Work On Your Donuts!

Do written characters count?

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>>90785165

>>90785165
>>90785185
whoops

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Made this a week ago, give it to me straight /co/, I want to improve!

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I'm trying to come up with an outfit that has a weave pattern in it, preferably down the front, that won't be a pain in the ass to draw in a comic.

>>90785357
LEARN TO FUCKING DRAW
also robes make him look like a homo

>>90785407
i'd personally just line the dress and add the weav-ey texture as a lighter detail, like in the wings

>>90785357
needs bigger hands

>>90785574
>LEARN TO FUCKING DRAW
Well I did say to give it to me straight

>>90785680
I definitely need work on rightly proportions, I had to redraw his head three times since the others were too small

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I've been practicing for a few years now, I think I got myself a pretty respectable cartoon style for my upcoming webcomic. What does /co/ think?

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Trying to figure out some poses for an animation with one of my characters.

(1/1)

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>>90789023

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>>90789081

Just did this one. Think I'll use it as the starting keyframe.

Think I'll figure out the keyframes before putting the tail in.

>>90788476
Use gesture lines and rounder shapes. The character looks really stiff

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>>90784976
Just a random drawing. Been slacking off lately.

>>90788483

QT

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Got a mom character I'd like to share. Her name's Ryann.

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Still haven't gotten around to working on this. Anyone care to point out anymore glaring flaws in this pose?
>>90789599
She's certainly leaning back a lot.

>>90786413
that fun with a pencil book sure helped me

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messing around with my butterface character, Angie. Trying to get her just the right amount of ugly.

>>90795036
She's not ugly at all. She's actually really cute. You must go deeper.

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>>90795101
Then I have failed.

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i didn't do this recently, but hey. though i'd share.

>>90796721
It's cute enough. Are they yours?

>>90786413
If you actually want to improve: read the /ic/ sticky, do Loomis and whatever else the sticky tells you to, and post in /beg/ and hope someone bother to give you crits.

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>>90798133
yeah they are! though it has been a while since I've drawn them. I tend to use that image as a reference to look back to when ever i feel like drawing them again.

also, heres the kamen rider like suits they wear sometimes.

>>90789599
I've noticed that a lot of your characters are leaning back. Unless it's a style you're going for, try drawing them not leaning to one side.

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guys , have you ever seen one of those cartoon episodes were a character gets a job out of nowhere and then even when te character tries to get fired he keeps getting promoted or favored by the boss


well that's what my life has been lately,drawing things for my boss

yesterday he asked me to make a storyboard for a hero based on this
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Archaea

any ideas on what to put on the costume,powers or enemies? go nuts i feellike anything will be accepted by my boss