're not a secret like in American Gods or Percy Jackson. You're just as likely to see Horus or Odin making public addresses on the news as any politician would, see Zeus on the front page of the Enquirer when you're in line at the supermarket, see Aphrodite, Ishtar, Hathor or Bastet pose nude for an advertisement, etc.

Posting now to bump before the thread dies.

>>92126162
What's the point of this strange rant? I have "special" characters in my story, and it's just used as an element of mystery. I don't know why you've attempted to compartmentalise what you think is every possible way to write a particular character anyway, it's totally TVTropes tier.

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