ime for a Bleedman Christmas Storytime Part 4 Link to Part 1

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>>88684205

whoops real link to part 3 >>88674341

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This where this shit starts to get good

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Cute

>>88684205
>that link to part 3
Kek

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wew

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BEST GIRL

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muh dick

Alright that's all folks what did you think?

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>>88686256
It stinks.

It is OK by fanfiction standards

>>88686256
Hurrendous.

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>>88686256
I actually like sugar bits.

Everything else is cringeworthy.

>>88689417
why?

All of Bleedman's comics feel so directionless now.

>>88689428
Honestly? Just the fact that it's original. Or at least not based on anything I've seen done earlier and/or better.

My standards for original webcomics are quite a lot lower than for fanfiction because with an original work you're not stepping on other, better writers' toes.

I think Bleedman can write stories, but they're not stories that fit the characters he's trying to use.

>>88689511
>now

>>88686256
shit

>>88689523
>Honestly? Just the fact that it's original. Or at least not based on anything I've seen done earlier and/or better.

That makes sense I guess