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What went wrong?
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>>88695370
Maybe the people old enough to comment on the internet about it are just too aged out of CQ's demographic. I know that excuse doesn't fly all the time for children's media, but I could see myself buying the first volume for my nephew (who's just starting to learn how to read).
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>>88695370
Gigi went full tumblrtard.

Man, hiimdaisy was incredible. Why couldn't she just do that instead?
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>>88695370
For Gigi? Not much, she just landed a publishing deal with First Second.
I actually wonder if they'll let her do whatever or if they'll take on a more editorial role.
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>>88695496
videogames are dum lol
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>>88695370
It feels like it wants to do too much, and is rushing to do those things. Shit like Nightmare Knight secretly being extremely affable and redeemable should be built up to super slowly, but now it's just kinda there and it's like "shit the comic's only half-done?" I actually have no idea how they're going to keep it interesting. I assume it's supposed to be a TEC situation since a lot of Cucumber Quest feels like Paper Mario, but TEC still spent most of the game as a strict antagonist before turning around.

There are probably other examples of rushed plot points but that's the only one I remember.

Though I still think it's funny that Gigi didn't realize she made a trans character that was all about deceiving people, and by the time it was pointed out to her it was way too late to change it.
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>>88695683
I dropped CQ right after that chapter. Am I missing much? It just seems boring.
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>>88695496
videro games are for sexist little boys
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>>88695683
did she seriously. christ
I just stopped reading when the pace became glacial. before that i loved it.
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>>88695496
I haven't read the comic in a while. What's tumblrtard about it?
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>>88695496
That's what I want to know. Fuck, even if she wanted to stop doing video game comics she could have at least left the existing ones alone, rather than deleting them. I fucking hate when artists do that shit, there is never a goddamn reason to purge your old, well-known and well-liked shit.
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>>88695985
The newest update is Cucumber doing a sailor scout transformation into crossdressing. Also the Rosemaster arc was pretty much nothing but tumblr shit.
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>>88695370
Kickstarters always kill momentum for webcomics

It's basically a fact at this point
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>>88696037
See: Ava's Demon
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>>88696093
And the extremely slow, extraordinarily painful death of Homestuck. Something so unique and charming brimming with potential decayed into a desolate desert of despair and disappointment.

Remember the god who fell from the sky and bled; the man, the myth, the monster: Andrew Hussie
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>>88695370
It progresses so slowly that it's not worth following.

And it got so boring that it's not even worth reading up on it once a year.
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>>88695683
What about Glitchmaster being the true villain?
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>>88695496
She left Tumblr though
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>>88697663
Are you listing another example of rushed plot points or a hypothetical way to make Nightmare Knight's shit interesting?
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>>88697717
well, I guess a bit of both, but I meant the second
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>>88695683

Yeah the Rosemaster thing was hilarious. "Oh she has power over people's names and uses that to trick people." What was she thinking? Doesn't she actually have trans friends? It's as baffling as it is funny.
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>>88697775
The real question is does Gigi have any friends at all?

I doubt it
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>>88697775
pls explain, I read all through Rosemaster's story but I'm a fucking dumbass who doesn't know the context behind this Gigi controversy
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>>88697803
The most common stereotype about trans people IRL is that the only reason they're dressing as women is to seduce you and trick you into letting them rape your ass. It's not common nowadays but that used to be their thing back when the discourse hadn't kicked in yet. So making a trans character all about lies and deception feels like a /pol/ joke, almost.
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How long until she has her traditional fit that her comic is being discussed on an anonymous public forum.
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Ah man I just remembered, back when the MSPA forums still existed and they had a Cucumber Quest general, as soon as it was revealed Rosemaster was trans a mod stepped in to declare anyone caught using male pronouns or referring to her as Thornmaster was getting banned.
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>>88697883
Is she wrong? The usual 'WHY DOESN'T SHE MAKE THINGS I LIKE INSTEAD OF WHAT SHE LIKES' was posted before anything even close to an actual criticism, and it's pretty legit the pacing's shit.
But it doesn't matter because someone dumb said something stupid so everything said is yet again dismissed.
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>>88697883
https://twitter.com/gigideegee/status/813519371377090560
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>>88696036
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>>88697883
I still remember when the paranatural auth. literally said "if 4chan likes my comic then I must be doing something wrong"
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>>88697854
I see. Thank you.
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>>88697953
Maybe my timezone's set wrong but that says she tweeted about eight hours before this thread went up.
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>>88697854
It gets fucking funnier. Her response to accidentally making a stereotypically deceptive trans villain was to make another character trans, who wasn't like that.

