Paranatural

>>92103184
mo shit no one carr bout

>>92103184
Alright Zack, you've got my interest. I ask that you please don't waste it, that I don't regret giving it.

At least something is happening. I thought I'd be more hyped for this, after waiting all this time.

Oh shit son, is something finally happening?

>>92103184
>The disjointed and weak narrative flow was actually a stylistic device this entire time

>>92103248
>Cut to lesbians
>Cut back to the gang and the conflict is resolved and everyone just references what happened without ever showing anything
>Backgrounds vanish entirely
>The tendons in Zack's hands sever completely

>>92103184
>stepping on two separate twigs in the middle of the hallway
hah

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>>92103184
>It's Battin' Time™
>Isaac running back to do some saving + redeem his image
This is what I came for. My MVCs showing their potential. Could it be, that the prophecy is starting to take shape?

FREAKING HELL, ZACK, DON'T MAKE US GO THROUGH ALL THE LAGGING BORING SAPPY BULLSHIT FOR NOTHING

>>92103297
It would've helped if all the time between the end of hitball and now had been spent on properly building the tension instead of piling on exposition that's most likely not going to have anything to do with what's currently happening. I can't see how the lesbian date and ayy lmao girl are going to fit into this right now.

>>92103184
>It took two whole pages and a week of time to convey that it's a trap.

My god this shit sucks.

>>92103876
It would've helped if hitball was its own chapter with a small lesbian vignette to break up the tension. The chapter could have ended on a half-joking cheesy cliffhanger.

>>92103184
Okay I have actual trouble parsing what's happening here. The fat teacher is the one who's being possessed by the spirit and it leaps out to attack the kids, but what's the hispanic teacher doing?

>>92104624
No, the twist is that it's not 1 of the teachers being possessed - it's all of them

Mr Garcia is luring Isaac (the most powerful) away so he can't help his friends

>>92104678
I think it's more likely that none of them are possessed.
I don't even know why I read this anymore.