>takes break from comic >forgets how to write dialog N-Not good!

>>91056068
Huh?

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Wah! What are we going to do on the embers?

>>91056068
What's the context?

Otherwise all I can come up with is:
"How are you not powerful?" "The hellfire you can spawn out of a whim."

>>91056107
Is Ava going to shrink back or stay adult sized?

It's not dialog but the panels have too little dialog.
It feels very halting to read.

>>91056161
I think she still isn't adult-sized, she just went from like 4' to 5'

>>91056104
He's going all "why don't you make my comic" again. You didn't expect some tumblr stalker to suddenly stop being an autistic trash, didn't you?

>>91056487
wut

>>91056424
For many women that IS adult size, anon.

>>91057495
I think tumblr would not agree with you ;^)

>>91056149
The context is that the hot guy canonically stutters all the time, and OP thinks he should be out of character and not stutter after witnessing everybody die and say it's bad writing

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>>91056068
The god awful pacing is what completely ruins this comic for me, the dialogue is usually alright I think.

>>91058707
>wait a week
>new page
>odin turning and looking

>>91058725
>wait a week
>several pages update
>it's all just a sequence of ava jumping from point A to point B
everytime

>>91058707
It keeps fluctuating between too fast and too slow.