The character was Bacon, a complete and utter joke character whose whole thing is being pathetic and weak.
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>>88697968
Which is odd because he shilled the comic pretty hard here
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>>88697979

What if Gigi actually doesn't like trans people very much.
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>>88697979
Is that right? I thought it was just implied he had a sister.
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>>88697979
>Bacon is trans now
wtf I left CQ because I thought it would never update and I come back to this?
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>>88697992
Well he did shift the comic to be more, diverse and lbtq+++++ friendly after that.

On an unrelated note, he also fucked up the pacing and the artstyle. Which is what actually made the comic worse
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>>88698019
Possible

I wonder what group she does like
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>>88695370
It's a webcomic it was never meant to be good.
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wait
https://twitter.com/gigideegee/status/813177597731295233
is she referencing that one fetish blog? the one where Bubsy the Cat is now a psychotic trans woman? who still has her dick?
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>>88697979
Wait, when was bacon revealed as trans? Been a while since I've read since her updates are at a snails pace now.
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>>88697979

Do authors not realize that including current-era trans issues is going to make their work ludicrously dated and embarassing to read in four-five years time.
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I'd let Rosemaster have her way with me.
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>>88697979
Seriously? Well I'm happy I stopped reading a while ago
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>>88698157
She goes by "Pancetta" now.
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>the creator of this soulless comic is fucking the creator of Undertale
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>>88698222

The range of expressions in this comic are so boring.
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>>88698234
I think Pancetta is just a character on Punisher Pumice.
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>>88698256
>Toby Fox is fucking a hack

Sad!
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>>88698256
>Toby made a fun track using the soundfont from based SNES Kirby games for her
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=t43ZIrsfof0
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>>88698259
You're not wrong but basing it on a character that's supposed to be stoic makes you look retarded.
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>>88698279
>one hack is allegdedly fucking another hack
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>>88698256

Hardly. she's jealous of how popular it got after she "threw it a bone" by advertising it at release (because her comic did not benefit at all from Undertale's popularity)
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>>88698302
Their child is gonna be fucking so fucking 1337
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>>88698279
>Toby Fox is a fucking hack
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>>88698256
>he's been inside her Donut Kingdom
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>>88698298

If your character is limited expressively you play around with angles. 90% of these are the same 3/4s view.
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>>88696037
Did it kill Unsounded?
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>>88697775
I completely missed the subtext that implied Rosemaster was trans. I thought when they talked about Thornmaster he was like a previous version that got killed or something, and that's why she was sad.

I don't really read this comic with my full attention.
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>>88698234
ohhh from the part where they were watching the superhero thing? I thought it was just bacon playing a character, since s/he did the same thing in the play and everybody still called him "him." So did GG confirm that bacon is trans now or is that just something people were inferring?
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>>88698322
She's questing for his cucumber
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>>88698322
>>88698369
Ew
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>>88698234
>>88698368
Yeah, I thought Bacon was just a goofy guy who doesn't mind crossdressing.
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>>88698369
She's signing his sword with her tongue
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>>88698355
I thought it was a joke about how Nautilus doesn't remember anything from history right
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Gigi's problem is that she's not a good writer. She has great comedic timing in short bursts but this is beyond her. She would have created a much more interesting comic if she had just made everything a textless art comic. Any dialog people have in their head is going to be way better than what Gigi spews ruining pretty good artwork.

>>88698341
No Unsounded takes periodic hiatuses and still manages to have a better fucking pace than every other webcomic out there.

