Hi welcome to "generic comic company"

>>88067835
Ok so a 16 year old kid gets bit by a radioactive homeless man and then mutates into a homeless.

Then he fites crime by harrasing criminals for change until they willing go to jail.

It'll be a Smash hit with teens and young adults!

>>88067835
Uhh hi okay so here's my pitch..


In this fictional city, we have our main character named Vance Hellsing (the name will make sense later) he is the city's youngest top investor so he has a good amount of money. Now one night Vance and his girlfriend were out at the city at night and walk by an alleyway. Vance and his girlfriend get jumped by this gang. The gang beats the shit out of Vance and they rape and kill his girlfriend making Vance watch at the same time. Vance tries to retaliate but fails when he gets shot. Vance wakes up in a hospital and once he recovers physically he adopts a more serious outlook on life in contrast of his carefree always happy attitude. Vance starts working out again and wears all black and brings a stun gun, night stick, brass knuckles, and a glock with him and patrols the streets at night trying to find the gang who assaulted him. Every night Vance finds himself going back to the same alleyway and reliving his nightmare. over a course of two weeks Vance has been stopping petty crimes like mugging, car jackings, or purse snatching but never found the people he was looking for which made him more and more frustrated and angry. One Night Vance walks by the same alleyway and hears a woman scream. Vance doesn't hesitate and runs into the alleyway expecting to fight a group of people but only sees one man in tattered clothes cornering a woman. Vance tries to beat up the man in the alley but fails, the man is MUCH faster, stronger, and durable than a normal human being. Vance almost being beaten to a bloody pulp fires shots at the man who easily dodges the bullets. At this moment Vance knew he fucked up. The man in the Alley way kills the woman by biting into her neck, draining her blood. Vance can't believe what he's seeing and before he can do anything else. The man turns to him. The man bites into Vance's neck and drains a potion of blood and runs away laughing. Vance lays their passed out. (1/?)

>>88068370
Once Vance comes too he realizes his wounds are healed and walks back home to his penthouse to go to bed. a day passes and Vance springs out of bed from the sound of his alarm. Vance is shocked at how far and fast he jumped. He felt different, he felt stronger, faster. After a day of work Vance decides to go working out and goes to his local gym. The weights Vance would break sweats lifting felt like lifting mere books. The highest setting on the treadmill didn't phase him at all. Vance was surprised at his physical performance. Once home Vance realized that whatever the vampire in the alley way did to him, helped him. The sun goes down and night has officially started and Vance feels a primal urge. His senses start to become more sensitive, hearing and smelling everything around him. He goes into tunnel vision and runs to the bathroom. Vance looks into the mirror and sees razor sharp fangs in his mouth and his skin pale as paper. Vance's primal urges took over his rational thinking and goes out into the streets in all black. Vance is able to jump up buildings with ease and able to somewhat glide in the air for a brief moments. Vance hears a gunshot from a block away and runs there just in time to see a man being surrounded by a group of thugs. The same thugs that assaulted him and his girlfriend. Vance brutally maims and kills the thugs and siphons their blood out of their bodies. Vance tries his hardest not to harm the man who was being harassed by the thugs. Vance knew what he could do with his newfound power. After a night of tracking down and mutilating criminals the sun rises which burns Vance. Vance reverts to his human form and goes back home to sleep. Vance has a dream about all the vampires throughout history as if it was some sort of vampire tutorial in a video game (lol i don't know).Weeks pass and Vance is still patrolling the streets at night until one day, Vance comes across a shootout between the police and some thugs. (2/?)

>>88068915
Vance is effortlessly dodging gunfire and moving at blurring speeds. Vance rips apart the thugs but gets cheapshotted by 12 gauge shotgun through the back horribly injuring Vance. Vance runs off to a far away rooftop and his wounds slowly heal. Vance knew if he wanted to do this he needed protection. for a month Vance has taken a break from the night time vigilante work and focused on trying to control his violent primal vampire urges. At the same time Vance was making enough money to buy armor for a tactical suit. Vance made sure that the suit was not bulky for mobility but not lacking in protection. (think of the Netflix Dardevil suit mixed with Batman's suit from BvS) Once Vance had his suit made he was ready. Night after night Vance hunted criminals in the streets and overtime the news caught footage of him saving a woman who was pushed out of a window in a hostage situation. His appearance of him was too quick for the camera and the people only saw a dark silhouette with a winged like appearance, giving him the nickname "Darkwing" (Not the duck). James Canis (look up Canis on google, after reading this and it will make a bit more sense). was the head of the police department in the city and wanted a meeting with Vance or AKA Darkwing. One night they met and spoke and James already knew Darkwing was a vampire. When Vance asked how he made such a conclusion. James revealed to him that he was a werewolf (fuck you twilight). In result of this Vance knew there were more creatures in this world other than vampires and the two worked together in fighting crime. James' main goal was to clean up The Old City. The Old City is the first (fictional) city built in the 1700s it wasn't as big as the current city that they live in. The Old City was overrun by so much crime that a new city was built a mile away which is separated by a wall. The Old City now is currently home to the worst criminals, and creatures such as vampires and werewolves. (3/?)

>>88069632
James knew the kind of scum that lived in that rundown city and wanted it to be cleaned up so the current city can expand. In this mythos, Vance and James come across Vampire/Werewolf hunters, zombies, assassins, and more. James and Vance team up with more heroes in a Justice league way (minus the watchtower) The team consists of, a vampire, a werewolf, a wizard, witch, a regular human with peak human physicals, a shapeshifter and a half human half demon. That's the story. Tell me what you think about it. (4/4)

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>>88069864
How did you bump yourself to the first page?

>>88069945
He's not op

>>88069864
It's actually pretty good
Stereotypical things like vampires and werewolves and wizards but it knows what it wants to be sounds fun.

I like how There's A build-up 2 him becoming a vampire

Ok so Mr. Guy, real name Guy Johnson, is our hero. He's kind of strong I guess. He can fly like a little bit. He has a cape but it's not very big, he doesn't want to trip over it. He fights criminals but only like actual criminals and not evil villains. He spends a lot of time doing stocks.

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tl;dr

>>88070220
I got you, rich dude and his gf get fucked up by a gang, gf dies, dude wants revenge, gets fucked up by vampire, dude gets vampire powers meets a werewolf detective, fights crime becomes a mix between Batman and dracula.

>>88070339


pretty sure Simpsons already did it

>>88070076
Thank you I appreciate it!

>>88067835
Well we got really high last night and came up with a story about this magical girl with a A-10 as her familiar. Takes place in a Wizard of Oz ripoff world.

We haven't got much further than that, but motherfucker, we are going to sell you some toys.

>>88067835

Watch out! There is a hurricane in your office!