Can this story work as a comic?

>>89349323
It's not that easy. No company would pick you up without a resume. I guess you could try to self publish it but pretty much no one would read it unless you really pushed in social media and appealed to a certain niche market like Copra.

>>89349362
Well, it'd be a digital comic. I didn't mean sell literally. I just meant, would it pick up some sort of fanbase? Would anyone read, or care?

>>89349388
I guess, but if this is based on a real person, you could get sued.

>>89349468
I thought about that. The designs for my characters have been changed, as have the names because of this.

>>89349511
Then I suppose it's got a shot, dubs-senpai. I mean, I've seen way worse sounding shit in those "how's your webcomic" threads so, it's all up to how much talent you and your friend have, premise doesn't mean all that much as long as you can deliver desu

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>>89349556
Well, here is a sketch for a chatacter. What do you think?

>>89349644
Not him, but that's hideous. Dead on arrival, don't even bother. Stick with dubs, you're good at that.

Im told Im a decent writer, but I lack motivation these days. Half assed plan right now is just to write fanfic for practice, hope it gets a following, take requests, then use the social media following to convince publishers to accept this book Ive been tinkering with.

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>>89349727
He is like that for a reason.

How about a more "normal" character?

>>89349771
Left was the original draft
Rught is current one

>>89349727
Sorry, I am a new fag. What is a dub?

>>89349771
Still shit. Seriously, unless you want to make the next Sonichu/Tails Gets Trolled don't bother.

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>>89349814

>>89349915
Stop. Right fucking now.

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>>89349931
Neck beard?

>>89349644
Those are some good sketches. Just not the type to fit in, sadly.

>>89350429
Fit in? In what? Common media?

>>89350469
In the story. I think the artstyle is good, but the design of the characters don't fit in. I think the tard should look more like a freak than usual.

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>>89350628
Oh. Here is the tard. And we are re-writing to include more characters. He's autistic, so a lot of anger.

>>89349915
It's good, but if you NEED to draw some greentext Dmitry's tale is far better

>>89349323
I'm still reading, but so far it looks like you're an asshole anon. You went out of your way several times to instigate with this guy.

>>89351651
Nah. My stories are circled in red. The asshole is my friend.