Fucking gunnerkrigg. Could that be anymore glacial.
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>>88697979
what if Bacon being women was meant to be a joke? I mean Bacon the little snot being called an attractive girl on tv has some comedic potential
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>>88698316
In the near cyberpunk future "hack" will replace "fuck".
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>>88698391
He's punishing her pumice
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>>88698584
She's sealing away his Disaster Master
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>>88698218
Some artists want to be the next Philip K. Dick or Ray Bradbury, where they tackle moral and philosophical issues long before they're prominent in the future's sphere of public consciousness so they can be known as a prophet. Some others just want to show off how progressive and inclusive they are to their liberal-minded friends and fellow artists.

It could be worse: they could be going all-out on the 2010s social issues and date their work harder than The Warriors.
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>>88698853
>Some others just want to show off how progressive and inclusive they are to their liberal-minded friends and fellow artists.
This is most of them, and if they don't do this, they'll be demonized publicly.
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>>88698853
At least with The Warriors, all you need to know is "Manhattan was a piece of shit once" and you get the point. Even then, the stereotype over urban gang violence hasn't COMPLETELY gone away, yknow?

Also it was just fun to watch, but that's just me
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>>88698310
They broke up? For all the flak Undertale gets, the story was more interesting than the comic where hardly anything happens at a snail's pace
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>>88698310
>>88699384
Aw
What a shame
I was hoping they would get married
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>>88699424
It's probably easier to keep a relationship where each is involved in a pretty different thing. Less risk of accomplishment jealousy
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not listening to Wisdom instead of People You Know on the Internet
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>>88695370
A straight "lol, jrpgs" comic made a tonal shift it wasn't originally meant to have. The issue stems from Cucumber only being able to ask "why" so many times before actually putting his foot down or before it becomes too unbelivable that literally no one else asked the same question for the whole 500,000 years that it happened, and because the story would've just been the same joke over and over with no real narrative meat.

Honestly tho, I haven't really been let down by this comic yet? The moods and lighting are still excellent, and I find that each chapter still manages to resolve itself just fine, developing the main story and leaving new questions for the next chapter.

If there's a point where Gigi's less-excellent writing skills will ruin the whole thing, it'll be the current chapter, because she'll have to explain why we're taking such a big detour from the chapter's Disaster Master in favor of wand backstory, premature Almond drama, or whatever thebestmaster's supposed to be doing. But the chapter's not done yet, so I'm still watching until it is.
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>>88698310
Source on that? I do believe you but I want to see it for myself.
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>>88695496
Old shame and IIRC gets pissy that it's still more populare than CQ will ever be.
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>>88698310
Papyrus and Sans are named after fonts because a friend of Toby's named Jones is the creator of a webcomic about a skeleton, both of which are named Helvetica. Toby's characters were a little joke on that.

Jones's comic faded completely into obscurity as a consequence of their busy life as a graphic designer and Papyrus and Sans are more widely known and beloved than anything Jones could ever hope to make will ever be.
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>>88696033
>find porn artist
>found out only 3 images were saved because he/she went full retard and deleted everything
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>>88699845
Which country are they from? The might have been compelled for legal reasons
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>>88699725
Thebestmaster is painfully unfunny in every respect, which makes a complete waste of his very good character design.
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>>88699800
Sad!
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>What went wrong?
Terrible fucking pacing and twists that weren't earned because we didn't even know enough in the first place to be surprised.
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>>88699856
I doubt it that legal shit had to do with it
>any gook should have been imprisoned for browsing sadpanda or minus8 only ended up doing his drama shit once
I'm not even going to talk about aus or britbong's stupid laws on porno
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>>88699725
>because she'll have to explain why we're taking such a big detour from the chapter's Disaster Master in favor of wand backstory, premature Almond drama, or whatever thebestmaster's supposed to be doing.
The truth behind this is that the kingdom they're in right now is gemstone-themed, and people already like to draw comparisons between CQ and Steven Universe based on incidental things like both stories having a villain-turned-tsundere named Peridot and a heavy "cosmic" aesthetic that they both borrowed from Kirby games, so she basically decided that she had to completely redo a lot of this chapter or else risk more of this nonsense from readers by delving into a bunch of other gem characters she'd risk drawing parallels to characters from a show she doesn't even like all that much with.
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>>88699909
That's dumb. I think the comic is slow as shit but she should've stuck to her guns
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>>88699909
She already said she didn't give a shit about the SU comparisons, and she's already set up an alternate plot in the interlude. And honestly, who the fuck can account for a new cartoon that shares aesthetic with one of your future chapters suddenly becoming mainstream ?
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>>88700001
It does explain this sudden and poorly written detour, though
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>>88699865
I don't see why an in-universe unfunny character can't exist, let alone when thebestmaster's main mystery is why he exists at all in-universe.
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>>88700046
Ironic bad writing is still bad writing
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>>88700025
I don't think so, this chapter's not nearly done yet. Taking an explanation just because it fits now isn't going to help if you're wrong as all shit later.
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>>88700098
>this chapter's not nearly done yet
And it won't be for 3 years
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>>88700069
>no one is allowed to write an unfunny or canonically lame character ever, for whatever purpose
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>>88700105
I can wait. Don't see your argument here.
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>>88699800
Wasn't Helvetica some 4chan meme for a while? Or a header image?
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>>88700167
I don't know about that, but it was appreciated when it was started. Wouldn't say it was quite popular, but it had high recommendation rates around here.

Most artists don't realize they won't have time for passion projects if they have to primarily work for other people until it's too late.
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>>88696036
>Cucumber's wand gets swapped causing him to unintentionally crossdress for comedic effect

>after gigi got bitched at for having Carrot crossdress for comedic effect
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>>88700209
If anything that's good signs, the less shits she gives the better.
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>>88699031
Well the Warriors is also a modern adaption of Xenophon's Anabasis . I'd say it has some value in that as well. Granted the Anabasis isn't the best Greek cultural artificial. In that way in kind of transcends time a bit.
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>>88698310
Looks like I've been Tobyposting with the wrong person.
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>>88698039
It's almost like when you make the comic for other people and do things based on social expectations forced on you by a peer group your wok suffers for it because you're not truly doing the thing you wanted to do and thus have no passion.

Imagine that.
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>>88698853
The Warriors is timeless you mongoloid.
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SOCIAL JUSTICE WARRIOOOORRSSS

COME OUT AND PLAAAAAAAYYYYY
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>>88700443
It's based on a timeless story, but it entrenched itself in too much '70s culture. Go around and keep saying "Can you dig it?" like I do and find out for yourself.
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It's a comic that feels like it wants to have its cake and eat it too. Gigi wanted to move away from simple parodies of video games but she did so by moving to a comic that's still a parody of video games, just more broad genre conventions rather than specific games.

However, the humor is still exactly the same, just with original characters/settings. This is bad for a long running comic with an ongoing plot (as opposed to the shorter parodies of before) because it's basically the same joke over and over ("lol jrpg cliches").

Even worse is that when the story makes attempts at seriousness it comes off as completely clashing with the overall tone, none of the characters have enough depth or traits at all to fall back on for legitimate development because they all are simple parodies of jrpg character cliches, there's nothing else to them. Essentially, there's no strong base to build on for these characters and this setting, and any attempt at emotional depth is really hard to take seriously.
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>>88700485
In its defense, no random guy on the street today looks as cool as the ones in your pic
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>>88700468
MORDECAI
PUT YOUR PHONE AWAY
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>>88697968
You know it's a shame the art community is this fucking intolerant of shit and how they can be selective of what their fanbase should like and enjoy.

Is this just something that happens when artists become egotistical as fuck? I seriously don't get it... wouldn't they be happy that people like their creative ideas?
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>>88697883
She is a fucking insane nigger and I hate her so much.
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>>88697947
>Is she wrong? The usual 'WHY DOESN'T SHE MAKE THINGS I LIKE INSTEAD OF WHAT SHE LIKES' was posted before anything even close to an actual criticism

Please shoot yourself in the fucking face. Why the fuck are you posting here? Jesus christ, /co/ has fallen so low.
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>>88700709
Morrison's just a cranky asshole because he can't jerk off without needing to reset the bones in his hand for a week anymore
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>>88697947
If I actually bothered with giving her the same criticism I do now she's just cover her ears. There's a lot of issues with the characters and the writing as well.

The fact is, it's not written well. Moving aside the SJW issues. I don't really give about one way or another. Her writing is as much an issue as the pacing. She'd be better off not writing anything or putting up a prelettered version.
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>>88695370
The most cirminal thing possible
She was very good at directly and brashly making fun of dumb things, and she gave that up over petty reasons.
Gigi abandoned her strengths, without properly figuring out how to do, whatever it is, she's trying to now.
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>>88695370

The art is cute but the story is too forced for my tastes.
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I still like the story.

There's kind of a silly number of lesbians in it but that doesn't bother me.

I don't mind the pacing, it doesn't update as often as I'd like but read archivally it flows well. It's not like this is her full time job so I don't know what people are expecting.

It manages to make me chuckle most of the time and there's enough mystery in what's going to happen that I'm intrigued about where the story will go. The art is great.

The only thing I actually don't like are the little comments below every page. I hate it when any webcomic does that shit.

I think /co/ mostly hates it because she doesn't do videogame parodies anymore.
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>>88700719
>Complaint was that everything seems to come from some personal grudge
>Literally happens
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I don't get the praise for her art.

The colors and characters are cute, but it comes off looking bland and sometimes hard to follow. My eyes inadvertently skim the text instead of focusing on the drawings, since they all look the same. Some expressions are lost in the roundness of the characters. Using higher contrast between light and dark and having some edges and blocky shapes would make the comic easier to follow while still retaining the cuteness possible.
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>>88699800
DON'T BE MEAN TO JONES!

Also, Jones hasn't been able to work on Helvetica because they're getting real jobs as colorist and background artist for a few other comics. Fancy that, it's hard to update a webcomic when you're getting paid to do other work.
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>>88698256
except tobyfoxs actual gf is temmie chang, she did most of the art for undertale too
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>>88696036
>young boys crossdressing
Something tells me Cucumber Quest is about to get a bit more popular around here.
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>>88702842

Nah. It will stay in obscurity because even shotas cannot save poor writing.
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>>88702892

There is some on Rule34, but it's mostly Cucumber being creamed with just a pic or two for his sister.
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>>88702940
>it's mostly Cucumber being creamed
You say it like it's a bad thing.
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>>88695496
>resigned from making video game comics
>made an original story of her own running on video game logic
I mean, I can understand why she made CQ - prolly to seek recognition for something of her own yet she should've mapped out and planned the story better.

The first so chapters aren't bad and then it made a wrong turn.
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>>88695551
Hopefully editorial. It's not bad to have an editor and Gigi need one, instead of having a webcomic artist mentality of "I can handle everything coz I know my story I built up since high school."
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>>88702998

Yes, because really I would prefer of other characters besides him. That's a matter of taste, the only kind of shota I like is /ss/.
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>>88702666

>implying he doesn't have multiple girlfriends
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I think either I must be retarded or you all are, because I still enjoy it enough to read it every week.

It's not amazing, but the art is cute and Peridot is my waifu.
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>>88703273
> I think either I must be retarded

I vote the first. :^)
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>>88702998
>it's a comic full of cute girls and less-cute-but-still-deviant transgenders
>all the porn is of the guy

Now I know how Friedrichfag from the Poppy threads feels.
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>>88700670
>watch The Warriors
>love it
>think the gangs look cartoonish in a nice way
>see pictures of actual 1970s NYC gangs
>The Warriors was a documentary
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>>88700244
this. sounds like just 4chan contrarianism at work than tumblr. tumblr would have ripped up the shit out of that book, and started redoing everything and sanitizing the work.
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>>88703895
perialmond makes everything these faggots are bitching about irrelevant.
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